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Re: Runaway from the Past
« Reply #620 on: July 23, 2008, 11:17:47 PM »
@JFC: i have a lot of female friends who swoon over yossui not knowing she's a girl too... :lol: ... oh, Dan?
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"Nagsalita ang muntik nang ahasin nung batang yun..."
will be extrapolated later... :)
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Mai? Ayaka? Shiba-chan?
we will see just how lucky yossui is...

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the fact that Mayumi almost lost Dan to Rika must make her resent Rika even more!
actually, it's the root cause of her disdain for Rika... i think it's mentioned earlier... but that's like about a hundred updates ago so i'm not sure... :lol: me and my crazily short and quick updates.... :lol: i'm such a salot (scum)here...

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Mayumi will be in for a big surprise when she figures out Yossie's a girl. She'll probably be ashamed of how much she was swooning over her.
That woman has no sense of shame! :lol:

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I think the nightie should be an exact replica of what Rika wore in the Sukeban Deka movie
I watched that movie for the nth time today... but no. :lol:

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And it betta not be a cliffhanger or a chapter that is a totall blueballmaker iie shark mars and triniad or whatever the hell the third one was called.
:rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: i almost died laughing... that was exactly what i had in mind! j/k!
but i have assignements and papers due too... :lol: ... of course i'm the type to put my fic first... because i'm crazy...
perv? ... :rofl:
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Ooooh, what kind of nightie are we talking here?

I'm with strawb3rrykream, what kinda nightie is this? A good nightie or a naughty nightie. Knowing Yossie...

i wonder what kind of nightie is it

i love how people become alert for details when it comes to these kinds of things  :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:
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anyway, apologies for the short cliffhanger type updates recently... I have less time to actually write stuff up... but i can't resist updating... :lol: i'm a sick little puppy...

this is one of the funniest sets of comments i have ever replied to... so i'm really going to work on this one... i even researched on this... :lol

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hitomi quickly returned to her room. Rika would be here any moment and every little thing should be perfect. Although they slept in this very room together yesterday, the fact that this is going to be official from now on made Hitomi feel very giddy. She paced about, checking the bed linens and pillows if they were in place.

She walked to the window and opened the curtains. There was just a light drizzle of rain, the typhoon has finally left Metro Manila in peace and pieces in some parts.

There were no stars visible in the sky. The damned rain clouds hid them from view. Luckily the sea of stars just on the horizon from the buildings made up for the absence of their celestial counterparts. It was still romantic-- in an earthbound way.

Hitomi sat on the edge of the bed. She was feeling very tense. She took her phone and played the mp3 of Gardenia by Malice Mizer. It calmed her down a bit and she played air drums with it to entertain herself while waiting. At the outro, when the drum part was getting a bit hectic, Rika opens the door.

Rika looked at Hitomi who had her eyes closed, getting the feel of the song. "Um... To-chan?"

Hitomi looked like an electrecuted cat. The track had ended. She looked up at Rika, deeply embarrassed. "Did you see me...?"

Rika giggled as she nodded. "You were very cute... Do you play drums?"

"Ah... No..." Hitomi rubbed her nape with a hand, relieved that Rika didn't make fun of her then and there. "I wanted to... but I didn't have the time to learn..."

"Oh... Well, I thought you were cute playing air drums... Maybe you should go for the real thing... you would look so kakkoi..."

"... Nah... I have more important things to attend to..." Hitomi looked at Rika. Their initial encounter just now didn't let Hitomi admire Rika in her sleepwear tonight. "You look very sexxxy in that..."

Rika wore a pink satin knee length spaghetti strapped nightie with chocolate brown lace trimmings on the hems under a matching robe. "To-chan, do we really have to wear matching sleepwear?"

Hitomi looked down at the pajamas she was wearing. It was satin chocolate brown pajamas with pink piping at the cuffs and collar. "It came with the bedsheets..."

"Yeah, right... Try again..." Rika crossed her arms.

"Really... That's where these are from... Everything matches, see?" Hitomi pointed at the bed and the pillows and even the curtains. "... ... You don't believe me?"

"I would have believed you if this didn't come with that matching thong--"

Hitomi suddenly got excited. "Did you wear it?"

"No." Rika answered nonchalantly.

Damn. "Well, I don't know what the Marks and Spencer people had in mind when they gave me this for Christmas last year..."

Rika was stunned. It really seemed like Hitomi was telling the truth. Everything did match. The pillowcases even have tiny "Yoshizawa"s embroidered on the side. "... ... They really just give stuff like this to you?"

Hitomi was proud. "Every Christmas since I became president..."

"Woah... That's amazing..." Rika walked to the bed and rand her hand down the luxurious sheets.

"Well, technically, these sheets are yours now too, Ka-chan... It's on OUR bed... in OUR room... in OUR home..." Hitomi loved giving emphasis to the new "word of the day": OUR.

"~To-chan~..." Rika covered her face with her hands. This whole idea of conjugal property made her feel embarrassed.

"... Well, it IS our bed now, isn't it?"

"... Yeah... I guess so..."

"Now, which side of the bed do you prefer? I used to sleep in the middle so, i don't mind..."

"Hmm... I don't know, To-chan..."

"Which side did you usually sleep on in the other room?"

"I usually sleep on the left... Hmm..."

"We can switch sides when you feel like it..."

"I think that's a good idea..."

"Of course it's a good idea... I thought of it..."

"Yeah... It's a great idea because my To-chan thought of it..."

"You got that right, baby..."

"But... It's a bit warm in here..."

"Oh... that? I thought it's just right..."

"Can’t we cool it down a bit?"

"Aww. alright... You better hug me tight later... If I get cold and freeze to death later, it's gonna be your fault..."

Rika resigned to Hitomi's demand. Actually, she liked the idea. She just didn't want Hitomi to see how enthusiastic she was about it. "Fine..."

That naughtly smile appeeared on Hitomi's face yet again. "But you can also--"

Rika didn't even let the verb in that sentence get out. "No"

"Aww... You caught on quick..."

"I won't let you trick me into whatever you intend to trick me into..."

"Ayumi said you were always the smart one in school... I know that now, first hand..."

Rika sat on the right side of the bed, the side closer to her. "What else did she say about me?"

"She said you got great legs..." Hitomi lied. Ayumi never mentioned anything about Rika's legs.

"You're lying..." Rika looked away from Hitomi in a tease.

Hitomi climbed onto the middle of the bed. "Aww, you caught me..."

"Shiba-chan never compliments my legs... She likes my shoulders..."

"~Hey~... is there something you're not telling me?"

Rika laughed out loud. "No!"

"It's just how you said that she likes your shoulders... It totally painted a strange image in my mind..."

"If it's an image of her kissing me on the shoulders or something, you're wrong..."

"Are you psychic?"

"No... You're face is just a dead giveaway..."

"Cute isn't it?"

"What is?"

"My face."

"Not cute... ... hmm... handsome... very, very, very, very handsome..."

Hitomi leaned close to Rika. Their lips touched and fell into a deep kiss. Rika slowly (and discreetly) placed her arms around Hitomi's neck pulling herself closer to the prince. At Hitomi's initiative, their tongues danced together like flames. Rika pulled away for shortness of breath.

"Sapientia et Eloquentia... you're very gifted with your brains and your tongue." Hitomi teased Rika.

"Go on with that and you'll never get a kiss like that from me again..."

“Ka~chan… why do you keep on blackmailing me like that?”

“Because I’m smart…”

“… and very, very, very, very, very beautiful…” Hitomi cupped Rika’s warm and red face with her hand.

Rika’s heart skipped a beat. Hitomi’s hand felt warm, her fingertips were rough but her touch was gentle. She touched Rika like a feather.

Hitomi smiled when she felt goosebumps on Rika’s skin. The Yoshizawa effect has finally kicked in. She pulled Rika closer to herself. Rika’s sweet scent filled the air.

Their lips sought for each other. At first, just quick and shallow kissed that were later followed by long, deep, intense kisses.

Hitomi explored Rika’s mouth with her tongue, familiarizing herself with the landscape. She felt her way through the hot, wet cavern she was granted access to for tonight. She discovered that Rika’s left canine was a bit pointier than the one on the right. He tongue met with her lover’s and resumed the dance that was interrupted earlier.

Rika’s arms have wrapped themselves around Hitomi’s neck unconsciously. There was an unconscious greed in how she returned To-chan’s kisses.

The robe somehow managed to get itself off Rika and before Rika knew it, she was lying down on the bed and Hitomi was on top of her.

Hitomi made a wet trail of kisses from Rika’s lips to her neck, she tried to kiss every single goosebump there. She smiled as she heard Rika’s breathing getting heavier and the restrained moan escaping from Rika’s lips.

Hitomi continued with her trail to Rika’s shoulder. She subtly pushed the spaghetti strap down but she was immediately halted by Rika.

“To-chan… No.”

Hitomi just smiled as she stopped. Even though she did not fully succeed in her plans, she liked how far she has gone for tonight. And besides, there’s tomorrow and the day after that and the day after that and the day after that. Pleased with her work for this evening, Hitomi rolled off to Rika’s side.

Rika embraced her. “Thanks, To-chan…”

Hitomi yawned aloud. “Sleepy?”

“A bit… can you get me a glass of water, please?”

“Sure…” Hitomi got up from bed.

“You’ll get a kiss for that…”

“If that’s the case, then, I’m off to the kitchen!” Hitomi ran out the room quickly. Kisses are good incentives.

Rika felt her own heartbeat. That make-out session really got to her. She’s never made out with anyone like that before. She must’ve missed out on a lot. But then again, she glad that Hitomi was the first. She felt warm all over. The room was cool but she felt some sweat on her body. She felt strange.

Hitomi returned to the room with a tray that held a pitcher and two glasses, marching like a soldier. She carefully placed it on her desk. “Where’s my kiss?”

“Wait… Please pour me a glass… I asked for a glass of water.”

Hitomi poured Rika and herself a glass each and brought one to the bedside table next to Rika. “I want my kiss now…”

“Wait.” Rika took the glass and drank the water. “Come here…” She directed Hitomi back to the bed. “For bringing a whole pitcher, I’ll make that two…”

The kisses were chaste, but Hitomi wasn’t disappointed. After all, a kiss is a kiss.

The two laid down in each other’s arms. Rika fell asleep quickly. Was it an evasion tactic? Who knows?

Hitomi watched her for a few minutes, studying her body. Satin was the perfect fabric. It felt fine but not as fine as Rika’s skin. She listened closely to Rika’s breath. It was steady and had a slow rhythm. It was music to Hitomi’s ears—a lullaby, which lulled her to sleep.

EDIT: i make so many typos i should get shot...
« Last Edit: July 24, 2008, 12:30:27 PM by tru_harmony »

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Re: Runaway from the Past
« Reply #621 on: July 23, 2008, 11:39:03 PM »
Holy.... :imdead: Matching thong..... :mon blood:
All the matching stuff is weird, but kinda cute :wub: The weird part is that she got it from business associates! And the "word of the day" made me laugh and reminded me of Sesame Street. :lol: The drum thing was hella funny! And their little flirting session was :shy2: But I was a little shocked that Rika allowed Yossy to go that far. I'm glad that Yossy was her first too because I'm (pretty) sure that Yossy won't hurt her. That she'll know how to be gentle and whatnot.
Sweet update! :luvluv1:

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Re: Runaway from the Past
« Reply #622 on: July 23, 2008, 11:50:44 PM »
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Hitomi sat on the edge of the bed. She was feeling very tense. She took her phone and played the mp3 of Gardenia by Malice Mizer. It calmed her down a bit and she played air drums with it to entertain herself while waiting. At the outro, when the drum part was getting a bit hectic, Rika opens the door.

Rika looked at Hitomi who had her eyes closed, getting the feel of the song. "Um... To-chan?"

Hitomi looked like an electrecuted cat. The track had ended. She looked up at Rika, deeply embarrassed. "Did you see me...?"

Rika giggled as she nodded.
Yossi = :rockon:

Rika =  :mon lurk:

Yossi = :dizzy:

Rika = :hee:



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"To-chan, do we really have to wear matching sleepwear?"

Hitomi looked down at the pajamas she was wearing. It was satin chocolate brown pajamas with pink piping at the cuffs and collar. "It came with the bedsheets..."

"Yeah, right... Try again..." Rika crossed her arms.

"Really... That's where these are from... Everything matches, see?" Hitomi pointed at the bed and the pillows and even the curtains. "... ... You don't believe me?"

"I would have believed you if this didn't come with that matching thong--"

Hitomi suddenly got excited. "Did you wear it?"

"No." Rika answered nonchalantly.
COMMANDO?!?!? :w00t: :drool:



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"Well, I don't know what the Marks and Spencer people had in mind when they gave me this for Christmas last year..."

Rika was stunned. It really seemed like Hitomi was telling the truth. Everything did match. The pillowcases even have tiny "Yoshizawa"s embroidered on the side. "... ... They really just give stuff like this to you?"

Hitomi was proud. "Every Christmas since I became president..."
Saleswomen at the store swooning over Yossi and gave her the sets hoping to get the chance to personally try them on for her?
:kekeke:

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Re: Runaway from the Past
« Reply #623 on: July 24, 2008, 06:39:28 AM »
Well Yossie finally managed to get a LITTLE action. It must have been really good for Rika to have allowed it to get to that point. Yossie still couldn't get her prize though but as she said she still has the next day and the next day and the next day etc...

Great update! :D Carry on :P

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Re: Runaway from the Past
« Reply #624 on: July 24, 2008, 10:41:20 AM »
Oh YAAAAAAY!
I liked that one :D
It was sweet with all the matching things and how excited Yossy is about THEIR room, oh and I looove brown and pink :heart: The Marks and Spencer people have good taste :wub:

What a hot make out session :twisted:
Now that Rika has had a taste of the Pimp (and really enjoyed it) surely she's gonna want more soon :P
I'm proud of her for being able to say no and stop Yossy though, that really wouldn't have been the easiest thing to do at such a moment :lol:

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Re: Runaway from the Past
« Reply #625 on: July 25, 2008, 07:21:29 AM »
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Holy.... :imdead: Matching thong..... :mon blood:
DON'T DIE ON ME!!!!

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All the matching stuff is weird, but kinda cute :wub:
I have a fixation with matching things... blame my rabu-rabu

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But I was a little shocked that Rika allowed Yossy to go that far.
it's the yoshizawa effect!

COMMANDO?!?!? :w00t: :drool:

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! she wore something more... ... .. um... modest?

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Saleswomen at the store swooning over Yossi and gave her the sets hoping to get the chance to personally try them on for her?
:kekeke:
i can imagine....

It must have been really good for Rika to have allowed it to get to that point.
rika is such a lucky girl...

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Great update! :D Carry on :P
thanks!

Oh YAAAAAAY!
I liked that one :D
It was sweet with all the matching things and how excited Yossy is about THEIR room, oh and I looove brown and pink :heart: The Marks and Spencer people have good taste :wub:
i like brown and my rabu0-rabu likes pink... good match, dibs?

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What a hot make out session :twisted:
Now that Rika has had a taste of the Pimp (and really enjoyed it) surely she's gonna want more soon :P
I'm proud of her for being able to say no and stop Yossy though, that really wouldn't have been the easiest thing to do at such a moment :lol:

YAY MOAR MOAR!!!
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i love reading comments!!! anyway, apologies to those who were anticipating an update... my sched's a bit hectic since yesterday so i haven't the time to write an update... i will whip one up as soon as i can... the story's finally taking shape in my mind... i hope you guys stick around until completion...

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Re: Runaway from the Past
« Reply #626 on: July 25, 2008, 01:47:52 PM »
(very short) UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Rika awoke to Hitomi's warm breath on her nape. Hitomi had her in a tight embrace the whole night. She felt a deep blush coming to her face as she just realized how close their bodies were-- a bit too close. Rika slowly pried herself from Hitomi's arms hoping that the action would not awaken the sleeping prince. Unfortunately, she failed. The prince awoke. Hitomi pulled her even closer, planting kisses on her nape.

"Ohayou, Ka-chan~" Hitomi whispered.

"Ohayou..." Rika was still in attempt to get up but it seemed that Hitomi had no plans of letting her go. "To-chan... I need to get up now... I'm gonna make breakfast..."

"Just five more minutes..."

"To~chan~"

"Please?"

"... Okay... five minutes..."

Hitomi took Rika's left hand and held it in her right, placing each finger in the gaps between Rika's. The hand was warm. Hitomi slowly lifted her head and hung her chin on Rika's shoulder, close to the crook of her neck. "Isn't it amazing how we're so perfect to be together? How my hands perfectly fit in yours? How this head of mine has a place on your shoulder? and how my arms have a place to rest on your waist? I love you so much..."

Rika felt like crying at Hitomi's little speech. She never felt so happy in her entire life. "I love you too, To-chan..."

"... Ka-chan... I want ice cream for breakfast..."

R"That's not the kind of food you eat for breakfast..."

"... but that's what I want..."

"I didn't know you're a spoiled brat..."

"You do now..."

"Fine... if we're having ice cream for breakfast... that means i don't have to cook..."

Hitomi lifted her head and kissed Rika on the shoulder. "More time in bed for us... Maybe we can--"

In the same manner from last night, Rika quickly responded. "No."

"Kaa~chan~"

"I need to get ready to go to the hospital..."

"We can get ready together..."

"To-chan... I need to bathe--"

"Exactly."

"No."

"Come on..."

"You promised me..."

"Hmpf... fine... go bathe and dress up ALONE in YOUR room..." Hitomi quickly pulled away from Rika and got up from bed, turning away from Rika.

Rika sat up, regretful that she might have offended Hitomi. "To~chan... It's not that I don't want you... ... It's just that--"

Hitomi faced Rika again with a smile on her face that confused Rika, "you're not ready... I know... Don't feel bad about it... I was just kidding... I can wait..." and then, Hitomi wolfishly grinned. "I know you'll give in soon... ... I'm too irresistable..."

Rika rolled her eyes at Hitomi. "... and cocky... don't forget cocky..."

"Hey... that adds to the irresistable appeal..." Hitomi took Rika's hand and gave it a kiss. "This cocky yet oh-so-irresistable To-chan better get ready too... for work... " Hitomi stood up and walked off, yelling to Rika behind her, "I'm going to MY bathroom to bathe ALONE now..."

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Re: Runaway from the Past
« Reply #627 on: July 25, 2008, 02:12:19 PM »
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"... Ka-chan... I want ice cream for breakfast..."

R"That's not the kind of food you eat for breakfast..."

"... but that's what I want..."

"I didn't know you're a spoiled brat..."

"You do now..."
ice cream for breakfast?! what a brat...  : :mon ehh:

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Hitomi faced Rika again with a smile on her face that confused Rika, "you're not ready... I know... Don't feel bad about it... I was just kidding... I can wait..." and then, Hitomi wolfishly grinned. "I know you'll give in soon... ... I'm too irresistable..."

Rika rolled her eyes at Hitomi. "... and cocky... don't forget cocky..."
yeah yossy's too irresistable rika :mon misch:
i wonder when will rika give in  :whistle:

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Re: Runaway from the Past
« Reply #628 on: July 25, 2008, 03:18:23 PM »
 :drool:  :drool:  :drool:  :drool:  :drool:  damn I need an ice cold water very hawt  :yep:

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Re: Runaway from the Past
« Reply #629 on: July 25, 2008, 09:01:22 PM »
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She discovered that Rika’s left canine was a bit pointier than the one on the right.
that whole Chapter/update was HAWT except this part threw me off.... inspecting Rika's teeth with her tongue :mon huh2: was.... odd lol

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ice cream for breakfast :shocked: lol but I'm glad Yossie taking the neccessary steps to get rika to conserve with her :mon thumb:
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Re: Runaway from the Past
« Reply #630 on: July 26, 2008, 03:29:00 AM »
^ I read a lot of Vampire novels so inspecting the teeth with her tongue wasn't odd to me at all :lol: In fact the guy was doing it in the book I was reading last night :P

With all this home cooking of Rika's that Yossy eats and ice-cream for breakfast etc, Rika will have to give into Yossy's charms soon just so she can work off everything she eats :twisted:

And tru, you liking brown and your rabu-rabu liking pink really is a good match... you join together to make the awesome combination of brown & Pink :heart: :wub:

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Re: Runaway from the Past
« Reply #631 on: July 26, 2008, 06:21:18 AM »
So cute that Rika was blushing! Yossy can be sooo romantic....until she talks about ice cream for breakfast!!! XD Ruined the moment! She keeps on trying to get in Rika's (hot) pants! They're all fighting but loving at the same time! Ooooh, I hope Rika turns out ok!

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Re: Runaway from the Past
« Reply #632 on: July 26, 2008, 09:20:26 AM »
COMMANDO?!?!? :w00t: :drool:

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! she wore something more... ... .. um... modest?
Damn. :banghead:



Yossi's still got that smooth-talk, but she's got to be careful that she doesn't try to push too hard here. She doesn't want to guilt-trip Rika into doing anything that she doesn't want to do and/or is not ready for yet.

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Re: Runaway from the Past
« Reply #633 on: July 26, 2008, 07:40:21 PM »
and I'm going to MY bed to sleep alone now.... while crying myself to sleep... god I'm a sad sad person.... I need to get a life.. seriously! I am soo lonely! XD

 and if Rika gets kidnapped which is practically a given, I'ma hurt you! *snip snip*... don't mind that noise, it was just me practising my scissor handling.... oooh yeah!

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Re: Runaway from the Past
« Reply #634 on: July 27, 2008, 12:11:53 PM »
@gloopip: ... hey~ i eat ice cream for breakfast... XD *must... not... spoil... ... storyyyyy!!!!*  ... when will Rika give in if she does give in?  ;) i hope that make out chapter wasn't too hot... the ice cream might melt! XD

i love the sig and avatar set... simple and sweet... the heart on the corner and the smiles on their faces say it all... as promised, this update's for you!!!!!!

@kRisZ: a bucket of ice cold water for kRisZ~!

@takagakifan: ... i wouldn't say inspecting... it just kinda brushed with her tongue with all the action going on... :lol: ... we need water to cool this hawtness down!

@lollipopgirl: i heard conserving water is a good cardio-vascular work out... :lol: ... you're a health-conscious environmentalist now? :lol: next thing i know, you might be a vegan!

brown and pink look nice together... the Marks and Spencer people have good taste... XD (especially with the matching thong)

@strawb3rrykream: if yossui doesn't stop with all the romantic-knightly things she does, i'll run out of romantic-knightly things for my next fic!!!! :lol: ... they fight and love each other!!! ... pretty exciting...

@JFC: ... she's really smooth with those kinds of things... we'll see... i wonder what rika is going to do about all this smooth talk going on...

@sweety: aww... sweeety... ... ... don't feel soo lonely... i'm here! :D ... if you need to talk to somebody about anything that makes you feel sad, you can PM me! ... i need to get a life too... so don't feel soo lonely... but if it makes you feel better, i feel lonely too... we can be lonely together! (a bit corny, but i am sincere with that) XD

... um... may i suggest that you bang my head against the wall instead? i'm a bit squeamish with sharp scissors...

@everyone who's still here: thank you for your continued patronage for this fic... it really has grown from my original plan and it's really been awesome to have been writing this with all of you... for the commenters, keep at it! this is a forum after all... and all your feedback matter to me especially now that I'm in the process of brainstorming for a new fic... i hope you continue to enjoy this fic up to the very distant end!

for those who've been affected POSITIVELY by this fic, I'm glad that my fic has helped you in the humble ways it can... it's the Charmy effect~

(i know it's not 5-5:30am yet but this is my only break for today from my thesis... so...) it's time for... an
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

"You better be out of here in twenty minutes if you don't want to see me in my full naked glory, Ka-chan!"Hitomi yelled out to Rika from inside her bathroom.

Rika placed her hand on her chest. Her heart was going doki-doki really fast. Hitomi really knew how to make a girl feel special. No wonder Ayumi warned her about falling in love with "that one".

Rika looked down at the bed they shared for the night. The bed they will share for many nights. The pink in the sheets reminded her of her sister's bed at their house in Kanagawa. The bed where she would find solace and comfort when she feels alone and afraid. Of course, by now, the bed's probably not there anymore. The house wasn't theirs anymore. The old grand piano where her mother taught her how to play the piano wasn't there anymore... the piano where she would practice that special piece for that friend from so many years ago was no more.

Now, there's this bed. Ka-chan and To-chan's bed. The bed where Rika could hide from the world, from time, from the past. The bed where she would never be alone. The bed where she could be closest to the one she loves the most. Now, this is her home. It has a piano too and a violin with an awesome violinist.

The sun is close to rising. It looked beautiful from the window. Hitomi really picked this room for herself as it was facing east.

Rika looked at the clock on the bedside table. It's only been 7 minutes since Hitomi warned her about the twenty minutes later but Rika didn't want to risk seeing something she isn't ready for. She quicky made their bed and left for HER room to bathe ALONE. This is going to be a long day.

==

The young man looked at himself on the mirror. "Kaya mo yan..." (You can do it...)

He picked up the gillete mach 3 on his sink and gently shaved off his goatie, remembering how much Rika disliked it when he first grew a goatie. Rika was all he could think of since Mike texted him of her return.

"Ano naman yan?" (What on earth is that?) Rika giggled pointing at his chin.

"Goatie... Ano sa tingin mo?" (Goatie... What do you think?")

"Hindi bagay sa'yo... Bakit ka naman nagpatubo nyan?" (It doesn't look good on you... Why did you even grow that?) Rika returned to arranging the shelves in the sari-sari store.

"Rocker ako!" (I'm a rocker!)

"Oo na..." (Sure you are...) Rika rolled her eyes.


"Rika... "

==

"Ka~chan~" Hitomi called for Rika from the hallway outside their room. Earlier, she took the initiative to take all ice cream out of the fridge. She couldn't decide which flavors she liked so she took out all four flavors they had. "Better come out now if you don't want the ice cream to melt~..."

"I'll be out in a few minutes, To-chan!"

"We have chocolate, strawb3rry, french vanilla and pistaccio... what will you be having?"

"I'll have strawb3rry!"

"Just that?!"

"Fine, that and french vanilla!"
 
"Okay!"

Hitomi walked back to the table where the ice cream was and scooped out their breakfast. After finishing her task, she took her seat and waited for Rika to join her. She didn't have to wait that long...

"TO-CHAN!!!"

Hitomi almost fell off the chair. "What?! ... what?" She turned to the cause of her alarm, Rika who was standing a few feet from the table, frozen in her place, pointing at the bowl on the table.

"What is that?!"

"Uhm... that's our breakfast, Ka-chan..."

"That's ice cream for a basketball team!"

"What~ ... I just took out 3 scoops for each flavor..."

"Three?!?"

Hitomi scratched her head "... ... ... I'll finish whatever you won't eat..."

"You eat too much..."

"Come on, Ka-chan... let's just enjoy this..."

"If you don't lessen how much you eat--"

"I won't lose this hot bod of mine to twelve scoops of ice cream, Ka-chan..."

"Fine..."
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Re: Runaway from the Past
« Reply #635 on: July 27, 2008, 01:18:48 PM »
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love the sig and avatar set... simple and sweet... the heart on the corner and the smiles on their faces say it all... as promised, this update's for you!!!!!!
:otomerika: :w00t:   Thankies!!!   :w00t: :otomerika:


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"You better be out of here in twenty minutes if you don't want to see me in my full naked glory, Ka-chan!"Hitomi yelled out
to Rika from inside her bathroom.
:drool: stay ka-chan, stay!  :rofl:


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the piano where she would practice that special piece for that friend from so many years ago was no more.
but that friend is still there...if only she knew  ;)

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Now, there's this bed. Ka-chan and To-chan's bed. The bed where Rika could hide from the world, from time, from the past. The bed where she would never be alone. The bed where she could be with closest to the one she loves the most. Now, this is her home. It has a piano too and a violin with an awesome violinist.
:yep: an awesome, hot, rich, kind and....... cocky violinist  :lol:

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The young man looked at himself on the mirror. "Kaya mo yan..." (You can do it...)

He picked up the gillete mach 3 on his sink and gently shaved off his goatie, remembering how much Rika disliked it when he first grew a goatie. Rika was all he could think of since Mike texted him of her return.

"Ano naman yan?" (What on earth is that?) Rika giggled pointing at his chin.

"Goatie... Ano sa tingin mo?" (Goatie... What do you think?")

"Hindi bagay sa'yo... Bakit ka naman nagpatubo nyan?" (It doesn't look good on you... Why did you even grow that?) Rika returned to arranging the shelves in the sari-sari store.

"Rocker ako!" (I'm a rocker!)

"Oo na..." (Sure you are...) Rika rolled her eyes.

"Rika... "

this guy is joseph right? hmmm.... wonder what kind of twist will he bring to the couple...

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"That's ice cream for a basketball team!"

"What~ ... I just took out 3 scoops for each flavor..."

"Three?!?"

Hitomi scratched her head "... ... ... I'll finish whatever you won't eat..."

"You eat too much..."

"Come on, Ka-chan... let's just enjoy this..."

"If you don't lessen how much you eat--"

"I won't lose this hot body of mine to twelve scoops of ice cream, Ka-chan..."
:pig laugh: :pig laugh: :pig laugh:
12 scoops?! :mon wtf:
even a real guy here can't finish that much for breakfast to-chan.....

thankies for the update tru! made my boring sunday   :gmon heartu:

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Re: Runaway from the Past
« Reply #636 on: July 27, 2008, 05:07:40 PM »
Hehehe! Yossy cracked me up with the first line! Poor Rika, everything is reminding her of the past, but then she remembers her present. :wub: Holy crap!! That's a lot of ice cream! I think I'd be sick just looking at it! For the record, how does Yossy stay so skinny when she eats like 3 guys? :lol:
Oh, and I like the way you spelled "strawb3rry". :wub:

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Re: Runaway from the Past
« Reply #637 on: July 28, 2008, 06:12:24 AM »
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"You better be out of here in twenty minutes if you don't want to see me in my full naked glory, Ka-chan!"Hitomi yelled out to Rika from inside her bathroom.

Rika placed her hand on her chest. Her heart was going doki-doki really fast. Hitomi really knew how to make a girl feel special. No wonder Ayumi warned her about falling in love with "that one".
Watch, Rika's debating with herself about whether to stay or not.  :twisted:



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The old grand piano where her mother taught her how to play the piano wasn't there anymore... the piano where she would practice that special piece for that friend from so many years ago was no more.
Man, are they EVER going to find out that they're right in front of each other's noses? Can't wait to see what happens when Rika plays that "special tune" on Yossi's piano and Yossi overhears her. :)



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The young man looked at himself on the mirror. "Kaya mo yan..." (You can do it...)

He picked up the gillete mach 3 on his sink and gently shaved off his goatie, remembering how much Rika disliked it when he first grew a goatie. Rika was all he could think of since Mike texted him of her return.

"Ano naman yan?" (What on earth is that?) Rika giggled pointing at his chin.

"Goatie... Ano sa tingin mo?" (Goatie... What do you think?")

"Hindi bagay sa'yo... Bakit ka naman nagpatubo nyan?" (It doesn't look good on you... Why did you even grow that?) Rika returned to arranging the shelves in the sari-sari store.

"Rocker ako!" (I'm a rocker!)

"Oo na..." (Sure you are...) Rika rolled her eyes
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"Rika... "
Yeah, a lot of us 'Pino dudes have this thing about having chin hair (myself included, at least for the summer :D).

Does Rika even know that he has a mad crush on her? It's going to break his heart when he finds out about her and Yossi; and it wouldn't surprise me if May somehow tries to use this as part of her plan to recapture Rika for Baldo. Watch she'll probably wait until he finds out about Rika and Yossi, then she'll talk to him and get him all fired up/pissed off and convince him to go and "beat Yossi up" so that "you and Rika can be together", when in reality she's having him do it as a distraction so that she can get enough time to facilitate the re-kidnapping of Rika.



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Hitomi walked back to the table where the ice cream was and scooped out their breakfast. After finishing her task, she took her seat and waited for Rika to join her. She didn't have to wait that long...

"TO-CHAN!!!"

Hitomi almost fell off the chair. "What?! ... what?" She turned to the cause of her alarm, Rika who was standing a few feet from the table, frozen in her place, pointing at the bowl on the table.

"What is that?!"

"Uhm... that's our breakfast, Ka-chan..."
Okay, for a sec I thought that Yossi was sitting at the table...nekkid! XD



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"Uhm... that's our breakfast, Ka-chan..."

"That's ice cream for a basketball team!"

"What~ ... I just took out 3 scoops for each flavor..."

"Three?!?"
12 scoops of ice cream?

For breakfast???

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Dang. :lol:

Then again, remember that the previous night Yossi had finished enough rice and bistek to feed a family of 4.  :cow:



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"If you don't lessen how much you eat--"

"I won't lose this hot bod of mine to twelve scoops of ice cream, Ka-chan..."
Any bets on how long it'll be before Yossi pulls the "You could always help me 'work it off' " line the next time Rika scolds her about eating too much? ;D

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Re: Runaway from the Past
« Reply #638 on: July 28, 2008, 07:51:44 AM »
@gloopip: i'm glad that fic made your day... the avasigset made mine! ... i know a real guy who can finish that much ice cream... insane dude...

@strawb3rrykream.: :lol: i love strawb3rry(kream)...

@JFC: i missed your zooper comments... the eyes have been working on the other mission too much...
... your hypothesis: ... hmmm... nice idea there... i wonder what really will happen...

i dedicate this update to sweeety... don't feel soo lonely, sweeety dear... i hope this one gives you at the very least temporary comfort... ...

thanks for the comments, everyone!!! your comments make my day...
save me from my thesis, Charmy-sama!

it is time for another...

UPDATE!!!!!

"Are you sure you don't want me to come with you today?" Hitomi asked Rika. They were in the car, outside the MRT (train) station. Actually, she was just stalling. She was bent on coming with Rika again today but Rika wouldn't give in.

"You have work to do..." Rika smoothed the collar of Hitomi's shirt.

Hitomi expected Rika to say that. Good thing she has plan B. "Well, Ayaka an--"

"No." It seemed Rika was ready for the "Ayaka-and-Mai-can-cover-for-me" card. "You're not going to make them do your job again."

"But Ka-chan... it's not safe..."

"I'll be okay... Really... I'll be very careful..."

"Are you sure you don't want a body guard?"

"I don't need one..."

"Yes, you do..."

"No, I don't."

"Yes, you do..."

"No, I don't."

"You do." Hitomi was getting quite annoyed. Rika's stubborness was getting to her. After all, she was just thinking of Rika's safety. Hitomi looked the other way to keep Rika from seeing the expression of frustration manifesting on her face.

"To-chan... look at me... ... look at me"

Hitomi complied. How could she not give in to her?

"Trust me...?"

Hitomi took Rika's hand and kissed it. "I trust you... I just don't trust... everybody else..."

"I'll be fine..."

Hitomi finally realized that there was no way Rika would fold on this one. She hated losing but if this is what Rika wants... ... ...

"... I'm on speed dial number one, okay?"

"I'll call you right away if something comes up..." Rika opened the door and stepped out. "I love you, To-chan... See you later~"

"See you..."

Rika pushed the door to a close before turning away from Hitomi , going up the stairs to the trainstation.

Hitomi grinned as she looked at Rika through the rear view mirror. "Maybe sooner than later..."

==

Rika arrived at the hospital 15 minutes early. There wasn't that much traffic on E. Rod. Ave that morning. Or maybe all other motorists were still asleep.

She quickly went to Jr's room where Tita Eula was waiting.

"Tita Eu..." Rika reached for her hand. "mano po..."

"O, Rika... maaga ka ata..." (O, Rika... you're a bit early...)

"Maaga na po akong umalis sa amin..." (I left our house early...)

"Umupo ka muna..." (Take a seat...) Eula passed to her a plastic chair.

"Thank you po..."

"Saan na ba kayo nakatira?"  (Where do you live now?)

"Sa Makati po..." (At Makati)

"... Ihinatid ka ba ni Ma'am Yoshizawa?" (Did Ma'am Yoshizawa drop you off?)

"Hindi po... nagcommute po ako" (No... I commuted)

"Ah... ..." Eula appeared a bit apprehensive. There were things she wanted to talk about with Rika regarding this Yoshizawa. Rika couldn't help but notice the discomfort in her Tita Eula's actions.

"May problema po ba?" (Is there a problem?"

"... Ano... Rika, anak... Alam ko matanda ka na at alam mo na yang ginagawa mo..." (... Un... Rika, dear... I know you are old enough and you know what you are doing...) Rika didn't like how her tita was speaking. From the tone and the words, she knew that this was about her To-chan.

"Tita... si Hitomi po... at ako... kami na po..." (Tita... Hitomi... and I... we are together...) Rika quickly told Eula not wanting to drag this on any longer.

The expression on Eula's face, Rika couldn't read. All that was clear was, Tita Eula wasn't happy with the news.

"Rika... parang anak na naging turing ko sa iyo... magtapat ka nga sa'kin... siya ba ang dahilan kaya lumayas ka sa inyo?" (Rika... i treated you like my own child... please be honest with me... is she the reason why you ran away from home?)

Rika nodded. Even if it wasn't the real reason, it would be a good cover-up excuse for now.

Eula sighed heavily, it was obvious that she was disappointed with Rika. "Hindi naman kita mapapakialaman sa desisyon mong yan... Pero alam kong alam mo na hindi tama yang relasyon nyo...Kasalanan yang ginagawa mo... " (I know don't have a say in that  decision of yours... But you know that your relationship with her is wrong... You're commiting a sin...)

"Tita, mahal niya ako..." (Tita, she loves me...)

"Hindi na ako makikipagtalo sa iyo diyan... may pasok pa ako ngayon... sana pag-isipan mo yang maigi... mauuna na ako sa'yo, iha..." (I won't argue with you on that... I still have to go to work... I hope you think about this very well... I'm going on ahead of you now, dear...)

As Eula was standing up, a soft knock was heard from the door. She turned to the door. "Pasok..." (Come in...)

The door slowly opened, revealing the visitor.

Eula smiled at seeing him. It was as if her god answered her prayers immediately. "O, Joseph. napadalaw ka... Wala ka bang pasok ngayon?"  (O, Joseph. You're here... Don't you have school or work today?)

"Good morning po. Hi, Rika..." He smiled at Rika as he handed her a small bouquet of carnations. Rika was puzzled at the gesture but received the gift graciously. "Thank you..."

Joseph turned to Eula again. "Wala po akong gagawin ngayon... Naghihintay pa po ng results ng board exams" (I don't have anything to do today... I'm still waiting for the results of the board exams)

"Ah, sige... Ikaw muna ang bahala kay Rika dyan a..." (Ah, okay... I'll leave Rika to your care...)

"Opo"

Timing could never be more perfect than this.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~CHARMY PREVAILS!!!~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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Re: Runaway from the Past
« Reply #639 on: July 28, 2008, 07:56:39 AM »
Dun dun DUN!!!! Now Joseph is there. How will Rika handle this? Poor Rika, her aunt doesn't approve of her relationship with Yossie, not like that will stop her or anything. Joseph doesn't doesn't have a chance Yossie's much more of a man (and woman) than he'll ever be.

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