JPHiP Radio (16/200 @ 128 kbs)     Now playing: miwa - Kimi To 100 Kaime No Koi (movie ver.) feat AOI

Author Topic: Illuminati [Update: Chapter 6 - No Time Left]  (Read 11876 times)

Offline Kuji

  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 208
    • amqersand
Re: Illuminati [Update: Chapter 3 - Wild Goose Chase]
« Reply #20 on: August 12, 2009, 11:32:41 AM »
O: AU fic...

I love these type of universes for some reason. Give me servants, slaves and secret rooms/passages, maybe toss in some magic and I'm generally a happy camper. Aika seems to be getting some good roles in fics, I really like her in this one as the rich but not spoilt rotten kid in this. Her bond with Risa is sweet. :wub:

Ugh. Stupid grandmother. Go away, baba!
Aika being pulled along by her dog on their search was so cute. X3 Her determination to find her Gaki-nee makes me want to give her a hug. Why can't my little sister be that adorable?

So many mysteries that need explaining though. What is Risa's relation to Aika's family that their everything depends on her? What is up with the beast that was chasing her and mystery woman is who? (To me it sounds like it's Sayumi) The wait for a new chapter's gonna be tough. ^^;


Offline stefy

  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 654
Re: Illuminati [Update: Chapter 3 - Wild Goose Chase]
« Reply #21 on: January 08, 2010, 08:35:36 AM »
[Chapter 4: Mystery Maiden]

The air cooled drastically as the sunken sun shone its last rays of light into the cabin where two girls stood in silence, staring at each other in bewilderment. The taller of the two looked slightly frighten, probably due to a certain canine companion blocking her only exit.

"Well? Are you mute or something?" Aika voiced out stepping forward cautiously towards the young maiden, impatiently waiting for a reply from the older, slightly more mature looking lady with bright beautiful, but scared, looking pair of eyes. A long white dress clothed her as it clung on to her body perfectly, making all her curves apparent. She isn't just any normal teenage girl, she dresses completely different from everyone else, not to mention being barefooted. Aika observed the stranger as she speculated the girl from her appearance.

"I... I..." The stranger stuttered, seemingly very afraid of the child, "I shouldn't be here" she muttered under her breath before making a dash for the exit. Her actions were so quick that both Aika and her dog failed to react to her sudden bolt for the exit.

"Wait!" Aika yelled out as she ran out chasing after the beautiful stranger, she ran with all her might to catch up with her. 'Is she the world's fastest runner or something?!' Aika thought to herself as she sprinted at her fastest, turning into an alley which the girl had previously turned into only to find no one there. "Eh?" She gasped in confusion.

Staring blankly into space, a frown slowly made its way onto her sharp facial features. The ally was a dead end, with the exception of a few crates which Aika had already checked to see if the stranger was hiding behind any of them. It's like she simply vanished...

Still frowning, Aika continued to stare blankly at the end of the ally, coming to realisation of a different problem all together.

"Leo?" She called out timidly for her dog, searching for Leo this time but to no avail. A hint of panic filled her eyes; it was getting too dark for a girl her age to be out.

'Where am I?'

***

"What do you mean, everything depends on her?" The old lady scoffed, refusing to believe that such a no body would be so important to her family.

"Where's Aika?" The tall man questioned, smoothing out his restless facial features as he walked out of the room calling for the one and only being that his deceased wife left him with.

"Akihiro, answer me. I will not be ignored!" The old lady demanded, glaring sternly at her son. Her fairly wrinkled face showing traces of confusion and anger towards the younger man.

"You would never believe me anyway mother," he continued to avoid his mother's question as he took out a large bag. "What's more important now is that we get out of here.." He paused for a moment with his words, taking all the necessary items then stuffing them into the large brown bag. ".. before they come."

A sudden pang of fear struck though him at the thought of them coming, making the middle-aged man scrambled out the room. "You!" He yelled, grabbing hold of one of the servants. "Where is Aika?" He demanded.

"S..she she hasn't come back from school master." She trembled at his assertiveness, as she watched him scramble through the hallway in search of his child. Never before did she came across a dishevel looking master of the household.

***

A tiny yelp escaped Risa as the hunted girl turned back staring wide-eyed at her hunter. Nudging at her leg, she desperately tired to free her foot from the hole so as to escape from her current situation.

She turned back in defeat, her leg refusing to budge from the hole. Leaning against the cool wall, she faced the larger figure who masked a delightful smirk knowing that his prey was currently immobile.

"What do you want from me!" Risa screamed in fear. She figured, if she was going to be killed, she deserved to know the reason why at the very least. Unfortunately, no reply came from the exterminator as he slowly lessened the gap between him and Risa.

Her eyes puffed up as tears began to cloud her vision. She didn't want to die, not just yet, she was only sixteen for crying out loud. Thoughts of her life and the people around her began flashing through Risa's mind as she realised, she would never see them again.

"Aika.." She whispered softly as tears flowed down her cheeks, unable to hold her it back any longer. Risa gasped in pain as she stared into the eyes of her soon to be murderer. Dizziness engulfed her for a split second causing the young girl to fall back completely against the wall for support...

~*~*~*~*~

A swift movement, sending the unkempt male launching right into the distraught young lady's body, as he held a hand out gripping painfully onto her neck. He seemed to have said something, but it all came out muffled. Slamming his free arm straight into her ribs sending the girl into unconsciousness, he smirked triumphantly at his accomplishments. 'Too easy' he thought to himself.

Bringing his hand up to the girl's chest, slamming his hand right at the child once more, this time however, his hand went right through her skin digging inside her for something. A bright grin sneaked its way onto his rough features, as he pulled out his newly found treasure, a mind blowing pale white orb emerged out of her, floating in his palm

Risa seemed to be observing everything from afar as her lifeless body took her last gasp.

~*~*~*~*~

Gasping in pain, Risa stared fearfully at the man as she held onto her chest protectively, taking a quick glance down at her still breathing body.

"What was-" Before she could finish, she felt her body get slammed against the wall behind her.

He gripped firmly against her small neck, slowly tightening his grip. A repulsive smirk appeared onto his musty features, revealing his golden-red eyes. Risa stared in horror as she realised, she was going to go through the process all over again. This time though, it was for real.

"What I want is your soul." He whispered delightfully, lifting his free arm up ready to slam it into Risa's ribs.

Risa shut her eyes closed anticipating the pain that is to come. But it never did, instead she heard a loud crackle and the sound of something heavy crumbling onto the rough ground beneath her. With the same heavy weight on her gone, Risa carefully released the muscles around her eyes, slowly opening them one at a time.

A figure of a captivating young girl, no older then Risa herself, dressed in a bright white one piece appeared before her. She looked right at the petrified girl with a smile, somehow reassuring Risa that everything would be alright.

Shielding her from the built man, Risa stared in shock as a blinding pale yellow light shone before the young lady as it stretched out to form a clear wall in front of them. Balls of dark flames flew towards a now curled up Risa but was soon diminished into ash as the clear shield blocked the two from every attack the huge beast threw at them.

Risa lifted her head up, taking a peek at the scene before her, the young woman held her arm out with the shield opening up from her palm.

"Don't worry, I'll protect you" She said, her delicate voice echoed within the space between the two girls.

-----------------------------------------------------

Well.. Uh I'm back? SORRY FOR TAKING SO LONG!!!  :kneelbow::kneelbow::kneelbow:

I hope I won't take this long till the next chapter.. :depressed:
Jya! Enjoy!! Oh and comments are very much appreciated! XD




« Last Edit: January 08, 2010, 08:41:13 AM by stefy »

Offline Estrea

  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 2624
  • ひゃっっほーい♪( ´θ`)ノ
Re: Illuminati [Update: Chapter 4 - Mystery Maiden]
« Reply #22 on: January 08, 2010, 09:03:17 AM »
My shock! You updated! :o

Ooh appearance of mystery girl! Well, A more complete revelation anyway. Curves? Ai or Eri? :lol:

Oooh, Aika is important. And why does creepy guy want Risa's soul? What's so valuable about it? (I mean, why her and not some other random person XD)

I wonder how long before you next update...heh. :P

永遠に咲き続ける花なんていない、すべてはいずれ枯れて朽ち果てしまう。

Currently writing:
- Lilium-related things. God save my soul.

On Hold:
- Everything Else. Too many to list.

I'm also on AO3!
http://archiveofourown.org/users/Estrea

Offline rndmnwierd

  • Subleader of Tsunku's Army
  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 4824
  • What has been seen cannot be unseen.
Re: Illuminati [Update: Chapter 4 - Mystery Maiden]
« Reply #23 on: January 08, 2010, 02:54:32 PM »
Did Risa just see the future a little bit? Who is she to the Mitsui's? Oh, do I sense some Takagaki in later chapters? 8)

Can't wait for the next chapter, I also hope it won't take, *looks at watchless arm* five months to pop up. XD

Offline amEthystx

  • The Bishop NI
  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 350
Re: Illuminati [Update: Chapter 4 - Mystery Maiden]
« Reply #24 on: January 09, 2010, 05:13:51 AM »
! <- This came out of no where..Cannot help but put this..~ lol.. I don't really know what is going on now at the moment..just part and parcel.. but it's so interesting~ XD

1. Aika - She is soooooo cute! I think i've never really read a fanfic mainly on her yet.. but it all fits in quite well.. Aika is usually so expressionless (but anyway..she is famous for it, ain't she? lol)... so..there might be where the brat image came from..but she is actually quite adorable in a way..  and the fact that she is only 10, all the child talk here makes her more adorable~

2. Risa - Poor RISA~~~~~~~~ hmmm... is she something like a unknowingly guardian angel for the family? LOL~ I was about to go with something like "The Master of the certain land" those kinda thing from Japan Mystic~ <- Too much manga XD but something have to be special about her.. she can look slightly into the future...~  :)

3. Grandma! : *throw metal wok and ladle at her* enough said~  :D

4. Mystery Maiden - Dark long hair always reminds me of Sayu~ :P As cute as she is.. she is considered pretty tall in MM~ probably the 2nd now.. since Koharu had left...~ So... she is the guardian of Risa? 

Ok... I'm going crazy with wild guesses~  XD

 :mon bat:

Offline badsaints

  • in love with Love
  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 781
Re: Illuminati [Update: Chapter 4 - Mystery Maiden]
« Reply #25 on: January 09, 2010, 07:37:35 AM »
OMG

I remember reading this back in my lurking days! :w00t: Nice to see an update from you :D

I wonder who the mysterious girl is. A guardian angel? And why is the man bent on taking Risa's soul? Is Risa someone special as hinted by Aika's dad?

Very intriguing indeed :O Update soon! Don't make us your readers wait for a few months again! XD

Offline lil_hamz

  • Sapphire and Nouveau... like it should've been
  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 2569
  • She makes every summer sweet, every moment happy
Re: Illuminati [Update: Chapter 4 - Mystery Maiden]
« Reply #26 on: January 09, 2010, 07:19:00 PM »
When u said u updated I thought it was e other fic but this one is even better!!*eyebrows wiggle* The action part will be coming up right? Oh I can't wait! I hope inspiration visits you and never leaves again. None of us readers wanna be kept in suspense for too long.

I saw a husky dog today and it instantly reminded me of Aika. Random fact I know XD

Offline kRisZ

  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 1325
  • ...shiawasekai...
Re: Illuminati [Update: Chapter 4 - Mystery Maiden]
« Reply #27 on: January 10, 2010, 02:30:26 AM »
Wow. Me   :heart: s it

Offline stefy

  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 654
Re: Illuminati [Update: Chapter 4 - Mystery Maiden]
« Reply #28 on: January 29, 2010, 08:58:19 AM »
Yahoo~

Since I'm soooooooooooooo~~~ utterly bored at work.. I decided to do some comment replies in case I take another 2 million years to update and get lazy to comment reply again XD (I'm using my phone to post so don't tell anyone!!)

ok! Replies!!

@Ess - you ass! Just felt like saying that for the fun of it ahaha. I'm nt gonna answer ur questions cuz u pretty much know how this fic goes anyways. Damn jiazua leh u!! XD

@rnd - Sorry kinda lazy to type out your whole nick hah. Yes Risa saw into the future! She's got da power! Hmmm TakaGaki? *snickers away* maybe~ maybe not~ And gah!! Don't count how long I took to update! *covers face* I'm a slow n lazy writer..

@ame - I KNOW! Aika's adorable isn't she?! Lol. I kinda prefer her this way rather then how she's normally written. Nah Risa's relationship with the Mitsuis is not quite like some Japan mythtical .. thing? Hmm actually height wouldn't really make any significance at all as to who this mystery person is. Aika's a kid remember? So most people would surely be taller then her.. Unless she's some freakishly tall person like *ahem* someone we know.. XD

@Badsaints - Nuoooo another person reminding me how long I took to update!! T_T Where's YOUR fic update then huh huh?? You shouldn't leave your readers hanging too ya know? Nyaha. Eh I'm still trying to figure out how to piece everything together tho so.. Can't really give out much hints yet hah.

@hamzies - o-o I has other fics? Which fic would that be? Yea I hope inspiration never leave me too but but but... *looks far far away in search of inspiration*       

@kris - Glad that you :heart: s it! I :heart: s you for reading! Haha.


DONE-ED! And errr... Sorry but no update yet.. Haven't even started writing! Hehe :P I haven't been home long enough to concentrate on writing properly nowdays (EXCUSES!!)  but yea.. I shall write as soon as I stop treating my home as a hotel!!

Okiez cya!
« Last Edit: January 29, 2010, 09:04:45 AM by stefy »

Offline stefy

  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 654
Re: Illuminati [Update: Chapter 5 - Maiden Revealed]
« Reply #29 on: February 21, 2010, 12:08:06 PM »
Happy (belated?) Chinese New Year! What's a non-Chinese here gotta do to get some red packets huh? Anyways, I'm posting this while havin me break at work so... Enjoy~ XD

[Chapter 5: Maiden Revealed

"Are you alright?" The angelic voice asked, as an equally angelic looking being towered over a still currently curled up Risa. The beast now no where to be found as his entire figure turned into dust due to a sudden bolt of lightning which came from out of nowhere.
 
"Who are you? What do you want from me?" Risa questioned, her voice muffled due to her current position.
 
The beautiful savior stared blankly at Risa's vulnerable figure, not knowing what to say. She didn't plan for the younger girl to encounter an attack like this, not just yet anyway. She knelt down to face the helpless girl on eye level as she placed a reassuring hand on her shoulder. "Don't worry Risa, you're safe now."
 
Looking up, Risa stared at her savior, eyes puffed and red from crying. The stranger stared back at the young girl, slightly shocked, either from Risa's currently disheveled appearance or from the way Risa glared directly into her own eyes.
 
"My name is Ai" She said with a warm smile, hoping to cheer the angered and confused girl up a little.
 
Risa lifted her head up, glaring at Ai, anger building up inside her. Although she knew she shouldn't flare up at the lady before her, she just couldn't contain her discomfort anymore.
 
"What the hell do you want from me?!" She yelled, causing Ai to back away just a little in shock. She never expected the younger to shout at her like that. Not that she was expecting Risa to start showering her with any gratitude either.
 
"You're angry?" Ai asked in bewilderment as her head twitched itself to the side. It's not everyday she gets to talk to a human. Although she likes observing them every now and then, especially this particular human being.
 
"Oh am I? I couldn't tell." The younger replied sarcastically, "Of course I am angry! What are you an alien or something?!" Risa shouted back, her arms flung about in the air.
 
"I'm not an alien. I'm-" Ai paused, contemplating about telling Risa her true identity. "Come on, lets just get out of here first." Changing the subject, Ai stood up with an outstretched arm as she waited for Risa to accept the gesture.

Risa stared in disbelief. What is wrong with this person? Letting out a sigh of defeat, she took hold of the small hand before her, allowing herself to be pulled up to her feet by Ai.
 
"Now.. This might make you a little dizzy for a second, but don't worry." The stranger smiled, her hand still holding on to Risa's tightly.
 
"What are you ta-" Before Risa could finish her sentence, her entire being suddenly felt like it was falling apart making her body shimmer into billions of tiny particles. Funny thing was, it didn't hurt one bit. And yes, it did make her feel giddy.
 
Thus vanishing into thin air.
 
***

The cool yet thin air filled the atmosphere drastically as white smoke lingered aimlessly around what seemed like a never ending white field of fluff. A young toddler lied flat onto the soft looking ground lazing blissfully as she rolled about. A satisfying smug plastered onto her tiny facial features which showed her current mood, happy and well... satisfied.
 
Her favorite carefree past time was suddenly cut short as she heard a familiar scream of another young girl, much like herself. Pushing herself up to direct her attention towards where the shriek was heard, she stared intensely in bewilderment as the figure of her most trusted companion came storming towards her, arms practically swinging about while screaming incoherent babbles.
 
"Run for it!!" The runner roared, grabbing hold of her friend's arm thus pulling her along.
 
"What's going on?" The formerly lazed up child asked as she recovered from the sudden change in events, sprinting past her friend. She was always better at the physical attributes as compared to her partner.
 
"S- s-he's ... b-ack." Was all the struggling runner could puff out due to the lack of air in her lungs at that moment. They both shared a look of panic as more screaming was made as they sprinted harder at the word "She"

The duo came to an abrupt halt and stared in horror as the formerly mentioned "She" person stood right before their very eyes, arms crossed not to mention looking very VERY pissed off.

"Howy kwaps." Lazed girl muttered out unconsciously.

She pointed a finger at the two young girls with a very disappointed frown showing on her face. "Watch you're language." She simply said.
 
"I told you, many times before. Never use you're powers. You can't control them yet." She said, her calm yet stern voice sending chills down their spines.
 
"But we-"
 
"I'm not done yet." The taller and older young lady dressed in white cut their reasoning. "You," she said pointing the finger at the younger of the mischievous pair "used your powers on me! And you," this time pointing at the older lazed child, "killed someone with yours!"
 
"How are you two going to pay for your actions?" She ended the accusations with arms crossed once again.
 
"But she was in trouble!"
"We saw!"
"You know!"
"And"
"That!"
"Big!"
"Huge!"
"Lousy!"
"Rotten!"
"No good!"
"Piece of dove kwap!"
"You weren't there!"
"And then you were going to die!"
"She was going to die!"

"WE JUST WANNA HELP!"

The pair ended their amazingly synchronic reasoning (yelling everything out might I add). With their arms now rested at their sides, previously flung about in various directions just to prove their points. As they tried to salvage themselves from any punishment they would be getting from their most valued elder.

"We just wanted to help Aineechan.." The older one spoke, softly this time looking awfully sorry using her puppy dog eyes as she stepped closer to her elder, tugging gently onto Ai's dress .

"Is it bad to help Aineechan?" The younger of the duo added, following close behind as she too tugged onto Ai's left side of her dress, looking up at the older with her big, round, teary eyes.

Sighing in defeat, Ai rolled her eyes at how easily she could give in to the pair. She knelt down to be on eye level with the girls, her expression softening into a warm smile as she held onto both their hands placidly.

"I know you two meant well, but you just can't go around diminishing people like that." Ai explained, her right hand letting go of the older child's hand, moving up to caress her cheeks.

"People?! That big monster isn't people!" Younger child burst out, her arms flew up in the air in the process.

"And don't think I didn't know that you talked her into it young lady." Ai pointed out sharply, making the youngest close her mouth shut. "I told you two countless times before about keeping the balance, didn't I? We can't just go around killing those 'monsters' no matter how bad they are." She continued her lecture.

"But-" The pair voiced out together, only to be cut off yet again.

"That would make you no different from them now would it?" Ai retorted, finally proving her point as the duo fell silent, directing there attention towards the ground, conscience stricken.

"Come on, lets go back" Ai said soothing the girls soft hair back and ushered them off into the never ending white mist.

------------------------------------------

XD
« Last Edit: February 21, 2010, 02:37:51 PM by stefy »

Offline Estrea

  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 2624
  • ひゃっっほーい♪( ´θ`)ノ
Re: Illuminati [Update: Chapter 5 - Maiden Revealed]
« Reply #30 on: February 21, 2010, 01:37:38 PM »
Lmao Aichan having to play babysitter!

Ya ya I know your story so why do I even bother to comment...at least this time you didn't take as long to update! Haha.

Cute kids are cute though. XD

永遠に咲き続ける花なんていない、すべてはいずれ枯れて朽ち果てしまう。

Currently writing:
- Lilium-related things. God save my soul.

On Hold:
- Everything Else. Too many to list.

I'm also on AO3!
http://archiveofourown.org/users/Estrea

Offline badsaints

  • in love with Love
  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 781
Re: Illuminati [Update: Chapter 5 - Maiden Revealed]
« Reply #31 on: February 21, 2010, 05:42:59 PM »
Quote
The angelic voice asked, as an equally angelic looking being towered over a still currently curled up Risa
I really like this line. No truer words to describe Ai :lol:

Ai met Risa! :cow: Okay so what if they met on a bad start...there's always chance to get to know each other better? :lol: *the TakaGaki 'shipper in me hoping*

But who are the two cuties? Reina & Eri? :P

Offline kRisZ

  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 1325
  • ...shiawasekai...
Re: Illuminati [Update: Chapter 5 - Maiden Revealed]
« Reply #32 on: March 06, 2010, 08:07:24 AM »
Quote
"My name is Ai"
:mon money:  :mon money:  :mon money:

Quote
"Oh am I? I couldn't tell." The younger replied sarcastically, "Of course I am angry! What are you an alien or something?!" Risa shouted back, her arms flung about in the air.
:D  :D  :D

Quote
"We just wanted to help Aineechan.." The older one spoke, softly this time looking awfully sorry using her puppy dog eyes as she stepped closer to her elder, tugging gently onto Ai's dress .

"Is it bad to help Aineechan?" The younger of the duo added, following close behind as she too tugged onto Ai's left side of her dress, looking up at the older with her big, round, teary eyes.
Cute  :wriggly:  but who are they.?.

Offline stefy

  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 654
Re: Illuminati [Update: Chapter 5 - Maiden Revealed]
« Reply #33 on: June 29, 2010, 12:01:57 PM »
[Chapter 6: No Time Left]

Lost within the dark gloomy night sky, a frightened young child wept, all curled up against the wall as she hugged her knees for some form of comfort. Suddenly, she didn't feel so brave anymore. Fear tends to kick in that way, after being stranded for the past few hours, wandering around unfamiliar grounds with no one around to call to for 
help.
 
Aika had been walking around with a straight face, searching for any form of help possible for the past few hours. Now, all hope of finding help, lost, she sat in a dark alley crying. Thoughts of her family and her life back home filled her mind. What if she never found her way back? What if her most beloved father forgot about her? What if she could never see her Gakinee again? A fresh batch of hot tears filled her bloodshot eyes, tempting to flow down her cheeks. Whimpering in dismay, Aika buried her head into her arms shaken with fear, slowly she cried herself into deep slumber.
 
The sound of muffled voices shook Aika from her position. She tried to lift her tired and numb body up from the ground, instantly she covered her eyes from the sudden brightness that filled her vision. Before she knew it, the sun had already come out, it was morning and she had slept through the night.
 
A roar of laughter was heard followed by a voice of a child, mocking someone. "Oh look! She's going to cry."
 
"Cry baby, cry baby!!" A group of young boys crowded over a figure chanting merrily as a few laughed away.
 
Aika made her way towards the crowd of bullies, in a groggy manner, and spotted a girl no older then she was sprawled onto the ground. The girl's fist clenched tightly as she glared up at the spoken voice before her, teary eyed. Aika watched in horror as one of the boys picked the defenceless girl up by her ponytail, laughing mercilessly.
 
"Stop that!!" Aika yelled, now fully awakened, as she was unable to watch the abuse towards the stranger any longer. She rushed forward and slammed her fist into the jaw of the boy, sending him tumbling onto the ground screaming in pain.
 
A strong burning sensation filled the boy's left cheek as it quickly disintegrated into what seemed like dead skin cells. The crowd watched in horror as the boy's face turned a darker shade of black, burnt skin. The boy shrieked in fear as he felt his cheek turn rock hard. He scrambled away, in tears, running as far away from the person who malted his face, together with the crowd of kids following him not far behind.
 
Aika stared at the fleeing figured in shock. "What's wrong with him?" She pondered out loud nonchalantly. Maybe she didn't notice his stoned left cheek, or she probably thought he was some freak. Either way, the ten year old was pretty much unaffected by the public display of ... unusualness which occurred just seconds ago.
 
"Are you ok?" Aika asked directing her attention to the formerly bullied young girl, startling her from her thoughts.
 
"You!" She pointed at Aika, staring at her in awe.
 
"You too!"
 
***
 
Steam lingered around the pitch black cave, the silhouette of a lone rodent trembled vigorously, the moist on its body making its fur cluster together all damp. The heat within the cave was slowly becoming unbearable for its tiny form. A slight change of wind made its shivering body prickle, as it squeaked in fear, scampering away into a corner.
 
The warm air shimmered, forming dark particles to appear from out of nowhere. A figure of a ragged looking being with long, messy, dark hair emerged. His face was hidden under the hood of the long coat that he wore. Eyeing the innocent rodent, a smirk showed on his once hidden features. And with a flick of a finger, a freakish pitch escaped the rat as it cried it's last cry, a tiny pill of ash was left of the tiny observer. He continued his cantering into the dark hollow cave, and stalked towards yet another opening within the cave like atmosphere.
 
He stood in the middle of the darkness, and with a swift movement of his right arm, the room lit up filled with torches of blazing fire at every corner. Just then a strong gust of wind filled the lit cave, surprisingly infecting the burning torches at the same time, and a few more hooded figures appeared from thin air.
 
"It's time." The hooded man declared, his tenor voice echoing within the space. The other new faces, their hoods pulled back, took a quick yet unfriendly glance at one another, then smirked very unpleasantly.

Their wait was finally over.
 
***
 
Standing in front of a deserted looking house, Ai observed her surroundings. The front door stood ajar with burn marks scorched on it. Scratch marks imprinted itself on to the walls of the large mansion. Glass windows were darkened, some had cracks and some were shattered broken. One look at the place would be more than enough to tell that the house was a wreck.
 
'Too late.'
 
She mentally scolded herself, as she carefully took a peek into the house. A lone tear gradually slides down her cheek as she took in the sight before her. Bodies of young ladies lay motionless on the ground with terror stricken faces. Walking through the once lively hallway, Ai bent over placing her hand on each and every body she could find, covering its lifeless looking eyes. Silver orbs floated through the heart of the body and continued to float up into the dark night's sky.
 
"I'm sorry." She said, apologising to each soul, with more tears flowing down her flawless skin.
 
Ai proceeded discreetly into the largest room; the strong, foul stench of vastly decomposed bodies filled the air within the room.  Two more bodies were found. Bodies of which belonged to the owners of the big mansion. She knelt down, staring at the lifeless body, placing one hand onto his chest and another on his once terror stricken eyes.

"I'm sorry, I couldn't keep my word." She whispered to the body, as she was about to proceed.

The doors to the grand room suddenly slammed itself open, causing Ai to yelp out slightly, in shock.  A figure of two young girls came into Ai's view.
 
"Stay away from him!"

The smaller sized of the two yelled, as she dashed forward towards where Ai sat, shoving her aside.

"Papa?" The young girl cried out with her eyes all watery.

"Papa, say something!" She shouted as she shook the body before her.

No matter how hard she shook the body, the young girl couldn't get a single response from it. Ai gazed the girl her eyes filled with sorrow.

"You.." The girl muttered under her breath, turning her attention towards Ai.

"You did this.."


------------------------------------------

Fade outo~
XD Like finally... And don't go counting how long I took kayz~? Btw.. I got lazy at the very end (as usual) neheez...

Offline rndmnwierd

  • Subleader of Tsunku's Army
  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 4824
  • What has been seen cannot be unseen.
Re: Illuminati [Update: Chapter 6 - No Time Left]
« Reply #34 on: June 29, 2010, 12:55:59 PM »
Quote
And don't go counting how long I took kayz
*puts away watch and whistles innocently* What?

I'm glad to see you haven't forgotten this quite interesting story, even a short chapter is welcome. Hmm, I'm not sure what to say about the chapter itself, though, I guess it will make more sense when I have all the puzzle pieces.

Offline badsaints

  • in love with Love
  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 781
Re: Illuminati [Update: Chapter 6 - No Time Left]
« Reply #35 on: July 04, 2010, 05:20:30 AM »
lol yo Skip! You finally updated! :P


Who was the person Aika saved? :O Someone mentioned before?

Quote
A figure of two young girls came into Ai's view.
The two cute girls who were with Ai previously?


Oi oi stop being lazy and keep us hanging with so many questions :lol: Faster update leh

JPHiP Radio (16/200 @ 128 kbs)     Now playing: miwa - Kimi To 100 Kaime No Koi (movie ver.) feat AOI