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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Change - updated 6/20)
« Reply #240 on: June 21, 2008, 08:12:22 AM »
^ i think Dou? means wat u think or something like that..

weee another great one.. mikixRika~


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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Change - updated 6/20)
« Reply #241 on: June 21, 2008, 12:10:27 PM »
one question what does Haromoni@ have to do with it??  :?

Dou? Dou? Dou? ...that's what Ai-chan asks her victims as Tsuboman (her new character in Haromoni@ on Moutube) when she's pulling off a joke... it has the meaning "how was it" or "what do you think" Let's go, Tsuboman :onioncheer:

RikaxMiki... interesting couple... nice written  :whistle:

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Change - updated 6/20)
« Reply #242 on: June 21, 2008, 12:34:32 PM »
Woah~ I fell off my chair. literally!  :sweatdrop:
Yay! Charmikitty! We needs lots of those heres!  XD
That's pretty sweet too! How Miki was gunna cry when she couldn't see Rika..  :wub:
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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Change - updated 6/20)
« Reply #243 on: June 21, 2008, 09:37:19 PM »
Roffle, I thought OCG II was the only story with a slight Charmikitty focus xDDD

It IS an uncommon pairing, I'm glad you decided to write it :3

It's cute how Miki's personality got toned down as a result of dating Rika. The tough girl is now a softie xDDD.

I look forward to your future stuffs~

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Change - updated 6/20)
« Reply #244 on: June 21, 2008, 10:50:24 PM »
YYYYYYYYYEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSS!!!!! Someone else who's writing about the awesomeness that is CHARMIKITTY :rocon:

You wrote it really well too SBK (<- to lazy to write out your full name, gomen) I'm impressed ^_^

And come ooonnn charmikitty ain't that weird / rare... not to me atleast ^^;
Rika <3 So funneh

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Like the Butterflies - updated 6/21)
« Reply #245 on: June 22, 2008, 06:03:53 AM »
Wow, I'm excited! New readers!!!!! But my regulars...I still love y'all!!!! :heart:
@tru_harmony: YEAH!!! Change = not so bad.
@Yukari: I never read too much about them but they are kinda cool together. Best of both worlds, I guess.
@JFC: Nothing less for our queen, I presume? Thanks for the applause~ :wub:
@shadowolf8: What can I say, I'm more of a lover myself (sometimes!). Like Kame said, the whole "Dou? Dou? Dou?" thing is from Haromoni@. Ai-chan plays a character called Tsubo Tsubo Man who says that to the ppl he questions. He asks them how his lame jokes were. Happy to help brighten your day!
@ringo-hime: Yeah, "Dou?" does mean "how is it?"
@Kame: You are saikou! Guess you've been watching your Haromoni@! Thanks, I try.
@zay05ohayou: Thanks for reading and commenting! Hope you didn't hurt yourself falling. Miki's becoming more attentive towards her feminine side, thanks to a certain other girl. Love Revolution~
@Yuuyami: Wow, I feel honored~ I like OCG II, btw. I like their love/hate relationship kinda thing. I think Rika could have that affect on anyone... XD Thanks for watching me and my writing! -gratefully accepts hardhat- I'm afraid I may use this thing soon. Even though I have plenty of time this summer and I've been updating so frequently, I have a feeling I'll be slowing down soon. Hopefully not, though.
@poets:  :D I'm glad you're happy. They are definitely growing on me. Thanks! It was my first time writing them so I was a bit nervous. So it's great that it turned out ok. The nickname/abbreviation is fine. Ok, I've read it before but...it's just not as mainstream. Hopefully, it will become soon!

Since everyone seemed to like this change, here's another!
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Like the Butterflies

    Fujimoto Miki walked leisurely through Yoyogi Park, enjoying the sunshine. She stretched her arms over her head, her purple satin tank top rippling in the light breeze. She strolled around, smiling at a little kid being pulled around by a puppy. Finally, she arrived at a grassy area where a picnic was waiting for her, along with a certain someone.
   “Mou~, you’re late!”, Ishikawa Rika frowned as Miki removed her shoes and joined her on the plaid blanket. “I’m sorry”, the younger soloist grinned, rubbing the back of her head sheepishly. “No, you’re not”, the girly V-U-Den leader replied, a tiny smile playing on her rosy lips. “I’m a little sorry”, Miki fake-pouted. They began to laugh and blush slightly. They used to dislike each other but now they were an item, finding that they had more in common than first thought. “Look! A butterfly!”, squealed Rika, pointing at the blue winged creature, floating about them. “It’s a gorgeous color”, Miki agreed, watching it dart up and down. They sat in silence for a few seconds, in awe. But a certain woman’s stomach interrupted the moment. She blushed and her companion giggled.
     Rika opened the bag she brought and removed a huge bento spread. “Whoa, you made all this?”, Miki asked, shocked at the sheer amount of food. “Yup, I made it just for you”, she answered, as she opened all the containers and handed her girlfriend a pair of chopsticks. “Itadakimasu~”, they chorused and dug in. “Everything is so good!”, Miki cheered, “Thanks for going through all this trouble.” Rika simply nodded and beamed at the sight of her happy companion.
   After they ate, the pair decided to lay down and enjoy the nice weather. Miki laid down on the blanket, using a smaller bag as a pillow. She beckoned Rika into her arms, where the charming girl cuddled into her body. Soaking up the warmth, they let the sun’s rays wash over them. “The butterfly is back!”, Rika suddenly shouted, “And there’s another one with it.” Sure enough, the blue butterfly returned, this time with a mate. They danced happily in the sky. “They look so happy”, Rika commented dreamily. “Like us, baby”, Miki said, “Happy alone but even better together” The older girl’s heart melted at the comment and she scooted up to kiss her girlfriend.
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I'm turning soft too! I think I need to write some more angst, I miss it! But fluff is so funnnnnn! XD
« Last Edit: June 22, 2008, 07:16:14 AM by strawb3rrykream »

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Like the Butterflies - updated 6/21)
« Reply #246 on: June 22, 2008, 07:14:27 AM »
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They used to dislike each other but now they were an item, finding that they had more in common than first thought. “Look! A butterfly!”, squealed Rika, pointing at the blue winged creature, floating about them. “It’s a gorgeous color”, Miki agreed, watching it dart up and down

awwww... butterfly...

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“The butterfly is back!”, Rika suddenly shouted, “And there’s another one with it.” Sure enough, the blue butterfly returned, this time with a mate. They danced happily in the sky. “They look so happy”, Rika commented dreamily. “Like us, baby”, Miki said, “Happy alone but even better together” The older girl’s heart melted at the comment and she scooted up to kiss her girlfriend.

"baby"!?

what has the world come to?!

it's sooooo sweeet... it's lovely...

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Like the Butterflies - updated 6/21)
« Reply #247 on: June 22, 2008, 08:15:22 AM »
Charmikitty!!   :muffin:
 :wub: They're so cute together  XD

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Like the Butterflies - updated 6/21)
« Reply #248 on: June 22, 2008, 10:54:12 AM »
One Sunday Morning

I think someone just raised the temperature in here, huuuuuuu~~~ hot  :P


One Saturday Night

Now, the TanaKamei pairing is a fascinating one. I can never decide who I prefer Reina with, that's why it's fascinating? :lol: But I liked this and how you had them start out with fun and games and then end it with the right amount of sweetness :wub:


Mmm, Silk

This one definitely drove me crazy XD Damn...


She Noticed

*Gasp* Poor Gaki-san :( I would have liked this fic to be longer but you managed to get everything fitted in perfectly. I'm glad you ended on a good note though. I don't think I can handle Risa feeling hurt about Ai leaving her out :D


Change

Woah...at first I thought this was going to be about how Miki became a softie. I didn't expect Rika to be there too. Hmmm.. this certainly opens up new possibilities :P

Like the Butterflies

Usually I don't read about pairings other than my favorites but I make it a point to read all your fics and I actually like the IshiMiki pairing. I think your writing helped a lot with this :)

Btw, I'm all for angst so write away XD
   

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Like the Butterflies - updated 6/21)
« Reply #249 on: June 22, 2008, 12:24:21 PM »
Change

Awww~~Miki is a softie uke XD sooo cute... :wub:

Like the Butterflies

Miki as the romantic type? why not :P

I like seeing old characters in new roles so thanks for those little changes you did to Miki :lol:

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Like the Butterflies - updated 6/21)
« Reply #250 on: June 22, 2008, 01:36:27 PM »
ahh~ nice! i love Miki being all sweet! Rika is a good influence!!
and really fluff is good! fluff is the best thing to read!! fluff is enjoyable!!  XD
i really love how you write your stories! its nice and short and very satisfying! (*´ο`*)<33
looking forward to more fluff! or maybe angst!  :D

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Like the Butterflies - updated 6/21)
« Reply #251 on: June 22, 2008, 04:16:01 PM »
OHH.. butterfly! ^^

cool!~ <3

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Like the Butterflies - updated 6/21)
« Reply #252 on: June 22, 2008, 09:24:21 PM »
Atashi?? Saikou :dunno: Kya~a arigatou gozaimashita  :shy2:

Of course I'm watching Haromoni@ I haven't missed a single episode this year! Haromoni@ is amazing, I love it :onioncheer:


Awww... so cute... Charmikitty and butterflies  :shy1: Can't wait for your next chapter!

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Like the Butterflies - updated 6/21)
« Reply #253 on: June 23, 2008, 12:05:50 AM »
it was a great charmikitty chapter...  :mon innocent:

it's difficult to see Miki like that... sweet, she always is the groping demon or a almost indifferent  :mon wind:

so i like it!!  :mon inluv:

i want a update~~  :onioncheer:

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Like the Butterflies - updated 6/21)
« Reply #254 on: June 23, 2008, 01:04:23 AM »
awww that was a cute story!  :wub: kinda nice to see Miki in a different light.  :)

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Like the Butterflies - updated 6/21)
« Reply #255 on: June 23, 2008, 03:30:49 AM »
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Like the Butterflies

Oh, the symbolism!   :lol:

And yay, finally some Charmikitty!  :)

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Like the Butterflies - updated 6/21)
« Reply #256 on: June 23, 2008, 08:41:29 AM »
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Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww...
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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Like the Butterflies - updated 6/21)
« Reply #257 on: June 23, 2008, 08:00:12 PM »
Ok, I swear I'm working on stuff! Thanks to Yuuyami's hard hat, I'm not suffering from writer's block. But I am being extremely picky. Nothing sounds right, I feel like I'm rushing through and I don't like it. So bear with me and hopefully, I can write something good. Thanks for all your love, support and comments! :D

@tru_harmony: I XD at your comment. I like adding the little "baby" everywhere! :P
@ijou_shinigami: Yup, cute is definitely them! :wub:
@lil_hamz: Reina......what can I say about her? She seems like she could go with nearly anyone.....maybe not. I don't know! But I am quite fond of her. I wasn't exactly sure where I was going with She Noticed. But I'm happy you liked it. And I'm also happy that I've helped you discover a new pairing. This section is very good with that. KonaKaga helped me see the cuteness in GakiKame. Hopefully, I'll get some angst soon. I kinda like writing painful stuff. Wonder what that says about me? :?
@peti-chan: Yeah, I think I like romantic Miki too. It's fun to kind of change up everything we know. Maybe she really is like that...
@zay05ohayou: Rika was able to change the un-changable! Powerful stuff! Thanks for liking my writing! Fluff is fun but I really do miss angst!
@ringo-hime: Yeah, I know. Butterfly is kinda weak.... :lol:
@Kame: Honto ni yo! Anta wa SAIKOU! :lol: Excuse my not-very-polite Japanese! I've been catching up on it.
@Yukari: I agree, it's not easy to see some badass being so cute but I think it's a good change. I'm sure she can be nice in real life sometimes.
@shadowolf8: Miki is a woman of many faces. This is one of them. :P
@Amarghetta: I know! Such a coincidence! My titles are kinda like that, you know?
@JFC: Thank you! Miki-sama is cuteeeeeee!

So minna, matte ne! Mou sugu dekimasu~ :heart:

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Like the Butterflies - updated 6/21)
« Reply #258 on: June 23, 2008, 09:00:40 PM »
Miki knows that if she's nice & romantic she'll get repayed later :twisted:

I'm all for the angst if you keep it away from a certain couple :P (actually, i'm probably still up for it then :lol: )

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Out of the Blue - updated 6/25)
« Reply #259 on: June 26, 2008, 05:12:57 AM »
@lollipopgirl: Yeah, I think you're right. Miki is pretty smart, in some things. (Just not geography XD) Angst.....didn't really happen! I tried but..... :( Oh well, this is not really angst but a little sad maybe?

I'm really sorry to all my readers! I've been preoccupied and lazy but I finally finished this. Not what I originally began with at all but I think it's something new.
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Out of the Blue

There she was.

She looked as cool as ever.

   I haven’t seen her since she left the project. That was quite a few years ago. I never really thought I’d see her again. I mean, we were friends but drifted after she left Morning Musume. Maybe she thought I never forgave her the scandal but inside, I was happy for her. I knew what she did was wrong but I couldn’t help but cheer her on.
   A crying noise brought me out of my thoughts. “Shhh, Aya-chan”, I shushed as I bounced my baby daughter in her carrier on my chest. She quieted down and I was left in silence once again. Should I go talk to her? Would she be happy to see me? Or would she be indifferent? After fighting with my thoughts for a good few minutes, I decided to go over. Luckily, she was still standing in the same area. I took a deep breath and started towards her.

“Miki-chan!”

   She turned towards my voice and looked a bit alarmed. Then a wide grin spread over her small face. “Ai-chan, how are you?”, she smiled and jogged over to me. She attempted to hug me but the baby carrier holding my baby foiled it. We hugged sideways and giggled. “I see you’ve been busy”, she commented, smiling at my little girl. “This is Ayano, she’s 6 months old”, I told her, stroking the baby hair on my daughter’s round head, “What are you up to?” She rubbed the back of her head sheepishly and replied, “Married with a 10 month old daughter” “Wow, that’s great”, I genuinely gasped, a little shocked at this domestic version of the badass woman I used to know.
   We chit-chatted a bit longer, telling each other all about our recent endeavors and family life. After exchanging phone numbers, we promised to keep in touch. She put her hand on my shoulder and smiled warmly. I smiled back…..until I felt something squeeze my butt. I blushed at the evil smirk on her face. “Still got it”, she whispered in my ear. I shivered as a tiny chill ran down my spine. “Anyway, really great to see you, Ai-chan”, she said, “I’ll call you soon” I waved and we parted ways once again.
    Why was I so nervous? Miki is Miki. The same beautiful, enchanting woman, only now she was married with a kid. I’m glad she’s happy now but something still feels different. A bit painful, somehow. Maybe because she never reciprocated the feelings I had for her so many years ago. Not that I ever told her.

Or maybe…..I never got over her.
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Strange, huh? :P

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