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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 1/27)
« Reply #180 on: February 14, 2009, 12:02:19 AM »

CHAPTER 26


So Miki got over got over the slap in the face and the rejection from Aya eventually, like Eri said and she wasn’t glaring at me either. Thank god for that! Things were getting a little too nerving around us. I still have to find a way to get Miki and Aya together though, but that can wait a little, because it’s the beginning of a new month and I want to start it off with something a little more fun and easy. I’ll think of something though. September is over and October has started. The months seem to fly by fast this year. I just hope it’ll be a good year until New Years has started. But what I’m really focused on is what we’re going to do for Halloween. There’s no way they can forget about it! There are so many stores that are already celebrating October by selling decorations, costumes, and candy everywhere. Seeing the stores decorated in orange and black and with all those goods made me think how it will be spent. I wonder if anyone has something in mind for this month? Will we dress up? Have a party? Or just have some movie night with everyone? Or maybe we won’t do anything and it will be a regular day. I’ll have to ask. I would like to dress up this year. It’ll be fun. We still have plenty of time to figure things out though. It’s only the first of October anyway. And I’ll meet up with everyone today to go out shopping. I’m not worried. I just hope we don’t do karaoke again! If they take me there after shopping I’m going to refuse to sing with Ai drunk again! My phone goes off and I fish it out of my pocket to answer. It’s Ai ready to pick me up as expected. I hurry out my room to my uncle.

“Uncle, I’m leaving now!” I shout as I pass him in the living room

“Alright, I left you money on the table. Try not to come home too late.” He warns

I answer my cell and tell Ai I’m on my way outside then I grab the money on the table and go back to the living room to give my uncle a hug and a kiss goodbye. I go out the door and to the main exit of my apartment. Everyone is inside the car waiting for me. I open the door and realize I’ll have to sit on Eri’ slap again. It isn’t so bad but I don’t like being crushed in a tiny car with a bunch of people. Three’s nothing I can do though, so I carefully get inside, settle on Eri’s lap, and close the door. I lean back into Eri. It’s really comfortable sitting here.

“You really need a bigger car Ai.” I complain

If I wasn’t sitting on Eri I would have been a little more annoyed. Ai looks at me through the mirror. She smiles and laughs seeing how packed it is in the back.

“Sorry, this will have to do.” She replies

That’s easy for her to say! I’d like to see her sit back here for hours! She faces back to the front and pulls the car out. Now we’re finally on the road to the mall. Eri securely puts her arms around my waist and rests her head on my back. I relax when she leans against me then smile. She’s just so cute.

“Ahh, senpai not here!” I hear Koharu wail

I turn around and when I do, I really wished I didn’t! Sayu is nuzzling and kissing Koharu’s neck all over. I mean come on! That’s not the only thing though, she also has her hand somewhere I really don’t want to think about or see! They might just be as bad as Ai and Risa at Ai’s birthday party. I’m not sure. Koharu lightly pushes Sayu away. She’s bright red. They’re worse than Eri and I when it comes to public affection. Sayu puts a hand on Koharu’s face to get her to look at her and kisses her before she could oblige again. They’re kissing pretty heavily now. What the hell is this?! Making out time? They are aware that we can see them right? I clear my throat, but they’re too busy to hear me. I clear my throat louder and cough a little, but still nothing. Ok, enough of this.

“Will you two cut it out and wait for later!” I scream

Koharu pulls away blushing and apologizes, on the other hand, Sayu looks like she wants to kill me for interrupting them. She turns away and stares in front of her. It’s a good thing they stopped, because I don’t want to see or hear them on the whole ride to the mall. It would be too weird! They better not do that during the whole ride back either!

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Being at the mall was really fun. We bought a bunch of clothes and took pictures together in the photo booths. I did manage to get a picture of just Eri and I in it too. I’m keeping those pictures and putting them somewhere once I get home. I had a great time. When we were done eating we went home. I was tired from all the walking and carrying all these bags. I bough a bunch of bangles and some new shirts, but with the rest of my money I bought something nice for Eri. Or something I think she will find nice, I hope. It’s a surprise for her she doesn’t have any clue that I got her something. I’ll have to be sure to give it to her before I leave, but Ai dropped Sayu and Koharu off first. That means I didn’t have to worry about them making out on the whole ride home! I’m grateful for that. So I had some time to give her the gift myself and I didn’t have to sit on Eri’s lap either. I didn’t feel so crushed. There was plenty of space in the back. Not that sitting on Eri’s lap isn’t bad, it’s really comfortable I just would like to sit normal for once since the back isn’t so crowded. Since I was next to be dropped off I thought it was best to give Eri my gift now. I went into my bag searching through the clothes. Where is it?! I hope I didn’t lose it! I would freak!

“Ah, I found it!” I announce

That thing was giving me a hard time. I smile relieved. So I didn’t lose it, thank god!

“Found what?”

I turn to Eri and show her what I’m holding. She takes the small black velvet box from my hands. She looks it over then gives me a questioning look.

“It’s for you. Open it.” I encourage

Her face lights up with joy and quickly she lifts the lid. She looks even happier when she looks inside. I’m guessing she likes it.

“It’s an ankle bracelet. I have one too just like that. Do you like it?” I question, unsure

“I love it. Thank you!”

She goes and tackles me down to the back seat and hugs me. She holds me tight and I hug her back. Score for Reina! Why did I just talk in third person? Whatever. Eri digs the bracelet, the end.

“You’re so kind and sweet.” She coos

“Hey don’t let Risa and Ai hear you.” I whisper

“Too late.” Ai laughs

I lift up my head and glare at her. The car erupts with laughter. Now they’ll start picking on me. I glare at them.

“Don’t worry Reina. Your secret is safe with me.” Risa promises

I smile at her and lay back down to the car seat with Eri still on top of me holding me. I feel the car slow down and I brace myself, as it gets ready to stop. I almost fall off when it stops, but I catch myself and grab on to Eri so she won’t fall.

“This is your stop Reina. And don’t start making out back there!” Ai teases

I roll my eyes and sigh. I turn my attention back to Eri. I don’t really want to leave her. She looks up at me with the same expression. I smile lovingly at her. Her eyes are bright with joy and it makes me feel happy too, knowing I’m the cause of that glow in her eyes; that spring in her step. Thinking like that doesn’t make me want to leave even more. She gets off of me and sits up. I get up from my laying position too and look at her. I’ll have to call her before bed tonight. It’ll make me feel better. I lean in and give her a brief kiss. She blushes.

“I’ll see you tomorrow?” I ask   

She nods. Her cheeks are a faint color of pink. She’s too cute. I give her one more kiss and open the door.

“I’ll call you.” I tell her before closing the door.

She waves at me through the window and I watch her drive away from me into the street. I miss her already. I sigh and go inside. I really love her. She already has a special place in my heart and I don’t ever want that to go away.

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 2/13)
« Reply #181 on: February 14, 2009, 05:08:13 AM »
AAAWWWW... :wub: Eri and Reina have matching ankle bracelets..

I'm thinking next chapter we're getting heavy Koha/Sayu or TanaKame lovin' here! :)

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 1/27)
« Reply #182 on: February 14, 2009, 08:02:14 AM »

CHAPTER 26


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So Miki got over got over the slap in the face and the rejection from Aya eventually, like Eri said and she wasn’t glaring at me either. Thank god for that! Things were getting a little too nerving around us
That's good and all, but what about Aya? Is she still freaked out about it? Did Reina try and explain things to her or at least tell her that it was her and Yossi's idea (i.e. NOT Miki's) to do that? :?



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I still have to find a way to get Miki and Aya together though

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But what I’m really focused on is what we’re going to do for Halloween. There’s no way they can forget about it!
I can already hear the gears working in Reina's head. :P



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Everyone is inside the car waiting for me. I open the door and realize I’ll have to sit on Eri’ slap again. It isn’t so bad but I don’t like being crushed in a tiny car with a bunch of people. Three’s nothing I can do though, so I carefully get inside, settle on Eri’s lap, and close the door. I lean back into Eri. It’s really comfortable sitting here.

“You really need a bigger car Ai.” I complain

If I wasn’t sitting on Eri I would have been a little more annoyed. Ai looks at me through the mirror. She smiles and laughs seeing how packed it is in the back.

“Sorry, this will have to do.” She replies
Oh c'mon, everyone knows Reina doesn't really "mind". :D

Aichan's just lucky that she hasn't yet gotten busted by cops for cramming too many people into a car.



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“Ahh, senpai not here!” I hear Koharu wail
Date Sayu, this is part of the deal, kid. XD



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I bought something nice for Eri. Or something I think she will find nice, I hope. It’s a surprise for her she doesn’t have any clue that I got her something.
Awwwwwwwwwww! :wub:



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I turn to Eri and show her what I’m holding. She takes the small black velvet box from my hands. She looks it over then gives me a questioning look.

“It’s for you. Open it.” I encourage

Her face lights up with joy and quickly she lifts the lid. She looks even happier when she looks inside. I’m guessing she likes it.

“It’s an ankle bracelet. I have one too just like that. Do you like it?” I question, unsure

“I love it. Thank you!”

She goes and tackles me down to the back seat and hugs me. She holds me tight and I hug her back. Score for Reina!
Are we talking about the "making Eri happy" part or the "being tackled by Eri in the backseat of a car" part?  :twothumbs



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“You’re so kind and sweet.” She coos

“Hey don’t let Risa and Ai hear you.” I whisper

“Too late.” Ai laughs

I lift up my head and glare at her. The car erupts with laughter. Now they’ll start picking on me. I glare at them.
Eri = :wriggly:
Reina = :mon psst:
Aichan = :bingo:
Reina = :grr:
TakaGakiKame = :wahaha:
Reina = :grr:



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“I’ll call you.” I tell her before closing the door.

She waves at me through the window and I watch her drive away from me into the street. I miss her already. I sigh and go inside. I really love her. She already has a special place in my heart and I don’t ever want that to go away.
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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 2/13)
« Reply #183 on: February 14, 2009, 02:31:19 PM »
sweet

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 2/13)
« Reply #184 on: February 14, 2009, 03:19:19 PM »
thanks I'm glad you liked it. The next chapter though I'm having a hard time on what to write, but I hope that will be over soon. And I can get something good rather than short updates.

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 2/13)
« Reply #185 on: February 14, 2009, 06:59:30 PM »
Aww, the TanaKame is so cute! :wub: Such a gentle relationship. (Unlike Sayu. *cough*) xD

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 2/13)
« Reply #186 on: February 14, 2009, 10:00:44 PM »
Sayu's a god  8) making out inside the car is a classic xDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

L o v e  <3~  Tanakame relationship =3 I can feel Reina wanna more  :oops: :inlove:

I really wanna know what are you preparing for Halloween =D

Thanks for this chap =)


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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 2/13)
« Reply #187 on: February 16, 2009, 03:04:58 AM »

CHAPTER 27



“Welcome home, I just made dinner. You have perfect timing.” My uncle greets to me

He has a pan in his hand ready to serve himself. I look at him strangely. Is he wearing an apron? He notices where I’m looking and he looks down to himself then back at me. I place a hand over my mouth to hide my snickering.

“This is a very messy dish.” He says

I chuckle. “I’m sure it is.” I mumble

He frowns and looks down to the apron again. “What’s wrong with it?”

“No nothing, nothing at all. It’s fine. Please, don’t mind me. I think the pink apron with little hearts looks fine on you.” I hold in another laugh

“This is the only apron I have. My ex fiancé use to cook a lot at the time, ok?”

It looks like his face is starting to turn pink from blushing. I think this is my pay back from him walking in on Eri and I making out and embarrassing me. I wish I had a camera.

“Do you want to eat or not?” He ask annoyed

“No thanks, I already ate before I left the mall.”

“It’s fine. Just come talk with me a little will you? I feel that you don’t have time to talk with me anymore since you’re around Eri so much.”

I feel a little bad that I made him feel rejected or lonely. I agree with him and head towards my room and place my bags on my bed to remind me to put my clothes away for later when I come back. I did plan on calling Eri as soon as I stepped in, but a little waiting won’t hurt. I could talk with my uncle and catch up with him. I walk back out my room and into the kitchen. He’s already at the table with his plate. I notice he doesn’t have his apron on anymore. Maybe I embarrassed him too much? I take a seat across from him and look at him.

“How is school going?” He asks through a mouthful of rice

“It’s going well. I haven’t gotten into any trouble. I’m getting good grades too. Report cards should be out soon.”

“I’m glad. I would like to see your report card once you get it and don’t try to hide it from me, ok?”

He knows me too well. I would normally hide my report card from my parents and I was going to do the same with him in case I did slip up on some of my classes, but it seems if I do that he’ll find out. And I don’t want to get into even bigger trouble from hiding my grades. I might as well come clean with him. He seems to want things between us that way too.

“Yes.” I agree

He smiles. “Thank you.” He goes quiet and takes a few more scoops from his meal

He must be some human lie detector and that’s really scary. It makes me wonder how he really was back when he was younger. I’m glad he’s changed. If he was still into making trouble I would be scared of him. It seems with age and over the years he’s mellowed out. I think he uses his lie detection skills on me all the time though and that’s kind of nerving. I guess old habits die-hard.

“How are things with Eri and you?”

I sit up surprise; I didn’t think he would ask anything like that. Is he worried we might be doing something wrong? It’s not like I can get pregnant from her the last time I checked. That’s impossible in many ways. I raise a brow up at him putting my guard up.

“We’re doing fine. Why do you ask?” I cross my arms over my chest

Has he changed his mind and won’t let us date? If he does that I’ll be so pissed at him. I would leave this house right now!

“No reason, I’m just curious. You seem to like her a lot and she’s a sweet girl.” He answers coolly

“Are you saying I might hurt her in some way?”

He gives a small chuckle, “No, it’s not that. I just want to know if things are running smoothly with you two. Relationships aren’t always smooth sailing you know?”

I put my arms down and try to listen to the advice he’s giving me. I have to stop being so defensive all the time and damn hardheaded. He’s only trying to help.

“I just want you to know, if anything happens between the both of you. You can come to me for help.” He adds in calmly

A faint smile forms on my face and I feel myself relax. So he didn’t change his mind. I worried over nothing. He looks at me then smiles.

“Thanks.”

He goes back to finishing his meal so I sit there at the table in since with nothing to do. Yuka walks over to me and starts rubbing my leg, purring. I pick her up into my lap and scratch the back of her head. She closes her eyes and purrs again.

“Your mother called today while you were out.”

That makes my body run cold. Did I just hear right? My mom called me? I stare at my uncle in shock. He pushes his plate away and folds his hands together on top of the table. His face is serious, so I didn’t hear wrong.

“W-what did she wants?” I croak

“She wanted to see how you were doing. She misses you a lot. I don’t know why she called out of the blue like that though.”

“What did you tell her?”

He sighs. “I told her you weren’t here. She told me she would like it if you called her back when you get the chance.”

My body feels heavy as lead. What do I do? Do I call her back or do I just ignore it? I stop petting Yuka and look to the table. Why would she decide to call me now? She could have done it the day I arrived at my uncle’s place, but she didn’t. Why should she care now? And what do I tell her if I do choose to call her?

“You don’t have to call her right away Reina. You can speak with her when you are ready.” My uncle interrupts
I nod. “Did she tell you why she wanted to talk with me?”

“She didn’t say anything other then ask to how you were doing.”

I sit up and lean over the table. “Is she going to take me back to Fukuoka?!”

My body starts to shake. My parents can’t do that! Not after I’ve gotten so use to it here. I can’t leave my friends behind and more importantly I can’t leave Eri!

“I honestly don’t know, but that’s why I said you can call your mother back when you’re ready. Don’t try and lose sleep over this.”

“Yeah, ok. Thank you uncle.” I sigh to try and calm down. I put Yuka down on the floor and get up. “I’ll be in my room if you don’t mind.”

“Go right ahead.”

I hurry out the kitchen to towards my room. I empty my bags and hang up the shirts inside my closet then put the bangles in my dresser. My mind is racing. I would like to call my mom, but if she called me to say I’m going back home I don’t want to hear that right now. But then again, if I don’t call soon my mom would get sad or worry about me. I’m stuck. I go on my bed and lay there staring into the ceiling. What should I do? Maybe the right thing to do is to wait. That way I can be ready for any bad news that might come my way. I think I should do that. Sure my mom might feel sad about it, but I would be much more sad than her if she tells me the thing I don’t want to hear the most. I’m done thinking about this. I pull out my cell and flip it open. My fingers automatically dial down Eri’s number and I place it to my ear to hear it ring a few times. She’ll help me keep my mind off this. It rings a few more times and then she picks it up.

“Hello?”

“Hey.” I reply; her voice is already making things better.

“I was wondering when you would call. I was getting impatient.” She laughs

“Sorry about that. My uncle wanted to talk to me for a while.”

“About what?”

“Well he just asked about school and uh…about us.”

“He did? He’s ok with it right?” She sounds worried

“Yeah it’s fine. He just wanted to see if we were doing fine and he gave me advice on…relationships I think.” I scratch my head

Eri laughs. “You have a cool and really nice uncle. I wish I had a uncle like that.”

I put my left hand under my head and sigh. “He has to be the greatest uncle I know.” I pause for a little not knowing what to say next. “What are you doing?”

“Well…I was watching TV until you called. Now I’m sitting on my bed talking to you.”

“You’re bored too?” I chuckle

“I miss you.” She wails

I feel my stomach flutter at those words. I have this huge smile on my face now.

“I miss you too.”  I admit “I’ll pick you up tomorrow I promise.”

“I wish it were tomorrow already.” She whines

I laugh. “You’re too cute, but don’t worry. You can wait just a little longer. I want to take you somewhere nice tomorrow.”

“Really?! Where?” she yells excited

“You’ll have until tomorrow.” I remind her

She sighs. “But can’t you just give me a little hint?”

I think she has this huge pout on when she says that and I would kiss her if she were right here rather than on the phone.

“Nope, you’ll have to wait.” I have on this little smirk

“Alright fine.” She agrees

Then I hear talking on her side of the line, but I can’t figure out who’s talking to her or what they’re saying. Eri says a couple of yes’s and other replies here and there through the whole thing. What’s going on? Who is that? I wait until she’s done talking with them.

“Reina,” she sounds sad

“Yeah?”

“I have to go now. I’ll see you tomorrow ok?”

What’s going on? What happen? What’s wrong?

“Ok.” I agree

She says her goodbye and then hangs up. Is it her mom? I should be there for her! But I would never make it over there in time and it’s already getting pretty late. There’s no way my uncle would let me go out this late. I close my phone and put it on the nightstand next to me. I hope things with Eri are ok. I roll over to my side and go under the covers. I might as well go to sleep. I have nothing else to do.

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 2/15)
« Reply #188 on: February 16, 2009, 05:13:24 AM »
CHAPTER 27

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“Welcome home, I just made dinner. You have perfect timing.” My uncle greets to me

He has a pan in his hand ready to serve himself. I look at him strangely. Is he wearing an apron? He notices where I’m looking and he looks down to himself then back at me. I place a hand over my mouth to hide my snickering.

“This is a very messy dish.” He says
Cooking can be a messy endeavour. Wearing an apron (especially considering how long Reina's been staying with him already) shouldn't be that big of a surprise.

Now, if the apron he's wearing happens to looking like it's something pink and/or frilly...then that's another story. :P



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“No nothing, nothing at all. It’s fine. Please, don’t mind me. I think the pink apron with little hearts looks fine on you.” I hold in another laugh

“This is the only apron I have. My ex fiancé use to cook a lot at the time, ok?”
HEARTS!?!?! XD



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*REINA CATCHES UP WITH UNCLE*
Something tells me this isn't necessarily something that Reina would regularly do with her parents. It's nice that she feels comfortable/close enough to him to be able to be open to her uncle like this. :)



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“How are things with Eri and you?”

I sit up surprise; I didn’t think he would ask anything like that. Is he worried we might be doing something wrong? It’s not like I can get pregnant from her the last time I checked. That’s impossible in many ways.
Doesn't mean they couldn't try. :twisted:



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I put my arms down and try to listen to the advice he’s giving me. I have to stop being so defensive all the time and damn hardheaded. He’s only trying to help.

“I just want you to know, if anything happens between the both of you. You can come to me for help.” He adds in calmly
Awwwwwwwwwww...:oops:



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“Your mother called today while you were out.”

That makes my body run cold. Did I just hear right? My mom called me? I stare at my uncle in shock. He pushes his plate away and folds his hands together on top of the table. His face is serious, so I didn’t hear wrong.

“W-what did she wants?” I croak

“She wanted to see how you were doing. She misses you a lot. I don’t know why she called out of the blue like that though.”

“What did you tell her?”

He sighs. “I told her you weren’t here. She told me she would like it if you called her back when you get the chance.”
It really shouldn't surprise Reina that much. Even with all the arguing that they did before Reina moved in with her uncle, they're still family. It's not like her parents totally hated her or anything like that; she's still their little girl. Whatever the circumstances, it's hard for a parent when their child moves away.



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I sit up and lean over the table. “Is she going to take me back to Fukuoka?!”

My body starts to shake. My parents can’t do that! Not after I’ve gotten so use to it here. I can’t leave my friends behind and more importantly I can’t leave Eri!
It honestly wouldn't surprise me if this was one of the worries that Reina's parents had. It might not have necessarily been about whether or not her uncle could "handle" her, but if, after having a taste of big-city life, if she'd want to just stay there and never return home.

Then again, all they were likely thinking about when they made this decision was Reina's school performance and anger issues. They might have never even fathomed that she'd actually LIKE her new school, make friends, or fall in raburabu.



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Eri laughs. “You have a cool and really nice uncle. I wish I had a uncle like that.”

I put my left hand under my head and sigh. “He has to be the greatest uncle I know.”
Isn't he the only uncle she knows? :P



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*TANAKAMEI "MISSING YOU" PHONE CONVO*
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!
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I laugh. “You’re too cute, but don’t worry. You can wait just a little longer. I want to take you somewhere nice tomorrow.”

“Really?! Where?” she yells excited

“You’ll have until tomorrow.” I remind her

She sighs. “But can’t you just give me a little hint?”

I think she has this huge pout on when she says that and I would kiss her if she were right here rather than on the phone.

“Nope, you’ll have to wait.” I have on this little smirk

“Alright fine.” She agree
Damn, now I want to know what Reina's got planned for their date.  8)

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 2/15)
« Reply #189 on: February 16, 2009, 06:50:24 PM »
AWWWWWWWW

This is really sweet >////<

But I wonder who was the one Eri talk with o_o????

This could complicated the relationship -.-

I wanna know how it would be the Halloween Party xD




PS: rayos mi Ingles apesta xD espero que puedan entenderlo xD
« Last Edit: February 17, 2009, 04:02:43 AM by Haruka »


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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 2/15)
« Reply #190 on: February 17, 2009, 12:15:45 PM »
I'm really liking the SayuKoha relationship. It's adorable seeing Koharu blush and act all squirmy whenever Sayu makes her move :D I just hope to see more TakaGaki action. And as always, the TanaKamei is sweet :heart:

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 2/15)
« Reply #191 on: February 17, 2009, 02:50:32 PM »
the uncle's super cool and the phone convo's sweet

*waits for the next chapter*

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 2/15)
« Reply #192 on: February 18, 2009, 03:04:24 AM »
Yeah o_O I want an uncle super Cool too xDDDDDDDDDD

I'm hungry x_x

Wanna know what's happend from now on =D


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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 2/15)
« Reply #193 on: February 18, 2009, 01:07:51 PM »
 :lol: Tanakacchi's uncle is awesome XD But I'm pretty sure a lot of people have told you that already right?
lol but... an apron all pink with hearts?? ><
I would have died from laughter seeing that

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“It’s fine. Just come talk with me a little will you? I feel that you don’t have time to talk with me anymore since you’re around Eri so much.”
Aww... That's true, there was like one tiny mention of him in the last chapter >_>

But Oh No o__O; Tanakacchi's parents calling??
if they start going along the lines of "We were wrong, come back and live with us again" I might strangle somebody
I mean, that's completely ridiculous, telling a kid to go off into some unknown school all of a sudden,
then leaving her alone for so long without contact, there's no way they would they know how well she's doing right?
But they should at least consider the fact that she just might like the new home she's living in at the moment
and to sudden call out of the blue and take her back is absolutely unreasonable!
(bottom line of this argument is: Don't make Tanakacchi go back ><)
Aaaah~ :luvluv2: I love TanaKame~~
And they are so cute together XD
I bet even though they can't see each other, they can both easily imagine what kind of expressions they are making as they talk :P

Eh..?? Eri... What happened?? Omg Tanakacchi! Don't just sleep! Run to Eri! There must be something wrong ><
I knew last chap was just too good to be true.. since it was all fluff
and now you're gonna introduce the conflict aren't you?? Damn.. I was hoping the fluff would last a little longer..
Kinda want the next chapter yet.. kinda reluctant at the same time >___>

Well I hope nothing too bad happens tomorrow ^^; We've still got Tanakacchi's present to look forward to haha
This fic better not end badly though XD That's all I ask for :lol:

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 2/15)
« Reply #194 on: February 18, 2009, 03:31:57 PM »
lol the story is nowhere near an end anyway so don't worry much about how the ending will be. This has to be my longest fic so far too! lol The next chapter you'll see what Reina has in store once I'm done writing the thing! I'm working on both a chapter for this fic and another one-shot at the same time. lol Yes Eri and Reina are cute as ever of course because that's how I picture it all in my head. lol

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 2/15)
« Reply #195 on: February 18, 2009, 04:32:48 PM »
I don't want it ended xD

Question? o_O when they have 1 moth? xD

Must be a celebration xD just like here... a lot of motives for another date =3

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 2/15)
« Reply #196 on: February 19, 2009, 12:24:39 AM »
I made fan art for this story, finally! lol I hope it at least looks like Eri and Reina just a little! Lol




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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 2/15)
« Reply #197 on: February 19, 2009, 01:10:39 AM »
Those are cute Pigs  :shy1:


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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 2/15)
« Reply #198 on: February 19, 2009, 08:32:01 PM »
Yay update very good chapters
Chapter 24 the attempt to make the coffee of the morning was very funny
Reina trying to distract Eri, almost it obtained, not that I wanted to read the scene of this distraction but the not quiz author dirty minds being read this
Sayu and Koha together are good of if hearing. In the end misunderstanding  :mon squee:

Chapter 25 Reina and Yossie, they are sworn of death for Miki  :mon lol:

Chapter 26 SayuKoha making out in the car is hot  :mon star: they had forgotten that had more people in the car  :mon nyah:
Sayu must be wery irritated with Reina for having upset your moment with Koha, but she has that to understand she was in the wrong place to make this type of thing  :mon determined:
ankle bracelet couple? of this aptitude she obtains to conquer Eri one more time  :mon inluv:

Chapter 27 It is good for knowing that the iuncle of Reina it interests for her, must very be hurt to have a sudden contact with a person who you love very but literally she banished from house, but Reina has that to think about the positive side of this situation because if was not for your family to have done this it would not have known Eri and your new friends

Great fanart  :mon squee:

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 2/15)
« Reply #199 on: February 19, 2009, 11:10:20 PM »
I'm glad you all like the fan art. I made some more.

This is when Reina had to sing with drunk Ai. I like how Ai's drunk singing face came out haha.
The people in the bottom from left to right are: Risa, Sayu, and Koharu.


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