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Offline jenmoshka

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« Reply #160 on: February 11, 2007, 05:05:37 PM »
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« Reply #161 on: February 11, 2007, 05:06:23 PM »
-giggles at Eri-

Rika pulling the mood swings now, eh? :]

Well at least Yossie is a tad bit normal-er since the incident, so I'm glad to see her recovering from shock :]

Miki~! You know you want Yossie! You know you're better than Rika for her~! GO FOR IT~! <3

-returns hug- Final Fantasy rules, ne? :]
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« Reply #162 on: February 11, 2007, 06:29:26 PM »
The skin under my bandage is itchy beyond belief. Its 3:30am in the morning. I havent slept. Im starving (I ran outta cheese) I have to be at the airport in another 4 hours and I must admit Im a little cranky but for some WEIRD and OBSESSIVE reason I pull myself outta bed and I read chapter 16 knowing that you should have finished writing it by now. Lucky me - you have. Now on with the comment.

Weeeeell, Im glad we have some more game stuff going on. Footsies? Boo yeah. But Yossui as an accidentle target? Didnt see that coming. Sayumi? Didnt see that either (Lurkers yell: omfg, how dumb are you?) Yossui's talk to Eri after ...very leader like.

Ants in the pants and Miki's overly humourous remark made me laugh very loud. Repeatedly. For various reasons. Let's highlight one in particular shall we?

Miki is a fictional character. All her dialouge is written by the author of this fab-dab-u-lous story. So any thing Miki does or says is a result of the thoughts of Jenmoshka. Even all the pervy things. Which brings me to my summary - You are a perv deep down, I KNEW IT! HA!

In conclusion I have a question for you J.
Do you like cookies?
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« Reply #163 on: February 11, 2007, 09:01:30 PM »
Eri :ONxD:  But Eri and Sayumi... Why I think that they are weird couple XD

Any way, great chapter again. Can't wait next one.
And please, just call me MDY :)
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« Reply #164 on: February 11, 2007, 10:22:34 PM »
You story writers sure know how to distract me from the mounds of Chemistry work I have to do. Oh well...reading these are much more fun ^.^

Kameshige~  yay! A slight mention even makes me happy.

Poor Yossie....and poor Miki....and poor Rika. It seems I feel bad for everyone now XD Well maybe not so much Rika..

Miki needs to go for it. She knows shes hot. We know shes hot. Yossie knows shes hot. She should just JUMP her or something. Seriouslly lol. I loved her ants in the pants comment XD classssic
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« Reply #165 on: February 12, 2007, 02:47:37 AM »
I felt so bad for poor Makoto!  She just wanted some quality alone time with Yossui (who wouldn't)!

Miki's comment was a total win!  I can totally imagine a smirk on her face after saying something like that!  

Sorry for the short comment, it's been a long weekend (not quite Mikan-esque long, but long enough).  As always, I'm looking forward to the next chapter!  Keep up the great work!
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« Reply #166 on: February 12, 2007, 03:56:19 AM »
yay! another great chapter!!!

i can feel makoto's frustration on spending time alone with yossui!    :ONfrustrated:

“So, Yossui, ants in your pants tonight or were you just fantasizing about me in there?” Miki gave a low throaty laugh enjoying the development quite nicely, having spotted the terrified look of Eri sitting across from them.
i like that line!!! whahahaha    :ONhiakhiakhiak:

eri and sayu! i like that pair, too. hahaha    :ONhee:

and yes rika let erika help you forget yocchan. :ONglasses:
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« Reply #167 on: February 12, 2007, 05:04:51 AM »
Quote from: jenmoshka;305884
@  JFC  Hmmmm…Now I want to try and throw you off a bit…NAKED MONKEYS!!!...did that work?
I'm not sure...were you just propositioning me? :P


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Chapter Sixteen

Miki couldn’t help but throw out one of her infamous sarcastic comments in a less than a whispered voice.  

“So, Yossui, ants in your pants tonight or were you just fantasizing about me in there?” Miki gave a low throaty laugh enjoying the development quite nicely,

“Miki, not here, keep those comments to yourself.  Let’s just relax and have an enjoyable meal here.” With that, Yossui busied herself with her menu, ignoring the confused stares to her left and the still-terrified look across from her.
Dayum. Miki has a knack for taking advantage of situations like that. :lol:



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Miki~! You know you want Yossie! You know you're better than Rika for her~! GO FOR IT~! <3
That's exactly what I've been thinking. Especially with this part:
Quote from: jenmoshka;305887
Having already heard enough, Miki gave an audible “Feh!” and turned to leave, slamming the glass sliding door behind her thoroughly hoping to disrupt their moment.
:yep:


Quote from: Mikan;305935
You are a perv deep down, I KNEW IT! HA!

In conclusion I have a question for you J.
Do you like cookies?
She's one of us. :twisted:

Give her a cookie anyway. :D
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« Reply #168 on: February 12, 2007, 05:09:22 AM »
It seems you are going to portray Erika as an antagonist, at least in Miki's eyes. Speaking of Miki, her comment RULES!!! So you have the tortoise and the hare together in you fic. Nice. This is all turning out very nicely. Keep it up!!
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« Reply #169 on: February 12, 2007, 09:55:19 AM »
Damn, this fic is going to turn me into a YoMiki shipper :evil:

But I'll just blame it on you and the way you're letting this story evolve ... because, seriously? In the natural progress of this story, I foresee some BIG YoMiki moments ;)
And psst, if I'm right, why not also some Rika/Erika moments? :P

Also, mentioning of Eri/Sayu FTW!!!!! :heart:
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« Reply #170 on: February 12, 2007, 02:39:57 PM »
HAHAHA for a moment there I thought Eri liked Yossi as well... OR she was told to do so by Miki. I love how you portray Miki in ur fic, cute yet cool... begining to like Miki MORE thanks to you!
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« Reply #171 on: February 12, 2007, 07:13:01 PM »
NOOOOOO!!! Rika has to fight for Yossi's love again!!!!!
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« Reply #172 on: February 13, 2007, 11:40:20 PM »
Ah. Pervy people are so creative :). Very.

Eri with the crotch thing! HA! i really didn't see that coming, at first I thought I read it wrong, and that maybe it was Miki all along and tried blaming it on Eri (I mean, Miki did stand up and curse...)... but hahaha! I loved Yossui saying that Eri has bad aim... xD classic.

*where the hell are all my PTA stamps dammit?!*

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« Reply #173 on: February 14, 2007, 07:53:02 AM »
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« Reply #174 on: February 14, 2007, 07:54:44 AM »
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« Reply #175 on: February 14, 2007, 01:06:19 PM »
Wait, I get to comment first???? Yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Love the new chapter!!!! *rofl* at Mako, soooo cute ^^ And yay for Erika!!! Psst, she's actually a little older than Rika ^^
Also, Yossi stumbling over Yuko and Kei making out in the broom closet??? Muahahahaha, priceless :ONwahaha:

Damn, I need to get me some monkeys :: off to buy some ::
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« Reply #176 on: February 14, 2007, 09:45:23 PM »
The whole first part was all kinds of awesome!  Yuko ousting Yossui, reminding her about going for drinks, then going on to business as usual in the broom closet was just as I'd expect from her.  And Mako even got a grope in!  lol

Rika, Rika, Rika, what are we going to do with her?  All she's going to end up doing is hurting Erika too.  Then what will she have left?  Bad Rika, bad.

Happy Valentine's Day everyone!  Hope you all get some lovin'!
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« Reply #177 on: February 15, 2007, 12:49:08 AM »
Just like each new chapter is the smell of yakiniku yearning for my taste *___*;

I freaking love Yuko in your story too! Comedy relief for the win!

Rika seems to fall under un-escapable predicaments too o_O My gahh, I can understand her if she decides to go bitchy because she can't get out of them and is forced to go along. Erika that trouble maker xD Now I'm off pondering whether her pushing Rika into dilemmas is intentional, or simply oblivious love...

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« Reply #178 on: February 15, 2007, 02:52:15 AM »
o ooo Erika slept with Rika! this is my first time commenting on your story, I think..... but anways I really like this story, and this chapter
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« Reply #179 on: February 15, 2007, 03:18:53 AM »
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