Author Topic: Fanfics Review / General Discussion Thread (Read 409639 times)

rokun · « **Reply #120 on:** June 27, 2008, 03:13:35 AM »

There are a few (if I dare say myself) cool action scenes, with swordfighting even, in "A Young Girl's Odyssey". ^^;;;

Otherwise there's a lot of magical fighting action type stuff... Raikou Shoujo Maimi by Wordsworth if you like Berryz/C-ute & his Detonator M if I remember right is somewhat action-packed too, both of those stories in more of a martial arts way... what you might be thinking of over at JPM could be TylerWood's "Mutant Musume". If not, it's here too for you to read (I think it might be a bit more complete here too).

Hmm, though I haven't read everything so there could be more.

lollipopgirl · « **Reply #121 on:** June 27, 2008, 09:01:15 AM »

I GOTSA ME SOME NET WHILE I'M AWAY!

Probably not too much but still... Withdrawals have been terrible! Plus I'm sooo sick

I need some lovely TLC and my own bed and I can't have either for another 5 days

As for action, 'Mission: C-ute' by AngelCakes has explosions, car/motorcycle chases and fights that ruin Risa's new boots, so I recommend that one and shall got on the author's back about updating it soon (for my own sake if noone else's)

I saw my name is dai's post... don't know why but YAY

(i did read the whole thing though, i love dai's posts

*cough* suck up *cough* )

Now I get to read some fics and hope it makes me feel less like throwing up YAY!

tito · « **Reply #122 on:** June 27, 2008, 02:49:14 PM »

^Hope you are feeling better girl!

Ill is sucky but thank god, there are many fics to accompany you...I'm feeling super nostalgic about exams today (totally gross you know

)

When that feeling goes away, probably I will write

EDIT: This next chap is long though..............

daigong · « **Reply #123 on:** July 01, 2008, 07:13:40 AM »

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JFC · « **Reply #124 on:** July 02, 2008, 01:12:16 AM »

Quote from: JFC on June 23, 2008, 08:10:31 AM

It's really weird that I'm about to have a LOT more free time on my hands because the school year is ending, and yet I'm still in my little slump and am less inclined to read as much as I used to. It's like, at the end of last Friday I had gotten through everything with the exception of tru's "Runaway" (which, to be honest, I don't think I've checked in almost 5 days) and rokun's latest update on "The Circle." I didn't really get to spend much time here yesterday, so I didn't actually come here to the fic section until today...where I find that another 6-8 fic threads have been updated. @_@

Man this is gonna take me longer than I thought.

Quote from: poets on June 23, 2008, 09:52:02 AM

^ JFC, maybe you're mentally exhausted . If you need a break from commenting on stories, it's okay!

'kay, yeah. I'm gonna have to lay off the epic comments for a while. I still haven't gotten to some fics since that other post I made. @_@

I'll try to at least make use of the emoticons.

lollipopgirl · « **Reply #125 on:** July 03, 2008, 02:31:02 PM »

*squeals and jumps at the amount of fic updates she gets to read soon, especially at a certain one by a fish with feathers*

poets · « **Reply #126 on:** July 03, 2008, 02:49:35 PM »

I've noticed a MAJOR decline in the discussion section. So I decided to post something that might (or might not) motivate people to post their opinion on it.

Lately, I've really started to get into SayuXGaki moments. They're just ridiculously adorable! I had noticed their subtle friendship but hadn't paid much attention to it. Recently though, thanks to the awesomeness that is YOUTUBE + a boring tuesday evening, I've started to look more into them hanging out backstage and ect. Compared to the other pairings that they're associated with (Gakikame, Takagaki, Kameshige so forth and so on) theirs is so much more laid back and i <3 _ <3 it.

Now the other couple I just CAN'T GET ENOUGH of lately, thanks to the moderately awesome haromoni, is SayuReina... THEY ARE HISTERICAL! Ever since they did the Alo-hello 2 and got paired up... i've had my eye on them. Reina's badass attitude and Sayu's dark side are probaby one of the best mixes I've seen in MM (and one a fic writer can have fun with). The way they just rank on the other members makes it all worth boringness that Haromoni brings sometimes (okay, let's be realistic... haromoni brings MOST OF THE TIME)

On another note, I've been considering maybe trying a one-shot with one of these pairings... I just don't think I can... YET. (Too many other side project and I get slightly nervous when I write about a new couple *hides*)

Sooooooooooooooo i think this is probably the most I've ever written in this FORUM.. anywho those are my current thoughts..... um, the end *tap dances off the thread stage*

*EDIT*
Oh, HI LOLLIPOPGIRL... glad to see you're back *waves hi*

strawb3rrykream · « **Reply #127 on:** July 03, 2008, 09:18:44 PM »

I've never really noticed too much of a thing between Sayu and Gaki but in the Bon Kyu Bon Kyu BOMB concert when Sayu picked Gaki up kinda....

I thought it was cute along with the look Gaki gave her after the fact. But come to think of it, some backstage clips I've seen have that pair making fun of Eri a lot. So there's something they have in common. (I tend to see that trend with Gaki and Reina too) Yeah, SayuReina are pretty awesome. In Alo Hello 2, when they were filming each other making heart shapes with their lips kinda made me laugh. I was like damn, they're weird! Reina, for sure, has that whole "I coulda done that!" attitude and Sayu is beginning to show that side of her too.

Anyway, just wanted to try and keep this thread going too.

poets · « **Reply #128 on:** July 04, 2008, 02:14:42 AM »

I can think of alot of Sayu Gaki moments (if you want the link to the YOUTUBE channel where you can see them just PM me

)

The funniest moment I can recall of Sayu and Gaki is during the H.P ALL STARS "All for one and one for all" making of, it's a very popular clips but I'm gonna talk about it anyways ^^;. Gaki's holding hands with Sayu and Ai-chan's trying to kiss her. Gaki's goes all "This pervs trying to kiss me... eww" and Sayu mentions to Ai-chan that she also wants a kiss. Then, Ai's responds with a "hell no" and Gaki goes on with a rant of how if it were Sayu going to kiss her she'd be okay but since it's Ai-chan she's resisting

... In short it's the type of material that fuels fics and fans

. Now I want to rewatch that video clip. *goes off to watch it*

lollipopgirl · « **Reply #129 on:** July 04, 2008, 04:21:14 AM »

^ that good ol' clip really cuts off to early

I think its kinda interesting how as a fan of one pairing you can be blinded to (or just chose to ignore) moments involving other pairings. In regards to that clip, for me, that's all about the TakaGaki and even with Risa saying that about Sayu, I'm stil focused on her and Ai... In Love & Peace performances now, there is always Sayu/Gaki stuff but I kinda skip over that as being cute to focus on TakaGaki, KameShige or TanaKame

Sayu/Gaki are cute though, like was already mentioned, it is more laidback then the other pairings but I think Sayu will just take whatever she can get

poets · « **Reply #130 on:** July 04, 2008, 05:31:35 AM »

Quote from: lollipopgirl on July 04, 2008, 04:21:14 AM

but I think Sayu will just take whatever she can get

OH SHI SUPER BURN

poor Sayu... But all this talk about this clip has me thinking

*a few seconds later* heh...I got it

*runs off with idea in mind*

strawb3rrykream · « **Reply #131 on:** July 04, 2008, 06:24:24 AM »

I totally forgot about that clip! And I agree 110% with lollipopgirl, I was focused on the Takagaki!

I didn't really realize anything was said about Sayu!

And for the record, Risa was only denying the kiss to Ai-chan until the camera was off!!

And for the hentai comment, I think Risa likes it that way!

Damn, I've really lost my mind!
Oi, lollipopgirl, that was a low blow to Sayu!

poets, where are you going with that idea?! You come back here right this instance! *shakes fist at poets' retreating figure*

peti-chan · « **Reply #132 on:** July 04, 2008, 09:33:56 AM »

That clip is classic

Of course I treat it as a prove of TakaGaki love

Ai-chan expression and her firm refusal to Sayu is just priceless

I always wonder what would have happened if Risa hadn't moved away from Ai

but I was surprised to read about GakiSayu implications

I've never really focused on them

What's intrigues me though is SayuAi as Sayu is always the third one in Love&Peace moment trying to steal Ai-chan's kiss

A revenge for that refusal?

lollipopgirl · « **Reply #133 on:** July 05, 2008, 04:06:20 AM »

@ poets & strawb3rrykream: Oh come on, I adore Sayu but you can't deny that she is similar to Miki when it comes to get what she can from the other girls

She will always be pining for Kame-chan, but in the mean time, the gal has gotta have some fun

@peti-chan: In the Bonkyu concert Love & Peace performance for the solo shots when Ai ignored Sayu coz Gaki kissed her, Sayu's face was dejected and even her dancing just after that was as if she was really upset about not getting to give Ai a kiss coz she was 'distracted'... I find it hilarious that she was so upset

slasha · « **Reply #134 on:** July 05, 2008, 06:35:58 AM »

Since I started a fanfic here, I guess it's natural to start posting here

. Anyway do any of you guys get writer's block from time to time?

Estrea · « **Reply #135 on:** July 05, 2008, 06:38:37 AM »

^Oh yes, all the time. Bane of my life, I tell you.

Although in my case it's not really a lack of ideas, but that I have no idea where to start. It's so annoying when you have pages of story in your head and just can't get it out. The right words won't come lol.

strawb3rrykream · « **Reply #136 on:** July 05, 2008, 06:48:01 AM »

I usually an idea, attempt to write it and end up with something entirely different. I also have difficulty getting my ideas out. It's like there's so much there yet not enough to connect it all.

tru_harmony · « **Reply #137 on:** July 05, 2008, 06:59:01 AM »

what'r really bad is when you have the major events all plotted out and you can't make scenes to link the last one to the next... pacing becomes an issue there... is the story moving too quickly? or am i lagging behind, boring people to death?

... where is that writers' block? we should just burn the thing...

slasha · « **Reply #138 on:** July 05, 2008, 07:02:23 AM »

Sometimes I have another problem.Sometimes I don't know wether to post even when no one's commented.

tru_harmony · « **Reply #139 on:** July 05, 2008, 07:09:12 AM »

yeah... i had that problem before too... although (at least in my case) the comments shouldn't (but sometimes they do) affect the storyline and are just there to let you know how well other think you did, it's pretty lonely(in my case) not having read people's comments about your work (be it good or bad)...

now, since i'm busy, by the time i update, there are already comments so that's not so much of a crisis to me anymore...

but there are still times that i have that itch to update but choose not to since people haven't commented yet... i'm a sad and sick little puppy... just a puppy...