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Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle?
« Reply #20 on: September 12, 2008, 08:16:56 AM »
My chart will be edited when the time comes. >D But as of right now, it doesn’t look like it’s changed… *pauses* Linlin seems to be in the middle for now…will it change? :P And poor Kame-chan seems oblivious too. Gotta say…my heart goes out to Gaki-san and Reina. (Then again, that might be because I’m writing ver.2 of my own fic involving the bean, turtle, and cat… XD)

Thanks for the huge update. It was incredibly nice to read. :) Now if you’ll excuse me, I have to go back to doing my homework…Ew. (For some reason, fics manage to stick themselves in front of my work. Not the world’s best thing…)

*quickly goes to see what would happen if the chart were moved around the way you said it* Once things look a little clearer, I'll update this chart again. :) Your fic was good enough for me to want to make it. Thanks~ <3

EDIT: Oh...I think I see it now. Oh my. .___.;;

EDIT2: I just realized...you said JFC's a teacher?! *had no idea*
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Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle?
« Reply #21 on: September 12, 2008, 02:02:32 PM »
OH i love this..theres just so much complications XD
hahaha.
orsm~
cnt wait~
ganbare~ :otomerika:

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Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle?
« Reply #22 on: September 12, 2008, 03:46:22 PM »
interesting  :yep:

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Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle?
« Reply #23 on: September 12, 2008, 09:08:45 PM »
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I kinda know what to do tho.. and I've written what my plan is in this chapter >< its veeeeery subtle.. ah, but that's not the only oddity

@__@ I'll never spot it.

WAIT! I FOUND IT!
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'Bad day for Mitsui-san maybe?' Linlin inquired;

Theory: Everyone is PMSing at the same time. At the end of the week they're going to have a giant gang bang XD

I highly doubt that that's the plan...but some of us can always hope, right? :twisted:

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Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle?
« Reply #24 on: September 12, 2008, 09:09:09 PM »
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@JFC: o.O" are you a teacher?!!?
You didn't know? :lol:



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If you are then my writing may really seem like crap to you..  :on blackhole:
Don't worry, it's pretty. Believe me, I've seen FAR worse. :roll:



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Was that... Kamei-san? Figuring it would better if they both showed up late at the same time Junjun yelled out Kamei-san's name, causing the other girl to abruptly stop and squint at her.

"Oh, Junjun, you're late too?"
Eri and Junjun both late. Not surpirsed. :D   



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When Junjun finally got to where Kamei-san was standing, they both resumed going in the direction they were headed except, now they were walking. Even though the back of her mind screamed at her and said 'the members are going to be mad!' Junjun ignored the thought, simply happy to actually spend some time with her senpai.
I really wanted to go "JUNJUN CHANCE!!!" at this part.
:mon sweat: 



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"Ahhh~ Leader is gonna yell at us good today...” At that point Junjun snuck her hand in and grabbed Kamei-san's hand, it brought immense warmth to Junjun's body and she felt a large grin making its way to her face.
Kamei-san made a slightly confused face as if asking 'Why so suddenly?' but didn't bother to remove her hand and instead began to swing their intertwined hands in stride to their walking.
:wriggly:



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"Okay, re~ady and go." Kamei-san opened the door, as expected, all eyes had turned to them, and more than one pair of eyes appeared irritated.

'Why is Mitsui-san angry?'

Indeed, the usual Mitsui-san, whom was all smiles, appeared just as - if not more - irked as Takahashi-san.
Uh-oh. Junjun doesn't have a clue about Aika, does she? :O



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"Michishige-san, do you know where Junjun is?" Linlin wandered around with her lunch, wanting to eat with her Chinese counterpart but could not see her and asked the first person she saw.
"Um... I think I saw her in the dance room with Ai-chan." Linlin nodded in thanks and went off to find a table to eat at. She was slightly depressed and lonely but she knew things like these can't be helped.
Awwwwwww.....:(



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No matter how close she got along with the other members she still liked to stick close to Junjun. Linlin thought of Junjun as a sister and no matter how weird she acted, she didn't get weird looks from Junjun.
Awwwwwwwww....:oops:



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Junjun however, appears to want to stay further away from her because she hated always being grouped together as the 'Chinese girls', Junjun just wanted to be a Morning Musume member. Linlin understood the older girl's feelings and obliged to them, but because of that though, she felt as if she was slowly losing Junjun to the others.
Awwwwwwww.....:cry:



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She tried to distract herself from melancholy thoughts and eavesdropped on what the others were talking about.
Ooooo...this could be interesting. :P



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This was all very confusing to Linlin as she turned to Niigaki-san and Kamei-san; they appeared normal at least.
Yeah, but this is GakiKame, so how normal can they get? XD



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Everyone, to the exception of those two, seemed very different today. And thinking about it logically, Linlin didn't really want to find out what was wrong, for the sake of avoiding trouble she was going to ignore it and let everyone figure out their own problems.
Yeah, probably better that way. If you avoid da shit, you won't get dirty when it hits the fan. :yep:



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"Hey Reina... We should go back; I think break was long over..." Sayu looked nervously around them and saw no one. This raised a few alarms in both their heads.
"What?! Ah, you're right; Gaki-san and Eri are already gone! Let's go!"
Whooops!  :rofl:



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   During practice Ai-chan would occasionally get in front of Risa. 'It's only practice but she still takes it so seriously...’ and what was more, a seriously dancing Ai-chan meant a lot of sexy movements. Risa's eyes would frequently drift down, mesmerized by the motion of the shorter girl's hips as they swayed to the beat of the music.
Oooooooooooooh yeah.  O0



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"Okay everyone, good work, and Junjun good job!" Everyone followed their leader's example and yelled just about the same thing; Risa yelled it the loudest while picking up her stuff and rushing out the door.
"Where is she going?" She heard somebody ask through the door.
"She's busy; she has to go do something." Kame had answered.
Oh? Risa planning something? :?



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Not really caring what room it was she slipped in and turned on the lights. It was a storage room, many things were cluttered everywhere that where she was standing was the only spot you could actually stand on.
'It's like Kame's room...'
:on lol:



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She turned the lights off and had the door opened a little bit, just enough for her to see through one eye, it creaked as she did so. She was waiting for the other members to go by, hopefully leaving one specific girl alone in the room. The doorknob of the practice room turned and the other members filed out. When she was sure they went outside of the building she came out of her hiding place and calmly walked up to the room everyone was just in.

Quietly, she turned the knob and let herself in, locking the door silently. The other girl was busy practicing still and did not notice her presence. She softly put her bags down and readied herself. Aside from the steps of the short girl, the room was silent; she breathed in slowly. The words that came out were sudden and startling, breaking the tranquility of the room.

"Ai-chan..."
* JFC gasps.

GO RISA!  :w00t:



EDIT2: I just realized...you said JFC's a teacher?! *had no idea*
Wanna know the REAL kicker? Not only am I a teacher, but I'm trained to be an ENGLISH TEACHER!!!

:wahaha:

JPH!P :heart:'s kuro808, Fushigidane, ChrNo, Jab & marimari. Always.

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Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle?
« Reply #25 on: September 13, 2008, 08:07:16 AM »
i love

TAGaki

but

i also love

GakiKame jejejeje :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1:




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Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle?
« Reply #26 on: September 13, 2008, 08:08:39 AM »
i love

TAGaki

but

i also love

GakiKame jejejeje :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1:




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Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle?
« Reply #27 on: September 13, 2008, 11:15:41 AM »
Oooo....just read all the chapters.....This story is so cute! 

hehe a love circle~ I like~  (I especially like it since it centers around my favourite turtle)...hmm...I wonder if there will be a kamei pov or are you saving that until the end?  I like to think that Eri's neutral in this...just cause that would be more fun =D  If I did find out who she liked in the circle then I'd have no choice but to support that pairing...XD 

so far I like the Reina and Sayu scene the most....I always like fics where the cat and bunny both fight for the turtle XD  It's just too cute!

anyways keep up the good work!  Can't wait for the next chapter~

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Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle?
« Reply #28 on: September 14, 2008, 02:36:51 PM »
I finally got a chance to read this and I'm glad I have :w00t: The title certainly caught my eye to start with just based on the "... circle?" part, I love how it's so flowing and questioning XD
You write well and I enjoy reading ur style very much... This feels like a serious, comedic parody with all the girls being in love with each other, it's great fun! Eri is so... Eri, incredibly clueless of what's going on around her, or is she? ;)

Being the crazy fangirl I am, I do love how so far it feels like you've gone more into the possibly TakaGaki pairing more so than the others and totally squealed at the end of the last chapter... Sooo glad Gaki is going for it, hopefully Ai doesn't close off as per usual and actually thinks with her heart not her head for once :heart:
As for the Eri pairings, ok so I'm a KameShige and TanaKame fan by heart but I really really love the chemistry between Eri and Jun of late and have being waiting for someone to write about them so i'm hoping it ends with those two, which is highly unlikely but pleeeeease~! :mon innocent:
For the rest of the possible pairings, I can't wait to see what happens with them as well :wub:

I understand them all falling for Eri though, she's my girl of the week I think so I'm fangirl mode over her atm... those lips~! :drool: :mon inluv:
Can't wait to read more of ur writing, great job and keep it up :D
Oh and I noticed the colours for the .... to show the narrators, I LOVE THAT LITTLE TOUCH!!! Niiiiice~!  :otomerika:

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Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle?
« Reply #29 on: September 18, 2008, 05:21:29 AM »
 :farofflook: Yay~ Finally a chapter! The thing is though.. no nevermind, I'll write about that later..
In any case, woot~ new people~ I mean, new commenters~

@WinterAir: lol um.. on that large thread in the fanfiction section done by maiha, I posted on it.. yea I'm DarkRai on there (that's my default online name tho XD) haha, I'm a total lurker on there, with one post at the moment!
@ShikyoxYaiba: that's true >< homework ends up somewhere on the bottom of my list of 'To do' things for some reason..  :bigdeal:
lol, are you sure you see it???? Well.. it'll show itself somewhere in a few chapters later..

@ringo-hime: lol sorry what?!? "orsm"?? what is that??
organism
orgy
orgasm?!?!
no wait.. there's no 'g' in there, lol sorry, that word made me laugh a bit >< thanks for reading tho!! XD

@kRisZ: Thank you  :yep:

@Blubber-Nugget: okay... you have no clue how hard that made me laugh. The first thing I saw when I came home and got on my comp was that comment, and it made me laugh out really loud, then my dad looked at me weirdly and said,
"The first thing you do when you get on your computer is laugh, what's wrong with you?"
T___T, lol but I loved you're theory though honestly..
maybe in another fic~  :roll:

@JFC: :: stares in shock ::
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Wanna know the REAL kicker? Not only am I a teacher, but I'm trained to be an ENGLISH TEACHER!!!
:on shady:
oh, and lol at your different uses of the word 'awwwwwww'

@ayase909: Haha, double post >< try not to click the post button more than once and thank you for reading, I guess I tried to fit in as many common pairings as possible in here so I'm happy that I attracted a few pairing lovers.

@Sukoshi: Ooh, you noticed that, good~ and thank you for reading!!!
oo, and since you brought it up.. [bgcolor=#090000]there's going to be a lot of Rokkie fighting soon so don't worry[/bgcolor]

@lollipopgirl: yay, the title actually caught interest!!
who knows.. Kame is just being Kame I suppose~  :P
haha, sorry but..
[bgcolor=#000000]there will always be something that will get in the way of TakaGaki love isn't there?[/bgcolor]
Yay!! you noticed!! I thought I should add that as a kind of a way of helping people know who the narrator is and also letting people know who is starting the next chapter
(also, it helps keep me on track too..)

I talked too much.. and it only made my post even longer than it already is, so without further ado~




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Chapter 5

   Four girls walked along the sidewalk heading to a cafe; the day was cold so they all huddled together. It was especially cold for them when they just sweated a lot from dance practice a few minutes before. "It's really cold today!" one tall girl exclaimed, the two girls walking in front of her simply nodded; they were too cold to reply.
"Mm, it really is cold." a fairly shorter girl walking along side her enthusiastically replied. She was happy that somebody actually did but her motive was to get the slightly short girl in front of her to talk.
Mitsui seemed like she wasn't paying any attention to the tall girl in the back. Koharu noticed that the short haired girl would occasionally talk with the tall banana eater beside her. Why was that? Koharu thought that she and Mitsui were good buddies.
"Koharu," shocked that Mitsui's attention was actually turned to her, she looked up in reply, "are we close to the place yet?"
"Um... yep really close, it's just over there." Koharu pointed, getting close to Mitsui and putting a hand between her and Junjun.
"Oh I see! Junjun, come, let's go!" ignoring the hand that was obstructing her view of the other girl, Mitsui linked arms with Junjun and they both dashed to the place Koharu had pointed at.
"What?! Ah, wait!! Linlin let's run!!"
"Huh? O-oh okay..." The remaining two chased after the two that ran off first.

   The bell connected to the door clanged loudly as the four girls entered the cafe, panting heavily. A waitress came up to them asking them to follow her to their seat after looking at them oddly. They all sat down on the leather seat, their jackets rubbing against each other and making a lot of noise, on top of that they were all slightly giggling probably from the adrenaline rush.
"Haha, I kinda want a strawberry sundae right now..." Mitsui said while taking her jacket off as everyone else looked through the menu.
Looking at the girl in disbelief, Koharu's voice gradually grew higher as she spoke, "In this weather?! Are you sure that's a good idea?"
"Aww that's so cute." It was a comment from Junjun; causing all heads to turn to her in shock. Koharu noticed then that Mitsui's face turned even redder from before.
'What exactly is so good about that tall banana loving panda?' Koharu thought bitterly. Linlin also seemed to notice the color of Mitsui's face as well and it was obvious that her mood went slightly worse than before.
"Big sis, what are you getting?" Linlin addressed to Junjun in chinese, the rest of the words were in Japanese though.

   The 'Miracle' girl wanted to thank Linlin for her jealousy and thought that now would be a good time to talk to Mitsui whilst Junjun was distracted.
"Mittsi, I heard that your photobook shoot was coming up, how do you feel about it?" Mitsui looked back at her with a shocked blank face like she didn't expect Koharu to know about it, it blew over fast however because she answered fairly quickly.
"I guess I'm pretty excited about it... but in this weather it's going to be cold isn't it?"
"Oh~ Mitsui-san, you're going to have a photobook shoot? I want to see~" as usual, the tall panda dragged her words when she spoke, and suddenly Mitsui looked really embarrassed about the whole thing now. The Mitsui problem was just getting bigger and bigger for Koharu.
"Ah... It isn't really all that special..." Mitsui then sneezed and Junjun was quick to grab her jacket and put it on her.
"I don't think it will be a good idea for you to get a sundae now." she joked. This caused Koharu to grow slightly more bitter towards Junjun than before, her hands still in the position of getting Mitsui's jacket when she had sneezed. The short girl's face seemed to glow in happiness as she smiled in thanks to Junjun.
"Are you guys ready to order yet?" came a voice; Koharu looked and saw an irritated Linlin. Everyone quickly looked at their menus again and started listing off foods. There were some disputes over what to get but the arguments turned out really funny sometimes.

"I want to get this." Linlin pointed at the menu showing the tall panda next to her. Koharu couldn't see because of their half-circle seating position; Linlin was on the opposite end from her.
"You always get that! Get something else; you'll get really fat if you continue eating that!" Junjun sighed when she saw the item that Linlin pointed at and showed it to Mitsui. Koharu didn't get to see but that didn't seem to bother her and she figured it was probably a dessert anyway.
"Big sis that is so mean and I won't get fat because we are always dancing!" Linlin countered.
"You shouldn't eat sweets all the time, it’s unhealthy!" Somehow, that sounded very odd to have come out of Junjun's mouth.
"Oh that looks good!" Mitsui said when she saw the food item, betraying Junjun and going on Linlin's side of the argument.
"It does, doesn't it?"
"Both of you sto~p!!!" Junjun yelled out, holding her arms out in a gesture to stop Mitsui and Linlin from continuing on with the conversation. The two shorter girls giggled in a way like they were expecting this sort of reaction from Junjun. Koharu was on the side watching the spectacle and laughing, to her seeing the 8th gen members' antics felt like watching a show.

   After what felt like forever, they finally came to a conclusion on what to get and called a waiter over. The waiter that came over had a face that resembled a clown and talked with an odd accent; they forced Mitsui to order for them as the other three tried their best to hold in their laughter. Junjun shook violently and snorted from laughter causing the nose of the waiter to flare in disgust, which in turn made the three laugh even harder. Even Mitsui's smile began to quiver from slight laughter.

When the waiter left to input their order Mitsui looked at the other three in a mock pout.
"You guys suck..." she said, initiating laughter from all three girls who couldn't hold it in anymore, Mitsui eventually couldn't help but laugh along with them. The day for them was fun, who knew 8th generation would be amusing to hang out with, lately to Koharu it seemed the 5th gen and Rokkies preferred to keep to themselves, not really allowing the 7th gen member in. So to Koharu, this was refreshing and fun, and plus they were all young (to the exception of Junjun, but she acted their age anyway).

Maybe if everyday was like this, menial ordeals such as relationships won't be such an issue anymore.
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The bunny and the cat stood outside, cold, but refusing to say anything about it. Another one of those awkward silences seemed to have once again come between to two. Sayumi felt like she had to break the silence as the chill was getting to her.
"Reina, you said you wanted to talk to me...?" she started off, hoping the other girl will get the idea and actually start talking.
"Hmm, right... We shouldn't talk here though."
"Where should we go?" the thought of what the very short girl had to say was something she was looking forward to now. If it's secret, then maybe Reina liked her too and was going to confess or something similar. She could think of other reasons, but this one seemed very possible.
"Then... how 'bout my place?" If Sayumi wasn't thinking of anything bad, she was now. Her porcelain like face flushed at the thought, and she mentally shook them away.
"Okay." they were about to head off into the direction of the wonky eyed girl's place but a sudden voice made them stop.

"Gu~ys!! Wait up!" the energetic turtle ran up to them panting slightly. "Wanna hang out?" was the only thing she said, Sayumi realized that the only reason the girl wanted to hang with them after so long was because Gaki-san was busy. The thought was fairly disappointing, 'Are we not nearly as important to you as Gaki-san is?' she thought with a bitter sigh. She wondered if Reina would actually allow the other girl to come along. They still had to talk, albeit she wasn't sure what, but she was sure it was important if it needed to be in private.
"Sure, we're going to my place." the short girl said, shocking Sayumi immensely. It wasn't like she didn't like Eririn anymore; it was because the girl would get in her way. But there wasn't anything she could do about it, and besides, it had been awhile since the three Rokkies actually go together and hung out.
"Yay~" Eri linked arms with both of them so she was in the middle, and dragged them along the path to Reina's. Sayumi couldn't tell if she was happy or annoyed. She was happy that she can now actually talk to Eri after so long, but the cause of this chance made her slightly angry. She was getting frustrated at how easily Gaki-san took their fellow Rokkie member away from them and wondered if Reina thought the same thing.
She glanced at her and noticed that she looked like she was contemplating something. Maybe she was regretting having invited Eri, or maybe she noticed the reason for Eririn's sudden friendliness as well. Reina seemed to notice her glace and looked back, she caught a smile from the younger girl and Sayumi couldn't help but think that she shouldn't think too much.

"Wa~h it's cold!" the girl in the middle of the three exclaimed as she grabbed the two at her sides even tighter. Warmth was coming up Sayumi's left arm, she was grateful for it but at the moment her body was going through a tornado like temperature. Her left arm was really hot, but her right arm was freezing, she was feeling envious of Eri at the moment. After what took most likely half an hour, they finally saw Reina's house. They went up the stairs clumsily since they clung to each for dear life, when they got to the top Reina fumbled slightly looking for her keys. It's always in these moments that give Sayumi a sinking feeling she didn't understand why. When the wonky eyed girl yelled out in triumph that she found her keys, Sayumi too felt relieved.

   When the door was open all three practically rushed inside; absolutely grateful for the warmth of the house.
"I'll go make tea." the short girl stated, leaving the bunny and turtle at the couch. They both nodded, taking a seat on the couch and grabbing the television remote. Eririn searched through the DVD's looking for movies.
"I'm back, awww aren't you the cutest~" startled the two taller girls looked at each other, the voice resembled Reina's but it was very unReina-like. The two looked in Reina's direction and found her baby talking her cats. When they walked close, Reina noticed them and stared at them, her wonky eyes wide open.
"How did you establish your Yankii character anyway?" the energetic girl said in disbelief, she was grinning at the scowl on Reina's face.
"Aww, I would be so happy if you said that to me~" Sayumi joked, and both of them started laughing, it was always amusing to hear Reina say something completely out of her character. They assumed only her cats actually saw their owner's true face. They passed the time playing with the many cats that the girl owned and waited for the tea. As Sayumi looked through the refrigerator Eri had a... scary idea.
"Hey, I can cook something for you guys!"
"No!"
"T-that's okay Eririn..." both of them replied fast, causing the other to pout cutely.
"Fine... Oh hey we can have hotpot!" Eri spotted the frozen meat and some vegetables that could be used as ingredients. They all quickly agreed that hotpot would be good, and neither of them can screw up the cooking part.

The Rokkies talked about random things, enjoying the time they had with each other. Talking like this and hanging out felt nostalgic to Sayumi. Has it really been that long for her to even use the word 'nostalgic'? She wanted to turn back the time, she really wanted to go back to when they first joined, it was frightening but it was fun when they first entered Morning Musume. At that time they would always stick together, now it was like they grew far apart, Reina always with Ai-chan and Eri always with Gaki-san. She hung out with Koharu-chan sometimes, but it was different, she didn't know what, but it felt different. She thought maybe it was the age difference (it isn't all that much different though), or their personalities were just too different. Suddenly Sayumi remembered that Reina had to speak with her, she supposed she could stay at the shorter girl's place until Eririn leaves.
When all three were full, all sighing in satisfaction Eri suddenly stated; "Reina, can I stay over? We don't have anything to do tomorrow anyways, unless, you have something to do...?"
The girl in question shook her head violently in reply, "No I'm not busy, you can stay." that threw Sayumi's plan of waiting for Eri to leave, she shrugged it off though, she and Reina could always talk later.
"Let's watch a movie!" She suggested, the other two nodded and got up to head for the couch. "Eririn did you find a--"
"This one!" Eri held up a DVD in front of their faces. Sayumi realized that Eri might have planned on staying at Reina's all this time since the first thing the turtle did when she came in was search through movies. It seemed to be a comedy movie; they sat down on the couch with Eririn in the middle (she wanted to be warm).

   After the movie Reina glanced at the clock and mentioned it was starting to get late. It was already 1 in the morning and they had a tiring day too. So Eri and Sayumi began to take out the futons and arranged the sleeping formations in Reina's room while the shortest of the three went and got toothbrushes for everyone. Sayumi flopped down on one of the futons, tired from moving things around; she already brushed her teeth and was just waiting for the other two. She looked around the room, there wasn't really anything since Reina quickly cleaned everything up. She got up and went to the wonky eyed girl’s closet, sure enough when she opened it there was a section filled with purple clothing. But ever since Sayumi and Eri found out about Reina's purple wardrobe problem, they brought her out shopping. And so the purple-ness was slowly being overcrowded by other clothing, thank god. Eririn came out of the bathroom first, she used her whole body and laid on the floor motionless, taking two futons; her face was in one of the blankets and her hair splayed out in different directions. Sayumi couldn't help but think that her Eririn had not changed at all, what with her red and white checkered pajamas and all.
"Eririn~" she laughed as she rolled the girl on her side, "You can't sleep like this, you'll catch a cold." The reply she got was muffled but it seemed her words were heard since the turtle got up and into her futon.
"Good night Sayumin~" the girl said cutely; her eyes were already closed and her voice slowly lost its energy.
"Good night Eririn." Sayumi tucked the other girl in and patted her head, she felt like a mother, but it might be because Eri acted like such a child.
Reina came into the room and looked at Eri. "She asleep?" she asked in a whisper. Sayumi simply nodded and the short girl went to her own futon. Reina looked like she was about to sit down but she got up again, her face with an 'I got it!' expression.
"Sayu, I need to talk to you, let's go downstairs." this was it, the thing Sayumi couldn't wrap her head around or think of a possible thing. What were they going to talk about?

   Downstairs in the living room the two girls talked in hushed whispers as they made their way to the couch. But a word had not passed between them ever since they sat down. Sayumi understood that Reina was gathering her thoughts and all, but she still wanted the other girl to think faster. The ominous darkness that covered the other rooms frightened Sayumi a bit and she needed a bit of talking to bring her mind away from her surroundings.
"Um... Sayu..." here it was.
"Yes?"
"Do you... like Eri?" honestly, there was a limit to how straight to the point a person can be, but Reina seemed to just burst right through that limit.
Not really sure how to answer, or even sure if she heard right she asked, "Uh... What do you mean by like?"
Reina then gave an annoyed and irritated grunt, she didn't like using the word 'love'; Sayumi has never really heard her associate that word with a person before, so she knew Reina was uncomfortable, even still, Sayumi still wanted to make sure she understood the question correctly.
"Ugh... I don't mean a friend type of like or anything..." she trailed off and thought for a moment, "A girlfriend, a girlfriend!" she suddenly exclaimed, but then brought her voice back down when she noticed how loud she was. "Yeah, that kind of like."
It seems Sayumi finally understood the question, but she couldn't figure out why Reina would ask. Was it possible Reina was making sure that she didn't like Eri because Reina liked Sayumi? The chance of that was getting possible by the second, and she decided to lie, if she lied, there would be no penalties she figured.
"No, not that kind of like."
"That's good to know." Reina gave a relieved face, almost as if a large amount of pressure suddenly fell off her shoulders. Sayumi was now really expecting Reina to like her, if that was the case, she wouldn't mind, she wouldn't have to choose between her and Eri. Besides, it might actually be a good idea, her and Reina together that is. They could be the parents; Reina as the dad and Sayumi as the mom with Eri as their child, almost like the family-like relationship the 4th gen seemed to have. She started to daydream (or is it night dream?) about the scenario and Sayumi liked the thought very much. However, she was brought back from her thoughts by Reina's words.
The short girl still had something to say, and Sayumi couldn't wait to hear it, so she turned her whole attention to the other girl, letting her know that she was listening intently. Reina took a breath but she didn't seem nearly as nervous as she was before.

"Actually Sayu I..."
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It's so lame quoting something from my own fic but I really do love this line
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"You guys suck..."
>< it sounds like something I would say though.. I think I based Mitsui too much off of me o.O"

Haha... only two point of views this time, and Michishige's Point of view is NOT finished!
If I had continued on I would have ended up with a suuuper long post >< (damn bunny and her giant wall of... thought(?)!!)
While writing I kept on asking myself, "Whoa.. It's already pretty long.. Shouldn't I end it somewhere??"

Ah but, if you know the theme colors of Morning Musume, you can probably guess who the next narrator is, and.. I hope I can please people with it...
I was going to have Takahashi's POV in here but.. I'm sorry... It was already really long so...
Really sorry for ending at another cliff hanger, I didn't mean to seriously.. T_T
I was actually planning on resolving one cliff hanger and ending with another but.... sorry...
I'll update soon okay?? ><

I.. am having troubles with the next chapter tho, since just writing it makes me hot and bothered >___>
...
Oh my, am I giving away too much?? Well I guess I'll end it here then
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Thanks to everyone that reads this though, this is my first fic, so reading comments and seeing people actually reading what I write gives me courage to keep it up.

I think.. the next chapter may come soon, I still have a lot of things to do, but... I'm having fun reading over what I write, since I write in the middle of the night my mind is a total blank (it's easier to switch POV's like that..) so when I read it the next day I can't help but wonder 'what will happen next??' ><
lol I'm such a freak like that I guess..
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Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle?
« Reply #30 on: September 18, 2008, 05:44:24 AM »
Wai~ I just finished reading it. Oh my, Eri's causing lots more trouble. And now the Rokkie triangle (minus Miki) is about to begin. Then there's the Love-Turtle-Bean problem, too. o-o

Take your time with the next chapter - it's never good to rush, I had to take a ton of time to update my own thread. xD School really does get in the way.

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« Reply #31 on: September 18, 2008, 07:27:18 AM »
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oh, and lol at your different uses of the word 'awwwwwww'
For some reason, at the time, it just seemed the thing to do. :lol:


1st part -
Linlin was so cute calling Junjun "big sis". :oops:


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"You guys suck..." she said,
:mon lmao:



2nd part -
* JFC gasps
Oh boy, preparing for raburabu complications! :o

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Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle?
« Reply #32 on: September 18, 2008, 07:42:40 AM »
ah~ a cliffhanger... tho I think I know whats gonna happen in that scene lol. But I'm really excited for the next narrator's point of view ^^ really wanna get into more of what she actually thinks.

haha... now it's me that got distracted from h.w/study by this fic... >.< 2 exams tomorrow... but I'm still reading your story, cuz its so awesome that I would risk my grades for it lol

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« Reply #33 on: September 18, 2008, 01:35:01 PM »
Ohh i love the *th and 7th gen bonding~ feel sorry for Koha

oHH and very cute Rokkie bonding~ ahihi...

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Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 6 - Nov 12]
« Reply #34 on: November 13, 2008, 06:41:17 AM »
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My dear god it has been awhile...
I don't really understand why I stopped... maybe because I was so intimidated by all the better writers around me XD
Ah well... too bad for you guys, I'm continuing!! ><
AND I'VE GOT A LONG @$$ CHAP TO BOOT


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Chapter 6

   Hearing the voice of the Sub-leader startled her immensely; one of those low pitched yells seemed to have slipped out. The other girl walked up to her, an odd look was in her eyes. "Gaki-san, why are you here...?" the intense look the taller girl gave her was causing her voice to shake. Also she found herself unconsciously walking backwards as Risa continued walking towards her. "I... thought you were busy?" something in the back of her mind declared that there was something wrong and she wasn't sure whether to run or not.

"I lied."
Before she knew it, her back hit the wall. Risa had her arms up on either side of her, locking Ai between the wall and the taller girl. The plan to run away quickly flew out the window. Ai looked up into those intense eyes and felt herself drawn to them. "Gaki-san..." she breathed out, causing the other girl to look away and stiffen slightly. When she looked back, the intense lust filled eyes were replaced with hunger, as if Ai looked like a piece of meat to Risa. Then Risa went for the kill, going right in and pushing her lips upon Ai's. Risa's left hand made its way under her shirt and rubbed her back whereas the other hand traveled to her stomach, stroking the sensitive skin.
The short girl's mind could not react, did not know how to react, but her body seemed to know pretty well what to do. A moan erupted from her throat and she felt the other girl quickly take advantage of that and slipped her tongue in. A battle for dominance started and Ai was surprisingly losing. After minutes of heated battle they broke apart gasping for air. Another moan came from the back of Ai's throat when she felt the other girl's tongue on her neck. Risa trailed kisses down her neck to her collarbone, causing the skin to burn with each touch.

"Risa..." Without even realizing, Ai was saying the other girl's name; both of them had stiffened at it. Ai looked at the younger girl and saw that she looked back, her eyes filled with what seemed like happiness.
"So... this is what it took for us to get closer?" Risa said laughing, making her blush at the comment.
"I'm sorry for pushing you away like that." Ai lowered her head in apology. Risa just shook her head, putting her hand under the other girl's chin, lifting her head and making their eyes meet.
"I love you." Risa merely stated, her eyes betrayed the strong emotion she held and Ai understood just how much she was loved. She felt her eyes burn and she quickly blinked back the tears that were threatening to come. The taller of the two seemed to notice and pulled Ai into a hug.
"I forgive you for everything because I love you. Ai-chan, let's start over again, but this time we're going to be together." Ai was a sucker for one of those cheesy lines and Risa knew it. Her voice was caught in her throat and she was too speechless to reply, instead, a vigorous nod and more tears were given.
"Silly girl, you still cry at the slightest things don't you?"

   After half an hour of calming words and warming cuddles, Ai felt happiness spread throughout her body. They began to talk after a few kisses and confessions later; it was something long overdue ever since Ai became leader. An hour passed since that make-out session Ai realized after awhile, and she was the one that stopped it too. "Risa," they both agreed that they would be on first name basis when they were alone but they would act normally in front of everyone, "do you want to continue from before?"
Risa gave her one of those exaggerated blank expressions she was so famous for; her eyebrows furrowed in confusion and her head twitched forward abruptly, a soft "Eh?" could be heard. Oh how Ai missed Risa for her lovable reactions, the girl was absolutely adorable when she was confused. Obviously Risa would be confused though, Ai never explained her train of thought, and she suddenly asked a question that had played out perfectly fine in her head.

Realizing her mistake in not explaining, Ai grabbed the back of the other girl's neck, pulling her into a sweet kiss. She broke off quickly though, making the younger girl yearn for more.
"Ai-chan, that was so cruel of you!" Risa flailed her arms to show just how cruel that little move was. The shorter girl grinned in reply, she got the reaction she wanted and was obviously satisfied with her sudden gain in power.

"Want to head over to my place?" She asked slyly.
 At first Risa didn't seem to get it and answered like she normally would, "Yeah sure okay..." but then it finally seemed to process in her head and her eyes widened at the thought.”Oh! Wait... that..." the younger girl blushed furiously, her personality completely different from before.
Maybe their relationship will be just like this, fun and exciting; emotion was in it as much as desire was, that was always a good sign of a long relationship; and of course, Ai wanted to see that sexy side of Risa once more.
They both got up and carried their bags; Risa reached out her hand and grabbed the other girl's. Ai looked up at the girl beside her, she smiled, one that reached her eyes and really sparkled, she was happy after so long.
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"I like Eri... in that way..."

No words could describe just how shocked the cute bunny was; she had not expected such an answer. What she could not understand was why it had to be confirmed that Sayumi didn't love their lovable turtle as well.
"Why are you telling me this?"
Any sort of pleasantries were completely forgotten under the bitterness Sayumi was feeling at the moment. To her it felt like Reina just claimed herself cuter than Sayumi, which was how horrible the situation was.
"I wanted to make sure you didn't like Eri as well, I want to keep everything between us okay you know?"
Well, maybe she shouldn't be that mad, Reina did consider her feelings after all, and it was her own stupid fault for declining she liked Eririn. 'Wait...' there was something disturbing making its way into her mind.

If
Reina and Eri got together, what would happen to her? Before when Eri hung out with Gaki-san, she at least had Reina with her, now what? She didn't want to be alone, she didn't want both her loves gone; she was going to end up as the third wheel!
"Sayu you okay? You look a little pale..."
"I'm perfectly fine, you're just seeing me in a bad light; it is very dim here. Hey shouldn't we head back to sleep? I'm exhausted."
"Ah, you're right, sorry about that."
They both stood up and made their way upstairs, trying their best not to make the steps creak in case Eri woke up.
"'night" Reina whispered, and they both headed to their individual futons.

   For Sayumi it was the worst night in her life, she just could not sleep no matter how many times she forced her eyes closed. They just seemed to open at the slightest sound in her surroundings and the dark was beginning to scare her. What was more; the words from her and Reina's talk repeated itself in her mind.
A sound of movement could be heard from the futon beside her. Her eyes shot open and she saw a figure try desperately to be quiet and head out the door. Sayumi in turn sat up and stared at the digital clock on the desk next to Reina. It was 6:30, that girl was always late half an hour but can always seem to get up early in the morning; so obviously she never overslept, what in the world does Eririn do to keep herself distracted for 30 minutes?

Sayumi pushed all thoughts to the side and got up, not even bothering to be careful since Reina always slept like a log. She left the quiet room and headed downstairs; she heard the refrigerator (or was it refrigeeta in Eri's case?)door being opened. She saw half of the turtle's body from the living room and decided to tease Eri a bit. Quietly, she snuck behind Eririn, waiting for the other girl to finish looking through the fridge.
"There doesn't seem to be anything to eat..." The energetic girl closed the fridge door and turned around.
"Boo!" Eririn screamed loudly, or, almost screamed loudly because Sayumi quickly covered her mouth, muffling the startled girl.
"Sayu~" Eri whined after Sayumi removed her hands, that girl was just too adorable sometimes that it was hard not to tease her. She smiled at the girl; her medium length hair all ruffled and showing no sign of being combed. Eririn was like that, extremely cute without having to try, it just made one want to cuddle her. Sayumi ripped her eyes away from the other girl whom was bringing her shirt up a little too high while she was trying to scratch her back.

"Hungry?" Sayumi asked, she wasn't entirely hungry herself but she wanted to cook for the turtle, plus anything was better than having the other girl cook herself. Eri nodded, yawning a bit and then sitting on the dining chair, waiting for the narcissistic bunny to cook. Sayumi couldn't help but look in disbelief, all she asked was whether or not the other girl was hungry or not and Eri immediately assumed she was cooking. She couldn't tell if Eri was too spoiled or knew Sayumi too well. Well it didn't matter since she was going to cook anyway.

   Sayumi tried some eggs, giving Eri a sunny side up; even though she didn't have much confidence in them, her cooking skills were pretty good. She brought the plate and put it on the table in front of the hungrily waiting girl and then went off to sit in the seat opposite from Eri. She watched in amusement as Eri wolfed down her breakfast, it was a good idea to use more than one egg it would seem. She leaned her head against her palm as her elbow was set against the table top. She... loved Eri right? She did, but was it more than Reina? She was still upset over how Reina indirectly rejected her. Even if the wonky-eyed girl didn't mean it, it still hurt. Eri was for her after all it would appear.

"Sayu~" Sayumi was brought back from her train of thought and the first thing she noticed was how messy the other girl's face was.
"Geez, Eririn~" She grabbed a tissue and began to wipe the pieces of egg from the now pouting face.
"Sayu I can do that myself you know..." Despite what the girl said she stayed still and allowed the food to be wiped off. Sayumi noticed worry in Eri's eyes, it was for a split second but Sayumi recognized it immediately.
"Eri what's wrong?" The other girl was startled for a moment before she replied.
"I should be asking you that. Sayu, you don't look so good, you okay?" The bunny didn't answer for a long time, instead she gestured the girl to sit on her lap. Eri obliged of course, there was no reason for her not to. Sayumi wrapped her arms around the turtle's waist, her head falling on the other girls back, and she deeply sighed.
"What if..." She started, but trailed off soon after. Her words clung onto the air, creating a silence between the two.

"Sayu... We're friends right? Just tell me, I wanna help." Maybe it was because they were friends that Sayumi didn't really want to say her words, but if she didn't Reina will instead and she wouldn't like that.
"Eri I like you, go out with me?" With the thought of Reina she decided to go with the direct approach, the "What if" theory completely unsaid, it is all left to outright rejection or acceptation now.
Eri seemed to take a long time to think, and with Sayumi's arms around the girl she realized that Eri had not moved since. Sayumi's worst fears were starting to show, she did not want rejection, but she much less wanted Eri to be freaked out. She didn't want their friendship to end because of this so she never said anything, but with Reina threatening to take Eri away she couldn't help but act quickly.

"Look Eririn I'm sorry, forget I ever---"
"How long?" The girl in her arms spun around and stared right into her eyes. Sayumi merely looked back in confusion, how long what?
"How long have you liked me?" Eri repeated, making herself clearer as obviously Sayumi had not understood the first time. The bunny took a moment to think, shifting her eyes to the kitchen, looking at it but not exactly. Then she looked back at Eri, a large grin on her face.
"Oh I've fallen for you many times, but the first time was during our training camp, second time might have been our first photo shoot, it was the first time I thought somebody was as cute as me, third time was--" The girl on her lap leaned down and kissed her on the cheek, both stopping Sayumi from talking and causing her to blush to a deep crimson.

"Eririn?"
"Well, I've never thought over things such as love since I have never exactly experienced it..."
"If you did I would be a little surprised and angry." Sayumi added, earning her a smile from Eri as she continued.
"But... I guess we can try and see if this will work." It took a moment for the adorable (now beautiful) girl's words to sink in and make sense in Sayumi's mind. She felt her eyes bulge out when she finally understood what Eririn meant.
"Really?! Th-that means we're--"
"One question," worry began to make its way into Sayumi's mind yet again when she heard this, she just wanted some sort of indication or Eri's way of saying that they were now together, she needed some sort of assurance, and a question might make things worse, "which one of us is going to be the dominant one in this relationship?" The girl practically loomed over Sayumi with a sexy smirk on her face as she asked the question. Any sort of worry instantly flew out the window as the black haired girl heard this.
"Why Eririn, of course it will be me~" Sayumi threw her devilish smirk back at Eri, causing the other girl to pout for a second then realized something and grinned again.
"I guess I'll just have to prove you wrong."
"What--??" Eri bent down to reach for the lips of the girl under her, Sayumi recognized the motion and tilted her head up.

"Ahem..."
The action was almost completed until they were interrupted by a short but rather frighteningly angry girl standing halfway between them and the stairs. They both froze, looking at Reina with a shock from being caught so early into their relationship. Their positioning wasn't exactly going to convince Reina otherwise either; Eri was on Sayumi's lap, her now girlfriend's legs half wrapped around her waist and Eri's arms fully wrapped around her neck. Sayumi didn't look all that much better, her arms rested on Eri's thighs and wrapped around the other girl's waist, almost resting on Eri's butt.
"Sorry did I interrupt something?" Reina looked positively furious, if it wasn't for the years they have known the glitter loving girl, they would have not realized just what level of anger this was. The short girl's eyebrows were simply furrowed together but it wasn't the outer appearance that caused Sayumi great fear. It was what looked like a giant lion erupting from behind Reina, and she felt that the girl would soon start baring teeth if Eri stayed frozen.

"Eririn... I think we should tell her...." She whispered to the girl on her lap.
"Nnn..." Eri nodded, slowly removing herself from Sayumi and Sayumi had to refrain from pulling the other girl back after missing Eri's body warmth. She stood up alongside Eri as they both looked at Reina.
"Reina--"
"You two together or what?" That was so very much like Reina, she never did like slow explanations; she was always straight to the point. Reina had cut off Eri before she could say anything and looked directly at Sayumi as she said it. Sayumi could tell the hint of betrayal in her eyes and she couldn't help but look away, feelings of guilt washing over her.

"We just became a couple; sorry you had to find out like this." Eri apologized; Sayumi was pretty sure that wasn't the main root of Reina's anger, nevertheless, she watched the tough girl's expression soften under the gaze of Eri, making Sayumi feel even more worse than before.
Was this such a wise choice? She asked herself, replaying other scenarios in her head to come up with a better outcome. Then again, everything already happened, there was no going back on it, and Sayumi certainly was not going to suddenly claim that everything was a joke to make people feel better.

There was a long, awkward pause, all parties unsure what to say and afraid to break the silence before them.
"Listen, I have to go somewhere, sorry to kick you guys out so suddenly, but my mom asked me to help her shop for some food." Reina said all this with a smile and an apologetic voice but Sayumi knew she really was just kicking them out. She didn't blame her though, and getting kicked out was better for all of them she believed.
"I understand, don't worry about it, let's go Eririn." She began to head for the door, but noticed that Eri still stood there looking at Reina with an expression Sayumi couldn't tell what it was. Reina had her head turned to the side but her wonky eyes were half on Eri. An odd, inexplicable atmosphere surrounded the two.

"Eri?" That seemed to catch the girl's attention, as Eri looked at Sayumi and smiled.
"Coming~" Eri ran up and latched her arm around Sayumi's, and the two headed out of Reina's place. When they had gone past the stairs and were standing on the sidewalk they both stopped.
"What should we do now?" Sayumi asked, thinking of something for the two of them to do.
"Let's go on our first date then!" Sayumi stared at the other girl, was she serious? Either way though, that still didn't really answer what they should do, but Eri suggesting it was rather surprising.
"Never thought you would ask." the pink loving girl replied, a wide grin on her face and a new spring in her step.

Sayumi finally got Eririn.
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 :sweat:
I had to re-read some parts of my story again to remember all the little details and plots I had planned out...
Well... I tried to remember them, don't think it worked so well though...
Hmm... when I read through the previous chapters I just wanted to scrap it, but screw that!
If I try to rewrite anything I'll just lose the motivation to write XD
So Imma just gonna... go right through with what I had originally planned  :cool1:

I realized lately at all the KameShige pairings floating about the fanfic sections... what is with that?  :lol:
Now... how do you change the title thing for threads?? o.O" :: randomly presses buttons ::
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Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 6 - Nov 12]
« Reply #35 on: November 13, 2008, 08:27:38 AM »
Blah. You just distracted me from my Chemistry FRQs for quite a good amount of time. T__T

...But that's okay. AN UPDATE, AN UPDATE!! *dances around happily* And oh dang. Sayu turned around and now poor Reina... TT__TT But...I wonder how this will turn out for Eri. I mean, she says she'll try it out with Sayu, so a lot of things can happen from there on... (And now I feel bad for Junjun, who's left out of this whole Rokkie mess. I mean, she likes Eri, too...right? Too much love for the turtle... But that makes the conflict!~) Next chapter starts with Gaki-san...

Good luck on staying updated. <3

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Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 6 - Nov 12]
« Reply #36 on: November 13, 2008, 03:02:18 PM »
...Shige-san, that was a bad, bad move.

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"I understand, don't worry about it, let's go Eririn." She began to head for the door, but noticed that Eri still stood there looking at Reina with an expression Sayumi couldn't tell what it was. Reina had her head turned to the side but her wonky eyes were half on Eri. An odd, inexplicable atmosphere surrounded the two.
hm...suspicious
We still don't know what's on Kame's mind do we... Was there one in Kame's POV yet? Will there be one?  :P

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Sayumi finally got Eririn.
Somehow the first thing that popped to my mind when I saw this was...Pokemon :lol:
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Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 6 - Nov 12]
« Reply #37 on: November 13, 2008, 04:58:07 PM »
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Sayumi finally got Eririn.
Somehow the first thing that popped to my mind when I saw this was...Pokemon :lol:

LOL Actually yea... made me think of pokemon too.. but there's a significant reason for her words...
I think....
but yea, happy to see people commenting ^^;

lol Shikyo! do your Chem!
and @meowz: so you do lurk... you just don't update your own fic  :(

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Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 6 - Nov 12]
« Reply #38 on: November 13, 2008, 09:25:23 PM »
Poor Reina :fainted:

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Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 6 - Nov 12]
« Reply #39 on: November 13, 2008, 09:43:16 PM »
Chapter 6
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"Gaki-san, why are you here...?" the intense look the taller girl gave her was causing her voice to shake. Also she found herself unconsciously walking backwards as Risa continued walking towards her.

"I lied."
Before she knew it, her back hit the wall. Risa had her arms up on either side of her, locking Ai between the wall and the taller girl. The plan to run away quickly flew out the window. Ai looked up into those intense eyes and felt herself drawn to them.
Woooooo! :twisted:



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*RISA MAKES HER MOVE*
YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH RISA!!! :muffin:



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"I'm sorry for pushing you away like that." Ai lowered her head in apology. Risa just shook her head, putting her hand under the other girl's chin, lifting her head and making their eyes meet.
"I love you." Risa merely stated, her eyes betrayed the strong emotion she held and Ai understood just how much she was loved. She felt her eyes burn and she quickly blinked back the tears that were threatening to come. The taller of the two seemed to notice and pulled Ai into a hug.
"I forgive you for everything because I love you. Ai-chan, let's start over again, but this time we're going to be together." Ai was a sucker for one of those cheesy lines and Risa knew it. Her voice was caught in her throat and she was too speechless to reply, instead, a vigorous nod and more tears were given.
"Silly girl, you still cry at the slightest things don't you?"
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!
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An hour passed since that make-out session Ai realized after awhile, and she was the one that stopped it too. "Risa," they both agreed that they would be on first name basis when they were alone but they would act normally in front of everyone, "do you want to continue from before?"
Risa gave her one of those exaggerated blank expressions she was so famous for; her eyebrows furrowed in confusion and her head twitched forward abruptly, a soft "Eh?" could be heard.
Oh HELLZ yeah!!! :cow:

JUST SAY "YES" RISA! :yep:



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"Want to head over to my place?" She asked slyly.
 At first Risa didn't seem to get it and answered like she normally would, "Yeah sure okay..." but then it finally seemed to process in her head and her eyes widened at the thought.”Oh! Wait... that..." the younger girl blushed furiously, her personality completely different from before.
Daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayum! :hump:



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*SAYU FINDS OUT REINA RABURABU'S ERI*
Sayu = :cry:



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It was 6:30, that girl was always late half an hour but can always seem to get up early in the morning; so obviously she never overslept, what in the world does Eririn do to keep herself distracted for 30 minutes?
MUST...RESIST URGE TO.........MAKE...PERVVY......COMMENT.  :-X



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*KAMESHIGE IN KITCHEN*
Awwwwww...:oops:



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"Sayu~" Sayumi was brought back from her train of thought and the first thing she noticed was how messy the other girl's face was.
"Geez, Eririn~" She grabbed a tissue and began to wipe the pieces of egg from the now pouting face.
Man, someone needs to tell Eri that being so cute can be lethal.   :roll:



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*SAYU CONFESSES TO ERI*
:hip aww:
Dang, it would be so awkward if Reina were to come in right now.



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"Ahem..."
The action was almost completed until they were interrupted by a short but rather frighteningly angry girl standing halfway between them and the stairs.
Oh shit.
:scared:

I so called it.



Poor Reina. 
:hip cry:

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