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« Reply #60 on: March 23, 2007, 04:03:08 PM »
Guess what, I'm back after a long time of getting stuck with dumb schoolwork and I see your story updated! It's fate I tell you XD

What does Erika mean by "I didn’t say it was a ‘her’." *gasp* Just when I was going through in my head all the possible girls she could have a crush on. It has got to be a girl :ONfrustrated:

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« Reply #61 on: March 24, 2007, 12:52:47 AM »
Hum, is Erika's " I didn't say it was a 'her'" really just her deflecting Yui? Erika's crush...could it be Rika?! Meanwhile Rika's off in Abstinence-land...Maybe Yossie can reel Rika in, while Yui goes and seduces Erika.:ONxD:

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« Reply #62 on: March 24, 2007, 04:51:27 AM »
I'm so into this..i'll wait till you post more^^

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« Reply #63 on: March 24, 2007, 08:18:55 AM »
Awe, Erika and Yui made me laugh a lot. xD Kyootness~

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« Reply #64 on: March 24, 2007, 04:26:38 PM »
Erika and Yui? how did they come into the picture?? please don't say Erika likes Rika... sorryy but not a really big fan of the Rika x Erika pairing...
I'm guessing Goto called Miki so she won't meet Yossi for valentines... (I still think Goto is pretty scheming in this fic...)

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« Reply #65 on: April 04, 2007, 11:05:42 PM »

new here...wow...i can't believe i haven't come across this forum until now.Anyways, really like this fic it had me rofling every single chapter...nice job(sorry, i'm bad at commenting)

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« Reply #66 on: April 06, 2007, 09:37:48 AM »
PT. 8   


“Hmm, that would make sense.” Yui started to think about something again- something that could be fairly dangerous depending on the depth. “I do recall you on one instance saying that you liked nuts. For what reason, I don’t remember. But I do remember you sayi-“ Erika no longer listened to Yui’s tangent, but she watched at her roommate stood parallel from her with her forefinger to her chin as she looked above for her thoughts. “Oh I'm sorry, what was his name?” 

This snapped Erika back into reality after thinking of the multiple ways to strangle her friend. It was times like this that she appreciated staying in the schools’ self defense programs. 

“Wha- What the hell?! Peanuts! PEA – NUTS!” Erika made sure she emphasized her point. But realizing there after that there was no hope in fixing Yui’s vivid imagination, she decided to continue looking for kitchen appliances. Toning her voice down a bit, “No one said it was a ‘he’ either,” she let out a sigh of relief after finding the right trays to make chocolate. Maybe it was time that she learned her lesson not to tease with Yui; she'd probably believe her either way. 

“Mmm!” Yui started to do the next annoying gesture: whining. “Errriika! Stop being so complicated! Who is it?” Yui was dying to know who this mystery crush could be. She retorted to stomping at the ground and flailing her arms around to her sides…if it could be described as flailing. 

“Fine, fine.” Erika let out another tired sigh to relax herself before she continued. “It is a ‘she’ and she happens to be very special to me. Now before you comment on that shocking information, please, let’s gets started shall we?” Erika walked around the kitchen and rummaged through the cabinets for the basic ingredients. Under her breath, she managed to release some more thoughts. “God, I swear, we are so different. It’s a miracle I haven’t requested for a room change through these years.” 

“Oi, I heard that!" Yui snapped her head towards Erika's attention while searching for baking tubes. "And it’s only because you’re smart, and I suck at studying. I’m loud, you’re quiet. You’re a loner, I happen to enjoy people's company. We’re quite opposite, you see?”   

It was true. All too true. Erika was quite the loner before she met her now friend, Yui. She never liked being with too many people she was annoyed easily; she always stayed at the far end of the halls when she walked to class, she never started or participated in conversation in debates and answered back flatly. In fact, Yui was the only one that would try hard enough to surface the true Erika. Well as much as she could, of course. And through that hard work, Yui gained a friend that helped her with her weak points; and told her straight out what she needed when she was in a crisis, helping Yui build a stronger character.
 
"So how many are you planning on making?" 

"Hmm, well I was thinking an amount not too much, but enough to make her satisfied..." 

"Oh, like eight chocolates? How about we make two of each kind!" Still excited, she started to prepare her trays with caramel bases.

"Err, sure, if you say so." It was a good thing Erika had Yui who knew what she was doing. She fiddled with the bowl of melted cocoa before carefully coating the trays she selected.


After two arguments (from Erika not listening to Yui on how to make the chocolate she asked for help on), a kitchen that looked like a kid dragged his poop all over the wall, and a very satisfied duo later – the eight pieces of chocolate were finally finished.

“Oh thank goodness! It’s finally done.” Erika couldn’t help but grin proudly at what she had just worked her whole morning for.

“You know, I think if you stare at them too much, they might rot.” A sweet drop formed while Yui watched her friend gawk at the sweets she helped make. But there was something missing… something she needed to hear from Erika.

“Oh yeah. Thanks by the way.” She gave a quick wink over her shoulder before she disappeared to the next room with a pen in hand. It was something that Erika did often, and although it killed Yui that she didn’t have all her attention at times, she knew she wouldn’t have it any other way.

Bingo.

Yui tended to the kitchen and began wiping the chocolate residues on the counter while she left Erika to herself in the living room. Every so often, she would peek over to Erika’s side and see if she was ready to come out of her own world.

What is she doing over there?

Not being able to bear it much longer, “Oi, Erika! Whatchya doin’?”

“Ah, nothing, really. Just trying to make a small note to the girl.”

Erika listened intently, and after the response, she gave a nod then went back to sulking in the quiet. Erika had an expression of concentration, and for some reason, it startled Yui a bit.

“AH!” Erika screamed, which startled Yui while she her school bag. She looked over quickly, to find a contempt roommate… who also happened to be dressed for school (when did that happen?).

“You ready?” Yui watched as Erika swung her backpack over her shoulder and carried the big canvas she had been working on weeks before.

“Yep.” Erika took a step away from the door and remembered she forgot something crucial. “Ah, Yui… You mind holding the box of chocolates? I have to bring this canvas… and well, I’d ask you to hold it, but I’m afraid you might find some creative way to trip over your own feet again and ruin it.” She smiled at the blushing friend who remembered the last time Erika asked her for that favor, and feeling sorry, she didn’t complain carrying something simple as a wrapped box of chocolates.


Five

“I’m never going to know, am I?” Yui tried again, but in a happy voice to cover up her curiosity.

“Hahah, probably not this soon. But in time you will.”

“Well, what’s she like? Will I approve of her?” Yui puffed her cheeks and asked seriously as her friend let out a short laugh.

“Well… At first, she’s quite annoying- I didn’t even like her just by the image she had. But then, days went by, and we were in a lot of the same classes, and through there I got to know her better. She’s quite funny, and I didn’t believe that we had such similar interests…but our personalities are a total mix up. It’s sort of refreshing though, you know? Being so different, but it makes me happy. But then again… she’s so stubborn and always needs my help on different things,” Erika let out a chuckle as the list went on, “anyway, It’s never endin-“

“Hey! That’s sort of like me, isn’t it?” She smiled back at the laughing Erika as they paused only for a moment in their tracks.

Four

Yui knew that the answer she received wouldn’t be too surprising. That girl that Erika was describing sounded nothing like her! And there’s no way a friend could like another friend as more than mutual friendship.

“Heh, m…maybe, just a whole lot better.”

"What is this?" Yui managed to question under her breathe and through the ball that started to form in her throat, while Erika was just a step ahead.

It’s like that space I used to call mine is slowly being eaten up by a girl I don’t even know the name of…

Three


Yui played with the pretty little tag Erika tied onto the Valentines Day present. She tried her hardest to make it seem like she wasn’t about to sneak a peek at the name or message written inside. With her forefinger, she flicked at it back and forth, hoping it would conclude with the tag ‘accidentally’ opening by its self to Yui. She wouldn’t be able to accept knowing she invaded Erika’s privacy without permission. So instead, she counted the awkward minutes that passed as they lead themselves to the Art classroom.

Just who is this girl that she’s so good she has to be kept secret?

It was too late to answer that question again; they reached the destination where the two would part for the morning.

Two


“Alright, I’m here. Thanks for all your help Yui.” Erika walked into the opened room for the meeting that was soon to start.

Yui kept focused on her thoughts and stared down at her shoes, “Mmm, no problem.” It was barely audible, and it made no difference that Erika was already four steps into the room.

Suddenly, a spark went off in Yui’s mind and brought her back to reality. “Ah Erika! You forgot your…!” she called out to her friend who was already halfway inside the Art room.

Every second that passed seemed to play as if in slow motion from then on. In response to Yui’s call, Erika did her signature Yui-kill. She turned to Yui with a sheepish smile accompanied by a sheepish shrug, only to be bothered by a fellow Art Club member.

One

Is this… Is this just an illusion? Have I created it with al l this confusion?


Yui waited for the last member to enter right pass her, where she was glued to the floor in front of the classroom entrance. Upon hearing the connection of the door to its frame, Yui shook from being startled, but she kept her focus on the box in her hands. Half of this was created by her, the other by Erika- together.

Concluding that it would be a rather big scene if she barged into a meeting of all of Erika’s friends, and realizing it would do no good for her to stay glued to one spot; Yui decided to walk back to the dorms.
Slowly walking back, another conclusion formed. She had to open it. She had to look inside. Through a sort of insane way, Erika owed it to her to look. She kept all these secrets from her, right? It was only right that she peeped even without consent. Right?

“You” the tag read. That was it, no name, no sure answer. Just one word that left behind even more questions was written on the tag.

Not being able to take it anymore, she tore at the neatly wrapped cloth on the box, and opened it to find something inscribed on the lid. It was very beautiful, written neatly and with such grace that it almost looked like calligraphy, like art.

“When I said ‘I love you’, I meant it.”

These nine words were enough to stop Yui from her direction.
It was enough to send a wave full of memories crashing back into play.
It was enough to make her realize just how naïve she had been.
It was more than enough for her to turn around and run through the halls she had already passed twice in a matter of minutes, making it a third time. She ignored the people she shouldered through that gave her annoyed glares to get back to where she started, she even ignored the awkward stares as she ran by.

Yui thought of all the times she was teased by Erika. All those times Erika apologized with those same three words written in the middle of the box she held tightly. All those times when she took it as just an apology said to a friend, and noting more- nothing more so it didn’t bring burning and questioning feelings.

Too many tears were built up inside of Yui’s eyes. Her stubbornness had forced her not to blink so she wouldn’t feel the tears rolling down her face; so she wouldn’t have to admit that she was crying like she used to, like she used to before she met Erika and before when she was weak.

Yui stopped short at the door that divided her from Erika. Those too many tears finally fell, still without a single blink to release them. She wanted so badly to confront Erika, to beat at her chest, to shake her madly, and yell at the top of her lungs and ask the questions that had the answers to stop her madness. But she didn’t.

Instead, she stared into the door window and admired the teenage girl who stood in front of the crowd. She had soft features, and a bright smile, and her hair complimented the shape of her face. A girl who smiled proudly at her artwork of a box of chocolates on a kitchen counter as she explained its significance to her.



The beginning half of this chapter was probably the most worked on part of the story. And it still seems like crap to me. I hope the ending made up for it though ^_^'
Oh yeah, blame me losing my thumdrive, working/cleaning my ass off, getting sick, and S.H.E. for not getting the chapter up any sooner ¬_¬;
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« Reply #67 on: April 06, 2007, 10:00:22 AM »
rndm And Yui! Haha, I wanted to make a sweet story, so I figured these two ^_^

JFC xD How...how do you come up with these ideas?! Anyway, keep them up, they're amusing!

Blizz First off, love the avatar :D. And yeah, me and my best friend are like that when we see each other, haha. But a lot of girls are like that when they are around friends!
Dude you are totally reading my mind! I was thinking of it a few days before I read your comment... and well... because I just half gave it away... YES, I am making a cat fight. On who, and about what is not decided. Any suggestions?

hamz It is fate! It really i- *gets back to reality*. I know, school work is a freaking mind killer. Hehe, well I guess now you know it is a girl...well at least I hope I made it clear enough that it was a girl XD

orange Did you get the answer to your question fine? ^_^; Wow, I like your plans! Sly!

nkcac Hello there! Thanks for the comment, hope to see you around here more.

Velvet I hate you. I really do. More of those stupid scenarios of those two keep  giving me ideas headaches! >o<

stefy Erika and Yui are just an out of nowhere filler. I hate fillers myself most of the time, but I thought I should make one for the hell of my stalling :D Haha don't worry, I'm all about the simple and basic (and lovely) pairings of YoCharMi. Gotou is schemy, just how much, I'm not too sure yet.

~Psychotic~o_o~ A new reader! I'm so happy to have your first post  :heart: And your comments aren't bad, they made me happy. I'm glad my comedic self was slightly inputed in the chapters and had an affect (I suck at writing comedies). Hope to see you around here more!


Thanks for the read everyone! I jsut wanted to give a slight scare on that he/she thing. It worked though, haha.


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« Reply #68 on: April 06, 2007, 01:19:37 PM »
yay~ new chapter... but Yui and Erika again??? haha but glad its not Rika that Erika likes *phew*... its YUI~ I might not like the Erika x Rika pairing but Erika x Yui... their a cute pair. And what a hmm... cowardly but sweet way of confessing to Yui. Lastly... wheres Yossi!! haha theres very little appearance of her huh? Btw hope your feeling better nowz and... why blame S.H.E. as well?
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« Reply #69 on: April 06, 2007, 06:11:01 PM »
You know, for Erika and Yui not exactly being my favorites, I really liked this chapter.  It was really sweet, like romantic movie sweet.  And honestly, I really hate that in movies; it's so cliched and you can see it coming a mile away.  But I really, really liked it here.  I'll sound stupid saying this, but the sentiments and everything just felt more real to me.  I don't know if it's because it actually caught me by surprise or if it's just because it's in written form.  Either way though, it worked.  Great job and great chapter! 

Now, that being said, let's get back to Yossui, Miki, Rika, and Maki!  Oh, yes, can't forget stalker-Ai!  I can't wait to see what you have planned for them.  Especially now that there is definately a cat fight coming!  Rawr!  I'd have to say don't go with the stereotypical girl fight, ie. pulling hair, bitch slapping, etc.  Make it a good one!  Especially if Miki is in it.  You know she won't go easy on anyone! 

Oh, and thanks about the ava.  I can't take credit though, I just copied it from somewhere.

Can't wait for the next one!  Keep up the great work, Slave!

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« Reply #70 on: April 07, 2007, 01:39:52 AM »
JFC xD How...how do you come up with these ideas?! Anyway, keep them up, they're amusing!
You'd be surprised what kind of crap I pull outta my ass.


As for this latest part...GYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHH!!!   :nya: :nya: :nya:

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« Reply #71 on: April 07, 2007, 03:47:01 AM »
What're you talking about? This whole chapter was good!  :)
:heart: shy Erika! And the addition of a countdown was neat!

When I read the beginning of the sentence starting with 'Yui tended to the kitchen and began wiping the chocolate residues...' in my mind, I ended it with 'all over herself.' I had to read the sentence over...XD

:phew!:

But I liked the fact that this wasn't pervy! This Erika x Yui is just so sweet and adorable.  :) Erika's sheepish grin was too cute, and Yui's jealousy over the mystery person...ah!

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'a kitchen that looked like a kid dragged his poop all over the wall'
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I can't wait for the next installment!

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« Reply #72 on: April 07, 2007, 07:39:28 AM »
I suspected it wouldn't be Rika, but I certainly didn't expect Erika to have a thing for Yui... But somehow, it makes sense. It's like a sweeter version of their Sukeban Deka interaction.  ;D

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« Reply #73 on: April 08, 2007, 01:34:23 PM »
I kinda guess the girl Erika liked was Yui somewhere in the middle of the chapter. And the whole thing was soooo sweet. It even made my eyes a little misty. These two seem to be together always from what I see during the random backstage segments. I wouldn’t be surprised if there was something between them  :D And there’s no way this chapter is anything but good so give yourself a pat on the back  ;)

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« Reply #74 on: April 08, 2007, 06:54:20 PM »
ah.....so it was yui that erika liked...wow was i slow...now back to maki, yossie, miki,rika and ai...or more fillers...they're all good though.Can't wait to see what's going to happen to maki and ai...

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« Reply #75 on: April 11, 2007, 01:59:45 AM »
*fangirlie squeal* I was like, 'What? Wait! What?' So awesome!

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« Reply #76 on: April 11, 2007, 02:12:14 AM »
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“When I said ‘I love you’, I meant it.”

wow, that made me go "ahhh how sweet"

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« Reply #77 on: April 21, 2007, 07:40:10 AM »
stefy Haha, yeah it was just PT of the filler. That's over now (I think...). Ah, yes, Yossui needs more attention, I know I know. This should make up for that. OH, S.H.E. was the beginning of these late writing, but mostly it was personal/home stuff keeping me.

Blizz Thanks, I'm glad you liked it and thanks for the support! Hell, even I know it would be obvious and cliched, but I figured that I needed a break from writing, and I had a nice idea. now I regret taking such a damn long time to move along with the story T____T;
Of course, more of the main characters~ OH AND HELLLz yeah, this whole week has been preparation and ideas of an ideal cat fight. and it won't be just one BIG one, there'll be some small ones, but the main even is worthy enough for a CAT FIGHT title (or at least I hope XD)

JFC that's true, I come up with pretty out-there stuff while reading other people's fics. Thanks ^-^!

orange Thanks so much for the lovely comment! It's nice to see what was liked and such ;D. And nah, no pervy-like stuff yet. It's too early for that...

Amarghetta hello there~ Well it's good to know that someone didn't see it coming! thanks for the comment :)

hamzAwww, some emotion! i like :D thanks. It wasn't as half assed. Secretly, I'm a hard working half ass person, if that makes any sense at all.

psychotic Nope, that is the last of that filler arc. Of course there'll be more "filler" stuff a long the way, but I'll make it worth the while. It probably be more comedic though, instead of sentimental. Maki and Ai along with this secret couple I havent revealed yet seem to have me interested in giving more plots than YoRika! XDD

rndm I'm glad I got a good reaction from the ErikaYui fan~! thanks for the comment ^_^

Ferrar Thanks for the comment! nice to know my sentimental side can go out somewhere, haha.




You REAAAALLLY have to forgive me if this chapter seems so crappy. It's over half pass 3 am, I've been craving to write, but timings always wrong. So i was to the point where I forced myself to write (I've waited this long and already I got lost in my notes, so the longer the wait, the harder it is for me too) until it flowed easier.
I'll most likely regret posting this later =_=. And if I do, I will most likely edit it. So here it is, raw. (maybe. XD)

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« Reply #78 on: April 21, 2007, 07:51:39 AM »
PT. 9


Normally, she hated cacophonous places, but being that half of her school time was spent in the locker room, sound was all around her. There was chatter all around amongst her peers, girls already in the shower (although they hadn’t even started their Physical Education class yet…), the underclassmen running around and basking in their youth (first years, tsk.), and her best friend going on and on about another girl; to whom was no one in particular to her.

“…You know what I mean?” Gotou looked at her with her eyebrows furrowed as if she were still oblivious to how much her tomboyish friend spaces out when she rants about herself. Will she ever learn? Probably not, but it wasn’t going to change her anyhow.

“Huh?” At first she looked completely lost, but then started nodding when remembering she was supposed to give a crap, or at least pretend to, “Oh yeah, totally.” Anything to discontinue the talk about the same topic everyday: girls. Giving she still had a moment to spare before Gotou started up again, she cleared her throat and began, “So uh… about that picture, did you get it for me?” She didn’t want to sound to interested, truthfully she wasn’t, but she was a girl of honor and wouldn’t want to disappoint the administrators nor anyone who admired her; even if Miki’s admiration was far from her liking.

“What did I tell you about that? Let me take care if it Yo-chan” she brushed her friend off with reassurance and put on the last of her ‘super wonder bra’ (you can never be too safe now and days with the rough athletics), “like I said, I’m working on it. You should have it in no time, guaranteed.” She gave her the Girl’s Scout promise and raised her right hand; to witch was resulted with a doubting laugh from the other.

“Hah, now it makes me wonder what kind of stupid crap you’re gonna get yourself into while getting me something so simple.” Hitomi started to shake her head, “It should be easy enough since we have easy access to school files, but nooo, you have to do it the hard way.”

“Why of course!” Finally fully dressed in the right underwear now, she tied her shirt to the back of her neck and stood with her legs shoulder width, and her fists to her hips, “If it’s not done the Ultra Super Sexy Gotou-way, then it’s not done at all.” Gotou’s face quickly met the dirty gym clothes of one of her old team mates, and P.E. classmates. Being stupid gets you in enough trouble, mixing over-narcissistic tendencies added more.

Hitomi turned to the direction of which the dirty articles of clothing came from and gladly thanked the girl responsible for shutting her friend up. She turned back and smirked at Gotou who looked like she was about to hurl from the foul stench, but Hitomi ignored that. Seeing as how she had been dressed for a while now, and Gotou took her normal sweet time, she decided to aim for another conversation.

“So anyway…” before continuing she let out a giggle as she watched her roommate horrified after picking off what looked like to be unwashed underwear during an extremely humid day. “Tell me, how are you and my little ‘sister’ doing?” She didn’t really had a sister, but her neighbor was close enough, and being that she happened to be the same gender as her other dear friend, Gotou, so it would be unlikely for her not to be hit on.

Gotou put on a nice smirk, “Oh you mean Tanaka? Well, we’re doing great actually. I think she might be more serious than I am, don’t get me wrong, I’m serious too, but we’re definitely hitting it off more than I expected. Who knows, she might be a keeper, for a while at least ” a smirk formed as she thought of the past during school breaks- the days when she would sneak around behind her best friend’s back and hit on the one forbidden girl. It took quite a lot of convincing and constant abuse from Yo-chan (which only Gotou received obviously) to finally have their opposing side to let them continue their actions.

“Hah, you, be serious? Never; that was a given. And of course she’d think you two were on the serious level! Just how many times have you almost committed adultery now?”

Again, the half dressed narcissist became dramatic, “Ah yes, only a few more years and I can have my way with her…” She let out a sigh as she thought of what the future had to bring between her and her little Reina.

A shiver pulsed through Hitomi’s body as the visuals started kicking in. Picturing the little, sweet, and innocent girl next door- so quiet and somewhat lonely- with your best friend, didn’t mix so well. Especially when that little girl happened to be the younger sister you never had. “Tell me, why again do you think it’s worth being a pedophile?” She watched as her friend began come up with ways to make her reasons actually worth it.

“You know, I think I’m so offended, I don’t have an answer for that, hmph.” And like that, the conversation ended and Gotou began to ignore her question.

Realizing how much that would sore any person dating someone under age, especially if they were actually serious about it, she pleaded to get her attention again, “Okay, okay, but seriously, why the thing for underdeveloped girls?” Alright, maybe she wasn’t so serious about it, but how often are you able to pick on your friend who usually has this end of the string?

Knowing that this teasing would probably never cease, she answered the question anyway, “I don’t know! There’s… there’s just something about them; so pure and innocent, it gets me all the time. Ah the youth, it truly is the best.”

Nodding, “Uh huh… So basically you’re saying anything that you weren’t?”

The expected reaction never came, but that was only because Gotou wasn’t exactly the longest shining bulb. With a triumphed nod, “Precisely my friend.”

Disappointed with the ending of her little fun, Hitomi wiped the smirk off her face and replaced it with a smug expression, meaning she was no longer amused. Letting out a tired sigh, “Ah, whatever you nut. Let’s just get this day over with already.”

The day was just beginning and already so much had been fulfilled, yet the day couldn’t get any longer.



I know, I know, it's a cheap chapter! Sorry! I promise to add something more fulfilling that actually deserves a reaction ASAP. If it's at a sooner date, it probably won't be so long, unless I decide to combine two different scene (making it longer, and making me delay it a bit). Whatever happens, happens. I just have to finish 15 more slides for my World history project before Monday is all =____=

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Re: Going once, Going twice, SOLD!
« Reply #79 on: April 21, 2007, 09:50:39 PM »
yay..first comment...for once...anyways
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“If it’s not done the Ultra Super Sexy Gotou-way, then it’s not done at all.”
..hahahaha..Btw, don't worry this chapter wasnt that bad, take your time. Whoo...more comedic chapters on the way...and good luck on your history project..hope you finish soon!

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