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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (A Long Time Coming - updated 7/8)
« Reply #320 on: July 09, 2008, 10:45:45 AM »

Takahashi Ai was frustrated.

Somehow after reading just this one line I knew what would be going on  :rofl:

Risa reading certain books :lol:

Gosh...it really was amazing.... :farofflook: :wriggly:

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (A Long Time Coming - updated 7/8)
« Reply #321 on: July 09, 2008, 12:45:40 PM »
lmao @ the book Gaki was reading. XD

with who?!!  :twisted:

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (A Long Time Coming - updated 7/8)
« Reply #322 on: July 09, 2008, 04:54:10 PM »
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Ai was bothered that they had never actually done anything.
that's understandable... some people do it after having met... two years of being together is a long time... ai is a patient lover...

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Until that night.
HUWAAH!

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“I think I’m ready to…you know”,
ooh... :lol: sexxxy....

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Both agreed it was worth the wait.
tru love waits  :lol:

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Announcement [NC] - updated 7/9)
« Reply #323 on: July 10, 2008, 06:03:06 AM »
@JFC: Glad to have you back. I was worried you didn't like my writing anymore. I read that you weren't feeling too much like commenting so I hope you feel better soon. Happy you liked the perv! :lol: Tanakame!!! :wub: was fun to write! Naughty Gaki, huh? She was preparing! XD
@peti-chan: Things are never what they seem with us authors huh? :D
@ringo-hime: Yeah, the book seems quite popular!
@tru_harmony: That's true, some ppl waste no time at all. But then there's the ones who care AKA Ai-chan. Yeah, sexxxy!!!! I still love to see that!


Announcement!!!!

I'll be in Japan for 8 days starting tomorrow. I should be back on the 18th. I was gonna try and leave a fic to keep you occupied but I couldn't think of anything. :sweatdrop: Don't miss me too much. But I will definitely miss you all! :) My aunt will have her laptop so I'll try and keep up with everyone else's stories. Who knows, I may get inspiration and write something.
Sayonara, see you again, adios, bye bye, cha cha~ :heart: I love you all!!!!! :wub:

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Announcement [NC] - updated 7/9)
« Reply #324 on: July 10, 2008, 06:38:46 AM »
enjoy your trip!!!

I'll miss you!!!

Don't you worry about us here... i think we can pull through for a couple of days without dosage of a new fic or an update... have fun!!!

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Announcement [NC] - updated 7/9)
« Reply #325 on: July 10, 2008, 07:11:37 AM »
Ah gomenasai, I'm sooooooooooooo slow to comment. You have posted a LOT since I last did. Thanks for all the awesome stories *hugs* Is that a Gaki-san avatar I see that you are using? Nice one :)

Have fun in Japan you lucky ducky. Don't forget to pick up some nice merchandise so show them to us so we can all envy you like crazy :P

A Long Time Coming

Why do I get the feeling Risa was reading something....erm...educational? XD

Confessions

Awwwww that's so sweet. A little shocking but still sweet :P

Reassurance

At first I was thinking Eri is so cute appearing in...urm, what you wrote her in :lol: But in the end she was so understanding and strong towards Reina!

A Vow of Perseverance

>.< At the stupid guy for hurting Reina but thumbs up at her socking him :twisted:

Superstar

TakaGaki!!!!! *jumps like mad* Awwww Risa watching Ai like that and admiring her :oops: I can totally imagine it and it's super cute~~~!!!

Peek of Plaid

Oh I'm definitely a fan of plaid. Both the ones on clothes and this one :P

The Kids Don't Know

*clears throat to prepare self for yelling* TAKAGAKI~~~~!!!!!!!!!!! XD One word...A-D-O-R-A-B-L-E!!! *dies*   

Out of the Blue

Miki never changes :D Ehhhhhhhhhh at Ai liking Miki. That's different but I can accept it. I just like that last line for some reason. Sounds so sentimental :heart:

And I'm finally done. Woah at the 8 fics I missed. Double woah at the amount of little round yellow thingys I used XD

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Announcement [NC] - updated 7/9)
« Reply #326 on: July 10, 2008, 07:17:59 AM »
oh man.. i'm so sure that i'm going to miss your fanfics.. lolx.. have fun in Japan. =D

Peace

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Announcement [NC] - updated 7/9)
« Reply #327 on: July 10, 2008, 07:50:05 AM »
@JFC: Glad to have you back. I was worried you didn't like my writing anymore. I read that you weren't feeling too much like commenting so I hope you feel better soon. Happy you liked the perv! :lol:
Well, how can you NOT like perv? :P

And yeah, I'm still around this part of the forum. Just haven't been feeling like doing the massive amounts of massive commentary lately.



Announcement!!!!

I'll be in Japan for 8 days starting tomorrow. I should be back on the 18th. I was gonna try and leave a fic to keep you occupied but I couldn't think of anything. :sweatdrop: Don't miss me too much. But I will definitely miss you all! :) My aunt will have her laptop so I'll try and keep up with everyone else's stories. Who knows, I may get inspiration and write something.
Sayonara, see you again, adios, bye bye, cha cha~ :heart: I love you all!!!!! :wub:
Lucky. Have fun, and take pictures to share! :rockon:

JPH!P :heart:'s kuro808, Fushigidane, ChrNo, Jab & marimari. Always.

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Announcement [NC] - updated 7/9)
« Reply #328 on: July 10, 2008, 12:12:43 PM »
have fun in Japan!  :)

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Announcement [NC] - updated 7/9)
« Reply #329 on: July 10, 2008, 06:39:58 PM »
yep yep, we'll be ok!  :D have a fun and safe trip in Japan!!  :heart:

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Announcement [NC] - updated 7/9)
« Reply #330 on: July 10, 2008, 08:44:26 PM »
To Japan! :w00t: Wow, you're lucky :P Itterashai ! XD

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Announcement [NC] - updated 7/9)
« Reply #331 on: July 13, 2008, 11:00:43 AM »
I think read 4 6, math is hard :grin:


Peek of Plaid

 :drool: XD


Superstar

 :wub:


A Vow of Perseverance
 
:O :angry:


A Vow of Perseverance Reassurance

 :love:  :(


Confessions

 :heart: :heart: :heart: yeah, turtle power  :muffin:


A Long Time Coming

2 years?  :O that's long  :grin:



have fun in Japan  :usagiii:
« Last Edit: July 13, 2008, 11:04:33 AM by kRisZ »

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Sunset Lovers - updated 7/20)
« Reply #332 on: July 20, 2008, 10:52:36 PM »
@tru_harmony: Love you!!! :lol:
@lil_hamz: Aww, thanks for the hug!! *hugs back* Yup, Gaki's striped bikini overpowers me!!!
@kinbari: Thanks! I'm back now so yay! :lol:
@JFC: I have some pics but I have to get most of them from my aunt because I was lazy and made her take them. XD
@ringo-hime: Thanks!!!
@shadowolf8: Thanks! I had a fun trip!
@peti-chan: Tadaima!!!
@kRisZ: Hahaha! Don't worry, math isn't my best subject!

Ok, I actually started this before I left, but ran out of time to finish it. I got a little rambly and didn't end it ideally. So I'm only partially happy with it. And I got a little carried away with weird detail.
Oh well, enjoy! :lol:
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Sunset Lovers

  “Let’s go to the beach…” Takahashi Ai suddenly said, startling the girl laying next to her. “Eh?”, Niigaki Risa groaned, rubbing the sleep from her eyes. It was too early to be talking. She attempted to cover Ai’s mouth by flinging her arm upwards but ended up smacking her cheek instead. “Ow!”, the girl in question shouted, rubbing her tender cheek and glaring. “I’m so sorry!!!”, Risa squeaked, sitting up and kissing the reddened skin. She ran her tongue slowly over the affected area, feeling it heat up as Ai blushed. “Forgive me?”, she pouted, putting on her best puppy-dog face. “Fine but you have to come to the beach with me!”, the older girl perked up. Risa nodded slowly, slightly regretting her need for forgiveness.
    Two hours later, the pair stood at the edge of Kamakura beach. “C’mon!”, Ai grinned, grabbing the hand beside and pulling her into the sand. They ran until they reached the water. Risa wiggled from Ai’s grasp and retreated into the dry sand to put down their supplies. She hurried back to her friend’s side, taking the smooth hand back into her own. They stood, gazing at the brilliant blue ocean, sparkling with sun. “Looks beautiful”, Ai mumbled, seemingly mesmerized by the view.
   When the girl was finally able to tear her eyes from the sea, she realized that Risa had grown bored and set out their towels. “Let’s go into the water!!!”, Ai declared, squatting next to her friend. “But it’s so cold!!”, the younger girl whined, her lips pursing into a frown. Ai couldn’t resist and placed her own lips onto the ones in front of her. The reaction queen, eyes wide with shock, pulled away with a small smacking noise. “We’re in public”, she hissed, looking around. There were other people on the beach, but they were too far away to notice the liplock. “Whatever”, the short-haired girl dismissed with a wave of her hand. She stood and began to uncover her bikini.
    Feeling Risa’s eyes on her, Ai carefully pulled her yellow tube top over her head to reveal the white top with blue and green design. Without looking down at the other girl, she pulled down her denim skirt and stepped out of it, adjusting the white suit bottoms a bit. “Are you coming?”, she asked, as she began running towards the water. Risa wasted no time in removing her own tube top and shorts and charged after the other.
    But the eldest Gokkie stopped short, about ankle deep into the cool ocean. The youngest of 5th generation wasn’t paying attention, knocking into Ai’s body and collapsing on top of it. She quickly rolled off and pulled her friend up from the water. “Are you okay?”, she asked, holding the extremely wet girl in her arms. She began mumbling nervously, apologizing. Ai rolled her eyes and lightly shoved the girl holding her backwards. “Waaa!”, she screeched, falling into the water. Ai began to laugh at the shocked looking face.
   Risa didn’t think it was funny at all. But she had a plan. Holding up her hand, she knew her friend would grab it to help her up. When she did, Risa pulled hard and Ai landed next to her with a splash. That was enough to start an all-out water war. Ai cupped her hands and flung a handful of water into Risa’s face. “Oh hell no…”, she declared,  flicking her hands across the water and onto Ai’s flat stomach.
   They continued playing around until somehow, Risa ended up straddling Ai’s waist in the water. Both girls’ faces slightly flushed at their position, but neither made any move to change it. The cool ocean water contrasted with the heat flowing between their bodies. Without any hesitation, Risa lowered her lips onto Ai’s, pressing them closer together. Her arms cut through the water and encircled the waist underneath her. Ai wanted so badly to hold her lover but needed her arms to keep them above the water. “How about we move this up some more?”, she breathed as Risa stroked her back, tickling with her long nails.
    The younger girl reluctantly stood up and pulled Ai with her. They splashed as fast as possible to their towels. Ai laid down onto the blanket and held her arms open. Risa obliged and sat on top of the girl, reclaiming her lips. Ai’s fingers creeped up and traced the water drops from Risa’s neck, down her chest and stomach. They went up again, this time stopping on Risa’s bikini strap. She could feel the face against her redden as she tugged playfully. She yanked the string over and over until the bow at the back of Risa’s neck came lose and the top landed on her own chest with a light slap. Ai broke away from the kiss and pushed Risa’s body up slightly.
   Salty fingers traced curves and touched hidden places. Hot breath was felt on damp skin and low groans echoed through their ears. A pair of wet bikinis lay forgotten next to them in the sand. Birds chirped in the trees as both girls came down from their high, sweaty bodies braced against each other. Risa’s tongue slipped out from between her bruised lips and lapped at Ai’s neck, tasting the skin. It reminded her that they were in fact, laying naked at a public beach. She freaked out a bit at the thought and tried to retrieve her clothing from the sand. But Ai distracted her with a squeeze. “Look forward”, she whispered, pronouncing each word slowly and with purpose. The deep brown eyes turned up towards the sparkling sea and a gasp escaped her lips. Right in front of them was a magnificent sunset.
   Shades of red, orange, pink and blue danced across the horizon, streaking the sky. Both girls smiled in awe at the beauty of nature. The pair cuddled, the skin-on-skin contact both relaxing and exciting them. “Aren’t you glad we came to the beach?”, the older girl whispered. Risa nodded, getting lost in the moment.

A moment of true happiness.

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Sunset Lovers - updated 7/20)
« Reply #333 on: July 20, 2008, 11:39:16 PM »
another sexxxy one!

i love you too, sb3k...

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“Forgive me?”, she pouted, putting on her best puppy-dog face.

i'd love to see that puppy-dog face...

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Salty fingers traced curves and touched hidden places. Hot breath was felt on damp skin and low groans echoed through their ears. A pair of wet bikinis lay forgotten next to them in the sand. Birds chirped in the trees as both girls came down from their high, sweaty bodies braced against each other. Risa’s tongue slipped out from between her bruised lips and lapped at Ai’s neck, tasting the skin. It reminded her that they were in fact, laying naked at a public beach. She freaked out a bit at the thought and tried to retrieve her clothing from the sand. But Ai distracted her with a squeeze.

sexxxiness overload right there...

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Shades of red, orange, pink and blue danced across the horizon, streaking the sky. Both girls smiled in awe at the beauty of nature. The pair cuddled, the skin-on-skin contact both relaxing and exciting them. “Aren’t you glad we came to the beach?”, the older girl whispered. Risa nodded, getting lost in the moment.

it's indeed a
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A moment of true happiness.

thanks for writing that one up... really awesome...

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Sunset Lovers - updated 7/20)
« Reply #334 on: July 21, 2008, 12:18:10 AM »
OKAERI!!! :wave:


Sunset Lovers
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Feeling Risa’s eyes on her, Ai carefully pulled her yellow tube top over her head to reveal the white top with blue and green design. Without looking down at the other girl, she pulled down her denim skirt and stepped out of it, adjusting the white suit bottoms a bit. “Are you coming?”, she asked
Oh, that's just TOO easy.
:wahaha:



They're still on a public beach, right? Damn kinky. :twisted:

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Sunset Lovers - updated 7/20)
« Reply #335 on: July 21, 2008, 06:50:30 AM »
Welcome back!!!!

must say that story was  :wub: then  XD then  :twisted: and then  :wub:

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Sunset Lovers - updated 7/20)
« Reply #336 on: July 21, 2008, 03:00:03 PM »
OOH! welcome back~  :lol:
so cool >______< hahaha. and hawtt  :w00t: :w00t: :w00t:

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Sunset Lovers - updated 7/20)
« Reply #337 on: July 21, 2008, 06:14:54 PM »
hey welcome back.... umm so i just realized i haven't post here in forever  :mon sweat: lol sorry about that the lurker side of me is stronger than the commentator side so ummm yeah anywho

sweet sexy fun at the beach AWESOME! :mon thumb:
No one on the corner got swagga like us!

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Sunset Lovers - updated 7/20)
« Reply #338 on: July 21, 2008, 06:37:43 PM »
How I missed your stories :farofflook:

Another great TakaGaki moment, very well written and amazingly sweet :luvluv2:

I want more TakaGaki... oh and don't forget TanaKamei :luvluv1:

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Sunset Lovers - updated 7/20)
« Reply #339 on: July 22, 2008, 07:45:42 AM »
Awesome title like always :)

TakaGaki together, on the beach, minus their clothes...GAH...you put evil thoughts in my head  :oops: But I like, so do it more often XD

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