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Re: Solus (Chapter 13 Part 1 - 26/02)
« Reply #120 on: February 28, 2010, 12:27:13 AM »
Am I so late for this?! :shocked
Oh no~~!!!  :bleed eyes:
I like your fanfic so much :inlove:
Can you bring me the hidden part of your fanfic? :twisted:

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nothing to say :drool: :drool:

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but i'll kill you after you finish this fanfic :twisted:
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Re: Solus (Chapter 13 Part 1 - 26/02)
« Reply #121 on: February 28, 2010, 04:03:16 PM »
Which part are u kidding about? The disliking JJ part or the
'expiring' her bit? Both options are ok with me :P Although I liked her reaction to Eri almost falling off the chair in MuJack. Mostly cuz it's what I would do XD

Why is Kame calling her Okahan??? Don't tell me she's gonna move in with her ma ma so that Reina will forget about her. Dont do that Eri! (I'm actually lying here cuz I prefer 07 with others :D)

I hope you find time to update part 2 soon. You must be busy to skip Fri. Before I leave... Update tomorrow please :P

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Re: Solus (Chapter 13 Part 1 - 26/02)
« Reply #122 on: March 02, 2010, 07:33:55 PM »

Update! :grin:

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“But that’s baby food! I’m a growing child, you know. A growing child!” Reina stood on her tiptoe to emphasize her point.

XD OMFG  XD Indeed cute...

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"Hey give me that!” Reina yelped, trying to grab the small box back.

“Don’t wanna. You’re going to give me this anyway. Why not now?” Eri tried to get away from Reina, though unsuccessfully.


:mon mischief: ........... So that's what happened... XD

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Before Eri could realise the awkward position they were in, the front door opened and she saw Sayu standing behind Aika. The door closed almost immediately. Grinning sheepishly, Reina got off Eri and help her up, before proceeding to open the door for Aika and Sayu who were still standing dumfounded outside.

The perfect timing sucks... XD

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“She’s ugly, isn’t she?” Airi giggled.

:rofl:

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“What are you girls doing here? You are not trying to steal my girlfriend, are you Airi?” Risa joked.

:mon heh: Who wouldn't be trying to steal Ai...? XD :P


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I'm trying to write faster but there's too much drama here that it's getting harder to write

BLOCK?!?! No, no, no... That isn't an excuse... So go and write the next chap :twisted: :grin:

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How about updating your TanaShige one-shot? That will make me very very very happy. Pleeeeeease? *puppy eyes*

I've already updated, so let's be fair: GO AND WRITE!! XD XD XD


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Re: Solus (Chapter 13 Part 1 - 26/02)
« Reply #123 on: March 06, 2010, 07:18:46 AM »
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“But that’s baby food! I’m a growing child, you know. A growing child!” Reina stood on her tiptoe to emphasize her point.
:heart: this line  :lol:

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Eri knew she should not harbour any special feelings towards Reina, not when her own best friend has a massive crush on her housemate.
Looks bad

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Slightly regretting turning down Risa’s offer to bath together
:shocked  :shocked  :shocked

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But a girl has to set a good example in front of her “sister-in-law”
Hmmm okay  XD

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“She’s ugly, isn’t she?” Airi giggled.
OMG  :rofl:  :rofl:  :rofl:

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“More than anything else in the world.”
:luvluv2:  :luvluv2:  :luvluv2:

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“Then promise me you’ll never make her sad. She’s the most beautiful and the best sister I have in the world.”
:luvluv1:

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“She’s the only sister you have in the world,”
OMG  :rofl:  :rofl:  :rofl:

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“Hmph very funny. Okay, time for bed babies.”
:w00t:   :twisted:  :drool:  :lick:   XD

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Re: Solus (Chapter 13 Part 1 - 26/02)
« Reply #124 on: March 14, 2010, 12:57:47 AM »
NUU~!!! Eri!!! Don't do that!!!! Don't distance yourself!!!! Be selfish for once!!!!
OOppss...sorry...did my TanaKame fangirlism came out there? ahahahaha...anyways...where's part 2? i think I badly need it soon.XD

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Re: Solus (Chapter 13 Part 1 - 26/02)
« Reply #125 on: April 03, 2010, 03:50:14 PM »
Baddie!!!!! :cry: :cry: :cry:

Update already!!!! :fainted:


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Solus (Chapter 13 Part 2 - 26/04)
« Reply #126 on: April 26, 2010, 12:44:29 AM »
Back with part 2 :P But important things first XD

@ Trey-Trey :wub: - Aww where have you disappeared to? You've been very quiet :cry: See I'm writing lol. I'm busy with work and my finals but I'll try to update more frequently. I'll try *grins*

@ CY - It's okay to show your Tanakame fangirlism more XD We seems to be losing TanaKame-ist nowadays

@ Lil k XD - Haha I'm glad you :heart: that line. Can you imagine Reina actually saying it? That would be so damn cute :wub:

@ Hammy - What if I say both? Nah, I'm not that cruel or evil. I won't kill anyone, just make them suffer :lol:

@ Shiawase_Honoo - Thanks for reading :) I like the serious Aika in your sig. That's exactly the look I imagine when I wrote Aika :D Sigh...so many people wanna kill me after this huh? And it's only my first fanfic :cry:

@ C - I love your avi! Sayu is definitely Reina's. TanaShige :wub:

And here is the second part...


Chapter 13 (Part 2)

Mind wandering miles away, Eri frowned as she thought of ways to appease the girl she is meeting soon. It wasn’t until a tap on her arm that brought her out of her dazeness that she realised that one of the counter was free. A quick apology to the girl standing behind her, she walked towards the counter and watched the cashier rang her purchases.

‘This should be enough to make Sayu happy,’ she thought as she walked out of the convenience store and down the pavement. A firm grip pulled Eri back, jolting her back into reality as she struggled to regain her footing.

“That was dangerous.” Eri turned at the voice and saw the same girl who was queuing behind her at the store.

“Eh?” Eri looked at the girl questioningly, before realising that she had spaced out again and almost walked into the moving traffic. If not for the said girl, Eri was sure to have become a human pancake right then.

Still shaking, Eri allowed herself to be guided by the girl across the road. Small talks lead to conversations which in turn lead to comfortable acquaintances. By strange coincidence, Eri learnt that the girl stayed next to Sayu’s and owned that Chinese restaurant. They chattered away easily enough and before they knew it, they reached their destination, bidding each other farewell, with Eri promising to visit the girl’s restaurant soon.

“Oh wait, I still haven’t got your name.”

“Li Chun, but you can call me JunJun.’

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Kamei Eri stood, a thousand options going through her mind. She had spent the last twenty minutes explaining what happened that night. Despite her best effort to clear the misunderstanding, the wooden door refused to open. Eri contemplated using her Eriens powers instead, unable to decide between ‘Open Sesame’ and ‘Abracadabra’.

Eri knew she was not talking to the door per se, as she did hear some rustling from the other side, which means Sayu locked herself up in the room when Eri came. Since Sayu hadn’t said one word to her, Eri figured Sayu was still mad at her.

“Michishige Sayumi, you open the door this instant!”

Both hands on her hips, her assertive voice directed towards the stubborn bunny. Never mind that Sayu could not see her seldom-seen strong posture or that there was a hint of desperation in the voice. Assertive or not, the door remained defiantly closed.

“Come on Sayu, open the door,” Eri pleaded, “Please?”

She pressed her ear to the door, trying to pick up any further sound from the room. However, that wasn’t a good move as she almost fell sideways when the door suddenly opened in on her. It was fortunate though that Sayu was quick enough to catch her before she does hit the floor.

Eri relished being in her best friend’s arms, for it felt familiarly comfortable. Her eyes grew heavy and she would have been on her way to dreamland if not for an ‘ahem’ from the bunny. Eri sprung to stand straight, remembering her mission for the day.

“Why didn’t you tell me you’re living with Reina?” Sayu withdrew her arms, proceeding to cross them instead.

“I’m sorry Sayu. I wanted to. Honestly! Initially Reina didn’t want to start any misunderstanding and somehow things just turn out this way.”

“That doesn’t change the fact that you weren’t honest with me. Me! Your best friend!”

The words brought Eri guilt like no other. Close to tears, she sniffed, “I know, I’ve come to apologise and...”

“Urgh stop~” Sayu pulled Eri into their second hug for the day. “Otherwise I’m gonna start crying too.”

“I’m really sorry Sayu. I promise I’ll be more honest to you. Really!”

“Oh I can never stay angry with you.” Sayu pinched Eri’s cheeks, “Is there any other things that I should know of?”

“Actually, there is one more thing. It’s Mummy…”

~~~

The slight whiff of cold air, if only for a few seconds as the door opened and closed, serves a gentle reminder that it is a cold winter day in the otherwise warm restaurant. The newcomer easily made her way to the kitchen, greeting the old couple when she did, before sprinting up to the second floor.

“Sayu? I received your message. What’s so urgent? Did anything happen? Are you hurt?”

Risa proceeded to check Sayu for any unseen injuries the bunny might have, her motherly instinct anxiously taking over her the moment she received a text message from Sayu. Granted, the text was also exaggerating as Sayu insisted Risa come over her house immediately.

“Ah Risa, this is bad. This is like…level 5 emergency!”

Laughter could be heard from a corner of the room where Eri lazed on the bed. “Sorry, couldn’t help myself. You two were too funny.”

“Eririn~ how could you even laugh? Don’t you know how serious this is?” Sayu pouted.

“Oh stop overreacting Sayu. That’s Risa’s job,” Eri chuckled.

Protesting loudly at that, Risa discarded her coat and made herself comfortable by the side of the bed, confused with the conversation between the two best friends. She listened attentively as Eri recapped her conversation with her mother, with a few 'hmms' and 'ohs' in-between.

“So you’re going to New York? To live with Auntie?” Risa asked.

“I haven’t decided yet. She’s remarrying soon and she wants us to live as a family. Plus she felt that an overseas education might give me more exposure,” Eri sighed, a depressing thought came to her mind…

‘Besides there’s no reason for me to stay’

Sayu whined, “But Eririn, can’t you talk to Mummy? I’m sure she’ll understand.”

Risa watched in amusement at playful teasing that followed between the best friends, though disconcerted by the unsettling feelings delicately floating in the air, as if daring anyone to touch them.

“Risa, are you listening?” A hand was waving in front of her face, Risa realised, and she swatted the bunny’s hand away.

“Of course I was.”

“Great! Then it’s settled then. Eri’s birthday celebration cum Christmas party on the 23rd.”

“And I know just the place.”

~~~ :) ~~~

A tad shorter than normal but since it's a part 2 and only on Eri...it's okay right?

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Re: Solus (Chapter 13 Part 2 - 26/04)
« Reply #127 on: April 26, 2010, 02:33:47 AM »
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Re: Solus (Chapter 13 Part 2 - 26/04)
« Reply #128 on: April 26, 2010, 06:35:10 AM »
Ohhhhh~ I realized i forgotten to comment on the previous chapter! XD

I know you will forgive me.. :P

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Glad you caught the clues (don't want diaper? How about a pacifier as a reward?)
- Ice cream ice cream..  :wub:

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Reina was now fairly certain that Eri was avoiding her. Reina wondered the reason to Eri’s sudden strange behaviour.
Oblivious ain't she? XD Looks like Eri really did fall for Reina.. Risa all gone? lol

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“Hmph very funny. Okay, time for bed babies.”
tug me in too XD Haha.. Risa and her marker photo... :D

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Eri contemplated using her Eriens powers instead, unable to decide between ‘Open Sesame’ and ‘Abracadabra’.
So which of it shows a Sign? OK.. LAME~ *Hide under table*

OHhhh my~ Eri ain't leaving is she? :(

Let me guess...

Eri hides it till the end from Reina and when she finally finds out..she went after Eri.........and! THE END!

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Re: Solus (Chapter 13 Part 2 - 26/04)
« Reply #129 on: April 26, 2010, 09:02:36 PM »
Sounds to me like a certain kitty needs to convince Eri to stay, right?


Erien powers XD

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Re: Solus (Chapter 13 Part 2 - 26/04)
« Reply #130 on: April 27, 2010, 09:51:19 PM »
Hell yeah, update!!!  XD

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@ Trey-Trey :wub: - Aww where have you disappeared to? You've been very quiet :cry: See I'm writing lol. I'm busy with work and my finals but I'll try to update more frequently. I'll try *grins*

LOL! You've just answered yourself XD... Exams, classes, work, rehearsals, study, training... I have no life right now... *cries* :cry: :cry: :cry: ... But the update cheers me up a little! XD XD :P


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Both hands on her hips, her assertive voice directed towards the stubborn bunny.

The funny part of this is that I can't imagine Kamei's voice unless it's a passive voice... heh...  :mon sweat:

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Eri relished being in her best friend’s arms, for it felt familiarly comfortable. Her eyes grew heavy and she would have been on her way to dreamland if not for an ‘ahem’ from the bunny.

 XD Damn...

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“So you’re going to New York? To live with Auntie?” Risa asked.

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WTF?!?! You aren't searching for an excuse to leave free way to TanaShige, right??? XD XD :P

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Besides there’s no reason for me to stay’

Awwww... Poor Eri... :cry: :cry:

Now go and write more~ XD

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Re: Solus (Chapter 13 Part 2 - 26/04)
« Reply #131 on: April 28, 2010, 09:06:42 AM »
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Eri contemplated using her Eriens powers instead, unable to decide between ‘Open Sesame’  and ‘Abracadabra’.
OH EM GEE  :rofl:  :rofl:  :rofl:

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Her eyes grew heavy and she would have been on her way to dreamland if not for an ‘ahem’ from the bunny.
She's that sleepy  :lol:  :lol:  :lol:

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“Oh stop overreacting Sayu. That’s Risa’s job,”
XD

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“Great! Then it’s settled then. Eri’s birthday celebration cum Christmas party on the 23rd.”
Yay! Throw some alcohol in and slurring and flirting and 'blank, blank, blank'... you know, the things that come with alcohol's presence and party   :mon innocent:  :hee:  :gmon sing:

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Re: Solus (Chapter 13 Part 2 - 26/04)
« Reply #132 on: April 28, 2010, 05:13:46 PM »
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We seems to be losing TanaKame-ist nowadays
Yeah, I wonder why is that?

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@ C - I love your avi! Sayu is definitely Reina's. TanaShige :wub:
:yep:  and Eri also Reina's, TanaKamei  :D

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Eri contemplated using her Eriens powers instead, unable to decide between ‘Open Sesame’ and ‘Abracadabra’.
:rofl:

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Her eyes grew heavy and she would have been on her way to dreamland if not for an ‘ahem’from the bunny
LOL such an adorkable person  :heart:

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‘Besides there’s no reason for me to stay’
Dammit, stay and fight for Reina’s love! --> TanaKamei mode on  XD
« Last Edit: April 28, 2010, 05:20:54 PM by pretend_2besome1 »


TakaSemaru  :heart:

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Re: Solus (Chapter 13 Part 2 - 26/04)
« Reply #133 on: April 29, 2010, 03:56:17 AM »
Something tells me Eri won't be able to leave for some reason. Well actually I got that from how she and Jun just met. I mean (thinking logically, this is rare from me btw XD) You wouldn't intro Jun into Eri's life then let her run off. What's the point of that then right?

Awww Sayu (is hawt) forgives the turtle too easily. And why didn't she grab hold of her longer when she was in her arms? :P

Will we get a Risa POV for this part? Seems like it would be funny :D

PS: I wanna go to New York with Kame!! *whines* Oh and yes, having the chapter focused on Eri is alright ^^

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Solus (Chapter 14 - 31/07)
« Reply #134 on: July 31, 2010, 10:34:31 AM »
:mon pray2: My sincerest apologies for not responding to the comments and not updating earlier. Work is sucking my time away. I really :heart: the comments. Really! XD A special dedication to D for the friendly reminder to update...


Chapter 14

Occasional laughter could be heard from the Niigaki household as the family enjoyed a not-so-quiet dinner. Risa protested loudly at how her mother seems to favour Ai and her sister over her. Mr Niigaki ate his dinner quietly, injecting his own humour occasionally to add to the laughter. Ai had to politely turn down Mrs Niigaki’s invitation to spend Christmas night with the family, citing that she was committed to attend her family’s. The elder lady was disappointed of course but nevertheless understood. Ai is, afterall, a part of her family now.

“I think my mum likes you more than me.” Risa grumbled, much to Ai’s amusement, when they retreated to her bedroom after dinner.

Airi was made to clean up since Ai and Risa were in charge of cooking for the day. Not that Ai minded. In fact she was happy that she was treated as part of the family instead of just a Risa’s best friend. Moreover, spending more time with her girlfriend’s family allow her to enjoy the warmth of family love and at the same time, allows her to score some brownie points with the family.

The older girl covered her mouth to hide the laughter that threaten to explode and tried to avoid the smacking on the shoulder from her girlfriend.

“Forget that. Check this out!” Ai gingerly pulled something out of her pocket.

“A mistletoe?”

Ai nodded, her nose crinkled with as a proud grin spread across her face. “I confiscated it from a student this morning. I’m such a genius.”

“Ai-chan! You shouldn’t abuse your authority, you know.”

“Aww Risa. You can’t tell me you don’t like my idea.” Ai dangled the mistletoe over Risa and kissed the girl lightly on the lips. She stepped back and looked at her girl’s cute face.

Risa pouted at the short contact and took the initiative to kiss Ai this time. This time it lasted a long nice time. They broke apart only when there was a loud knock on the door.

“Is it safe to open the door?” A familiar voice asked, not without a hint of teasing tone.

Risa sighed and opened the wooden door. “What?!” she asked irritably.

“Mum asked if Ai wants some dessert.” Airi replied.

Risa turned towards Ai and pretended to be offended.

“See what I mean?”

~~~

Reina looked up from her blueprint, the dull ache at the back of her neck nudging her to take a break. She absentmindedly glanced at the wall clock, not just to check the hours she spent working on her project, but also for another purpose. Stretching her numb muscles, she got up and made her way to the kitchen.

It’s late,’ she thought and yet there was no sign of the return of her housemate. ‘Wait, why should I care.’

After all, it was the turtle who was distancing herself even though nothing was said out loud.  There was no need to. Eri would keep herself busy in the kitchen or her own room whenever she was in the living room, vice versa. This has been going on for the past four days and they have barely spoken save for the usual morning greetings. ‘What’s her problem anyway,’ Reina snorted. But then again, it is late. Plus Eri had always informed her whenever she’s sleeping over Sayu’s place. She closed the door of the very bare fridge and grabbed her coat and scarf.

The cold winter air hit her. She pulled her jacket closer to her body and grudgingly trodded down the pavement, not really knowing where exactly to go, and muttering to herself ‘Stupid Kame. Baka. Aho’.

She prowled the street keeping very close to the shop windows, looking in and looking on, which is admitted a stupid idea since majority of the shops are closed and not even Eri is silly enough to get locked up in the shops. But still…

Giving up, Reina decided to make her way back when she heard squeaking sound from the playground. She squinted her wonky eyes. Is that a flying turtle? What the hell is she doing, playing the swing in the middle of the cold night? If there was a way to be relieved and annoyed at the same time, that was what she was at that moment.

“I don’t think this is the best way to return to your planet.”

“Reina?! What are you doing here?” Eri exclaimed, surprised to see Reina there.

“I could ask you the same. I was, uh, on my way to the…konbini. You ate everything in the fridge!”

Eri giggled. Guilty as charged. “Sorry?” 

Eri sighed and sat on the swing next to Eri’s. She gently pushed herself forward, rocking herself to and back on the swing.

“So what’s wrong?” Reina asked.

“Nothing?” Eri looked away from Reina. Her hands are beginning to numb from gripping too hard on the cold metal of the swing.

“Oh yeah I can see the fun of playing at midnight in the middle of winter,” Reina replied sarcastically, “So what’s wrong?”

“I’m just thinking of how much I’ll miss of this place if I leave,” Eri sighed. ‘Especially you.’

Reina was almost thrown off the swing when she heard that. “Y-You’re l-l-leaving?” she sputtered.

Eri hesitated before nodding slowly.

“But what about school? What about your friends here? What about…”

Reina paused. What about…what, she wondered. What did she want to say? Why did she suddenly lose her cool? Reina stared at the sandy ground while she let Eri’s words sink in.

She’s leaving. She’s leaving me…just like everyone else.

Reina snorted. Of course she will. They all did. What made Eri any different from the others? This was the very reason Reina never wanted to get close to anyone in the first place.

Reina listened quietly as Eri spoke of her family, how she misses her mother and how her mother wanted her by her side. She began to think of her own family, wondering how they are doing and if they are thinking of her as she dreamt of them night after night. At least Eri still has a family to return to. And who is Reina to stop Eri from being with her family?

“To have a home to return to. That’s a privilege not everyone is lucky enough to have. It’s nice to have a family waiting for you.”

Eri blinked at Reina’s remarks. Not what she was anticipating but she nodded after a while, reaching out and squeezing the younger’s hand in understanding.

“Nee Reina, will you miss me when I’m gone? Oh of course you will. Say yes. Come on, it’s a yes right?” Eri playfully punched Reina’s shoulder.

“Baka, that hurts!” Reina complained. “If I didn’t know better, I’d think I’m talking to Sayumi right now.”

“I think you and Sayumi make a cute couple,” Eri said, rather slowly. She swallowed the lump that was slowly forming in her throat.

Reina tilted her head and gave Eri a look that clearly says ‘What the hell are you talking about?’

The older girl just shook her head and shut up. This was not something she intended to talk about. Oh why must Reina mention Sayu’s name?

They sat there in silence. There was nothing more to say, really. Until Eri sneezed. Reina chuckled and stood up from the swing, making her way in front of the turtle and wrapping her scarf around the turtle’s neck.

“Let’s go home.” she suggested. The sudden grumblings from her stomach seemed to disagree though.

Eri giggled and said, “On second thought, let’s grab some food from the konbini first.”

They walked together, hand in hand, under the starless night. Reina relished the warmth from Eri’s hand and decided against letting go. They will come to a point where each will separate and go their own ways, Reina noted with aching realisation, and she knew Eri will leave her one day.

But then again, she was never more glad to have known Eri.

‘Stupid aho. Of course I’ll miss you.’

~~~ :D ~~~

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Re: Solus (Chapter 14 - 31/07)
« Reply #135 on: July 31, 2010, 11:23:58 AM »
Wait, who are you? What is this story? Hmm, it seems familiar, but it hasn't been updated in so long, my memory of it is a little fuzzy, lol. J/k j/k, I do remember what this is about.

Ah, a lovely dinner with the Niigaki's, do they know Ai and Risa are dating yet? I wonder how Ai's Christmas with her family will go. Not well, I'm guessing.

And Eri finally breaks the news to Reina, but will they realize their feelings in enough time for them to both find happiness? So many questions and so few answers, only the next chapters will give us answers.

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Re: Solus (Chapter 14 - 31/07)
« Reply #136 on: August 01, 2010, 05:31:14 AM »
nice update :lol:

yeah kinda was wonder when you were going to get around to updating this fic, although the TanaKame bit was really funny
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Re: Solus (Chapter 14 - 31/07)
« Reply #137 on: August 02, 2010, 12:28:02 PM »
Another story I missed when it first came out, I think, I actually couldn't remember if I read it or not  :doh:

Liking the story anyway hmm will Eri going to America make Reina go into action?

my favorite bits have been the Sayu/Jun arguments so I hope we have more of them  :lol:

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Re: Solus (Chapter 14 - 31/07)
« Reply #138 on: August 04, 2010, 01:34:31 PM »
Nuuuu~! they haven't started their love story yet and Eri's already leaving?!?!
That means... Aika has a chance to Reina...but then there's Sayu...... so... so.. I'll just wait for the next update.. XD

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Re: Solus (Chapter 14 - 31/07)
« Reply #139 on: August 06, 2010, 08:35:37 PM »
Takagaki is so sweet  :heart: :heart: Ai-chan like a piece more in the family? kyaa! so cute.
Reina was so shocking because of Eri leaving. Actually, I didn't expect that.
Accept it Reina! You like the turtle ¬¬ . Don't allow she leaves like all people.  :cry:
moar moar ~~ please  :cow: :cow: :cow:

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