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Destiny/Fate BEING REWRITTEN
« on: December 28, 2008, 02:21:01 AM »
A/N; This would be my second fanfic here. My first died quickly because I ran out of ideas and the first couple of chapters were forced, meaning I couldn't continue at all. Prepare yourself for a VAMPIRE fic. It's also not your conventional vampire fic so suspend lots of disbelief and ask me about anything if I don't make it clear enough.
I can't promise you that I'll finish this but I've got enough ideas and motivation to hopefully get quite far.

started: 27/12/08
updated: 10/03/09
ended:
Officially restarted as The Red Heart
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Eri never walked alone at night. What possessed her to do so that day no-one would ever really know. It was cold, drizzling slightly and a thick mist hung low in every direction - it also happened to be the longest night of the whole year. All in all, hardly the perfect day to go gallavanting about the streets.

A breeze ran through the narrow alleyway that Eri was forced to take if she wanted to get home on time. On reflex more than actually feeling cold, she pulled her coat around herself to counter the strong shiver making its way up and down her spine. Eri hoisted the hood attached over her head to keep the rain off and, trying to lighten her mood slightly, pulled her silver iPod out of her pocket.

The attempt proved feeble as the second the earphones were in and the device switched on, she lost interest completely and had wound the cable around the iPod and put it back in her pocket. She hoped to have more luck with her cell phone.

'Maybe I could text someone.' She thought dully, remembering that she had actually never used the texting capabilities before and was highly unlikely to being now.

The light from the screen lit Eri's face in the darkness as she turned another corner. With no texts and no-one to text she let her attention drift onto a cheap pre-installed game. It wasn't particularly fun, but it was distracting in its own way.

A minute or so into level two she felt the back of her neck prickle. Almost as if...

'Someone's watching me'

Eri shook herself and began to berate the part of her mind that had chosen then, of all moments, to reveal its paranoid side when a noise came from her right and a hand grabbed her wrist and twisted it behind her back before pressing her face into the nearest wall.

"Give me your phone, iPod and purse," A voice, distinctly male, demanded of her. "or I'll break your arm."

A short gurgle of surprise made its way out of Eri's throat as she tried to think of what to do.

"You'll have to let go first." she said with a remarkable clarity that hadn't possessed her the second before. The almost-mugger was thrown off course for a second, he should be the one making demands and this little girl should be a sobbing, frightened mess by now. "Let go."

Something in Eri's voice scared her assailant. He dropped her arm as if it was burning wood and stepped back as she turned around with a glare and resolve fixed firmly on her face, and a dull orange glow in her eyes. Eri could feel her teeth sharpen on her tounge and took a second to revel in the feeling before she leaped at the now terrified mugger.

Swinging a low blow into his abdomen Eri could feel her heart race in genuine excitement. Cell phone and iPods were all well and good, but this was true entertainment.

"And it's not like he doesn't deserve it." she thought out loud, canines glinting in a non-existant light. The poor excuse for a criminal couldn't have answered if he wanted to as he was feeling the wrath of two broken ribs and a quickly forming black eye. After another swipe of Eri's steel fists he was thoroughly unconcious and her new found fun was well and truly over.

Eri shrugged to herself as she picked up her iPod which had fallen out of her pocket. Her eyes flashed a final time before returning to their original colour and her teeth gently shrinking back to normal.

"It might be worth going home now."

She left the potential hospital patient face down in the alley and concentrated on getting home again, her heart still racing in her chest and a slight skip in her step.

Stepping quietly out of the shadow of a nearby wall a figure began to trace the girl it was now so familiar with. It stepped over the unfortunate man and had to jog slightly to get her back in its sights but when it did all it did was follow like it had for the last two months.

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Eri hated school.

Honestly she only went for her mother in exchange for kick-boxing lessons. She didn't have any friends, nor had she really tried to make any, nor did it bother her. They wouldn't understand her peculiar habits anyway and she'd never felt like explaining herself.

It was a dull Tuesday approximately a week after the incident in the alley and Eri had been bored ever since. The initial high had been good but that just made the moment it faded even worse. Her teacher droned on in front of her but any interest Eri had had in staying awake in lessons that day had died the second she sat down.

Nothing was diverting anymore.

"Kamei-san?"

With a low sigh Eri turned to the girl next to her and replied in a matching whisper.

"What is it Yuki?"

"Sh-shouldn't you be, uh... making notes?"

"I don't see why I should. I'm never gonna look at them again." The other girl bit her lip and turned back to her own pages of writing, but now she regarded them dubiously... almost as if she'd see the light.

Eri rested her head on her hands and idly bit a fingernail, simultaneously boring and amusing herself. She did this so often her nails were a complete mess. Luckily something happened to break the monotony of that Tuesday.

A knock came at the door and behind it stood a girl. A new girl.

"I'm so sorry I'm late." The new girl called politely into the room. "I do hope I'm not disturbing."

"Not at all Takahashi-san. Why don't you introduce yourself to your new classmates?"

'Takahashi-san' nodded and Eri watched her, intrigued by how happy she seemed to be to be in school.

"Well," she began as she stood at the front of the room two hands clasped lightly in front of her, her bag slung over her shoulder. "My name is Takahashi Ai. I've just moved to this part of town and I expect you'll all take very good care of me."

Well, she was interesting until she said that. Eri boredly watched her sit down and flip open a notebook, expecting to see her diligently begin to take notes she was thrown for a loop when Ai's expression changed into a far less amiable look and stared straight at her. Eri's eyes widened in response and she felt a powerful urge to look away from the new girl. Instead she fought it away and kept the eye contact, resolutely deciding that she wouldn't be intimidated. Ai stared a few seconds longer before she smiled a wide happy, confusingly genuine, smile and looked back down at her book.

Eri decided at that second that she would steer clear of Takahashi Ai.
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Re: Destiny/Fate
« Reply #1 on: December 28, 2008, 02:46:33 AM »
aieri :wub:
lookin forward for e next update..XD

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Re: Destiny/Fate [Eri-focused, Vampire fic]
« Reply #2 on: December 28, 2008, 08:36:55 PM »
A/N: This is the longest chapter of anything I've EVER written and I'm pretty damn proud of it. I've been working on it all day, on two different computers thanks to the invent of the memory stick. Anyway, expect more Ai, a new character, some more mystery and a little bit more vampirism.

Hope you enjoy it,
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Takahashi Ai was the strangest creature Eri had ever come across. She always seemed happy and sunny, friendly and hard-working even in study periods - where almost everybody just slacked off, only ever doing enough work to make the teacher think they were studying. Ai was the perfect student, until no-one was looking and she fixed Eri with the firmest stare she'd ever seen in her life. One which rivalled a furious mother's.

For all Eri's determination not to be, she was scared of the new girl. Ai's gaze seemed to smoulder at her and Eri was worried that she could be bipolar. At least when it came to her.

They hadn't spoken at all, even when they had to do group work for a project no words were exchanged between them and it confused her. For all Takahashi Ai's disturbing focus on her there was the barest minimum of interaction, but Eri hadn't tried to pursue it. She wasn't used to being afraid.

School was less dull now, but Eri still hated it. A surprise quiz did nothing to enthuse her - or anyone else for that matter. Apparently twenty-five minutes was and appropriate time within which she could finish the four pages of multiple choice in front of her, so she did what she always did. Guessed - with out even looking at the question. She'd probably end up with lines reading 'What is the capital of England?' - 'Jerusalem' but it wouldn't be the first time.

About half way through Eri started feeling very... odd. Her fingers were tingling and her eyes were burning, she could feel hot tears starting to well into her eyes and roll down her cheeks. And then her teeth started to ache in a familiar way, elongating without her wanting them to. It hurt... a lot. Eri held her hands against her face trying to hide her wet cheeks. She couldn't feel her feet and the tingling in her hands was spreading down her arms.

She couldn't stand it. Eri stood up in the middle of the quiz and ran blindly as fast as she could out of the room.

There was no-one in the hallways luckily, otherwise Eri would have been forced to take them out, and she wouldn't have stopped herself. Not even by telling herself that they didn't deserve a punch in the face - the pain was unbearable and it annoyed her that she was the only one feeling it.

"Eri stop!"

'No'

"Eri stop now! You don't know where you're going!"

Whoever was yelling at her was also running behind her. And was very fast.

"Eri," The voice was right in her ear then. Familiarity slammed into her and she stopped in shock. "finally! Sit down."

She obeyed Ai without question and dropped against a wall, amazed at how she was still within school walls - considering how fast she was running. Eri looked up into Ai's sweatless but very stern face.

"I didn't know you could run so fast."

"Nor I you." Ai replied simply as she sat next to the still tearing girl and held out a tissue. "Here."

Eri took it quickly and held it against her eyes. Miraculously the burning stopped, feeling returned to her limbs and her teeth shrunk back to normal. She could feel a headache coming on.

'What the hell was that?'

"That," began Ai. "was a power surge, and quite a nasty one at that."

"How did you..? You know what never mind." Eri half-grumbled the last part of her sentence after looking at Ai. She didn't want her to think that she couldn't handle anything herself but she'd already made a fool out of herself by sprinting out of the room.

'So much for standing my ground'

"Look Eri, I can't explain most of this to you here, but you need to know all of it before... well before we can help you."

"What are you talking about? And who's 'we'?"

Ai sighed a placed a hand on the other girl's shoulder. She leaned into her ear and whispered the words Eri had hoped she'd never have to hear for as long as she lived.

"You're a vampire."

Out of shock, Eri pushed Ai away with semi-supernatural strength and stood up intent on running far away from this frightening girl who could read minds and knew too much about her.

"I am too," Said the aforementioned girl, still on the floor. "but I'm not reckless like you. I know my strength and I know when to stop myself from, say, nearly killing a man for trying to rob me."

Eri shook her head, willing what was now a migraine away. "How do you know about that? About me? About everything?"

Ai stood up and fixed her with that firm gaze that Eri had become so accustomed to by now. She couldn't help but keep the other girl's gaze, trying to match the look with one of her own. Ai smirked briefly and tapped Eri on the shoulder twice.

"You're stubborn and I'm not sure if that's a good thing yet. We'll see. I don't know everything, only what I need to and don't worry the only reason I found out about the mugger is because I was there."

"You were following me." Said Eri, a statement not a question. It was a reasonable conclusion, but that didn't mean Eri wasn't angry about it.

"No!" Exclaimed Ai firmly. "I was doing no such thing, I just happened to be there."

"I'm not sure why, but I believe you."

"Eri, I need to talk to you about this. You have powers which you sort of know how to control but a few minutes ago I could feel it, you let it slip, you could have hurt anyone and anything. The surge-"

"Explain that first," Demanded Eri softly. "What's a 'surge'?"

"I can't... not here. Just feel safe in the knowledge that you felt it and so did I. You're not crazy Eri, you're just losing some control, it's nothing we can't help you with."

"If you can't tell me everything now when will you?"

Ai pulled out her cell phone and indicated that Eri do the same. "I'll text you with a time and place tonight. There's people you need to meet and things that need to be discussed." Once both numbers were keyed in and labelled, Ai nodded at Eri and gave her a warm smile.

"You may not trust me, but I can answer your questions. I'll contact you later right now I suggest you go home, you have a headache don't you?" Eri nodded and didn't question how the girl knew that. "Get some rest. I have to go back to class, if I tell them that you'd been complaining of a headache and stomach ache for a few days they'll likely believe me."

"I did just run out didn't I?"

"Don't worry, the teacher likes me, and I think she's scared of you. It'll be fine."

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At home Eri looked back over what could possibly be the weirdest day of her life. Even weirder than the day her teeth first appeared and she bit her tounge in shock. Ai knew, she was a vampire too and she offered to tell her everything she wanted to know. Slowly but surely, the more she though about it, the more she realised that there was an authority about Ai and she wanted to respect that. But she couldn't yet, she didn't know her or trust her - but that would come in time.

Eri convinced her mother that she should spend most of the day in bed - rather than indulge some strange cure that she was convinced would rid Eri of all her ills - and she waited for Ai's text for hours. When it finally came she was disappointed.

'Eri,' It read.
'Things came up, we'll have to meet in a few days.
I won't be in school, if anyone asks tell them it's a family emergency.
I'll contact you later.
Ai'


'What happened?' Eri wondered before she texted back an affirmative message with a low heart. 'Ai, you're not making any sense.'

A few minutes of disappointed boredom later and Eri decided that she wanted to go out. There would be no way her mom would let her out of the front door so she had to be creative... and use the window. She'd done this a million times before and somehow had never been caught, but Eri never questioned her own luck just in case it ran out.

She didn't feel restless enough to run anywhere so instead she just wondered around a bit and looked for a good place to sit and think. Which ended up being a bit of curb beneath a streetlamp only a street or so away from her home. Eri didn't like being too far away from somewhere safe when it was dark.

The floor was cold but Eri couldn't have cared less as she breathed in the cool night air. The headache had eased off hours ago and she hadn't experienced anything else like after... what had Ai called it?... the 'surge'. She still didn't understand that.

'What exactly is a surge?' She asked herself pulling her legs into her chest and tapping her fingernails on her arms. 'And why did it affect me so much?'

"Whatever it was," she continued out loud. "it hurt like hell."

"It was supposed to."

Eri looked around the ring of light cast by the streetlamp but she couldn't see anything or anyone.

"Who's there? I can't see you!"

Nothing moved into the light and Eri wondered for a moment if Ai was wrong, and that she was going crazy. It definitely seemed like she was hearing voices. It wasn't long until her fears of her sanity were put to rest when a moment later a foot was put into the light. It was clad in a long white sock and a shiny shoe. The owner - a girl - moved completely into the light shortly afterwards, but her eyes were shadowed and she towered above the seated Eri.

"It was supposed to hurt." The girl said as she leaned down to meet Eri's eyes. "That was the whole point."

Eri stood quickly. "What are you talking about? How could-"

"The surge," the girl clarified. "was sent by my leader to flush out a few latent, clumsy vampires who made a couple of mistakes. She wasn't happy with them. It acts as a lure and a beacon at the same time."

Eri looked at her blankly.

"Oh, don't worry. I know I'm practically talking to a brick wall. No-one's told you any of this, have they?"

"Ai was goi-"

"You mean Takahashi Ai? She got to you already?" The girl cursed and stood up. "And here I was thinking that... ugh, nevermind. Don't listen to her Eri, she's just going to twist you to her pretty little happy way of thinking and then it'll be curtains for you and everyone else."

"How do you know my name?"

"You- Eh? Are you not listening to anything I'm saying? Look I'll make it simple for you, join Takahashi's side and there's a very high chance you'll die young. Does that help?"

Eri's head spun. What the hell was this strange young girl gabbling on about? Ai? Death?

'Today has been the most confusing day of my life!'

"Oh, for God's sake. Who are you?" Eri demanded of the odd girl in front of her. She jumped surprised at how harsh it had come out sounding.

"A vampire, like you. A Night Vampire, unlike you. And I chose my side when I was ten, completely unlike you, because you have absolutely no idea what's going on."

"I mean, what's your name?"

"Oh. Well, next time be more specific!" She stepped backwards, out of the light, and Eri couldn't see her anymore.

"My name's Reina."
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Re: Destiny/Fate [Eri-focused, Vampire fic]
« Reply #3 on: December 28, 2008, 11:42:14 PM »
Oooo... Now I'm not normally a vampire fic person, but this is certainly interesting. Ai-Reina fight for Eri... o-o I look forward to the next chapter! ^^

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Re: Destiny/Fate [Eri-focused, Vampire fic]
« Reply #4 on: December 29, 2008, 03:51:22 AM »
Whoaa interesting. Esp cuz it revolves around Eri~ I hope Reina is telling the truth!

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Re: Destiny/Fate [Eri-focused, Vampire fic]
« Reply #5 on: December 29, 2008, 02:10:29 PM »
Hmmmm..... This is interesting. I hope Eri still have her clumsy persona. I love her that way. Hoping for the next chapter

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Re: Destiny/Fate [Eri-focused, Vampire fic]
« Reply #6 on: December 29, 2008, 02:16:00 PM »
wow. Vampire fic with everyone as a vampire? SOSAM!  :P
First Ai-sama now Reina?? nice.

so im guessing, Ai is the day vampire or sth? lol.
i love vampire fics (along with pirate ones)

its getting exciting! really! me Vampire FREAK! :D moar moar moar~  :wub:

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Re: Destiny/Fate [Eri-focused, Vampire fic]
« Reply #7 on: December 29, 2008, 02:30:17 PM »
Thanks for replying everyone. Unfortunately, I won't be posting another chapter for a couple of days because we're staying with family for New Years like we always do.
I'm working on Chapter Three right now, but I might not finish before we leave :( If I don't I'll be armed with a notebook and pen and will be scribbling away even during the Annual Hootenanny!

Anyway here's a short preview for Chapter Three. It's some of the dialogue with a lot of detail and some important facts cut out - but you get the gist



PREVIEW FOR CHAPTER THREE


"You! What are you doing here?"

"I was hoping I could talk to you."

"How do you know where I live, Reina?"

"Glad you remember my name Eri... I only want to help. Do you know what you really are?"

"Er... a vampire?"

"Close enough."
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Re: Destiny/Fate [Eri-focused, Vampire fic]
« Reply #8 on: December 29, 2008, 04:13:51 PM »
A/N: I DID IT. We leave in an hour and I finished it! Okay, so it's shorter than the others... by a lot... but I really love my characterisation of Reina and I hope you do too  :D Reina probably won't be back for another chapter or so, we'll see, but truths are starting to emerge and the plot is beginning to make sense in my head.

Enjoy a short Chapter Three
JG




Eri texted Ai at least six times over the next day or so. She didn't get a single reply and all she could do was sit and dwell and be not just a little bit frightened by everything that was suddenly happening to her. The appearance of this Reina girl was the nail in the coffin of Eri's curiosity and she wanted to know everything immediately.

But wherever Ai was, she was unreachable. When Eri gave up texting and tried to call the number, she'd been connected but all she could from the other end was silence and Eri wasn't sure whether to be worried or annoyed.

Eri had successfully managed to skip school for another couple of days but she didn't venture outside again - just in case. By now she was very used to boredom and welcomed it with open arms, it was better than the bizarre whirlwind of activity that had left her in this state.

Nothing much really happened.

Well, until her bedroom door opened and there stood her mother and another shockingly familiar face.

"Here she is Reina," Said Eri's mother, who had her hand on the doorknob and a large smile on her face. "it's so kind of you to drop off the work she's been missing."

"I'm only too happy to help." Replied Reina politely with a surreptitious wink in Eri's direction.

"Eri, you never told me you had such a nice friend!"

'I never knew' She thought to herself, sarcasm dripping from each imaginary syllable.

"Is it alright with you, Kamei-san, if I stay and talk with Eri-chan for a while?"

'Eri-chan!?'

Her mother nodded with another huge smile and backed out of the doorway, letting Reina enter whilst closing the door behind her. Eri looked towards the door desperately but it was already shut.

"You! What are you doing here?"

"I was hoping I could talk to you."

"How do you know where I live, Reina?" Shouted Eri as she climbed out of her bedsheets and faced the other vampire.

Reina shrugged and made herself comfortable on the desk by the door. She picked up a fluffy pink pen and flicked it around in the air before she began to pull the feathers out.

"Reina!"

"Glad you remember my name Eri." She put the pen down with a smirk. "You know it's not hard. There aren't many other Kamei Eri's in the area and databases are a surprisingly easy search."

'God, I was hoping I could talk to Ai before I had to deal with her again. She likes the sound of her own voice too much'

"Now that's not nice," Admonished Reina. "I only want to help. Besides didn't I already warn you about Takahashi?"

Eri's eyes could possibly have been the size of dinner plates, they certainly felt that wide. How was it that everyone knew what she was thinking?

"You know, I feel like I'm really not getting anywhere with you." Said Reina to herself, out loud. She fixed her eyes on the ceiling and swung her legs backward and forwards, hitting the wooden desk with each movement. "But you're interesting and you've got potential so I'll stick with it. Now, Kamei Eri," She stopped swinging her legs and leaned forwards conspiritorally. "Do you know what you really are?"

"Er... a vampire?" Replied Eri dumbly, not knowing where Reina was quite going with her question.

"Close enough." She leaned back again. "Specifically, you're a Day Vampire but I think you've pretty much already figured that out."

All Eri could do was look dumbfounded.

"Being a Day Vampire means you're more powerful in the daytime. Sunlight energises you, whereas moonlight drains you. I'm a Night Vampire it's exactly the same thing just the opposite way round. I'm sure you've noticed that you tend to feel more comfortable being alone when the sun's shining..." Reina paused, allowing a slightly stunned nod from Eri. It frightened her, how things were beginning to make more sense. "There are a couple of special skills that come along with that. No-one ever really told me what a Day Vampire's skills actually are so you'll have to ask someone else about that, but Night Vamps usually have the ability to fade into the surroundings and-"

"Read minds?"

Reina looked over at Eri slyly. "Sometimes."

'Does that mean Ai-' She cut off her own thought. What if Reina was listening?

"Reina?"

"Yeees?"

"I want you to leave. Right now" She sat down on her bed and stared directly at the Night Vampire. "And don't ever come here again."

"Eh? I thought I was telling you everything you wanted to know, how come you're telling me to- Oh, I get it! You're scared!" Reina looked delighted at her conclusion. "Are you scared of me? Please don't be. It's Takahashi that's the problematic one - You've got nothing to fear where I'm concerned."

'Other than having my ear talked off.'

"Hey!" Cried an indignant Reina. "Why are you so mean? I only want to help."

"So you keep saying." Eri yelled standing up again. "But with what and for what reason? And why do you keep saying that Ai's dangerous?"

Reina didn't say anything for a moment nor did she look at Eri. When she started to speak it was quietly and as far as Eri could tell, completely uncharacteristic.

"I- I can't tell you that. Any of it. My superiors wouldn't let me. I was supposed to get you to trust me," The vampire sighed and met Eri's eyes with her own sad ones. "that was my mission. I guess I failed."

If Eri had blinked she would have missed Reina's eyes glowing a dull purple, she also would have missed the nearly superhuman jump she made out of the window onto the ground below, like Eri herself had done a thousand times before.

Eri watched her leave, confused and guilty.

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Re: Destiny/Fate [Eri-focused, Vampire fic]
« Reply #9 on: December 29, 2008, 07:34:36 PM »
Oooooh....this fic is really good :w00t: I stopped everything I was doing so I could read all 3 chapters one after another (bit of a rarity as I'm usually 'trying' to do a million things at once). That's how much I enjoyed / got sucked in by it :oops:

Bring on the next chapter!!!

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« Reply #10 on: December 29, 2008, 09:19:57 PM »
...Now I'm really confused who to trust, Reina or Ai-chan. o_O I do feel bad for Reina... Gah. Must. Know. What. Happens. T__T I look forward to chapter 4! ^___^

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Re: Destiny/Fate [Eri-focused, Vampire fic]
« Reply #11 on: December 30, 2008, 02:01:08 AM »
* JFC reads title.


 :tama: <= closest thing to a "vampire" smiley that we have. XD


EDIT: Interesting concept of having the 2 sides (day VS night) play a part in the characteristics of the characters.  It's gonna be a ReinAi battle for the turtle! :rockon:
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« Reply #12 on: December 30, 2008, 03:19:16 AM »
oh, so now...
wuht happened to Ai?
mysterious. woo/ :D

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Re: Destiny/Fate [Eri-focused, Vampire fic]
« Reply #13 on: December 30, 2008, 04:27:45 AM »
Day walker? It's reminds me of the Movie Twilight (althou I haven't the movie yet.) and Blade. hehehehe.

Choosing between Ai and Reina is really difficult. Both have their own motives. So I guess Eri use her instinct. She felt good when Ai was around. But with Reina, she feels annoyed. I think that's why she choose Ai. But I'm also thinking that the reason why she feel comfortable around Ai is because they meet in day time. Day vampires energies at day time. Their power drain in night time. Mood and emotion must have been affecting them as well? Oh and another thing.... Eri being scared with Reina might be true. They've meet at night right? Eri must have felt Reina's overwhelming power. Well this all just a theory. Hhehehehehe.    Looking forward for the next Chapter. Good luck

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« Reply #14 on: December 30, 2008, 07:57:24 PM »
Can't chat for long as I'm leeching off someone else's wireless :D and I don't know how long I can stay connected.

You're all so kind. I'll do some personal replies at the beginning of the next chapter, but for now just know that I love you!!!  :wub:

Oh, and... the Day and Night thing... it's not exactly what you think it is, but I'll remain the mysterious author on that until I post Chapter Four and even then it may not be completely clear 'till chapter five! I'll admit it now. I'm making this up as I go along.

Stay tuned :D
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Re: Destiny/Fate [Eri-focused, Vampire fic]
« Reply #15 on: January 04, 2009, 10:01:56 PM »
A/N; Happy New Year everyone! A new year, a new chapter. Expect some new characters, a couple more loose ends and a couple more tied up.

Personal replies

@Lolli - Wowzers... am I really that good? Be careful I might get big-headed! Hope you like chapter four as much.
@ShikyoxYaiba - I'll try not to lord the fact that I know exactly what's going to happen over you  :P Who knows, it may become clear it may not.
@JFC - Maybe we should get some vampire icons. But then again how much are they gonna be used?
@ringo-hime - You'll find out what happened to Ai soon... but for now I'll keep it mysterious.
@Sancho - Wow, you really know how to read into things! It makes me wish that that was actually part of my plot. Sorry Sancho... it'll remain a theory, but I will explain what it's all about soon.

Anyway, enjoy the newest chapter because this was really difficult for me to write!
JG



When Eri got back to school, Ai was there too - sporting a broken wrist and the remnants of an ugly bruise on the underside of her chin. But she wouldn't tell anyone what caused it.

"No I wasn't in hospital for very long," is what she said whenever someone asked. "we just had a few issues moving into the new house. That's why I was absent for a few days."

Eri knew she was lying but persuing it seemed like a bad idea and besides, she hadn't exactly breached the topic of meeting Reina. The last thing she wanted to be was a hypocrit. It had been difficult to talk to Ai at all anyway, she just didn't seem to want to get into any conversations - Eri would have put it down to complete avoidance if Ai hadn't been doing it to everyone, and if she hadn't said 'Hello' every morning.

'Something must be wrong.' Was Eri's unsurprising conclusion. 'Something's happened which got Ai hurt and made her worry enough to blank everyone.'

And that made Eri worry, because somehow she knew that it would end up involving her in some way, shape or form. Ai, if she even looked over at her, was giving her pensive looks and they were very unsettling for Eri. By the next Friday Eri was almost yearning for some conversation with Ai. She'd been thinking about everything, especially her bizarre, thankfully unrepeated, meetings with Reina and had decided that she needed a lot of answers a.s.a.p.

"Ai!" She exclaimed on that Friday just after leaving the classroom. The girl in question turned around and looked at Eri with absolutely no surprise. "I'm fed up of this. I want you to tell me absolutely everything."

"It..." Ai looked around herself and waited a moment for the hall to clear before continuing her sentence. "It might be too late to get you involved, Eri. It could get dangerous before you're ready for it."

"What?" replied Eri, half-dumb. 'Dangerous?... Reina'

Ai sighed and rummaged for her phone in her bag. After a few moments of texting she looked back up at Eri with a semi-satisfied expression.

"I know this is short notice, but would your parents mind if you came to my house for a while. There's a couple of people I'd like you to meet."

Despite everything Eri chuckled to herself. "I'm sure mom'd be thrilled."

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Ai's house was modest. It was really the only way to describe it. It was medium sized and warm but there was barely enough decoration and furniture to give the impression of it being a home. Eri made to ask Ai where her parents were but immediately thought better of it - she knew so little about the girl.

'What if I said the wrong thing?'

She expected to be led into the living room, but instead she was led further on and into a room adjacent to the kitchen. The first thing Eri noticed about the room was that it had large, heavy bolts on the door which didn't look like they could be compromised easily. The second thing she noticed was the first aid box that hung on the wall not too far from the door.

"Sit down." offered Ai gently as she did so herself. There were three large leather armchairs in the room that Eri had somehow missed in her initial appraisal of the room. She sat down opposite of Ai and watched as the other vampire nursed her wrist a little before looking up. "I'm sorry I didn't reply to any of your texts, I'm not sure that I can tell you about why just yet. Plus, I want to avoid overloading you with information."

She sat back against the chair and shifted her weight around getting comfortable. Eri wondered if that meant that this would be a long conversation.

"I'll start at the basics. There are two types of vampires, the -"

"The Day Vampires and the Night Vampires."

"Yes." Ai looked at Eri, suspicion beaming from her eyes "I thought you didn't know any of this."

"I-I..."

'There's no point in lying'

"Lying about what?"

Eri jumped and bit her lip guiltily. "After you left, I met a girl. Another vampire. She told me some stuff but there was something about her that unsettled me. I don't know what it was but when she was around..."

"Did she tell you her name Eri?"

"I only know her given name - Reina."

"Reina? Oh no, not her again!" Ai completely slumped into her chair and closed her eyes. She massaged her temples and Eri found herself looking at the most stressed person she had ever seen. "Tell me everything she said to you. Everything."

"She... er, said something about the surge the first time I met her -"

"First time?" Ai opened her eyes. "Never mind, go on."

"She said that it was supposed to hurt and that it was sent by her 'leader', or something, but she didn't explain what it was."

Ai nodded and looked at Eri. "A surge is basically a giant power wave, they're telekinetic and telepathic and incredibly difficult to send out. You'd need a lot of vampires, Day and Night, to get one of those going. They're not sent to destroy, but they are made to hurt. What it does is encourage all vampires within a certain power range to get up and run towards whoever's sending it. Unluckily, you must be within that power range and that's why you ran out of class. Does that make sense?"

"Yes," Said Eri, relieved to have finally gotten at least one answer to her ever building repetoire of questions. "I understand."

"What else did Reina say?" Continued Ai, saying the name as if were painful to do so.

"Well, that Day Vampires are more comfortable and powerful in the daytime and vice versa and that special skills come along with that. That a Night Vampire can fade into shadows and can read minds..." Eri swallowed before proceeding with her question. "Ai, are you a Night Vampire?"

"Yes." Ai replied calmly. "Don't worry Eri, being a Night Vampire doesn't mean I'm evil," She laughed. "I just have a different... skill-set if you will. Being Day or Night doesn't affect your morality, it's like speaking different languages. While I don't exactly express myself the same way as you do, it doesn't mean we aren't talking about the same thing."

A large sigh of relief made its way from Eri's chest and Ai laughed loudly, a smile gleaming from her face. It made Eri smile too.

"Did Reina say anything else?"

Uncomfortably, Eri decided to keep the rest to herself. Reina's warnings about Ai were confusing and she wanted to decide how seriously to take them before she placed her faith completely in Takahashi Ai. In the end, it was her decision. With a little guilt in the pit of her stomach, Eri shook her head to Ai's question.

"Then I suppose I'll continue with what I was going to tell you before. As a Night Vampire I'm not particularly qualified to tell you about being a Day Vampire, but two other vampires live here, Day Vampires, and they'll tell you what you need to know. They should arrive back soon actually." Ai glanced at her watch, which now sat on the opposite wrist to accomodate the cast. "I suppose you've figured out that Reina is not on my side." Eri nodded, very much aware of the fact. "Tanaka Reina made an ill informed and rash decision when she first discovered her powers which led her into the arms of the Nos."

"Nos?"

"As in Nosferatu. Not very original, and with all the wrong connotations, but you have to give them credit for thinking at least a bit laterally." Eri snorted loudly, which Ai looked very much amused by. "All the Nos want is control. I'll make this very clear Eri, we are not two of few. Not even just in the Tokyo area. There are a huge number of Vampires all over the world and unfortunately that's what gives the Nos their advantage. They're an organisation, while those who resist them do so in their own time and in their own way and don't have to answer to people who are many ranks higher than themselves. Collectively we don't have an identity, and to some extent that's what gives us our advantage. The Tokyo vampires, me included, call themselves The Others just because we felt that some form of co-ordinated operation was needed. The Nos in this area are planning something big and they have been for a while and we're worried that something might happen soon."

"Do you know what they're doing?"

"Not exactly but it falls within the realms of a coup d’état."

"Ai, what -"

Eri was cut of by the loud opening and slamming closed of the front door. Ai sighed, stood and motioned for Eri to follow her back into the kitchen.

"I hope you didn't break my door again Aika!"

A small figure sped into the room carrying a school bag along with one full of groceries. The girl, whom Eri assumed was Aika, shook her head vehemently and smiled brightly.

"Don't worry Ai," came a sweet voice from the doorway. "everything's still intact."

Ai nodded sternly. "Eri, I'd like you to meet the two Day Vampires I mentioned. Kamei Eri, this is Michishige Sayumi and Mitsui Aika and they share the house with me."

Eri smiled at the girls while yet more questions buzzed around her head.
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Re: Destiny/Fate [Eri-focused, Vampire fic]
« Reply #16 on: January 04, 2009, 11:15:50 PM »
Syau and Aika?  :shocked: This'll get interesting...

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Re: Destiny/Fate [Eri-focused, Vampire fic]
« Reply #17 on: January 04, 2009, 11:18:12 PM »
If all goes well, it should  :lol:
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Re: Destiny/Fate [Eri-focused, Vampire fic]
« Reply #18 on: January 05, 2009, 03:55:37 PM »
yay! moar info~
NOS!!!!
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Sayu and Aika~ more kyara~  :P

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Re: Destiny/Fate [Eri-focused, Vampire fic]
« Reply #19 on: January 06, 2009, 04:25:20 AM »
Interesting that morality isn't determined by whether or not one is a Day or a Night vampire. It definitely makes things more complex, to say the least.


So then I take it that the "Nos" are the the true "dark" vampires? From the way Aichan describes them, they're the dominant side (at least in terms of numbers). In a way, it's sort of like Star Wars. The Nos are like the Empire, and those opposed to them are the Rebellion. =P


Sayu and Aika?  :shocked: This'll get interesting...
Oh yeah. :lol:

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