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Re: Runaway from the Past
« Reply #1080 on: November 16, 2008, 02:36:22 AM »
rika wait for me, ill save you

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Re: Runaway from the Past
« Reply #1081 on: November 16, 2008, 03:20:46 AM »
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Hitomi could only glare at the driver when he refused to turn the corner from A. Bonifacio avenue to a minor street. She read suspicion and mistrust on his face as he refused the thousand peso bill in her hand.

"Sir, delikado na po dito. Pasensya na po. Hanggang dito na lang." (Sir, it's already dangerous here. I'm sorry. I can only drive you up to this point.)

She stepped out of the cab and found herself in a place she's never been before. The sign read: 11th avenue. Where the hell is that?!
For anyone not in the know, let's just say that Yossi's just walked into the wrong part of town. :O



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She took out her phone and dialled Joseph's cellphone number. The receipient of the call picked up fast.

"Joseph, I'm on 11th avenue, from A. Bonifacio. I'm still looking for her but I think they haven't taken her far from here."

"Okay. Uh..."

"Just get them here."
MOVE YOUR ASS BOY!!!
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"E, yung sumapak sa'kin, nakita 'nyo ba?" (The one who socked me, did you find him?)

"Hindi... baka ginamit lang 'to tapos iniwan din..." (No... maybe he just got his way with her and then left her)
I am SO looking forward to the moment when they find out that the one that beat Baldo's ass before was a woman.  :angry:



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About ten feet away was a black Toyota Fortuner. Rika couldn't see who the passengers were but from the silhouettes, she was certain there were three men inside the vehicle.

The grin on his face widened when he saw Rika crying. "Wala nang magliligtas sa'yo ngayon..." (Nobody can save you this time...)
SOMEONE SAVE HER ALREADY!!! 
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Re: Runaway from the Past
« Reply #1082 on: November 16, 2008, 03:33:12 AM »
I should NOT be here right now... but... too... hard... to... resist...!

So many ways this story could go now and I don't even know what I want to happen... Do I want Yossy to make it in time or not? :O
It's cute that Jo & Yossy are working together :wub: Why the hell have I gone all :mon inluv: over Joseph since the last 3-4 chapters or whatever it's been :rolleyes:
Sadly, that place Yossy has just walked into sounds way too familiar to me :sweatdrop:
Even though I have no idea where this is all going right now (I have my evil preferences), I'm loving this more than ever... all this action is awesome... bring on the kicking and screaming :D

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Re: Runaway from the Past
« Reply #1083 on: November 16, 2008, 07:50:26 AM »
Oh....my....kamisama!!! :shocked: *hides under blankets* Yossy HAS to find her!!! Please? *cries*
I'm sad that it has to come to this.....*springs out from under blankets* SUPER STRAWB3RRY to the rescue!!!! I'll save you, Rika-chan!!!!! :lol:

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Re: Runaway from the Past
« Reply #1084 on: November 16, 2008, 01:20:26 PM »
maybe Joseph will get to Rika first.  :P

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Re: Runaway from the Past
« Reply #1085 on: November 16, 2008, 05:35:44 PM »
aaaaaaaahhh !!!!!!!!!  :OMG:

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Re: Runaway from the Past
« Reply #1086 on: November 17, 2008, 07:38:32 AM »
Hmmm...were are you going to take us from here...Possible twist: 1) the 3 people in the 4runner are "the eyes" 2) its Jin with his body guards. I mean Baldo has a Japanese customer waiting for Rika right.

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Re: Runaway from the Past
« Reply #1087 on: November 17, 2008, 03:22:44 PM »
 :O crap  :O     Yossie!!! hurry up!!!

My theory: Yossie got robbed by those drunkards, attacked by a rusty knife, bleed, but still managed to run towards Rika, fought, won and finally collapsed.  XD

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Re: Runaway from the Past
« Reply #1088 on: November 17, 2008, 03:44:45 PM »
Haha~  :lol: does it have to be this drama?

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Re: Runaway from the Past
« Reply #1089 on: November 18, 2008, 09:12:44 AM »
Este capitulo es por Yuki... te quiero, amiga...

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The depth of the dark street was lined by factories and warehouses. Rust-encrusted gates kept her from seeing if that ambulance was parked anywhere there. A ten-wheeler truck was parked beside the high wall of a warehouse. It occupied more than half of the road.

The ambulance could not have gone past this truck. It won't fit.

That narrowed down the possibilities. There were only three factory warehouses before the truck's obstruction of traffic. If she could only find a way to see what was behind those walls.

Hitomi looked around her. There was the truck and a couple of posts on the sides of the street, about 50 meters apart.

Hitomi thought about climbing the posts but they didn't look like they could hold much weight. Some were already rotting at the foot. Seeing no other alternative, she climbed up the truck.

Wearing leather shoes proved itself unhelpful as Hitomi slipped a couple of times before making it to the top of the cargo van.

Her efforts were not futile as she could clearly see what was behind the walls. The ambulance was parked by the warehouse across the street.

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Rika felt her knees shaking as Baldo walked to the SUV inside the warehouse. She looked around for any means to escape but found none. Each door was guarded by a goon. She was also placed in the middle of the warehouse that it was impossible to move undetected.

May and Dan stood nearby, looking impatient. They seemed anxious to leave. Mayumi was fidgeting about while Dan was quietly calming her down. The sooner they get out of here, the safer they are from trouble.

Rika couldn't stop crying. She remembered what went down between Hitomi and herself this morning. Rika regretted being angry. She didn't say 'i love you' before parting with her To-chan. And now, she might not see Hitomi again.

She wished she could've done things differently. She wished she made Hitomi stay at the hospital. They could've talked there. She wished she could be back in the safety of Hitomi's arms.

The warehouse was silent save for the soft whispers between Baldo and the passengers of the SUV and the pointless chatter among the goons.

The silence was broken only by a single gunshot from outside.

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« Last Edit: November 18, 2008, 09:16:22 AM by tru_harmony »

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Re: Runaway from the Past
« Reply #1090 on: November 18, 2008, 04:15:55 PM »
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The silence was broken only by a single gunshot from outside.

Waaah ....WTH !!!!!!!!!!!  :OMG: :on freeza:

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Re: Runaway from the Past
« Reply #1091 on: November 18, 2008, 04:36:33 PM »
It's ok Rika Yossie's coming.... I hope (but that gunshot was troubling)

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Re: Runaway from the Past
« Reply #1092 on: November 19, 2008, 01:25:08 AM »
I'm gonna be different and hope Yossy was shot :w00t:
Coz I'm totally evil and morbid like that and y'all now it :P
If i can't get the storyline I wanted that could be the next best thing :D
Totally building the suspense up awesomely, edge of the seat stuff, love it!

Crappy comment I know but I;ve been up all night and yet am still running late XD
Regardless, gotta love the tru+h :heart:

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Re: Runaway from the Past
« Reply #1093 on: November 19, 2008, 01:50:22 AM »
WOOO! Yossi lucked out in that she didn't end up having to search that large of an area. Now to figure out how to save Rika (again). :thumbsup



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The silence was broken only by a single gunshot from outside.
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Re: Runaway from the Past
« Reply #1094 on: November 19, 2008, 02:47:14 PM »
  :shocked:

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Re: Runaway from the Past
« Reply #1095 on: November 22, 2008, 05:33:10 PM »
Just hold on a little longer, Rika. Yossy is coming. I have faith that it wasn't her getting shot. I hope I'm right. :(

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Re: Runaway from the Past
« Reply #1096 on: November 25, 2008, 03:09:26 AM »
we want an update~~  :mon cry:

thank you tru for the last chapter  :mon inluv:

and... NOOOO YOSSY!! say that she didn't get a shot!! :mon whine: :mon scare:

nos vemos!  :mon loveflower: :mon bye:

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Re: Runaway from the Past
« Reply #1097 on: November 25, 2008, 04:51:10 AM »
I dedicate this one to my best budZ, and my grandpa...

I owe ze Ishi and ze Yoshi a bundle!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

sorry if i haven't updated in days... this is a special chap... i stepped up my game a bit for this one...

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

To-chan!

Rika's heart skipped a beat at hearing the gunshot. She didn't know what it was but after the initial shock, she felt that it was Hitomi out there.

Was it instinct? Wishful thinking?

Her only prayer now was that it wasn't her To-chan who got shot.

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Hitomi took a buckshot round from the guard's belt and loaded it into the shotgun he previously weilded.

He had been careless. Hitomi found sneaking up on him easier than kicking her father's ass. She almost effortly subdued him with a shot on his shoulder.

The guard laid unconscious on the cold pavement.

Hitomi held the shotgun firmly as she stepped over him as she entered the warehouse complex.

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Rika wanted to make the run for the exit now. Not that she hadn't thought of it earlier but the thought of Hitomi outside told her the run wouldn't be in vain.

She observed her surroundings closely. There was only one point of exit: the steel gates which were half closed. The ambulance and the Toyota Fortuner were parked close to the gate which was to her left. To her right was a forklift and hundreds of crates and rack pallets.

From where she stood, she could see eight goons. All of them appeared agitated at hearing the gunshot.

Baldo, who was still talking to the client, didn't look bothered at all. He simply signalled to one of his men to go and check out what went down outside.

"Yes, boss" as expected, was the response.

As the goon walked out, Rika watched him. She was still strategizing how to get to the gate the fastest.

It didn't take five minutes until as second gunshot was heard quickly followed by a third one, seemingly in response.

Baldo looked a bit worried now, ordering another goon to shut off all the lights. Dan immediately grabbed Rika to make sure that she doesn't use this opportunity to escape.

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Hitomi looked at the nickel-plated Smith and Wesson 29, a .44 magnum handgun, she held. She had a similar one back in their home at Saitama, under the mattress.

Five shots left

She quietly thanked the corpse sprawled on the floor for having a gun familiar to her. Blood oozed from the gunshot wound on his head, a little over his right ear.

She moved stealthily behind the trailers, closer to the warehouse which suddenly went dark.

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Dan's touch terrified Rika more than the series of gunshots which were fired earlier. His touch coupled with the darkness made her want to just breakdown and cry. But she can't breakdown now. She didn't want to give him that satisfation.

Her eyes sought the light but only found it within the SUV. Unlike earlier, she could now see the men inside the vehicle. Still a bit blurry due to the distance, but clear enough to be certain that they looked East Asian.

Negotiations continued but Baldo signalled to his goons. Only two remained to guard the warehouse. The other five set out to investigate what had happened outside.

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Five shots

Hitomi breathed in deep. She knew she had to do this quickly and quietly.

The gate was just a few meters away from where she was hiding. She wouldv'e made the run for it had the five goons not emerged.

One of them held an M16A1 assault rifle; two of them had SP12s shotguns; and two with P229 handguns. The one with the assault rifle looked like the man in charge. He directed the rest to spread out.

Hitomi slowly climbed up one of the cargo vans in the warehouse complex as she strategized.

She watched them carefully from her perch. She had to conserve bullets as she didn't know how many more goons there were. She also wanted to save a bullet each for Dan and Baldo. They will pay for what they have done to Rika.

Maybe...
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« Last Edit: November 25, 2008, 10:14:18 AM by tru_harmony »

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Re: Runaway from the Past
« Reply #1098 on: November 25, 2008, 01:13:11 PM »
omg! Yossie's now a.. umm.. killer.?.  :shocked:

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Re: Runaway from the Past
« Reply #1099 on: November 25, 2008, 01:27:42 PM »
Yeah... man... the things Yossi would do for Rika...

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