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Re: Taking Chances-Chapter 29 -updated 11/25
« Reply #280 on: November 25, 2009, 07:21:39 PM »
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How will things turn out if it was the same-sex?
I don't know how the Japanese society view it but it won't be easy.

I like how Reina was trying to be realistic but maybe she's being too hard on herself, she's stubborn with her decision.
Sayu's suggestion that's worth considering:
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“I guess you make a good point, but even if the other party is willing to take that plunge with you?  Doesn’t that mean that you are worth it and the relationship is worth it?”
I think love is worthy enough.

Sayu's been a Reina expert lately, she knows when she's sad or mad, and it's like their role was reversed. Reina used to console Sayu, now it's Sayu's turn to do the same.
I love the balance of their relationship  :mon determined:

Though I'm rather wondering at how quick Sayu seemed to recover after her decision to move on....Can she forget Eri that fast? Has she fell for someone else? *coughReinacough*  ;D


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Re: Taking Chances-Chapter 29 -updated 11/25
« Reply #281 on: November 27, 2009, 02:41:51 PM »
@ kRisZ: Glad you loved my mini manuscript  ;)

Under circumstances where she and Reina are having a discussion about Reina's problems, what would you do if you were Sayu???  What would you be thinking if you were having a major discussion about your best friends' issues and your crush runs off to their own crush, what would go through your mind?

@  rndmnwierd: I am not surprised you agree with Reina, will her chance ever come????  Will she take that step????

@ pretend_2besome1: Definitely won't be easy, I don't think in an Asian community, it is easier than a Caucasian community  :?

Well we can't have Reina being the only one to console people, she can have a weak side too, thus they are still human regardless if they are idols.

Has Sayu recovered from her decision to move on....realistically???

Chapter 30

The next day was back to work for everyone, they had to start recording their new single as well as dance lessons and PV shooting.  When the girls got to the recording room, the 2 new members were already there looking over the lyrics off the new song making their own notes.

Linlin noticed her senpai walk in and immediately she jolted up with JunJun greeting them.  JunJun who was a tad bit startled accidentally bumped her knee onto the coffee table in front of her.  Reina and Sayumi who had witnessed this giggled at their kouhais, whereas Ai-chan and Risa went up to greet them and make sure she was okay.

“They are just too cute.  Did you see how nervous they were when they saw us?” whispered Reina as she watched Ai-chan and Gaki-san talking to them about not being jittery around other members.  Although the 2 members could understand majority of what they are being told but their faces said otherwise so Reina and Sayumi laughed a little watching their leader and subleader using hand gestures trying to convey their message.

“Yeah I feel bad for scaring them though”

“Yeah right Sayu, you and I both love to show them the senpai sides of us” nudged Reina to Sayumi’s arm

“You’re right.  Oh this will be fun!”  Sayumi put her hands together in excitement.

“Don’t go overboard though, they are still studying our language”

“You’re right…now why did you have to remind me Reina?  Now I feel evil and bad”

“Why would you feel bad?  You are exceptionally poisoned tongued as it is, never knew you would feel guilty.  Remember the time you threw the mic at Ishikawa-san?”

Sayumi recalled the memory for a minute “You’re right I probably wouldn’t” Reina shook her head at her companion

The duo watched as their leader was called by Tsunku to start.  Since Risa was alone with the 2 exchange students, the evil duo decided to formally introduce themselves.

They walked up arm in arm to the scared kouhais stopping Risa’s discussion midsentence.  “Ah Tanakacchi, Sayumin come introduce yourselves to the new members”

“Tanaka Reina desu” Reina watched as JunJun, who was standing behind LinLin, side stepped from behind LinLin and gave them a slight nod whereas LinLin bowed and greeted them “Yoroshiku onegaishimasu”

“Yoroshiku onegaishimas” greeted Reina without taking her eyees off JunJun.  JunJun noticed Reina’s staring so she diverted her eyes to anywhere but Reina.  Reina giggled mentally in her mind at how her yankii eyes spooked her kouhai

Sayumi on the other hand was talking to LinLin with Risa “So LinLin how is your studying going?  Do…you…understand…what…I…am…saying?”

“Ano, Michishige-san, studying is good…your concern, thank you”

“Well at least you understand, but obviously you’re studying could be better but not to worry it will” LinLin just smiled and bowed

“LinLin don’t mind Michishige-san here she likes to speak her mind” exclaimed Risa before going into the recording room and giving Sayumi a semi-glare

“No no I don’t mind!  Advice given to me, encourages me to study hard”

“Well well well Sayu I think we’ve found ourselves an optimistic one.  Hope she doesn’t act like you and Ishikawa-san otherwise the members and I are in for a lot of ear troubles when you guys get into one of those ridiculous arguments” declared Reina who had finally lifted her yankii stare from JunJun

“It’s great to meet you finally.  We are big fans so please be nice to us” both JunJun and LinLin bowed again

“Damn, why did she have to do that?  Now I might actually feel guilty if we bully them” whispered Reina to Sayumi.

“I know but I think you’ve done your thing with JunJun over there, she hasn’t loosened up on bit” Sayumi nodded in JunJun’s direction and sure enough JunJun was still staring at the ground

“Awww crap!!!” Reina was going to comfort the poor girl but was halted when Tsunku-san called for her turn.

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Re: Taking Chances-Chapter 29 -updated 11/25
« Reply #282 on: November 27, 2009, 03:20:16 PM »
Under circumstances where she and Reina are having a discussion about Reina's problems, what would you do if you were Sayu???  What would you be thinking if you were having a major discussion about your best friends' issues and your crush runs off to their own crush, what would go through your mind?

Sayu did a good job  :)   There’s a proper time for every thing  :)   Why do I feel like a kid being lectured by her mom/dad?  XD


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Re: Taking Chances-Chapter 30 -updated 11/27
« Reply #283 on: November 27, 2009, 05:47:38 PM »
JunReina no! Tanagaki yes! Do I have to chant again? :lol:

Lol at the 'scary' sempais.

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Re: Taking Chances-Chapter 30 -updated 11/27
« Reply #284 on: November 27, 2009, 08:33:00 PM »
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Has Sayu recovered from her decision to move on....realistically???
It's kind of scary when you answer a question with another question, like something gonna happen soon....  :nervous

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the evil duo
Reina's been spending too much time with Sayu  :lol:

Okay, am I seeing a come back of JunRei hints in this chapter?  :on yellcard:


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Re: Taking Chances-Chapter 30 -updated 11/27
« Reply #285 on: November 29, 2009, 06:25:16 PM »
@ kRisZ: Thanks for making me sound like an old person  :angry:   :lol:

@ rndmnwierd: Oh no!! the chant!!!!  :O :O Please don't  :bow:  XD I....I got your message loud and clear please nooooooooo!!!!!  XD

@ pretend_2besome1: Do you mean that in a general sense or is that statement directed to only me  :nervous I didn't intend to answer a question with another question  ;)

Why yes, the evil duo, one who is more yankii and tough in image and one who is more cynical in words and in mind  :lol:

JunRei??? I don't know  :lol:

Chapter 31

When she finished her sections, she wanted to apologize to JunJun or at least make her fell comfortable around them, but because the leader and subleader were there, Reina dropped the idea ‘Can’t afford to ruin my image within the members, I’ll have to wait’

It was finally the 2 members’ turn and apparently all members stayed behind all curious as to how the new girls’ vocals were

‘She’s got a deeper voice and needs to be stronger whereas LinLin has a stronger voice, like really strong, she just may be able to match Ai-chan’s’

“Tanakacchi!” called Risa tapping Reina on the shoulder, in which broke Reina’s thoughts and gaze from the new kouhais

“What’s up Gaki-san?”

“Ai-chan and I thought that we should welcome the girls on their first official single with us by going out to dinner after this”

“That sounds like a good idea, after that we have dance practice right?”

“Yeah so do you mind passing along the word for everyone to gather their things, we will be having dinner and then straight to the dance studio”

“Roger that subleader” saluted Reina as she left to search for her other bandmates, who left after hearing the 2 new members sing a little.

‘Why is Reina looking for them?  They have cells right?  Reina could just message them!!  Reina is such a genius!!!’  as she pulled out her phone and message everyone.  When she was done she was about to grab something to drink when she saw 2 of her other kouhais sneaking about.  Reina got curious as she followed them.

“You’ve-you’ve read about Fujimoto-san right?  Is that why you’ve been ignoring me?” Silence ‘What?!! Were these 2 together?’ pondered Reina as she hid behind a corner listening in “I don’t ever want to force you to do anything and I respect your decisions so if this is what you…you want… just know that you can always depend on me”

“Maimi-chan, I don’t know if I can deal with this because I’m scared, scared they will take me away from you, also what about the girls?  Do you think they won’t be scared?  We could both be taken away from our group, then what will the girls think?”

“Erika, they knew about us and they also knew that we will be facing difficult decisions just like they are heck look at them!!! Chisa and Mai, Airin and Rii-chan, they all face the same dilemma as us” ‘Wow were the kids all dating?!’ “But I think it is something they will be careful about.”

“I’m sorry Maimi-chan but being here is something very important to me…to us.   You have the chance to be something more than I do and I can’t believe that you will throw it all away for something that may never last!!!!  We are young, we probably have more choices out there, choices that won’t jeopardize our careers.  I’m sorry but being in H!P right now is more important that what we have”

Reina could hear Maimi exhale “I…I know, which is why I’d rather let you go than to try to stop you from leaving me.  I’ll…I’ll see you around Erika”  Reina hid herself as to not be seen by her kouhai until Maimi was gone.  Reina looked around the corner and saw Erika buying her face in her hands crying

“Am I making a mistake?  Why is my heart hurting more than ever???  We are young, we couldn’t possibly know love like this.  If I run back to you, can I risk it?  Do I want to risk it?  How can Airin and Risako-chan do this?  Get yourself together Erika!!! Maimi-chan will be more hurt if you’re like this” Erika lightly slapped herself a couple of times before wiping her eyes and heading off.

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Re: Taking Chances-Chapter 31 -updated 11/29
« Reply #286 on: November 29, 2009, 06:51:52 PM »
It was directed to you regarding the story (which is why if you answer with another question it became scary) but it's okay.

Ooo...YajiUme? I thought with you it's going to be MaimiAiri.
If I remember correctly, Airi is Reina's imouto, right? So it's rather interesting if she didn't know about AiriRisako (how to call this pairing anyway?)


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Re: Taking Chances-Chapter 31 -updated 11/29
« Reply #287 on: November 29, 2009, 10:11:52 PM »
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‘Wow were the kids all dating?!’
Yeah, holy carp.

*pulls out drum threateningly* Tanagakiiiii.... Taaannnaaaagakiiiii. :grin:

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Re: Taking Chances-Chapter 31 -updated 11/29
« Reply #288 on: November 30, 2009, 05:37:13 AM »
Hmmm almost similar situation, will it become an eye opener?

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Re: Taking Chances-Chapter 31 -updated 11/29
« Reply #289 on: November 30, 2009, 08:59:53 AM »
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I want Sayu to be happy. I DO! But she got over Eri so quickly, it's almost as though she has fallen for someone else without realizing it? Reina maybe? ;)

C30

Like rnd, I'm picking up a ReinaJun vibe. Are you really gonna do it? Or is it just a trick to throw us readers off :D


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Holy :shocked Airi x Risako??? This is new, but I can accept it. I loved their duet on Very Beauty in the combined concert :wub: I wonder what Reina's gonna do after finding out about the kids.

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Re: Taking Chances-Chapter 31 -updated 11/29
« Reply #290 on: November 30, 2009, 06:26:21 PM »
@ pretend_2besome1:  :banghead: definitely not a rep I would like to have, me scary????  :smhid nope nope nope I refuse to accept  :lol: j/k, I find that a good thing sometimes  :twisted:

Technically I would have put MaimiAiri but I am open to other pairings, just that if they were main characters, more or less I am in favor of MaimiAiri.  Considering that they aren't in the story, I wouldn't mind putting them with others.

You are right, Airi is Reina's imoutou, however, I also have mentioned that they haven't seen each other in a while (refer back to when Reina first bumps into Airi), so it isn't surprising that Reina is unaware of this fact.  Busy schedules between everyone  :D

@ rndmnwierd: Oh no it's the chanting, it's begun *grabs head and  :banghead:XD

Yeah I know, I am digging myself further into a grave but I didn't want to  :cry: I swear, the story is writing itself now, like some invisible force is controlling my fingers and types away  :cry: Stop it fingers, stop it  XD XD

@ kRisZ: eye opener?  Will the additions open your eyes wide???  :lol:
 
and you wonder why I bash people on a weekly basis...  XD

@ lil_hamz: answer to C29 will be answered.....in this chapter  ;)

C30: the question is....do you want me to do it??? Change the direction of the story from the beginning?

C31: Why surprised??? they are close to begin with, I recall seeing fics about this duet before......not recalling when though.  What IS Reina going to do with this new found information???  ;)

Chapter 32

“Tanakacchi!!!” Reina turned around from her eavesdropping, behind her was Risa walking up to her “what are you doing standing here?  Did you inform the other members?”

“Y-yeah I messaged everyone”

“What’s wrong?  You look distracted”

“Nothing Gaki-san.  I was wondering if I bought everything along with me, like my tracksuits”

“Okay, well I think we should be wrapping up here soon so get to the van okay?” instructed Risa as she went back to the recording room not before saying “Thanks!  I owe you one for helping me out”

‘Wow!  Maimi-chan and Erika-san were together.  So were Okai-chan and Mai-chan, Airi-chan and Risako-chan.  How many are together?  How many were affected by Fujimoto-san?  My imoutou and her girlfriend shrugged it off and are still together.  What made them decided to make that decision?  I’m sure that being in H!P was important to Airin yet why is she endangering something she loves?  I’ll have to speak to her about this.  I want to know if she knows what she will be giving up’ as Reina made a mental note before heading off to the van.

When she got there, only the 2 new members were there ‘I haven’t apologized for scaring JunJun off earlier maybe I should do it now’ “Er…JunJun”  JunJun turned to meet Reina’s eyes, then immediately her eyes fell onto the floor “I’m sorry if I frightened you earlier”  JunJun lifted her eyes and met Reina’s
 
“Don’t worry Tanaka-san, JunJun won’t put it into heart and don’t mind JunJun, she is a bit nervous around other members” JunJun nodded in agreement with LinLin’s statement

“I understand all about being nervous because that’s how we all were when we first joined” Reina took a seat in front of JunJun and LinLin “But I guess JunJun would be more frightened considering the fact that she has to learn a totally new language.  LinLin has been a H!P egg so you would feel a little more comfortable?” LinLin nodded “But trust me, everyone is just as nervous having you guys in the group”

“How come?” this was the first time JunJun had spoken

“Because we wouldn’t want to offend our fellow members.  We are not familiar with the Chinese culture either, so we have the same fears as you do” Reina saw as JunJun slowly smiled “Anyways we want you to have fun like we do so don’t be scared of us okay?”

“Ganbaremasu” both JunJun and LinLin shouted.  The rest of the members were filing into the van and were getting ready to eat.  Reina wasn’t really listening to the conversations that were occurring around her for she was thinking of one particular thing ‘JunJun’s smile is alluring and eye catching.  It’s sweet, makes her look kinda cute’ as she tore herself from Sayumi, JunJun and LinLin, she was met by the scene of Eri and Risa fooling around with their own conversation ‘JunJun’s smile is sweet and cute but nothing compares to Gaki-san’s smile.  One look and it brightens any day’

“Stop gawking” whispered Sayumi tapping on Reina’s shoulder

Reina tore her eyes away from the scene and glared at Sayumi, “I’m not gawking!!!! Like you aren’t affected”

Sayumi looked at Eri and Risa and her smile faded, Reina noticed it and quickly apologized “I’m sorry Sayu, I didn’t mean to mention it”

Sayumi shook her head, “I am determined to get over it all”

“Will you? Will you really get over Eri that quickly??? I mean lately it seems like Eri hasn’t been making you upset anymore, so…so I wonder…” Reina’s voice trailed from the whisper she began with

“You wonder if I ever did love Eri right?  I do and I did however” Sayumi held onto Reina’s hands “I’m concerned about you, why can’t you just let Gaki-san go like I let Eri?  Maybe we could be more happier, find better people.  I’ve noticed you looking at JunJun a lot lately, maybe you should give up” encouraged Sayumi checking to make sure no one was listening.  Luckily they were sitting in the back so they didn’t have to worry about anyone behind them, but they wanted to make sure that people on the side (Aika and Koharu) and people in front (JunJun and LinLin) were not listening in.  They didn’t have to worry about Aika and Koharu because the duo were in their own little love world whereas JunJun and LinLin were sleeping, but just in case, Reina and Sayumi still kept their voices low

“Sayu, I…I…I don’t want to.  I love seeing Gaki-san smile, her every movement, the smell that lingers when she walks by, I…I’m not ready to just let it go.  Even…even if I’m not the one that she chooses to make her happy.  Sayu, don’t be concentrating on me, I’ll deal with it, you just deal with your emotions and figuring out how you will let Eri go.  I’ll be at your service whenever you need me”

“No Reina, I don’t need you to do that, you’ve helped me more than enough and I think you’re suffering more than I am”

Reina shook her head, “Sayu, I am not suffering more than you are because at least I admit my feelings, you on the other hand are trying to force yours out.  Don’t worry about me, let’s deal with your issues first”

“But…”

“No buts, look, we just have to be each other pillars of support okay?  Don’t think that my issue is any more important than your own, because it isn’t okay?  Promise me?”  Sayumi shook her head and smiled weakly “Good, so let’s liven up the mood tonight okay?  No tears, we can watch some variety shows or something, get us into the laughing mode”

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Re: Taking Chances-Chapter 32 -updated 11/30
« Reply #291 on: November 30, 2009, 06:53:18 PM »
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I find that a good thing sometimes :twisted:
:O Now it's scary  :lol:

I like both MaimiAiri and YajiUme so it's good  :)

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You are right, Airi is Reina's imoutou, however, I also have mentioned that they haven't seen each other in a while (refer back to when Reina first bumps into Airi), so it isn't surprising that Reina is unaware of this fact.  Busy schedules between everyone
Ahh...I forgot that part it seems  :doh:

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I’ll have to speak to her about this.  I want to know if she knows what she will be giving up
I think it will be a good idea to ask Airi, maybe Reina can learn some things from her?

JunRei hints making a come back..... :mon speechless:
I'm not against this pairing in general but in your story I rather go for TanaShige, TanaGaki, or TanaKamei (just cuz I'm so biased XD)
So JunRei  :on redcard:


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Re: Taking Chances-Chapter 32 -updated 11/30
« Reply #292 on: November 30, 2009, 11:07:08 PM »
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I swear, the story is writing itself now, like some invisible force is controlling my fingers and types away   Stop it fingers, stop it

Ah, yeah, I know how that is. I have the same problem sometimes. Don't worry, as long as Reina pines away, I'll be happy (and sad, but you know...) *tosses away drums and pats you on the head* No more chanting, I promise.

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Re: Taking Chances-Chapter 32 -updated 11/30
« Reply #293 on: December 01, 2009, 12:10:35 PM »
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‘JunJun’s smile is sweet and cute but nothing compares to Gaki-san’s smile.  One look and it brightens any day’

This was the fishy thing I mentioned before, glad it has that bold thing added, but it still is fishy to me


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“You wonder if I ever did love Eri right?  I do and I did however” Sayumi held onto Reina’s hands “I’m concerned about you, why can’t you just let Gaki-san go like I let Eri?  Maybe we could be more happier, find better people.

The Angel Sayu  :luvluv2: why don't you both date instead  ;D

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Re: Taking Chances-Chapter 32 -updated 11/30
« Reply #294 on: December 02, 2009, 03:42:05 PM »
@ pretend_2besome1: Do I scare you???  :twisted:

Oh boy!!!! I wonder what the writing god has in store for me~~  :lol:

@ rndmnwierd:  :cry: thank you, thank you  :cry:  XD but seriously the chanting doesn't bother me, it's a good reminder from time to time about the pairings that I have in the story before new ones start popping out left, right, and centre  XD

@ kRisZ: I don't see anything fishy  :roll:

Sayu Sayu Sayu, just when everyone knows you to be so poison-tongued, you show you're sweet side  :wub:

Chapter 33

For the next while, JunJun and LinLin had gotten warmed up to the members as the members have done the same.  Reina noticed things about JunJun and was enjoying the moments they were together.  For Reina it was great to do things with the new members because it replaces the lonely time thinking about her feelings for Risa.  At times Risa would come up and ask her out for a movie or something, in which Reina would enjoy but one look to the turtle beside Risa and Reina would immediately decline saying that she has made plans with Sayumi or JunJun.  Slowly, Risa stopped asking her to join them and only went places with Eri.

‘I’m sorry Gaki-san but Eri loves you, please treat her nicely’   Reina started letting her feelings for Risa go or at least she thought she had, she didn’t realize how strong her feelings for Risa were until that faithful day when Eri came knocking on Sayumi and Reina’s door.

“Sayu!  Open the door you lazy bunny!”

“Arg!!  Who would be knocking at this hour?” Sayumi opened the door, in came a certain turtle who zoomed past Sayumi and jumped on one of the beds

“OI!!! Get off my bed” Reina demanded as she came out of the bathroom

“I’m so excited! I can’t contain myself!  I have to share this with you guys!”

“Woah!  Down girl, down!” shouted Sayumi “Do I need to get you a treat to tame you?”

“I’m not a dog nor a horse Sayu!” pouted Eri, Sayumi just shrugged her shoulders “Anyways I confessed tonight”  ‘The very words that I was afraid of and thought I had forgotten’

“You what?!” yelled Reina which shocked Sayumi and Eri

“I…er…confessed to Gaki-san tonight?” replied Eri exchanging a 'what's with her' glance with Sayu before picking up one of Reina’s pillows and hugging it bearing a dreamy look

Before Reina could ask for the details, her phone vibrated.  She snapped it open to find a message from Gaki-san,

~Meet me by the pool~

“Guys I want to know details but I have to quickly run out for a bit so Sayu remember everything” as Reina dashed out the door towards the pool.  As she was walking towards her target, memories flooded her mind from the last time she was in this type of scenario with Gaki-san “Hey”

Risa turned around and smiled “Hey yourself stranger”
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Extremely short chapter I know however I like to keep the upcoming conversation between the 2 mysterious for a day or two  :lol: Any ideas of what and how the conversation will be like???

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Re: Taking Chances-Chapter 33 -updated 12/02
« Reply #295 on: December 02, 2009, 04:25:14 PM »
You are so mean.... How can you just leave me with a cliffhanger like that when I'm about to go to work?!


 :lol: :lol: :lol: Well, if Eri is happy, then I guess that means Gaki accepted. Right? And the convo is going to gauge Reina's reaction, because I'm still convinced that Risa likes that dumb yanki. Amiright?

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Re: Taking Chances-Chapter 33 -updated 12/02
« Reply #296 on: December 02, 2009, 04:29:20 PM »
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Slowly, Risa stopped asking her to join them and only went places with Eri.

I hope you'll never regret it Reina


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“I’m so excited! I can’t contain myself!  I have to share this with you guys!”

OMG  :shocked


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~Meet me by the pool~

OMG   :dizzy:


Extremely short chapter I know however I like to keep the upcoming conversation between the 2 mysterious for a day or two  :lol: Any ideas of what and how the conversation will be like???

Please have mercy, don't kill us... onegai shimasu  :kneelbow:

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Re: Taking Chances-Chapter 33 -updated 12/02
« Reply #297 on: December 02, 2009, 04:35:54 PM »
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Do I scare you???  :twisted:
Actually you make me want to laugh with that smiley  XD

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Any ideas of what and how the conversation will be like???
Maybe Gaki will reveal that she actually likes Reina but since Reina has been avoiding her and pretty much shoving her into Eri's direction, she gave up, moved on and accept Eri's feeling.

Eri doesn't seem sad when she came to their room and she also get dreamy look, so I assume Gaki didn't turn her down?

And if that's the case then it's gonna be like in the prologue part. Though Reina's probably gonna sorely regretted her decision giving Gaki to Eri instead of fighting for her love   :mon wind:

But that's just me  ;D


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Re: Taking Chances-Chapter 33 -updated 12/02
« Reply #298 on: December 04, 2009, 07:23:35 PM »
NUUUUuuuuu~~~~!!!! SUCH A CLIFF HANGER!!!!! :tantrum: :temper:

so Eri confessed...hmmm...
My thought?
Eri just confessed to Gaki just before she went to Sayu and Reina to share the news.... since she's acting really giddy and happy... Gaki probably didn't turn her down... but then..as soon as Eri was away...little Gaki messaged kitty to come to the pool and meet her...probably to have another of their awkward talk.. and what do I mean by that? well, it means talking in a form of questions again like when they were on Reina's hometown having a talk about having boyfriends or girlfriends. Much like the "I have this friend of mine who likes someone" thing but in reality, it's them. Another thing that's possible to happen is that Reina answered Risa's statement "That is mine to keep and for you to find out" thing. and Risa became quiet when she mentioned Eri.... ahahaha... or... Risa just want to have that talk to somehow 'indirectly' convince Reina to fight for her. To sweep her away from Eri while there's still time left for them... but then again... in the prologue... Reina's already heart broken so it might be that Reina didn't confess her feelings to Risa.. and Risa... eventhough it somewhat hurt her, not wanting to hurt the feelings of a certain turtle...just go on with the flow....

Just thinking out loud. :on lol:

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Re: Taking Chances-Chapter 33 -updated 12/02
« Reply #299 on: December 06, 2009, 06:17:08 AM »
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Reina tore her eyes away from the scene and glared at Sayumi, “I’m not gawking!!!! Like you aren’t affected”

Wrong thing to say Reina. Please remove your foot from your mouth :lol:

Hmmm, Sayu is encouraging Reina to go after JJ. So this means she hasn't fallen for her yet.

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Risa turned around and smiled “Hey yourself stranger”

Do you use this line a lot XD Seems kinda...oh I dunno...sexy? :P

GAH~!!! 2 whole days??? You better come back and update. Oh even locks won't work on your window :twisted: Kidding kidding :grin:

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