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Re: Taking Chances-Chapter 8
« Reply #180 on: October 05, 2009, 06:24:01 PM »
@ rndmnwierd: I don't know about the trains where you are, but the ones I recall didn't smell so good, in fact I recall wanting to spew....

@ badsaints: I wouldn't put too much hope in it yet because I would really hate to disappoint  :-\

Chapter 9

The moment she stepped out of the washroom an attack of different aromas filled her nose.  She went down and noticed Risa setting the table.

“Hey the food is ready, so grab a chair”  instructed Risa as she paced from the open kitchen to the table.

“Gaki-san!  Sugoi!!!!  You made curry?” Reina looked at Risa with awe as Risa placed 2 plates of curry rice onto the table.

Risa beamed “Yep, Niigaki-style.  Try some!”  Risa sat down across of Reina and waited for Reina’s reaction as Reina scooped a spoonful into her mouth.  “Well?..”  Reina tried not to grin at Risa’s impatient look.  “Well?  Well??”

“OISHI!!!!”

“USO!!!!” as Risa scooped a spoonful and tried her own cooking.  “Yatta!!! I was so worried I screwed up somewhere in the process”

“It’s amazing Gaki-san! Better than anything I could make on my own”

Risa gushed “Awww you’re just saying that.  But I am glad you like it”  They continued to eat the food until they were so stuffed they could barely move.

“Gaki-san you should come here more often, that way I…er… my family can taste your cooking”

“Maybe we could do something like this with the group”  Reina cringed a bit at the comment but quickly covered it with a smile

“Yeah…sure.  Anyways since you cooked the wonderful meal, I should clean”  Reina rose from her seat and started picking up the empty plates.  Risa placed a hand on Reina’s arm.

“Well you prepared the yakiniku too, so how about we clean up together”  Risa started picking up other empty plates and walked into the kitchen.  Reina froze at her spot, reminiscing at the touch that left a tingle on her skin.  “Hey are you going to bring the rest of it in?” hollered Risa who was washing some of the dishes already.

“Coming!” Reina rushed over to the kitchen with her dishes.  “So how do you want to divide the work?  You soap, Reina water?”

“Sure, that sounds like a plan!” Risa reached over to grab a plate just as Reina was.  Their hands touched, which caused both of them to look at each other.  

Reina pulled her hand away after a few seconds, while Risa smiled “Gomen”

“No worries!  Let’s get these dishes out of the way”

Reina tried concentrating on washing her dishes but it was difficult considering she was also trying hard not to blush.

“Hey you are doing it wrong!  Let me show you!” Risa put her hands onto Reina’s and moved Reina’s hands showing her how it should be done.  On the other hand, Reina was blushing deeper and deeper, her face feeling hot.  “See, this is how you do it” exclaimed Risa without looking at Reina.

“Er…hold on, I need to use the bathroom” exclaimed Reina as she quickly dashed to the washroom without waiting for a reply.

Reina locked the door and opened the tap.  She splashed cold water onto her face lightly slapping her face. ‘Stop blushing!  Stop blushing! STOP BLUSHING! You’re making a fool of yourself!’ Reina continuously splashed water on her face until her face didn’t feel so hot.

~KNOCK KNOCK~ ”Tanakacchi, are you okay in there?”

Reina turned off the faucet, and quickly wiped her face and hands before stepping out of the bathroom. “Er…yeah!  Your curry was too good that I must have eaten it too quickly”  Reina smiled weakly while placing a hand on her stomache.  Risa was about to check on Reina’s stomache but Reina walked by “I’ll go finish my part now”

“OI!  Maybe you shouldn’t” lectured Risa as she chased after Reina into the kitchen.  Reina continued rinsing the dishes until she felt Risa’s hand on her forearm.  “Here let me finish.  You’re not feeling well”

“Dame Gaki-san!  You did half so I should do the other half.  Don’t worry!  I am fine now.  GanbaReina!!!” Reina exclaimed raising a fist in the air.

Risa chuckled and reached out to pinch Reina on the nose.  “You’re too cute sometimes.  Sayumin might have competition”

Reina beamed. “That’s right!!!!  Kitty cat can be cuter than any bunny or turtle” Reina wiped her hands when she was done.  “So Gaki-san, do you want to do anything in particular?”

Risa stroked her chin in deep thought “Hmmmm,  I am too tired to do anything that requires travelling far and it isn’t early so…. How about a nice walk?”

“That’s a great idea!! That way we can walk off some of the food we just ate.  We should bring a hoodie though, it tends to be a bit more chilly at night here.  I’ll go grab you one” exclaimed Reina as she dashed to her room.

“I have a green on in my suitcase!” yelled Risa as she put on her shoes.

“Since you are wearing your favourite color, I decided to wear mine as well”  Reina handed Risa her green hoodie and produced one of her own from behind… purple.

“Ah Tanakacchi, you’re getting into your yankii mode?” teased Risa as she ran out of the door just before Reina could attack.

“OI! Gaki-san you get back here” Reina checked she had keys before quickly locking her door and chasing after her senpai.

Risa was waiting for Reina at the corner of her street “Took you long enough” said Risa as she poked Reina on the forehead

Reina swatted Risa on the arm “I had to make sure I locked the door, besides I knew you wouldn’t get far”

“EH~! USO!!! USO!!!  How come?”

“Because you don’t know where you are going” laughed Reina as she hooked her arm with Risa “Let’s go!  I know a nice park nearby”
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Re: Taking Chances-Chapter 9
« Reply #181 on: October 05, 2009, 07:17:39 PM »
Dinner time. Lawls Gaki, you have no idea the effect you're having on our little kitty.

In my city we don't really use the train, unless you're traveling to another city all together and even then, most people tend to use the greyhound bus. Actually, I can't recall the last time I saw a passenger train in Richmond...

I know they have subways up in D.C. because I rode one when I was young, but Richmond, the most used mode of transportation is the city bus. Or car. Or bicycle.

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Re: Taking Chances-Chapter 9
« Reply #182 on: October 06, 2009, 07:03:23 AM »
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*Speechless*

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Their hands touched, which caused both of them to look at each other. 

Reina pulled her hand away after a few seconds, while Risa smiled “Gomen”

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“Because you don’t know where you are going” laughed Reina as she hooked her arm with Risa “Let’s go!  I know a nice park nearby”
:luvluv1: :luvluv2: :mon lovelaff:
*replaced the words with smileys*

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Re: Taking Chances-Chapter 9
« Reply #183 on: October 08, 2009, 10:06:11 AM »
What's gonna happen in the park? Huh *wriggles brows*

XD Just kidding. I love how you can make even simple actions appear so sweet :wub:

Somehow I can imagine you doing the things TanaGaki are doing :)

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Re: Taking Chances-Chapter 9
« Reply #184 on: October 08, 2009, 06:19:09 PM »
@  rndmnwierd: Gaki-san has that effect on not just the kitty..... (oops! am I foreseeing something)  Well the trains smell alright when it isn't packed with people who were sweating to catch it, otherwise...you get the idea

@cogi_yoshi:  :? speechless???  Nande??  I think I might have to lower the ideas I have, I am getting a toothache at rereading it  :lol:

@ lil_hamz: I guess because when you like someone and are alone with them, even the smallest gestures seem to make you smile.  You only imagine that because I happen to be the writer right???

Chapter 10

They walked arm in arm in silence just enjoying the calm night and each other’s company.

“Nee nee Tanakacchi, how are things?”

“What do you mean Gaki-san?  I spend most of my time with the group so you should know”

“I know that!  I meant your personal life, like your studies or friends, families, boyfriends…”

“BOYFRIEND? No Gaki-san I don’t have anything special happening with any of those nor do I have a boyfriend… what about you?”

“Everyone at home is doing great, taking their usual trips to Hawaii”

“And boyfriend?” Reina was more interested in knowing Risa’s love life than anything

“Haha no Tanakacchi.  I don’t have a boyfriend.”  Reina let out a sigh of relief without Risa knowing

“Nee Gaki-san, what about a girlfriend?”

“EEEHHHH!~~~”

“What….what I mean is, do you think it is alright to have a girlfriend as opposed to a boyfriend?” Risa stayed quiet for a while then turned and stared at Reina, which worried Reina greatly about her secret being exposed “Gaki-san it’s just a question.  I mean its okay if you don’t….”

“I think it is okay.  There are many out there that prefer the same sex”

Their conversation ended there as neither knew how to continue from there, they just continued walking.  The suspense was killing Reina, she wanted to know if Risa was having feelings like she did.  Yes she knew she should keep her feelings to herself but she also hoped that there was a chance for her.  Reina decided to be bold and just ask the question that lingered on her mind.

“Gaki-san, do….do you…um…what I mean is would you like to have a girlfriend?” 

Risa stopped in her tracks.  Reina stared at Risa wondering what was going on in her mind. “No I don’t have a girlfriend nor a boyfriend…however….”

“However what?”

“However, I think I am beginning to develop feelings for this one individual”

“Who Gaki-san?”

“Now that is for me to know and for you to never find out” laughed Risa as she jogged away to a nearby bench.

Reina felt disheartened ‘Gaki-san already had someone else.  There goes my chances!!!!! She’ll never like me the way I do…but I guess I expected that much.  I don’t even know why I even have hope on something that will never be.  She doesn’t see me as anything but a simple kouhai, why do I even bother…but then again if a kouhai is the best I can do for her, I will do just that!  GanbaReina!!!!’

“Tanakacchi!!!  What are you doing standing there?  Come here!!!!” Risa hollered and waved for Reina to where she was.  Reina jolted out of her thought rampage and jogged up to sit beside Risa.  “Nee what about you?”

“Me?  No there isn’t anyone that has caught my attention”

“Maybe there is someone close by, you just don’t know it.  So Tanakacchi what type catches one of the shining stars of Morning Musume’s attention?”

“Gaki-san let’s go home.  I’m feeling tired now” Reina didn’t want to continue the conversation, her head and her heart was screaming out in pain.

“What wrong?  Do you have a fever?  Where is your family doctor?”  Risa bombarded Reina with questions as she felt Reina’s forehead.  Risa then took off her hoodie and placed it around Reina.

“Whoa Gaki-san!!!!  First take back your hoodie, its cold out and second I feel a headache coming on that’s all.  No need to call my doctor” Reina took off Risa’s hoodie and placed it back over Risa’s shoulders.  Before Risa could protest, Reina started walking towards the direction of her house.

“Hey wait up, let me help you” hollered Risa as she chased after Reina.  Reina just shook her head as she continued to walk.  She felt Risa’s arms around her as if supporting her weight.

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When they arrived back at Reina’s house, Risa was persistent in helping Reina get ready for bed.  Asking her if she wanted something to eat, something to drink, needed more blankets, etc.

“Gaki-san!!!! CHILL!!!!  I’m okay honestly, let’s just get some sleep, its been a long day for both of us” Reina grabbed onto Risa’s arm preventing her from moving about.

“Okay…okay you win.  So do you have any futons?”

“Um…hehe…no?”

“Okay…then I guess I’ll sleep on the couch in the living room”

“No need Gaki-san…um we can share my bed”  Reina climbed into her bed and settled in, then she patted the space beside her.  Risa smiled and climbed in as well.  “Goodnight Gaki-san”

“Goodnight Tanakacchi.  You better have plans for tomorrow”  Risa felt Reina nodding beside her as she slowly fell asleep.

‘At least if you don’t know I can still enjoy these moments’ thought Reina as she slowly closed her eyes to sleep.

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Re: Taking Chances-Chapter 10
« Reply #185 on: October 08, 2009, 07:19:54 PM »
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“However, I think I am beginning to develop feelings for this one individual”
Hmmmm..... :mon dunno:


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“Now that is for me to know and for you to never find out”
Double Hmmmm.....  :mon determined:


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Maybe there is someone close by, you just don’t know it.
Someone huh? Like sitting next to Reina right now? :mon innocent:


GanbaReina!!!

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“No need Gaki-san…um we can share my bed”  Reina climbed into her bed and settled in, then she patted the space beside her.  Risa smiled and climbed in as well.  “Goodnight Gaki-san”
Sweet! :mon crazyinlove:

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Re: Taking Chances-Chapter 10
« Reply #186 on: October 09, 2009, 12:30:07 AM »
^ You pretty much mentioned everything I was thinking about.

Except, I'm suddenly reminded of Kame being so persistent to go. Also I'm not sure whether to make something of Risa fretting over Reina's health or not. She does seem the type, but at the same time, maybe a hint?

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Re: Taking Chances-Chapter 10
« Reply #187 on: October 09, 2009, 10:51:12 AM »
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“Nee Gaki-san, what about a girlfriend?”

 XD That was bold


Reina  :heart: Risa is  :wub: and somewhere deep within tells me Risa  :heart: Reina too  :wriggly:



I read Taking Chances just a few days ago in one sitting  :grin: and I like it  :cow: but I forgot to post a comment gomen  :kneelbow:

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Re: Taking Chances-Chapter 10
« Reply #188 on: October 15, 2009, 05:25:00 AM »
@ badsaints: well that is still undetermined if Risa was hinting at Reina... anything can change at the moment right???

@ rndmnwierd: Ahhh~ you've caught on about Eri still present!!!! Why is she so persistent in going??? Risa fretting over Reina hmmmm..... these questions sure are worth thinking about when I continue to develop the story.   ;)

@ kRisZ: Bold describes my view of Reina though don't you think????  Again the end pairings are undetermined at the moment but reading all of TC in one sitting???? How are the eyes???  XD I'm glad you like it and thank you for reading and don't fret not commenting before, you are commenting now aren't you???

Chapter 11

For the next couple of days, Reina took Risa around to shop at the Canal City Hakata and eat things like mentaiko, Hakata ramen and motsunabe .  It surprised both the amount that they could shop, bags and bags filled Reina’s room.  It was just 2 days before they had to return back to work and each person was busy packing up their own suitcases.

“Mou Tanakacchi, I blame you that I bought so many things” pouted Risa as she tried to close her overflowing suitcase

“Don’t blame me if you couldn’t help buying all those things” replied Reina who was glancing over her closet wondering what things to pack with her.

“So now what do you suggest I do?” Risa finally decided to give up trying to close her suitcase

“I could lend you another suitcase”

“But then I would be lugging around 2 suitcases, not 1 but 2!” Risa stressed by lifting one finger at first and then shoved it out in front and lifted another finger

“Well you asked for a solution didn’t you?  And now I delivered”

“But, but then it would be so…tiring for me and…and...” Risa looked up in Reina’s direction hoping she would get the message

Reina closed her own suitcase and turned to see Risa looking at her with puppy dog eyes.  “Fine fine!  I’ll help you carry the second one until you can get it home”

“*SQUEAL*  You’re the best kouhai a person can have” as Risa jumped up and pecked Reina on the check “Thanks Tanakacchi”

‘Yeah the best kouhai, nothing more.  At least I got a kiss from Gaki-san.  If only it wasn’t because I am her kouhai but stop dreaming Tanaka Reina, you know that this is the best for everyone’ 

“Nee Tanakacchi which suitcase can I borrow?”

“Huh?!  Anyone you want” ‘Since I’ve made a decision to not tell it doesn’t mean I can’t create good memories for myself.’  “Nee Gaki-san let’s go to the yuenchi tomorrow”

“EH~!!! Yuenchi?  Sure!  But no jet coasters!!!”

“Whatever you want Gaki-san.  I’ll be bringing my camera so we can take lots of pictures together.  You better not look cuter than me or I’ll get upset!!!!”

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‘My last day alone with Gaki-san Ossu!!!!  I’m make the best of it!!!’

“OI!!!! Gaki-san are you ready yet??? The yuenchi doesn’t wait baka!!!” as Reina put on her shoes getting ready to go to Ohori Park

“I’m coming, I’m coming…and did you just call me ‘baka’?  Why you little runt!” Risa bopped Reina on the head

“Itai!! You’re not that much taller than me I hope you know” Reina rubbed the top of her head as she waited for Risa to put on her shoes

“Serves you right baka” aa Rias walked out the door

“Yeah yeah let’s go before the lines get longer than they already are”  Reina locked the door and made sure she had everything before joining the awaiting Risa

As predicted by Reina, there were lots of people around as it is.  Because Risa and Reina were idols their clothing had to be discreet and disguised perfectly.

“Nee Rei-san, its so crowded!!!”

“Only because it took you long enough to get out of my door, but this is considerably moderately okay”

“EH~~~~!!!! Moderately okay??? USO!!!!!”

“Let’s go Reaction Queen!!!!” Reina chuckled as she guided her senpai into the park

Throughout the day Reina would snap pictures of Risa and herself some known to Risa others…. Well not as known.  Although they were constantly worried that someone would recognize them, they still managed to have loads of fun going rides and playing games.  They were exceptionally careful when it came to rides that might knock their hats off.  The last thing they needed was for people to know 2 members of Morning Musume were at the amusement park and start crowding them.  Before they knew it, dusk was quickly approaching indicating that they should head home soon.

“One more ride Gaki-san?”

“I don’t know, we have to wake up early tomorrow”

“Onegai, onegai” Reina placed her hands together pleading for one more ride

“Fine!  Which one?”

“Follow me” Reina grabbed onto Risa’s hand and led her to…’Perfect way to end this memory’ “the largest Ferris Wheel, Sky Dream Fukuoka”  Reina took Risa’s hand and led her to the line, fortunately it wasn’t a long one .

“Ferris wheel eh?  Nice choice to end the night.  That way we can see the night view before we leave.  Awww Tanakacchi, did you want your future boyfriend to do this with you?”  Risa nudged Reina on her arm.

“Gaki-san yamette!!!  I just thought we should take it easy on our last night here” ‘Our last memory here’

By the time they reached Reina’s house they were both exhausted.  Risa immediately changed and went to bed whereas Reina did a last check of things as well as waited for Risa to be in deep sleep.  As soon as Reina felt that Risa was or should be totally asleep, Reina picked up her camera from her bag and zoomed in on Risa’s face SNAP~ ‘She’s just perfect, not a flaw in her.  Please stay as you are Gaki-san’

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Re: Taking Chances-Chapter 11
« Reply #189 on: October 15, 2009, 08:17:59 AM »
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“But, but then it would be so…tiring for me and…and...” Risa looked up in Reina’s direction hoping she would get the message

Reina closed her own suitcase and turned to see Risa looking at her with puppy dog eyes.

 :lol: :lol:

Poor Reina, she's been pretty strong here though.

At first, in the prologue, I thought Gaki would end up with Ai, but maybe she'll end up with Eri?

So hurry up with the next chapter! I can't hardly wait!

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Re: Taking Chances-Chapter 11
« Reply #190 on: October 16, 2009, 12:30:44 PM »
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“But then I would be lugging around 2 suitcases, not 1 but 2!” Risa stressed by lifting one finger at first and then shoved it out in front and lifted another finger

“Well you asked for a solution didn’t you?  And now I delivered”

How about leaving some behind that way she can use them next visit   :twisted:  :grin:


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As soon as Reina felt that Risa was or should be totally asleep, Reina picked up her camera from her bag and zoomed in on Risa’s face SNAP~ ‘She’s just perfect, not a flaw in her.

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Re: Taking Chances-Chapter 11
« Reply #191 on: October 18, 2009, 08:21:43 AM »
I'm loving the TanaGaki pairing even more.

Haha, it was so funny where Risa looked at Reina with those eyes. :lol:

And I'm sorry for not commenting here as much.

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Re: Taking Chances-Chapter 11
« Reply #192 on: October 18, 2009, 05:12:21 PM »
Cute date! But I have to give credit to Reina for holding back the way she did, prefering to have fun with with Risa as a kouhai when she felt her confessions will invite awkwardness later.

Reina taking photo of sleeping Risa is very sweet, though a little creepy XD

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Re: Taking Chances-Chapter 11
« Reply #193 on: October 19, 2009, 03:13:27 PM »
@ rndmnwierd: You'll just have to wait and see how it goes because....well I don't even know  :lol:  I may be getting ideas as the story goes along

@  kRisZ: Dang it!  I knew I should get someone to read my chapters beforehand so that I can get ideas!!! Why didn't I think of leaving the extra clothes for next time  :banghead:

@ Hotaru: more converted Tanagaki fans GETS!!!  :lol:  and don't worry about the lack of comments, better late than never right?

@ badsaints: Point taken, Reina is still unsure about Risa's "preference" so indeed if the confession was made with that being unknown it totally would invite a lot of awkwardness as friends and as members of the same group.

Awww...I'm pretty sure there are people around you that you think look cute sleeping, hence the camera snapping  :lol:

Chapter 12

“So Gaki-san what is our first job when we get back?” the duo were on the train heading back to Tokyo.

“Our new song and PV and then most likely we will be busy with promotional work.  I believe we are going to the country side for the PV.  Didn’t you check your memos?”

“Naw…I never do, I just ask someone who has”

“Mou Tanakacchi, stop being lazy!” lectured Risa as she looked at Reina sternly

“What can I say Gaki-san, I’m a kitty cat” beamed Reina

Risa shook her head, “Anyways thanks for lending me one of your suitcases and for carrying it *Yawn*”

“No problem Gaki-san.  Are you still tired?  We didn’t sleep late last night, so you shouldn’t be that sleepy”

“I can’t help it, train rides make me sleepy…just let me rest my eyes for a bit” as Risa closed her eyes and laid her head on Reina’s shoulder “So comfortable”

‘Only for you Gaki-san, only for you’

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Once they walked into the building, Risa was attacked into a great big bear hug, which caused Risa to drop the handle of her suitcase.

“Gaki-san!!!! I’ve missed you!!!!  How were your days off???”

“Ooomph!!!  K-Kame!!!!  H-hold on women!!!! Y-you’re c-choking me!!!” Risa tried to breathe and get out of Eri’s bear hug

“Yeah Eri!!! Let Gaki-san at least put down her things first”  lectured Sayumi as she walked slowly from behind Eri.  Eri let go of Risa and stuck her tongue out at Sayumi.  “So Reina how were your days off?  What did you guys do?” asked Sayumi as she hugged Reina

“It was relaxing Sayu but Gaki-san here over bought things” replied Reina as she pointed to the second suitcase she was carrying.

“Mou Tanakacchi, it wasn’t my intention! It really was your fault for showing me all those stores”

“Oh~~ Gaki-san I wanna see what you bought” both Sayumi and Eri looked at Gaki-san with puppy dog eyes to get permission to go through her possessions.

“Hora Tanakacchi, look at what you’ve done!”  Reina just gave Risa a ‘I don’t know what you are talking about’ look

Risa gave up on trying to get Reina to help her as she turned to her other kouhais “You’ll get to see it later, we should head towards the recording studio first or we’ll be late”

“But…but Gaki-san we still have 1 hour” whined Eri as tugged on Risa’s arm

“Yeah well I haven’t eaten yet and I need to place my things down first” as Risa walked off with a whining Eri in tow

Reina watched as they both disappeared into the elevator.  “Nee Reina how are you?” asked Sayumi which snapped Reina out of her staring

“I’m good Sayu, had some fun and relaxation”

“How was staying alone with Gaki-san?”

“EH~?  What do you mean?”

“Reina let’s take a walk to the cafeteria” ‘Why does Sayu sound different today?  This isn’t just a normal chit-chat session is it?’ “Let me help you with one of those” as Sayumi took one of the suitcases and started walking toward the cafeteria.

Reina followed Sayumi silently wondering where Sayumi was taking this conversation.  It kinda freaked Reina out a bit because it sounded that Sayumi’s question held more meaning than what it seems.  Sayumi chose a secluded table in the corner and sat herself down waiting for Reina

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Re: Taking Chances-Chapter 12
« Reply #194 on: October 19, 2009, 03:34:25 PM »
Cliffhanger!! :banghead: :banghead: :lol:

Oh, Kame. You're so obvious. GakiKame is definitely not one of my favorite pairings, but I guess if it ends up that way, I'll have to deal.

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Re: Taking Chances-Chapter 12
« Reply #195 on: October 20, 2009, 08:29:40 PM »
@ rndmnwierd : That wasn't suppose to be a cliffhanger, that was just me not knowing how to continue the story  :lol:  As to pairings, like I have said before I don't know how the final pairings will be so you'll just have to wait and see.  It may not be Gakikame

Chapter 13

“Reina we haven’t had a chance to have a heart to heart talk lately nee?” Reina thought about it for a moment before slowly nodding  “You know you can come to me to talk about anything right?” again Reina nodded, unsure what Sayumi wanted to talk to her about.  “I think you and I are on the same boat right now”

“EH~???”

“You like Gaki-san right?” Sayumi asked while she starred out the window.  Reina paused for a moment ‘How did she know?  Am I that obvious?’  Sayumi having not receiving a response, turned from the window to look at Reina “No you weren’t obvious Reina.  I just know you better than you think and especially in this area because you showed signs that tells me that you and I are on the same boat”

Reina snapped out of her thoughts “No I don’t Sayu and I don’t know what boat you are talking about”

“I figured you’ll deny it” chuckled Sayumi as she shook her head “You like Gaki-san but you’re afraid to confess to her right?” Reina decided to remain silent “I know exactly how you feel because I too like one of our own”

Reina who had been avoiding Sayumi’s eyes finally turned to look at her in slight shock at the mini confession Sayumi had just produced “Er.. Sayu of course I like Gaki-san, just like family like you are to me” denied Reina

Sayumi again shook her head “No Reina, please don’t lie to me, it’s an insult on my intelligence.  But its okay, I wanted to talk to you about something that has been weighing heavily on my mind lately.  As I was saying I’ve developed feelings for one of our own and I don’t know what to do about it.  I’m afraid they don’t feel the same for me, I’m afraid that I’ll lose the relationship we have now, I’m afraid it will ruin the chemistry between the members….”

Reina looked at Sayumi and listened to her rant, almost in tears.  She could sense the mental turmoil that Sayumi had been going through so before Sayumi breaks down, Reina took hold of her hand.  Sayumi looked up at Reina with tears threatening to fall.  “Sayu, I can feel that this is not something that will take a few minutes so why don’t we have a serious talk about it tonight?  I promise that I will listen whole-heartedly.” Reina gave Sayumi a sincere look “I don’t think Tsunku or the rest of the group wants to see a red-eyed Sayu at the recording studio.  So how about we share rooms tonight?”  Sayumi wiped her eyes and nodded “Good! Now who’s the cutest in Morning Musume???”

“USA-CHAN PEACE!!! SAYUMI OF COURSE” as Sayumi did her signature mark.  Reina chuckled at the bunny’s change in mood.  Sayumi then frantically looked around, “Er…let’s get your things to a safe place before we go to the recording studio shall we?”

“Sayu, are you only saying that because you need to see where you can find a mirror?”

“Well of course, what else did you think??”  ‘The narcissist strikes again’

“Wouldn’t dream of having you actually helping me for the sake of helping me” replied Reina as she got up, grabbed her suitcase and headed towards the elevators.

“Gomene Reina.  I didn’t mean it like that!  Well I did but you know I would always help out” apologized Sayumi as she chased after Reina.

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Re: Taking Chances-Chapter 13-updated 10/20
« Reply #196 on: October 21, 2009, 07:04:54 AM »
I was wondering if Sayu would confront Reina on her feelings, I just didn't expect it to turn into a confession of her own!
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Sayumi wiped her eyes and nodded “Good! Now who’s the cutest in Morning Musume???”

“USA-CHAN PEACE!!! SAYUMI OF COURSE”

 :lol: :lol: Of course!

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Re: Taking Chances-Chapter 13-updated 10/20
« Reply #197 on: October 21, 2009, 05:26:30 PM »
Sayu likes someone? My guess that it's Eri :)

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Re: Taking Chances-Chapter 13-updated 10/20
« Reply #198 on: October 22, 2009, 06:58:56 PM »
@ rndmnwierd: That's good to hear, which means I gave some sort of surprise in there.  Well Reina isn't the only with problems in the world right???  Gotta take that into consideration  :lol:

@ badsaints: Why Eri right away????

Chapter 14

Throughout the time Reina was waiting for her turn to record, Reina was a bit bothered at what Sayumi had confessed to her “’I too like one of our own’” and unintentionally Reina started pondering about who this person was.

‘Could it be Gaki-san too? Would Sayu be the person Gaki-san was referring to?  Chotto Matte! Gaki-san never specified if the individual was a he or a she so that is still a mystery.  What do I do if Sayu does like Gaki-san?  Sayu is my friend, she has been there for me right from the start!  Would I feel right if they got together?  What happens if Gaki-san doesn’t like Sayu and Sayu confessed?  What would happen between the Gokkies and Rokkies? Dear god lord I hope not!’

“Reina….Reina…..REINA!” boomed Yossie

“Huh?!  Sorry Yoshizawa-san, were you calling me?”

“No just that I have been calling a random name for the past 2 minutes!” Yossie sarcastically replied  “You’re up!  Are you okay?”

Reina looked around and noticed everyone looking at her “Yeah, just thinking about how to portray the song that’s all” as she got up and walked into the recording room.

When Reina finished her parts, most of the other members had left leaving Eri, Sayumi, Yossie and Miki.  It was typical for Yossie and Miki to stay since they are the leader and subleader of the group so they had to wait for everyone to finish their parts and then await for Tsunku-san’s further instructions as well as talk to the managers and staff.

Once Yossie had realized that Reina had walked out, she got up from the couch and walked over to the snoozing Eri and Sayumi who had managed to sleep on each other’s shoulders.  “Eri-chan, you’re up”.  Both Eri and Sayumi woke up, stretched a bit and rubbed their eyes before Eri got up from the couch.

Reina noticed Sayumi’s glaze following Eri as she was rubbing her eyes. ‘Could it be?  No your jumping to conclusions again!  We are Rokkies so it is natural that we look out for each other right?’ Reina chuckled at the thought mentally as she walked to where Sayumi was and sat beside her.  The minute Reina sat down, Sayumi had clutched onto her arm.

“Doushite?”

“Just needed some support.  We Rokkies stick together right?” replied Sayumi as she watched on at Eri’s recording

“Well I’ll be here when you’re done so we can get our things to go to the PV shooting”

“Er… sorry to interrupt you two but I would like to remind both of you that our PV shooting might be a stay overnight thing so after Sayumi is finished we are all to meet in the lobby in…” Yossie looks up at the hanging clock “30 mins from now”

“Roger that leader” Reina saluted Yossie which earned her a painful hair ruffling in a head lock, that stopped only when Eri walked out.

“Okay Sayumi you’re up.  Eri-chan get your things and meet everyone in the lobby in 15 mins”

“Roger that leader” as Eri saluted Yossie before dashing out the door as she realized that Yossie had gotten up from her seat and was ready to chase.

“She’ll get her consequences later” chuckled Yossie before Miki pulled her back to the sofa.

“So Yoshizawa-san and Fujimoto-san, do you have an idea as to what the story line is gonna be like?”

“I believe it will be something simple, no dancing involved just a casual PV in the country and as you’ve read the title of the song…walking.  I think it’ll be relaxing while we are shooting” answered Miki

“Yeah I think it is along those lines so that’s why I told you I don’t know if we are staying overnight but just in case we should pack something if things need to be extended to the next day”

Sayumi had stepped out of the recording room not long after and was quite happy to see Reina still there but then she scanned her surroundings….no Eri.  “Yoshizawa-san told her to get her things, you know how Eri is, she is a slob so she’ll need more time than us to get our things together” exclaimed Reina who had noticed Sayumi’s disappointed face, before she led Sayumi out to gather their belongings.

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Re: Taking Chances-Chapter 14-updated 10/22
« Reply #199 on: October 22, 2009, 11:22:02 PM »
It is Eri, isn't it? :yep: KameShige (so far one sided) I can totally love.

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