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Re: Detonator M
« Reply #180 on: April 02, 2007, 01:34:46 PM »
Man, this is one hard battle.. Can the guardians win? dun dun dun!

I feel pity for the girls... :D

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Re: Detonator M
« Reply #181 on: April 03, 2007, 05:38:02 AM »
The girls having to watch their precious guardians being so badly hurt is... *eyes water* They should just leave. Runaway or something so at least Ichiro can't get the satisfaction of seeing them feel the guardians' pain. And Ichiro, listen to Aya. It's Aya damn it! xD Didn't you say you missed her?

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« Reply #182 on: April 16, 2007, 07:29:34 AM »
Scanning for Digital BioSignature...........
Target: M
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...Error! Target not found. Retry? Y/N
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Scanning for Digital BioSignature...........



Don't bother doing that, boys. He's dead. I made sure. Don't worry, you'll be following him soon." Ichiro said as he removed the handkerchief Aya tied on his hand and used it to wipe M's blood off. "I'm going to kill you, that you wish you would have just died like the others in the explosion."

The Guardians didn't want to believe what Ichiro just said but they fear that what he claims is true, that M was indeed dead. They could hear Risa crying while the others calmed her down. Their tears kept falling like rain, even the Guardians could not keep count.

Miki and BoA, victims of Ichiro's initial assault, were still out cold. R was already conscious but he only had enough energy to walk to where the girls were. Ai went to him before he fell and helped him walk towards the others.

The three left standing looked at each other.

They knew what they had to do.

Do you want to disable Active Shield? Y/N
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Shutting down Active Shield...
Initializing Dynamic Guardian Mode...



There was a faint sound; similar to a glass being shattered that only Ichiro was able to hear. "What the fuc..."

He wasn't able to complete what he was saying when he saw the three covered by a bluish-white aura. He could feel the energy that was emanating from them but he wasn't fazed.

"Impressive. That's really impressive, guys. You look like Super Saiya-jins. But you won't hear me saying 'it's over nine thousand'. Hahahaha!"

"Shingo-kun, are you still going to fight him?" Eri asked her Guardian.
"We have to, Kamei-san. "
"Be careful then. I believe you guys can beat him."
"Thanks."
"K...Kyo-kun?"
"What is it, Tanaka-san?"
"You're wrong."
"I'm wrong?"
"I trusted you. I trusted you the day we first met..."
"Tanaka-san..."
"Domo-kun where did you go again?"

After Sayumi said those words, S and K knew what should be done next.

S raised Mjolnir in the air and it dematerialized. He raised his other hand and from the sky fell an enormous sword, similar to that of Sanosuke's.

K's body started to glow and when the light disappeared, the only thing he wore was a black suit that was almost like a ninja outfit.

D already started his attack. With the Active Shield off, he was ten times faster than he was before. Ichiro was defenseless. He was getting hurt but he didn't show any signs of it. D made every kick count.  He had no clear view of D so Ichiro tried to counter by wildly throwing punches, hoping that some of them would find its mark. Or is it? Suddenly, D's assault stopped.

The others were also wondering why he stopped because it looked like he was winning. S looked down at D's feet and found his answer.

"What are you going to do now, D, when your shoes are broken?" Ichiro said as he wiped the blood at the side of his lips. So the punches he was throwing were actually for D's special shoes. Those shoes were not just for enhancing his speed, but they were also to prevent his legs from being strained. Without it he won't be able to use his speed, and without it he will feel the pressure his legs accumulated when he was attacking Ichiro. D dropped on one knee while Ichiro moved closer for the kill. He grabbed D by the hair and raised him.

"It's a pity you don't use your hands. They could have won the day for you." Ichiro said.
"I promised Michishige-san that I'd take care of my hands..." D answered.
"You hear that Michishige? It's your fault he's gonna get killed."
"Domo-kun..."
"Actually Ichiro, I think I'm going to break that promise today..." D said as he aimed his right fist on Ichiro's face.

There wasn't a faint sound this time. Everybody heard it. It was the sound similar to that of a rapid machinegun. But not everyone was able to see it, especially Ichiro, who was sent flying away.

"How many punches did he..." K asked S.
"I don't know. I almost didn't see it. It's too fast. Maybe it was over nine thou..." S answered.
"Forget it."

D grabbed the wrist of his right arm with his other hand and pulled it out. His right hand then extended and detached from his wrist; there was a metallic cylinder that connected them. Smoke came out and a couple of empty bullet shells fell on the ground.

"Since when did you get that D?" K asked him.
"Since that time I got hit in the face. I can only use it once though."
"You did it! That was awesome Domo-kun!" Sayumi shouted.
"Y...You like it Michishige-san?"
Sayumi was about to nod but she froze when she saw the figure standing behind D.
"I didn't like it..."

It was Ichiro. Blood was coming out of his nose and he looked really pissed. Before D could react, Ichiro already gave his a fierce straight. It his him squarely in the face which sent him flying towards S's direction.

"Now that's one shot I won't be hearing from again..." Ichiro said as we wiped away the blood from his nose.

K caught D, who was unconscious and handed him to Sayu and the other girls.

"It's your turn to take care of him, Michishige-san." K said.
"I'll do my best, Kyo-kun." was Sayumi's response.
"Kick his ass, Kyo-kun! Or I will kick yours!"
"I will, Tanaka-san."
"Don't you think your sword's a bit too big, Shingo-kun? It looks heavy. I'm thinking that you won't be able to use it properly." Eri told her Guardian.
"Just watch, Kamei-san." S said as he pulled the sword from the ground and hoisted it on his shoulder."
"That's not the only 'sword' he can't use properly." Ichiro butted in. "So that means he hasn't touched you yet. That's really great! And it looks like you realized that your armor won't be any help at all, K."
"Wanna try it out?" K challenged him.
"Why not?"

K and S suddenly vanished. The next thing the girls saw was S was already in the air ready to slice Ichiro. The sword hit the ground for Ichiro was able to jump out of the way. He thought that he was safe but K appeared behind him and threw a powered-up punch. Ichiro dodged and countered by giving him a punch in the gut. It hit K but he didn't get hurt and he just smiled at Ichiro. Ichiro he didn't understand where this sudden sting in his gut came from and he winced in pain as he moved away from K, only to be slashed by S's sword from behind. S slashed him again but Ichiro was able to parry the sword and went to a safer distance away from them.

"How the fuck did you do that K?" Ichiro said as he still held on to his gut. "It felt like I just punched myself."
"That's what my useless armor can do, Ichiro. It will return any attack you inflict on me with a multiplier of 8.112291. So basically the harder you hit me, the harder it will strike you back." K answered.
"I see. And that sword, S. How can you can handle it so easily?"
"My weapons are like part of my body.  Using this sword is almost like telling my hand to wave." S said.
"Interesting...Dan is really remarkable. I should have gotten rid of him when I had the chance. Oh well, what else can the outdated piece of technology inside me do, but try do whatever it takes to destroy you."

Without warning, Ichiro dashed towards them. K was his first target. He punched K in different areas of his body. Ichiro felt the impact of his punches on his own body but he didn't care. K threw a counter punch but Ichiro dodged it and moved away.

"Are you trying to kill yourself?" K asked him.
"No. I'm just testing a theory." Ichiro answered.

As soon as he said that, K suddenly held his mid section, dropped on his knees and puked out some blood.

"Just as I thought. The armor can only absorb and redirect the first hit. If you didn't notice, I punched you in some areas more than once. Before I could feel the impact on my body, I hit it again. And I was right. Gosh, I'm so smart. Hahaha. By the way, the second set of punches had a multiplier of 13.04041994 so that's going to hurt..."

Ichiro looked at his side and he saw that S has already attacked him with a hoirzontal slash. He didn't have time to dodge so he blocked it with his arm. The girls shrieked and covered their eyes as they saw Ichiro's arm get severed. S slashed at him again but Ichiro kicked his hand, making him drop the sword. S moved away and reached out his hand so the sword would go back to him but Ichiro stepped on the sword and picked it up.

"Shit, that was really sneaky S." Ichiro said as he smirked. "No where is my arm...oh there it is." He said as he stuck the sword on the ground, picked up his arm and placed it near his severed elbow. A bunch of cables came out and started re-attaching his arm. Once it was complete, Ichiro tried to move his fingers.

"Nanotech regeneration. You guys should be like better versions of me, yet I still end up being the superior one. I bet you guys don't have that technology yet." Ichiro told him as he picked up S sword. "Or maybe you do. No, don't answer. I want to find out myself."

Ichiro ran toward S, ready to attack. S summoned two smaller swords before he engaged Ichiro. Unbelievably, Ichiro was able to control the huge sword with ease and was slowly overpowering S in their duel. In the blink of an eye, he was able to knock out the swords from S's hands. He slashed S's thigh so that he would kneel down. Ichiro placed the blade a few inches from S's neck.

"Shingo-kun!!!" Eri yelled.
"I remember the first time I killed someone *sniff* His head fell off like a bag of rotten tomatoes. But hey, that was also the time I got to nail Aya. Haha. Some memories..." Ichiro said as he prepared to finish S off but suddenly a pair of laser beams hit him at the back. "I'll finish you later." he said before he turned around and threw S's sword at the attackers. The pair of shadows evaded it and went closer to Ichiro. The moonlight showed Ichiro who the two were. He could hear Sayumi yelling that it's a ghost but he just laughed inside.

"You should stop already, Ichiro." Tezuka said. "All of this is pointless."
"Well, well, if it isn't Tezuka. I can't believe you lost to R. You should be ashamed of yourself. Don't worry, I don't want to fight a loser like you anyway. And who's that with you? Waitaminute, didn't I kill you a few weeks ago?"
"Yes. You killed me. And I've come back to return the favor." H said.
"You really have a death wish, don't you squirt? I'm going to kill you again."

A yellow ray suddenly came out of the darkness and grazed Ichiro's cheek. Ichiro placed his hand on it and felt his blood.

"Now tell me who the fuck dared to do that to me." he said as he looked at Tezuka and H. Before any of them could speak, the answer to Ichiro's question made his presence felt.
 
"Aniki, who is that?" the voice came from another shadow as he walked towards H and Tezuka. It was a boy. He looked almost exactly like H except he had a different haircut and his hair wasn't red.

"He's Ichiro." H answered him.

Suddenly the boy who looked like H started attacking Ichiro with kicks. Tezuka took the opportunity to take S and K to safety.

"Aren't you with him?" S asked Tezuka.
"I was, yes. But not anymore." replied Tezuka. "Don't worry, Dan is on the way."

Ichiro parried the kicks and gave the boy a kick of his own, sending him back to where H was standing. Fortunately, he was able to block Ichiro's kick.

"He's strong, Aniki." the boy said as he dusted the part of his shirt that was hit. H went closer and hit him in the head. "Ouch! What was that for?"
"You're a dumbass! You could’ve been hurt badly. We can't beat him one on one. We need some kind of gameplan."
"Okay. Just tell me what I have to do Aniki." he answered.
"Aww. What classic display of brotherly love. As long as you two aren't like Kick and Punch Hopper, I'd be glad to send you to hell with some mercy."
"You're the one who's going to hell tonight, Ichiro."
"Yeah! Aniki and I will destroy you!"
"Seems like you two inherited Yoshizawa’s spunky attitude. If I recall correctly, she wasn't the type whom you could easily submit. But yeah, she was wild in bed too hahahaha…"

« Last Edit: April 16, 2007, 02:31:06 PM by wordsworth »

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Re: Detonator M
« Reply #183 on: April 16, 2007, 09:55:11 AM »
Quote from: wordsworth
"Impressive. That's really impressive, guys. You look like Super Saiya-jins. But you won't hear me saying 'it's over nine thousand'. Hahahaha!"

Lol, wtf!

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S raised Mjolnir in the air and it dematerialized. He raised his other hand and from the sky fell an enormous sword, similar to that of Sanosuke's.

Nice, I still remember Battohsai.

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"I don't know. I almost didn't see it. It's too fast. Maybe it was over nine thou..." S answered.
"Forget it."

It's ok because he stop before saying that.. otherwise... >_>

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"That's what my useless armor can do, Ichiro. It will return any attack you inflict on me with a multiplier of 8.112291.

Hah, what!! :D Heh, too precise.

Yay, H is back! We need a hero like him now. :D

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"Aniki, who is that?" the voice came from another shadow as he walked towards H and Tezuka. It was a boy. He looked almost exactly like H except he had a different haircut and his hair wasn't red.

Hmm, did I miss a chapter? Or this is a newly built one? Urghh...

Words, great chapter!
« Last Edit: April 16, 2007, 02:28:44 PM by ziggurat »

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Re: Detonator M
« Reply #184 on: April 16, 2007, 03:31:13 PM »
Argggggghs this Ichiro  :grr: Will anyone be able to defeat him?
And M can't die. What about Risa? :k-sad:

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Re: Detonator M
« Reply #185 on: April 17, 2007, 12:07:44 AM »
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Do you want to disable Active Shield? Y/N
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Shutting down Active Shield...
Initializing Dynamic Guardian Mode...
A Guardian Power-up mode? 


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"Impressive. That's really impressive, guys. You look like Super Saiya-jins. But you won't hear me saying 'it's over nine thousand'. Hahahaha!"
Good thing too, if you had written that it'd be all sorts of lameness. :P


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"How many punches did he..." K asked S.
"I don't know. I almost didn't see it. It's too fast. Maybe it was over nine thou..." S answered.
"Forget it."
Ooooooooooooooooooooooooooh...


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"How the fuck did you do that K?" Ichiro said as he still held on to his gut. "It felt like I just punched myself."
"That's what my useless armor can do, Ichiro. It will return any attack you inflict on me with a multiplier of 8.112291. So basically the harder you hit me, the harder it will strike you back." K answered.
Ah, it's like the old "I'm rubber and you're glue" bit.


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"Just as I thought. The armor can only absorb and redirect the first hit. If you didn't notice, I punched you in some areas more than once. Before I could feel the impact on my body, I hit it again. And I was right. Gosh, I'm so smart. Hahaha. By the way, the second set of punches had a multiplier of 13.04041994 so that's going to hurt..."
Crap. 


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Well, well, if it isn't Tezuka.
WTF he's back? And alive??? 


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Waitaminute, didn't I kill you a few weeks ago?"
"Yes. You killed me. And I've come back to return the favor." H said.
H???

Oh right, he's a clone. :P


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A yellow ray suddenly came out of the darkness and grazed Ichiro's cheek. Ichiro placed his hand on it and felt his blood.

"Now tell me who the fuck dared to do that to me." he said as he looked at Tezuka and H. Before any of them could speak, the answer to Ichiro's question made his presence felt.
 
"Aniki, who is that?" the voice came from another shadow as he walked towards H and Tezuka. It was a boy. He looked almost exactly like H except he had a different haircut and his hair wasn't red.

"He's Ichiro." H answered him.

Suddenly the boy who looked like H started attacking Ichiro with kicks.
It's H2!   

Hey c'mon, the joke was RIGHT THERE! I had to say it.


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"He's strong, Aniki." the boy said as he dusted the part of his shirt that was hit. H went closer and hit him in the head. "Ouch! What was that for?"
"You're a dumbass! You could’ve been hurt badly. We can't beat him one on one. We need some kind of gameplan."
"Okay. Just tell me what I have to do Aniki." he answered.
"Aww. What classic display of brotherly love. As long as you two aren't like Kick and Punch Hopper, I'd be glad to send you to hell with some mercy."
I WAS JUST THINKING THAT!!! As soon as H2 called H1 "aniki"!!!


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"Seems like you two inherited Yoshizawa’s spunky attitude. If I recall correctly, she wasn't the type whom you could easily submit. But yeah, she was wild in bed too hahahaha…"
Ooooooooooooooooohhh...it's on now! 

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Re: Detonator M
« Reply #186 on: April 17, 2007, 02:54:38 AM »
WHOA WORDSWORTH!
I just noticed
13 = Risako's age
 .04041994 Her bday
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Re: Detonator M
« Reply #187 on: April 17, 2007, 10:30:57 AM »
I knew H would return in some form or other after that chapter previously!!
The story's really heating up!! But somehow M has to recover and do something super cool I mean his name is in the title!

can't wait for next chapter!

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Re: Detonator M
« Reply #188 on: April 18, 2007, 11:36:50 AM »
How can somebody defeat Ichiro ? Even with their full power release they can't do anything.

H return is totally unexpected !

M can't die :'( , think about Risa !  xD

What will happen next ? RHAAA I can't wait !

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Re: Detonator M
« Reply #189 on: April 20, 2007, 02:27:50 PM »
shit, I actually just started reading this. This is only like the 4 fic I've started. I saw Tekken and the first chapter and wondered what it was doing there so I started reading. Only at the 3rd part so far, but I'm likin' it. I got so much catching up to do.

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Re: Detonator M
« Reply #190 on: April 20, 2007, 02:33:25 PM »
Xenogenesis
first appearance of H2 !


Coming soon !


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« Reply #191 on: April 20, 2007, 04:43:44 PM »
really great and cool pictures ChrNo!!

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« Reply #192 on: April 20, 2007, 05:30:55 PM »
Great job as usual

Airi-chan is sooo cute in this drawing ^^

Captain @ Krillin mode xD

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« Reply #193 on: April 21, 2007, 06:40:12 AM »
Captain @ Krillin mode xD
At first I wasn't sure what was meant by this comment. Then I took another look at ChrNo's drawing. KURIIRIN MODE FTW!!!
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« Reply #194 on: April 21, 2007, 04:53:45 PM »
Ok, the 2 clones are really gonna mess with those berries heads! Wait, they had their memories erased. Forgot  :p. Well then the head girl will be very hapy then. ;D

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« Reply #195 on: May 09, 2007, 02:38:22 AM »
H and the younger Guardian circled around Ichiro. Ichiro just stood still and tried to look at the time on the imaginary watch on his wrist.

"Are you two gonna attack me or what? I don't have all night you know. I wanna tune in to Kiritsu..."

The two young Guardians suddenly rushed at him. Ichiro leapt to evade them but even before he could reach the peak of his jump, H2 was already in the air waiting for him. He gave Ichiro a roundhouse kick. Ichiro was able to block it but his guard was broken. H suddenly jumped behind H2 and unleashed a barrage of punches. Ichiro got dazed and H and H2 started stomping him until he hit the ground. They kept on stomping him until he was buried then the two of them jumped out and fired a volley of energy blasts.

"I didn't know that kids these days are violent!" Eri said. "You should stop picking on those Berryz Koubou and C-ute girls, Reina."
"I don't pick on them!" Reina said defensively. "Why don't you tell that to Sayu. She's always asking poor Maimai for some snacks when we have joint rehearsals."
"Hey! She gave those snacks to me. I didn't ask for them!" Sayumi pouted.
"Cut it out, girls." Ai told them as she continued to calm Risa down.
"Michii-kun..."
"Don't worry, Risa. I've got a feeling that Mitsui-kun hasn't given up yet."
"Ai-chan..."

"Did we beat him, Aniki?" H2 asked.
"Not yet." Just as H said that, a barrage of energy blasts came from the hole they created. H was able to evade them but H2 wasn't lucky enough. After he got hit by one,
a couple more of the blasts followed. H got in front of him and tried to shield H2 from some of the blasts. Though he was able to block them, the blasts were still powerful enough
to deal some damage.

"You two kids are pretty strong, ne?" Ichiro said as he climbed out of the hole in the ground. "You got me all dirty."
"Hey, wake up." H told H2 as he shook him. "I can't beat him without you."
"Don't tell me you two are going do a fusion dance then kick the shit out of me. That won't work here. Hahaha."
"I can't move my legs, Aniki."
"Darn it! I'll try to hold him off. Download whatever you can from Dan-san's FTP site so you can move your legs again." H said as he deactivated his Active Shield. A green aura covered H. he raised his hand and suddenly his rings beamed onto his fingers. He looked at the rings that were still warm with M's electric charges. "M. I'm going to beat him this time." Then he noticed something different with the rings. What the? He color coded the rings accordingly! What was he thinking?"
"Aniki! Dan-san's FTP site is just full of video clips and photos!"
"Really? Try S's FTP site."
"Wait...It's the same as Dan-san's. Only there's a directory named 'JAV'. Should I look for it there?"
"Don't. Don't go inside that directory. I'll just send it to you...There. Did you get it?"
"Yes. I'm installing it right now...Done! Look Aniki!" H2 said as he stood from the ground. "My legs feel lighter now!" he said as he did some kicks. H2 deactivated his Active Shield and was covered with a green aura too. Then the two of them took a fighting pose.

"Do you think those auras scare me?" Ichiro asked them."Go ahead, attack." He said as he put his hands at his side and closed his eyes. H and H2 moved in to attack him. When they were within striking distance, Ichiro opened his eyes. A powerful, black aura emanated from him, knocking the two back, even dispelling their auras. The girls and the other Guardians also felt the impact of Ichiro's aura and were being pushed away until Tezuka created a shield for them. Ichiro's aura took the form of a dragon before it went inside him again.

"Ichiro has unsealed his power. Now our chances are slim." Tezuka told them. "I just hope Dan prepared for this..."

Once H and H2 got back on their feet, they continued with their attack. H started with an overhand right. It landed on Ichiro's face but it didn't faze him. H2 gave him a roundhouse kick that landed on his head but it also didn't have any effect. They kept on attacking Ichiro and Ichiro kept on taking all their attacks. When both of them were going to knee Ichiro in the midsection, Ichiro suddenly grabbed them by the throat.

"You never learn, do you H. Don't you remember how Yoshizawa and your little captain cried when I killed you."
"Don't you dare go near Shimi-chan!"
"I won't. For now. Maybe next year. When she's taller." Ichiro said as he grinned. H2 kept on kicking even if he knew it didn't do anything. "Hehe. And you also brought another of Yoshizawa's clones to die with you."
"Shut up!" H said as he punched Ichiro again.
"Hehe. Still no manners after coming back from heaven eh? Perhaps it would be better if I send you back there again."

Ichiro's laughter was drowned by two gunshots. They didn't know where it came from but those shots severed both of Ichiro's arms, setting H and H2 free. The leapt back to where Tezuka, the other Guardians and the girls were.

"Come out Dan! I know it's you!" Ichiro shouted as he stared at his arms. Blood, sparks and oil were coming out.

He was right. Dan came out hold a mean looking pistol. He walked closer to the others and checked their condition.

"Dan-san! Am I glad to see you!" D said.
"Hey, I  know you! Aren't you the in-house doctor?" Sayumi asked him.
"No he's not the in-house doctor, Sayu. Trust me. I know." Ai said.
"Ahahaha. I may look geeky but I'm not a doctor, Michishige-san." Dan answered.
"The geeky looking ones are the more pervy ones..." Eri said.
H sat up and coughed. "I beg your pardon. That is absolutely fallacious, Kamei-san." he said as he fixed his glasses.
"Oh yeah? Then can you tell me what he's doing with Miki-san and BoA-san?" Reina said as he pointed at Dan, whose hands were on top of Miki and BoA's chests.
"I think he's trying to apply CPR, Tanaka-san." K answered.
"Do you have to put your hands INSIDE their clothes when you apply CPR? Reina asked.
"Yes Reina. I saw Miki do CPR to Yossi before and Miki even took off Yossi's clothes." answered Eri.
"Yeah. Miki did that to me before too..." Aya added. "...in the showers."
"I'm not applying CPR. I'm checking if their systems are still okay."
"Does checking their systems include excessive touching and..."
"Of course."
"Well. If you say so then I believe you."
"Good. Are you alright, R?" Dan asked him.
"I'm fine. Even that partial installation of the Active Shield was quite useful." replied R.
"Who are you?" Ai asked.
"No time for that, Takahashi-san. I'll explain everything later. What about you two?"
"We're fine. But we can't get his hands off us." H said.
"It's like his hands are alive or something." H2 added.
"Oh no! Dan! Ichiro, he has nanotech regen..."

Before R could finish, Ichiro's hands suddenly let go of H and H2. One of the hands grabbed the pistol from Dan's hand while the other grabbed Risa before it returned to Ichiro.

"Dan. It's been a long time." Ichiro said as his hands began to re-attach. "This is a powerful toy. You could have killed me if you aimed at my head. But I forgot. You don't kill."

Ichiro pointed it at their direction and started firing until the gun ran out of bullets. Then he crushed it in his hands and threw it away. Risa was still crying when Ichiro looked at her.

"Poor Niigaki. I know what's going on your mind right now. You're blaming yourself for M's death and for bringing the other girls along. I've always wanted to know how your lips taste like. I admit. Even if you lack talent, your looks make it up for it. You won't believe how much weight I lost when your photobook came out. It's alright. I'm going to make you feel better in a while. But I'm not going to be like M. I won't make you forget what I'm going to do to you. I want you to remember every detail..."

"Michii-kun..."

Ichiro was about to tear off Risa's shirt but someone grabbed his wrist.

"I told you, I have a Son Goku complex."
"You kids never get tired of dying, don't you?" Ichiro said in surprise. "But it doesn't matter. I will kill you again!"

It was M.

"Let her go."
"What if I don't?"
M tightened his grip on Ichiro's wrist, forcing his hand to let go of Risa. M then let go of Ichiro's wrist and grabbed Risa's and he started to walk towards the others. Ichiro looked at his wrist and it was deformed, and the pressure made by M’s fingers was visible. He got pissed and tried to attack M from behind. Before he could land his attack, M was able to to hit him with a backfist in the face. Ichiro crashed into the same area
where he kicked off M earlier.

"Michii-kun." Risa said before he broke down on M's chest. "Michii-kun..."
"Stop crying, Gaki-san. I'm going to protect you, no matter what."
"I....I thought you really died this time."
"Haha. I will die if you don't stop crying." M said as he wiped the tears away from Risa's eyes.
"What happened to you M? We scanned for you earlier but you weren't responding." K told him.
"Oh that? Hehe it's because...."
"Now I get it! I thought you were crazy when you asked me to do it but now it's all clear to me!" Dan interrupted.
"What are talking about, Dan?" D asked.
"You see, M here asked me to max out his Active Shield. I told him that if I do that, he won't be able to do any damage unless his shield breaks."
"What's the max value for it?"
"1910201988."
"So he purposely got himself beaten to within an inch of his life so that his Dynamic Guardian mode would kick in." said S. But that was too risky!" 
"It is unadvisable, yes. But he took the risk and now that his shield is broken, M's capabilities will be increased by the max value multiplied by three, or possibly more. The boost you get from a shield getting broken is higher than the boost you get when you deactivate it." Dan explained. "Plus, M's Frame is capable of that."
"How come it took a while for me to regain consciousness, Dan? I thought I was never gonna wake up."
"The process takes longer than the other method, Though I never thought that it would come to this."
"You mean this method was is still in the experimental stage?"
"Well...yeah."
"Doesn't matter. Though I can't feel any difference.Now my power level is over nine thousand!!!! Hahahaha...ha...ha" M said as he laughed. "What?" The others looked at him with their 'eh' faces. Except Risa who was now smiling.
"I'm off." M said as he started to go after Ichiro. But before he could go any further...
"Michii-kun..."
"What is it Gaki-san?"

Risa walked closer and fixed his scarf.

"There. That's better." Risa said.
"Hehe. Thanks. I thought you were gonna give me a good luck kiss or something."
"Do you want one?"
"Nah. I don't need luck. I have you anyway."
"Come back safely, Michii-kun."
"Of course. I'm not going to die. Not just yet. Because I heard that Yajima Maimi will be having a photobook and you're scheduled for an Alo-Hello."
"Yeah..."
"..."
"...Eeehhh? Eeehhh!!!! What? Alo-Hello? Eeehhh!!! Michii-kun?"
"Oops. Sorry for the spoilers. But have I told you how cute you look when you react like that?"
"Really?"
"Really."
"..."
"Anyway, I'm off, Gaki-san." he said as he walked forward. Risa walked back to the others. M looked back made sure that the others will not be caught in the line of fire.

M waited for Ichiro to return from the forest. Ichiro walked slowly while holding on to his nose.

"That was a strong one, boy. Now my nose won't stop bleeding, just like the time when I saw Ishikawa and Shibata making out in the lockers."
"Really? Now that is hot!"
"Yeah. But enough of that. It seems that you're the only one standing in my way."
"I'm going to stop whatever you're going to do. I'll never let you get your hands on Gaki-san or any of the girls again."
"Make me." Ichiro said as he released his aura again. But M wasn't pushed back.

Ichiro charged his hands and fired a full blast energy wave at M. M just swatted it into the air with one hand.
When it was in the sky, M raised his hand and pointed at it. Then the energy wave exploded and lit the sky, just like fireworks.

"Walking the path of heaven, the man who rules over all..."
"Show off." Ichiro said.
"I bet you can't do that." M answered.
"Try me."
"Fine."

Now it was M's turn to release his aura. It was a red aura that took the form of a phoenix. The aura pushed Ichiro back and he tried to stay standing. M pointed his index finger at Ichiro.

"You underestimate me." Ichiro said.
"No I'm not. I'm just making sure this hits you."

A huge enegry sphere formed at the tip of M's finger then he fired it towards Ichiro. Ichiro knew that there was no way he could swat the sphere of energy into the air so he decided to block it instead.
Once it made contact with his arms, his flesh got fried. The sphere kept pushing him away. He was able to contain it for a few seconds before he reactivated his aura and kicked the sphere into the air.

He looked at how much his arms got damaged. It took longer this time before they were able to regenerate. Though it regenerated, some areas were beyond repair. But Ichiro wasn't really concerned. Because he looked at M, who was also checking that part of his arm that made contact with his energy beam earlier. His flesh was also burned, revealing portions of the Frame installed inside him.

It wasn't really clear who sustained more damage or who had the advantage.

But one thing is for sure.

This is not the last chapter.




Yet.

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Re: Detonator M
« Reply #196 on: May 09, 2007, 03:47:19 AM »
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"I can't move my legs, Aniki."
"Darn it! I'll try to hold him off. Download whatever you can from Dan-san's FTP site so you can move your legs again."

...

"Aniki! Dan-san's FTP site is just full of video clips and photos!"
"Really? Try S's FTP site."
"Wait...It's the same as Dan-san's. Only there's a directory named 'JAV'. Should I look for it there?"
Looks like M's not the only perv amongst the Guardians! 


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Ichiro's laughter was drowned by two gunshots. They didn't know where it came from but those shots severed both of Ichiro's arms, setting H and H2 free.
Whoa, that's some heavy firepower right there.  :o


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"Dan-san! Am I glad to see you!" D said.
"Hey, I  know you! Aren't you the in-house doctor?" Sayumi asked him.
"No he's not the in-house doctor, Sayu. Trust me. I know." Ai said.
Ooooooooooooh snap!

Risa after hearing that comment =  :o


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"Ahahaha. I may look geeky but I'm not a doctor, Michishige-san." Dan answered.
"The geeky looking ones are the more pervy ones..." Eri said.
H sat up and coughed. "I beg your pardon. That is absolutely fallacious, Kamei-san." he said as he fixes his glasses.
That's close to being a BAD Freudian slip. :kekeke:



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"Oh yeah? Then can you tell me what he's doing with Miki-san and BoA-san?" Reina said as he pointed at Dan, whose hands were on top of Miki and BoA's chests.
He's living out our fantasy, THAT's what he's doing.


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Poor Niigaki.

...

I've always wanted to know how your lips taste like. I admit. Even if you lack talent, your looks make it up for it. You won't believe how much weight I lost when your photobook came out.
Ewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww...


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"Now I get it! I thought you were crazy when you asked me to do it but now it's all clear to me!" Dan interrupted.
"What are talking about, Dan?" D asked.
"You see, M here asked me to max out his Active Shield. I told him that if I do that, he won't be able to do any damage unless his shield breaks."
"What's the max value for it?"
"1910201988."
"So he purposely got himself beaten to within an inch of his life so that his Dynamic Guardian mode would kick in." said S. But that was too risky!"
"It is unadvisable, yes. But he took the risk and now that his shield is broken, M's capabilities will be increased by the max value multiplied by three, or possibly more. The boost you get from a shield getting broken is higher than the boost you get when you deactivate it."
Had to read this a few times to fully understand it. Looks like M figured out a few tricks that Dan never thought of.


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"Doesn't matter. Though I can't feel any difference.Now my power level is over nine thousand!!!! Hahahaha...ha...ha" M said as he laughed.
You just HAD to say it, didn't you?



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"Come back safely, Michii-kun."
"Of course. I'm not going to die. Not just yet. Because I heard that Yajima Maimi will be having a photobook and you're scheduled for an Alo-Hello."
Yep, M's back all right.  :whistle:


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"..."
"...Eeehhh? Eeehhh!!!! What? Alo-Hello? Eeehhh!!! Michii-kun?"
"Oops. Sorry for the spoilers. But have I told you how cute you look when you react like that?"
"Really?"
"Really."
"..."
She IS damn cute when she spazzes like the reaction queen that she is.


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"Walking the path of heaven, the man who rules over all..."
"Show off." Ichiro said.
TENDOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!

Oops, I guess in this case it would just be a EHHHHHHHM!!! :P


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It wasn't really clear who sustained more damage or who had the advantage.

But one thing is for sure.

This is not the last chapter.




Yet.
Sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet.  ;D

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Re: Detonator M
« Reply #197 on: May 09, 2007, 05:11:01 AM »
Wow Dan's a perv!

And Ichiro's more of a perv... going for Saki when she's 17  >.< not cool!
                               
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Re: Detonator M
« Reply #198 on: May 09, 2007, 07:05:19 PM »
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"Now I get it! I thought you were crazy when you asked me to do it but now it's all clear to me!" Dan interrupted.
"What are talking about, Dan?" D asked.
"You see, M here asked me to max out his Active Shield. I told him that if I do that, he won't be able to do any damage unless his shield breaks."
"What's the max value for it?"
"1910201988."
"So he purposely got himself beaten to within an inch of his life so that his Dynamic Guardian mode would kick in." said S. But that was too risky!"
"It is unadvisable, yes. But he took the risk and now that his shield is broken, M's capabilities will be increased by the max value multiplied by three, or possibly more. The boost you get from a shield getting broken is higher than the boost you get when you deactivate it."

lol...Risa's birthday is October 20, 1988, and she'll be 19 this year. You just had to use such numbers...XD

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Re: Detonator M
« Reply #199 on: May 09, 2007, 08:25:55 PM »
great chapter!!!
I keep thinking the next chapter will be the last, but there's always a brilliant twist! I love it!
I knew M would come back and i'm glad he did! ^^
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