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Re: One Minute (Chapter 10)
« Reply #160 on: August 09, 2008, 08:31:48 AM »
omg... wat happen to aya...?? she disappear in the thin air just because she too close to her assignments...??? :dunno:

it kind of sad if it is really like tat... disappear jus because of that... :k-sad:

hope yossui will tell miki soon wat happen to aya...

looking forward for your nexr chapter...  :on lol:
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Re: One Minute (Chapter 10)
« Reply #161 on: August 09, 2008, 02:31:27 PM »
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Miki wished she didn’t like Yossui so much so that she could strangle her without feeling bad. Sighing she walked over and flipped off the lights before going back and standing next to the futon. “Oh whatever…” she sighed as she crawled in next to Yossui.

 :w00t:  :twisted:  :drool:


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Soon she felt familiar arms around her waist as she drifted off to sleep…

damn, they just sleep  :roll:  :grin:



Yossie-Miki-Aya story please  :mon heh:



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Re: One Minute (Chapter 10)
« Reply #162 on: August 10, 2008, 07:50:40 AM »
Ooooooooookay! This was a pretty good chapter.
So Koha was there because she wanted to see Miki? Silly girl, but mommy Miki is so sweet :wub: Yossy was having fun there :lol:
Now that you explain that about the interfectors finding each other, is not a surprise that Yossy always knows where is Miki.
Also, I'm glad that you have shown us this other side of Yossy :) the one that cares about Miki... and just like Miki said, it seems that Yossy knows more things than her, perhaps she knows the truth about what happened with Aya and she doesn't want to tell Miki because she knows about her feelings towards Aya, but it would be sad if Yossy felt something deep for Miki and this one did not want to move on and correspond her feelings  :cry:

yay! I knew it, Miki couldn't sleep separated of Yossy :wub: for a moment I thought Koha's presence would disturb Yomiki, glad to see she's a good kid and didn't get in the way  :P

Maybe is too soon to start with theories, but something makes me think that Aya is still alive but she doesn't want to be found :?

Well, I'l be waiting the next chapter with more adventures in Italy ;)

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Re: One Minute (Chapter 10)
« Reply #163 on: August 13, 2008, 04:34:06 AM »
Chapter 9: Italia
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she had got the seats right next to the wings making the flight extremely noisy. Plus to top that off she had a middle seat so she couldn’t even lean against anything and attempt to fall asleep. Then the movie they played was in freaking Italian! Not that Yossui had any control over this…but Miki still wanted to squeeze the life out of her “friend.”
Seats by the wings = sucks ass.
Can't understand the movie = sucks ass
Middle seat = OH MY FREAKING LORD PLEASE AVOID IF AT ALL POSSIBLE! :banghead:



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About an hour into the drive Miki began to seriously ponder where in the world Yossui was having this cabby take her.
After an hour's cab ride, I'd be hoping that someone at the final destination has enough money to cover the fare.



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Yossui was sort of known, at least in her eyes, to have strange ways of going about things. Besides, she was already going to kill her for the plane ride; she shouldn’t start thinking about how awful the Taxi ride is or she just might torture Yossui and then proceed to kill her.
:lol:



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She set down her bag and was about to reach for some money when the cabby stopped her. “It paid full,” he said in broken English. Miki smiled, she could understand English. “This for you,” he then handed her a sealed white envelope before getting back into his Taxi and driving off.

Miki stared down at the note in her hands for a moment before rolling her eyes and opening it.

   Now Miki don’t get too mad about this but…turns out my assignment is in a really small town near the top of the mountain that you should be standing next to if the guy dropped you off at the right spot. I thought it would be funny to make you climb it.
   You can follow the road if you want and go around and around and around and it will probably take a really long time. Or you can just scale the side. It shouldn’t be too hard for you. Besides, there is no way you can get lost. The town is really easy too find.

   Good luck!   - Yossui =]


Miki balled her fist, crumpling up the letter before throwing it on the floor. Oh yea, she was dead.
Yossi is SO dead. XD

At least Miki doesn't have to worry about the fare, or carry a lot of luggage with her.



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The taller girl smirked before getting up from her chair and motioning for Miki to follow her. “Well unless you’re getting something to drink we might as well head on out so I can show you where we are staying.”

Miki, almost reluctantly, followed. “Okay well it better be nice. And let me make one thing clear.” She walked up and in front of Yossui stopping her as she left the bar. “I will Not sleep in the same bed with you.”
Awwww.  :(



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Yossui waved her hands in the air, “Of course not. There are two beds. Chill out.” She smirked a little. “Of course, there just futons so we could always scoot them together.”
Heeeeeeey.  :twisted:



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“We’re sleeping in an abandoned Judo Dojo!?” Miki almost shouted as she stood outside the worn down building.

...

“Koharu?!” Mikis eyes got about as big as plates. She glanced over at Yossui to see that she was equally surprised.

But there was no mistaking it. There was little Koharu standing next to the light switch with a big sleepy smile on her face.
How the hell? :?





Chapter 10: Futon
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*MIKI-KOHARU TALK*
Awwwwwwww... :oops:



So Interfectors are all somehow psychically linked, but they can "hide" themselves if needed/desired. Interesting.
* JFC strokes his chin thoughtfully.



Meanwhile, Koharu's all ":mon one:" during all of this. :P



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“Wait a minute,” there was Miki again at the doorway. “I still have a question for Koharu.” The youngest looked over at Miki as she got up off the floor. “Now I want to know why you are here. I thought you wanted to live a normal life as much as possible.”

“Oh well,” Koharu looked down at the floor before she shrugged. “I don’t know. It was boring not really having anyone to talk to. It’s not like it’s easy to make friends now that I don’t go to school or anything. So I thought I would try to find you because you’re nice to me.”

Miki would never admit it out loud. Hell, she would probably kill someone before she would admit it out loud. But those words meant a lot to her.
Awwwwwwwwww...
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Something happened where Aya learned too much and so she disappeared. Miki didn’t know all the details, but she was almost 100% sure that Yossui did. She was just too afraid to ask yet. Too afraid to know what had happened.
Oshit, all this time we're thinking Aya was killed in an accident or something. But was Aya actually "eliminated" by the Interfector higher-ups?  :o



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Miki was very content in her own little world with believing that Aya was still out there somewhere just ignoring her. Even though it hurt to think of Aya wanting to purposely leave her, it was better than the idea that she was gone forever. Although Miki still couldn’t understand how that could even happen to an Interfector.
Ooooooooooooo...never thought of that possibility. But then, if this is what happened to Aya? Why? She would have, effectively, banished/exiled herself by doing this.



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“I shouldn’t try to interfere so much with your work. But seriously Miki,” Yossui pulled away with her hands still on the shorter girls shoulders and whirled her around to face her. Their eyes locked momentarily, “You really worry me.” Miki looked away, “I care about you…”

“I know…”

...

The pair made their way back to the Dojo without exchanging another word. It was like there was finally peace between the two of them after some time.
:cry:

It's like they've got a love/hate thing goin' on.



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Miki smiled at Yossui as they both got out the futon and laid it out in the middle of the Dojo.

However, the peace was broken.

“I thought you said there were two?!”

Yossui rolled her eyes, “Well there was two. But Koharu needed a place to sleep.”
:wahaha:



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“Oh whatever…” she sighed as she crawled in next to Yossui.

Soon she felt familiar arms around her waist as she drifted off to sleep…
Familiar?

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FAMILIAR???
:mon wtf:


Hmmm...lemme guess. When it was Aya was still around and training Miki and Yossi, they were all close, but the latter two actually hooked up (or at least, wanted to/came close to it). When Aya disappeared, something about it caused the tension that is occurring between them now.

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Re: One Minute (Chapter 10)
« Reply #164 on: August 15, 2008, 03:35:25 AM »
Awww, Yossy really does care about her, she just has a strange way of showing it but that little moment between them so sweet! Of course Miki couldn't resist sleeping in the same futon as Yossy :twisted:

I can't wait for more YoMiki antics, with it be sweet, hot or mean tricks from Yossy :P
Now they can both 'raise' Koha together :D

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Re: One Minute (Chapter 10)
« Reply #165 on: August 18, 2008, 03:38:44 PM »
aw so all those little annoyances that Miki went through was Yossui's way of looking out for her  :wub:  still though poooor Miki!  the scale the mountain part was hilarious!  :lol: 

so Yossui hasn't told Miki what happened to Aya...hm then what happened to her must have been truly awful or Aya's still alive somewhere in lock-down and Yossui knows Miki will try to save her so keeps her from knowing...because like Miki said they can't die twice, or Miki's right and Aya's doing the whole 'not want to be found thing'.   my mind is abuzz with all the possibilities... :dizzy:

hope you update soon  ;)


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Re: One Minute (Chapter 10)
« Reply #166 on: August 24, 2008, 08:27:59 AM »
 :dizzy: i just read all the chapters.......and it made me dizzy a little for not stopping.

like the characters.....oh well the story itself!

the chapter one, it intrigues me though! :glasses: :glasses: :glass

it could be not miki and Ai., right? hehhe  :hehehe:

anyways! loving it........update soon!

miki-sama rulez! :onioncheer: :onioncheer: :onioncheer:

oh one thing......... er... not that a fan of yossie-miki fan....(sorry miki-yossie fans)  :sweat:

pair miki with anyone....just not yossie,..pairing them seems like "YAOI" tehehehehehe *peace* :on gay:




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Re: One Minute (Chapter 10)
« Reply #167 on: August 25, 2008, 03:53:40 AM »

oh one thing......... er... not that a fan of yossie-miki fan....(sorry miki-yossie fans)  :sweat:

pair miki with anyone....just not yossie,..pairing them seems like "YAOI" tehehehehehe *peace* :on gay:
:shock:
Of course it will be no peace after you have said (well, written) something like that :mon evil:
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just joking  :mon trudge:

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for a moment I thought it was an update

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Re: One Minute (Chapter 10)
« Reply #168 on: August 25, 2008, 06:24:28 AM »
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for a moment I thought it was an update

ditto  XD

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Re: One Minute (Chapter 10)
« Reply #169 on: October 05, 2008, 07:05:13 AM »
mmm so I felt really bad that it's been so long since I've updated
So I thought I would publish this first part of the next chapter...because this is all I have XD

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Chapter 11.1

“Unnghhh…bleeeghhhh…” Miki began to roll around on the futon making these strange “waking up” noises as she would call them. It was something she would do quiet often when she was already fully awake but didn’t want or have the energy to actually complete the motion of rising out of bed. But then…something else caught her attention.

She stopped flopping around on the futon and lay on her back, eyes closed, sniffing the air. “That smells like…” she took a huge, fairly loud, sniff. “Eggs? Mmmmmm…” She continued to lay there and just sniff at the cooking breakfast until she realized two things.

One, that the eggs had been cooking for much longer than the amount of time one would think they should. And two, the scent always associated with burnt food was starting to waft through the air.

She slowly opened up one eye and peeked around the room. No one was there and the sun was gently streaming in through the open side door. Scratching the back of her head while yawning, she sat up and began to stretch. Her face began to move into all sorts of strange expressions as she attempted to wake up her muscles before standing up and stretching again.

Not bothering to fold up the futon, she would make Yossui do it later, Miki heavily stomped over to the open door and peered outside. She was met with a sight of little Koharu jumping up and down with a leaf in hand while she tried to fan out the fire that had sprung up from where there used to be eggs.

Warning bells went off in Mikis head as she ran over to the little one barefoot. “What the hell do you think you’re doing!?” She screamed grabbing the leaf from Koharu who just looked at her with big eyes pleading for assistance.

Miki looked at the burning pot and then back at Koharu who had started to jump up and down for apparently no reason except pure panic. Looking around Miki spotted a spout next to the dojo, which hopefully the water still worked in, and thinking quickly she ran inside to the supply closet and grabbed the mop bucket. Once she had taken it back outside and filled it with water she threw it over the fire.

Setting down the bucket Miki peered at the remains of their breakfast. “Well at least they were already burnt. Because if they weren’t bad before now they’re completely soa- ACK!” She cut off herself with a small scream as ice cold water was poured on her head.

She whirled around to see a smiling Yossui. “Oh did you already get the fire out?” She said trying to act innocent.

Miki glared at her before lunging and tackling the taller girl to the ground. “WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT YOSHIZAWA!” They continued to wrestle on the floor with Miki winning for the most part probably due to how angry she was. “AND WHY THE HELL DID YOU LEAVE KOHARU ALONE WITH FIRE!?”

Yossui tried to respond but only managed to get out a couple of grunts.

“I would kill you if I didn’t like you so much…” Miki mumbled more to herself than anyone as she finally let Yossui go, who was now lying on the ground panting and struggling for air, before walking back inside the dojo now wishing more than ever that she had never got up.

Koharu just stood off to the side staring wide eyed at Yossui.

Once back inside the dojo Miki proceeded into the office as she tried to find peace. That little adventure so early in the morning had given her a slight headache. But what she found in the office did not please Miki. Well, that is until she realized the up-side to it all.

There Yossui had left Miki a note and a very generic Martial Arts uniform that was white with a black belt. The note said something along the lines of training Koharu and starting that today. Miki was more interested in now she could actually beat the other girl to a pulp, not unlike she had done just a minute ago, and have someone learn from it in a constructive way.

Miki would never admit that she also happened to think training Koharu was a good idea. She liked the kid and wanted to see her go far…well if you could go far as an Interfector.

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(Then I decided this was necessary...)
Me: So like I'm not sure if this part is really needed for the story...
Yossy: *counting bruises* Then why put it in?
Me: I thought it was kind of cute
Yossy: Cute?! You think me being beat up is cute?!
Miki: Chill Yocchan, she just likes writing about us rolling around on the ground together...even if it is me just beating you up...
Yossy: Wha...?
Me: *day dreams*
Miki: See




Anyway, I'll try ad make a real update very soon...

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Re: One Minute (Chapter 11.1)
« Reply #170 on: October 05, 2008, 08:48:15 AM »
Yay, update! I was just watching the trailer again yesterday and wondering when you would update.
Waking-up Miki= :inlove: Poor Koha!! :lol: She's so jumpy as it is, adding fire to the mix is just an accident waiting to get worse. XD Yay, mentor Miki!! :muffin:
Major LOL at the last part!!! :w00t:

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Re: One Minute (Chapter 11.1)
« Reply #171 on: October 05, 2008, 11:42:25 AM »
Miki as Koharu´s mentor  :? :?...That would be fun  :kekeke:

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Re: One Minute (Chapter 11.1)
« Reply #172 on: October 05, 2008, 12:50:33 PM »
Let Round two of beat up Yoshi day begin.. NOOOOOOOOOOW!~

lol, nice few chapters. Took me like twenty minutes to catch up. Get to writing missy! You're behind. And speaking of your behind might I add it looks fabulous today XD.

 I can't wait for the next update. You know me, all stuck at home, wishing I was never born, bored, lonely, lazy, waiting for updates. So get to work buddy!
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Re: One Minute (Chapter 11.1)
« Reply #173 on: October 05, 2008, 01:14:20 PM »
wow! you updated......




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Re: One Minute (Chapter 11.1)
« Reply #174 on: October 05, 2008, 03:19:45 PM »
Yay! An update after such a LONGGGGGG time! Lol I thought it was funny loved it. I like your writing style I hope you update soon and not like months later lol.

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Re: One Minute (Chapter 11.1)
« Reply #175 on: October 06, 2008, 12:43:16 AM »
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*MIKI WAKING UP*
Oh that'd be so cute to watch. :lol:



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Miki heavily stomped over to the open door and peered outside. She was met with a sight of little Koharu jumping up and down with a leaf in hand while she tried to fan out the fire that had sprung up from where there used to be eggs.
Koharu cooking? Are we sure that that's a good idea? 



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Setting down the bucket Miki peered at the remains of their breakfast. “Well at least they were already burnt. Because if they weren’t bad before now they’re completely soa- ACK!” She cut off herself with a small scream as ice cold water was poured on her head.

She whirled around to see a smiling Yossui. “Oh did you already get the fire out?” She said trying to act innocent.
Miki = :grr:
Yossi = :hee:
Koharu = :dunno:



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Miki glared at her before lunging and tackling the taller girl to the ground. “WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT YOSHIZAWA!” They continued to wrestle on the floor with Miki winning for the most part probably due to how angry she was. “AND WHY THE HELL DID YOU LEAVE KOHARU ALONE WITH FIRE!?”

Yossui tried to respond but only managed to get out a couple of grunts.

“I would kill you if I didn’t like you so much…” Miki mumbled more to herself than anyone as she finally let Yossui go
:O *gasp*



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Yossui had left Miki a note and a very generic Martial Arts uniform that was white with a black belt. The note said something along the lines of training Koharu and starting that today. Miki was more interested in now she could actually beat the other girl to a pulp, not unlike she had done just a minute ago, and have someone learn from it in a constructive way.
Miki = :kekeke:




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Re: One Minute (Chapter 11.1)
« Reply #176 on: October 06, 2008, 06:17:25 AM »
Okay now here is the actual full chapter 11 XD
I didn't include the beginning because well...I had already posted it as 11.1
So consider this 11.2?

I haven't even read through it and I probably won't until tomorrow. Me is tired now...
Last chapter in Italy!
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Chapter 11: Training

Two figures stood locked together in the center of the dojo. The only sounds that could be heard were the occasional padding of bear feet on the mats and the cloth of there uniforms being pulled in a rough way. The taller had one hand firmly on the smallers forearm and the other at her shoulder as she attempted to maneuver for the advantage.

The smaller had one hand also on the tallers shoulder, but her other hand flailed helplessly off to the side as it had just been knocked loose and now Miki was staggering backwards trying to avoid the sweeps of Yossuis feet to knock her down. Sweat dripped off of both of them as they had been fighting like this for nearly an hour now with no victor.

Miki managed to bring her arm back to grab the others forearm and the struggle for dominance resumed. The tallers eyes dropped to watch their footwork and Miki seeing the opportunity knocked Yossuis arm off of her shoulder and spun her body into the others at the same time releasing her own hand that had been on Yossuis shoulder.

Now the blonde was trapped as Miki held her other arm strongly with both hands and crouched lower. Yossui closed her eyes bracing herself for impact as she felt her body lifted off the ground by her arm before being thrown quiet roughly over Mikis shoulder to land on her back with a loud thump.

Yossui opened her eyes and looked up at Miki who held a smug expression on her face as she released her grip on the taller girls arm as she took one step back to give her space to stand up.

Koharu came out from her hiding place in the office wearing a matching uniform to the other two girls only with a white belt. Miki looked over at her and just rolled her eyes. She had been such a coward to hide from the two of them; even if they had at one point completely forgotten that they were trying to show the young girl moves and instead it just turned into a full out Judo match.

“You caught me off guard,” Yossui laughed as she sat up. Although the laughter soon turned into a slight coughing fit as she was still breathing heavily. But when she stood completely up it her breath was back and her heart had slowed to a normal rate. The only trace that she had been in a fight less than a minute ago was the faint sweat marks all over her clothes.

Miki stood there with her arms on her hips looking more like she was waiting to fight next than she had been the one fighting.

“That was amazing!” Koharu suddenly shouted causing both of the black belts to look over. The youngest bounded over to them excitedly. “It was like you were moving extra fast, but I could keep up. It was amazing! I don’t think I’ll be able to do it…” she looked down at the floor frowning.

Yossui walked over and planted one hand on top of Koharus black hair causing the girl to look up. She was greeted by a friendly smile. “Trust me, you’ll catch on quick.”

“But you two were moving so fast,” Koharu exclaimed jumping into the air twirling as if trying to prove her point.

Miki scoffed and walked over to join the other two. “Look kid,” she crossed her arms over her chest. “We were moving fast. When you make the deal you also get sort of…super human powers I guess…” She looked at Koharu to make sure she comprehended.

“Like we can fly!?”

Obviously she didn’t get it. Miki sighed, “Not really. It’s more like the neurons in our brain can set off at 1,000mph, which is about 4 or 5 times faster than a regular persons neurons, giving us faster reflexes. And so if you have faster reflexes it just looks like you’re moving faster because you don’t need that extra second to comprehend before moving. Get it?”

The youngest still looked lost but still nodded. It’s not like if Miki explained it again she would get it. All she had to know is that her reflexes were faster.

Too bad Miki tried to explain it again anyway. “It’s like if you see that a car is coming at you: A normal person it would take a moment for them to run out of the way…it’s like a stall. They see the car and then it takes a moment for the neurons to fire off signaling that persons feet to run. We don’t need that extra moment. It’s instantaneous because our neurons fire just that much faster.”

Koharu seemed to get it a little more. But Yossui noticed this was getting nowhere fast so she spoke up. “How about we see if you learned anything from watching that match? Here,” she stuck out her arm with that confident gleam she sometimes got. “Try and flip me.”

* * * * *

“Oh My God Yossui! We’ve been at this training thing for the past five days straight! You’re trying to kill us…” Miki whined as she threw down her katana on the ground giving up the fight.

“She’s still not strong enough,” Yossui retorted sheething her own katana. There was no point in keeping it out if Miki wasn’t going to fight anymore.

“Yea right!” Miki sat down and smirked up at Yossui. “You just want to prove yourself. She managed to flip you and land such a hard blow to your gut that you had to take a fifteen minute break so you could stop coughing.”

The blonde looked away, “She caught me off guard.”

“Even that time I gave you a black eye?” the hyper active trainee piped in, causing a very Fujimoto like glare to appear on Yossuis face as she half drew her katana back out.

“Lucky shot!” She practically screamed.

There was a defining silence around the dojo before Miki and Koharu burst into laughter. Koharu who had been standing by Miki had to plant her katana into the ground and lean against it just so she wouldn’t fall over.

“Fine!” The oldest yelled sitting down on the floor with her arms crossed over her chest. “What do you suggest we do instead of training?” She eyed Miki who stopped laughing and looked up at the ceiling contemplating.

At the same time she felt a little bad for harping at Yossui. Those shots had been not lucky…but actually Yossui let Koharu hit her. Miki could tell; it was just like the blonde to let someone younger and less experienced feel good about herself. Miki would never do something like that.

In fact, Yossui was the only person that Miki could never beat in a sword fight or free for all. She could take her when it was a fight where there were rules and it was one selective martial art…but when it all came down to it Yossui was better.

She was always better; even when they first started training together. Miki fronted that it was because Yossui had been training for longer, but it was apparent that she would never catch up. She would never win and that’s why she got a little carried away verbally abusing the tallest of the three. But still, everyone, even Yossui, had a line of how much they could take at one time.

“Can I just ask some questions?” Miki jumped when Koharu spoke. She had completely forgotten she was supposed to be figuring out what to do next.

Yossui said nothing but looked at Miki to see what she thought. “Uhh yea, that sounds fine. What do you want to know?” They all instinctively moved into a triangle so it was better to hear each other speak. Yossui discarded her katana to some part of the room so it wouldn’t be in the way when she sat.

“Why me?”

The two more experienced exchanged knowing glances. This was never a fun thing to explain. Yossui was the first to speak, “When you are chosen to be an Interfector it’s because a certain aura grows inside of you pegging you to be so hateful towards humans that you feel the least amount of remorse towards them than anyone. It doesn’t mean you are entirely heartless, but it hurts less.” Yossui paused as she saw a sad look growing on Koharus face. In fact, Yossui began to struggle to say her next sentence. Explaining this always brought up memories of the past; of being a human.

Miki sensed this and quickly brought herself to a level she was very accustome with lately; a state of being without emotion. “This happens because when you were alive, and human, your life was what you wouldn’t call glamorous.” Miki spoke in monotone and averted her eyes as both Yossui and Koharu twitched a little. It was obvious that this was causing painful memories to resurface.

“The Interfector aura grows when one has a horrible and abusive life that ends sooner than you were supposed to die. Than God intended,” Miki continued. “I know, sounds odd. How can ones life end before the all mightly being in heaven meant for it too? When one has so much hate in their body it’s like they detach from all things good. That would include God…so your life is now in the hands of the devil.”

“And so even the devil is remorseful and tries to give you a second chance, but with the catch of working for him?” Both Yossui and Miki were surprised when Koharu was able to come up with that conclusion herself.

“Uhmm yea…that’s right. The devil convinces you to serve him for a new life. Most say yes because they have such a complete hatred for people in general.” Miki said smiling. Smiling was the best thing to do when you are trying to avoid painful memories.

She looked over at Yossui who hadn’t spoken in a while and was looking down at the floor, eyes glazed over as she was lost in thoughts about everything from before. It’s too bad we don’t get to forget our past, Miki thought as she watched her friend. In that moment she seemed so vulnerable. So weak; so different.

“But that’s not the only catch,” Yossui suddenly spoke up, not tearing her eyes away from the ground. “It’s also an everlasting life, we cannot die once we choose to come back.”

Koharu looked over at Yossui curious. But what she did not expect was a slow smirk to slowly spread across the blondes face. “You haven’t shown her what it’s like to die yet have you?” Yossui drawled out, looking over a Miki.

“No and I don’t want to,” Miki matched her smirk to Yossuis. “Remember how sick you got?”

Obviously that memory was just as unpleaset as the previous, but for other reasons. Her face turned to a pale green color, before shaking her head and composing herself again. “Yea well, it’s still something you should show her at some point…”

“Wait I’m confused,” Koharu announced from her spot on the floor.

Without looking away from Yossui as they were now having a staring contest to apparently decide who was right, Miki replied very business like. “Interfectors cannot die of old age because we do not physically age. We also cannot kill ourselves. However, we can be killed by others and brought back to life.”

“That sounds fun!”

“Trust me it isn’t,” Yossui now spoke also not breaking her gaze with Miki. “When you die you’re basically drained. It’s like getting up from a very long coma. The more times you die the easier it is to wake up though. The first time you probably won’t even get up for a week or so and then puke multiple times.”

“Trust Yossui,” Miki playfully scoffed at the other girl who stuck out her tongue in response. “Oh very mature.”

* * * * *

The rest of the day went by surprisingly without incident. Probably because Yossui went out to the town to pick up something she wouldn’t tell Miki or Koharu about. And Koharu had got a new assignment back in Japan so she set off to book a flight back leaving Miki to lie outside peacefully basking in the sun.

Well, until the sun went out. Then it was more like lying outside seeing how many mosquitos she could bat away from her before they bit into her skin.

Finally fed up with all the bugs she walked inside to see that Yossui hadn’t come back yet. “She’s been gone all day, what the hell could she be doing?”

Miki wandered around the dojo for a little while, until she noticed something odd coming from the office. The light was on…and Miki hadn’t left the light on when she went outside.

The brunette slowly approached the room ready to attack anyone who might be in there. But when she peered inside there was only a note and under that was a beautiful red silk dress.

She picked up the note that just read, “For Miki.”

“I hope it fits right,” came a nervous voice from behind causing Miki to whirl around in surprise only to be greeted by a very well dressed and suave Yossui. “I thought since you were leaving tomorrow we could go to this nice Italian restraint…”

Yossui was in a feminine suit and had a bouquet of roses tucked under her shoulder. She blushed and looked down at the floor. “You really should say something…I’m nervous enough as it is…”

Miki broke into a wide grin and walked over pulling the taller into a warm embrace. “You look nice,” she commented as she felt Yossui return the hug.

“I can try sometimes right?” she said with a smirk. Miki pulled back a little and stared into the tallers warm eyes. “I care about you and…I love you Miki.”

I love you too Yossui, Miki thought as she leaned in and their lips connected. I really do, but why do things have to be so difficult?

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I would reply to comments if I wasn't so tired XD So I'll do that with the next chapter...
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Offline sweeety

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Re: One Minute (Chapter 11 FULL)
« Reply #177 on: October 06, 2008, 09:40:48 AM »
YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEES!

I am soo happy!
Update soon please!
I can't wait for moar!
I have a few ideas about them intermafectors too btw!

IS THIS ANYTHING LIKE JIGOKU SHOJOU? CAUSE I LOVE HER AND I'LL LOVE YOU MORE IF IT IS!

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Re: One Minute (Chapter 11 FULL)
« Reply #178 on: October 06, 2008, 05:09:11 PM »
ahhh!!!  XD
Yossie is sooo kakkoi  :wriggly:
Yomiki rulz  :onioncheer:

hope next chapter will coming soon  :w00t:

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Re: One Minute (Chapter 11 FULL)
« Reply #179 on: October 07, 2008, 05:27:21 AM »
 :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1: Yomiki!!!
but why Miki thinks that things are difficult, is because she loves Aya too? or because there're things you haven't told us yet? :dunno:
hahaha Koharu is so innocent “Like we can fly!?”  :on lol:
Nooooo, last chapter in Italy... :err: Oh well, the story must continue :whistle: waiting next chap

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