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Title: Lies - chapter 16 (MendolxMajisuka) 15/11/2011
Post by: yourstruly on January 30, 2011, 08:26:12 AM
Yeah, I'm totally inspired to write but I'm totally not a good writer....
This is my first fanfic ever.................
Hopefully, you'll enjoy this.......
So this is going to be a MendolxMajisuka fanfic.........
BTW the title has no relation to the no3b single Lie

As you can all tell, I'm really unsure about this fanfic...I feel really iffy about posting this...................


Chapter 1

Six months ago, I died. No no, I’m not a ghost. I’ve been given a second chance to change and make amends. It all started back when I got beat up and pushed down the stairs. I thought I was a goner. Well, not just me. My best friend and my family all thought I died in the emergency room. Only my family knew the truth that I’m still alive. Scratch that, only my grandma knows. She’s been taking care of me since my parents divorced and my younger sister was left with my dad. This time, it’s my turn to take care of her.

It took a whole month to recover. During that month, I got my grandma hold a fake funeral. I hid and saw it all, my family yearning my death. Mostly importantly, my best friend’s face full of sorrow and eventually became emotionless. My dear friend whose smile, and laughter seemed lost and never to be found. I felt bad. I really did. But this is for the best. Hopefully we will one day meet again…maybe…maybe not…who knows.

After I recovered, I went in search for a job that paid the most in the shortest time. I auditioned 39 times in 3 months to become an idol, but failed every single one of them. There, I met my long over-dued  comrades Asahi and Hinata. We all failed, but lucky for us, we got scouted by Kamonohatsu Entertainment Agency. The ones who got scouted were me and Asahi, while Hinata joined shortly after our debut. Our agency manager Saeko and secretary Marilyn were like parents to us. When I mean parents, I mean bad parents that will leave us to die and kick us while we’re down. I GUESS they’re not that bad but seriously, shachou is kind of getting onto my nerves. Shachou and Marilyn are L’s that grosses me out so much. Hopefully, after I’m done saving money up, I can get rid of them. But I don’t want to leave Asahi and Hinata. By the way, I still haven’t told anyone except shachou why I’m so in need of money, not even Asahi or Hinata. My grandma needs to do a heart surgery and I need the money for the surgery. So I’m borrowing money from shachou to pay for the operation which means I’m indebted to her…hopefully I don’t have to do anything I don’t want to for that favor.

Did I tell you that when we debuted, we debuted as a male band? Our group name is Persona, I’m Kai, Asahi is Riku and Hinata is Kuu. We just started two months ago with little to no success but we are doing all we can to become the next big hit. Since we weren’t that popular, we had lots of free time on our hands, so shachou is letting us continue school. Asahi and Hinata are going to the same school since Hinata has no friends in her old school, she transferred to Asahi’s school…what was the name…Majisuka Gakuen…I think that’s the name…I’m not exactly sure since I myself is doing home schooling. I can go at my own pace and finish faster. If I’m lucky, by the time I graduate I would have repaid shachou and be free so I can follow my dream. My dream is to become a nurse and be able to take care of others, especially my grandma. In my spare time I start studying to become a nurse. I bought a book, I actually bought two, and I wonder if she’s still going to do it…

-Present time-

“Nami, are you sure you don’t want to join us?” Asahi asked as she put on her black sailor uniform with a red neckerchief.

“Yeah, stop being a loner and join us.” Hinata agreed as she finishes packing her bag.

“Nah you guys go on and have fun. Besides, I don’t want to commute an hour a day to get there and back when I can use that hour more efficiently.” Nami declined, as she started to go downstairs to eat breakfast.

“Ah! We’re going to be late. Asahi hurry up! We don’t have time for breakfast. I don’t want to be late.” Hinata runs downstairs to put on her shoes.

“Wait up.” Asahi said as she quickly followed Hinata. “Bye Nami”

“Don’t miss us too much” Hinata yelled as she left running to the station.

“Of course I won’t, don’t worry about it.” Nami was once again left alone in a house by herself much like her childhood as her grandma worked so that she could fend for her grandchild.

-On the train-

“Hmm…maybe it’s a good thing that she’s not going to school with us…” Hinata stated as she turned to Asahi, who was taking out her red jacket with silver lines on the side of the arms. “Do you think if Nami were to find out what we do in school she’ll leave us?”

“Nah, we’re her friends.” Asahi said reassuringly to a doubtful Hinata.

“I mean, we even lied to her about our names...and who we really are…”

“…Even though Nami looks cool and sometimes heartless, she really does care about us.” Asahi noticed that Hinata’s doubtful expression soften.

“You’re right, what would Nami do without me.”

‘Nami would be able to get a piece of mind that’s for one and full meals everyday.’ Asahi thought as she suddenly remembered, “We left our lunches at home!”

“If we go back and get it, then I won’t be able to record who are late to school today.” Hinata explained as she took out her cell phone and started to text Nami.

Nami, we left our lunches at home can you bring it to school to us? I know you miss us already so here’s a chance for you to see us!

“Nami is totally going to ignore you. You do know that right?” Asahi got off of the train with Hinata beside her.

“Hey, you said that Nami wasn’t heartless.” Hinata said as her cell phone buzzed

Idiot. Fine, I’ll bring it to the entrance of the school by lunch okay?

“Yes!” Exclaimed Hinata.

‘Nami must be in a good mood today.’ Asahi started to drift away from Hinata.

“I’ll see you later than okay?” Asahi whispered to Hinata, as Hinata gave a small nod.

-Front gates-

“Hey, you guys hurry up, you have 30 seconds until you’re late for school.” As she put on her arm band labeling herself as student council president.

“Who are you?” Wota asked as she scanned the girl in front of her from head to toe.

“I’m Hina…I meant Minegishi Minami the new and current student body president” Minegishi said as she was looking at her watch.

‘Opps, I almost told them my fake name, Hinata. Looks like they don’t care’ Minegishi thought as she felt relieved.

“Never seen you around” Akicha walked right in front of Minegishi and stopped to look at her watch. “We’re late now, so what are you going to do about it?”

Unagi, Bungy, and Mukuchi surrounded Minegishi on all sides.

“Whatever, let’s go team Hormone. I’m hungry, let’s eat.” Wota walked past and just brushed off Minegishi. With Akicha, Unagi, Bungy and Mukuchi following her.

“I’m telling on you.” Minegishi yelled across the field.

-Rappapa Headquarters-

‘Is it just me or is there a remarkable resemblance between Maeda’s best friend Minami and Nami. But that’s not possible right? Nami’s not a ghost. Maybe they’re long lost twins?!?!?! Ah, whatever, that’s not that important. It sucks that we have to repeat another year…but it is funny how Yuko got the diploma but still has to repeat like the rest of us since we skipped too much last year. Maybe it’s because the principal wanted to fulfill Yuko’s last wishes...’ Torigoya thought as she felt that something is amiss.

“Yuko-sempai is still not back?” Torigoya who was slightly pouting, with her jacket half on and half off, asked as she played with her hair.

“No, not yet. Though she is miraculously getting better. ” Sado confirmed.

‘I wonder when Yuko’s coming back. I miss her.’ Torigoya started drifting off into her own world.

“I’m so bored” Shibuya cried as she saw two figures walking on the field towards the school and tightens her grip.

“Shibuya, after you lost your fight with Maeda, you still wanna try?” Black asked as she smirked.

“Shut up.” Shibuya gave Black a deathly glare.

“Shibuya, Yuko-san ordered us to protect Maeda, not to kill her.” Sado took out her toy and started to balance it.

“Whatever…” Shibuya leaves the room fuming that she can’t get her revenge so she vented her anger by punching and kicking all the other students in the hallway.

-Classroom-

Noisy yankee high-school girls playing mahjong and eating while ignoring what the teacher said and kept doing their own things. While one student, Maeda Atsuko, whom was also not paying attention to the teacher and was reading her own textbook.

 “So we’ll continue from last day’s math class, does anyone remember what we did last day?” The teacher looked at Wota and smiled.

“I don’t know and I don’t care.” Wota said as she caught the teacher’s eyes looking at her.

“But but you need to know this if you want to graduate” exclaimed the teacher

Wota just glared at him.

“Okay…self study period” the teacher left crying on the inside and questioning himself, ‘why am I teaching at a school that has no respect for teachers?’

-On the road to Majisuka Gakuen-

Nami was listening to her ipod when she thought to herself.

‘Maybe I should try out a different school. But if I do that, then Asahi and Hinata will know that I lied to them about my real self since I’ll have to apply with my real identity. Sigh…how can I tell them now that my real name is Takahashi Minami. They’ll think that I never really treated them as comrades.’ Nami scratched that thought as she approached the school with a lunchbox in each hand.

-School Gates-

“They’re so slow”

“Sorry for making you wait.” Asahi apologized as she grabbed her lunch from Nami.

“Where’s Hinata?” Nami looks around the field to see if Hinata was running over since she should be starving by now.

“Um…I don’t know.” Asahi lied as she looked away into a distance to see if anyone was watching them.

“Well, I still have work to do so can you give Hinata her lunch?”

“NO…I mean, you know Hinata always runs off somewhere and the school is pretty big, it’ll take me my whole lunch to find her.” Asahi declined as she started running back. “Thanks Nami.”

“ASAHI.” Nami yelled across the field earning people in class to look down to where all the commotion was at.

-Classroom-

‘How come that person down there has a familiar aura around her?’ Maeda looks out the window to see a person…a girl…by the school gates with Torigoya from her running away and back into the school.

‘Torigoya sure can run fast when she needs to.’ Maeda thought to herself.

“ASAHI.” The mysterious girl shouted.

“Her voice…it sounds like…Minami” Maeda whispers to herself as she looked at the mysterious girl, intrigued by the fact that her memories of Minami were awaken. She then used her right hand to grab her left wrist to find her two hair-ties. One was blue with an M on it while the other one was an orange one with an A on it.

Maeda who was still staring at the mysterious girl saw yet another student from her school running out towards the gate and stopped right in front of the mysterious girl.

-Front gate-

“Sorry for making you wait, the teacher wanted me to help him.” Hinata said as she was panting and catching her breath.

“You helping other people? I’m impressed. Most of the time, if you don’t help out that’s already a huge favor done for everyone. So who’s the stupid teacher?” Nami looked at Hinata amused that she was actually a role model student.

“Hey, that’s not nice. I’m different in front of other people.” Hinata pouted as she grabbed her lunch from Nami.

Nami gave Hinata a weird look and began to comment, “What’s up with you and Asahi? Are you guys in a hurry or something?”

“Um…we both have club meetings at lunch time…wellgottagobyenami.” Hinata said as she ran back into the school.

“Ass. Didn’t even say a word of thanks.” Nami left unappreciated.

-Classroom-

“…Minami…” Maeda whispered to herself.

TBC?

PS:  :theking <--i like this icon and wanted to include it somehow >=)
Title: Re: Lies
Post by: ShibuyaDokiDoki on January 30, 2011, 08:48:12 AM
I like it~! please do update :D
Title: Re: Lies
Post by: mangobanana15 on January 30, 2011, 09:11:44 AM
i like this story alot!! glad you shared it with us! :twothumbs
the way you put the 2 shows together was very well done  :)
lol i hope that you are a slight Takaachan fan cause i wouldn't mind seeing them in this story  :roll: but it's fine if you're not
Update soon!!   :D
Title: Re: Lies
Post by: Keichan ^_^ on January 30, 2011, 09:16:36 AM
the way you put the 2 shows together was very well done  :)
lol i hope that you are a slight Takaachan fan cause i wouldn't mind seeing them in this story  :roll: but it's fine if you're not
Update soon!!   :D
Agreed on all three statements above! Especially the Update soon!!  bit ^_^!!
Title: Re: Lies
Post by: dark-atrox on January 30, 2011, 11:21:13 AM

the way you put the 2 shows together was very well done  :)


hai, hai...totally agree!  :twothumbs
Title: Re: Lies
Post by: bou-j525 on January 30, 2011, 04:24:31 PM
I totally thought "Mendol&Majisuka, really?!"
And I have to agree, this is a really nice idea. I want an update as soon as possible!  :cow:
Title: Re: Lies
Post by: alexiel17 on January 30, 2011, 05:10:57 PM
Wow!! yourstruly san, thanks soo much for the story  :mon XD: I was like  :mon fyeah: when reading it :]
Combining 2 shows.... Wow, so amazing  :mon determined:
I'm really soo curious for the next chapter :] Hope you'll update this soon :]  :mon inluv:

And really, this is your first?!  :mon closeup:  Wow  :shocked you're cool :] (I wish I too, could write such a good fic even if it's my first...  :mon exhaust: hehehe...  :grin:)

I really want you to pls. continue this fic of yours, pls.. :mon pray2: :] I'm soo excited about it :]  :mon cute:
Thanks again for this fic... yourstruly san pls.. update as soon as you can  :on GJ: :]
Title: Re: Lies
Post by: yourstruly on January 31, 2011, 02:58:29 AM
Thank you so much guys, I really appreciate all the comments and support

lol i hope that you are a slight Takaachan fan cause i wouldn't mind seeing them in this story  :roll: but it's fine if you're not
Don't worry, I am a Takaacchan fan. Not very big on the Kai/NamiXRay  :P


Before you jump the gun and start reading Chapter 2, there are things that should be pointed out that I forgot to do when I posted Chapter 1, but as people say, "Better late than never." so,
1. I took out the whole yakuza is trying to find Nami and Asahi since Asahi cant go to school if there were yakuza's looking for her
2. For the next couple chapters, I'm basically restating the storyline of Mendol so everyone is up to pace and it gets kinda repetitive, I know but it's needed to introduce Ray and Katsuyuki
3. I'm skipping some of the other scenes in Mendol so I can speed up the retelling process
4. Some of the Mendol scenes are not in the same timeline as the Mendol drama
5. I'm doing a crappy job of retelling (or so I think) cause it's boring
6. For each of the retelling chapters, I'm trying to include some stuff about Majisuka side too so it wont get that dull
7. Please enjoy  :theking



Chapter 2

-Home-

“We’re home.” Asahi and Hinata opened the door and took off their shoes and slipped into slippers.

“Welcome back.” Nami shouted from upstairs. “Come up and get ready, shachou is picking us up soon. We have to finish recording our first CD.”

“But I’m hungry.” Hinata said weakly. She felt drained of all energy since she didn’t have breakfast, only a small lunch, and all that transportation was taking a toll on her mental well-being.

“Eat there, shachou is going to get mad at you if you keep lazing around and not getting dressed.” Asahi left Hinata and began going up stairs to start changing.

“Fineeeeeeee…” Hinata slowly gets up and walks upstairs when the door opens.

“Are you guys ready yet?” Shachou asked with a murderous intent. As Hinata ran like the wind to their room and started dressing in a break-neck speed.

“We’ll be done really soon.” Asahi reassured shachou. As Nami walked down the stairs in her causal disguise first earning a nod from shachou, then came Asahi and finally Hinata.

“Let’s go.”

-Recording studio-

 “These 3 kids are Persona. Please take care of them.” Shachou said as she introduced us the recording staff.

“Osu. Riku desu.”

“Osu. Kai desu.”

“Osu. Kuu desu.”

“Yoroshikuonegaishimasu.” As all three of us said at once.

“Yoroshiku. Let’s not waste time, time is money. Recording studios are expensive so don’t waste your time and leave.” The tech bluntly stated.

“What? Son-of-a-bi”

“Okay. We’ll start right now.” Riku said as he cut Kai off from starting a fight on their first recording day.

-Inside the recording room-

“Okay we’re going to start from the beginning of 3 seconds. Riku starts first. Then Kai. And don’t mess up.” The tech explained. “Give me a moment to get the machine running.”

“Riku, why’d you stop me?” Kai asked with an annoyed face.

“We’re new, we need all the support we can get and I don’t want a fight to break out on our first day.” Riku explained.

“I guess you’re right…Kuu, what’s wrong you haven’t been talking.” Kai said as he poked Kuu lightly on the arm.

“I fell asleep.” Kuu said as he yawned.

“We’re starting now.” The tech spoke up.

…..3 hours later…..

“That’s it for today. And I guess you did a good job for a newbie.” The tech said as he started to pack up.

“We have a special guest here to see you today.” Shachou said.

A man in purple suit and a woman decked out in pure white clothes with her sunglasses on walked in.

“Hey. I’m the president of Monkey Pro. Just call me Sarukawa shachou. And beside me, we have the number 1 selling diva Ray.” As sarukawa shachou starts dusting off Ray like she was a trophy.

“Stop, you’re getting dust all over my clothes.” As Ray starts to fan herself as she told her shachou to stop.

“Woah! I’m a huge fan, if it’s ok, can I please shake your hand Ray-san?” Asked Riku as he wiped the sweat of his hands and onto the side of his pants.

Janitor comes in.

“I’m a huge fan. I’m so happy that I can meet you today.” As the janitor takes and shakes Ray’s hand.

“Who are you?” Ray asked with a disgusted look on her face as if she just touched crap.

“I’m your biggest fan. I hope to one day share a stage and sing a duet with you.” The janitor excitedly said.

“If I’m top grade caviar then you would be shark feces. How can caviar and feces stand on the same stage? And I don’t do duets.” Ray said with a bitchy face.

“Hey, apologize to him right now. Even if you don’t like him, he’s still your fan. What you said was uncalled for.”

“Stop Kai, and apologize to Ray.” Riku got a caught of Kai and Kai flung him to the floor and hit the table which caused a domino effect that tipped the glass of water which then spilled on him. Kuu then helped Riku up and tried to dry Riku’s hair with his sleeve.

Kai grabbed Ray’s wrists and said, “Even if you have a pretty face, with that horrible personality like yours, you’ll be alone for the rest of your life.”

Ray storms out as Sarukawa shachou calls Ray back.

“Our princess has a temper.” Sarukawa shachou said as he left.

-Kamonohashi Office-

“Nami, why did you piss Ray off?” Asahi asked.

Shachou comes in with Marilyn with a whip in her hands.

“Marilyn.” Shachou said as she snapped her fingers. Marilyn then held Nami down onto the coach with her ass facing shachou.

“Apologize to Ray and never ever do that again.” Shachou said as she violently whips Nami.

“ITE.”

“Don’t you ever forget this moment. If you ever do it again, it will be 10 times worse than this.”

-Upstairs in their room-

Nami was laying on her front as she relives the pressure from her ass.

“Serves you right for saying that to Ray.” Asahi said.

“She deserved that scolding.”

“Well, whatever. Just don’t do it again.” Asahi said as she watches Hinata sneak up and poke Nami’s ass.

“ITE. Don’t touch it you idiot.” Nami exclaimed while rubbing her sore ass.

“You’re no fun.” Hinata pouted.

“You try getting your ass whipped and then tell me that’s fun.”

“Alright you two lets not break into a fight now, Hinata go to bed, we have school tomorrow.” Asahi starts making her way to her bed.

“Alright then.”

“Yeah alright, leave me in pain while you guys sleep.” Nami sarcastically said, as she noticed Hinata and Asahi are already in deep sleep.

‘They must be really tired from school. Maybe I should cut them some slack sometimes.’ Nami thought. But stopped herself as she looked at Hinata. ‘or maybe not’

-Next day-

“Hinata, stop drawing on Nami’s face and get ready for school.” Asahi chuckled as she saw Hinata drawing eyes on Nami’s eyelids and lines connecting her eyebrows to make an “awake” Nami face but uni-browed.

“Aw alright but let me take a picture first.” Hinata pouted when Asahi stopped her from drawing poop on Nami’s face. She then whips out her cell phone and takes a picture of a sound asleep Nami.

“Remind me never to let my guard down around you.” Asahi said as she started downstairs.

“Nah, that wouldn’t be much fun now would it.” Hinata pointed out as she followed Asahi downstairs.

Hinata and Asahi left, not without slamming the front door which woke up Nami.

Nami then slowly gets up and goes to the washroom. As she saw her own face…

“HINATA!!!!!!” screamed Nami.

“Nami’s awake now.” Hinata said as she pointed out the obvious. Hinata kept walking, feeling calm since she was almost a block away from the office. And knowing Nami, she wouldn’t chase me that far if she just woke up since she didn’t shave yet.

‘Looks like there’s going to be a funeral tomorrow.’ Asahi thought as they made their way to the trains.

-Trains-

As Hinata and Asahi got on the trains, they segregated apart with one by each side of the door.

Hinata takes out her phone and mails to Asahi,

Here’s this mornings pic of Nami. *insert pic of Nami*I think its an improvement.

Asahi chuckled as she read the mail and replies,

Well don’t let Nami know that you took a pic. I don’t know how to save you from her.

Hinata then replied,

Tell me that earlier, I just sent “This is an improvement” and the pic to Nami.

Asahi facepalms as she thought ‘typical Hinata’.

-School- -Rappapa Headquarters-

Maeda slowly walks into the club room with Shibuya glaring at her.

“What brings you here Maeda? You never come up here to the club room.” Sado asked as she looked at Shibuya to get her to calm down.

“…Is Torigoya-san here?” Maeda asked as Sado had a blank expression on her face wondering why Maeda would want Torigoya for.

“She’s currently walking up the north stairs of the 2nd school building by classroom 3-1.” Shibuya said as she rolled her eyes and continued. ”She’s not in the club room as you can well see with your glasses on…which in fact I don’t know why you need them since you take them off when you fight. Since she’s not here then why the hell would we know where Torigoya is?” Shibuya said earning a glare from Sado.

“Shibuya enough. Yuko-san said that-“ as Sado spoke, Shibuya interrupted.

“Said that we’re suppose to protect her, but she never said we that we can’t have a little fun talking to each other.” Shibuya retaliated

“Ummm…it’s ok if you guys don’t know. I’ll just look for her myself.” Maeda then excused herself as she left the room.

“Shibuya, be nice. She’s Rappapa’s future president so stop being so rude.”

“Whatever.” Shibuya left displeased with that fact.

‘ARGH, pisses me off so much that I even Sado is scared of her.’

TBC........

PS: Sorry for the long points that is kinda needed to be pointed out before reading.
PS2: I might not be able to update until end of the week since midterms are coming up....again...........................................

That is all.
Thank you for reading my rambling, I appreciate it.
Title: Re: Lies
Post by: mangobanana15 on January 31, 2011, 03:41:50 AM
Thanks for updating!

yesss you're a Takaachan fan! i'm not much of a Nami/Ray fan either  XD

lol how is Miichan gonna survive the wrath of Takamina after what she did? :lol:

I don't mind all the retelling chapters since i know waiting's gonna be worth it  :D

Update sooon!
Title: Re: Lies
Post by: ShibuyaDokiDoki on January 31, 2011, 04:45:26 AM
Omg a Takacchan fan! Yay! :D i'm not much of a Nami/kai x Ray fan but they are kind of cute... sometimes LOL good job! :D

seems like this is going to be interesting... please do update soon! XD
Title: Re: Lies
Post by: aoi_sora on January 31, 2011, 06:21:44 AM
New story.....
MendolXmajisuka!!!!!
Great!
Thanks!!!
 :cow: :cow:
 :bow: :bow:
Title: Re: Lies
Post by: RenaChii on January 31, 2011, 09:44:49 AM
 :k-great: Want more~!!  :luvuluvu:

 :tntrm: Please update~!!  :kneelbow:
Title: Re: Lies
Post by: yourstruly on February 03, 2011, 09:08:21 AM

yesss you're a Takaachan fan! i'm not much of a Nami/Ray fan either  XD
It's not like I dislike/hate NamixRay, it's just that I prefer Takaachan a lot more

Thank you for all the comments, I really appreciate it...It motivates me to finish all my other stuff faster so I can write more 

Sorry it took so long, I was proof reading it........

Enjoy?  :theking


Chapter 3

-Rooftop-

‘The sky’s so blue…wonder what Yuko is doing’ As Torigoya starts dosing off, Maeda comes upstairs.

“Torigoya-san, I’m sorry to bother you but I have a question to ask you. Is right now a good time?” Maeda asked ever so politely to the absent-minded Torigoya.

“Hmm, sure. Right now is fine, not like I have anything better to do.” Torigoya replied as she stared out to the school gates.

“Um, yesterday, by chance I saw you by the school gates with a person. I was wondering-“ as Maeda was about to finish her sentence, Torigoya erupted with energy which Maeda had never seen before. Usually, Torigoya was absent-minded and didn’t care about her surroundings.

“Yuko-san! Sorry Maeda, I’ll talk to you later.” Torigoya left the rooftop and headed towards the school gates where Yuko started walking towards the school.

-Gates-

“Hmm, Majisuka sure became quiet around here. Where’s all the Yankees fighting?” Yuko spoke aloud. As she saw a figure quickly approaching her.

‘Sado? No, it’s Torigoya.’ Thought Yuko. As she stopped, their eye’s met for the first time in a long time.

“O-ha.” Yuko gave her usual energetic greeting as Torigoya approached her.

“Yuko-san, how are you feeling?” Torigoya asked as she slightly blushed at the long eye-contact with her club president.

“I feel like I can take down 100 Yabakune’s right now.” Yuko replied with enthusiasm to show that she was better than ever.

“No! I mean, you just got out of the hospital. I bet the others are dying to see you.” Torigoya said as she thought that she might get in trouble for saying no to Yuko’s enthusiastic reply. She couldn’t let herself see Yuko get hurt again.

“Fine, I’ll leave that for later since you are right, I haven’t seen those guys in a while. Have they been taking care of Maeda?” Yuko asked as they both started to make their way towards the school again.

“Which meaning of taking care of Maeda are you asking?” Torigoya asked air-headedly.

“Obviously not beating her up. Since I got better, it’s my turn to have fun with her.” Yuko said as she smiled her famous smile showing her dimple. Unobvious to her surroundings as to all the Yankees in the school were all either by the window or on the field now.

“Welcome back Yuko-senpai.” Every yankee except Maeda, the Four queens, and Sado in the school shouted at the same time. All happy that the top of their school was back.

“I’m home.” Yuko shouted. Yuko seriously thought of Majisuka Gakuen as her home, and that each and every yankee in the school were her sister. It was a huge family for her to take care of but she had friends to help her.

As Maeda made her way down to greet the president, the yankee’s parted a like the river of Nile. Giving way to Maeda. As they thought the fight of the century would occur in just a few moments away.

“Konnichi wa, Yuko-san.” Maeda politely said.

“That’s the first thing you want to say to me when I come back? Majisuka? Well that’s alright, we have a lot of catching up to do.” Yuko said as she started walking towards Maeda.

“It’s going to happen any moment now.” Wota commented as the rest of Team Hormone watched the scene unroll in front of them, not blinking as to not miss even a single detail of the history that was about to be made in front of them. Who would come out victorious? Who would become the top? Would it stay the same? Or was history of Majisuka going to be rewritten today?

…silence… no one dared to interrupt or intervene in this….

“IT’S TIME FOR CLASS NOW. GET TO IT.” The principal shouted. As all the Yankee’s started to part from their regular groups and slowly, oh so slowly work their way back to the classroom to make sure that if Yuko and Maeda were to start anything, they would be the first to know and see.

“AHAHAHA, sorry. I forgot I wasn’t supposed to disturb them from their classes.” Yuko said as she looked at the principal.

“No problem. I bet you have things to do so run off now. And don’t start anything at school.” The principal warned.

“I’ll try not to.” Yuko smiled as she answered the principal. In which the principal gave her a suspecting look that says I don’t believe you but just don’t do it in front of me.

-Rappapa clubroom-

Yuko throws away the sign that says ‘Reserved for the President’ sign away from her chair which was covered by a golden color cloth. And sat on her rightful throne.

“Where’s Maeda?” Yuko asked as she cozy-ed up in her chair.

“In class. She attends classes regularly unlike the rest of us.” Sado replied

“Good-two shoes.” Shibuya commented.

“Well, I’m bored. Amuse me.” Yuko commanded.

“Since I don’t want to repeat another year, I’m just going to class now.” As Sado escaped from the task of ‘amusing’ the president.

“I have some unfinished business to attend to.” Shibuya said as she left behind Sado.

And Black, as quietly as she came into the club room, quietly left.

“That leaves you and me.” Yuko said as she watched Torigoya.



-Kamonohashi Office-

“She’s in a daze. What happened in school today?” Nami asked as she felt intrigued by Asahi’s air-headed side.

“She’s been like that since we met up to go home together. Smiling to herself like a crazy person.” Hinata said as she started waving her hands up in the air in front of Asahi’s face to get Asahi’s attention

“When did I become buddy buddy with you again?” Nami starts to crack her knuckles.

“Wait, Asahi’s case is more important than beating me up right now.” Hinata started to panic.

“I beg the differ.” Nami said as she put Hinata into a head lock.

“What have you three been doing? Get ready, you’re meeting Sunny Music’s director, Katsuyuki.” Saeko said as she motioned towards the three. “Don’t you dare piss him off. As you see, me and Marilyn can’t go watch you three since you are going into a club with other men. Be on your best behavior, no drinking and go win the favor of the director. If you do not do all three things listed, there will be DIRE CONSEQUENCES.”  Saeko said with a threatening voice. As she made a whipping action to emphasize the consequence.

“O-SU.” All three replied.

-Private club room-

“Let’s have some fun. Come on, loosen up.” Katsuyuki said as he started to grope a nearby girl hostess.

“Sorry, um it’s our first time. And we’re still under aged so we can’t drink.” Riku said as the leader of the group, he had to put up a responsible image. As he kindly rejected Katsuyuki, some of the girl hostess heard and squealed.

“KAWAII.” As the girl hostesses moved towards the three man group to take a look at new blood.

“Don’t touch me.” Kai said as he plainly rejected the girls. This in turn makes the girls want to touch him more just to tease him.

“Ahhh.” Kuu just screamed trying to run away from all those pairs of hands trying to catch the cutie-boy.

“All men for themselves.” Riku dodged left and right to get out of their private room. While pushing Kai and Kuu in front of him when a hostesses tried to jump him. As to use Kai and Kuu as a shield.

-Club lounge-

After dodging and excusing themselves out of the room, Kai and Kuu sat at the lounge area of the club.

“Men are the worse.” Kai said as he started to sip a transparent drink which he thought was water…

‘Tasty water.’ Thought Kai.

“Argh, why are we doing this again?” Kuu asked as drank the transparent drink thinking that it’s as well water.

“Because Shachou will kill us if we don’t do it. By the way, where’s Riku?” Kai asked as he started to feel a little strange.

-Rooftop-

“Sighh…”

“Oh Riku, what are you doing here?” Katsuyuki asked as he just got through the door leading to the rooftop.

“Ah, Katsuyuki-san. I’m getting some fresh air.” Riku replied ever so politely as to not offend Katsuyuki.

“Me too.” As he started to walk over to Riku’s side to see the night view, he tripped forward with his hands holding the closest possible thing to balance himself, Riku’s “solid chest”.

“Wow, you’re surprisingly solid.” Katsuyuki commented as he patted Riku’s chest.

“ECCHI.” Riku screamed as he pushed Katsuyuki on the floor and ran away.

“Ha?” Katsuyuki wondered what was up with that as he held up his hands to motion a groping action.

-Club private room-

Riku entered to tell Kai and Kuu that it might be best to leave now. But as he entered, he noticed that Kai and Kuu looked flushed and having fun with the female hostesses…too much fun.

“Riku, come here, you have to try this. It’s sooo good.” As Kai held up a clear liquid.

“Yeah, let loose and try it.” Kuu commented as he started to grind against a hostess.

“No thank you. We really should be going now.” Riku said as he started to excuse himself and his other two bandmates.

Kai and Kuu got a hold of Riku as one of the hostess started pouring the drink into Riku’s mouth.

TBC....

Hopefully, I can get one chapter done by this weekend...or else you guys won't get one till end of next week.... you guys can go ahead and blame my prof's for all the homework assignments, quizzes and midterms coming up for that.

PS: I don't know if I'm ever going to add the little KojiYuu scene....for now, I'll leave that up to your imagination.

Thanks for reading my rambling again. 
Title: Re: Lies
Post by: RenaChii on February 03, 2011, 08:49:48 PM
Why~?  :gyaaah: Please add the KojiYuu scene too~!  :mon cute: PLEASE~!  :kneelbow:  :mon pray2:

Title: Re: Lies
Post by: mangobanana15 on February 04, 2011, 12:50:59 AM
Thanks for updating!!! :D

lol i don't hate Nami/Ray either but Takaachan totally rules! :)

You should totally add the KojiYuu Scene but that's totally up to you

I wonder if Aachan and Yuko will have their fight soon or they aren't gonna fight at all

man when mendol drink alcohol all things go bad LOL  :lol:

Update soon!!!
Title: Re: Lies
Post by: bou-j525 on February 04, 2011, 03:57:09 AM
Seriously wondering when Maeda will have time to talk about "Nami" to Torigoya  XD
And I want that KojiYuu scene too.... if it was really a KojiYuu scene XD
I also want a fight between Yuko and Maeda.... And I'm wondering what will happen with Takamina... well in fact I have thousand questions  :grin:
Title: Re: Lies
Post by: yourstruly on February 06, 2011, 11:23:58 PM
Seriously wondering when Maeda will have time to talk about "Nami" to Torigoya  XD
And I want that KojiYuu scene too.... if it was really a KojiYuu scene XD
I also want a fight between Yuko and Maeda.... And I'm wondering what will happen with Takamina... well in fact I have thousand questions  :grin:
Maeda and Torigoya will talk soon? Maybe? I have no clue...I don't plan that far ahead but it will happen....eventually....
KojiYuu scene....yes...as you read this chapter....you'll get it.....
I really don't know who would win if Yuko and Maeda fights.....I'm still debating on who should win.....
Takamina will be Takamina =P
I have a thousand answers but none of which answers your questions  :theking


This chapter felt longer when I was writing this on Microsoft Word....and then, it looks short now =(

Anyways, enjoy =)

Chapter 4

-Next morning-

“Ahhh….my head is throbbing” Nami said as she held her head with her hands.

“Hinata feels like the world is spinning around and around….haha it literally feels like the world is revolving around me…oww” Hinata said as she closed her eyes to rest so the world would stop revolving around her but deep down inside she knows that even if she closed her eyes, the world truly does revolve around her….only in her head.

“We need to get up now…if shachou finds out-” Asahi said as she was cut off by Saeko and Marilyn.

“Good morning” said the two freighting figures as the three girls jumped up and got onto their feet.

“GOOD MORNING!” the three said as pain jolted through their brains causing them to cry in agony.

“UH” Nami cried out

“bleh….” Hinata blurted out as she covered her mouth with her hands.

“We’ll get ready as soon as possible” Asahi said to try and cover things up.

“We’re not stupid…we can smell your stench a mile away…you guys reek of alcohol when I specifically said you were not allowed. Breaking my rules ay…then do you know what gets broken next?” Saeko smiled as a grim line appeared on her face while her hand was held out as Marilyn put the handle of the whip in her hand.

‘Shit’ the three girls thought at the same time as the whip was being handed to shachou

“Attention!” Marilyn shouted as the three girls who were slouching before stood up straight

“Turn!” the three girls turned such that their asses faced shachou and Marilyn.

“Stick your butts out!” and the girls bent down. As they got what was coming for them for breaking the rules.

-Recording studio-

 “Sanbyou mitsumeru dake de.” Riku started.

“Otoshi- bleh” Kai covers his mouth with his hands

“Kai, are you ok?” Riku asked as he nervously looks over back and forth from Kai and Shachou who had her handy whip out.

“Kai, common, Shachou’s going to whip you again.” Kuu added.

“I know but..BLEH…” Kai runs out of the recording studio to get some air.

-Rooftop-

“Argh, I can’t take this anymore, my head is hurting so much.” Kai said to himself as he was unaware of the person softly walking towards him.

“A hangover?” Ray asked. She started to curse herself for asking such an obvious question.

“Ray…..san?” Kai shocked from seeing the third to last person in the world.

‘At least it’s not shachou or…her.’ Thought Kai. ‘I’d rather deal with shachou’s abuses then to see…her.’

“What are you doing here?” Kai asked as he paused for a moment and started again while feeling really nervous about what he was going to say next, “I mean, I would like to apologize about the thing last time. I’m really sorry. I was just saying what was on my mind, I mean…um..”

Kai paused as he was scrambling on what he should say next. While Ray was looking at him with an intrigued look on her face.

As Kai starts to explain himself, Ray walked forward which shocked Kai, to stop talking and to see what the diva was going to do next.

‘Is she going to slap me?’ Kai thought.

Kai’s thought was the exact opposite of Ray's action as Ray leans in and kisses him on the lips.

‘…’ no thought processes was needed for Kai to choose his next reaction, as if in automatic gear he pushed Ray away.

“What are you doing?” Kai asked

Ray just smiled and kissed him again. Kai, who was thoroughly shocked did nothing.

“A SCOOP” Shouted the blonde paparazzo after he took a picture and ran away.

‘SHIT!’ Kai thought as he saw Kuu shocked from the exchange he had with Ray and Riku running after the paparazzo.

“Why did you do that?” Kai asked as he pushed away Ray and tripped himself in the process and landed on his ass.

“We’ve been photographed.” Ray said with an amused voice.

“Why do you not care that you’ve been photographed? You’re Japan’s number one diva. This scandal could hurt you.” Kai said, not amused that Ray didn’t care for her own career. This turn of events might kill his own career not that he had much to start with. Now Kai can never repay shachou.

“It’s ok. I want the world to know that I belong to Kai…” Ray blushed as she started to finish her sentence, “and Kai belongs to me.”

“WHAT?” that was the only thing Kai thought of and so he said it aloud.

“I’m really happy about what you said to me yesterday. No one dares to lecture me since I’m really popular. But I know you only said those things to me because you really care for me and love me.”

“You’ve got things all wrong. It was the truth…” Kai stated bluntly but stopped as he saw the heartbroken diva’s face.

“You don’t love me?”

‘WHAT AM I GOING TO DO?!?!?! If I make Ray unhappy I’m going to get another whipping….’ Kai thought as he tried to juggle himself out of this predicament

“I meant…we should…take things slow….and I mean really really slow…” Kai regretted his words since this gave Ray hope. “We…don’t know each other at all…..”

“It’s ok since we’re dating now. IM SO HAPPY” Ray said as she started to move towards Kai again and placed her lips against his.

“WHAT THE HELL?” Kuu shouted as he entered the love scene from a bad romantic drama and stole the main male actor and booked it down the stairs and into an empty room.

-Empty room-

“WHAT THE HELL?!?!?” as the two males shouted at the same time.

“What took you so long to save me?” Kai asked.

“I was in shock” Kuu replied truthfully.

“Who do you think was in more shock?”

“Me of course, I actually thought you liked it.” Kuu said as he smirked.

“I HATE L’S. I DETEST THEM.” Kai shouted to state his point

“It’s not really L if Ray thinks your male.” Kuu retaliated.

“SHUT UP”

-The chase-

As Jiro ran for his life, Riku was on hot pursuit to take him down with shachou a block behind her.

‘I need to stop him….I don’t want my career to end before it actually started.’ Riku’s head was full of ‘I have to stop him now…but how can I do it?....maybe….just a little bit?’

-Flashback-

(-Clubroom-)

“That leaves you and me, Torigoya.” Yuko pointed out. “So how will you amuse me?”

“Um...I don’t have any games on my phone…maybe I can go find you something to do? What do you want to do?” Torigoya asked since if Yuko is bored, she’d go looking for fights and Torigoya really don’t want to see her hurt again…

“You can amuse me…with your body.” Yuko smirked.

‘…’ Torigoya just stood there shocked about what Yuko said to her. As Yuko starts closing the drapes of the room.

Yuko walked up to Torigoya and engulfed her into an embrace…and whispered softly. “Now, no one can see us from the outside and you can’t get distracted by looking out the window like always…you will pay full attention to me and only me.”

Torigoya’s heart skipped a beat when she heard Yuko’s soft whispering into her ear. A tingling sensation for her, as her heart started to race as they met eye to eye.

“I’m going to train your body and mind…” Yuko’s grin grew larger.

Torigoya just gulped.

“I’m going to teach you new things that you won’t even imagine…I’m going to train you until you can’t take it anymore…I’m going to teach you how to control your inner Torigoya.” Yuko said, as she noticed a blush appearing on Torigoya’s face. “What were you thinking of?”

“…I thought you were going to um..teach me how to fight like you.” Torigoya tried to cover herself.

“Mhmm…Torigoya, you can let it out now.”

“Yuko-san, are you sure? It’s really unstable.” Torigoya afraid that she’d hurt her precious president.

“Let’s do it.”

“Okay then…….” Torigoya’s head shook violently as her inner self started to overtake her. She broke off the embrace as her hand reached for Yuko’s head to see her deepest fear.

‘I can’t lose her…not to anyone or to herself…I can’t lose you, Torigoya.’ Torigoya read Yuko’s deepest fear as she tried to shake off her second personality, but it was just too strong.

“I saw it.”

“Torigoya, are you in there? You can’t let her overpower you. One of these days, if you can’t control her, then you can never come back and I’ll never see the true you again.” Yuko tried to get the normal Torigoya back.

“Ahhh…My head hurts.” Torigoya starts screeching in pain.

‘I can’t let Yuko down, I can’t bear to see her sad, and most of all, I can’t bear to leave her and never see her again…I can do this, I can overcome myself.’ As Torigoya stood still her minds contemplating to fight for the body.

“Nyan-nyan!.” Yuko shouted.

“Tadaima. Yuko-san.” Normal Torigoya said.

“Nyan-nyan?”  Yuko asked.

“Hai, I’m back…”

-End of Flashback-

‘I can do this, I’ve done this with Yuko and I can control myself’ Riku had to take charge now or else he’ll be too late to stop the paparazzo.

As Jiro turned into a back alley, Riku jumped him.

Riku took hold of Jiro’s head with one hand.

“I saw it.” Riku said as he pulled Jiro closer and whispered into his ears. Then dropped him.

Shachou just got into the back alley as she saw Jiro cowering on the floor. And took the camera and deleted the pictures and took out the memory card and cracked it in two so they the paparazzo can’t even try to recover any data.

Riku shock off his second personality as shachou came over to give Riku a pat on the back for a job well done.

As Riku and shachou left, Riku warned the paparazzo.

“Don’t ever try that again or you know what will happen.”

- Kamonohashi Office-

Kai started to throw a fit.

“I quit, I HATE HATE HATE L’s” Kai took off his wig and threw it down. His, I mean her long hair came down and reminded everyone that he was indeed a she. But with her personality it was really hard to tell even with the long hair.

“Oh come on Nami, it can’t be that bad.” Riku said as he tried to comfort Nami

“Yeah, think about it, Japan’s number one diva at your beck and call. How cool is that.” Kuu said not noticing the glare Nami was giving him.

Shachou and Marilyn came in and started to announce,

“Our first single has been decided..” Marilyn said leaving the more important announcement to shachou.

“You three will be photographed by Kichin.”

“The famous erotic magazine photographer Kichin?!?” as Nami restated unsure if she heard right.

Shachou and Marilyn nodded. As the three squealed in delight.

“Wait, Nami, I thought you said you were going to quit.” Riku stated

“Being photographed by Kichin is a separated matter.” Kai replied with enthusiasm.

“Yes, you three will be photographed by Kichin. The cover will be the three of you, in nude.”

‘…’ was running in the minds of the three man band.

“NUDE?!?!” as the three shouted.

“Yes and the set will be at Majisuka Gakuen.” Marilyn said as she continued. “The principal already agreed as shachou and her are apparently really good friends.” Marilyn said as she was green with jealously.

“Majisuka?” Riku and Kuu said at the same time. Shocked and not knowing if they can hide their identities from Nami and their school mates any longer.


TBC..

I know everyone wants a confrontation between Takamina/Kai/Nami and Maeda....I wonder if it will happen soon =P
I guess everyone will have to wait until I finish the next chapter...don't kill me
Title: Re: Lies
Post by: bou-j525 on February 07, 2011, 02:32:03 AM
LOL Thank for your... very clear answers...  :huhuh


I have a thousand answers but none of which answers your questions  :theking

CRUEL.  :shocked

This chapter felt longer when I was writing this on Microsoft Word....and then, it looks short now =(

LOL I totally know how you feel  XD

Thank for the update :D Since you have not a single answer to my questions, I'll just say... I want a meeting between Takamina/Kai/Nami (seriously wondering how she can survive with so many identities  :smhid) and Maeda!!!
But hey... maybe they will just go there when no one will be at school anyway so XD I mean, knowing Saeko, she doesn't want their real identity to be discover so it'd be logic... OMG if you do that, I'll hate you XD
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 4)
Post by: mangobanana15 on February 07, 2011, 09:22:54 AM
Thanks for update!

woahhh Haruna can control her inner self now? that should be pretty useful to keep people quiet

awww Yuko's biggest fear is losing Harunaa  :)

I agree with bou-j525 Takamina and Aachan should really meet but i wonder how Aachan would react with seeing her dead best friend  :?
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 4)
Post by: RenaChii on February 07, 2011, 01:04:22 PM
As expected~  :tntrm:

I LOVE KOJIYUU MOMENT THE BEST~!!  :luvuluvu:

Thanks~!!  :k-great:  :on GJ:

 :onioncheer: Please update more KojiYuu~ yourstruly-san~!!  :tama-apeshit:   :kneelbow:
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 4)
Post by: vizardqool on February 07, 2011, 01:24:27 PM
Really Nice... Please keep update  :twothumbs  :twothumbs  :twothumbs
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 4)
Post by: yourstruly on February 13, 2011, 03:05:17 AM
LOL Thank for your... very clear answers...  :huhuh
CRUEL.  :shocked
Thank for the update :D Since you have not a single answer to my questions, I'll just say... I want a meeting between Takamina/Kai/Nami (seriously wondering how she can survive with so many identities  :smhid) and Maeda!!!
But hey... maybe they will just go there when no one will be at school anyway so XD I mean, knowing Saeko, she doesn't want their real identity to be discover so it'd be logic... OMG if you do that, I'll hate you XD
I'm the best at answering questions ;)
Why would I not be cruel? Take this example for thought, It took me like a week to finish this chapter and feels pretty short to me...maybe it's just the forum but you get the point.
If you think about it Riku/Asahi/Torigoya and Kuu/Hinata/Minegishi also have a lot of identities, so you cant just say Kai has lots of identities, it's unfair to Hinata...I'm gonna get Hinata to chase after you....(not in real life...)
What if I don't want a meeting between Takamina/Kai/Nami and Maeda? Did you think of that?
I think I've made you hate me enough with all my answers to whatever you say already....a little more hate wouldn't make a difference....


Thanks for reading my fanfic guys



Chapter 5

-The next day-

Just as the sun was starting to rise, the group Persona was wide awake. Thoughts are all running though their heads.

‘Oh my god, I’m going to be photographed by Kichin.’ As Nami thought to herself as a smile formed on her face, which turned to a frown at second thought. ‘but…NUDE? How are we going to pull that off?’

‘Shit shit shit shit shit. What am I going to do? What if Nami finds out that we’ve lied to her….more importantly, how am I going to explain this to Yuko?’ Asahi thought as she started to make up explanations in her head. ‘Shachou kidnapped me and forced me to do it….no that doesn’t work…Yuko would fight shachou…though, I would like to find out who’d win but Yuko might get hurt…’ Asahi thought as she totally didn't care for the well being of Shachou.

‘What’s for breakfast? I didn’t eat much dinner last night since I was too excited.’ Thought Hinata. ‘Maybe we’ll get a luxurious breakfast from Marilyn to pump us up for the photo shoot.’

*LOUD STOMACH GROWL*   

“That wasn’t me…” Hinata said, fully aware that the other two were already awake.

The three friends started laughing together. All negative thoughts were thrown out of the other two. As they got up.

“Come on, let’s get ready and then we’ll eat early today.” Asahi said

“But my bed’s warm while its cold if I get out of bed.” Hinata replied, unwilling to get out into the cold.

“Ok then you can stay there and I’ll eat your share of breakfast too.” Said Nami, as to motivate Hinata out of bed.

Hinata got up and ran for the washroom while shouting, “Last one to get ready does dishes today.”

Asahi and Nami just shook their heads in unison…

-Downstairs-

After they all got changed into their Persona outfits for the photo shoot, they all went downstairs together to make breakfast and eat it. As they approached the dining room, they saw a huge spread of gourmet food laid on the dining table.

“Ohayou” Marilyn said with enthusiasm

“Ohayou” the 3 person band said together.

“Did you make all this yourself?” Riku asked as he saw Kuu and Kai pigging out on the breakfast spread already.

“Yeah, since it’s your first photo shoot, I thought I should make something special for you guys.” Marilyn said with a smile across her face.

“This is really good. Thank you for your hard work.” Riku really appreciates what Marilyn does to make them feel happy.

“Yeah, this is the best. Thanks” Kai said as he started choking since he was speaking with his mouth full.

“…” Kuu just won’t stop pigging out.

“Excuse me for a moment..” Riku excused himself and went to the washroom.

-Toilet-

‘I should tell Yuko that I’m not going to school today…what’s my reason?’ Riku thought as he paced himself in the toilet. ‘Yosh, let’s go with the oldest excuse in the book.’

Yuko-san, I’m not feeling too well today…you know the time of the month, my cramps are so bad today, I’m not going to school today… sorry…

‘That should do it.’ Riku thought as he sent the message to Yuko.

-Dining room-

“You guys ate everything?” Riku impressed with their appetite yet pissed off that they ate his share too.

“Yup…yummy in my tummy.” Kuu said as he rubbed his tummy to emphasize his point.

“So good….” Kai agreed.

“Riku, don’t worry I made you some onigiri.” Marilyn saw the face Riku was giving off…PISSED OFF look.

After Riku heard Marilyn say that she left him some food, his tension decreased.

“Are you boys ready yet?” Shachou asked

“Yes ma’am.” The boys answered.

“Then lets hop to it. The car is waiting outside for us.”

-Car-

‘Shit shit shit. I feel like my funeral is coming soon……I don’t know if I can hide this from Yuko… she’s so perspective sometimes.’ Riku thought as he stared outside and into space. ‘I should stop hanging out with Nami, I’m swearing so much more….’

‘NUDE?!?!? I can’t get this out of my head.’ Kai’s thought was all jumbled together

‘I wonder if Riku is going to eat his onigiri’s’ Kuu thought as he wanted something to snack on.

-Majisuka Front Gates-

“Welcome to my school.” The school president said as she welcomed the band and managers. “Please feel free to use all of the facilities that my school can offer. Don’t hesitate to ask.” 

“Thank you very much for having us here and lending your school to us, Yuriko.” Shachou thanked her long time friend while Marilyn was giving Yuriko a glare.

“Think nothing of it, Saeko.”

“Well, we should get going or we’ll be here all day.” Marilyn said as she stood between the two friends to block the two friends from looking at each other any longer.

“Yes, well Marilyn is right.” Riku agreed as he wanted to get this done as soon as possible so that they can leave as soon as possible.

“Class is already in session so if you could, please be quiet in the hallways.” Yuriko warned.

“Yes yes, please lead the way.” Shachou and the group all started walking towards the school.

-Classroom-

“Look, are those 3 people over there…GUYS?” Random yankee asked.

“…THEY’RE PERSONA….they just debuted as a group! I’m already a fan of them even though they haven’t released their first single yet.” Wota said excitedly

‘…’ None of the members in Hormone ever saw Wota like this…They were surprised and shocked to the point where they just stayed motionless and they all had their mouths opened such that it looked like =O

“I mean..I’m not a big fan or anything but they seem pretty cool…” Wota tried to cover herself. “LET’S EAT, the meat will get burned.”

-3rd year Hallway-

“So the music room that you will be using is down this hallway. This hallway leads to all the 3rd year classrooms.” Yuriko pointed out.

‘Yeah yeah yeah I know I know’ Kuu thought…can we walk faster, I’m getting bored.

As they made their way, Kai heard a sight conversation and blanked out…

-Classroom-

“Do you know where Atsu-nee is?” Daruma asked

“Atsuko is usually not this late.” Gakuran asked Team Hormone. As she started to feel nervous

‘What if the Yabakune’s jumped her…I should have walked her to school today..of all the days I sleep in, it had to be the one where Atsuko is late.’ Gakuran started beating herself inside.

“Maeda-san? If you two of all people don’t know then how would we know?” Wota answered, feeling less embarrassed from the little excitement of seeing Persona.

“Maeda’s mom just got back, so they’re eating breakfast together right now.” Sado answered as she reads her message that Maeda sent her.

“Maeda will come a little later. We have some business to do later.” Yuko added to reassure Mr. Loverboy a.k.a. Gakuran.

-Hallway-

‘Atsu-nee?....Atsuko?….Maeda-san?.........Maeda Atsuko!’ A light switch flicked on in Kai’s head. ‘SHIT! OH MY GOD. IT CAN’T BE TRUE. IT JUST CAN’T BE TRUE. OF ALL THE DIFFERENT SCHOOLS IN TOKYO, WHY’D IT HAVE TO BE IN THE SAME ONE AS HER!!!’ Kai started to panic. ‘Maybe the person they are talking about just shares the same name as her…’ reassuring himself that it is not possible that she’s in this school…

TBC.....


PS: I thought about it, and I GUESS I don't want people to hate me....I GUESS..... LOL...I'm a horrible person  :theking
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 4)
Post by: bou-j525 on February 13, 2011, 04:15:45 AM
I'm gonna get Hinata to chase after you....(not in real life...)

You have no idea how scare I am right now  :yawn: I mean... it's Hinata you know XD (Ohhh how I feel I will regret saying this...)

What if I don't want a meeting between Takamina/Kai/Nami and Maeda? Did you think of that?

If you do that... I will not be the only one who will want to kill you, did you think of that?  8)


PS: I thought about it, and I GUESS I don't want people to hate me....I GUESS..... LOL...I'm a horrible person  :theking

Don't guess too much....  :smhid

Soooo I was just doing nothing on computer and was sure there would be no update tonight, but hey, I was lucky, you updated! Though... "lucky" is such a big word XD

I have a theory of what's going to happen: Kai, Riku and Kuu will "fight" as they do in the real dorama. But since they are in Majisuka High, some yankees, aka Yuko, will see them and will want to fight against them. And then Maeda arrives and wants to kill them too :P Because she doesn't want Yuko to XD And she then realizes that Kai is fighting like Minami, which is really strange to her so she decides to spy them XD Okay, I'll stop here with my crazy things  :lol:

O__________O I want Kai to meet Maeda  :bow:
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 5)
Post by: aoi_sora on February 14, 2011, 12:28:29 PM
 :cow: :cow: :cow:
thanks for updating...
one question :nervous
.... is erena still in this story? or she's studying overseas.... :D
i want to see takamina's reaction seeing her best friend and her younger sister attending in Majisuka Gakuen!

since bou-j525 have a theory on what's going to happen well, me too :D
.... Kai keep staring at Maeda when someone block his way....  :angry: Gakuran! they started fighting then Kuu as the Majisuka Gakuen Kaichou try to stopped the two boys or girls but the two of them push Kuu away and bumped Akicha :angry: now Team Hormone is now circling Kuu, and Kuu started to cry  :cry:
while Riku can't do anything coz Yuko is watching his every move....

 :rofl:

Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 5)
Post by: RenaChii on February 14, 2011, 11:47:15 PM
Wow an update~ THANK YOU~  :onioncheer:

Looking forward for your next update~  :on GJ:
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 6)
Post by: yourstruly on February 16, 2011, 08:24:48 AM
You have no idea how scare I am right now  :yawn: I mean... it's Hinata you know XD (Ohhh how I feel I will regret saying this...)
If you do that... I will not be the only one who will want to kill you, did you think of that?  8)
Don't guess too much....  :smhid

Soooo I was just doing nothing on computer and was sure there would be no update tonight, but hey, I was lucky, you updated! Though... "lucky" is such a big word XD

I have a theory of what's going to happen: Kai, Riku and Kuu will "fight" as they do in the real dorama. But since they are in Majisuka High, some yankees, aka Yuko, will see them and will want to fight against them. And then Maeda arrives and wants to kill them too :P Because she doesn't want Yuko to XD And she then realizes that Kai is fighting like Minami, which is really strange to her so she decides to spy them XD Okay, I'll stop here with my crazy things  :lol:

O__________O I want Kai to meet Maeda  :bow:
You should totally be scared ;)
So tempting.......to just kill off Maeda so they never meet....I totally have an evil side
LOL....
I guess you were lucky......maybe your lucky again tonight? maybe?
How about no to your theory....ok fine some of it is correct......some not so much.....I totally changed a lot of mendol plot but that's ok.....

.... is erena still in this story? or she's studying overseas.... :D
i want to see takamina's reaction seeing her best friend and her younger sister attending in Majisuka Gakuen!

since bou-j525 have a theory on what's going to happen well, me too :D
.... Kai keep staring at Maeda when someone block his way....  :angry: Gakuran! they started fighting then Kuu as the Majisuka Gakuen Kaichou try to stopped the two boys or girls but the two of them push Kuu away and bumped Akicha :angry: now Team Hormone is now circling Kuu, and Kuu started to cry  :cry:
while Riku can't do anything coz Yuko is watching his every move....
I dunno if I'll ever add Erena in the story.....I don't really wanna.........
Too many theories....my head is in overload so I didn't put any of yours or bou-j525 in my chapter...TOO BAD =)

Guys, think about it this way, if my story revolves around your theories, it would make this a lot less exciting

Thanks for reading my rambling again...


Chapter 6

-Music room-

As they started setting up, they introduced themselves to Kichin.

"I'm Persona's Riku."

"Osu, Kuu desu."

Shachou nudged Kai in the arm to get his attention and hissed, "Introduce yourself."

"...Kai desu." As Kai said it emotionlessly, earning worried looks from Riku and Kuu.

"I refuse to take nude photos of men." Kichin exclaimed. "But today, I will take beautiful pictures of men. Although some of them are less cooperative, I will still do it." Kichin looks at Kai.

'Shit, what if it really is her?' Kai tuned out everyone, but had his brain turned on for once.

Scrambling to cover for Kai, Riku took charge and told Kichin, "We'll finish getting ready now so please excuse us for a moment." Riku grabbed Kai and Kuu to leave but stopped dead in their tracks as three girls came into the room.

"Since my school is a bit special, I've gotten three of our girls to show you around and to stop any unnecessary distractions let's say, for the three boys here. Girls, introduce yourselves." the principal ordered.

"Oshima Yuko desu. Pleased to meet you." Yuko said this while giving her best smile and showing her dimples. And since the other two didn't want to introduce themselves, Yuko took the liberty of doing it for them. "The taller one is Sado and the boyish looking one is Gakuran. Don't mind her, she's just filling in for someone who's not here a the moment, so she's a bit on the grumpy side."

"I am not grumpy, I'm just worried." Gakuran said as she tried to hide a blush.

'What is this? Is today make Riku's life a living hell day? First, we're doing our photo shoot at Majisuka, second, my breakfast got eaten by Kuu, third, Kai is not responding at all and now Yuko's face to face in front of me?' Riku hated how the day started out and hopes that it doesn't end any worse than how it started.

"Please to meet you three." Kuu said as he tried to break the ice in this awkward situation.

"Each one of us will be helping each of you three boys today, I be with Riku, Kai with Gakuran and Kuu with Sado." Yuko said as she noticed Riku's facial expressions changed from unhappy to worse day of his life kind of face. "If you have any objections, we can change the pairings." Yuko asked as she kinda felt offended that the boy with red streaks didn't like her.

"Mhmm, if it's ok, can I be in a pair with Yuko? Sado seems like she doesn't like me very much and doesn't talk." Kuu asked as he wanted to give Riku a break from this madness.

"Sure." Answered Yuko, smiling at the boy with blue streaks.

'At least one of the three boys respond.' thought Yuko.

"Um... sorry but could we go to the washroom to finish up our makeup for the photo shoot." Riku asked as he wanted to just run away from Yuko.

"Sure of course, this way please." As Yuko lead the three boys to the washroom, Sado and Gakuran were behind them.

-Toilet-

"Kai, what's wrong with you today? You usually not this unresponsive." Kuu asked as he gave himself a quick touch up.

"Are you sick? Come on let's get this over so we can leave alright." Riku wanted this day to end.

"Oh yeah, I'm fine." Kai replied

'Wait if we finish fast then there's a chance that I don't have to find out if she's actually here or not.  I won't see her and she won't know I lied to her, it's a win-win situation.' Kai thought as he returned to reality

"Osu, let's get this over with." Kai was now pumping with energy.

"Osu, we can do this." Riku felt thankful that Kai was back in shape and that their goals were the same, for this day to end.

"Osu, after this, Marilyn said she'll make me more food" Kuu added, earning smiles from his other bandmates as he too wanted to go home.

-Music Room-

*Loud panting sounds*

“This is strange, very strange. My radar is reacting.” Kichin said as he was taking pictures of the band. “Are you guys really men?”

“Ah, of course we are.” Kai said as he did a manly pose.

“Could it be possible that you’re reacting to the girls in the room?” Riku asked, as the responsible one, he had to think of good reasons to deny the real facts.

“That could be possible but I don’t know.” Kichin’s hair that was a round ball of fuzziness became a round ball of fuzziness with a point on the very top like an antenna. Kichin’s face full of confusion on why there were reactions to his radar.

“Sorry, but could we take a break?” Riku asked, as Kichin nodded in answer since Kichin wanted to sort out his thoughts.

The three boys huddled into the corner.

“What are we going to do? He knows.” Kuu whispered.

“We need to show him that we are men amongst men.” Kai added

“What we need is a plan…” Riku suggested as he looks around to see if there was anything that could be of use to them.

“What if we were to show Kichin that we like girls?” Kai asked

“Good idea. Where’s Ray? That’s the easiest way. For you to be lovey-dovey with her.” Riku gave Kai a grin.

“NO WHERE NEAR HERE. How about you go hit on that tall girl….Sado is her name right?” Kai retaliated

‘HIT ON SADO? Much rather hit myself until I’m unconscious then to do that. She can be so scary.’ Riku thought as Kuu cut his train of thought.

“Well since Ray isn’t here, Kai’s partnered with someone like us, and Sado doesn’t respond at all…I guess the only thing left to do is for me to hit on Yuko.” Kuu suggested earning a pat on the back from Kai, since this was the most humane thing he’s said all day.

“You can’t.” Objected Riku as he showed an angry face.

“Well, if I don’t do it, then you have to.”

“I don’t care which of you two hits on Yuko but decide fast.” Kai added as he scanned the room to see if there were any new bodies that entered the room.

“Fine, Kuu, you can hit on Yuko but just don’t go overboard.” Riku warned as he felt his heart break at the thought of himself letting his most respected person be used to help cover up tracks of feminism coming from the boys.

“Ittekimasu.”

Kuu walks by the refreshments and grabbed 3 bottles of water and walks towards Yuko, Sado and Gakuran, who was by the doors to make sure that no one would dare interfere with the photo shoot.

“Thanks for all the hard work guys, I meant girls.” Kuu said as he handed a bottle of water to each of the girls.

“Thanks.” Yuko said as Sado and Gakuran just gave a quick nod as a symbol of thanks.

“What grade are you in?” Kuu asked as he looked only at Yuko, with Sado glaring at him.

‘Who does he think he is, hitting on Yuko-san?’ Sado thought as she saw that Yuko was getting along quite well with the boy.

-On the other side of the room-

Riku was glaring at Kuu who was being overly close to Yuko. But snapped out of it as Kai walked towards Kichin.

“Look at Kuu go, that lady killer.” Kai commented at the scene of Yuko leaning against the wall with Kuu beside her and talking quite happily with the boy.

“Kuu might look cute and all but if he wants, he can get any girl.” Riku added as he saw Kuu and Yuko exchange mail and phone numbers.

*Pants harder*

‘We failed again…I let Kuu hit on Yuko for nothing?’ Riku thought to himself as he was beating himself mentally as he motioned Kuu for another secret meeting in their secluded corner.

“That failed, good job Kuu.” Riku said sarcastically at the ‘good job’ part of the sentence

“At least I got something out of it.” Kuu said as he gave a wave to Yuko, who returned as enthusiastically as she got the wave.

“What else do you have on your mind, Riku?” Kai asked, not noticing the tension forming on Riku’s face.

“Show him that we have what all men have?” Kuu said as he hinted to the lower half of his body.

“Mhmm, that could probably work.” Kai said, but still skeptical about the plan B.

“Jan-ken-pon.” The three boys thought that this was the most fair way to decide the task through fate.

“I DON’T WANT TO DO IT.” Kai exclaimed as the other two boys pushed him into the washroom where Kichin was already at.

-Toilet-

Kai walked into the toilet unwillingly as he saw that Kichin didn’t close the door to the cubical that he was in and walked into the next one beside him and followed his behavior as to not close the door.

Kai had his instruments tucked into his pants already as he stood feet’s apart as he slowly unzipped his fly and let out water.

Kichin, who was done and curious looked at Kai while he was doing his business.

“Oi, what are you looking at?” Kai asked as he wanted to show a manly side of himself.

“Oh nothing.” Kichin left the toilet.

Kai soon followed after and asked his friends,

“Did he believe it?”

Riku and Kuu both shrugged not knowing if it worked or not.

-Music room-

“Men or women, it doesn’t matter, I, Kichin will take pictures of nude men starting today.” Kichin exclaimed as he grabbed Riku’s jacket and pulled it off.

‘Crap, we’re going to get found out. What can we do? What was the sexiest thing I’ve ever seen?’ Riku asked himself as Yuko’s face popped into mind. The first time Riku saw Yuko was when Yuko was taking care of 50 Yabakune’s on Majisuka grounds where Yuko was saying ‘Tanoshi’ when fighting. In that moment he knew what he had to do, even if it meant bruising for the next week or so.

“ARGH, man up you two.” Riku shouted as he pushed the two onto the floor. “This has always been our dream, we can’t give up half way.” As Riku started the fight, Kuu and Kai had blank confuse faces on, so Riku motioned them to hit him and fight.

Kai, punched Riku in the face with his right hand making Riku swade to the right and in return, Kuu took a swing at him through the body as Riku lost his balance and landed on the floor.

“This is better than nude, more, more, give me more.” Kichin was holding his camera, taking as many shoots as he could as he saw the fight scene roll out.

Kuu then punched Kai in the face while Riku charged at the two of them, throwing himself on the two which caused them all the fall down. Kai was the fastest to recover and took at punch at each of the two friends.

“Their fighting like kids.” Gakuran commented

“I think Kai is the best fighter over there, I think he’s just hiding his abilities that could give you a run for your money.” Yuko added.

“Che, what do you see in him? A punch here and a kick there, I can fight better than him with my eyes closed.” Gakuran unpleased that she was compared to what she thought was a newbie.

“He just doesn’t want to hurt his friends too much. They don’t have this planned out you know.” Sado added as she too saw a spark of fire in Kai’s eyes.

The three boys eventually tired out and gathered around the piano, with Kuu on the side sitting on the piano bench with his jacket off, Riku in the middle wearing his jacket as he leans onto the piano and Kai with his jacket off posed standing up without any support from the piano with is jacket over his shoulder.

“Excellent. Job boys.” Kichin thanked Persona’s management for the new learning experience for him.

As the crew started to pack up, the three girls got the boys ice pads and bandages.

“Here.” Yuko handed Kuu an ice pack and some bandages

“Thanks, what did you think of our photo shoot?” Kuu asked as he noticed Riku looking at their direction.

“It was interesting, who knew that Kai could fight that well.”

“Ahaha, I didn’t know either.” Kuu then slyly yet quietly asked, “Next time we meet, it’ll be a date.” As he heads out of the room, he gave Yuko a quick wink.

“Here, well done, you started the fight but you lost horribly. Think first before you act.” Sado said as she discreetly handed the ice pack and bandages to Riku and walked away afterwards.

“Thanks?”

Riku got confused as to why Sado seemed like she was worried. ‘I must be imagining things.’ Riku then packed up and headed to the van.

“Yo, I guess you can pack a punch.” Gakuran smiled at the blonde

“Mhmm, I guess…” Kai smiled back since this was the first time in the whole day that Gakuran started a conversation with him.

“You can be cute if you want to be.” Kai commented, as Kai was thinking back to the smile Gakuran gave him.

“What are you talking about? I have no interest in you. My only interest is in Atsuko, and don’t you dare hit on her if you ever see her.” Gakuran appalled by the interest in her shown by Kai.

‘Atsuko…’ Kai thought.

“Yeah yeah yeah. Don’t worry, I won’t hit on your Atsuko.”

-Field-

“Thank you very much Yuriko, without your schools setting, we wouldn’t have been able to do this photo shoot so successfully.” Shachou thanked her long time friend as she motioned the boys and Marilyn to get on the van.

“No problem, anything and anytime for you Saeko.”

As all the boys and Marilyn got onto the van, Saeko gave Yuriko a brief hug and then got onto the front passenger seat of the van and left.

Marilyn, who was green with jealously didn’t speak at all to shachou, making the ride uncomfortable and awkward, so all the boys just looked out the tinted window to look at the view.

As the van stopped at the four way stop intersection, Kai saw a girl in the same Majisuka uniform that Asahi and Hinata owns, walking out a house and towards the school. Kai took a glance at the girl’s face…Kai would never forget her face…her beautiful expressionless face…

‘Atsuko.’

TBC...

Opps...they still didn't meet face-to-face yet....DON'T KILL ME....I PROMISE THEY WILL MEET SOON........like next chapter? maybe? I dunno....make you all keep guessing  :theking

PS: Btw, I totally stopped proof-reading....I got bored =P
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 6)
Post by: aoi_sora on February 16, 2011, 09:12:55 AM
no kai and maeda scene!!!!  :gyaaah:

kuu and yuko  :shocked riku and sado
interesting!!!

Guys, think about it this way, if my story revolves around your theories, it would make this a lot less exciting
:grin: your right!

thanks for updating!!!!  :twothumbs

Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 6)
Post by: mangobanana15 on February 16, 2011, 09:32:01 AM
Updateeee!!!

LOLLLL all the roles are switched up and the pairings are different too  :lol:

I'm glad Riku didn't do anything to Kuu when he was hitting on Yuko

coool i like how you added them commenting on Takamina's fighting  :)

PLEASE MAKE THEMM MEETT NEXT CHAPTER I BEG OF YOU!! :D

Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 6)
Post by: RenaChii on February 16, 2011, 11:23:14 AM
Yay~!! Riku get jealous~!!  :tntrm:

I'm LOOKING FORWARD for your next update~  :luvuluvu:

THANKS~!  :k-great: and PLEASE CONTINUE~!!  :tama-apeshit:
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 6)
Post by: bou-j525 on February 16, 2011, 11:55:28 PM
How about no to your theory....ok fine some of it is correct......some not so much.....I totally changed a lot of mendol plot but that's ok.....

I was only kidding  :smhid

But hey, I want a meeting soon now!  :shocked But I don't know why I have a feeling you're not going to write it for the next chapter...  :banghead:
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 6)
Post by: yourstruly on February 20, 2011, 10:50:28 PM
kuu and yuko  :shocked riku and sado
interesting!!!
I thought it was funny when I was writing it up....for me...if its not funny or at least interesting I won't do it =)
At least interesting to me....I dunno how most of you guys feel about it....hopefully like it?

Yay~!! Riku get jealous~!!  :tntrm:
I'm LOOKING FORWARD for your next update~  :luvuluvu:
THANKS~!  :k-great: and PLEASE CONTINUE~!!  :tama-apeshit:
LOL....the most important thing for you was Riku getting jealous....but thats ok....I GUESS....kinda think that you prefer RikuxYuko rather than like Torigoya/AsahixYuko.....I thought you liked the second pairing more than RikuxYuko =P
Even though they are all the same person...I just wanted to point it out

MAKE THEMM MEETT NEXT CHAPTER I BEG OF YOU!! :D
But hey, I want a meeting soon now!  :shocked But I don't know why I have a feeling you're not going to write it for the next chapter...  :banghead:
I was contemplating on whether or not I should let them meet.....You'll have to read this chapter to know if I actually wrote the meeting  :twisted:

Thanks for reading my ramblings again  :theking

Chapter 7

- Kamonohashi Office-

“What happened to Nami? She’s like in a daze ever since we got home.” Asahi whispered to Hinata as they were looking at Nami playing with the moose decoration in the living room.

“I don’t know…maybe she’s hungry?”

“Hinata, I wasn’t asking about you, I was asking about Nami.” Asahi said as she walked towards Nami.

‘Atsuko…why is your face still like a void?... I heard your friends talking about you… You should have been able to get over this by now… Where’s the strong willed Atsuko that I met? Did she die with me?’ Nami couldn’t forget about Atsuko after all this time. She felt like she ruined Atsuko’s life. ‘I’m so sorry… To forget and live on with life, that’s all I wanted for you… forget me, live your life to its fullest.’

“Girls, dinner time.” Marilyn called from the kitchen, as she interrupted Nami's thoughts.

“Nami, go wash up and let’s eat.” Asahi said as she saw Nami snap out of her trace.

“Yay, more food for Hinata.”

“Don’t eat my share like you did this morning.” Asahi shouted from the toilet as she and Nami washed their hands for dinner.

-Dinner table-

Hinata was drooling when Nami and Asahi got to the dining room.

A huge spread of party food was on the table, chicken wings, pineapple and ham on toothpicks, spaghetti, pizza and sushi.

“To congratulate the three of you for the wonderful photo shoot.” Marilyn said as she smiled. But her smile didn’t last long as Shachou came into the dining room.

“Yes, good job girls, it’s all thanks to my superior leadership that you’ve gotten this far.”

An awkward scene was starting to unfold as Marilyn and Shachou was looking at each other.

“Girls, please enjoy this meal, I don’t feel so well, I’m going now.” Marilyn left the girls and shachou as chased after Marilyn.

“So it’s just us three now.” Asahi pointed out as Hinata already started to pig out on the spread.

“I’m actually not very hungry, I’m going to go take a shower.” Nami started to head upstairs to the bathroom.

“Mpf gonra eatch urs chu.” Hinata said as her mouth was stuffed with food.

“Hinata, no one is going to steal your food. Slow down. And what did you say?” Asahi got her chopsticks and muttered “itadakimasu.” And started eating.

‘What’s wrong with Nami? She normally doesn’t pass up food… I guess everyone has an off day sometimes… more importantly, did Yuko figure it out? I certainly hope not.’ Asahi thought as her phone rung to grab the owner’s attention since she got a new message. Asahi saw that it was from Yuko and excused herself to the living room.

“Don’t you dare eat my share like you did this morning.” Asahi warned before she left the room.

-Living room-

Nyan Nyan, I missed you today. Today was so boring, we were like babysitting guys our age. But at least I got something out of it >=D. Me and the principal made a deal, if I help her today I get 6 tickets where I can skip class but they will still count me as attended to class. We can go out and have some fun together.

‘So that’s why you were there today, I knew you won’t do anything without good reason…’ Asahi thought with a chuck.

Well, I was in pain all day and you were having fun? That’s not fair. I’m mad at you now.

‘Let’s see her reaction.’ Asahi thought as she chuckled. ‘I totally have been affected by Sado, I’m turning into an S.’ Yuko’s reply came back scarily fast, as if she was waiting with a phone in her hand for Asahi or something like that.

Nyan Nyan, I rather myself be in pain then to see you in pain. I was not having fun at all. There were like three guys. One of them, his name was Kuu and he was hitting on me, he’s actually pretty funny and kinda cute but girly kind of cute, totally not my type. Kai’s too rash and aggressive, but he can fight pretty well for a shorty. Lastly, there’s this guy, Riku, he’s like a pretty boy and a smart one too. Can’t really fight that well though. I don’t think he likes me. He was giving me weird looks the whole time. Nyan Nyan, don’t be mad at me, we can go skip and go have some fun *wink wink*

‘Awww, Yuko’s so sweet… Kuu is funny and cute?!?!?! At least she doesn’t like girly cute boys or else I’d have a talk with Kuu then destroy his phone so he loses Yuko’s number… Kai is a pretty good fighter though, gave me a couple good bruises that won’t go away anytime soon…’ Asahi pouted but continued to read Yuko’s message, ‘Why is Yuko so keen on Riku? Kuu and Kai’s comments were short but Yuko’s going on and on about Riku… No having fun with you.’ Asahi now has an angry pout face.

Well, you didn’t see me all day so you didn’t see me in pain, therefore you yourself don’t have to be in pain today. Here I am talking to you and you’re telling me how much fun you had today and about the guys you met today. I think you have a thing for Riku since you keep mentioning him so why don’t you just skip school and have some fun with him instead.

Asahi was jealous of her second, no, third identity, Riku. For getting the girl that she respects, so she turned off her phone and threw it onto the couch and left the living room to the dining room. When girls get jealous and want to vent out anger, they respond by eating lots.

-Dining room-

“Good, you didn’t finish everything. My turn.”

“I don’t feel so well, I think I ate too much.” Hinata laid across three chairs and started to rub her tummy.

“Go get some Pepto-Bismol, they’re good for heartburns, indigestion and diarrhea.” Asahi said as if she was the spokesperson for Pepto-Bismol commercial.

Hinata got up quietly and took some Pepto-Bismol. Afterwards, she went to bed.

-Next day-

Nami got up at 5 and changed into her Kai identity but not with the usual outfit, she wore a white men’s small tank top, a black hoodie, a pair of skinny blue demin jeans, a pair of black leather Jack Purcell’s shoes, and a plain black baseball cap. As she silently left the bedroom, she remembered to take her face mask and put it on as if she was sick or something. She also left a note on the table saying that she had something to do this morning but will be back before Asahi and Hinata gets off from school.

-Somewhere near Majisuka-

‘I can’t believe I'm doing this, I really don’t think it’s right to stalk her after I left her life.’ Kai thought as he hid into an alley which was diagonally across her house. ‘It’s still early, it’s 6:30, I don’t think she’s ready for school yet…she usually gets up at 8 when school already started and gets there at 9 as she jumps over the fence to get in or other days, she’d just be home or picking a fight with nearby yankee schools. Those were the days.’ Kai slapped herself from reminiscing the past as he heard two figures approaching and hide behind the garbage cans. 

“Atsuko should come out soon.”

“Atsu-nee is always on time.”

‘That’s the girl from yesterday… Gakuran. Gakuran warned me not to hit on Atsuko. So Atsuko and Gakuran? Atsuko is an L?!?!’ Kai thoughts flew out the window when he heard the door open.

“Ohayougozaimasu.” Atsuko said unemotionally.

“Ohayou, Atsuko.”

“Atsu-nee, why didn’t you go to school yesterday?” Daruma asked as they started to walk to school. ”There were some guys from a band at our school yesterday. They seem pretty cool. Wota was so excited to see them.”

“Atsuko, here, let me care your bag for you. I can’t make my women care something so heavy.” Gakuran said as she totally ignored Daruma’s conversation with Atsuko and interrupted. Gakuran then took Atsuko’s bag.

“Ano, it’s really ok, it’s really not that heavy. And who’s your women?” Atsuko asked.

“Um, I mean, here Daruma, I’ll take your bag too. I can’t let my friends who I assume them as my women to carry heavy things.” Gakuran blushed as she tried to cover herself.

‘Right, we’re not at that step of our relationship yet.’ Gakuran thought as she also took Daruma’s bag.

‘Mhmm, so Gakuran and Atsuko aren’t together.’ Kai heart ache slowly decreased as he watches the trio walk towards the school. ‘I'm such a huge stalker… I should go… she has new friends now, she doesn’t need me anymore.’ Kai started to make way to the station. As Kai’s heart ache slowly increased as he walked further and further away, he couldn’t hear the conversation the trio was having anymore.

-The trio-

“Ah! I forgot something.” Atsuko exclaimed.

“Let’s go home and get it then.” Gakuran said as she turned around and started to walk towards Atsuko’s house.

“It’s ok, I can go home and get it myself.”

“What if Yabakune’s jump you?” Daruma asked.

“I don’t want to trouble you guys, and besides, which Yankee’s wake up early to go to school?” Atsuko asked.

“Okok, but we won’t head to school first, we’ll wait here for you ok?” Gakuran asked as he thought this was a better trade than Daruma and her going to school first.

“Alright then. I’ll hurry up and go get my stuff. Sorry.” Atsuko then started to run home.

-Kai-

‘How come my heart ache is decreasing again?’ Kai’s question was answered as Atsuko ran past him, and accidentally pushed him onto the floor.

“I’m so sorry, are you ok?” Atsuko asked as she held out her hand, ready to pull the boy she knocked down up.

‘Atsuko.’

“I'm,” *Cough cough*

‘Right, I’m Kai, my girl voice shouldn’t come out.’ Kai thought

“I’m ok. Don’t worry about it.” Kai didn’t take Atsuko’s hand and just got up himself. As he dusts himself off, he felt pain in his hands. “Ouch.”

“Are you ok? Let me see.” Atsuko suggested.

“I’m really fine. I’ll just go to the convenience store nearby and get some band aids.” Kai wasn’t looking at Atsuko anymore but looking at the floor so Atsuko won’t figure out who he is.

“Band aids won’t help that much, we should sanitize the wound first then wrap it or put band aids on it.”

“I can do that, don’t worry, shouldn’t you worry more about school? Aren’t you going to be late for school?”

“Don’t worry about that, I knocked you down so it’s my responsibility to make sure your ok.”

“No no, school is more important.”

After a little more convincing from Atsuko, Kai knew that if he didn’t let Atsuko clean his wound, he won’t be able to leave so he let her do as she wished.

Atsuko quickly typed up a message for Gakuran. And sent it.

Gakuran, sorry but can you go ahead to school first, I accidentally knocked someone down when I was running and the person got hurt so I'm going to clean the wound first so it might take a while. I'm sorry.

-Convenience store-

“I’m so sorry, I knocked you down and I couldn’t even pay for your band aids and rubbing alcohol.” Atsuko apologized as she realized her bag was still with Gakuran, and she only had her phone and house keys with her.

“It’s ok, I'm sorry for making you late to school.”

“Really, don’t worry about that. More importantly, let’s make sure your wound won’t get infected.”

Atsuko started cleaning Kai’s wounds that were on his hands. As Atsuko felt like a jolt of electricity flowing though her body.

“You’re really good at this.” Commented Kai.

“My dream is to become a nurse so being able to do things like this is natural.”

‘Conversations with this guy really flows naturally…’ Atsuko thought.

“Wow, that’s pretty cool.”

“There, all done.” Atsuko started to put the extra bandages away and covered the rubbing alcohol with the lid.

“Thank you very much.”

“No problem, it was my fault, I’m really sorry.” Atsuko apologized once more.

“Don’t worry about it.”

As the two left the convenience store.

“I’m sorry, I didn’t catch your name.”

“Ah, my name is Ka-..Kazuki.” Kai knew he shouldn’t give out his Persona band name so he made one up on the spot.

“Kazuki-kun, my name is Maeda, Maeda Atsuko.”

“Maeda-san.”

“Kazuki-kun.”

“Maeda-san.”

“Kazuki-kun.”

Awkward silence.

“Kazuki-kun, if it’s ok, can we exchange numbers? So maybe I can take you out for tea one day to apologize for knocking you over and making you pay for the band aids and rubbing alcohol.”

“Really, it’s ok.” Kai or rather Kazuki saw the pout on Atsuko’s face and took out his phone. Atsuko’s pout was replaced by a small but noticeable smile as they exchanged numbers through infrared.

“Thank you Kazuki-kun. Bye, I’ll see you soon?”

“Yeah, ok. I’ll see you later.” Kai watched Atsuko leave and disappear into the distance.

-Behind a tree-

“That asshole. Atsuko is mine.” Gakuran glared at Kazuki.

-Train-

‘Atsuko’s face had more emotions after talking to Kazuki. Did she find out? Or is Kazuki just a good influence on her.’ Kai pondered.

-Majisuka 3rd year classroom-

“Where’s Gakuran? She has my bag.” Atsuko asked Daruma.

“She went to find you. You didn’t see her?” Daruma answered.

“Oh ok.” Atsuko sat back in her seat.

She started typing a message.

Once again, I’m really sorry Kazuki-kun. When are you free, let’s go out for tea.

After she sent the message, she started to stare outside and was deep in thought.

‘Kazuki-kun is really easy going…just like Minami. He’s also really nice and almost the same height.” Atsuko chuckled. ‘Kazuki-kun is like 2 inches taller. I wonder if Minami were still here, would she have grown 2 more inches? Regardless how old she is, she always wants to grow taller.’ Atsuko chuckled at the thought. ‘Would Minami approve of Kazuki-kun? I feel a deep connection with him even though today was our first meeting. I didn’t even get to see his face.’ Atsuko pouted. ‘Minami, how are you doing in heaven? I miss you.’


TBC


Happy now? There's a meeting.....
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 7)
Post by: mangobanana15 on February 21, 2011, 02:34:09 AM
YAY!!!! UPDATEE! ANDDD MEEETTTTINGGGG!! :twothumbs

i'm so happy they finally meet! Aachan had a connection with her!! :D

but i feel that Gakuran is gonna be a bit of a problem

Takamina got herself a forth identify now. Minami, Nami, Kai, and now Kazuki  :lol:

LOL Haruna is jealous of her "other" self :P

Update soon!
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 7)
Post by: sorakamiya on February 21, 2011, 03:41:14 AM
wooow.... finally they are meetiiiiiing....  :twothumbs :twothumbs yeah well, eventhough the meeting is not like what i expected but... stil it's great...  :thumbsup

and... owgh...owgh...owgh... :smhid :smhid i'm feeling now kazuki kun will have a battle with gakuran now...  :smhid update fast will you...  :grin: :grin:i wanna see wether is it true / not that they will have fight and in that time will kazuki disguise is reveal...??  :w00t: :w00t: and could that be acchan will hate nami / she wont? aaaa.... this speculation so exciting...  XD XD
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 7)
Post by: RenaChii on February 21, 2011, 07:39:23 AM
Hey~ Don't take me wrong~  :tntrm:

OF COURSE I like both of them Torigoya/Asahi X Yuko and Riku X Yuko~!!  :luvuluvu:

I'm looking forward for your next update~!!  :tama-apeshit:

THANK YOU~!!   :tama-bye:

Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 7)
Post by: aoi_sora on February 21, 2011, 01:17:53 PM
“Go get some Pepto-Bismol, they’re good for heartburns, indigestion and diarrhea.”
that's true!!! works for me too!   :on GJ:

they meet!!!
they meet!!!!!
THEY MEET!!!!!
 :cow: :cow: :cow: :cow:
instant connection!  :wub:

Gakuran is :angry:

Torigoya's jealous of RIKU!!!!
LOL!
the exchange e-mails is so  :inlove:

thanks for the update!!!
can't help but to read this even though this will give an intense headache!  :nervous
reading this is worthy!!!!

update soon!

Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 7)
Post by: bou-j525 on February 21, 2011, 01:24:08 PM
Argh don't tell me..... When I read the beginning of this chapter I was "wtf" at Nami's name until I remembered that it was in reality Minami and etc etc.... AND YOU DECIDED TO ADD ANOTHER IDENTITY?! TT___TT

I'm seriously wondering how Minami will do to see Atsuko (if ever they decide to meet again).... she can't hide her face eternally, right? ¬.¬ I have the feeling you're gonna make us wait again for the next meeting XD
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 7)
Post by: yourstruly on February 24, 2011, 04:52:51 AM
Takamina got herself a forth identify now. Minami, Nami, Kai, and now Kazuki  :lol:
Argh don't tell me..... When I read the beginning of this chapter I was "wtf" at Nami's name until I remembered that it was in reality Minami and etc etc.... AND YOU DECIDED TO ADD ANOTHER IDENTITY?! TT___TT

Ok, I'm sorry for confusing everyone with all the identities.... I will soon make some disappear...maybe they will jump off a cliff and then they die... then there would be less identities right? =)

i'm feeling now kazuki kun will have a battle with gakuran now...  :smhid update fast will you...  :grin: :grin:i wanna see wether is it true / not that they will have fight and in that time will kazuki disguise is reveal...??  :w00t: :w00t: and could that be acchan will hate nami / she wont? aaaa.... this speculation so exciting...  XD XD

I haven't thought that far yet....but I feel that the day that Maeda knows that Kai is Nami is the day that this whole fanfic is nearing to an end but I still have lots of new ideas.....I just don't have time to write it yet......

Hey~ Don't take me wrong~  :tntrm:
OF COURSE I like both of them Torigoya/Asahi X Yuko and Riku X Yuko~!!  :luvuluvu:

Well, it's funnier to take you wrong though =P

thanks for the update!!!
can't help but to read this even though this will give an intense headache!  :nervous
reading this is worthy!!!!

...I'm giving you a headache? Is my writing confusing? Or the layout? Should I just stop writing? I am totally a bad writer.... Bad me...=(

I'm seriously wondering how Minami will do to see Atsuko (if ever they decide to meet again).... she can't hide her face eternally, right? ¬.¬ I have the feeling you're gonna make us wait again for the next meeting XD

Maybe Minami will get plastic surgery =O
I don't know, I didn't think THAT far yet....
I was actually going to make the next meeting soon but if you insist on me making you wait a while for the next meeting then ok  :theking


Thanks for reading my rambling again


Chapter 8

-Majisuka 3rd year classroom-

“Maeda-san is in a daze.” Wota commented.

“Maybe she’s spending too much time with Torigoya?”

“Oi, Daruma, stop taking our food.” Unagi tried to take back the grilled meat from Daruma but was short a second as Daruma ate it already.

“Atsu-nee doesn’t even talk to Torigoya, she’s just tired today.” Daruma answered as she took another piece of grilled meat.

-On the other side of the classroom-

“Sado, what should I do? I made Torigoya mad at me.”

“Hm, I don’t know, what did you do?”

“I don’t know… we were messaging each other last night and I was telling her how my day was and she got mad at me.”

“Are you sure you’re not missing out any important details?” Sado looked at Torigoya then back to Yuko.

“I was talking about the three guys from Persona… I know why she’s mad at me now… She was sick yesterday and wanted me to visit her but I didn’t.”

“Er… Yuko-san, I think it was because you were talking about the three boys you met yesterday and she got jealous.”

“Oh, so Torigoya is jealous?...” Yuko’s light bulb in her head switched on. “Oh, so she likes Persona and was jealous of me getting to meet them? Aww, Torigoya is so cute, getting jealous over something so small, I have one of their numbers, I could just call them out and give Torigoya a surprise and then she’ll be happy again?.” Yuko looked like an energetic kid as she thought that she could get Torigoya to be happy and not mad at her again.

‘How dense can Yuko-san get? Oh well…’ Sado thought as she saw Yuko starting to message one of the boys they met yesterday. ‘I guess I could play along with this.’

Hey Kuu, are you busy? I have a friend that’s like a huge fan of yours and totally wants to meet you and the whole group Persona, message me back so we can set a date ;)

“Let’s invite Maeda too, maybe this will get rid of her shy-ness and open up to us too.” Yuko suggested

“Sure, anything you want Yuko-san.” Sado was use to all of Yuko’s antics already and was too tired to fight it.

‘Yuko should learn it the hard way, not everything goes out the way she plans it.’ Sado smiles. ‘I totally have an S side of me.’

-In another 3rd year classroom-

Minegishi Minami just got a message.

Hey Kuu, are you busy? I have a friend that’s like a huge fan of yours and totally wants to meet you and the whole group Persona, message me back so we can set a date ;)

‘Date=FOOD… maybe free food too.’ Thought Minegishi. ‘But it’s going to be hard to convince Nami and especially Asahi… Gotta think up a plan.’ Minegishi had an evil grin on her face.

Yuko-chan, sure no problem but we’re a little busy in preparing our debut single so maybe in a week or so. Is that ok with you? I apologize, I usually don’t like making girls wait for me but duty calls. I’ll update you as soon as possible alright? By the way, shouldn’t you be in class? Or are you skipping class for me?

‘That should give a pretty good image for Kuu.’ Minegishi then sent the message and started eating lunch in class.

-Yuko’s 3rd year classroom-

‘A reply.’ As Yuko read the message, ‘Yes, Torigoya is going to be so happy. Kuu’s pretty cute like that isn’t he, so sweet and caring, yet playful… too bad he’s not my type. Maybe Maeda likes them cute? We’ll see.’ Evil grin.

Alright then, see you hopefully next week then. I am in class, I'm not skipping for you, don’t worry yourself about that. I just normally don’t pay attention to class like how I'm doing right now.

“Maeda, come to the club room after class, we need to talk.” Yuko then got up and left the classroom and made way to Rappapa Headquarters, followed by Sado, who motioned the other queens to stay in class.

-Rappapa Headquarters-

“Maeda’s so slow.” Yuko was getting impatient.

“Well, you told her to come to the clubroom after class, class doesn’t end so fast.”

“Sado, you’ve been giving me smart-ass replies now aren’t you? Don’t you think that you should listen to me more?”

“Yuko-san, I do listen to you, you just don’t listen to me.”

“When do I not listen to you?”

“I told you why Torigoya was mad at you and you’re just twisting my words.”

“Ah… whatever, as long as there’s something fun that’s coming out of my idea its fine.” Yuko said with a smile on her face showing her famous dimples.

“Mhmm.”

‘Yuko is being Yuko again, she ignores what I say.’ Thought Sado. ‘At least she’s not keeping anything from me like before when she didn’t tell me that she was dying…ass.’

“Where should we go with the guys? Shopping? Go for tea? Bowling? Karaoke?” Yuko was jumping around like a 10 year old.

“I doubt anyone would object to what you want.”

“Mhmm. True but I don’t want it to be boring.”

*Knock Knock*

“Yuko-san, Sado-san, konnichiwa.” Atsuko politely said

“Oi, Maeda, we’re going out next week. Make sure you come. I’ll tell you the details later alright?”

“Um, I might not be able to go, I have my volunteer work.”

“Skip it for once. Just like the time you went to the arcade with me.” Yuko said with a slight evil grin.

“Mhm, I’ll see…”

“We’re going with a couple friends and a couple guys too.” Sado added

“If you have a guy friend, bring him along too, since it’s going to be me, you, Sado and Torigoya with three of my guy friends.” Yuko said as she thought that if Maeda had a guy friend, Yuko needed to approve of him first.

“I need to ask first… next class is starting soon, I should go. Yuko-san, Sado-san, stop skipping class.”

‘She actually has a guy friend?!?!? It better not be Gakuran…She’s not even a guy…’ Yuko thought.

“We’ll go in a bit.” Sado answered.

“Ok, please excuse me.” Maeda politely left the room.

-Stairway-

‘Would Kazuki-kun come out and meet up with me and a couple of friends.’ Maeda thought as she was scrambling to think of what to message Kazuki.

Kazuki-kun, is your hand feeling better?

Maeda paused and looked at her unsent message. ‘Wait, it hasn’t even been a couple hours yet. How would his hand heal already.’ Feeling stupid that she just typed that, Maeda then deleted the sentence and restarted.

Kazuki-kun, remember to clean the wound and change the bandages once a day. Um…this might seem really sudden but um… if it’s possible, could we maybe meet up next week. A couple of my senpai’s wants to do a little gathering and well, in total there’s going to be 4 girls including me and 3 guys and I was wondering if you would join in as well since I don’t know the 3 guys that my senpai’s are bringing. I’m really sorry for bothering you. If you’re not free then it’s ok. But if you were to go, I’d feel a lot more comfortable.

‘I wonder if Kazuki-kun will actually come…’

-Kamonohashi Office-

‘Atsuko…’ Nami thought as she snapped out of her trace as she heard her phone ring, and read the message. ‘Atsuko’s such a caring girl, even to a person she just met… A goukon? Hehhhhhhh… what kind of senpai’s does Atsuko have? She should be focused in school… but I guess she needs something to relax… maybe with the guys there, she’ll show her beautiful smile from back then?…’

Maeda-san, don’t worry I’ll remember to clean the wound and change the bandages on my hands every day. A goukon? I’m not much of a party person though, I’ll probably just ruin the atmosphere… but if you’re ok with that and if I can get off from work during that time then I’ll be more than happy to accompany you. I’ll beat the guys that are after you with a stick. ;)

-Maeda’s classroom-

‘Kazuki-kun is so nice to me…’

Kazuki-kun, thank you so much. I’ll tell you the details a little later.

TBC...

Cause bou-j525 thinks that the next meeting will happen much later..........everyone will have to wait  :theking
I'm kidding...... or am I?  :twisted:
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 8)
Post by: aoi_sora on February 24, 2011, 07:23:28 AM
...I'm giving you a headache? Is my writing confusing? Or the layout? Should I just stop writing? I am totally a bad writer.... Bad me...=(
:nervous
it's not you who giving me a headache.... it's my eyes!!!
i think im ok now! just a few eye drops away!

‘Date=FOOD… maybe free food too.’
oh my Miichan....  :rofl:

this goukon is exciting...  :twothumbs
can't wait!  :panic:

i want Black and Gekikara!!!!!
 :lol:

thanks for the update!!!
 :cow:

Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 8)
Post by: mangobanana15 on February 24, 2011, 08:54:00 AM
NOOOOO DON'T LET WHAT BOU-J525 THINK MAKE YOU DELAY THEIR NEXT MEETING!! :O

oh man i see some identity problems coming up. Kazuki, Kai, Torigoya, and Riku all have to go to the goukon  :huhuh

I love all the text messages going around during this chapter :)

LOL Miichan's love for food is just a total win!

I'll be waiting for your next update!! (DON'T DELAY THE MEETING!! :smhid)
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 7)
Post by: bou-j525 on February 24, 2011, 01:21:02 PM

I was actually going to make the next meeting soon but if you insist on me making you wait a while for the next meeting then ok  :theking

...

Cause bou-j525 thinks that the next meeting will happen much later..........everyone will have to wait  :theking
I'm kidding...... or am I?  :twisted:

Haven't read your chapter yet coz I don't have time.... but HAD to quote this.
DON'T. DOOOOOOOOOON'T!!!!!!! I'M GOING TO GET KILLED IF YOU DO THAT!!!

EDIT:

Just read your chapter... omg it gonna be awesome XD Or maybe not... But you know what, I'm just going to stop talking about your chapters just because I wanna stay alive... you know ¬.¬
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 8)
Post by: kahem on February 24, 2011, 08:38:37 PM
I love you your fanfict so much  :luvluv1: I always wanted to saw kai in majijo sankyuu~
I'm looking forward the goukon :ding:
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 8)
Post by: yourstruly on March 03, 2011, 07:50:10 AM
it's not you who giving me a headache.... it's my eyes!!!
i think im ok now! just a few eye drops away!

this goukon is exciting...  :twothumbs
can't wait!  :panic:
i want Black and Gekikara!!!!!

LOL, that's good to hear that it's not me and that it can be fixed easily.
Hopefully you'll think the goukon is exciting....
I'm personally not that good at writing about Black or Gekikara but for you, I'll try...in the next arc...probably....;)

NOOOOO DON'T LET WHAT BOU-J525 THINK MAKE YOU DELAY THEIR NEXT MEETING!! :O
oh man i see some identity problems coming up. Kazuki, Kai, Torigoya, and Riku all have to go to the goukon  :huhuh

I love all the text messages going around during this chapter :)

LOL, don't worry no one can delay the next meeting...except me and real life....
Didn't you know that they all have stunt doubles? LOL...I'm kidding..
I like trying to write text messages....it's fun sometimes when I write them

I was actually going to make the next meeting soon but if you insist on me making you wait a while for the next meeting then ok  :theking
...
Cause bou-j525 thinks that the next meeting will happen much later..........everyone will have to wait  :theking
I'm kidding...... or am I?  :twisted:
Haven't read your chapter yet coz I don't have time.... but HAD to quote this.
DON'T. DOOOOOOOOOON'T!!!!!!! I'M GOING TO GET KILLED IF YOU DO THAT!!!
EDIT:
Just read your chapter... omg it gonna be awesome XD Or maybe not... But you know what, I'm just going to stop talking about your chapters just because I wanna stay alive... you know ¬.¬

LOL, don't worry no one will kill you, everyone loves your fanfics too much to kill you and risk another fanfic getting delayed.
Don't ever stop commenting, just cause the more comments I get, I try to get my homework and other shit done faster so I can update faster....
Actually, doesn't matter....unless you want the following chapters to have a long wait then be my guest.... :twisted:

I love you your fanfict so much  :luvluv1: I always wanted to saw kai in majijo sankyuu~
I'm looking forward the goukon :ding:

Thank you for reading. I really wonder what will happen next with Kai/Kazuki/Nami/Minami.....
I'm getting confused.....Don't worry, some will die off next chapter? Or following chapter?


Thanks for reading, and there's a reply button such that you guys can comment with. It makes me write up next chapters faster.  :theking
Sorry, this is actually a pretty short chapter....



Chapter 9

-Radio Station-

“Welcome back to All Night Nippon, I’m SDN48’s captain, Noro Kayo.”

“I’m Cindy.”

“Ohori Megumi, fufufufufufu.”

“Today, we have three special guests in the studio with us.” Noro announced as she saw that Ohori Megumi eye-ing the three boys in a ridiculously scandalous way.

“Osu, Persona’s Riku desu.”

“Osu, Kai desu.”

“Osu, Kuu desu.”

“So the three boys here, are here to promote their debut single 3seconds.” Cindy commented

“So how did you three meet?” Asked Noro.

“We met at an audition in which we all failed.” Riku replied.

“Luckily, Kamonohashi’s Shachou got to take a look at us and took a liking to us.” Kai added

“Ah! I mean, then we um…started under Kamonohashi Office.” Kuu’s sudden outburst was caused by none other than Ohori. Ohori likes all three of the boys but she likes them young and cute, as she played footsie with Kuu under the table causing Kuu to shutter.

Noro, who was completely obvious to what Ohori was doing, slapped her on the arm to remind her that they were on air and that if she wanted to continue, do it afterwards.

“What kind of girls do you three boys like? Like what are your types? I bet all your fans would love to know.” Asked Ohori as she emphasized the word love and directed it to Kuu.

“Ha? Um… A nice, interesting girl who I can respect and look up to.” Riku answered as he blushed slightly as Yuko’s face came to mind.

“A nice girl, who knows what her dream is and follows it.” Kai also blushed as Atsuko’s face came to mind.

“I don’t really know what my preferences are.” Kuu answered as he caught Ohori staring at him and turned away

“So are older girls ok with you?” Ohori especially asked Kuu.

“um….sure?” Kuu answered doubtfully.

“Fufufufufu.”

“Anyways, Kai-san, there has been rumors of you and Ray going out.” Noro asked to divert attention away from Ohori and Kuu

“No, we’re not going out. Kamonohashi is an off branch from Monkey Pro and um… Ray is just being helpful by leading and teaching us a bit and showing us the ropes.” Kai answered as he blushed tomato red as Noro made the assumption that he and Ray are going out.

Trying to give Kai a break from every radio show, TV show and varieties asking if Kai and Ray were dating, Riku changed the subject.

“Sorry, I have a question, why does Cindy-san’s photo have a Tiara on her head?” Riku asked as Noro and Ohori face palmed.

“YOU CAN SEE THE TIARA? Only cute people can see it.” Cindy got excited as Riku mentioned her Tiara

‘Now I know why Ohori-san and Noro-san face palmed…I really want to too…So hard to fight the urge to face palm.’ Thought Riku, as he just kept smiling to keep a professional profile up. To stop his palm from reaching his face, he gripped onto his knees and forced his hands down.

“Well, we have a new corner in our show such that we call one of the listeners so that they can talk to their idol which can be our guests here today or of course, us SDN48. Get out your phones now everyone.” Noro was told by the producer that if the listeners listed themselves on their webpage with their phone number that they may be able to talk to them as a special corner.

*Ring Ring*

“Moshi-moshi, Shinoda Mariko-san?” Noro asked.

‘How come that name sounds so familiar? Might be just my imagination.’ Riku felt that the name Shinoda Mariko had a familiar feeling to it but he just couldn’t put the name to the face.

*DEADLINE*

“Eh? We must have been cut off, let’s try again.”

*Busy tone*

“Ok, I guess that caller is out of luck, and the next caller is also out of luck cause we JUST ran out of time, sorry guys. Well that concludes our little cover for Persona, and for all the listeners out there, here’s their debut single 3seconds.”

*Airs 3seconds*

“Thank you very much you three.” Noro thanked the boys for coming in so late in the night.

“No, Thank you for having us here.” Riku as the leader had to be the most polite.

“Kuu, here’s my number, call me.” Ohori gave Kuu a piece of paper and a wink.

“Thank you?” Kuu shivered.

-Kamonohashi Office-

“Boys, we have good news and bad news, which would you like to hear first?” Marilyn asked.

“Bad news?” Riku chose

“Next week, your all full booked solid, for TV shows and what nots. So no school but a lot of work next week.” Marilyn said.

“That’s not really bad news, rather, it’s good news… then what’s the good news?” Kai asked

“You get the day off tomorrow to get ready for work.” Shachou answered

“YAY.” Kuu shouted.

“Me and Marilyn will not be home all day tomorrow…we have um… other things to do.” Shachou said as she gave Marilyn a seductive look. As Marilyn started to melt because of the look Shachou gave her.

The three boys shivered.

“No partying.” Shachou warned

“OSU.” The three boys answered.

-Bedroom-

“Nene~, let’s go out tomorrow.” Hinata said.

“We have school tomorrow.” Asahi rejected Hinata’s offer of going out.

“We’re skipping school all week next week so how would one more day affect it.” Hinata pointed out.

“I want to sleep in tomorrow.” Nami answered as she saw Hinata giving her a puppy dog face.

“Well, I do want to relax before our week of work.” Asahi added as Hinata’s face brightened up. Asahi thought that if Hinata had a tail, she would be wagging it around so much that it would have broken off already.

“Sigh… Ok fine…” Nami agreed to go out.

“YEY.” Hinata jumped up and put her fist through the air.

Hinata messaged Yuko

Yuko-chan, are you free tomorrow? If you are, we can go out.

Yuko’s replies are scaring-ly fast.

FOR SURE! When and what time?

Hinata answered,

How about Harajuku at 12pm, the other side of the bridge, away from the Meiji Shrine.

Yuko’s reply,
Ok, see you then.

‘HEH HEH HEH, FOOD! Hopefully, Asahi doesn’t kill me.’ Thought Hinata.

-Yuko’s room-

Yuko sent a message to Maeda and Sado, exactly the same ones,

Oi, we’re going out tomorrow. Meet at Harajuku at 12pm, other side of the bridge, away from the Meiji Shrine. You better be there.

‘What should I say to Torigoya?’ Yuko thought, ‘Is she still mad at me?’

Ne, Torigoya, are you free tomorrow? Let’s go out and have some fun? I have a surprise for you.

‘Torigoya, please come. Please say yes.’

Sorry, can’t. Have plans for tomorrow.

‘AHHH…She’s still mad at me.’ Yuko’s sad face showed up.

-Sado’s room-

‘Mhmm, sounds like fun.’

-Atsuko’s room-

‘Yuko-san is so demanding…but we have school tomorrow…’

Yuko-san, I can’t skip school so I can’t go.

‘Hopefully, Yuko-san can understand that I can’t skip school…’

You don’t have to worry about that, I got you covered. You know, that day I told you to help me out to? I got 6 skip class days from the principal so don’t worry.

‘I don’t really have a choice do I?”

Kazuki-kun, I'm sorry to bother you so late, but are you free tomorrow to go out?

‘I don’t want to go if Kazuki-kun isn’t going…’

Maeda-san, sorry, I just made plans to go out with a couple friends. But please don’t let me be the reason why you’re not going to hang out with your friends. I’ll feel horrible if it was.

‘Kazuki-kun…sigh…’ Atsuko pouts. ‘I guess I’ll go…better tell Gakuran and Daruma to go to school without me then.’

Sorry, I'm not going to school tomorrow.

-Other side of town-

‘That’s strange, Atsuko normally doesn’t skip school…something is up.’ Gakuran thought.


TBC

I'm trying really hard to think of AKB/SKE/SDN people that were not included in Majisuka and trying to include them in somehow or another....well, mainly AKB (and former AKB members that are now in SDN) since I don't know much from SKE/SDN and of course the new one NMB....

And just as a side note, it is NOT, I REPEAT, NOT bou-j525's fault that it's not a meeting in this chapter.
I felt like including other stuff so kill me if you wish but not bou-j525, I like her fanfics.
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 9)
Post by: RenaChii on March 03, 2011, 09:31:42 AM
I'M SO CURIOUS NOW~!!  :on lol:

Please update as soon as possible~  :pleeease:

Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 9)
Post by: bou-j525 on March 04, 2011, 02:51:50 AM
I'm sure it my fault and you don't want to say it (http://i959.photobucket.com/albums/ae80/bougie525/fear.gif) I know your secret! You want me to kill myself!!!  :panic: :panic: :panic:

...

 :nervous Overreaction  :nervous

Nice chapter  :lol: I look forward for the meeting. I really hope it's in the next chapter :D But I'm wondering... Won't Atsuko find it weird that ... what's his name already? *look* that Kazuki can never see her when she's with "others"? XD Same with Yuko about Torigoya XD Someday they will be like "Ok, this time, YOU COME!" at Kazuki and Torigoya, exactly when Kai and Riku will need to go too XD And Gakuran will move soon, I feel it...

I don't know why but I feel like I should stop talking and trying to guess things now... Update soon!  :grin:
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 9)
Post by: kahem on March 04, 2011, 09:23:36 AM
I like the SDN part especially meetan :thumbup
Riku trying to contain to facepalm, I can imagine it and I completly understand his situation lol
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 9)
Post by: hott3stson3 on March 05, 2011, 05:20:28 AM
ohnkalsngjrkenaekmnksaNnjbsnaiknbujfnvlakrv...fknav (thats me going crazy after seeing you updated your fic)
Lol  :lol:
Please!!!! Update soon, it was my first time reading your fic and i got into it sooo fast  :twothumbs :D
I've been literally checking like every 5 seconds to see if you've updated...when not actually 5 seconds more like 2  :P
but anyway...
PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOON!!!!
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 9)
Post by: mangobanana15 on March 07, 2011, 09:09:31 AM
sorry for replying soo late!!

lol its lucky you you said that side note or else bou-j525 would be in another world right now  :roll:

AWWWWW Aachan doesn't want to go unless Kazuki's goinggg.

man i'm gonna be seeing some problem if Kai and Kazuki are the same people

Once again yay for food loving Miichan! :lol:

Update soon!
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 9)
Post by: yourstruly on March 09, 2011, 11:39:35 PM
I'M SO CURIOUS NOW~!!  :on lol:
Please update as soon as possible~  :pleeease:

Good, I like to make people guess and become impatient with waiting  :twisted:

Nice chapter  :lol: I look forward for the meeting. I really hope it's in the next chapter :D But I'm wondering... Won't Atsuko find it weird that ... what's his name already? *look* that Kazuki can never see her when she's with "others"? XD Same with Yuko about Torigoya XD Someday they will be like "Ok, this time, YOU COME!" at Kazuki and Torigoya, exactly when Kai and Riku will need to go too XD And Gakuran will move soon, I feel it...
I don't know why but I feel like I should stop talking and trying to guess things now... Update soon!  :grin:

LOL, thank you =).
It's quite alright to keep guessing I dont mind...I like seeing other people's ideas then twisting it.....

I like the SDN part especially meetan :thumbup
Riku trying to contain to facepalm, I can imagine it and I completly understand his situation lol

It was so fun writing that part...I was grinning will I was writing....We have the same tastes ;)
As they say, great minds think alike...and we both think that part was fun so therefore we both have great minds

Please!!!! Update soon, it was my first time reading your fic and i got into it sooo fast  :twothumbs :D
I've been literally checking like every 5 seconds to see if you've updated...when not actually 5 seconds more like 2  :P
but anyway...
PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOON!!!!

I think it's an exaggration that you check every...5 or 2 seconds.... but thank you for liking my fanfic, I appreciate the support

sorry for replying soo late!!
lol its lucky you you said that side note or else bou-j525 would be in another world right now  :roll:
AWWWWW Aachan doesn't want to go unless Kazuki's goinggg.
man i'm gonna be seeing some problem if Kai and Kazuki are the same people
Once again yay for food loving Miichan! :lol:
Update soon!


It's ok, as they say, better late than never.....
I don't think you'd put bou-j525 in the other world...if you do that then there's gonna be a lot less fanfics....
I'm trying to make Atsuko and Kai a cute couple ish thing......
I foretell a lot of problems for Kai/Kazuki
I love Miichan =)



Please enjoy this chapter, as always, replies are well appreciated


Chapter 10

-Next Morning-

“WAKE UP NAMI! WAKE UP ASAHI!” Hinata, who seldom wakes up earlier than the rest started to jump from her bed to Nami’s to Asahi’s then back and forth from Nami’s and Asahi’s to make sure they get up.

“Argh…Hinata! What are you doing? It’s 9am.” Nami said with a pissed off face.

“I was planning on sleeping till noon today.” Asahi commented.

“We’ll now that we’re all up, let’s eat breakfast and go out.” Hinata was all pumped and ready to have some good food and fun today.

“Fine, I’ll let you off today. But don’t ever do this again on my day off.” Nami warned as she glared at Hinata.

Nami and Asahi started to choose their girl outfits for the day as Hinata interrupted,

“Oi, what are you guys doing?”

“What do you mean what are we doing? It’s obvious isn’t it? We’re choosing our outfits for today.” Replied Nami as she gave Hinata a weird look.

“Don’t you guys want to know how popular we are now?” Hinata asked

“I guess…but how do we do that?” Asahi asked as she felt that Hinata was hiding something from them.

“We’ll dress up as Persona but not with the usual outfits but like normal boy clothes but kinda hidden… like you know, idols or stars will wear like hats and face masks and sunglasses… well, I suggest we do the same.” Exclaimed Hinata.

“I guess that could be fun.” Asahi added as she started putting away her girl’s clothes and started picking out boys clothes.

‘I guess that is a good choice…since now that I know Atsuko is in Tokyo, there is always a chance that I may meet her again…’ thought Nami as she too, reluctantly put away her girl’s clothes too. 

After an hour of brushing themselves up, choosing and switching clothing, they were finally done and were completely satisfied with their outfits.
Riku, wore a white t-shirt with a simple but classy design on it, a pair of black jeans, and a pair of black loafers. To top it all off, he wore a black blazer, rolled up to the elbows. Classy but not the same as the one for work.

Kai, wore a white tank on the inside with a button up black shirt which was also rolled up to the elbows. The black shirt was buttoned but not the first and last buttons were left unbuttoned. A pair of blue jeans that had the design of washout and his signature black leather Jack Purcell’s.

Kuu, also wore a white tank but on the outside, he wore a blue plaid shirt. Like Kai, it was also rolled up to the elbows and the first and last buttons were left unbuttoned. A pair of dark blue jeans and a pair of white casual puma shoes.

The boys went downstairs and started to prepare breakfast of toast, scrambled eggs, and sausage.

As the boys sat down and ate, Riku and Kai noticed that Kuu was eating less than often.

“Maybe Kuu is saving room for lunch?” Kai whispered to Riku as they both kept looking at Kuu.

‘How should I get the others to wait at the bridge at 12? Hmmm… I can’t make it too suspicious… I bet Riku is going to kill me… all worth the trouble for food.’ Kuu thought. ‘Besides, they seem pretty fun.’

As the boys left home, they all put on their face masks and sunglasses.

-Harajuku 11am-

“Ne~ let’s meet up at 12pm at the bridge and go eat. I bet we all have things we want to buy and it’ll take too long if we go together.” Kuu suggested.

“But we have lots of time.” Riku said as he didn’t find the need to separate.

“Actually, I think that’s a good idea. I don’t really want to look at Lolita clothing.” Kai commented.

‘YES.’ Kuu thought.

“What do you mean by you don’t want to look at Lolita clothing? They are so great.” Kuu gave an angry pout.

“Fine, majority rules I guess.”

“So, 12pm at the bridge away from the shrine.” Kuu confirmed once more.

“Alright, ja.” Kai walked off as he was thankful for a day off, such that he can sort out his own feelings.

“Ok, I’ll see you later.” Riku walked off, opposite directions from Kai.

“Sweet… what should I do now?” Kuu said to himself.

-Riku-

‘Have I been too mean to Yuko? I swear, it’s Sado’s fault… How should I make it up to Yuko?’

Walks around shops and does window shopping. Riku stops in his track as he saw something that caught his eye, he knew right then that Yuko would like it. Riku went inside and bought it, but not without a little scene.

“Welcome.”

“Sorry, but could I get the bag in display please.” Riku asked as he took off his sunglasses and put it on his head, showing his glittering eyes that mesmerized the salesclerk.

“Sorry?”

“The bag, in the display window.” Riku once again confirmed

“Sorry, one moment please.” The salesclerk went to get the bag. “Thank you for waiting.”

“I’ll take it.”

“Is it for your girlfriend? Do you need it wrapped?” The salesclerk asked.

Riku blushed at the thought, as he answered, “No, it’s not for my girlfriend, I don’t have a girlfriend. It’s just for a friend. But if you could, could you please wrap it up?.”

‘Ah, I might have a chance.’ The clerk thought as she rang the item though and took money for the bag and gave back change.

“Sorry, we don’t have wrapping paper, but I have a box for it.”

“That’s fine. Thank you very much.”

“No no, thank you.” The salesclerk gave Riku the bag but not without slipping in a piece of paper with her phone number on it before hand.

-Kuu-

‘ICECREAM, CREPES, PARFAIT…FOOD! ‘ Kuu ran from shop to shop getting food and pigging out.

-Kai-

‘Alone at last.’ Kai thought as he went into a bookstore.

First things first, Kai went to the manga section and took a look at if One Piece had a new volume out. After spending 10 minutes browsing through mangas, he went towards the health section to take a look at Nurse books. Kai was engrossed with a nurse book, he decided to put the book down and take the one next to it as another person’s hand was trying to grab the same book. Kai accidentally grabbed the girl’s soft hand and he quickly felt a jolt of energy in him but left as quickly as he took his hand off and bowed to the girl to apologize.

“I’m so sorry.”

“Kazuki-kun?” Atsuko just knew as she felt the jolt of electricity in her like before, and this person’s eyes were the same as Kazuki-kun’s. She looked at Kazuki-kun and thought that he was well dressed in his shirt and jeans. And looked pretty cool with his sunglasses clipped on his shirt instead of putting it on his head.

“Eh? Maeda-san.”

“Kazuki-kun, I thought you said you were going to be out with your friends today.” Atsuko said as she pouted.

“I’m meeting up with them soon. More importantly, don’t you have school today.” Kai or rather Kazuki countered.

“My senpai’s would be unhappy if I didn’t skip with them.”

“As I said before, what kind of senpai’s do you have? Skipping and goukons?” Kazuki smiled as he thought that his Atsuko was returning. All the emotions that were hidden deep deep down inside her heart was floating up.

Both Kazuki and Atsuko were just pleased to have the other in their own presence as they continued to look at different nursing books.

“Are you interested in nursing?” Atsuko asked as she noticed that Kazuki-kun was engrossed with nursing books just like she was.

‘Shit, am I going to be found out…’

“Um, I just wanted to um…know more about you. No I meant, know how to take care of my wound or else I’d bet that you would feel guilty.” Kazuki blushed as he knew he said misleading things at first.

“Hmm, really now?” Atsuko said with a mischievous smile on her face.

“Yes really.” Kazuki answered as he looked at his phone and his smile became a small frown.

“What’s wrong?” Atsuko asked as she was totally aware that Kazuki-kun’s smiling face was not smiling anymore.

“Sorry, I need to go now and meet my friends.” Kazuki said as he had an apologetic face on.

“Hm, it’s ok, don’t worry about it. You told me that you were going out with your friends.” Atsuko said as the people around them in the bookstore felt that they had a cute couple vibe coming off the two.

“I’m really sorry, I’ll make it up to you next time.” Kazuki said with a wink and slowly, oh so slowly left.

“Ah! I better go too.” Atsuko took a look at her phone and she was in the same predicament as Kai, she didn’t want to be late either.

-Bridge-

Kuu was the first to arrive, followed by Riku. They were talking when Yuko and Sado walked towards them. As Riku saw the two girls, he gave Kuu a death glare saying that Kuu will die today and that he should say his prayers

Yuko and Sado, both very stylish.

Yuko was wearing a white t-shirt with a simple design, a black jacket, red and black checkered shorts, tights and golden sneakers.

Sado was wearing a short one piece that had horizonatal black and white lines on the top and on the bottom was just like a black skirt. A red belt on the one piece, with a short sleeved gray hoody. To top it all off, she was wearing black 2” heels.

As they approached Kuu gave an appreciated whistle to the two girls.

“Good afternoon.” Riku mumbled as he tightened his hold on his shopping bag.

As the 2 boys and 2 girls started to chatter, Kai jumped the 2 boys from behind and scared them.

“BOO!” Kai shouted causing the 2 boys to shout in surprise.

“AHHHH!” Kuu and Riku screamed earning looks from Yuko, Sado and the pass-byers since it sounded girly

“Don’t you dare do that again.” Riku warned as he already had a pissed off look on his face.

That was then Kai started to look around him as he saw Yuko and Sado. Kai knew then why Riku was in a bad mood but gave the two girls a wave and said a hi.

“Shall we get going now?” Kai asked as he had his arms around both RIku and Kuu.

“We’re waiting for one more person.” Yuko announced. “There she is, Maeda, over here” Yuko pointed off into a direction and the three boys looked.

‘SHIT.’ Kai thought as Atsuko approached the group.

TBC



I really wasn't going to update anytime soon because of my HUGE lack of motivation to do anything right now.....
BUT since it's Bou-j525's birthday, I'll update....
I don't know when I will be motivated again....so enjoy this chapter while you can, cause I totally don't know when I'll finish the next one  :theking
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 10)
Post by: mangobanana15 on March 10, 2011, 01:07:27 AM
darn you're totally right. bou-j525 is too important for me to kill.  :smhid

hahaha Miichan just doesn't stop eating does she?

aww what a nice short takaachan moment here. LOL Takamina is in a funny situation wonder what she's gonna do

I hope you update soon! Here's some smileys for a bit of motivation! :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 10)
Post by: bou-j525 on March 10, 2011, 02:15:35 AM
Thank for the update! Right for my birthday, THAAAANK  :grin: :grin: :grin: Love you  :grin: :grin: :grin:

I.CANT.BELIEVE.YOU.HAVE.A.LACK.OF.MOTIVATION.NOW TT_______TT  :cry: What can I do to help you?!?  :? Huum... I actually know how you feel since I myself am in a lack of motivation right now   :nervous
Please, update soon! I wanna know what is going to happen between them! Because Acchan thinks Kai is Kazuki right now -.-' So I wonder what will happen......... WHYYYYY  :banghead:
Come on, let's bring back motivation  :theking  :) :w00t: :bow: :D :grin: 8) Ok, I know it is hard to bring motivation back  :smhid YOU CAN DO IT!!!
I'll be waiting  :twothumbs
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 10)
Post by: RenaChii on March 10, 2011, 07:02:42 AM
I have nothing to say to you~  :on drink:

 :on cny2: PLEASE JUST KEEP UPDATING~!!  :byebye:
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 10)
Post by: aoi_sora on March 14, 2011, 09:39:39 AM
 :w00t: :w00t: :w00t: :w00t:
 :heart: this fic......
Ill be waiting for update!!!!!
 :D :D :w00t:
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 10)
Post by: hott3stson3 on March 15, 2011, 04:20:27 AM
Okay maybe i did exaggerate...a bit~  :P XD
U never know, maybe i do~ (I honestly have no life... XD :lol:)
Anyway...U Updated!!!! GaAaAaAaA!!!!
Thank you kami-sama (god) lol
Please update soon!!
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 10)
Post by: Alexander on March 24, 2011, 04:21:02 AM
cliffhanger! asdffggsfafdaskfdasjfkdgls I wonder what will happen if Acchan met Kai because you know she know that Kai's name is Kazuki and lol at the girly screams
I really like your fic
please update soon
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 10)
Post by: kahem on March 28, 2011, 11:32:00 PM
Can't wait for update!!!!! ^^
By the way I agree we have great mind ;)
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 10)
Post by: yourstruly on March 31, 2011, 12:14:24 AM
darn you're totally right. bou-j525 is too important for me to kill.  :smhid
hahaha Miichan just doesn't stop eating does she?
aww what a nice short takaachan moment here. LOL Takamina is in a funny situation wonder what she's gonna do
I hope you update soon! Here's some smileys for a bit of motivation! :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D

bou-j525 is WAYYY too important to me too....I love her fanfics too ;)
Miichan will never stop eating...you should know that by now.......
Maybe some more takaacchan moment here? I dunno...GO READ IT NOW....then press reply and tell me what you think
Thank you very much for your motivation

Thank for the update! Right for my birthday, THAAAANK  :grin: :grin: :grin: Love you  :grin: :grin: :grin:
I.CANT.BELIEVE.YOU.HAVE.A.LACK.OF.MOTIVATION.NOW TT_______TT  :cry: What can I do to help you?!?  :? Huum... I actually know how you feel since I myself am in a lack of motivation right now   :nervous
Please, update soon! I wanna know what is going to happen between them! Because Acchan thinks Kai is Kazuki right now -.-' So I wonder what will happen......... WHYYYYY  :banghead:
Come on, let's bring back motivation  :theking  :) :w00t: :bow: :D :grin: 8) Ok, I know it is hard to bring motivation back  :smhid YOU CAN DO IT!!!
I'll be waiting  :twothumbs

I only updated because it was your birthday....good thing birthday's dont come every week ;)
BTW, I'm still in lack of motivation.....you call burn my school down for me then motivation will come back
I love ending in cliffhangers....makes people start wondering and guessing and wanting to read more....
I updated so your turn? =D

I have nothing to say to you~  :on drink:
 :on cny2: PLEASE JUST KEEP UPDATING~!!  :byebye:

Since you have nothing to say to me, I have nothing to update...
JUST KIDDING......this is an update =)

:heart: this fic......
Ill be waiting for update!!!!!

LOL, :heart: you too for always replying me

Okay maybe i did exaggerate...a bit~  :P XD
U never know, maybe i do~ (I honestly have no life... XD :lol:)

I don't mind the exaggeration, makes me feel good about myself ;)

cliffhanger! asdffggsfafdaskfdasjfkdgls I wonder what will happen if Acchan met Kai because you know she know that Kai's name is Kazuki and lol at the girly screams
I really like your fic
please update soon

Well, lucky day, you will find out when you read this chapter.
I like your fanfic too, update soon =)

Can't wait for update!!!!! ^^
By the way I agree we have great mind ;)

I agree that you agree that we have a great mind =)


Without further ado, I present you with Chapter 11 of Lies,
Don't kill me for taking so long, if you must kill someone, kill my teachers, I had lots of homework = no free time = no time to write

and AX was out this month.....LALALALALALALALALALALALALA....
totally wasn't replaying it again and again along with Aki Matsuri..........................

Thank you for reading as always





Chapter 11
 
*Awkward silence*

Atsuko was looking at Kazuki as Kazuki was staring back at her. The other boys and girls all noticed the Kai’s aura changed from surprised to horrified.

‘Do I pretend to know her or not? Do I tell her I’m Kai or Kazuki? Ahhhhhh… Why did I not just tell her my name was Kai in the beginning! Now I'm so screwed.’ Kai’s brain was in overload as the street was full of people passing by, with some girls taking a quick look at the boys and stopped in their tracks as they thought that they looked familiar.

‘People are starting to notice us.’ Thought Riku.

“Let me introduce myself, I’m Ruki.” Riku lied as the girls that stopped in their tracks looked disappointed.

“Oh, I’m Kuro.” Kuu played along with Riku.

“I’m Kazuki.” Kai sighed in relief as Riku saved his ass. The girls that were staring at the group all left disappointed that none of the boys, however resembling the boys from Persona, were not actually either of three boys.

“This is Maeda Atsuko, she’s my kouhai so be nice to her.” Yuko introduced Atsuko but Yuko felt that Kai or Kazuki now, knows Atsuko and vice versa.

“Let’s go have some fun today. YEY!” Kuu exclaimed, as he earned looks from Sado, who was silently and discreetly trying to shut him up with glares as he was attracting a lot of attention and is embarrassing her.

As the group of six started walking around and shopping, they broke up into pairs as they shopped around. Kuu with Yuko, Riku with Sado, and Kai with Atsuko.

Kuu and Yuko were having tons of fun making fun of weird articles of clothing while Riku and Sado looked over them as if they were the parents. Making sure that they don’t cause trouble, while in the corner of the store, Kai was with Atsuko. Kai and Atsuko were giving off the vibes of couples, as they were actually looking at clothing, with Atsuko putting it in front of herself and asking Kai’s opinion. Kai and Atsuko were unaware that the other four were paying attention to their interactions as they were 5 to 10 meters apart from the rest of the group.

Off in a secluded corner, someone who was basically all dressed in black was fuming as the scene of Kai trying on a ridiculous looking hat that Atsuko picked out. Atsuko was laughing while Kai, with his mask on, seemed amused at the sight of Atsuko having a good time. ‘I will get back even.’ Thought the person in black as the group left the store and decided not to follow them anymore.

As they left the store, Kuu’s stomach gave a well timed growl as the rest of the group started to get hungry as well, it reminded them what time it was, lunch time. As the group settled down at a local family restaurant, their seating arrangements were Riku in between Kai and Kuu, across from Riku was Yuko, Sado across from Kuu and lastly Atsuko across from Kai.

“I’m so tired and hungry.” Kuu said as he was contemplating between a white sauce spaghetti with prawns or curry beef.

“Well, I’ve decided, I’m getting hamburger steak.” Yuko said.

“Are you ready to order?” A server came by and asked.

“Yup, I want hamburger steak.”

“Curry pork.” Sado coldly said to the server.

“Grilled mackerel set please.” Atsuko politely said.

“Well, since Sado is having Curry, I want white sauce spaghetti with prawns.” Kuu thought that maybe he could steal a bite off Sado’s plate and satisfy his craving for curry while he has his favorite prawns.

“Katsu-don.” Kai said as Katsu-don was his favorite food of all time.

“Omelet rice please.” Riku didn’t know what to eat so he randomly picked omelet rice.

As they were waiting for their orders to arrive, Kai’s phone rung as he got a message.

Kai~ I miss you so much. What are you doing? Are you free? Maybe we can go out. You better not be cheating on me with other girls. Don’t even look at them, you can only look at me. Since I’m not beside you, I’ve attached a photo of myself so that you don’t need to look at other girls, just look at my picture. I know a picture of me isn’t enough but don’t worry, because I’m yours, we will one day get married and you can look at me all the time, maybe in bed and under the sheets too.

A photo of Ray in a white bikini was attached, with Ray leaning down towards the camera showed her assets very well with a lot of cleavage.

As Kai read the message, he wanted to puke and his whole face changed from happy with friends to back off if you want to live as he popped a blood vessel when he finished reading the message.

“Kazuki-kun…Kazuki-kun, are you ok?” Atsuko asked as she was worried about him.

“I’m fine.” Kai said as he gritted his teeth but his expression soften as he looked into Atsuko’s eyes. Kai decided to ignore Ray and just closed his phone up and putted it back into his pants pocket.

As the food came, everyone was so hungry that they just ate without talking. The boys took off their masks as their food came but since the girl’s food came first, no one really noticed their faces. Well, at least Atsuko didn’t notice. Kai and Kuu is normally a messy eater so food got all over their faces while Riku was eating his omelet rice gracefully. Sado, who was eating her curry noticed that Riku wasn’t like most boys who are rude and immature but is actually well mannered and graceful with a hint of air-headedness.

Kuu, noticed Sado paying attention to Riku and not to her food, so he took his clean spoon and sponged off a bit of curry and rice off of Sado. When Sado finally noticed that her precious curry had been defiled by the villain who was now licking his spoon clean from the evidence. Kuu gave Sado a look that said, I didn’t steal your food. While Sado kept glaring at Kuu, from Riku, Kai, Yuko, and Atsuko’s point of view, they swore they saw daggers in Sado’s glares as Kuu continued with his own food.

Yuko tried to ease the tension as she stole some of Riku’s omelet rice.

“Delicious.” Yuko exclaimed as she began to lick her spoon clean of rice.

Riku was shocked, Yuko didn’t even change spoons as she stole his food. ‘When did I become so close with Yuko such that she’s comfortable enough to share food with me…a guy? It’s highly irregular as only couples or really close friends would share. Aren’t we just friends?’ 

Yuko started to blush a slight pink, not very noticeable but pink nevertheless. ‘Opps, bad move Yuko. How come my body reacts like normal with Riku, as if… as if he was her…Torigoya. No, bad Yuko, I can’t cheat on Torigoya.’ Yuko thought.

“You have Katsu-don all over your face.” Atsuko said with a smile. Kai started to clean his face off with a napkin. “Not there, over here.” Atsuko took his napkin and cleaned his face. As Atsuko took a good look at his face, she paused.

“Can someone tell me what’s going on over there with the two love-birds?” Yuko whispered to the other three.

“Let’s just sit back and enjoy the show.” Sado said as she herself didn’t know either and was hoping for an answer through the scene unrolling before their eyes.

‘Minami?’ Atsuko thought as she saw a slight blush appear on Kai’s face so she quickly moved away and excused herself to the washroom.

-Ladies Washroom-

“Minami…Kazuki-kun resembles Minami…does Minami have siblings other than Erena? A long lost twin?” Atsuko tried to cool herself down as she washed her face in cold water.

*Knock Knock*

(From the outside) “Maeda-san, are you ok in there?” Kai asked.

Atsuko quickly opened the door and pulled Kai into the washroom and locked it.

“Minami…” Atsuko said aloud.

‘SHIT SHE KNOWS.’ Kai thought as he acted like normal.

“Who’s Minami?” Kai asked as he acted slightly confused about the outburst from Atsuko.

‘Yeah, there’s no possible way that Kazuki would know… Minami in heaven is looking after me by sending a Minami look-a-like…’ Atsuko thought as she smiled slightly.

“I…had a friend called Minami… She was my best friend.” Atsuko started. “You resemble her so much… I nearly mistaken you for her…”

‘What should I say now? How do I politely move away from this dangerous topic without sounding insensitive?.’ Kai’s thought were interrupted as Atsuko started talking again.

“It’s all my fault that she isn’t here with me anymore.” Atsuko started to lightly sob. “I…killed her.”

“It’s not your fault, you didn’t kill her, if you did, you would be in jail.” Kai said as he tried to disagree with the statement of Minami’s cause of death.

‘She didn’t even die… She’s right in front of you… Please don’t cry.’ Kai couldn’t take it anymore and engulfed Atsuko in a hug.

“It’s ok to let it all out. I’ll always lend you my shoulder.” Kai reassured Atsuko the only way he knew how, silent encouragement of being beside the other and listening to her problems.

“I’m sorry, I think I feel better now.” Atsuko said as her eyes are still red

“If your better now, then can I see your beautiful smile?.” Kai asked as Atsuko blushed slightly and gave a small smile but noticeable.

“Ok then, let’s go back to the others.” Kai said as he felt relieved that Atsuko didn’t realize Kai/Kazuki and Minami are one and the same person.

‘Atsuko, I’m sorry.’

-Back at the table-

“So the two love-birds are finally back from their washroom break together.” Yuko said as Atsuko and Kai sat back at their respectfully places.

“You go Ka…Kazuki, you sly dog you.” Kuu said as he grinned.

‘Almost slipped up there. Kai is such a player.’ Kuu thought, ‘He has Ray and now Atsuko too…’

As the three boys had their masks off, the people around them in the restaurant were starting to notice them. The people around them couldn’t put a finger to it but for some odd reason, they remember them from somewhere, but where? As the other tables started to remember the three boys quickly put their masks back on, and left the restaurant with Riku paying for everyone as he got the bands spending allowance for the week.

After lunch, the day was still young as it was only 2:30 in the afternoon so they decided to go karaoke since it’s less exposure for the boys which was suggested by Sado. Sado just didn’t like the attention they were getting since she was never really use to being in the spotlight.

-Karaoke-

As they settled down into the Karaoke room, Atsuko was curious about how come they were getting so much attention today while they were shopping and eating lunch asked,

“Are you guys famous or something?”

“You found out.” Yuko said as she kept smiling.

“Kind of, not really. We three are Persona. I’m Riku.” Riku said

“I’m Kuu.” Kuu gave Atsuko a wink

“I’m Kai, sorry for lying to you.” Kai said as he gave a bow as a symbol of apology.

“Sorry, I still don’t really understand.” Atsuko gave a slight smile as she was still confused…

‘Ruki=Riku? Kuro=Kuu? Kazuki=Kai? Who are they?’ Atsuko’s head was spinning.

“We just debuted as a three man band. Our first single will be out next week.” Riku explained

“Then how do you know Yuko-san?” Atsuko started to understand but if they were famous, why would they hang out with Yankee’s.

“We filmed our PV at Majisuka, there, I got to know Yuko-chan and got her contact information so we just planned an outing.” Kuu replied.

“Oh…ok…”

“Enough of the chit-chat, let’s sing.” Yuko’s sudden outburst made everyone shift gears from serious talk to let’s have fun.

-An hour later-

“Sorry, I need to go to the washroom.” Riku excused himself as Kuu and Kai just followed him so that they can all go together to the men’s washroom Kuu and Kai were holding it since they got to the Karaoke place but they just didn’t want to go alone.

The three boys left, leaving the girls alone.

“Riku really needs to let loose sometimes.” Yuko said as she started to sip her tomato juice

“Kuu needs to shut up, he gets on my nerves all the time.” Sado gritted at the thought of Kuu.

“Kai…” Atsuko didn’t notice that she said Kai’s name aloud.

“So, what about you and Kai?” Yuko asked.

“Ha? What? Nothing? What are you talking about?” Atsuko started to panic a bit.

“Mhmm, so this is your nothing? Getting all nervous at the thought of Kai?” Sado teased.

“Oh shit!” Yuko exclaimed as she accidentally spilled her tomato juice on Riku’s shopping bag. Sado helped clean the table as Atsuko went out the room to find more tissue. Yuko took out the box and started cleaning the juice off and opened the box to make sure that no stains were made. As Yuko took out the bag that was in the box, she instantly fell in love with the bag.

‘Ahh, it’s so nice… I’m so envious… I wonder who it’s for? Riku has a lover?’ Yuko thought as she examined the bag. ‘Shit, it stained the bottom a bit…Hopefully he doesn’t find out.’

The mess was all cleaned and everything was put back into place before the boys got back. They all continued to sing and have fun. As it was getting late, each of the boys took a girl home as they were gentleman.

-Yuko’s front steps-

“I had a great time today, thank you for accompanying me the whole day.” Kuu said

“Me too, maybe we can do it again soon.” Yuko added.

“For sure, maybe the next time, just you and me, and not the sky scraper.” During Karaoke, Sado and Kuu kept bickering and Kuu thought of a nickname for Sado, sky scraper, since she was the tallest out of the whole group.

“I swear, you and Sado are really good friends.” Yuko said as she was thoroughly amused at the sight of Sado opening up to someone other than her and the queens.

“Ew, no. blegh.” Kuu made barfing sounds to the thought of Sado and him being good friends.

-Sado’s front steps-

“Well, good night.” Riku said

“That’s all you have to say to me? I know your hiding something Riku. Is Riku even your real name?” Sado was always the brighter of the two top’s in Rappapa.

‘Oh no.’

-Atsuko’s front steps-

“Well, this is it.”

“Thanks for taking me home, Kazuki-kun… I meant Kai-kun.” Atsuko corrected herself but felt stupid because she mixed up the names for the billionth time today after the announcement of his real name.

“It’s ok, it’s my fault. I should have told you.” Kai said as he looked down to the floor.

“It’s ok, I had fun today.” Atsuko smiled as Kai looked up to her face.

As Atsuko started to her front doors, she tripped. Kai, out of reflex, caught Atsuko but since they were both unbalanced, they came down to the floor with Kai on the bottom and Atsuko on top. As if in slow-motion replay, Kai grabbed Atsuko and pulled her close such that when they fell onto the floor, Atsuko would be unscratched but since Atsuko is taller than Kai, Kai pulled Atsuko face close to himself. In doing that, as they fell, Atsuko’s lips lightly brushed Kai’s cheeks. Atsuko blushed a deep red as she got off Kai and ran to the door.

“Thank you and good night.” Atsuko closed the door behind her.

Kai was shocked but even more so, blushed a bright red as he touched the part of his cheek that Atsuko placed her lips. “Good night?”

TBC...

I'm really sorry it took so long....School sucks as usual and my work ethnics is that I get the next chapter done before I post the current chapter.... and the next chapter was a bitch for me to write....and now I'm starting on chapter 13 which is also a bitch......I don't think me and this relationship with writing fanfics will last very long......

 :theking
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 11)
Post by: RenaChii on March 31, 2011, 05:08:17 AM
 :mon squee:

WANT MORE~!!  :mon XD:

THANK YOU~!!  :mon fyeah:

 :mon determined:
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 11)
Post by: mangobanana15 on March 31, 2011, 06:04:44 AM
Cool you updated!

I was so afraid things might go wrong but yea it worked out perfectly

especially for Takamina getting a kiss on the cheek by Aachan :D

Woah when Haruna gives Yuko the bag she might see the stains and start thinking

hahaha Miichan and Sado arguing is just so funny

I don't mind waiting at all as long as you don't give up on the story! Don't get yourself too stressed!
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 11)
Post by: aoi_sora on March 31, 2011, 09:20:28 AM
wow!!!! update!!!!
 :cow: :cow: :cow:
i was expecting an angry Gakuran!
hahahahaha!
but its Ok!

this is so cute!

Quote
‘Opps, bad move Yuko. How come my body reacts like normal with Riku, as if… as if he was her…Torigoya. No, bad Yuko, I can’t cheat on Torigoya.’ Yuko thought.
Yuko makes me smile in this part!  :)

as expected of Sado-sama!!!  :panic:

and Kai got a kiss from Maeda!  :twothumbs

thanks for the update!!!!!
update soon! :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D

Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 11)
Post by: kahem on March 31, 2011, 10:25:47 AM
I agree that you agree that I agree that we have great mind XD

I was smilling even before read ypur fic when I saw you updated lol
Can't wait for the scene when Torigoya will give the bag to Yuko ^^
Minami & Atsuko moment = win  :twothumbs
Miichan ahahahah this character would always make me smile
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 10)
Post by: bou-j525 on April 01, 2011, 01:20:50 AM
 :grin: Thank for telling me I'm important...... but stop it, it's embarassing  :nervous

I don't think me and this relationship with writing fanfics will last very long......

OOoohhhh.... I don't know why but I just had the urge to quote this and say +1  :thumbup Seriously, with me it's always "omg I want to start a fanfic! I'm motivated yeah!" and like 2/3 months later I'm like "Hell why did I decide to start a fic when I freaking don't have idea/time" -.-'

But back to your fic. Thank for updating! I'll do the same soon... ... maybe. XD
LOL that's what I call being saved, right Kai? :P But seriously, he's stupid to have told her he was Kazuki when he could just have said he was "Kai" -.-' I was expecting Gakuran to come... but maybe he'd rather kill Kazuki/Kai in secret :P  Poor Atsuko... I'm kinda beginning to dislike Minami to lie this way to her best friend  :smhid
And can't wait for whatever is going to happen between Yuko and Torigoya ^^

Good luck with your lack of motivation and come back with another chapter as soon as you can!  :theking
EDIT: New page! Yay for you! XD
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 11)
Post by: hott3stson3 on April 05, 2011, 04:43:36 AM
 :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic:
They kissed.....they....kissed....they kissed.... OMG they kissed!!!
uh-oh.....Kai vs Gakuran..ITS TO MUCH!!
Please update soon  :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow:
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 11)
Post by: yourstruly on April 08, 2011, 01:08:49 AM
WANT MORE~!! 
THANK YOU~!!

I want more time to write too...but things don't always work out the way we want it =(

Cool you updated!
I was so afraid things might go wrong but yea it worked out perfectly
especially for Takamina getting a kiss on the cheek by Aachan :D
Woah when Haruna gives Yuko the bag she might see the stains and start thinking
hahaha Miichan and Sado arguing is just so funny
I don't mind waiting at all as long as you don't give up on the story! Don't get yourself too stressed!

I don't want Acchan to know yet so Kai/Nami has it easy...in the end...MUAHAHAHAHAHA she's gonna die >=D I'm kidding....
I guess I'm putting too much foreshadowing....
Thanks for waiting =) hope you won't wait too long for the next chapter

i was expecting an angry Gakuran!
hahahahaha!
but its Ok!

Oh, don't you worry, that's coming soon....MAYBE =)

I agree that you agree that I agree that we have great mind XD

I was smilling even before read ypur fic when I saw you updated lol
Can't wait for the scene when Torigoya will give the bag to Yuko ^^
Minami & Atsuko moment = win  :twothumbs
Miichan ahahahah this character would always make me smile

;)
LOL I'm smiling just because I saw your reply....
The scene with Torigoya giving the bag to Yuko will come soon...I promise?
Does that mean you'd like more Takacchan moment rather than say....KojiYuu? I dunno man, KojiYuu is like funnier but Takacchan is cute.....mhmm
Miichan....what can I say, she's the best =)

:grin: Thank for telling me I'm important...... but stop it, it's embarassing  :nervous
I don't think me and this relationship with writing fanfics will last very long......
OOoohhhh.... I don't know why but I just had the urge to quote this and say +1  :thumbup Seriously, with me it's always "omg I want to start a fanfic! I'm motivated yeah!" and like 2/3 months later I'm like "Hell why did I decide to start a fic when I freaking don't have idea/time" -.-'
But back to your fic. Thank for updating! I'll do the same soon... ... maybe. XD
LOL that's what I call being saved, right Kai? :P But seriously, he's stupid to have told her he was Kazuki when he could just have said he was "Kai" -.-' I was expecting Gakuran to come... but maybe he'd rather kill Kazuki/Kai in secret :P  Poor Atsuko... I'm kinda beginning to dislike Minami to lie this way to her best friend  :smhid
And can't wait for whatever is going to happen between Yuko and Torigoya ^^
Good luck with your lack of motivation and come back with another chapter as soon as you can!  :theking
EDIT: New page! Yay for you! XD

But it's so fun making you embarrassed though, taking all my fun away? tsk tsk tsk...
It's like so I dunno, at first I was itching to write but now it's like....meh.....LOL
I guess, in my fanfic, Kai is really lucky....maybe I should make him unlucky soon.....>=D
Gakuran can be very evil...I promise....I already thought of a way of how Gakuran gets back at Kai but that comes later....maybe in like 3-4 chapters later....GAKURAN IS EVIL I TELL YOU.....EVILLLLLLL....that's my story and I'm sticking to it.
Yuko and Torigoya moments are like the easiest and funniest to write for me...so that's coming pretty soon.....
THIS WAS THE CHAPTER THAT I WAS STUCK ON FOR THE LONGEST TIME....so if it sucks I'M SORRY....

They kissed.....they....kissed....they kissed.... OMG they kissed!!!
uh-oh.....Kai vs Gakuran..ITS TO MUCH!!
Please update soon 

So you're satisfied with only a kiss on the cheek? Wow, you're easy to please, not that that is a bad thing or anything.....
Kai vs Gakuran= BOXING MATCH?... (Referee: "READY TO FIGHT? GO!"  *Audience yells "FIGHT FIGHT FIGHT FIGHT"*)
Wish granted? Maybe?



I'm really sorry if this chapter sucks but this is the chapter that I was stuck on the whole time.....IT SUCKS....I AGREE....but it's needed to move things on.......

Thanks for reading


Chapter 12

-Next week-

“Mhmm, what happened to them?” Marilyn asked as throughout the week, the three boys were spaced out whenever they had free time and not on screen.

“Something that they weren’t suppose to…” Shachou said as squinted her eyes at them.

“At least there are no bad rumors or anything…and you don’t have to worry that they are running around the place.” Marilyn said as she wanted to ease the kids some pain from the maybe whipping they will get.

“I guess…”

“We will now start soon.” A staff came into their waiting room to warn them that should be entering the filming area.

“Hai.” Riku was the first to snap out of his state of blankness and shook the other two out of their thoughts.

-On set-

MC asked the boys about their first meeting, how they were made into the group Persona, how’d they feel about their new single and all that fun stuff, such that people could be more aware of their existence. As time was nearing to an end, the MC started on a brand new topic.

“Have you guys heard of idols that you can meet on like a daily basis?” The MC asked as the boys looked at each other confused. “Well, in other words, competition. A well known producer, Akimoto Yasushi, is trying to create a new girl group whose goal is normal idols that you can meet.  Just like SDN48, but for any type of audience, not just older audience like for SDN48 but for kids your age too.”

“That sounds like a lot of fun.” Kuu commented.

“Well, the main details aren’t confirmed yet but it seems like this is a fresh new concept that hasn’t been touched on. How do you guys feel about competition?” The MC asked as the boys all looked confident.

“As they say, with rivalries one can get better at what they do.” Riku said

“Even if they are girls, I’m not backing down.” Kai added

“Maybe we might be able to become friends. No one can ever have enough friends.” Kuu said as he thought that those girls might share the same interests as her…Lolita clothing….

“Well said. That’s all the time we have today, we’ll end off by showing Persona’s PV for their debut single 3seconds.”

-Off air-

“Good job boys, hopefully I’ll see you guys soon.” The MC person said.

“Thank you very much.” The three boys said in sync and soon afterwards, they excused themselves.

-Waiting room-

“Ahh, so nice…how come they decide to have a massive girl group AFTER we debut as men.” Riku was still displeased with the fact that he had to debut as male instead of who he truly is…a female.

“Hinata also wants to be female.” Kuu said as he went back to referring himself in third person perspective.

“Too late now, what’s done is done.” Kai said as he was thankful that he didn’t debut as female since it would cause a lot more headaches than the ones he has now. But one of the problems that he would be willing to trade away would be the diva. Kai shivered.

‘I just shivered…my inner senses are tingling…RAY.’ Kai thought as his sensors were right on the mark.

“KAI! I missed you so much. Did you miss me?” Ray came running in and latched onto Kai at first instinct.

“Ray-san, were kind of busy…” Kai said as he totally noticed the other two smirk at the predicament that he’s in.

“But you never call or message me… I was thought you were too busy for me...” Ray said as she continued into a more dead panned voice thereafter, “either that, or you’re cheating on me.”

“What?!?! No. No. I'm not cheating on you.” Kai said as he blushed red while his hand unconsciously touched the cheek where Atsuko’s lips brushed past.

“That’s right, Kai would never cheat on me.” Ray said in bliss.

“Wait, what? Cheating on you? But we’re not even going out. Regardless, I couldn’t have been cheating on you.” Kai rephrased his words.

“I thought you said that we’re moving into a relationship.” Ray said as she had a frown on and her eyes were watering to the point where tears would stream down any moment.

“Kai.” Shachou said in a high pitch and did a hand motion of cracking a whip.

‘I can’t…disobey…’

“As I’ve said before, I’ve only met you twice so far, you have to give me time. Start things slowly. Most importantly, friends first.” Kai said

“Well, if you move in with me then you can see me every day.” Ray said with a grin

“Have you ever had friends who you’ve met twice and had them move in with you? I bet you, you have not.”

“But you could be the first.” Ray said as she blushed slightly.

“No Ray, to me, work comes first.” Kai said

“Well, we can duet then work and love will come first.”

“I’m really happy about how you feel about me, but I like the people I’m working with right now.” Kai looked at Riku, Kuu, Marilyn and Shachou.

“More than me?” Ray started to pout and sadly look down to the floor.

“You’re a special case.”

‘Me and my big mouth, it just won’t shut up. Either that or I just don’t think before I speak, do I?’ Kai thought as Ray engulfed him in a hug.

‘You mean a total nut case.’ Riku thought as he started feeling bad for Kai. ‘This is just like Yuko and me but I have it easier, I can push her away…Kai can’t, or he’s not allowed to.’

Ray let Kai off from her hug as she clapped her hands and her body guard came in and placed a box on the table with a couple plates and forks, and a knife.

“Kai, I made you a cake. I hope you like it.” Ray looked shy as she started opening the box. “It’s my first time and I’m sharing that with you. Hopefully, of many first times.” Ray gave a seductive look towards Kai.

Kai’s eyes started twitching as he took a good look at the cake…especially the color of the cake, BLUE. ‘It’s got to be food coloring to spice things up…’ Kai tried to reason to himself.

“Mhmm, tastes good.” Kuu took a taste of the cake’s blue cream.

“Bleh, it’s…something else.” Riku said as he also took a small taste.

“It’s not for you two, it’s all for Kai.” Ray stared at the two boys who defiled her beloved cake for Kai.

Kuu pouted as he really liked the taste of the cake, the cake’s taste is out of this world. Riku just looked happy to be out of the task of eating the cake.
Kai took a fork and forked some cake and shoved it down his throat. The taste made him want to puke out last night’s dinner.

“Kai, I’m going to the washroom. I’ll be right back.” Ray said as she looked happy as Kai ate her cake.

“Quickly, shove the cake behind the coach.” Riku said as Kuu didn’t understand why they had to hide the cake. Kai shoved the cake behind the coach as Kuu pouted.

“Kai, you finished my cake.” Ray came back and saw that the cake was all gone. Ray was really happy that Kai appreciated her cake.

“Yeah…it was different from store bought ones.” Kai said

“Yeah it tasted so much better.” Kuu said

“Thanks, but the cake was for Kai.” Ray glared at Kuu again.

Kai put his hand on Ray’s shoulder to calm her down.

“It’s ok, I like to share.”

“But I made it especially for Kai.” Ray pouted

“And I finished the cake. Don’t worry.” Kai lied, “Don’t you have work?”

“Mhmm, but Kai’s here and not at work with me, so I’d rather stay here.”

The day didn’t end without Kai having to promise Ray out to a date when they were both free. Kai only promised to, one, get the diva out of his hair…literally, Ray loves to feel Kai’s hair though her hands and fingers, two, so that they can get back to work and lastly, three, for her to leave.

-Kamonohashi Office-

“I don’t feel so well.” Nami said as she got changed out of her Persona outfit.

“Here, Pepto-Bismol.” Asahi brought Nami a glass of water and Pepto-Bismol.

‘I think we should be sponsored by Pepto-Bismol…Nami gets poisonous food from Ray and Hinata just eats way too much.’ Asahi thought.

“At least you get to rest tonight and tomorrow, we have school tomorrow.” Hinata said as she was unimpressed that, one, they have to go to school tomorrow even though she hasn’t gotten more than 12 hours of sleep throughout the past 5 days and two, Nami and Asahi threw out the cake Ray made.

“…itai…I’m just going to lie in bed.” Nami slowly made her way to her bed and lied down.

“I want icecream.” Hinata made her way downstairs.

‘I should talk to Yuko, I’ve ignored her for a week.’ Asahi thought.

Yuko, sorry for disappearing for a week, I was really sick. Down with a cold. But during that time, I got you a little something. Hope you’ll like it.


TBC
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 11)
Post by: bou-j525 on April 09, 2011, 03:52:33 AM
But it's so fun making you embarrassed though, taking all my fun away? tsk tsk tsk...

Yes, I will take your fun away  :grin: Coz you're taking mine too  :smhid REVENGE  :twisted:
But thank for the update  :) And here comes the poisonous cake!!! Yeah! Let's kill everyone! XD JUST KIDDING.
And I hope we'll get more of Torigoya and Yuko next time :D
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 12)
Post by: kahem on April 09, 2011, 01:49:41 PM
I'm glad my comment made you smile ^^

Quote
Does that mean you'd like more Takacchan moment rather than say....KojiYuu? I dunno man, KojiYuu is like funnier but Takacchan is cute.....
Humm my favorite pairing is Takacchan but I also like Kojiyuu especially the pervert squirrel :lol:

I find this chapter don't suck and the cake part it's funny. It's funny because today I ate like 12 milky way out of date XD

Can't wait for the next chapter yeah!

Ah btw I'm a girl.
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 12)
Post by: khryz0421 on May 05, 2011, 12:55:09 PM
please update soon....
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 13)
Post by: yourstruly on June 01, 2011, 06:08:10 AM
But thank for the update  :) And here comes the poisonous cake!!! Yeah! Let's kill everyone! XD JUST KIDDING.

I was really tempted to kill everyone off....I'm serious....

I'm glad my comment made you smile ^^
Humm my favorite pairing is Takacchan but I also like Kojiyuu especially the pervert squirrel :lol:
I find this chapter don't suck and the cake part it's funny. It's funny because today I ate like 12 milky way out of date XD
Can't wait for the next chapter yeah!
Ah btw I'm a girl.

Then let's keep the comments coming so that you keep making me smile ;)
My choice of pairing is the same as yours
Thank you very much for encouraging me even though it could all be LIES...LOL I'm kidding, your a great reader =)
Sorry, even though you couldn't wait for the next chapter, I had you wait, sorry.
Now I know cause I didn't know before...

please update soon....

I tried...and failed...LOL sorry.



Sorry for all the wait...Real life just didn't work out....


Chapter 13

-Majisuka-

-Classroom-

“What’s up with Gakuran?” Unagi commented as she puts fresh meat on the grill

“I don’t know, she’s not sticking around Maeda like always.” Akicha commented while Mukuchi just nodded in agreement.

“They got into a fight?” Wota questioned.

“I don’t know, but she didn’t walk with me and Atsu-nee to school today.” Daruma joined the conversation halfway and scared Akicha and Wota when she snuck up and put her arms around their shoulders.

“Get your hands off me.” Wota glared.

“We’re friends right so this is fine.” Daruma said as she took a peek at Maeda, whom was at her desk reading her nurse book again. And shifted towards Gakuran who was at the other side of the classroom staring off into space.

“Maeda looks fine though.” Unagi commented.

“She always looks like that.” Wota had a dead-panned face on.

“So it’s just one-sided argument?” Akicha asked.

“Wasn’t this always a one-sided love?” Daruma answered with another question that everyone knows the answer to.

Gakuran got tired of all the gossip around her so she got up, kicked the table really hard and it flew a couple feet away and when it crashed, everyone was shocked and they looked at her.

“F**K.” Gakuran stormed out.

“What’s gotten her all riled up?” Unagi asked.

Mukuchi just looked over to Maeda and nodded.

-Hallway-

‘AHHHH! I FINALLY GET TO SEE TORIGOYA!!!!!’ Yuko thought, ‘I miss her so much.’ Yuko was walking towards her class as she was grinning from ear to ear.

“As creepy as you look right now, you’re much better as a creeper than a weeper.” Sado said as she smirked.

“That’s so lame.” Shibuya commented.

“Oi, no one asked your opinion.” Sado retaliated.

“Let’s not ruin Yuko-san’s good mood.” Black slipped into the group.

“Oi, back out of this Black. Or you want to duke it out with us too?” Shibuya didn’t want anyone to interfere with her fight with Sado.

“WHAT? Wanna go?” Sado stared down at Shibuya with her face inching closer to Shibuya’s.

“HEHEHE, neh~ Okotteiru?” Gekikara asked Shibuya and Sado as Black tried to pull them apart.

“What?” Shibuya and Sado said together as they glared at Gekikara.

“I needed to vent out some angry from that day anyways, the more the merrier.” Sado said as she thought about Kuu.

“A foursome?” Yuko said aloud.

“Mhmm, so it has been a party without me?” Torigoya walked into the argument.

“TORIGOYA.” Yuko ran towards Torigoya and gave her a bear hug, squeezing the wind out of her.

Sado and the other queens quietly left the two alone when Yuko engulfed Torigoya in a bear hug as they knew that it is not wise to invade Yuko-san's private time with her favorite toy, Torigoya

“Air…need to breathe…going to die…air.” Torigoya said breathlessly.

“Ahahaha, gomen gomen.” Yuko let Torigoya go. “Let’s go somewhere more private.” Yuko took Torigoya’s hand and led her to the clubroom.

As Yuko held Torigoya’s hand, Torigoya blushed as they walked towards the clubroom.

‘I missed this so much.’ Thought Yuko.

-Clubroom-

Yuko closed the door behind her and Torigoya and locked it so that they will not be disturbed. Yuko turned towards Torigoya and slowly walked up to her. All of a sudden, Torigoya put up her hand to stop Yuko from advancing forward.

“I know that I’ve been a bit mean to you for the last while…so I got you something to make it up…and a belated birthday present…how long ago was it? 5 months ago?” Torigoya pondered for a while before handing the gift wrapped present to Yuko.

“I thought you were just PMS-ing…” Yuko said.

“Oh, so you don’t want it.” Torigoya frowned as she thought about how much time and money was spent on this present.

“I want it, I really want it but it would have been better if you had gift wrapped yourself as a present.” Yuko trailed off and started to fantasize, Torigoya all wrapped up with a ribbon. As a kid, Yuko would always rip the wrapping paper apart to get to the goodies so in this fantasy it was about the same. Yuko first pulled on the tail of the ribbon to undo the ribbon on top of Torigoya’s head and dropping it onto the floor. Then, she started ripping the pieces of wrapping paper off Torigoya’s body. To Yuko’s displeasure, Torigoya was wrapped in tons of wrapping paper, making Yuko very inpatient, so she took both her hands and started ripping it off like a madman. As she saw that there were only a few sheets left, she took it off one by one, no one was going to stop her from reaching what was underneath the barrier…

“YUKO!” Torigoya broke Yuko’s dazzed expression as she shouted her name while shaking her with both hands.

“Sorry, I was thinking.”

“About something perverted…” Torigoya added to Yuko’s sentence as Yuko just blushed as though she admitted to the deed. “Sigh…what am I going to do with you?”

“We can DO lots of things.” Yuko’s head shot up in anticipation.

“Yes, like go to class like good kids.” Torigoya knew what Yuko was up to. As Yuko just looked to the floor disappointed. “Anyways, I’m going to class. You can open that at home or something.” With that said, Torigoya left and headed to class although late by 45 minutes already but as the saying goes, better late than never.

‘Mhmm, what is it?’ Yuko took off the ribbon and ripped the wrapping paper into scraps as they scattered onto the floor. ‘The box looks familiar…where have I seen it before? Probably got it at Daiso…’ As Yuko took the lid off the box, there were tissue papers hiding the hidden item, a bag. It’s not just a bag, it was a Hysteric Glamour bag. ‘Isn’t this…’ Yuko pondered for a while as she looks at the bottom of the bag and just as Yuko thought, ‘The bag that RIKU had brought to karaoke in which she had accidentally stained the bottom a bit.’ Yuko’s thoughts started jumping.

‘Riku is Torigoya’s friend?’

‘Riku helped Torigoya buy a bag?’

‘Riku bought the bag for Torigoya and she gave it to me?’

‘Riku bought the bag as a gift to Torigoya and she didn’t like it so she gave it to me?’

‘Why would Riku buy Torigoya a bag as a gift?...’

‘Riku’s girlfriend is Torigoya? NO NO NO! TORIGOYA IS MINE!’ Yuko’s head was exploding with valid reasons that didn’t seem very valid after another thought or two on each question.

‘Torigoya is Riku?’ The wheels in Yuko’s head started to turn…

‘Riku and Torigoya never showed up at the same time.’ Yuko thought back to the time Persona came to Majisuka Gakuen to shoot their single cover.
The date Kuu set for us, Torigoya already had plans.

‘Riku didn’t like me very much. It was like he was scared of me or something when he saw me helping out as body guards for their single cover. He was glaring at Kuu when Kuu was flirting with me.’ At that moment in time, Yuko had thought what the hell was his problem as Riku kept glaring in the direction of Kuu and herself. ‘Riku was shocked and wanted to kill Kuu for the date that was set up by Kuu.’

‘Riku had a hint of air-headness when he was eating with us.’

‘I responded to Riku as if he was Torigoya, I guess my body and memory remembered Torigoya’s aura.’

“Oh my god, why didn’t I notice sooner? I could have totally taken advantage of those situations to make Torigoya jealous and maybe had some skinship that would have seem awkward for two girls to do while perfectly normal for a couple, a boy and a girl. The chances that I let get away.” Yuko sighed.

“Wait, why didn’t Torigoya tell me? Am I not trustworthy enough for her?” Yuko was unimpressed that Torigoya was keeping such a big secret from her. “I have to talk to her.”

TBC...(but I don't know when it will be continued....)

and please excuse my language used....  :theking
I actually wanted to kill everyone off so that I can stop writing....
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 13)
Post by: Arakawa on June 01, 2011, 11:44:30 AM
Thanks for the update!

I kinda needa reread your entire fic :P but I'm happy to do so xD.

I'm sensing some kojiyuu coming up :D
Looking forward to the next chapter
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 13)
Post by: kahem on June 01, 2011, 02:07:53 PM
Lol thx but what is a good reader for? ^^
I like the pervert mind of Yuko hehehe
Please don't kill them tour story is great
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 13)
Post by: jehovachiabi on July 03, 2011, 06:31:30 PM
awesome story! pls continue~ I'm so looking forawrd to the next chapter and the chapter after the next!!  :wigglypanda:
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 13)
Post by: AFLynx on July 04, 2011, 03:58:50 AM
 :farofflook: awesome story yourstruly! will anticipate your next update! pls update soon!  :kneelbow:
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 14)
Post by: yourstruly on July 09, 2011, 12:21:00 PM
I kinda needa reread your entire fic but I'm happy to do so
I'm sensing some kojiyuu coming up
Looking forward to the next chapter

Sorry, I'm a slowpoke...at least I didn't kill them all to end this story........I think.....

Lol thx but what is a good reader for?
I like the pervert mind of Yuko hehehe
Please don't kill them tour story is great

A good reader is for...um giving me motivation to not kill off the characters =)
I am just portraying Yuko as she is in real life...Kojiyuu for the win

awesome story! pls continue~ I'm so looking forawrd to the next chapter and the chapter after the next!! 

Thanks...it's comments like these that I keep going....sorry but it's going at a snail pace....

awesome story yourstruly! will anticipate your next update! pls update soon!

Thanks, I hope this is soon enough for you cause I can't write at all right now......


Thanks for reading my very slow paced fanfic


Chapter 14

-Rooftop-

“Did you talk to Yuko-san yet?” Sado asked.

“I don’t feel the need to tell her anything.” Torigoya answered.

“But don’t you love her?”

“I respect her and want to be like her. So if you call that love, then yes I do love her.”

“You do know how she feels about you right?” Sado felt like a cop, interrogating a suspect.

“Yes I do, but I have my reasons.”

“It’s not fair to her. Are you playing with her feelings?”

“You don’t know how I feel about all this, it’s not like I wanted this. Ok?”

“Then tell me how you feel about this?”

“Well… Promise me that you won’t tell anyone.”

“I promise.” Sado said as she crossed her fingers behind her back.

“It all started last year when Yuko-san was sick… I was outside the hospital room when the doctor talked to Yuko-san about her condition.”

-(Flashback) Hospital room-

“So how is it doc?” Yuko asked the doctor.

“…You should be prepared-”

“To check out the hospital? I knew it wasn’t bad.” Yuko interrupted.

“Not quite. Last time, you were attacked on the head…it’s after effects are showing now… your brain is dying slowly… soon, your brain will stop functioning… you should talk to your parents and family.”

“…You’re kidding right? That’s not a funny joke.”

“I’m serious. You’re dying…”

“Doctor, can I ask you to not tell anyone about this? Promise me.”

“Why wouldn’t you want your family and friends to know?”

“I want them to be happy…”

-(End of Flashback)-

“She wanted us to be happy… and well, without her, I don’t feel that I can be happy… so I decided that I want to spread happiness and being an idol would be able to cheer others up and make them happy…”

“…Only you could think of such an unreasonable explanation for being an idol… This still doesn’t explain why you debuted as a MALE idol.” Sado was still slightly confused.

“WAIT! WHAT?!?! HOW COME SADO KNOWS?” Yuko interrupted.

“Yuko-san.” Torigoya and Sado said at the same time.

“How did you find us?” Torigoya asked.

“Cause I have a built in Torigoya detection system that reacts when I am close to you…The school isn’t very big and you guys weren’t in the classroom and I was just at the clubroom so the only other place that you guys could be at would be the roof.” Yuko explained.

“Well, I’ll leave you guys be now.” Sado started leaving.

“No. Sado, how come you know and I didn’t?” Yuko asked.

“Well, I was always the smarter of the two of us. I’ll leave you guys to work this out now.” Sado went downstairs and towards the classroom.

Awkward silence.

“What do you have to say for yourself?” Yuko asked as she kept her eyes on Torigoya.

“Nothing, I don’t know what you’re talking about.” Torigoya tried to walk away as Yuko grabbed her wrist.

“What do you mean nothing? I thought we were close, I tell you everything about me.” Yuko tried to get her to talk.

“Everything? Are you kidding me? You were going to die, and you didn’t tell anyone. So why do I have to tell you anything?” Torigoya retaliated while swinging her wrist away from Yuko’s death grip.

“Ok, I’m sorry, how many times do I have to apologize to you? It was stupid of me ok? After that, I tell you everything that’s happening, the good and the bad.”

“Well, all is too late.” Torigoya just looked onto the distance. “It’s of no concern of yours.”

“…” Yuko’s heart started to hurt. “How is it no concern of mine? Don’t you know, I love you.”

“I know that you love me…but, I don’t feel the same.” Torigoya’s heart was slowly cracking as she reject the only person that she loved.

“…you…don’t…love me?” Yuko’s heart was smashed onto the floor and broke into pieces.

“We are too different, we can never be together. Good bye.” Torigoya left Yuko, both heartbroken.

 “I will never give up, I will win her back…but how?” Yuko said aloud.

THE END....I'm kidding











TBC...


I don't want to be murdered yet.... :theking
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 14)
Post by: kahem on July 09, 2011, 02:16:03 PM
No Torigoya don't reject Yuko!!!!!!

I'll continue to be a good reader so, don't kill them please ^^
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 14)
Post by: AAAice on July 09, 2011, 02:26:39 PM
Damn, you're finally back!

Torigoya.  :cry: Y U REJECT YUKO?!  :bleed eyes:

Yuko. Show Torigoya what you got!  O0
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 14)
Post by: bou-j525 on July 10, 2011, 08:09:09 AM
Needed to read all chapters again @_@
But thank God, you finally updated *__* Aww kinda sad coz of Torigoya...... GO YUKO ^^
And I wanted to kill you at the "The End" O__O
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 14)
Post by: yourstruly on July 13, 2011, 06:20:55 AM
No Torigoya don't reject Yuko!!!!!!
I'll continue to be a good reader so, don't kill them please ^^

Adds drama to my fanfic so too bad =P

Damn, you're finally back!
Torigoya.   Y U REJECT YUKO?! 
Yuko. Show Torigoya what you got! 

What do you mean "Damn, you're finally back!"? Do you not want me to be back and update my little story here?
I don't think Yuko wants to show Torigoya what she has but the other way around..... =P

Needed to read all chapters again @_@
But thank God, you finally updated *__* Aww kinda sad coz of Torigoya...... GO YUKO ^^
And I wanted to kill you at the "The End" O__O

Hopefully, you don't need to reread everything again....
Aww, don't be sad, be happy I updated =P
LOL...I know a lot of people would have killed me if I ended there but it was fun for the time being to write that


Without further ado, I present to you Chapter 15....Part 1  :theking


Chapter 15 (Part 1)

‘I will get my revenge….’

“Mhmm, it seems that someone is troubled. Could it be, the great Gakuran have a love rival?” Nezumi commented as her voice broke Gakuran’s train of thought.

“Why would you care? You’ve been wanting to take Atsuko down the whole time.” Gakuran stated as she started getting suspicious of what Nezumi wants.

“I’m just trying to help a fellow school mate out.” Nezumi smiled. “If you don’t want it, that’s fine.” Nezumi turned around and started to walk away.

“Wait, so you will help me?” Gakuran’s voice stopped Nezumi as Nezumi’s smile turned into one of a grim line as her plan was going as expected.

“But of course.” Nezumi turned around and showed a polite smile to her sempai.

“What can I do?” Gakuran asked

“Well…”

-Yabakune-

“What brings the great Gakuran here? Don’t you hate our guts?” Chiharu asked

“Are you here to gloat?” Sanae asked

“Wait, let her speak.” Jyanken said as she was the new leader of Yabakune which was decided by Jyanken

“I know that you still hold grudges against Majijo. I’m here to inform you of Atsuko’s weakness.” Gakuran didn’t like what she was doing but what choice did she have? She wants that guy out of Atsuko’s life completely.

“Continue.” Jyanken was now listening intensively to Gakuran’s next words

“Persona’s Kai. That is who Atsuko likes, get him and you have Atsuko.” Gakuran left after announcing Atsuko’s weakness.

“Should we trust her?” Chiharu asked.

“One way to find out…let’s do this.” Yabakune is now on the offensive side of this rivalry.

-Alley-

“Are you sure that’s him?” Chiharu asked.

“It looks like the guy in the poster. Even with the hoodie and sunglasses on, I can recognize him.” Sanae answered. “He’s kind of cute.”

“More like short. I can’t believe Maeda likes someone so short.” Chiharu said as Sanae glared at her.

“Shush, we are here to kidnap him not to argue about whether he is good looking or not.” Jyanken started giving out instructions on the plan.

-Kai-

‘Mhmm…Those girls have been following me for a while… Could it be? Crazed fans of mine?’ Kai thought to himself as he started to pace himself faster. ‘It’s great that I have fans now but this is just weird… Time to lose them.’ Kai ducked into an alley and ran, but eventually came to a stop at a dead end. ‘Shit.’

“We’ve got you now,” said the girl that seemed like the leader of the pack.

“You’ve got the wrong person… I’m just your normal everyday neighborhood boy…” Kai backed away slowly as his back hit against the wall.

“So you’re not the famous Kai of Persona? You look so much like him.” The tallest girl pointed out.

“Yeah, especially the height, so short.” The yankee with wavy hair said.

“HEY, I’M NOT SHORT.” Kai exclaimed.

“Even the reaction to being short is the same. Girls, we’ve got our man.” The leader gave a hand gesture telling the gang to go at him.

“I haven’t had much exercise anyways...this will help me get back into shape, sorry girls.” Kai took out the girls one by one by evading their attacks and positioning himself such that when he dodged they would hit each other instead. As the ground was full of girls in pain and half dead, the leader escaped with the two other outspoken girls. “Pitiful. This is not what friends do.”

-Jyanken-

“Well that didn’t work.” Chiharu stated the obvious

“We didn’t know that he was a good fighter.” Jyanken tried to explain so that she could still retain as the center of Yabakune.

“I told you guys, he is just my type, cute and strong.” Sanae’s eyes formed heart shapes as her thoughts trailed to Kai.

“Well…time for plan B.” Jyanken then took out an envelope labeled plan B and started discussing and organizing jobs.

TBC....

I didn't feel like making a longer chapter.....
Guess what's going to happen next?
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 15 Part 1)
Post by: anoni2 on July 13, 2011, 10:18:16 AM
more kicking yey!!!

they called her short  :lol:
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 15 Part 1)
Post by: yourstruly on September 29, 2011, 06:02:45 AM
more kicking yey!!!
they called her short  :lol:

Everyone calls her short so one or three more ppl wont matter that much...right?


Sorry I kind of died.......
and I've been revived as a more dedicated writer-ish....maybe....hopefully.......




Chapter 15 (Part 2)

“Do we have to?” Chiharu asked.

“Well, do you want to try Kai again?” Jyanken retaliated

“See, Kai is the best.” Sanae added

“Sighh, I guess…” Chiharu agreed although she really didn’t want to harm her dream boy.

“So the plan again is to jump Riku like we did Kai.” Sanae confirmed once again.

“Yes it is, I doubt he’s a good fighter. Look at him, he’s pretty girly, especially his lips.” Jyanken said

“Hey, those lips are really sexy if you have never noticed.” Chiharu tried to defend Riku.

“Whatever, not my cup of tea.”

-Random street-

“There he is,” commented Sanae

“He’s so perfect.” Chiharu said as she was distracted by Riku’s good looks.

“Wait…is that…it can’t be…” Jyanken couldn’t finish her sentence.

-Riku-

‘When will she stop following me… this is pissing me off, I want to go home.’ Riku thought as he stopped at the traffic lights and glanced at the car window to see the reflection of a girl in a trench coat, sunglasses and fisher’s hat. ‘She’s dressing like a perverted flasher.’ As Riku started to speed walk, he noticed the girl trying to catch up so he ducked into an alley and stopped there as he waited for the girl to run after him.

“Can you please stop following me, Yuko?” Riku said as Yuko just turned the corner to tail Riku.

“Ahahaha, I don’t know what you are talking about…” Yuko acted innocent as she took off her sunglasses and hat.

“So you’re not a perverted stalker that was following me since an hour ago?”

“Nope, I have no clue what you are talking about.” Yuko kept trying to fake her innocence.

“So there has been multiple different people that is the same height as you and dressed in the exactly same way that coincidentally went the same way as me?” Riku reasoned.

“Yeah, this is the new trend, don’t you know? And you’re supposed to be an idol, shouldn’t you know the trends?” Yuko replied.

“Uh huh, don’t you have anything better to do then to waste your time and my time by doing stupid things like these?” Riku asked.

“I don’t think it’s stupid to try and protect the person you love.”

“Well, you’re doing a bad job of it, because the one person I need protect against is you.”

“What else can I do? I love you.”

“Just let me be, let me do what I want.” Riku pleaded. “Just let me be.”

“…if that is really what you want…”

“Yes, I’m sorry.” Riku walked away.

-Yabakune-

“Shit, we can’t do Riku either, Yuko is there.” Sanae pointed the obvious as they saw the stalker like figure take off her hat and sunglasses, revealing her long hair and signature dimples.

“Plan C here we come.” Chiharu said.

“What plan C?” Jyanken asked.

“Well, although you don’t want to, there’s always the third and last member of Persona.” Chiharu knew Jyanken’s soft point, Kuu.

Chapter 15 (Part 3)

“I don’t want to.” Jyanken said

“You don’t have a choice, we let you do what you wanted on our boys, now it’s your turn.” Sanae said as Chiharu nodded in agreement.

“But-“

“No but’s, we’re not going to hurt him like how you wanted to do to our boys.” Chiharu assured their so-called leader.

“I guess…”

-Kuu-

‘Kai and Riku both ditched me…what should I do now? I’m bored…’ Kuu thought to himself as three girls surrounded him.

“Hi, you’re Kuu from Persona right?” The tallest of the three girls asked.

“That’s me, but don’t tell anyone.” Kuu winked at the girl

“Our friend here is a huge fan of yours.” Chiharu pushed Jyanken forward.

“Wow, thank you so much for the support.” Kuu said as he shook Jyanken’s hand.

“We have a surprise for you. As a thanks for all your hard work you put into your CD.” Sanae said as she took out a blindfold.

“Well…I’m normally not suppose to follow strangers…”

“We’re not strangers, we’re your fans.” Chiharu added

“Well, ok. Just this once. Don’t tell my other fans alright?” Kuu said as he gave a mischievous wink.

“Watch your head.” Jyanken said as she led him into a taxi to get to their hideout.

-Yabakune Hideout-

“Can we borrow your phone and get Riku and Kai to come as well?” Sanae suggested.

“Hmm, I don’t see why not, the more the merrier.” Kuu said with a smile on his face.

“How about we play a little prank on them too?” Chiharu grinned as she told Kuu the plan.

*ring ring*

“Moshi moshi, Kuu?” Kai said over the phone.

“Sorry, but that’s not my name. We have Kuu and if you don’t want him to get hurt, come to the warehouse with Riku or else…” Sanae then moved the phone over to Kuu.

“Kai, help….this is too much for me to handle…save me…” Kuu said as his voice trailed off.

Sanae then hung up and gave Kuu a high5

“They should get here in I’d say 15 minutes.” Sanae said

“No…that’s too long, with my performance just now, it has to be like 10 minutes.”

“How about we bet on it?”

“Alright, but if I win, Kai and Riku are not allowed to help me.” Kuu said as he started stuffing his face with the dozens of different types of cakes laid out before him.

“Alright, it’s a deal.”

-10 minutes later-

“This should be it.” Kai said as he leaded Riku into the warehouse.

“Is that…”

“KUU, YOU HAD US SCARED SHIT! WHAT WERE YOU THINKING?” Kai shouted at the top of his lungs

“I was thinking about sharing?” Kuu innocently looked up.

Riku sighed and resigned himself to taking a tissue to wipe up Kuu’s face.

“Well, congratulations on your reunion but let’s not forget about us now.” Chiharu said as Yabakune girls started to circle them.

“Ah, it’s you.” Riku and Kai said at the same time.

“You know them too? They are really nice people.” Kuu said as he happily chowed away on his cakes.

“I wouldn’t be so sure about that Kuu-san.” Sanae grinned as she motioned the girls to attack.

As the boys ducked and avoided most of the attack, their bodies started to not keep up with the pace as they were getting tired since they were guys and guys shouldn’t hit girls.

“I don’t think they get this, 50 girls and 3 guys…sorry 53 girls and 3 guys, if they don’t fight back, how do they expect to win?” Chiharu commented on Persona’s stupidity

*Loud sound of warehouse doors opening*

“They don’t need to fight back, cause we will do it for them.”


TBC....

Sorry I kind of died........
I promise to be back?
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 15 Part 2 and 3)
Post by: blueangel65 on September 29, 2011, 07:11:07 AM
WOW! You're back..  :w00t:  :cow:
WELCOME BACK yourstruLy-san!  :fap
I really love your stories..
I hope you will continue this story until to the end,
please update soon, and Thanks!  :thumbsup :D
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 15 Part 2 and 3)
Post by: aoi_sora on September 29, 2011, 07:24:59 AM
 :cow:
an update!!!!!

Kuu!  :lol:

Rappappa to the rescue!!!
 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

update soon! thanks!  :grin:
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 15 Part 2 and 3)
Post by: kahem on September 29, 2011, 09:28:26 AM
Oh isshaburi ^^
Rofl stalker Yuko!!!
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 15 Part 2 and 3)
Post by: Arakawa on September 29, 2011, 09:59:35 AM
You have risen from the dead lolol :~)
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 15 Part 2 and 3)
Post by: blughise on September 29, 2011, 10:42:34 AM
OMG you finally update after so long........

and when things are getting interesting you just have to end it!!!

now obviously the people who came into the rescue is the Rappappa gang :) they here to save their 'boys'

please update again ASAP!!!
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 15 Part 2 and 3)
Post by: haruhi16 on September 29, 2011, 11:03:53 AM
omg! I need an update!!
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 15 Part 2 and 3)
Post by: yourstruly on September 30, 2011, 04:30:29 AM
blueangel65: Hey, thanks. Hopefully I can finish this without dying again........I promise nothing.....

aoi_sora: Kuu is the wild card in this fanfic....when I don't know how to make things connect...I blame it all on Kuu =P I think I made the Rappapa rescue too obvious =( now I'm sad....

kahem: Hi, long time no talk? I love Yuko, I can totally see her stalking people in those big trench coats, hats, sunglasses and facemask

Arakawa: Yes I have! Hopefully I won't dig my own grave and bury myself again =)

blughise: I know right....like 2~3 months opps....LOL...of course I have to end it when it gets interesting...this makes people want to read it because of the cliffhanger =P

haruhi16: Fast enough for you? I doubt I will update soon after this but don't worry...it will probably be less than...a month   :P


Anyways....Enjoy this short part cause I don't like writing for long periods of time.... :theking




Chapter 16 (Part 1)

“Yuko..” Riku trailed off as he paid no attention to his surroundings except on Yuko.

“Maeda-san…” Kai said as he kept dodging left and right

“Sado-san, Black-san, Shibuya-san, Gekikara-san. I’m sorry about my friends, they are kind of impolite since they didn’t acknowledge other people that try to save them.” Kuu sighed as he shook his head. 

“RIKU, WATCH OUT.” Yuko shouted as a Yabakune girl punched Riku in the face.

“That Yabakune girl is going to have a broken rib.” Shibuya said as she made her way to the fight while finishing putting on her gloves.

“A broken rib? Are you kidding? At least 5.” Sado said as she put her toy away and also joined in but discreetly made her way to Kuu’s side.

“HAHAHA, tanoshi~.” Yuko said as she punched the Yabakune girl in the face to avenge Riku.

“Koiyo Yabakune.” Shibuya kicked the girl in the guts.

“HAHAHAHAHAHA, neh~ Okotteiru?” Gekikara asked as she became a punching bag that won’t fall down and retaliated as well.

Black silently took out the girls that surrounded Yuko.

Atsuko started to help defend Kai, as he was surrounded by all sides. Eventually Atsuko and Kai were back-to-back while Atsuko hits, punches, and kicks the girls, Kai helped her defend against oncoming girls.

As Atsuko was distracted by 2 girls charging at her, a girl came up from behind and swung her metal pipe down towards Atsuko’s neck. Gakuran ran out to try and save Atsuko but failed to do so as Kai shielded Atsuko with his body and fell since he couldn’t watch his best friend get hurt.

“KAI!” Riku and Kuu shouted as they ran towards him.

Black swiftly moved over to protect Atsuko as she now holds Kai in her arms. Gakuran just stood there watching the interaction between Atsuko and Kai.

‘Maybe he truly does love Atsuko as much as I do…’ Gakuran thought.

“Why? Why did you protect me? Why must all the people I like have to be hurt because of me?” Atsuko said as tears started to stream out.

“Kai…wake up…please.” Atsuko says as she kept holding Kai’s upper body up with her arm and she started to brush away his hair that was in the way with her other hand. Her tears still streaming down and tear droplets eventually landed on Kai’s face.

Riku and Kuu just stood by, not knowing what they could do to help comfort Atsuko.

As the fight was nearing to the end most of the Yabakune girls either fled from the warehouse or laid unconscious on the floor. While Sado held onto Sanae by the collars to find out the mastermind behind the attack. The Rappapa girls then surrounded Atsuko and Kai.

“Kai’s…going to be ok…”Riku said as he walked closer to Atsuko.

“It’s all my fault… Before it was Minami and now Kai… It’s all my fault…”

“Don’t cry Atsuko…I can’t bear to see you cry.” Kai weakly said as he wiped the tears off Atsuko’s face.

“Kai… Why did you protect me?”

“I can’t bear to see you get hurt…” Kai said as his voice trailed off and he fainted again.

“KAI!” Riku, Kuu and Atsuko shouted.

“Let’s take him to the hospital.” Suggested Sado.

“NO! I mean, we have a personal doctor that will take care of us… We just need to take him home.” Riku said as he thought, ‘If we go to the hospital, our identities will be revealed.’

As Riku and Kuu took Kai home in a cab, Riku called Shachou to tell her that they were jumped and that Kai is injured, Rappapa had a meeting.

-Rappapa Headquarters-

*Awkward Silence*

“One of the Yabakune girls told me that a Majijo girl planned this with them.” Sado broke the silence with the newly retrieved information.

*Knock Knock*

The door opened and revealed Gakuran. She walked into the center of the room and got on her knees.

“I’m sorry… My jealously over Kai and Atsuko’s relationship made me blind.” Gakuran said as she asked for forgiveness.

Yuko glared at Gakuran while Black, Shibuya, Gekikara and Sado didn’t really show an interest to the whole event that happened.

“…It’s ok, it has made me realize that I only bring disasters to those beside me…” Atsuko said as she started to close herself up to everyone again.

“No, it’s not your fault Atsuko, it was because I was green with jealously… I know that I can’t do anything to get you to forgive me but I will wait… I’ll do anything for you to make it up… Just tell me what I can do.” Gakuran said as she looked at Atsuko who was looking out the window.

“Well, I have an idea of what you can do.” Yuko said as she had an evil grin on her face. “Round up all the Majijo girls, I have a plan.”

‘Oh no.’ everyone in the room except Yuko thought.

‘With this, I can protect Riku.’

TBC

Lets hope I can keep this up =)
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 16 Part 1)
Post by: blughise on September 30, 2011, 05:16:23 AM
I' ll properly comment and edit this later as im using my phone right now.... Hard to type.......

Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 16 Part 1)
Post by: kahem on September 30, 2011, 08:23:14 AM
Me too I can completly imagine Yuko stalking someone lol and it seems the Rappappa don't like her plans hehehe
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 16 Part 1)
Post by: haruhi16 on September 30, 2011, 12:02:13 PM
Poor Kai...

I wonder what Yuko's plan.. Hmmmmm..

Update soon!!!
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 16 Part 1)
Post by: aoi_sora on September 30, 2011, 03:24:51 PM
YEY FOR ACTION!!!! :mon zoom:
woah!

Quote
“Round up all the Majijo girls, I have a plan.”

They're going to sing YANKEE SOUL!!!  :guychan:

ahahahahahaha!  :rofl:

thanks for the update!

update soon!  :twothumbs
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 16 Part 1)
Post by: RJay on September 30, 2011, 09:45:43 PM
What's gonna happen??? :? :?
please update soon
cant wait for de next
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 16 Part 1)
Post by: immortal_K on October 02, 2011, 06:42:10 AM
 :heart: :heart: :heart:

You finally updated  :twothumbs :twothumbs

Kai is still protecting her Atsuko no matter what cause, they should really sit down and have a talk or they will just be running in circles with each other again.
Gakuran... sigh you are suppose to protect Atsuko not hurt her, sometimes jealousy does blind a person but at least she finally snaps out of it and is willing to
take responsibility.

..... now the most important thing is.... what does Yuko have in mind... I have a feeling its gonna be dramatic  :twothumbs

THanks for updating, please update soon again.  :thumbsup
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 16 Part 1)
Post by: Megumi on November 08, 2011, 10:10:35 AM
 :thumbup :thumbup :thumbup please update soon!  :bow:
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 16 Part 1)
Post by: skytsuna on November 08, 2011, 12:04:56 PM
 :nervous Almost forgot to comment  :P
But I am reeeaaalllly~~~ curious about what will happen next :huhuh
 :thumbsup It's really interesting! and Please update soon  :bow:
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 16 Part 1)
Post by: yourstruly on November 15, 2011, 07:17:37 AM
blughise: So you didnt actually edit it after =( its ok I know how busy life gets....I'm a good example of one =P

kahem: Yuko is a stalker type if you haven't already noticed.....Rappapa doesn't like her plans but hopefully you will like it =D

haruhi16: Kai will be fine....not so much everyone else that's around Yuko.....

aoi_sora: Mhmm....Close but not yet....

RJay: Hopefully this will be a pleasant surprise?

immortal_K: And I finally updated again!!!! Well, talking is not happening very soon =P....Gakuran is just blinded by love.....hopefully, I'll find her another person to fall in love with.....

Megumi: Sorry, school is being gay....too much to do and so little time....

skytsuna: Well, here you go, everything is happening now but I don't think the next part will be out till....Christmas?


Anyways, here you guys go, hope you will enjoy this as I was grinning the the whole time while I was typing this....


Chapter 16 (Part 2)

-Kamonohashi Agency Living Room-

“So, what happened?” Shachou asked as she looked at Riku and Kuu while Marilyn started to bandage up the boys.

“We were jumped by Yankee girls.” Kuu said as he let Marilyn start sanitizing the scratches on his face.

“They surrounded us by all sides and tried to hurt us but guys don’t hit girls so we only evaded at best…” Riku added.

“But then superhero like Yankee girls from another school saved us from the evil clutches of the first set of Yankee girls.” Kuu finished the story as shachou just looked at them disbelievingly.

“What Kuu was trying to say is that a rival school of the first group of Yankee girls came in and saved us.” Riku retold the story

“Hmm….that seems more possible than the way Kuu told it…” Shachou said and continued, “Kai’s out of the picture for a while so you two can go back to school… but when Kai gets better, you better be able to work twice as hard and I think you three will need some martial arts lessons…”

-Gym-

*Majijo students going at others necks*

“Oi! Listen up.” Yuko said over the microphone.

All the Majijo students quiet down as they heard their leader.

“So, I want you guys to follow me.”

Murmurs of ‘what is she talking about?’ could be heard.

“I want all of you to join me in auditioning for AKB48, an idol group.”

Everyone in the gym was thoroughly shocked at what Yuko-senpai said.

In the corner of the room, a certain Nezumi thought, ‘mhmm, interesting…’

‘That was her brilliant plan?’ Sado thought. ‘Yankees as idols? Is she insane?’ Sado sighed as she knew that after Yuko-san decides something, no one can change her mind.

“So, I want all of you to start fixing each other’s faces…wait that didn’t sound right… I want you all to start putting on makeup, practice singing and dancing.” Yuko smiled and showed her dimples. “Application forms are outside, take one and bring it to the staff room tomorrow to fax it out. Before I end this meeting, one thing you should keep in mind, if you leak a word to Torigoya, I WILL KILL YOU. That is all.”

-Next day-

The Rappapa gang took over the staff room as each Yankee in the school lined up to use the fax machine to fax over their application sheets.

“Yuko-san, are you sure we should do this?” Sado asked as she clutched onto her own application and a forged application of another person.

“Yep! I think this will be good for her to open up.” Yuko said as she snatched the two applications and sent it. “There, no backing out…now, how am I going to get Maeda to go to the auditions…”

‘This is going to be tiring…’ Sado thought as she left the staff room.

‘I need a sure way for us to get into the group…what can we do? We’re just Yankee girls that want to become idols…’ The light bulb in Yuko’s head switched on as her plan was made. ‘Nothing will stop me… I could probably plan for world domination if Torigoya wanted to become my queen.’ Yuko grinned as she drafted up her plans.

-Weeks later-

‘I’m so bored of school… It’s a good thing that Nami is feeling better now.’ Torigoya thought as Majijo girls started to fight one another. All is normal at Majisuka…except, ‘why are they only aiming for the body? Even I know that the best place to KO someone is the face…’

-Rappapa Secret Meeting-

“Ok, so who are the girls that made it through the first selection?” Yuko asked

“I really don’t know why we’re doing this…” Shibuya said aloud, earning a glare from Yuko.

“Neh~ Okotteiru?” Gekikara asked Shibuya.

“Shut up.”

“HEHEHEHEHE.” Gekikara let out her signature laugh as she rubbed her neck.

Black then moved swiftly to Gekikara’s side and sat her down as to not piss off Shibuya and have a fight break out with Yuko around. God knows what would happen if Yuko, Gekikara and Shibuya fought…

“Ahem, everyone from team Horumon, Fondue, and Under made it, as well as Nezumi, Center, Kabuki Sisters, Gakuran, Shanshou Shimai, and of course all of us including Dance and Maeda.” Sado reported.

“Alright, since the audition is tomorrow, I'm going to let you all in on the plan of success.” Yuko said as Sado rolled her eyes. “Round up the girls that failed the first stage and get them to scare off all the other applicants.” Yuko showed an evil grin.

Sado let out a sigh as she thought, ‘Nothing is going to stop Yuko-san is there?’ and concluded to her fate of becoming a part of the next Japanese idol group.


TBC.....


YAY I finished all my midterms.....but finals are coming up......December will be better, I promise?
and this part only finished because my place had a blackout with me having no internet to do my hw so I decided to finish this part of my story.....

Hopefully you have enjoyed this update and won't kill me because it took too long.....  :theking
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 16 Part 2)
Post by: skytsuna on November 15, 2011, 07:54:44 AM
Oh! An update!!!! :heart:
I'm Lucky today XD
Thanks for the update :)
I was really curious 8)

OMG! They auditioned for joining AKB!!!! :w00t:
Wow! What a brilliant idea Yuko!!!!
Dang! Now I want more  8)2

Thanks again~ :thumbsup
And I'll be waiting for the next update 8)
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 16 Part 2)
Post by: haruhi16 on November 15, 2011, 07:56:57 AM
Yay they're going to audition for akb48!! Yuko is planning this for Riku?? Ugh i hope Riku won't be cold towards Yuko and show how much she love the squirrel! LOL they're going to scare the other applicants so no one will stand on their way? HAHAHAHA Brilliant idea as usual Yankee girls!!

Now i want the next chapter!! please!!! :bow: :bow: :bow:

PLEASE UPDATE SOON AS  YOU CAN! It's been 2 months already!!! D: D: D:
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 16 Part 2)
Post by: Yagami.Rai on November 15, 2011, 08:03:18 AM
 :peace: Yea!! Update!! :)

Yuko's idea was awesome!!!! :w00t:
To audition for AKB XD
Hehe.. and to scare off other competitors :lol:
Thats definitely  :twisted: evil but I like it :P

Nice update  :thumbsup
Hopefully you will update soon  :mon cute:
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 16 Part 2)
Post by: Flean on November 15, 2011, 08:11:27 AM
LOL... I'm actually re-read it again because I can't remember the last chapter that I read before...  :lol:

Good to see you're updating again...  :twothumbs
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 16 Part 2)
Post by: kahem on November 15, 2011, 08:14:05 AM
Oh how I like Yuko's ideas!!!!
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 16 Part 2)
Post by: Sok on November 15, 2011, 08:00:58 PM
YAY! Update.  XD

Now I wander how they'll get Atsuko to go? :?
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 16 Part 2)
Post by: Megumi on November 16, 2011, 12:44:20 AM
 :panic: Update!

Ahh yeah school can be "tiring" I'm waiting until December for your next update!  :bow:
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 16 Part 2)
Post by: blughise on November 16, 2011, 12:50:22 AM
hey I'm sorry about not fixing my last comment  :)
This time I'll properly comment :)

Yuko you're really quite something :lol:
you and your twisted ideas :lol:
Definitely love her!!! XD XD XD
Poor Sado :P

Update soon

Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 16 Part 2)
Post by: XxRoByNxX78 on February 07, 2012, 10:55:14 PM
you need to update soon i wanna know wht happens next plz update !!
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 16 Part 2)
Post by: chiqinna on July 14, 2012, 02:06:48 PM
 :OMG:just reading your fic~~~   :bingo: and wow~~ majisukaXmendolXAKB48??  :on asmo: interesting!! please update!!!  :mon angel:
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 16 Part 2)
Post by: Wmatsui22 on August 07, 2012, 05:56:11 AM
Please update fast ..

thank you..

i really like your fanfic..

Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 16 Part 2)
Post by: cisda83 on December 21, 2012, 07:45:00 AM
Your story is one of my fav.

Thank you for the fic.

Please update soon... I have been waiting for a while now.... to know what's going to happen to Minami and Atsuko..

I like your way of thinking making the Yankees becoming Idols.

I hope to see an update soon enough...

Thank's again for the fic.

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 16 Part 2)
Post by: qweakb on December 24, 2012, 03:44:40 PM
nice story idea... please update soon  :bow:
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 16 Part 2)
Post by: theblueknight on February 14, 2013, 08:51:22 AM
man cant believe you haven't updated this fic since I signed up to this place that was the whole reason I did  :smhid oh well I waited almost 7 years for the haruka and michiru sailor moon fanfiction meadow of sins to get updated and I think since I waited that long I can keep waiting here too so please update soon I love the whole majisuka gakuenxmendolxakb48 its amazing I wanna see more of interactions between sado and kuu and more of yuko and riku even now that she knows who riku is  :w00t: :shocked ill be waiting  :twothumbs
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 16 Part 2)
Post by: Archer1992 on April 17, 2013, 08:37:37 PM
I hope you can upload soon
really is a very good FF
Thank you very much for your effort
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 16 Part 2)
Post by: AoiShiori on April 21, 2013, 06:27:53 PM
Hi there  :)

It looks like that it's been a long time since you last updated.
I really like your concept of mixing the two  :)
Hope you can continue this fan fic.
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 16 Part 2)
Post by: lezperv on September 23, 2013, 10:49:03 PM
took me long enough to finally read this story and its really good  :on GJ:

I wish this could be continue  :pleeease: I really look forward to Atsuko finding out that Minami is still alive, hopefully Atsuko will forgive her because Minami have been protecting Atsuko  :luvluv1:

so is this story really dropped?  :fainted: sooo sad
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 16 Part 2)
Post by: noah minami on October 25, 2013, 07:06:40 PM
Looking forward for update :yossi:
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 16 Part 2)
Post by: shazrey on January 27, 2014, 07:09:00 PM
please continue this story  :bow:
i will waiting for ur update  :twothumbs
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 16 Part 2)
Post by: cisda83 on January 19, 2015, 05:13:46 AM
Still waiting for the continuous of this story

Been wondering what's going to happen next?

Can't wait up find out

Thank you for the story up until now.

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 16 Part 2)
Post by: luvsidney on January 19, 2015, 06:28:12 AM
when will Gakuran meet her true love(Choukoku?) o^^o
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 16 Part 2)
Post by: phoenix0i on January 20, 2015, 02:41:39 AM
This is a nice spinoff.

i wonder how things would work out.
Title: Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 16 Part 2)
Post by: Erza_Jerusalem on December 06, 2016, 12:42:27 PM
this was a really great fic although it's been years since it was not continued anymore...

so i really enjoyed reading it until the end  :D

(i happened to stumble on this story while i was searching for something)