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Offline alpoo26

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It's Time.... (Atsumina) UPDATED 03/14/2014
« on: March 04, 2014, 07:27:04 PM »
This is my very first fan fiction.

Please tell me your honest opinion. I will write the continuation depending on how its received.

Please be kind of me  :dozing: :dozing:


It's Time

I’m constantly rolling around on my bed, I’ve had such a long day and my body is exhausted. Still, thoughts are running through my mind at an incredible speed preventing me from getting my much needed sleep. I reach for my phone and scroll through my contacts I look at her name with the strongest urge to call her. I could really use her company right now. Somehow she always manages to put my troubled thoughts at ease. But my stubbornness got the best of me and decided not to go through with it. It is already 1am after all, I’m sure she’s tired too.


Since tomorrow is going to be a big day I decided to give sleep another try. Trying to silence my thoughts, I hear a knock on the door.


My heart skips a beat with the feeling that I might know who it is.

 
Upon opening the door, I was greeted with a tight hug. While in the embrace, I reach for the door and closed it behind her.


Finally releasing me from her hug, I look at her laughing. “Well hello to you too Atsuko”


“Tomorrow is an important day. And knowing you, I bet you’re having a hard time sleeping from thinking too much. Not to mention the fact that you’re too stubborn to call for help.” She says as she a cup of coffee while heading to the living room.


“You know I’m having a hard time sleeping and you give me coffee!?!?” I say looking at her as I raise an eyebrow.
“It’s hot chocolate BAKA!” she says as we sit on the couch.


“Minami” Atsuko calls my name as I look at her seeing concern in her usually happy eyes


“Yea?” I reply while looking at the hot chocolate in my hands taken aback by the sudden change of mood


“I know you’re not the type to talk about your feelings and troubles. You don’t have to act strong in front of me Minami. But you know, I understand everything even if you don’t talk about it. Just let me be the rock that you need. It’s okay to be vulnerable once in awhile.” Atsuko says as she wraps her arms around me


Placing my hot chocolate on the table, I reply Atsuko’s hug my wrapping my arms around her and rest my head on her shoulder.
I hug her, I hug her tight as I realize what I will be doing tomorrow. With the realization in my kind, I begin to break down. Tears start to fall from my eyes as I begin to sob uncontrollably.


I feel Atsuko rubbing my back still holding on to me. Whispering things like “It’ll be okay” We’ve all done it” “I know how you feel” “I’ll be there”.

After what felt like an eternity, I’ve finally calmed down a bit.

With this opportunity, she takes my hand and pulls me off the couch.

“It’s time to sleep Minami. You need your rest.”

Still sobbing a little and nod as she leads me to my bed and tuck me in.

I lay down worried she’ll leave but then I feel her lay down beside me and hug me from behind.

Times like these makes me the most grateful of Atsuko. When words don’t need to be said to each other. We just know what the other is thinking or need. I love her my best friend, the irreplaceable partner of mine.

I’m glad she’ll be there tomorrow. For tomorrow, I will make the biggest decision of my life. When it comes… it’s time. 

« Last Edit: March 14, 2014, 06:43:47 AM by alpoo26 »

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Re: It's Time.... (Atsumina)
« Reply #1 on: March 04, 2014, 07:41:16 PM »
Welcome to the forum. :welcome

Nice job so far! Hope for a continuation.

Atsumina so sweet and cute~ :heart: And now, Mina must make her decision.

XD Sorry, I call Takamina by "Mina" sometimes.

Good luck. Hope for an update soon. :deco:
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Re: It's Time.... (Atsumina)
« Reply #2 on: March 04, 2014, 08:33:13 PM »
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I want to know what the biggest decision takamina .. :twothumbs

yeah, you have to continue this story  :farofflook:

I like Atsumina, and make it sweetest moment  :mon inluv:

Thank you  :yep:

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Re: It's Time.... (Atsumina)
« Reply #3 on: March 05, 2014, 12:25:45 AM »
Well, I guess Minami will be graduating, but are you making this as an OS or a long fic?

It's really short, so I can't really give you my exact feelings on this, but I am intrigue, so please do continue ^_^

Update soon and welcome to the forum XD
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Re: It's Time.... (Atsumina)
« Reply #4 on: March 05, 2014, 01:35:51 AM »
This is my very first fan fiction.
YEY FOR YOU  :on woohoo:

and its atsumina!!!
YEY FOR ME  :on woohoo:
im so happy that your first fic is atsumina  :wriggly:
new fic to lurk :ding:
just keep going and i cant wait to read your next update  :hehehe:
update soon :on gay:

ps. :welcome to  :jphip:

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Re: It's Time.... (Atsumina)
« Reply #5 on: March 05, 2014, 02:14:08 AM »
graduation?... awww

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Re: It's Time.... (Atsumina)
« Reply #6 on: March 05, 2014, 04:48:34 AM »
What decision?

Graduation?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

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Re: It's Time.... (Atsumina)
« Reply #7 on: March 09, 2014, 11:45:48 AM »
I really like the story so far. And I'm very curious how it goes on  :thumbup

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Re: It's Time.... (Atsumina)
« Reply #8 on: March 11, 2014, 09:54:53 AM »
This will continue, right ?
is this about graduation announcement? :? :?

please update soon...

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Re: It's Time.... (Atsumina)
« Reply #9 on: March 11, 2014, 05:02:49 PM »
Update please

What going to happen the next day?...what decision Minami have to make?


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It's Time.... (Atsumina) Updated 03/14/2014
« Reply #10 on: March 14, 2014, 05:56:16 AM »
Hi everyone!!!!

I hope to continue this like last time, depends on how it's received!!! 
THE POSSIBILITIES!!!!


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It's Time Chapter 2


With the sun shining in my face, I wake up to realize that Atsuko had left while I was asleep. I pick up my phone to check the time it’s already 9am. I see a text message and read it as I checked the time.

I had to leave early for a shooting today.

Please be sure to take it easy today.

I will be there later. Don’t worry.

Love, Atsuko.

A smile comes across my face as I get out of bed to get ready. Atsuko’s message adding a spring to my step regardless of what I’m about to do later.



It’s been 10 years since I’ve been with AKB. And being able to personally to see and experience the miraculous growth we’ve had makes me the proudest person in the world.


I can’t believe I am the only pioneer left. Nyan Nyan announced her gradation a little under a year after Yuko left. That broke my heart. Then again I knew Nyan Nyan will be fine after leaving. I knew that I will miss her so much. Her light heartedness made my job as General Manager a lot less stressful. Oh how thankful I was to Aki-P when he transferred her back to Team A after the Grand


Shuffle especially with Yuko about to leave at that time. She really helped me cope.
It was a surprise to me when Miichan announced her graduation. But then again I knew it was coming. She did say that she will leave once one of her Three Musketeers reaches senbatsu during the election. KojiMako the rising star that she is achieved that in no time. Despite her pass scandal, Miichan had been an inspiration to me. She’s overcame all that on her own and grown in to a wonderful leader. She’s made Team 4 into a formidable team. Even though she’s no longer a member, Miichan now has a Variety Show that works with AKB members highlighting their individual talents.


And a last, it’s my turn.. the last Pioneer.


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I arrive at the theater and see it already crawling with fans outside. I was also pleasantly surprised that pretty much all the members are already here to prepare for tonights performances. As I walk into the theater, I see all the members huddled around into a circle around Yuihan and Sayanee. They all seem to be having a serious discussion as no one notice me arrive. I walk slowly and hide behind a pillar to listen in.


“ Everybody listen up! “ Yuihan says in a loud clear voice that silences the murmurs. (I’d like to add that I thought the once shy and quite Yuihan how to be more outspoken. I’m quite proud of that) =D


“ Tonight is a very important night for all of us. It’s AKB48’s 10 year anniversary!!! “ Sayanee shouts in a proud voice as everyone cheers. She waves her hand in the air and quickly stops the cheers.


“ We all know that it is supposed to be fun and it will be. There is no doubt about that. It is quite an achievement after all. But I want you all to keep in mind how important today is. “ Sayanee says as she looks around at the members circled around her. 


“ As much as we all want to stand out. Please remember that you are a part of a group during performances. We bring out the best in each other. “ Yuihan says as Sayanee nods her head in agreement.


“ Similar to every year, we will all be having our performances with our Generation Members. The Keinin’s will have their own as well. Please continue to practice till it’s time to get ready to the show.” Sayanee instructs the members as they all nod in reply.


“ If you have any questions or concerns please and I mean PLEASE come see me and Sayanee “ Yuihan says as she slaps Sayanee in the back making her take a step forward because of the force causing everyone to giggle.


“ Alright, alright. Everyone get practicing “ Sayanee says as she punches Yuihan on the shoulder.

Watching their mini meeting made me proud. Not just at the group but also and Yui and Sayaka. I always knew they would made great leaders. And I think Aki-P also thought the same since he made them my Assistant General Managers at Yuko’s Graduation concert. I was pleasantly surprise and how well they took on the challenge. Not to mention that fact that it took loads of my shoulders. It was fun watching them grow beautifully.


While everyone scatters in their own groups to practice, I carefully made my presence known pretending to have arrived and not heard any of it.


Once seen, I was greeted by a warm welcome from everyone. I bowed at everyone to greet them back.

Yui and Sayaka headed straight for me.

“ Good morning you two” I smile at them

“ Ohayo Takamina-san” the both say in unison

“ Don’t worry Takamina-san. We’ve sent everyone to practice their number for tonight so you won’t have to once you got here “ Yui-han says with a proud look on her face

“ Yea. So you can practice for your performance too Takamina-san. After all, you’re the only one performing alone tonight. “ Sayanee says as they both look at me with a worried look.

“ Don’t worry guys. I’ve sang that song a million times before. “ I say to them reassuringly.

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The festival stared quite smoothly.
Atsuko no where in sight..

We performed all our singles to date. It is a lot of fun seeing all the girls enjoy themselves and work together. Reminds me of us the first gens when all of this began.

One by one each generation began their numbers. And as they finish my turn comes ever closer. I look at the audience and Atsuko is nowhere to be found. My nervousness starts to take over.


I stand behind the stage as I watch Sae-Chan, Umechan and Kana perform.  Once they finished, they head backstage.


“ Ganbatte Minami “ Sae says with her always happy smile making me feel a bit better. Sae has always been a great support. Specially when the others left.


“ Ganbatte Takamina-san” says both Umechan and Kana patting my back.


I step into the stage and hear the loudest cheer from the audience and I begin singing Itosisha no Accel. I soak in all the energy from the crowd. Giving what felt like the best performance of my life.


After my performance, I stand on the stage and scan the crowd. My heart already raising from the adrenaline, beats even faster as I see the back.

I stand my ground as I see the smiling faces of Atsuko, Tomochin, Nyan Nyan, Mariko, Miichan my friends, my fellow pioneers. Not to forget the small figure beside Nyan Nyan giving me her familiar bright smile, Yuko. They’re all here. Giving me the courage to move forward. It’s time. 


I bow as the cheers slowly stop. The crowd and members expecting my usual speech.


Looking at the crowd, friends, members and media before me.


“ I Takahashi Minami will graduate from AKB48 “



TO BE CONTINUED!!!!??!?!?!?!

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Re: It's Time.... (Atsumina) UPDATED 03/14/2014
« Reply #11 on: March 14, 2014, 07:34:52 AM »
If Minami do graduate next year, I want it to be like this too. Her first gen friends and Yuko with Sayaka to come see her announce it or something like that.

I have a feeling that Minami will be the last one too. In a sense your fanfic is pretty realistic, but at the same time who knows what her future graduation would be like *shrugs*

I wish you would of wrote a longer chapter, but I guess this is okay too. Glad there is another fellow AtsuMina writer out there utilizing their writing/idea skills  :on GJ: hope you update soon.
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Re: It's Time.... (Atsumina) UPDATED 03/14/2014
« Reply #12 on: March 14, 2014, 06:35:22 PM »
I love this chapter  :heart: :heart:. I even started to cry, thinking about Minami standing alone at the stage at the anniversary and announcing her graduation  :cry:. Really great chapter, please continue.

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Re: It's Time.... (Atsumina) UPDATED 03/14/2014
« Reply #13 on: March 14, 2014, 06:55:13 PM »
Ah~ First generation is all leaving T^T

I know it will eventually happen, but I still refuse to accept it...

Minami leaving... seems almost impossible... The group won't be the same

Hope you update soon. Need to see how this all unfolds T^T
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:heart: l Dropped: Tentomu chu l REBORN l Bite me l NMB Gakuen l YumeToki l Cafe 48 l :heart: l Hiatus/Indefinite: Samurai l Blood Bonds l Night Wind's Deed l PRISM l Time Travelers l :heart:
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Re: It's Time.... (Atsumina) UPDATED 03/14/2014
« Reply #14 on: March 17, 2014, 05:59:11 AM »
Yeah I agreed it's a bit of realistic in the story

Minami left at thier 10th anneversary whereas Haruna left after Yuko's

And I do want Minami to announce her graduation in the presences of her fellow graduated members

It would be memorable....

Can't wait to see the next chapter if there is one

Thank you for the story

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