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Re: Poets's Directory ("Three Months -DELETED SCENE-" UPDATED: 6/30)
« Reply #20 on: June 30, 2008, 01:10:58 PM »
Nakazawa with baseball bat! :mon lmao: Yay for Yankiis :onioncheer: For a second I really thought she fell for Miki's lie about Sayumi and I was already imagining her chase after the bunny XD but after all, it's Yuko she wouldn't make such a mistake, even without cameras I'm sure she somehow would figure it out that Miki was the thief  :lol:

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Re: Poets's Directory ("Three Months -DELETED SCENE-" UPDATED: 6/30)
« Reply #21 on: June 30, 2008, 05:28:49 PM »
Whooooo! Happy I didn't miss that! XD I think we've all learned a lesson from this. Don't steal Nakazawa's good liquor or be prepared to dodge a baseball bat! :mon XD: But it seems like Miki-sama put a lot of effort into not getting caught. Too bad there were cameras! :hiakhiakhiak: Somehow, I think it could have been Sayu. I mean, I've really taken this "dark Sayu" thing to heart and imo, she could be doing a number of bad things we don't know about! :yep: And Yossy's comment is just the icing on the cake!!!!!!! :on lol:

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Re: Poets's Directory ("Three Months -DELETED SCENE-" UPDATED: 6/30)
« Reply #22 on: July 02, 2008, 12:08:12 AM »
OSHIT! BUSTED! :wahaha:

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Re: Poets's Directory ("Three Months -DELETED SCENE-" UPDATED: 6/30)
« Reply #23 on: July 13, 2008, 07:15:12 AM »
it's very hilarious to imagine the scene  :lol:

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Re: Poets's Directory ("Three Months -DELETED SCENE-" UPDATED: 6/30)
« Reply #24 on: July 19, 2008, 11:04:01 PM »
lol that was quite humorous XD  For a second I thought the bunny was sure to get it XD  Can't wait for the epilogue!
For a second I considered her chasing the bunny

Nakazawa with baseball bat! :mon lmao: Yay for Yankiis :onioncheer: For a second I really thought she fell for Miki's lie about Sayumi and I was already imagining her chase after the bunny XD but after all, it's Yuko she wouldn't make such a mistake, even without cameras I'm sure she somehow would figure it out that Miki was the thief  :lol:
LOLOL that would be funnier

Whooooo! Happy I didn't miss that! XD I think we've all learned a lesson from this. Don't steal Nakazawa's good liquor or be prepared to dodge a baseball bat! :mon XD: But it seems like Miki-sama put a lot of effort into not getting caught. Too bad there were cameras! :hiakhiakhiak: Somehow, I think it could have been Sayu. I mean, I've really taken this "dark Sayu" thing to heart and imo, she could be doing a number of bad things we don't know about! :yep: And Yossy's comment is just the icing on the cake!!!!!!! :on lol:

hmmmm I wonder what would happen if sayu was the thief XD

OSHIT! BUSTED! :wahaha:

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it's very hilarious to imagine the scene  :lol:

I thought so too XD
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Re: Poets's Directory ("Unreachable" ~Ishiyoshi~ UPDATED: 7/19)
« Reply #25 on: July 19, 2008, 11:09:32 PM »
A/N: So, there's been a noticeable decline on Ishiyoshi goodness and Yo-pairings in general. Wrote this about a few moments ago... beta was fast with it and decided to post this up. Nothing much to say about it... ^^; I'm such a huge 1444 shipper and the first story i write on them is an angsty one. Oh well... douzo~


UNREACHABLE


“Yossy, just hear me out!”

“No” it’s first stated low “NO!!!” then screamed.

“Please… I beg you” the other woman pleads in a shaky voice.

“I can’t… I’m sorry… but after all that happened... I can’t” Yossy’s voice begins to tremble. I then hear a shuffle, stomping feet and my door knob turning. Yoshizawa quickly comes into the dark room and closes the door with lock. She leans her forehead up against it and bares her teeth from the emotional pain she’s feeling. Placing her hands on the door she slides them up to her head and balls them up. Letting out a loud whimper as she pounds the right fist against the door over and over again, she then slides down ward to the floor and hugs her shaking legs defensively, burying her head as she starts to cry inaudibly. 

I’m pretty sure she had no clue I was in the room resting, well trying to rest. I have a momentary struggle with myself, deciding whether to inform her I’m here and continue on with comforting or completely ignore her hoping she’ll go away.

“Yocchan” I stand, deciding to go with the first choice “what happenned?” I ask, as if I didn’t know already.

“Rika?” she calls out “Rika!” the blonde stands up and rushes over to me. I open my arms and quickly she’s in them crying over my shoulder. It was probably the seventh time we ended up in this comforting position and all over the same girl. Many other people would’ve been annoyed with her frequent crying visits and up to a point I was, but the simple fact that I had her in my arms sometimes made it all worth it. I silently preferred Yossy looking at me for comfort than not looking at me at all.   

“Yocchan, why don’t we go to my house? You can relax a bit better. I don’t think crying here is a good idea.” I honestly suggest. She doesn’t verbally answer but she nods in agreement. “Come on let’s go” I grab her hand, pick up my purse and walk out the door towards the elevator. Thankfully, no one was there and the trip to the lobby was seamless and fast.

A quick wave of my hand and soon we were in the cab driving to my place. Several times through the ride I glanced over to her. She sat silently and motionless while I tried to decipher her silence, times like this are the ones that make me feel so close yet so far away from her as I try desperately to understand her. I catch the gleam of a stray tear trailing its way down her cheek and suddenly I picture myself kissing it away. I try to lean forward and get closer to her but the taxi came to a sudden halt and I loose in the middle of my attempt. Swiftly we got off, pay our dues and go up to my apartment. The moment I opened the door she went straight to my bed and threw herself on it, crying out the tears she held in on the car drive to my house.

I make a quick stop at my kitchen and pour us two cups of coke; I wasn’t in the mood of dealing with a drunk a Yossy.  Now I’m not sure how long I took to pour those two cups of coke-a-cola, but the moment I took a step into my room she was knocked out and possibly dreaming. I walk up to my bedside and look down at her, even when she falls asleep in the middle of a crying spell she look absolutely stunning. Desolately though, the fact that my Gata’s Captain fell asleep in such a state only serves as a painful reminder to me and how she lacks the ability to view me as a potential partner. If she only knew that I’m to the point of sacrifice and would die for her.

She’ll never know though. I sit next to her and gently touch her hand with mine. She’s here on my bed and still she’s unreachable, like the sun whose presence shines to my delight but is still so distant. She’s definitely an impossible love for me, so impossible it’s like the air. I can feel it but I can’t see it.

“My unreachable subliminal angel” I whisper to her, taking advantage of the fact that she can’t hear me. I know that the existence of her love for me can never happen. It has the same chances as humans discovering a fire doesn’t burn on contact. Funny how with us it’s always the same routine, her heart breaks and she comes to me for mending. For her convenience, I’ve basically come to live in the back alley of her sorrow just waiting for next heartache. Suddenly a familiar feeling starts to rise in me.

I can’t take it anymore and lay down next to her. I take her sleeping body and bring it closer to mine in a hug. I shut my eyes tight trying to fight off the emotion. I hate it when this happens to me. I place my chin over her head and painfully slow tears begin to dwell. How I wish I could tell you that the only person who will ever love her without measure is me… but I can’t, I won’t.

I grinned pathetically at myself “If you only knew how painful it is to see you be like this for someone who doesn’t know how to make you happy.” I say in a hush. I glance downward and am relieved to see she’s still asleep. I scrunch down a bit to be at eye level with her. I slowly move forward and peck her lips lightly, then let out a deep sigh. “You’ll never be mine, you’re my unreachable.”
« Last Edit: July 20, 2008, 01:34:39 AM by poets »
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Re: Poets's Directory ("Unreachable" ~Ishiyoshi~ UPDATED: 7/19)
« Reply #26 on: July 20, 2008, 01:21:56 AM »
Damn you! :cry: But angst is so love, man. I can't get enough.  :fainted:
Poor Rika!!! I bet the one Yossy's crying over is Mikitty!!!!! :w00t:

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Re: Poets's Directory ("Unreachable" ~Ishiyoshi~ UPDATED: 7/19)
« Reply #27 on: July 20, 2008, 01:48:59 AM »
^ *super glomps SBK* welcome back~

as for who it is... you decide, i couldn't really pick someone LOL. Don't ya hate when that happens?!
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Re: Poets's Directory ("Unreachable" ~Ishiyoshi~ UPDATED: 7/19)
« Reply #28 on: July 20, 2008, 04:55:57 AM »
I would have to say it sounds like Miki too lol

That was so sad
poor Rika
poor Yossui
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Re: Poets's Directory ("Unreachable" ~Ishiyoshi~ UPDATED: 7/19)
« Reply #29 on: July 20, 2008, 07:02:08 AM »
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QFT. :O

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Re: Poets's Directory ("Unreachable" ~Ishiyoshi~ UPDATED: 7/19)
« Reply #30 on: July 21, 2008, 02:52:27 PM »
aww  :(

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A/N: So my previouse story was not the best  :sweatdrop:, i recongnize that. I find writing POV's hard. Really hard O.O;... un like my dear friend Peti-chan or my sempai Almond I don't have a natural knack for it... AT ALL :'(... but OH WELL!!! To redeem my self here's the first part of a little project i was working on for this month. It's a two part alternative oneshot. The part is a Takagaki one shot of the musical while the second part is a ReinAi/Gakikame version. So here's the first part ^_^ TAKAGAKI HERE WE GO!~

PRINCE GAKI: TAKAGAKI ver.


“Gaki, do you get it now?” They had been practicing for over an hour now and Takahashi was getting more than annoyed.

“Mou~ No I don’t” Risa sighed frustratingly. “You keep doing the same thing” she took off her hands from Takahashi’s back and hand. “You always lead. I’m the Prince! I’m supposed to lead you.” The leader gave a quirky smile, all this time she thought it had been Risa ruining the dance practice, when in fact it was her all along.

“I can’t help it” the older girl shrugged.

“I know… believe me, I know” Risa rolled her eyes and walked back to the table where two chairs stood waiting for them.

“What do you mean by ‘I know’ and roll your eyes like that?” Takahashi too walked back to one of the chairs.

“Forget it, we’ve been here for a long time now and I’m just irritated. I really want to make this musical good but I don’t know if we can.” The younger girl plopped down on a chair, stretching out her sore boot wearing legs.

“Yeah, I know what you mean.” feeling sorry for her sub-leader, Takahashi decided against sitting down. She walked behind the tired Risa and proceeded to give her a surprise back rub. “Maybe this would help”

“It might…” Risa closed her eyes and engrossed herself into the massage but quickly snapped out of it. “No… no it won’t. Please stop.” She reached around grabbed her leaders hands. “Just sit down. I feel bad having you, of all people, give me a massage when you’re the one working the hardest here. If anything, I should be giving you a neck rub.” She led Takahashi to the lonely chair. “Just sit” she smiled sweetly. Takahashi did as told.

“I’m sorry” the Fukui girl frowned. “This all must be weird.” She puffed her cheeks.

“Actually, it is” Risa brought her legs back in and sat in a manly position. “I play a character that’s madly in love with you. Would you expect it to be normal?” she snorted in laughter.

“No, not really” Ai flashed a mega-watt smile. “But I will admit, it’s a nice change” she blushed a bit.

“Nice change?” Risa looked puzzled. 

“Yeah… you know… I’m not really used to seeing you be all boyish.”

“True, and I’m not used to seeing you be all delicate.” The Sub-leader agreed.

“It’s a really nice change.” Takahashi continued “It’s so cute how you get all into the character.” 

“USO!?!?” the girl in charge of Yokahama buildings looked surprised.

“Honto” Takahashi nodded.

“I always thought I couldn’t get it right” she furrowed her eyebrows.

“No you’re doing it really right” The leader’s eyes focused on the younger girl. “It’s like… the moment you put the ponytail, the boots and reread your lines, you quickly transform. You become the Prince. The way you walk, talk, stand, even the way you sit” Takahashi slapped Risa’s leg, making her notice her masculine way of sitting “changes into a more manly attitude, but the biggest change of all is how you look at someone.”

“Wow, I never expected I’d get that much into character” Risa was genuinely surprised.

“Yep, it’s funny how different situations make you look at others in a different light” The eldest of the gokkies looked at her younger counter part. She reflected on what she had just told Risa and inwardly smiled at how true her words were. Never in all her years, of knowing Gaki, had she ever looked at her the way that she was now looking at her. Almost as if it were someone else in the place of the person she had shared so many experiences with before. The feeling she got from seeing Risa walk in through the door was different from the one she used to have. To her confusion she now went to bed thinking about her rehearsed scenes with Gaki and woke up with a strong desire to rehearse only the scenes with the chosen prince. All in all though, she just brushed aside knowing it was just her getting to much into her own character.

“That’s so funny that you mention that” Risa snapped her fingers “Kame said something about the way I look and smile at you”

“The way you look and smile at me?” Takahashi asked.

“Yeah, she called it sexy, sweet and charming. She said she doesn’t understand how you don’t go weak at the knees or faint or something” Risa laughed and Takahashi joined her. Once the laughter settled down, a contemplative look fell upon the youngest of the gokkies “You really think I’m doing a good job?” she sincerely asked. Ai looked at her sympathetically and reached over to grab the other’s hand.

“Yes I do, I really like it” She nodded supportively.

“How much do you like it?” Ai was taken back by the straight forward question.

“Um… I think we’ve rested enough… I think we should practice again. It’s getting super late and everyone already left home” She smiled nervously, trying her best to not answer the question.

“You’re right” Gaki stood up. “But you owe me an answer when we’re done.” She walked to the middle of the rehearsal room. Placed one hand behind her back and extended the other expectantly towards Ai. Seeing Risa stand there so gallantly and tall caused a slight giggle to emerge from Ai. She strode towards her waiting Prince and grabbed her hand. Risa snaked her arm around to Ai’s back and they got into their dancing positions, simultaneously they started to dance in a music-less room.

As expected, Ai started with her dominant ways and Risa was beginning to lose her lead, but this time the sub-leader refused to release it, knowing that if she did they’d have to practice for another hour. She bit down on her teeth and quickly took a determined step, one that surprised the Princess. The shock was so impressive that Ai didn’t have time to recover, soon she found her body willingly allowing it self to be led by the headstrong Risa.

As they spun and stepped, something magical started to take place, they quickly and without realization lost themselves. Suddenly they heard music in the background and no longer were they in a plain wooden floored dance room practicing; they were in a ball with couples around them and a full blown orchestra playing a waltz. Ai bit her bottom lip while a silly grin spread on Gaki’s face and just as sudden they once again found themselves practicing their dance in a plain wooden floored room. Takahashi soon realized they were about to finish the choreography for that scene and decided to go do something on a whim. Taking advantage that Risa was unsuspectingly leading, Ai abruptly took the lead away from the Prince. She grabbed the younger, and at the moment taller, girl and spun her down into a dip. Risa looked up at her in shock.

“This is not part of the choreography” She stated wide eyed “Nowhere does it say that Cinderella suddenly dip the Prin-” Risa never got the chance to finish her sentence, nor did she want to anymore. Ai had leaned down and kissed her. Quickly they parted and Ai stood the dumbfounded Risa back to her feet. “I like it that much” she stated firmly.
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AHHHHH!!! :bleed eyes: That was soooooo.......lovely!! I don't know if I should say it was sexy, cuz it was. Or if I should say it was adorable, cuz it was. Love how Ai-chan can't stop leading. :lol: But it was wonderful, I assure you. :wub: :inlove: :heart:
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Such a cute story, I loved it!  :)
And there's going to be a second part, which is nice. Looking forward to it!
(I hope it's going to be as cute as this one!)

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Taking advantage that Risa was unsuspectingly leading, Ai abruptly took the lead away from the Prince. She grabbed the younger, and at the moment taller, girl and spun her down into a dip. Risa looked up at her in shock.

“This is not part of the choreography” She stated wide eyed “Nowhere does it say that Cinderella suddenly dip the Prin-” Risa never got the chance to finish her sentence, nor did she want to anymore. Ai had leaned down and kissed her. Quickly they parted and Ai stood the dumbfounded Risa back to her feet. “I like it that much” she stated firmly.
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! GO AICHAN! :rockon:

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Aww that was so amazingly cute!
Go Ai! muahahaha

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AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH :mon zoom: POETS!!!!!!!!!! You...you...you...*falls to the floor and  :mon blood:* Prince Gaki and Princess Ai/Prince Ai? XD This was brilliantly good :mon lovelaff: You even included the picture I adore so much. These 2 look awesomely good as a couple don't they? Ai isn't the only one who sees Gaki in a whole new light now cuz I did too after the Cinde related news and stuff got released. There is gonna be a KameMame version too? Gah...you make me so blissful. 

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OMG! so cool! made me squeal~  XD XD  :wub: :wub: :wub:
so cute~ TakaGaki  :wub:

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Firstly, having the pic at the start like that sets the scene so sweetly :mon lovelaff:
 
You just captured everything that is so charming about TakaGaki absolutely perfectly! OMG, when I was reading I was thinking "why the hell don't you write them more often missy, it's incredible!".

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“It might…” Risa closed her and engrossed herself into the massage but quickly snapped out of it. “No… no it won’t. Please stop.” She reached around grabbed her leaders hands. “Just sit down. I feel bad having you, of all people, give me a massage when you’re the one working the hardest here. If anything, I should be giving you a neck rub.” She led Takahashi to the lonely chair. “Just sit” she smiled sweetly. Takahashi did as told.
That part was just so utterly genuine and cute  :mon inluv: I could picture that exactly, right down to Risa's tone and facial expression :heart:

Even with her new manly character, you still kept her as cute little Gaki-san too :D

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“Yeah, she called it sexy, sweet and charming. She said she doesn’t understand how you don’t go weak at the knees or faint or something”
I'm with Kame-chan! I would go weak at the knees if I were Ai :wub:
Oh wouldn't it be just so perfect if during an actual performance of this, the suaveness of Prince Gaki finally hits Ai and she goes completely blank for a short time just staring at her prince charming and everyone is in complete silence just watch the two of stare into each other's eyes like the whole world has disappeared around them  :mon inluv: Yeah I'm in TakaGaki overload tonight  :gmon twirl:

But the ultimate sexy/sweet/awesome/cute/lovely/great award for this goes to:
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“How much do you like it?” Ai was taken back by the straight forward question.
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“This is not part of the choreography” She stated wide eyed “Nowhere does it say that Cinderella suddenly dip the Prin-” Risa never got the chance to finish her sentence, nor did she want to anymore. Ai had leaned down and kissed her. Quickly they parted and Ai stood the dumbfounded Risa back to her feet. “I like it that much” she stated firmly.
To me, taking initiative and being so straight forward as that is incredibly sexy... it always makes me swoon so I love that both girls did that in this *sigh* :wub: :heart:

*waits, not quite as anxiously as everyone else, for the next part* :P

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