Detonator M

[ziggurat]

Yay, ChrNo's doujin! Awesome drawing, hehe. Chinami pun is lol! Momo is really dramatic. Captain is just... cute as always *_*

I hate sad ending. Should I blame ChrNo or wordsworth?

j/k guys. Good doujin ChrNo! Don't forget to make another one next time! I still rooting for a happy ending! hehe

Now, we just need another chapter of detonator M.

[Aioros]

We need your help. Ichiro is after the girls.

"That loser M shouldn't be fooling around. If I find out that this is a joke, I'm gonna give him a beating he'll never forget." R said as he leapt going to the coordinates M sent to him. He was also using his tracker to find out where Ai was at the moment.So far, M's directions were on track.

He still hasn't fully recovered after his encounter with Ichiro, but thanks to the little girl and her mom, he was still alive. Parts of his body were still wrapped with bandages and some of his wounds still haven't heald but those that did left some scars.

"226. They're nearby." he said to himself as he landed. Just when he was going to leap again, he heard a familiar voice.
"Why are you in a hurry, Retusya-san?"
"You."
"Yes. It's me. I'm not Ichiro by the way..." the owner of the voice stepped into the light. It was a man holding a bag of chips.
"I know. You're Tezuka."
"It's not hard to forget someone whom you've erased memories from a couple of times, can't you."
"Not really. Ichiro doesn't eat that kind of flavor. He usually eats cheese..."
"Hahaha. Nice, nice."
"Why are you here?"
"You don't have to follow them. They're not going to get hurt. Ichiro said he won't hurt them."
"What do you know about this?"
"Let's just say Ichiro decided to wage a war against the likes of you and I just happened to join his cause. Damn! What a lame reference to Civil War! Cap's side will win anyway. Oops, spoilers, spoilers."
"Huh? What are you talking about?"
"Nothing. Just a random hissy fit."
"I think you're out of your mind."
"Maybe I am. Maybe I'm not. But I believe that I made the right choice."
"You shouldn't have entered something that you didn't understand."
"But I'm glad I did. Because it made things a bit more clear."
"What do you want?"
"Takahashi Ai. She's all I ever wanted. And I won't be able to get her if you're in the way."
"You won't get her even if I'm not in the way."
"It's worth a try. And I haven't gotten back at you for erasing my memories."
"Is this what this is about? Revenge?"
"Not really. It's more like I want to remember the feeling of how my fist when it hit your face."

Without any warning, Tezuka attacked R with a straight but missed and hit nothing but air. However, the impact of the punch tore through the trees that were behind R.

"Graft."
"Don't be ridiculous. I made it but I don't do drugs. I never used it on myself." Tezuka said as R activated his thermal vision to scan his body.
"It can't be..."
"Yes. I'm a cyborg now, just like you. I studied Ichiro's cybernetic schema when I repaired him. I then uploaded all the data needed and gave it to him so that he can do the necessary procedures to make me a cyborg."
"You are indeed crazy."
"And the people who made you aren't? Don't you think it's too much? Using things like you to protect the girls from what? Men? Fans? If it wasn't for the fans, the girls would be nothing."
"We know that. We are not against all the fans but there are just some that go too far."
"Invasion of privacy."
"Yes"
"But isn't erasing someone's memories an invasion of privacy too? You even take cameras away. So what? So you can have them for yourselves?"
"We don't..."
"Come on. Don't tell me you don't take a peek at those pictures or those videos. I bet you even saved some of them in your memory. Don't tell me you never had wild fantasies about the girls. "
"..."
"I knew it. You're a hypocrite. You're just the same as the people you try to fend off."
"That's not true."
"Don't tell me you never touched Ai?"
"Leave her out of this."
"Leave her? Like the way you left her when she told you that she doesn't need you anymore? Maybe you were never able to satisfy her..."
"Bastard!"

R ran towards Tezuka and fired a combination of kicks and punches. However, Tezuka was able to dodge them until he was able to get out of range. He started his counter attack with a barrage of punches but R avoided them as well. They kept on attacking each other but no one was able to land a clean hit.

"Do you actually believe that he won't hurt them?" R asked.
"Yes. Because if he did, I'd be the one who destroys him."
"You really have no idea how he thinks."
"Whatever. Know what? No one's going to win if we keep avoiding each other's punches."
"What are you saying?"
"I'm saying we settle this with one shot. I'm going to toss this coin and once it touches the ground we go at each other with one blow, just like in those samurai films." Tezuka said as her charged his right hand.
"Looks like that's the only way to finish this." R said as he also charged his hand.
"Let's do this!"

Tezuka tossed the coin into the air. The time it was in the air seemed forever. It hit the ground eventually but before a normal human could hear its drop, the two men already finished their exchange.

"He deliberately missed me..."

R dropped on one knee. Tezuka turned around.

"You... You win, Retsuya-san." Tezuka said as he prepared to fall on his back.
"Tezuka!" R dashed and stopped his fall.
"I know. You scanned me and you knew that Ichiro screwed up the process. Some of the fluids already contaminated my blood and I'm going to die any day from now. I was just waiting for this. I wanted to piss you off so that you would kill me."
"So you knew all along. Why didn't you try to save yourself?"
"By the time I was able to complete the formula for the drug, that's when I realized that what I've been doing is wrong. I was blinded by Ichiro's words, my hatred for you and my desire for Ai. But there was no turning back. He will know if I tried to fix what was wrong so I didn't do anything. Ichiro will kill me without hesitation if I defied him. But to die by your hands, it would be what I have wanted, so I could atone for my sins. But what I've done is unforgivable."
"You can be saved. Don't give up."
"I think it's too late for me now. Ichiro is a monster. Please defeat him. Defeat him for those fans he used. Defeat him for those he killed. Defeat him for the girls. Defeat him for Ai."
"I can't do it alone."
"Those kids, they will help you.  He's not a god. You can take him down. Go."
"I'm not leaving you here." R said as he helped Tezuka get up and put his arm across his shoulder.
"I'll just slow you down."
"You were already doing that earlier. But I'm not going to let you die. Guardians don't kill, even how evil that person is. I can't leave you here. The others are probably on their way already. I'll just catch up."
"Retsuya-san. Thank you..."





"Now. I understand."

***


He opened his eyes. He could feel that he was inside a moving vehicle. He sat up. But his body still hurt.

"Just lie down and relax. I already injected an antibody to de-contaminate your blood." said a man who was wearing a lab coat and thick glasses. "I also installed the parts that Ichiro didn't. Consider yourself 'refurbished'."
"Who are you?"
"Just call me Dan."
"Where's Retsuya-san?"
"He went ahead to where the girls are. Ichiro really messed up your configuration. Good thing we were able to get to you on time."
"You're the one who makes the Guardians." Tezuka said as he got up and walked around.
"Yes. Once this is over, you could be of help to us. Because I know who you are. You’re Tezuka, the Golden Boy of Tokyo University."
"So I have celebrity status now." Tezuka said as he marveled at a pair of vats filled with some kind of liquid and contained the bodies of two boys.

He noticed that the boys were identical twins. The birthmarks on their faces, the physique, everything was the same, except one of them had dyed red hair.

"The bosses said that we don't have any budget and we can't afford to make new ones so I'm just doing with whatever we have. Good thing they still had some money for the Egao Yes Nude PV. I’m sure the fans are saying that it’s too cheap. At least they get to see some touching. They should be glad because the plan to make the PV a patchwork of their older ones didn’t push through. Now that’s cheap. I’d rather watch fan-made OMVs in the internet than something like that. Those two, by the way, are from Yoshizawa’s DNA."
"You can clone people?"
"Yes. I can clone. Heck, I can even revive him, even if I told that red-scarf guy that I can't. Ever wonder why they don’t get sick anymore? You see, my sins are more unforgivable than yours. I've been playing with lives aside from mine all this time."
"You did it to protect the girls but what I did was meant to hurt them."
"The end doesn't always justifies the means..."

***



The girls were inside the room of an inn. They knocked but no one was answering. However, there was a note for Risa, telling her that they could go inside.

"Wow, does your friend really own this place Gaki-san?" Sayumi asked. "There's even an outdoor hot spring."
"I'm not sure. But this is the address he gave me when we talked. I wonder what he looks like now. It's been years since we saw each other."
"Why, was he your first love?" asked Eri.
"Eh? We're just friends, Eririn."
"Has Mitsui-kun replaced him in your heart, Gaki-san?" Ai asked.
"Eeehh?" Risa said as she blushed.
"You really like 'Pervy Guy', don't you, Gaki-san?" Reina asked.
"Don't call him that.  He's not pervy. Micchi-kun is a nice person once you get to know him. He reminds me a lot of Masato-kun, though, because of some of his tendencies like asking me weird questions out of nowhere."
"What kinds of weird questions does he ask you?" Sayu asked Risa.
"He asks me things about what I felt when I was doing my second photobook, about what shampoo he should use to make his hair grow faster, what kind of guy my parents would like for me, if I watched Kamen Rider and Ultraman, and a bunch more. He even asked me the reason why I like him. That reminds me, Masato-kun watched those kinds of shows before."
"And you answered his questions?"
"Of course."
"What if you find out if they're the same person, would you like him because he's Masato or would you like him because he's Mitsui-kun?"
"That's a good question Eririn. But if that happens I won't have a hard time choosing because I like them both just the same."
"Masato-san is from your past. Mistui-kun is the present. I wonder who will be for you in the future." Ai told her.
"Ehh??! Ai-chan, I'm not thinking of the future yet." Risa answered as she put her hands on her cheeks and shook her head. The others laughed at her.
"It's funny how they talk about love, isn't it Miki-tan."
"Yes, Ayaya. We can't blame them. They're still young and the thought of falling in love is still strong."

Suddenly, the door slid open.  

The girls stood up in surprise.

"Y...you?"

"What are you doing here?"

[ferrar1]

Wow a sudden turnaround in the plot, so hmm so hmm... ahhh

I bet that guy inside the house is Mitsui/Masato

"The end doesn't always justifies the means..."

Inspiring :ONshy2:

Wow nice little pic, gonna save this

[JFC]

Awesome manga entry there ChrNo.

WTF Tetsuya let Ichiro turn him into a cyborg? Definitely not a smart move. The sudden change of heart he has is, well.....sudden.  Didn't expect him to let R take him down like that. And now Dan is fixing him up? Maybe Tetsuya can redeem himself and maybe even become a Guardian?

Oh, and H is/was cloned?

[ziggurat]

Wow, I don't expect Tezuka to turn himself R because his wrong doing.. At least he feel sorry for participating with Ichiro. That part makes me feel sorry for him though. So, the guardian line up will receive a new member soon?

[hibachifinal]

i've been reading through this bit by bit.

here's a tribute.


keep em going man

[lil_hamz]

OMG so many comics? The drawing is so so awesome!! I have not read it yet but I'm sure I'll like it. The Momo and H scenes is such a great bonus :yay:

Not a cliffhanger?!?! :ON@_@: What's gonna happen next? since GAM aren't so near the other girls maybe they can escape *hopes*

[Blu-Cherri]

I swear I commented this, but i can't see my comment...I probably just missed it but just incase.
firstly kyaa~ i love this story
secondly Nooo! evil cliffhanger and danger!! T__T I can't wait, so can H be revived then? wouldn't they have to erase the girls memories then??
oooh so much could happen! also M gotta save the day!! woo~

[Aioros]

"What are you doing here?" Miki asked. She seemed to be very uncomfortable with the arrival of the uninvited guest.
"Yeah, what are you dong here, BoA-chan?" Aya asked.
"Aya-chan, thank god you're safe!" she answered.
"Of course she's safe! We always use...." Miki's sentence was interrupted by Aya.
"I'm safe? What do you mean?"
"Someone sent a distress signal saying that you were in trouble."
"Distress signal? I didn't get any." Miki said as she checked her phone. "Oh wait, there is one. I'm so used with vibrating stuff, I didn't even feel it ehehehe."
"Why are you here? Aren't you supposed to be in Korea?" Aya asked her again.
"I teleported myself here."
"Teleport? Aren't aliens the only ones who can do that?" Eri asked.
"Aliens and robots. Don't you watch tokusatsu shows, Eririn?" said Reina.
"Kirari can teleport too. I think." Sayu added.
"Of course she can. She's an anime character Sayu!" Miki scoffed.
"No she can't, I watch that show and she can't teleport. Oops. Forget I said that." said a blushing Reina.
"You teleported yourself here? BoA-chan, you're really funny." Aya said as she giggled. "That's impossible."
"No, I really teleported here. Watch." BoA answered as she tried to press something on her wrist. But before she could do it, Miki stopped her and dragged her outside.
"Let's talk about this outside, okay. Ai-chan, take care of the Rokkies and Gaki-san, try calling your friend and ask him where he is. Let's go Ayaya."

---
Miki let go of BoA's wrist once they were out.

"Overprotective, huh?" BoA said as she held the part of her wrist that was being bit by Miki's cold grip earlier.
"In case you didn't know, the other girls are unaware of us. You should have kept your mouth shut. You almost blew it."
"What are you two talking about?" Aya asked as she felt out of place.
"Alright, I guess you should know about this Ayaya." Miki said as she sighed.
"After you were scolding me about not telling her you have the nerve to tell her that she should know about it? Wow, you're really something Fujimoto."
"Shut up! You're not needed here!"
"Miki-tan! That's not polite!"
"Don't worry Aya-chan." BoA interrupted and smirked. "Fujimoto here is just having a tantrum. So you better tell Takahashi-san and the others about this attitude of hers before she becomes the leader."
"Am not!" Miki said as she threw a punch towards BoA's face but BoA just caught it with her hand. She threw a punch of her own but Miki was able to catch it too.
"Stop fighting you two! Cut it out!"

"Don't stop them Aya. Seeing them go at it in a catfight and ripping each others clothes off is something I've been having in my dreams for a long time."

The three looked behind them. Miki and BoA let go of each other's hand and got ready.

---
Inside the inn...

"He's still not answering." Risa said as she canceled the call on her phone. "It's getting late."
"Don't stop, Gaki-san." Sayumi said. "I can't wait for him to get here. I want to try out the hot spring already."
Risa dialed the number again.
"Don't you girls hear it?" Eri asked. "There was a phone ringing around here when Gaki-san was calling her friend and it stopped when she canceled. Now it's ringing again."
"Don't scare us, Eririn. You watch too much horror flicks." Reina said.
"I can hear it too, Reina." said Ai. "I think It's coming from one of the other rooms."
"Fine. Come on Sayu, let's check out the other room."
"Why me?" Sayumi asked. "What if there's a ghost? They might possess me or take my soul."
"Why'd you think it's you I wanted to bring along? Come on!"
"I'm going too." Eri said. "I wanna see some ghosts!"

***
"Shhh! It's close. I hear it." Eri told the other Rokkies.
"I can hear it too Reina! Let's go back."
"No way!" Reina said as she opened the last room in the hall. She dragged Sayumi by the arm while Eri was a few steps behind them. As she went further, the ring started to get louder too. *Gulp* "Maybe this was a mistake after all. But ghosts aren't real! Maybe Gaki-san asked her friend to scare us to so she could get even with us for freaking her out in that haunted house."
They stopped in front of an old wooden cabinet, where the phone's ring was at its loudest. Without any hesitation, Reina suddenly opened it, making the ring a lot louder.

It stared at them, only it didn't have eyes. A trail of dry blood came from the empty eye sockets. It was an old lady, probably the real owner of the inn. They were sure she was dead. Why? Because there was a hole on her chest.

They started to run for the door but Eri slipped. While she was on the floor, she saw the old woman's eyes on the floor, looking at her. The three looked at each other, as if asking who of them should be the first to scream. They decided to scream together.

Risa and Ai rushed to the room and saw the reason why the younger girls screamed. Ai covered her eyes at the sight while Risa, who was known as the reaction queen, simply dropped her phone on the ground.

---
"Looks like they find out some of the trash I left inside."
"I....Ichiro."
"Awww. So you still remember me, Aya. I guess they decided not to tamper with your memories."
"Ichiro."
"Yes it's me."
"Stay back, Ayaya!" Miki commanded as she stood in front of her and put on a fighting stance.
"We will protect you." BoA said as she put on a fighting stance as well.
"Looks like you might be needed here after all." Miki said.
"Why? Feel like you can't take him head on?"
"Watch me." Miki said as she walked casually towards Ichiro.

She stopped in front of him.

"Ah, Fujimoto. My, you've really changed a lot since the last time." Ichiro said as he placed his hand on her shoulders. "But I hope you haven't changed in bed."
"Wanna try?"
"My pleasure." Ichiro said as he ripped off Miki's shirt and revealed her black sports top. But she didn't take away her glare from him. "All natural. I knew you didn't have the guts to get a boob job too."
"Ichiro, please stop! Miki, get away from him!"
"Why Aya? Afraid there won't be any left for you when I'm done?"
"Don't worry Aya-chan, she can take care of herself." BoA said.

"You smell nice, Fujimoto." Ichiro said as he bent down to kiss her. Miki slapped him hard on his right cheek. Miki shook her hand after doing so.
"Ouch! Your face is as hard as a Rika-induced hard-on!"
"Really? Let me check if that face of yours is as soft as Maki's boob job." Ichiro grinned and prepared to slap her.

Miki smirked.

He gave Ichiro a one-two combination in the mid section which caused Ichiro to crumple. Miki then gave him a knee to the face then finished with a blazing roundhouse kick which sent Ichiro crashing into the woods.

"See. I told you." BoA said.
"Miki? How'd you do that? What are you?"
"Give me your clothes, Ayaya."
"But why?"
"I'm not comfortable fighting with just this on?"
"You're just saying that because you know she's not wearing anything else underneath. You just want to see her naked."
"Huh? Is that true, Miki-tan? And BoA-chan, how'd you know that I'm not wearing..."
"Long story Ayaya. So are you gonna give me your shirt? I'm getting cold."
"Forget that, Fujimoto. He's back."
"Amazing. You didn't have the guts to get a boob job but you let them turn you into a cyborg. Haha. I'm liking this Fujimoto. Because that means you won't get tired in bed easily anymore. Hahahahaha!" Ichiro said as he approached them.

"It’s my turn now." BoA said as she pressed something on her wrist then suddenly vanished beside Aya and Miki.

She appeared behind Ichiro. Before Ichiro could turn around, BoA was already able to land a hundred punches and the last one sent Ichiro back to the woods again.

"BoA-chan? You too? What's happening here?"
"Aya-san, Miki-san! There's a corpse inside the inn!" Sayu said as she came running out of the inn. Behind her were the other girls.
"What happened to your shirt Miki-san? Don't tell us you three were going to do something naughty here outside." Reina said.
"Of course not, smartass!" Miki said as she hit Reina lightly in the head. "We were just here for some air. That's all. What about your friend, Gaki-san?"
"I called his number, but it turned out that that number belonged to the old lady we found back there. Someone just used his name to get us here." Risa answered.
"Ayaya, start the car and take them away from here. BoA and I will take care of business. We'll explain everything when we get back."
"Okay. Let's go girls." Aya said as they ran for Miki's SUV. But before they could get any closer, a red beam hit the said vehicle, causing it to explode.
"No one's leaving unless I say so." Ichiro said as he dusted his clothes. "I wasn't expecting that Fujimoto. And that too, BoA. So you're the one who was given the teleportation-enabled Frame. Nice."

Miki and BoA dashed and attacked him together. But this time, Ichiro was prepared. He was able to evade their attacks. BoA then used her teleport to get behind but Ichiro was expecting this so he grabbed Miki's by the wrist and put her in front of him. Before BoA could stop her attack, a couple of her punches already landed on Miki. Miki dropped on her knees as she tried to catch her breath.

"Oh no! I'm sorry, Fujimoto."

Ichiro saw the opening and gave her a vicious backhand, which sent her spiraling into the one of the walls of the inn. Then he kicked Miki towards the same direction where BoA was sent.

Ai-chan and the others ran to them to check their condition. Both of them were unconscious but they were still breathing.

"So much for those two. Now, who wants of you girls wants to be first?" Ichiro said as he walked towards them.

"Don't hurt them! Please, let them go!" Aya pleaded as she shielded the others.

"Stop right there!" someone said as a pebble hit the back of Ichiro's head.

Ichiro looked for the one who called his attention.

Three men appeared.

One of them was wearing glasses.
One of them looked like a punk who didn't even bother to comb his hair.
One of them looked like a girl.

"So you've come to save us, Shingo-kun."
"Yo Kyo-kun! I won't let you win in Wii bowling next time."
"Domo-kun, is that a new shirt?"

Another one arrived and joined the three.

"Retsuya..."

"You're late. You should have seen how I kicked Fujimoto and BoA's asses. Hey, how come Masato's not with you?"
"Masato? Did Ichiro-san just say Masato?" Risa asked the other girls.
"Yeah, where is M? He's the one who sent the distress signal and he's not yet here." K wondered.
"He's probably having his last wank break." S added.
"Maybe he just chickened out." D said.
"He'll be here." R assured them.
"Sorry I'm late guys. I think I have a Son Goku complex." they looked for the owner of the voice and saw him on top a tree.

The full moon was behind him, and the evening wind was blowing his scarf. He jumped down, and this time he didn't slip.

"Michii-kun..."
"That's a not-so-flashy entrance." S said.
"Heh! Shut up S! See, I told you guys Fujimoto-san was a..."

"So you're all here. Good. Now I don't have to look for you one by one. I'll just get rid of all you tonight."
"I won't forgive you for what you did to H! And how dare you use my name to lure them here, you bastard!" M said.
"Why? Niigaki still doesn't know that you're Masato? I thought she knew already? Or did you just keep on erasing her memories?"

"D...did Ichiro-san just say that Michii-kun is Masato-kun? I can't.....believe it. He's been with me all this time..."

"Yes Niigaki! That pervy guy is your precious Masato-kun! Take a good look at him because this is definitely the last time you’re going to see him."
"Are you done?" M asked.
"Huh?"
"Are you done talking?"
"Not yet."
"Good."
"Why is that?"
"Talk all you want now because you won't be alive in the last chapter of this story!"

[ziggurat]

I really don't expect this kind of chapter, it just full of unpredictable event and awesomeness!

So, Miki and BoA? Wow, and they cast ayaya for sukeban deka.. *sigh*

So much funny moments and quoting them all will make my post really long.

Like it how you describe the hundred punches hit Ichiro.

Damn, I don't know how to say how awesome is this chapter. Thanks again wordsworth! I am really not worthy.

[ferrar1]

Woah BOA!! I was expecting Maki if there was another cyborg within the girls

nooooo last chapter !!! :ONfrustrated:

[JFC]

"Yeah, what are you dong here, BoA-chan?" Aya asked.

What the hell? :scratch

"Distress signal? I didn't get any." Miki said as she checked her phone. "Oh wait, there is one. I'm so used with vibrating stuff, I didn't even feel it ehehehe."

Too easy...

"Why are you here? Aren't you supposed to be in Korea?" Aya asked her again.
"I teleported myself here."
"Teleport? Aren't aliens the only ones who can do that?" Eri asked.
"Aliens and robots. Don't you watch tokusatsu shows, Eririn?" said Reina.
"Kirari can teleport too. I think." Sayu added.
"Of course she can. She's an anime character Sayu!" Miki scoffed.
"No she can't, I watch that show and she can't teleport. Oops. Forget I said that." said a blushing Reina.
"You teleported yourself here? BoA-chan, you're really funny." Aya said as she giggled. "That's impossible."

Love how everyone other than Aya is talking about teleportation like it's a natural, everyday occurance.

"Overprotective, huh?" BoA said as she held the part of her wrist that was being bit by Miki's cold grip earlier.
"In case you didn't know, the other girls are unaware of us. You should have kept your mouth shut. You almost blew it."
"What are you two talking about?" Aya asked as she felt out of place.
"Alright, I guess you should know about this Ayaya." Miki said as she sighed.

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!! Miki really IS a Guardian!!!

Either that, or a member of some secret sentai/toku organization with BoA. :yay:

"Don't stop them Aya. Seeing them go at it in a catfight and ripping each others clothes off is something I've been having in my dreams for a long time."

The three looked behind them. Miki and BoA let go of each other's hand and got ready.

Uh oh.

"Why me?" Sayumi asked. "What if there's a ghost? They might possess me or take my soul."

Ah sweet, gullible Sayu.

Hey, how come Masato's not with you?"
"Masato? Did Ichiro-san just say Masato?" Risa asked the other girls.

And thus, the secret is out. DUN DUN DUUUUUUUUUUUUUUN!!!

"Sorry I'm late guys. I think I have a Son Goku complex." they looked for the owner of the voice and saw him on top a tree.

As in, always arriving late for the show?

"Talk all you want now because you won't be alive in the last chapter of this story!"

Next time on Detonator M...the final battle! :yay:

[glcorps2002]

How did he know M's real name though?

[JFC]

How did he know M's real name though?

How did Ichiro know? Considering how intelligent he apparently is he probably is/was able to hack the Guardian's medical records to find out about them all and their strengths/weaknesses.

At least that's what I'm guessing.

[Blu-Cherri]

oh cool chapter!
yay for M turning up late and not-so-flashy!! lol
Can't wait for next chapter!! ^v^

[lil_hamz]

Did I just see last chapter??
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO that can't be :ONfainted:

Miki and BoA have... *gasp* powers? :ON@_@: Totally unexpected.

[Muten]

I have known Detonator M 2 or 3 weeks ago , I began to read and ... I just cannot stop ! The characters are realy great with their own personality ( M is just too :ROTFLMAO: ). The story, well ... I think that a movie can be done with it ! Just for say that I really love your work !!!  

[Aioros]

"One, two, three, four, five. Five of you against me? I don't think you will be enough. Why don't you call that red-headed kid. He was actually the only one who was able to give me a hard time. Oh wait, I forgot. I killed him already. Hahahahaha!" Ichiro said.
"You won't get away with this." R told him.
"I'm surprised you could still walk, R, after what I did to you last time. I'm assuming that you already took care of Tezuka. He has outlived his usefulness anyway. That loser. I knew he was going to fail. Oh well, I'll just take Takahashi then too, unless of course you already got to her first, R."
"Bastard!" Ichiro's taunting made R lose his temper as he prepared to attack. But K grabbed his wrist.
"Don't let him get into you. He's trying to anger you so that you would lose your focus and attack him mindlessly." K said.
"We know you're not like him, R. You didn't to anything to Takahashi-san. Except love her." M added.
"We should attack him as a team, but first, someone should take girls somewhere safe. He might try to harm them." S told them.
"I'll distract him." D volunteered himself.
"Alright. But you'll need help. M, H gave you his rings right? Use them to keep up with D. R and I will serve as the second line of defense. K, protect them in case he gets through us."
"Fine." M said as he placed H's rings on his fingers. "I wanted to get the First Attack anyway. It's 1500 points right?"
"Who said I'd give you the first attack?" D asked him as they started to walk towards Ichiro.

"It's So Gay and Haado Gei. Hehe. Looks like they wanted the weak ones get beaten up first. I know you're just here to distract me but I'm afraid your plan is already a failure. I will eliminate you." Ichiro said as he walked between them and headed for the girls.

D turned around then vanished.
"Where did Domo-kun go?" Sayu asked the other girls. "He didn't leave us, did he?"
"So Gay? Haha." M said before he vanished too.
"Now Michii-kun is also gone..." Risa said.

The girls could still see Ichiro walking towards them but he was moving his hands as if he was trying to block something.

"You boys are slow. I can still see you. You just like mosquitoes. One swat is all I need to stop you."
"Can you go faster M?" D asked via bluetooth.
"I think this is the limit D. I can't go any faster."
"I see. I will increase my speed so I can throw more hits. Sneak in some shots if he blocks my attacks. Here I go."

Now M couldn't see D too. But he could see that Ichiro was blocking D's attacks faster on the other side. M was just waiting for Ichiro to use his other hand to block D attacks too. At first, Ichiro was able to parry D's kicks but after D increased his speed, Ichiro started to get irritated. He almost couldn't see where D was attacking. He didn't show it but he was already having a hard time protecting himself. Finally, a series of kicks forced him to use his two hands to block them. M used this chance to land a flame powered 3-hit combination on Ichiro's jaw. This staggered him. D followed up with a Senretsukyaku where all kicks landed successfully sending Ichiro a few meters away.

"I got the first attack." M said.
"So what? I got the hyper combo finish. Now for round two. I'll get the first attack this time."
"You two sissy boys actually aren't pretty bad. But that didn't hurt at all. If you think that was fast, check this out."

M and D blinked. When they closed their eyes, Ichiro's hands were already on their throats. Before they could open their eyes, he already finished raising and slamming them head first into the ground, knocking them unconscious.

"Michii-kun!" Risa cried.
"Domo-kun is okay, isnt' he? He's okay right?" Sayu asked her companions.
"They're fine, Niigaki-san, Michishige-san. I assure you." K told them. "Those two are the most hardheaded of us."
"Just what is happening here, Kyo-kun? Reina asked.
"I told you aliens existed. But I didn't know Miki-san and BoA-san were aliens too." Eri said.
"It's a long story Tanaka-san. And we're not aliens, Kamei-san. I can tell you about it, once this is over."
"What are you?"
"I'm a cyborg, Tanaka-san."
"So that explains why I can't beat you in video games. You cheated."
"No I didn't."
"I don't think I can trust you anymore, Kyo-kun."
“I don't think you trusted me ever since the start, Tanaka-san."

"Noobs. Hahahaha." Ichiro said as he gave M and D a kick in the gut.

He was about to walk towards the girls but R appeared behind him and released a kick. He was able to leap and evade it but S was in the air and struck him with Mjolnir, which sent him back to the ground, where R was waiting for him. Before he was able to land on his feet, R was able to land a barrage of punches which sent him back to S who was ready to strike with the hammer again. Ichiro could have evaded but M grabbed onto his leg to immobilize him. S was able to hit him with solid blows. When S was to land the finishing one, Ichiro grabbed M and used him as a shield. S was able to stop, giving Ichiro a chance to counter attack. He threw M at S and fired energy beams at them. He turned around and grabbed R and kicked him in the air then punched him back to the ground.

"You boys are pretty bothersome." he said as he grabbed R by the collar."But I'm enjoying myself. But I won't kill you just yet. I want you to see what I'm going to do to them."

He started walking towards the girls again. "Why don't you step aside K."
"Like I'd let you get near them." K answered as he activated his armor. His armor took a form similar to Guyver. K extended the blades on his elbows.
"You know it's useless right. I'm just going to break that."
"Go ahead and try." K said as he started his attack on Ichiro. Ichiro blocked the blades with his arms. His flesh was cut and his blood painted the sleeves of his shirt. The sight terrified the girls. Ichiro, on the other hand, smiled. He was already impervious to pain. His existence has been threatened a lot of times already but he managed to survive. He grabbed the blades with his bare hands and broke it from K's armor. Then he threw them at K, which pierced through his armor, impaling him. The armor dematerialized and Ichiro pushed the ends of the blades, making it go deeper into K.

"Kyo-kun! Please stop it, Ichiro-san."
"Why Tanaka? I thought you didn't care for him at all."
"That's not true. That's not true. Kyo-kun...I like him."
"Hear that K? You seem to have a place in little miss yankee's heart. I'm touched." Ichiro said as he pulled the blades from K. Then he stuck the blades on his back, causing K to kneel. "Oops. Hahaha!"
"Kyo-kun!!!" Reina tried to run to help him but the other girls stopped her.
"Reina-chan, don't worry. Kyo-kun can take care of himself." Aya told her.
"But. He's..."
"Yes he's getting hurt Tanaka. He may be a cyborg but part of him is still human. If you want me to leave him alone, then beg. Beg for him."
"Don't listen to him, Reina-chan."
"Please stop it. Please don't hurt him anymore."
"I can't hear you, Tanaka."
"Please stop. Please stop." Reina said as she burst into tears.
"Hahahahaha! Fine."

Ichiro kept his word. He moved away from K and walked towards them. Aya walked towards him, thinking that he would leave the other girls alone. She knew that the chances are slim, but she wanted to try to talk some sense to him.

"Ichiro..."
"Why Aya? Don't tell me you missed me?"
"Please. Stop this. What happened to you? Where's the Ichiro I knew? The Ichiro I hated because he always teased me. The same Ichiro I loved because he treated me the way I wanted to be. Where is he?"

Ichiro placed his hands at the side of Aya's shoulders and looked away. Aya took out a handkerchief and tied it to his hand, to stop the bleeding. There was calmness in his face. Any trace of the viciousness he displayed earlier vanished.

"He's gone Aya. Forget about him. I can't stop now. I feel that I'm nearing what I was supposed to do from the start: To destroy what I was made to protect before. It was never supposed to end this way. My plan was just to use Ishikawa's radio show to brainwash everyone but the fucks decided to cancel her show. I know there's some radio shows, but Ishikawa's show was...Nevermind. This will all be over soon…"
"You can bring him back if you want to. I'm sure they will forgive you if you..."
"If I beg? No thanks. I don't beg for anything, even if my life was on the line."
"Ichiro..."
"I’m going to tell you something but I won’t be surprised if don’t believe me."
"What is it Ichiro?"
"I missed you, Aya."

Ichiro bent to kiss her but he heard an object approaching him at a high speed. He turned around and caught it. It was one of the blades from K's armor. He crushed it and turned around but Aya was not there anymore. S took her back to where the girls were. He threw the fragments of the blade towards them but S went in front of the girls to shield them. The fragments pierced his back. Then M suddenly appeared behind Ichiro and held him. Ichiro could see K approaching him, wielding one of the blades he stuck on his back. K aimed for his throat but Ichiro was able to move a bit backwards, thus avoiding a lethal wound. He elbowed M so that he could escape his hold and distanced himself from them. He touched his neck and there was blood. The wound wasn't deep but the sight of his blood angered him. He walked towards K and gave him a blow that knocked him unconscious. He walked straight to M. M charged his hands and attacked Ichiro relentlessly. Ichiro took all the hits but they didn't do much damage. M stopped when Ichiro punched him in the gut. The he raised him up by the collar.

"You fucking bastard! You're the reason why I always get hit!" he said before he slammed M to the ground again. From there he mounted him and started raining punches on M's face. His punches were so vicious and strong, that his own knuckles got wounded.

"Michii-kun! Please stop it! Ichiro-san, please stop it!"
"I'm not going to let you beg for his life, Niigaki. I'm going to kill him, which I regret not doing so before." Ichiro said as he continued punching. When they attempted to help him, Ichiro would shoot beams from his eyes. Ichiro's assault lasted for minutes. The other Guardians could do nothing but watch as one of them got beaten to a pulp. When he was satisfied, he stood up and grabbed M by the neck and raised him again, showing him to Risa and the others.

"He should serve as an example. Say goodbye to your Masato-kun, Niigaki. Hahaha."
"M...Michii-kun..."

Ichiro let go of M. They thought what he was done when they saw M falling slowly to the ground but Ichiro suddenly kicked him, sending M's body crashing into the forest.

"One down, four to go. And he said that I wasn't going to be alive on the last chapter. Ha!"

[JFC]

Dude, about time you updated!

I wanted to get the First Attack anyway. It's 1500 points right?"
"Who said I'd give you the first attack?" S asked him as they started to walk towards Ichiro.

Street Fighter 2. A classic.

It's So Gay and Haado Gei.

HG actually did have a comedy partner at one point, they named him RG, I think (for Really Gei ).

"I told you aliens existed. But I didn't know Miki-san and BoA-san were aliens too." Eri said.

Ah, dear naive Eri.

"What are you?"
"I'm a cyborg, Tanaka-san."
"So that explains why I can't beat you in video games. You cheated."
"No I didn't."
"I don't think I can trust you anymore, Kyo-kun."
“I don't think you trusted me ever since the start, Tanaka-san."

Ouch. I can picture Reina puffing her cheeks during this bit.

"Why don't you step aside K."
"Like I'd let you get near them." K answered as he activated his armor. His armor took a form similar to Guyver. K extended the blades on his elbows.

Very slick, though I'm surprised at how "calm" the girls are at this point (considering you didn't write anything about them gasping in shock or screaming in surprise  ).

"Kyo-kun! Please stop it, Ichiro-san."
"Why Tanaka? I thought you didn't care for him at all."
"That's not true. That's not true. Kyo-kun...I like him."

They do say that when you're young, you tease the ones you like.

I can't stop now. I feel that I'm nearing what I was supposed to do from the start: To destroy what I was made to protect before. It was never supposed to end this way. My plan was just to use Ishikawa's radio show to brainwash everyone but the fucks decided to cancel her show.

He means Chanchaka Charmy? Brainwash everyone? Into what? Into not liking H!P anymore so that the girls would no longer be idols? So that in turn they (*hint hint* Aya) would go back to being "regular" girls that Ichiro could actually have a real relationship with???

"You fucking bastard! You're the reason why I always get hit!"

DAAAAAAAAAAAAAMN M got pasted! 

And he said that I wasn't going to be alive on the last chapter. Ha!

Well, obviously it isn't the last chapter yet. 

[ferrar1]

You lied i thought i was expecting one last chapter  Not that i'm complaining though since i've more to read  :p

All the girls love their guardians, damn i should be 1 too.

ichiro is unstoppable. i don't see how the guardians can stop them till tezuka comes by and disclose his ... weakness (?)