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Re: One Minute (Chapter 8)
« Reply #140 on: July 04, 2008, 02:55:13 AM »
By far my fave chapter, that's for sure!

Okay, so now I'm bubbling up with theories. I'm gonna have to take this back to chapter one.

The people talking at the beginning of the story as the minute goes by, I think it might be Yossy and Miki. The one that dissapears/Dies is Miki. Miki didn't go forth with her assignment for X or Y reason and hence she's terminated.

I kinda figured they had to make a deal with someone to end up being in their profession. The question is: under what conditions are you get offered the deal and How do you get chosen.

Something else that I keep wondering is "how do you become an assignment?" ... what is the criteria they go by to be chosen as an Assignment. Only time will tell =( ... PoPoe has no choice but to wait  :mon unsure:

P.S. Aya = :rockon:
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Re: One Minute (Chapter 8)
« Reply #141 on: July 04, 2008, 04:47:51 AM »
mmm it was a great chapter... really  :mon thumb:

Miki and her dilemmas... they're a trouble, it should to be difficult... kill persons... Miki even had human feelings  :mon determined:

yossy cares about miki... so lovely!!  :mon angel: (i'll die and go with them) XD

i want a new chapter!!

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Re: One Minute (Chapter 8)
« Reply #142 on: July 04, 2008, 12:18:07 PM »
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“You know we’re never supposed to approach an assignment unless it is as a stranger.” Yossui sighed and ran one hand through her short hair.
  :? Don't get what this means.

Yeah, that chapter explains a lot. I have a rough idea how Aya died and I reckon it has something to do with 'feeling for the target'. And perhaps it is a similar case this time round, so Miki might be thrown into the same dilemma to choose between living herself and letting a good person live. It's a hard decision to make.

Please have a flashback scene! Please :D

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Re: One Minute (Chapter 8)
« Reply #143 on: July 04, 2008, 08:33:27 PM »
Awww Miki does have a heart here :wub: and of course, it's all because of Aya!
Yossy is trying to corrupt her though :( She corrupt her in other ways as much as she likes in Italy, I wouldn't mind that :twisted:
I'm not gonna try guessing at the characters from the start coz I just wanna be surprised her at least develop with the story as it goes on... With saying that, I am probably leaning towards someone's (sorry i can't remember who :( ) theory that Miki falls for Ai and can't go through and dies in her place.
I think I get more of the ins and outs of the infectors now but who knows, I wouldn't be surprised if you throw me right off later :P
Btw, how many chapters do you have predicted for this one?

Also, I loooove the new trailer! :D I adore that song coz it was used in a Willow/Tara (Buffy) OPV once that was all kinds of awesome, so your's was a guaranteed win right from the get go! ;)
To me, the addition of all the trailers (even there has only been  thus far) gives the fic a 3-Dimensional feel... It makes it more then just words on the screen and more like a movie, thus giving it somewhat realistic feel, despite the 'supernatural' aspect of it :P
In short: I love the addition of trailers and please keep it up :heart:

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Re: One Minute (Chapter 8)
« Reply #144 on: August 03, 2008, 10:43:54 PM »
You're right in the sense that this creates more questions but wrong in the sense that it's a bad chapter. Far from it. I enjoyed it.

So Aya taught them to study their assignments closely, but not close enough to let it get in the way of their own lives. I'm curious as to what happened to Aya and why she's gone. And these interfectors are immortal? Like they're dead but not at the same time. Interesting. I wanna see what's gonna happen in Italy! Maybe some more loving, perhaps? :grin:

thanks!

Haha yea Aya is a big mystery in this story...but it doesn't look like where she went will be revealed anytime soon. Hell, Miki doesn't even know...dun dun dun

Aya taught them to be human,huh? :mon dunno: It's kinda surprising that it's Miki who has moral dilemmas as she normally is the most immoral one  XD but again, if it was Aya who told her that she definitely must have reconsidered some things

Yep human in that metaphorical way at least =P

So they've already died, but were "brought back" as part of some deal with the devil, yet they CAN die again. 

eh kinda, it will be explained in further detail later on

By far my fave chapter, that's for sure!

Okay, so now I'm bubbling up with theories. I'm gonna have to take this back to chapter one.

The people talking at the beginning of the story as the minute goes by, I think it might be Yossy and Miki. The one that dissapears/Dies is Miki. Miki didn't go forth with her assignment for X or Y reason and hence she's terminated.

I kinda figured they had to make a deal with someone to end up being in their profession. The question is: under what conditions are you get offered the deal and How do you get chosen.

Something else that I keep wondering is "how do you become an assignment?" ... what is the criteria they go by to be chosen as an Assignment. Only time will tell =( ... PoPoe has no choice but to wait  :mon unsure:

P.S. Aya = :rockon:

Thank you very much!

Hmm Yossui and Miki...that could be very plausible

I was wondering when someone would start pondering how you become an assignment! don't worry, I will tell you all eventually =D

Yes Aya is a badass

yossy cares about miki... so lovely!!  :mon angel: (i'll die and go with them) XD

i want a new chapter!!

Muahahaha yay YoMiki!

Don't worry it's going to be right after this post!

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“You know we’re never supposed to approach an assignment unless it is as a stranger.” Yossui sighed and ran one hand through her short hair.
  :? Don't get what this means.

Please have a flashback scene! Please :D

It basically means like you don't approach who you are supposed to kill unless its like an accident and you don't really talk. Like as a stranger...uhmm Idk how to explain it better than this XD

Theres going to be some flashback scenes
But I actually have so much I could use for a prequel story
like Ayas story...what do you all think about that?

Btw, how many chapters do you have predicted for this one?

To me, the addition of all the trailers (even there has only been  thus far) gives the fic a 3-Dimensional feel... It makes it more then just words on the screen and more like a movie, thus giving it somewhat realistic feel, despite the 'supernatural' aspect of it :P
In short: I love the addition of trailers and please keep it up :heart:

It's honestly hard for me to predict exact amount of chapters for this one. I have it all basically in order of what is going to happen. But I'm basically writing a chapter and following hte order until I like what it has in it XD
But if I had to give you an exact prediction. Okay so there are 8 so far and then besides what has happened there are like 54 bullits in my notes...lets say 3 to 4 bullets per chapter maybe like... 20-24 chapters total? Give or take...

I'm glad you like the trailers =D I will try to think of more then!

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Re: One Minute (Chapter 8)
« Reply #145 on: August 03, 2008, 10:45:57 PM »
Haha yea its been a while I know ^^;
and I'm sorry to say that there really isn't much in this chapter
but I really like it for some reason...and okay so I haven't re read it yet so there are probably many mistakes. But I'll get to fixing minor typos and such later tonight...

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Chapter 9: Italia

Miki lazily leaned her arm against the row of chairs in front of her as she waited for the other passengers to file off of the plane. She made a mental note to kill Yossui when she saw her for at least not getting her slightly better seats. First class was probably out of the question. However, she had got the seats right next to the wings making the flight extremely noisy. Plus to top that off she had a middle seat so she couldn’t even lean against anything and attempt to fall asleep. Then the movie they played was in freaking Italian! Not that Yossui had any control over this…but Miki still wanted to squeeze the life out of her “friend.”

Finally the people in front of her began to move forward. Miki swung her small duffle over her shoulder and began to slowly follow them out the plane, then through the ramp, and into the airport. She looked up at the signs to find the direction of the luggage carousals. Not that she had any more luggage than this small duffle, but that was usually where the exit was. She was at Gate 8 so it only took about a minute until she was slowly taking the steps down to ground level and her way out.

As she neared the bottom of the steps she pulled her cell phone from her pocket and was about to dial Yossuis number to ask her where she was, Miki didn’t feel like figuring it out, when she noticed a cab driver holding a white sign that read “FUJIMOTO” in big bold letters. Of course Yossui would do something ridiculous like this and get her a Taxi. She sighed and walked over to the balding Taxi driver. She pointed one finger at the sign and then at herself. She wasn’t even going to attempt Italian. Luckily the guy got the hint and began to lead her out of the airport and to his lime green Taxi.

He opened the trunk for Miki to put away her small duffle. She scoffed inwardly, it was a tiny bag, and she could sit with it in the back seat. But then she realized he was just being nice and doing his job so she politely shook her head and smiled trying to communicate “no thank you.” He seemed to understand for he smiled back before closing the trunk and opening the back door for her.

* * * * *

About an hour into the drive Miki began to seriously ponder where in the world Yossui was having this cabby take her. First it started out normal; they were driving through a nice Italian city. But about ten minutes ago he had turned onto a dirt road that was slightly uncomfortable to ride over considering how bumpy it was getting.

She leaned her head against the glass and decided it was best to just not think about it. Yossui was sort of known, at least in her eyes, to have strange ways of going about things. Besides, she was already going to kill her for the plane ride; she shouldn’t start thinking about how awful the Taxi ride is or she just might torture Yossui and then proceed to kill her.

Smirking to herself she watched outside the car as they passed many different types of trees. It sort of felt like they were going up at a shallow angle, like it was a hill or something. Miki sighed and moved her head so the top was against the window as she closed her eyes. The car went over a big bump and Mikis whole body went into the air a little and she quickly opened her eyes.

“Stupid dirt road,” she mumbled and the Taxi driver looked up at his rear view mirror to give her a questioning look. She just smiled politely and he smiled back before resuming staring at the road.

Miki placed her hands in her lap and watched the Taxi driver in the mirror for a little while. His nose was kind of big and rounded. His eyes were of course much bigger than hers. But he had a nice small soft smile on his face. All the man was doing was driving her around, yet he was smiling. It must be nice for him to have found a job that he can do while smiling. Even if it was as simple as being a Taxi driver.

Now smiling herself Miki glanced down and stared at her hands. That’s when her mind started to wander. Her watch was loosely around her left wrist and even though the face of her watch was pointing away from her, she could still clearly make out what it said.

48

Roughly seven weeks.

Mikis smile faded as she thought about how long of a time that was for her to complete such a simple mission. Then how short of a time it would be if you knew that is all you had left to live, at max. Miki could have gone and killed her on the first day. It wouldn’t have been hard. But for some reason she didn’t.

The ride then seemed to get extremely bumpy and that’s when Miki realize the Taxi was stopping. She glanced around, but there was no town. Not even one little house. All she could see was trees, the one road and then a small mountain to her left. The Taxi driver got out and then opened Mikis door for her and she climbed out. Some dust flew up when her feet made contact with the dusty road.

She set down her bag and was about to reach for some money when the cabby stopped her. “It paid full,” he said in broken English. Miki smiled, she could understand English. “This for you,” he then handed her a sealed white envelope before getting back into his Taxi and driving off.

Miki stared down at the note in her hands for a moment before rolling her eyes and opening it.

   Now Miki don’t get too mad about this but…turns out my assignment is in a really small town near the top of the mountain that you should be standing next to if the guy dropped you off at the right spot. I thought it would be funny to make you climb it.
   You can follow the road if you want and go around and around and around and it will probably take a really long time. Or you can just scale the side. It shouldn’t be too hard for you. Besides, there is no way you can get lost. The town is really easy too find.

   Good luck!   - Yossui =]


Miki balled her fist, crumpling up the letter before throwing it on the floor. Oh yea, she was dead.

* * * * *

It’s a good thing Miki was in great shape because she managed to scale the mountain in about forty five minutes flat and was now only a couple yards from the town. The only credit she would give Yossui was that it was not a hard town to find. Yes, small. But hard to find, nope.

She took her duffle off of her back and began to walk through the small streets. Now this was the hard part. Where the hell would Yossui be? It was then that Miki spotted a small pub. It was just about sun set and Miki could go for a quick drink.

Upon entering Miki smirked, of course this is where Yossui would be waiting for her.

Yossui was sitting at the edge of the bar sipping what looked like a martini as she watched a soccer game that was displayed on the monitor. Miki walked over and plopped down on the empty seat next to her. “I really want to kill you right now, you know.” She shot a death glare over at Yossui who seemed unfazed as she took another small sip of her drink.

“Oh you know that climb was easy,” she smirked and pushed the now empty glass away from her.

Miki rolled her eyes and slumped against the bar. “Yes, but I wanted this to be more of a vacation.”

Yossui burst into laughter causing a couple of people to glance over at them. “A vacation?!” she wiped away some of her tears. “Man, you must not know me at all.”

Miki slouched lower against the bar, “I guess I was just hoping for too much.”

The taller girl smirked before getting up from her chair and motioning for Miki to follow her. “Well unless you’re getting something to drink we might as well head on out so I can show you where we are staying.”

Miki, almost reluctantly, followed. “Okay well it better be nice. And let me make one thing clear.” She walked up and in front of Yossui stopping her as she left the bar. “I will Not sleep in the same bed with you.” Not after all the pain this trip has been.

Yossui waved her hands in the air, “Of course not. There are two beds. Chill out.” She smirked a little. “Of course, there just futons so we could always scoot them together.”

Miki glared at the blonde. “Correction, I will not even sleep in the same room as you.”

“Fine fine, you win.”

With one final glare Miki stepped aside to let Yossui pass.

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“We’re sleeping in an abandoned Judo Dojo!?” Miki almost shouted as she stood outside the worn down building.

Yossui shrugged, “Turns out in a town this small there isn’t enough people who want to learn Judo to keep the place up.” Yossui looked over to see Miki glaring at her with her arms crossed in front of her chest. “What?”

“This place looks like it will fall down if the wind even blows to hard.”

“Oh come on,” Yossui walked up behind Miki and began to push her inside the building. “It’s much nicer on the inside, you’ll see.”

As they entered Miki closed her eyes afraid of what Yossuis version of nicer would be. However, she was delightfully surprised. It was nicer. Much nicer on the inside. There was an office to the left and beside that a very big training room. There was an assortment of weapons you normally wouldn’t find in a Judo Dojo as well. Miki pointed over to all the various knives, “What’s all that for?”

She shrugged once again, “I just thought maybe we could get some training in while we are here. I mean, we are staying in a dojo after all. Besides, you’re getting a little chu-“ She didn’t have time to finish her sentence before Miki had dropped her bag and grabbed Yossui by the arm throwing her over her shoulder.

Yossui moaned a little in pain as she rolled over on her side and started to get back up. “You were saying?”

“What’s all the noise?”

Both girls quickly spun around to look for the source of the voice. It seemed to be coming from the office. Neither one of them had turned the lights on yet so they couldn’t see who was there.

Then a sleepy yawn rang around the room. “Is anyone there?” the strange voice spoke once again.

Miki let her guard down a little and took a few steps forward. She knew that voice from somewhere. There was a shuffling of feet causing both Yossui and Miki to stiffen once again in anticipation before the lights were switched on.

“Koharu?!” Mikis eyes got about as big as plates. She glanced over at Yossui to see that she was equally surprised.

But there was no mistaking it. There was little Koharu standing next to the light switch with a big sleepy smile on her face.
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Re: One Minute (Chapter 9)
« Reply #146 on: August 04, 2008, 01:59:13 AM »
Whoooooo!!! I've missed you and your updates! :lol:
Hmm, Italy, huh? Interesting! Yossy just likes being mean to Miki! :hiakhiakhiak: The dojo sounds pretty nice. And Koharu?! :mon closeup: What the hell is she doing in Italy?! :lol:

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Re: One Minute (Chapter 9)
« Reply #147 on: August 04, 2008, 02:49:19 AM »
Wooow !! I like your story  :mon thumb:

YossieMiki =  :mon duh: :mon duh: :mon duh:

Koharu =  :mon suspect:   

i really have laughed in this chapter  :mon lmao: :mon lmao:
keep your work up   :kneelbow:

waiting for the next chapter  :hee:


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Re: One Minute (Chapter 9)
« Reply #148 on: August 04, 2008, 06:59:34 AM »
Aww poor Miki Yossie just wanted to laugh at her and make her do a lot of work.

And YAY!!! :D Random Koharu appearances are always welcome. Hope Miki doesn't kill her since she's in an already bad mood.

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Re: One Minute (Chapter 9)
« Reply #149 on: August 04, 2008, 11:27:50 AM »
Italia, Italia~! :onioncheer: I'm a supporter of the Italian soccer team XD

Gosh, Miki has a hard time with Yossy, I feel bad for her :lol: And Koharu appearing out of nowhere is something very intriguing I wonder how her presence will affect the other two :roll:

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Re: One Minute (Chapter 9)
« Reply #150 on: August 04, 2008, 12:51:06 PM »
lol the whole trek was amusing..the best part was Koharu popping out of nowhere!  :lol:  Can't wait to see what becomes of Miki's "vacation" and can't wait to see further developments with Miki's assignment.

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Re: One Minute (Chapter 9)
« Reply #151 on: August 04, 2008, 09:02:01 PM »
Yossy, so cruel... I like it ;) Miki could use the tables being turned on her sometimes :P
Regardless, poor Miki sounds completely emotionally drained... She really needs her Aya :cry:
Oh come on Mikitty, what's a vaction without sleeping in the same room, or same futon or... you know... on top of... Yossy :twisted:

Koha :rofl: She's such a hyperactive puppy, following her owner around like that.

Oh and random, the first part about the plane reminded me of how much I looooove flying, but now I wanna go on a flight again :(

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Re: One Minute (Chapter 9)
« Reply #152 on: August 07, 2008, 07:50:59 AM »
evil yossui... how can she do that to miki... lol... make her climb the mountain... haha...  :hiakhiakhiak:

koharu was there too...???  :dunno: :tama-uhh:
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Re: One Minute (Chapter 9)
« Reply #153 on: August 07, 2008, 09:35:10 AM »
Love how Yossy does whatever she wants with Miki and she is still alive, well, literally XD
But if you think about it, if Miki is thinking in a way to torture Yossy, she forgets about her assignment.
So, no sleeping in the same futon? :lol:  the other time she said she was tired and only wanted to sleep but you know what happened :twisted:

Koharu?! :? what's she doing there?

 :) Waiting for the next chap

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Re: One Minute (Chapter 9)
« Reply #154 on: August 07, 2008, 05:09:45 PM »
three is a crowd for some YoMiki moments  :roll:

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Re: One Minute (Chapter 9)
« Reply #155 on: August 07, 2008, 08:58:46 PM »
Woah! ten comments already =] I'll be putting up another update within 12 hours XD (yea I know 12 hours seems like a long time...but I got stuff to do...but I have small time frames in between to do them. So I'm giving myself a good deadline I can work with =D )

But I'll reply to those comments now

Whoooooo!!! I've missed you and your updates! :lol:
Hmm, Italy, huh? Interesting! Yossy just likes being mean to Miki! :hiakhiakhiak: The dojo sounds pretty nice. And Koharu?! :mon closeup: What the hell is she doing in Italy?! :lol:

thanks! I've missed updating (but school starts monday...drat)
Yea you would think it would be the other way around XD and Koharu...is soon to be revealed lol

Wooow !! I like your story  :mon thumb:
 
i really have laughed in this chapter  :mon lmao: :mon lmao:
keep your work up   :kneelbow:

waiting for the next chapter  :hee:

Yay thank you! I'm glad I'm still getting newer readers =D

And YAY!!! :D Random Koharu appearances are always welcome. Hope Miki doesn't kill her since she's in an already bad mood.

XD I should totally make a deleted scene where Miki goes all psyco and kills Koharu for showing up and shes already in a bad mood because of Yossui. I think that would be hilarious to write...

Italia, Italia~! :onioncheer: I'm a supporter of the Italian soccer team XD

Maybe...I should rewrite it all and make them go to France
Because France is better
*gets out hit list*
and as I sit here in my official France Zidane jersey (yea I'm wearing it)
*writes down "peti-chan"*
I can't help but add you to my list
I is watching you now! *growl*

(XD no hard feelings...)

lol the whole trek was amusing..the best part was Koharu popping out of nowhere!  :lol:  Can't wait to see what becomes of Miki's "vacation" and can't wait to see further developments with Miki's assignment.

There won't be much interaction between Miki and Ai for a little while. But more like these chapters are just going to be informative about Interfectors =D

Oh come on Mikitty, what's a vaction without sleeping in the same room, or same futon or... you know... on top of... Yossy :twisted:

XD I know! what the hell is Miki thinking?

evil yossui... how can she do that to miki... lol... make her climb the mountain... haha...  :hiakhiakhiak:

Writing an annoyingly evil Yossui and a pissed off Miki is just so much fun lol

So, no sleeping in the same futon? :lol:  the other time she said she was tired and only wanted to sleep but you know what happened :twisted:

Maybe Miki will get her way this time? lol...but I somehow doubt I will be able to restrain myself from writing them in the same futon...XD

three is a crowd for some YoMiki moments  :roll:

Or it can make them better...muahahaha (remember there are only two futons in the dojo)  :grin:

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Re: One Minute (Chapter 9)
« Reply #156 on: August 08, 2008, 05:40:15 AM »
Bleh...this is another chapter I'm not to sure if I like
I def don't like how I wrote it but I'm stumped as to what to do right now
Maybe if I sleep and then tomorrow read it again I'll like it better...
Although it reveals some stuff...

haha there are going to be more chapters with them just hanging out with Italy than I first thought....

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Chapter 10: Futon

“Koharu!” Miki yelled as her arms dropped to her sides, no longer concerned about protecting herself from the “mystery intruder.” Koharu just stood there seeming to be still half asleep as she rubbed her eyes and yawned. Yossui walked over to Miki and looked from her to Koharu and then back again.

“Koharu? So this is the kid you had to train that was such a pain in the a-“ she was cut off abruptly when Miki jabbed her in the side with her elbow. Miki looked back over to Koharu, but she hadn’t heard what Yossui said because she was now practically sleeping against the wall.

Miki sighed and walked over to the youngest girl. “Aww shes so cute,” Yossui whispered from across the room as Koharu staggered a little while trying to stay standing.

Cutting to the chase Miki looked straight into Koharus eyes, “What are you doing here?” The way she said it was kind of cold; but not because she didn’t like the kid. Yes, she had been a pain at some points. However, Miki exaggerated a lot when talking to Yossui about Koharu. In all honesty, Miki thought Koharu was a pretty okay little kid.

Koharu just stared at Miki for a moment as she pieced together the sentence in her half asleep mind. Miki hadn’t meant to hurt the kids feelings, but after a moment Koharus eyes began to water. “You don’t want me here?” she sputtered out before she began crying.

“Shit,” Miki mumbled as she watched Koharu stand there crying. “I didn’t mean it like that.” Too late for excuses because Koharu half on purpose and half because she lost her balance went down to the floor as she continued to cry. Miki knelt down beside her and, with a quick glance back at Yossui (who was smirking for the obvious reason that Mikis motherly side was about to come out), wrapped her arms around the younger girl. “I honestly didn’t mean it like that,” Miki whispered as she stroked her black hair.

She sniffled a little, “Then what did you mean?”

“It was more of a,” Miki paused. “How did you manage to find me all the way in Italy? You didn’t even know I was coming here.” Miki smiled comfortingly at Koharu as her tears finally began to stop. “There that’s better.”

When Koharu had finally finished sniveling, Yossui brought out a couple of mats to the center of the dojo and they all sat down there. “How did I find you?” Koharu repeated the question aloud. “Well,” Miki stared at her waiting for her answer. “I don’t really know.” The youngest of the three smiled sheepishly and looked down at the floor.

“You don’t know?” Miki scoffed, “So what you just had a feeling that I was here?”

“Yes.”

Miki blinked a couple of times in slow motion. “Oh…well…hey!” she glared over at Yossui. “Why the hell are you giggling?”

The blond smiled devilishly over at Miki, “Because you forgot.”

“I forgot wha…oh…” Miki narrowed her eyes and looked at Yossui. “Well it’s not like I use that all the time. It’s you who hunts me down. So it’s okay for me to forget on occasion.”

Yossui rolled her eyes, “uh huh. Excuses, excuses.” This just made Miki glare harder, so much that Yossui mock flinched like she was under fire from death glares.

“Uhmm,” both girls looked over at Koharu. “What are you two talking about?”

“Oh just-“ Miki began, but Yossui cut her off.

“Why don’t I explain it since you forgot?” Miki just rolled her eyes and got up from the mat and went into the office. She mumbled a few choice curse words as she left.

Yossui scooted closer to Koharu on the mat. “It’s not really something we understand completely. But we know it exists.” Yossui paused to make sure that Koharu was paying attention to her. “Us Interfectors, for some reason, when we want to find each other…it’s just like you said. We just kind of know where the other is.” Yossui then looked away from the younger girl as she realized just how stupid she sounded saying these words aloud. But there really wasn’t a better way to explain it.

“Unless we don’t want to be found,” came Mikis voice from the entrance to the office. She was leaning against the door frame with her arms crossed over her chest.

“Oh yea, that’s right!”

“Now who’s the one forgetting,” Miki rolled her eyes before she went back into the office and away from the other two.

Yossui was about to make some snappy remark back when Koharu spoke. “What does she mean, when we don’t want to be found?”

Pushing back some of her blond hair that had fallen in her face, Yossui continued. “It’s like, if you just want some alone time or something. You can basically mentally will yourself to become invisible to the other Interfectors…well not invisible. But you become just as hard to find as any regular human being.” Yossui smirked, “Or in most of cases, you’re even harder to find because we’re all so skilled at hiding.”

“Ohh…”

Yossui wasn’t sure if Koharu was really taking any of this in because she stilled seemed like she was nodding off every other minute. “Why don’t you go back to bed?” The tallest got up and offered her hand to Koharu.

“Wait a minute,” there was Miki again at the doorway. “I still have a question for Koharu.” The youngest looked over at Miki as she got up off the floor. “Now I want to know why you are here. I thought you wanted to live a normal life as much as possible.”

“Oh well,” Koharu looked down at the floor before she shrugged. “I don’t know. It was boring not really having anyone to talk to. It’s not like it’s easy to make friends now that I don’t go to school or anything. So I thought I would try to find you because you’re nice to me.”

Miki would never admit it out loud. Hell, she would probably kill someone before she would admit it out loud. But those words meant a lot to her. “Okay,” she said quietly before heading to the front door. “I’m going to go get some fresh air before bed. You should get back to sleep.”

* * * * *

About an hour passed before Yossui joined Miki outside on the front steps. “Cute kid.”

Miki scoffed and looked down at the floor. “Yea, but now we’re going to have to deal with her.”

“Aw Miki, she doesn’t seem that bad. Besides, you’re nice to her.” Yossui smirked and poked Miki in the side, who in response mock growled. “So have you trained her in anything yet?”

“Like what?” Miki didn’t move her eyes from the floor.

“Like any martial arts or anything. You know they’re useful for us. Besides, we have forever to learn them.”

“No.” Miki finally looked up at Yossui who looked like she was cooking up a scheme. “What are you going to train her?”

“Alone? No way,” she laughed a little. “But we both could. It will be really fun, like the old days. Besides, like I said before, you could use the work out. You’re getting a little chu-“

“That’s it I’m out of here,” Miki stood up and began to walk off back to the village. “I’m going for a walk. I’ll be back soon.” The reason she didn’t want to be around Yossui any more wasn’t even because she had called her chubby for the second time that day. But she mentioned the “old days.” That meant when it was her, Yossui and Aya. When things weren’t so lonely.

Miki didn’t look up when she heard footsteps follow behind her. “Miki wait! I didn’t mean anything by…” she trailed off as Miki stopped walking away, but didn’t look up.

“Yossui lay off.”

The taller girl was slightly taken aback at these words.

“You’ve been driving me crazy since my plane landed okay? So just lay off.”

They stood there not looking at each other for what seemed like an hour. Miki kept her eyes on the dirt road the whole time. She was so tired of everything Yossui did lately. She used to not mind Yossuis little stunts, but it was more than that. She didn’t seem to understand how much Miki was suffering when they were together. It just wasn’t the same as it used to be not matter how much Yossui wanted it to be and tried to make it be.

“I’m sorry.”

Miki looked up and over her shoulder at Yossui who was looking up at the starry sky.

“What?”

“I’m sorry.”

Mikis eyes drifted back to the dirt road as Yossui continued to stare at the sky. “I know I haven’t exactly been that great to you lately. I’m just…” Yossui closed her eyes. “I’m just worried about you. You’ve been doing some pretty stupid stuff with your assignments lately and it’s getting you in trouble.” Miki turned back away from Yossui as she listened. “You’re just getting to close and I’m scared for you.”

“Why do you have to be scared? I don’t see what the big deal is…”

No, Miki knew what this was about. Something happened where Aya learned too much and so she disappeared. Miki didn’t know all the details, but she was almost 100% sure that Yossui did. She was just too afraid to ask yet. Too afraid to know what had happened.

Miki was very content in her own little world with believing that Aya was still out there somewhere just ignoring her. Even though it hurt to think of Aya wanting to purposely leave her, it was better than the idea that she was gone forever. Although Miki still couldn’t understand how that could even happen to an Interfector.

There were no words again and the only thing that could be heard was the slight shuffling of feet before Miki felt strong arms around her shoulders. Yossuis lips where right up against Mikis ear as she spoke softly to her. “I’m also sorry for what I said the other day…”

She was of course referring to the day when Yossui had invited Miki to Italy, and the day when she scolded her for interacting with her assignment.

“I shouldn’t try to interfere so much with your work. But seriously Miki,” Yossui pulled away with her hands still on the shorter girls shoulders and whirled her around to face her. Their eyes locked momentarily, “You really worry me.” Miki looked away, “I care about you…”

“I know…”

Things were beginning to get a little too intense for Miki to handle this much longer without wanting to demand that she explain everything. If she really cared that much she would have told her what happened already to make Yossui so paranoid about this kind of stuff.

Miki broke into a light smile, “its okay. Besides I know I can’t really die again forever. Even if I wanted to.”

“It’s a good thing because I don’t know what I would do if you left,” Yossui replied as she ran one hand through Mikis soft brown hair.

Kind of like how I feel…


The pair made their way back to the Dojo without exchanging another word. It was like there was finally peace between the two of them after some time. Miki smiled at Yossui as they both got out the futon and laid it out in the middle of the Dojo.

However, the peace was broken.

“I thought you said there were two?!”

Yossui rolled her eyes, “Well there was two. But Koharu needed a place to sleep.”

Miki took two steps away from the futon. “No way am I sleeping in that small made-for-one futon with you.”

“Fine,” Yossui shrugged. “Then just sleep on the floor.” And with that Yossui laid down under the covers and closed her eyes. “Get the lights will you?”

Miki wished she didn’t like Yossui so much so that she could strangle her without feeling bad. Sighing she walked over and flipped off the lights before going back and standing next to the futon. “Oh whatever…” she sighed as she crawled in next to Yossui.

Soon she felt familiar arms around her waist as she drifted off to sleep…
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Re: One Minute (Chapter 10)
« Reply #157 on: August 08, 2008, 06:16:37 AM »
Good luck with school!

Awww, mommy Miki!!! Melts my heart everytime! :wub: Hmmm, Aya.....so she disappeared after finding out too much about something. Yossy probably knows all about it but Miki's too scared to ask her. I'm quite curious about why Aya's gone. :dunno: And correct me if I'm wrong but Miki was (is) in love with Aya, wasn't she? That's why it hurts her so much that she's gone.
Oshit, and maybe that's why she's having trouble with Ai-chan's case. She can see that Gaki's in love with Ai-chan and she doesn't want anyone to have to feel the way she does!!! OMG, maybe I cracked the case!!!! :hehehe: Or maybe I'm just overthinking it!!! XD

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Re: One Minute (Chapter 10)
« Reply #158 on: August 08, 2008, 05:16:08 PM »
Aww~~Mikitty acting so nice toward Koharu, that's cute :wub:

It kinda bothers me that Yossy may know everything about Aya but won't tell Miki anything...and those warnings she gives her are very mysterious :mon dunno: I'm really worried about what may have happend to Aya :mon chilly:

Will there be some GAM action or will not?.....I can't wait to find that out XD

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Re: One Minute (Chapter 10)
« Reply #159 on: August 09, 2008, 01:08:56 AM »
Aaaaah !!!!!  Yomiki is so cute  :mon inluv: :mon lovelaff :
and Koharu is a really kid :monk gboy:
Well I really want to know what happened with aya ?  :mon dunno: ...
Does Yossie know about it??? :mon cigar:

Hope next chapter will come soon  :mon dance:

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