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Re: Colour of Truth - Chapter 8 - 01/25
« Reply #40 on: January 26, 2010, 04:42:56 AM »
FaquU?????  Daishoubu?? you is right?? you is daishoubu? really??
MaimixRisa???????????
eh?? O.O
That isn´t common @.@ O.O
I don´t understand the movement of the story...

wakaina... @.@

A gift for you and  his fan fic ^^U
Maimi is very professional in your fic...
And with this image I remembered his fic...





   ganbare with your next  chapter ^^
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Re: Colour of Truth - Chapter 8 - 01/25
« Reply #41 on: January 26, 2010, 07:56:15 AM »
*runs around kRisZ chasing Chloe* because my chips and kRisZ's popcorn's attack is too light, come back here!!!!
:huhuh *Reads previous comments*  :shocked
*Gets a cord, catches C and ties her, catches FaqU and ties her ( are you her too :D ) as well. Drags both into a closet and locks them inside* there  :twisted:




Ai, the LEADER of HP, being the secretary is cute  :inlove:


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Maimi chuckled "as much as I love to hear your praising me, this is a professional environment so..." Maimi pointed to Reina's seat she was once in
:rockon:


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"Need a hand?" A hand was presented in front of Ai.  She followed the hand to the owner and found a woman with light brown, slightly curly hair, smiling warmly at her as she placed her hand within the strangers.
RISA!!!!!  :inlove:


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and boy is it getting hot in here!
:lol:  :yep:


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The woman laughed "my apologies, I didn't even introduce myself,  Niigaki Risa
:gmon twirl:


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‘Quick think of something Maimi before she leaves!’
was she hitting on Risa? :shocked


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'Think Maimi! Think of how you can get to know her'
:shocked  :shocked


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"but could you repeat that I didn't hear it properly"
:lol:


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"Yatta!!!!" Maimi jumped up in the air with her first up but when she landed she realized she was on the streets as she fixed her skirt and quickly walked back to the office trying to keep her serious look up, failing slightly as she was smiling like crazy
Okay, that scene was cute... but no please... TakaGaki  :tantrum:



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Re: Colour of Truth - Chapter 8 - 01/25
« Reply #42 on: January 26, 2010, 04:52:30 PM »
*Gets a cord, catches C and ties her, catches FaqU and ties her ( are you her too :D ) as well. Drags both into a closet and locks them inside* there  :twisted:

*blinks in the darkness* Uh...so what should we do now FaqU?

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@ Chloe: Well I have followed along with Cute for a while now, so I didn't get that kind of reaction, but I do agree that Maimi has changed and does look like she is older but that could be because she had to mature in looks as leader?
To me Maimi seems to have that mature look not just because she’s the leader, she just have it(?)

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smiled Reina as she got up to start massaging Eri's shoulders
:whip:

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'Her grip is strong and her skin so soft,eyes so mesmerizing, smile so warm and boy is it getting hot in here!'
Someone’s falling fast XD

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Yes you haven’t been playing the field in a while because of your ex, but damn you lost it!!!!
Ex? Another story for another time?

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she pulled Risa by the arm causing Risa to twirl slightly inward into Maimi's embrace with no gap between them as they were faceing each other
Now that’s smooth :D

Gaki-san charms work on two people already  :rockon:

I’m actually excited about MaimiGaki (whatever it’s called) prospect. I mean one from kids and one from mm, how often do you see that?  :twothumbs


TakaSemaru  :heart:

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Re: Colour of Truth - Chapter 8 - 01/25
« Reply #43 on: January 27, 2010, 01:41:45 PM »
YES YES YES!!!

The monkey and bean meet :wub: But EH EH EH!?!?? A YajiGaki?????? OMG this is....is.... :thumbup I totally DID NOT expect that. Still, I'm quite open to new pairings (as long as they involve Risa :P) so I'm excited to see how this goes.

It's cool how you wrote TakaGaki meeting. Although the possibility of this happening where I'm from is a little small. I mean, I bet the local version of Ai would raise her brow at the local Risa for being "overly helpful" XD

Gaki-san is da man! :wub: Mesmerizing pretty girls at the drop of a hat wherever she goes :D

oh wow, that pic of Maimi is :inlove:

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Re: Colour of Truth - Chapter 8 - 01/25
« Reply #44 on: January 27, 2010, 03:57:29 PM »
@ Her Awesome Holiness: Of course, who could resist a hawt bean coroner??? Feel the hotness of the bean!!!  :mon mad:

It was something I haven't seen so far so why not get a new pairing or start one right?  :on GJ:

@ Maimi_Yajima: Daijoubu!!! It's because it isn't common that it'll be good to try things out you know???

That picture is  :on_hot: and kakkoi!!!! I love it! Arigatou!!!

@ kRisZ:
*runs around kRisZ chasing Chloe* because my chips and kRisZ's popcorn's attack is too light, come back here!!!!
:huhuh *Reads previous comments*  :shocked
*Gets a cord, catches C and ties her, catches FaqU and ties her ( are you her too :D ) as well. Drags both into a closet and locks them inside* there  :twisted:

Yes I am  ;)
Why thank you, that makes things a lot easier for me, Chloe can't run or hide anymore  :hiakhiakhiak:

Now now behave!  Don't forget this is just the beginning,....What's that?  You ask the beginning of what?? You'll just have to wait to find out  :hee:

@ Chloe: *I get up and start hoping towards you* You can't run and you can't hide  :kekeke: Now where is that knife of mine?  :hiakhiakhiak:

Maimi's story will have to be for another time, unfortunately (because I haven't thought about it as of yet)  :sweat:

Exactly, you don't see a kids member paired with a MM member often, so I thought I'd give it a run, open up new possibilities, I mean Aika is actually around the same age as some of the kids anyways  :bigdeal:

@ Mame-chan: I kinda figured you'll have that initial reaction with Takagaki...however I wasn't sure of your reaction to YajiGaki but I am relieved that you are okay with the bean matched with our local athlete

 :on thumbb: No no, actually maybe it could just be me, but I do that often from where I live and no one really takes it as a bad thing, if it was a hot person, I don't know maybe a local Ai will fall at Risa's feet regardless to get their help  :wahaha:

Oh yeah, Gaki-san is one of da mans...you'll know later as to why

Chapter 9

Date: March 13
Time: 11:00 pm


"So anything?" Airi asked a tired Miyabi and Maasa

"We were in the briefing room looking over the surveillance videos starting from 3 days ago but negative.  No one that looks like the witness or family.  Did you hear anything from the others?"

"Nothing in particular relevant from Chisa and Nakky so far-" RING RING "Suzuki Airi here"

"Okay I want you to verify if that was the last time anyone saw them" Miyabi and Maasa looked at Airi as she hung up the phone "okay so from Chisa's side, it seems like the last the neighbours heard from the witness and family was at around 11 the night before their disappearance"

"How come we only know this now? Not saying that Chisa and Nakky are slacking off but why at that hour and how can they be sure?" questioned Miyabi

"The neighbours work at a restaurant so they get off work late.  They remember the time because they remember the late night news was about to go on.  But the thing is that the neighbour heard scrambling like moving things noises from the witness's apartment.  So now we know that someone or the witness themselves were at the apartment, we need to confirm it though.  Miya I want you to call Toku-san and see what's she got."

"Airin, nothing different from Toku-san's side but they will keep an eye out or an ear out for anything else.  It is impossible for them to follow every member of Yamaguchi's clan"

"I know Miya and I know there is a possibility that they have outside help doing it but there are so many uncertainties, hopefully we can get something from the witness's house"

KNOCK KNOCK "Suzuki-san" Airi turned to find the commissioner "My external source has produced the following documents that may aid in your case" Yossie produced a manila folder for Airi to take before leaving

"External source? Do commissioners have external sources?" Questioned Miyabi as she peered over Airi's shoulder at the documentation

"Well they weren't commissioners at birth so I wouldn't be surprised.  Maybe Yoshizawa-san has her own batman around" replied Airi without taking her eyes away from the documents "Miya I want you to check on this clan and see if these still hold true." Airi gave Miyabi a sheet indicating that the head of Yamaguchi had business proposals with another clan, Nakai.
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Date: March 13
Time: 11:30 pm


While everyone was furiously working on the project, Maimi received a new project message.  She groaned at the amount of work she had and at the project that was coming in, in the end she decided to at least open the new project and see what it was about.  She skimmed over the email and saw that it was a project that wasn't too difficult but would require simple research.  She pulled out her laptop so that she doesn't mix the projects she is working on and started her research as much as she can before heading out to gather actual statistics.  Once she was done she paged Saki

"Saki, I need to step out for statistical research and should be back in a couple of hours.  The presentation deck you want me to do is almost over except for the missing data from your side"

"Okay, go do what you must as I round up the last of the data for this project and start the material for the other presentation.  If we are lucky, all presentation decks and supporting documentation should be completed tonight so we can relax tomorrow"

"Not necessarily, I did mention that something new is coming in and it might require all of us but that is tentative so far.  I will keep you guys posted on it" Maimi waited for an acknowledgement before changing into casual clothes for her statistical research gathering

Groaning and moaning could be heard on Saki's side as they were told of the game plan from the speaker phone "sorry guys, you heard her, however it is only tentative so don’t be whining.  I know you guys are tired but please bare it for 1 more day as soon as this is done we can relax"

"Man Saki-chan, you and Maimi-chan are just pure workaholics and you guys are lucky we are your friends" whined Reina as she glared at Saki, who wasn't looking at her

"Reina, you say that as if we aren't paying you guys" retorted Saki which shut her up

Ai smirked at Reina giving her a 'she got you there' look

"Yeah but still there has to be a rule that says you can't torture your employees" rebutted Eri.  Reina smirked back at Ai with a 'Eri agrees with me' look which did not phase Ai

"It isn't torture if you are benefitting and you don't have to stay if your guilty conscience can survive knowing that only 3 of us are working hard while you sleep" Ai grinned at the duo fully knowing that they wouldn't and grinning in particular at Reina with a 'you lost' look.  Reina and Eri slouched back into their chairs in defeat

"Look" Saki looked at all 3 of her friends and co-workers "I can understand the things you put up with when working with Maimi and me, more harder with Maimi" Saki looks at Reina "but I hope you understand that its not our intention for things to be this way and we can only pray that you see things in our perspective.  We are utterly grateful for the effort you put in and believe me when I say this but Maimi and I are actually concerned and would worry for each of you, Maimi more than I". Indeed that got the grumbling girls and Ai-chan to pay more attention "yes we seem like we are distant at times but we actually feel guilty if you guys have to work overtime on things we give you.  Maimi is more concerned about you guys overall than she let's on.  Ai-chan a couple of nights ago I assume you were doing something for Maimi till late right?"Ai nodded recalling which night in reference

“Maimi had gone to take her shower after her morning workout, where I was getting ready to leave the workout room.  I didn’t get far before I realized that I left my towel so I went back to grab it.  On my way back I saw Maimi heading to her room but stopped and walked back a couple steps to peek inside the study room.  She then let a relieved sigh and smiled slightly before heading to her room. I was curious as to what she was looking at and decided to see what was in the study.  I saw Ai-chan's laptop and glasses but no Ai-chan so I came to the conclusion that Ai-chan was working late last night.  The sigh of relief is that Maimi didn't find Ai-chan pulling an all-nighter for her”

"Also the only reason she has to lecture you two" Saki pointed at the troublesome duo "is that you guys were coming in loudly and Ai-chan was asleep so she didn't want you guys to wake her up.  Remember the time you crashed the Civic Reina?" both Reina and Eri nodded

SAKI FLASHBACK/POV

"Saki!!! I just got a call from the hospital!!! Reina and Eri had an accident!!!!  Call Ai-chan to meet us there"

"Wait! What do you mean they had an accident???"

"I don't know, I am going there right away to check up on them now" Maimi was frantically looking around causing Saki to wonder why

"Er...Maimi what are you looking for?"

"My cell!"

"Isn't that it in your hand?" Maimi looked at her right hand and there it was clutched tightly.  

END OF SAKI FLASHBACK/POV


"I know the first thing she did when she saw you guys was about how you guys crashed her fully altered Civic which was her favorite at the time by the way and even now she constantly lectures and reminds you about it but her first concern wasn't the car, yet it was the condition you guys were in.  She started talking about the car instead of whether you guys were okay because she was relieved it wasn't serious first of all and secondly she has trouble expressing herself.  I can't deny that I have that issue too just not as strong fronted as Maimi. She only teases about your accident as a way of saying to drive safely. She doesn't like to show it, but she does care about you guys" Saki left them thinking as she went to make herself coffee

"Wow! I'm speechless!"

"Yeah even I'm speechless and I don't complain" Reina and Eri rolled their eyes at Ai

"But I don't understand why she wouldn't open to us?" Asked the curious Eri feeling guilty at how Reina and Eri have badmouthed their bosses at times

"I don't know and I doubt we can ask Saki-chan, but maybe it is something to keep in mind the next time you guys feel like giving them trouble" Ai reminded them  “the least you can do is work harder here to take off some of the stress they have.  I mean it must be hard on them to not be given the chance to do what they want to do" stated Ai as she tapped away at her laptop

"OSSU!!!" Yelled Reina as she and Eri continued to flip through documents.  Unknowingly to them Saki was outside holding her coffee smiling

BUZZ BUZZ Saki took out her phone read the message

I'm coming back now-Maimi

'OSSU! Back to work'
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Date: March 14
Time: 6:00 am


"Airin, I checked the data out and it holds true"

"Okay in that case, we should send some people to keep an eye on the Nakai clan"

"But Airin the same still holds true, we can't possibly keep an eye on every member"

"I know but we can always bug them so that we know" grinned Airi.

Miyabi smiled getting the drift that Airi was hinting at "so why wait, let's pay a visit to Mr. Nakai"

"'Miya, call Kumai-chan to meet us and grab the equipment and meet me at my car" instructed Airi as she reviewed the file on the whereabouts the Nakai clan leader will be before grabbing her shades and her jacket

When she got down to the parking lot Miyabi and a team of IT specialists were waiting "okay I want you guys to find somewhere so we can listen in with the bug" Airi handed them an address and then headed to her car "Miya get a couple of the buggers so we can stick them somewhere" Miyabi grabbed 2-3 before proceeding to Airi's car

"Where do you suggest we stick it? We are in their territory so we can’t get the waiters to help us"

"I was thinking about one under the table and the other on a chair. Miya call Kumai-chan to see if she has joined us and tell her we need access to cellphone wavelengths so if they call anyone, we can gather a clue" Miyabi dialled the staff in the van and informed of the new instructions.

"Are you ready?" Airi asked Miyabi as the stopped their car infront of enemy establishment

"I was born ready" joked Miyabi

"Then let's go"

The duo walked up the stairs and stopped at reception, a male who was watching tv, legs propped up on the counter. "Excuse me, I'm here to see Mr. Nakai"

The man took one look at Airi and Miyabi and quickly moved his feet off the counter and grinned at them "I don't think Mr. Nakai is interested in what you offer he likes a more sexier type not the office type but I'm interested so how much are your fees" he put his hand forward towards Miyabi's face. Miyabi grabbed hold of it and twisted his hand "itai! Itai! What the hell?"

Airi smirked, took off her shades and produced her badge "detective Suzuki to see Mr. Nakai"

"Itai! Itai! He's inside now let go"

Airi nodded her head to Miyabi before walking ahead. Miyabi let go of his wrist and followed but not before giving the guy a deadly glare. KNOCK KNOCK the door swung open and a tall man, yellow streaked hair, black suit and a mean look eyed the two "Who are you and who let you in?" He barked

Airi put up her arm slightly to stop Miyabi from charging up him and produced her badge

A man chuckled from behind the desk "what did I do to be paid a visit by detective..."

"Suzuki" as Airi walked into the room but not before glaring at the door boy

"Have a seat detective Suzuki" Airi and Miyabi each took a seat as door boy stood beside Mr. Nakai "how can I help you?"

Airi smiled "oh nothing, I was investigating on the mystery disappearance of the Nakamura family" at the mention of the name Airi noticed the slightly faltered smile of Nakai and she knew she might be in the right track, with the bug in her hand she leaned forward and stuck it under the ledge of the table "so I was wondering if you knew anything about it"

"I don't know why you would think I do" Nakai smiled

"Oh nothing, considering one of your business partners is in jail, it just means that some of your normal operations are at a stand still right?"

Nakai frowned "Detective are you accusing me of something here? Yes my business partner is in jail in which he should. If you do the crime you pay the time. I am a businessman, we are expected to take losses at time and when that occurs we just find new partners. Now detective, if you don't mind I have other appointments to attend to. Don't let the door hit you on your way out" Nakai turned to face the window

Airi put her shades back on and smiled "sorry for taking up your precious time" as she and Miyabi got up and left. They got into the car and drove around the block, parked and walked up to the awaiting van "Miya did you stick a bug on them? I put mine under the table ledge"

"Yeah under the chair" as they got into the van and greeted Yurina and the staff, who were handing them earphones

"Ken, call them and tell them the cops are suspecting us so they have to be careful, make sure there are no mistakes"

"Yes boss" they listened as Ken walked out of the office and dialled a number. Airi made a sign telling the staff to record and trace the call while Miyabi and Airi switched headphones "OI be careful, the cops were just here investigating on Yamaguchi's case."

"Yes sir!!! We will be careful, and after the trial we will give them a sum and ship them off"

"Get rid of them, we don't need any trouble in the future"

"Huh?! But.."

"Just do it!"

"All right, I understand" they hung up as Miyabi and Airi shared a look.

Airi turned to Yurina to see if she could get a trace, she shook her head, the time was too short. "Miya call everyone back we have to find the Nakamura's ASAP! Guys return to the station and clean up the static in the recording, I will be by with my team to see if we can find anything" Airi and Miyabi got out of the van to go to their own car

"...Toku-san, come back, we have progress on our end" Miyabi snapped shut her phone "they are all on their way back"

"Good! We have to find them, we have approximately 24 hours before the trial" as Airi looked at the clock in her car reading 9:00 am "let's grab coffee and something for the girls, they have been out there all night already"
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Re: Colour of Truth - Chapter 9 - 01/27
« Reply #45 on: January 27, 2010, 04:39:53 PM »
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*Reina vs Ai moments*
So cute, can totally imagine Ai going, 'Haha.' and Reina pouting at her.
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"Er...Maimi what are you looking for?"

"My cell!"

"Isn't that it in your hand?" Maimi looked at her right hand and there it was clutched tightly. 
Again, cute how worried she was. Lol, I've actually done this before, talking to my friend on the phone and saying, "Where's my phone? Have you seen it?" :lol:

Maimi's such a good friend! :wub: :wub:

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Re: Colour of Truth - Chapter 6 - 01/19
« Reply #46 on: January 27, 2010, 05:49:30 PM »
@ ChrNo: What?! All in one evening?  :shocked were your eyes okay after staring at a screen for that long???
haha no worries, they are fine, they still want to keep reading your fic  :lol:


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What Maimi's doing? probably doing corporate researches???
The case closed only because there wasn't enough leads to keep the case going, there are no witnesses, no fingerprints, no nothing
you made it sounds more...mysterious  :nervous

you have a gift to make highly unexpected couple   XD  risako+kanna in your previous fic, and now Maimi+Risa ?  :lol:

really like when Maimi panics  :panic:  :rofl: the phone part and the "wouldyouliketohavecoffeesometime?"

but still, Maimi+Airi second meeting  :wub:
ah bah she is already with risako huh...
well well let see what might happen next ... :thumbsup

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Re: Colour of Truth - Chapter 9 - 01/27
« Reply #47 on: January 29, 2010, 05:28:56 PM »
*kicks the closet door violently* kRisZ!! Open the damn door! She said KNIFE!

I was just asking, you don’t actually have to elaborate the story about her ex. I’m behind you for giving YajiGaki a try!

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Maybe Yoshizawa-san has her own batman around
:lol:

I’ve done similar thing like Maimi only with my glasses, it was on top of my head  XD

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IT specialists

Gotta love these guys  :)

Anyway I think this one got cut, your post in H!O was longer.


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Re: Colour of Truth - Revised Chapter 9 - 01/29
« Reply #48 on: February 01, 2010, 03:59:11 PM »
@ Her Awesome Holiness: Exactly the image I had in my mind, I was debating about extending that and making it a longer battle but decided not to  :nervous

I know people tell me they have done that themselves and I always wondered if it was really possible...until I saw it just recently with my friend who was on the phone and I was right beside her.  She searched through her bag and asked me if I have seen her phone.... I looked at her then pointed to her ear  :lol:

@ ChrNo: Oh my god!!! Ureshii demo... mecha pressure nee?  :nervous

Not a gift...more like I tend to want to try things I haven't seen before or not as often done... personally I love seeing the reader's reactions  :lol:

Never realized how many were rooting for MaiRi  :P

@ Chloe:  :kekeke: Indeed I said KNIFE but there's nothing to be scared of  :shifty: you don't believe me???  :wahaha:

Actually, I did plan on a section about Maimi's past...key word, plan so nothing is written down yet or jotted down yet but potentially I will get to it  ;)

I actually have done that myself with glasses but it wasn't on top of my head more like it was on my shirt below my neck  :bigdeal:

Thanks for the heads up, I don't know how I cut it but I corrected it

Chapter 10

Date: March 14
Time: 8:45 am


"Whew!!! We are finally done the presentation!!!!!" Reina put a fist in the air

"Hey there is a change in plans" Maimi walked in with papers and a USB, in which Reina and Eri groaned. "You guys can have the day off"

Everyone looked at Maimi, except Saki as she took the papers and USB from Maimi "are you serious?"

"Yes Tanaka-san"

"What about the other project you wanted us to help with?"

"Well Kamei-san, I don't think we could be productive if my team is tired and looks like crap and besides I think I will just need Shimizu-san and Takahashi-san on this" Reina and Eri high-fived each other "now get going!!!! I'll see you guys at home"

"Eh!!! Mai-" Maimi pointed to the clock in the room showing almost 9:00 "Yajima-san are you not leaving?"

"You may go, I have some things to do"

"Still? Do you want to go through the other project with me first?"

"No Shimizi-san, we can talk later" as she walked out of the boardroom to her office.  Saki turned around and gave them a 'told you she cared' look

"Well, you guys should get going and I will see you guys home later"

"Eh are you not coming either Shimizu-san?"

"Like Yajima-san, I'm going to do some work first" as she walked to her own office

"Come on guys let's pack up and go home" Ai-chan instructed as she packed her laptop and files
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Date: March 14
Time: 10:00 am


"Can you play back at that last sentence?" Airi instructed Yurina as she played it once more "okay now can you increase the volume in the background?"

"Yes sir! TOOT We..." "is that a horn?" Asked Miyabi as she listened carefully

"That's a horn from a ferry boat" stated Nakky

"God I love you when we have to do this, your ears are amazing" praised Miyabi as she high-fived Nakky

"Which means that the witness is held somewhere close to water.  Maasa-chan I want you to check where these boats would be leaving or coming in at the time"

"Hold on Maasa-chan!" hollered Chisa "with all due respect, according to the time, there would be plenty of passenger ferries entering and leaving"

Airi brought her hand to her chin thinking "okay let's hold off on it and continue listening" as Airi motioned to continue playing the recording

"...will be CLANK careful"

"Hold on rewind, let's play that again"

"...will be CLANK careful"

"What is that sound" Airi turned to Nakky, who was deep in thought

"Toku-san do you mind getting me a metal container?" Chinami left the room to grab the item "and Kumai-chan could you play that one more time?"

"...will be CLANK careful"

"Here Nakky" Chinami returned with a discarded canned good

Nakky took a pen and banged it against the walls of the can, then she smiled "I got it, they are in a closed vicinity from the echoing effect, where the walls are metal, I'm thinking movable storages"

"Maasa-chan you heard her, look for docks and close by should be industrial or storage compartments" as Airi grinned at Nakky.  Maasa quickly checked the databases and within minutes she came upon a fewer amount of locations "okay continue playing". They continued listening for clues but no more came up.

"Okay Maasa-chan how many locations do we have?"

"Suzuki-san we are looking at a little over 200 registered locations and in each location, over 300 storage compartments" the gang groaned at the figures

"Guys I know that is a lot but please hang in there, we have" Airi looks up at the clock "21 hours to search for them.  Toku-san, Chisa I want you guys to go around and see if you can find any news where they could be hidden, check if certin members haven't been around that sort of thing. If we know how they look like we can ask areas around these locations like convenience stores and restaurants.  Maasa-san, Nakky, Kumai-chan I need you guys to stay here and listen for anymore clues and Miya I want you and other tech crew members to listen in on anymore phone calls.  I will report to the commissioner of our findings.  Keep me posted on anything you guys find". The girls left to their designated tasks

KNOCK KNOCK "come in"

"Yoshizawa-san, first I want to thank you and your informer of the information"

"Your welcome" Yossie looked up from what she was doing

"We have a lead to possible locations and my team and I are checking the locations as soon as we have the exact area.  For all we gather, the witness is held in storage compartments near water where ferries are.  We are sure that Nakai's clan is behind it all and his right-hand man has instructed they be killed after" Airi reported as she handed Yossie the file with notes

"Okay, let's hope we get to them on time" as she took the file from Airi and skimmed through "you are dismissed" Yossie said without looking away from the file 'interesting but will we be able to find them under these circumstances?'

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Re: Colour of Truth - Chapter 10 - 02/01
« Reply #49 on: February 01, 2010, 05:25:42 PM »
Arrgh! Gomen, my connection kept going on and off on me since yesterday and made me frustrated  :sweatdrop:

@ Chloe:  :kekeke: Indeed I said KNIFE but there's nothing to be scared of  :shifty: you don't believe me???  :wahaha:
:mon suspect:  with those smileys, should I?

So you wear glasses too? And you're welcome.

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"Can you play back at that last sentence?" Airi instructed Yurina as she played it once more "okay now can you increase the volume in the background?"
Ooo...I feel like watching a those cop/FBI/CSI/you name it kind of series  :D
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« Reply #50 on: February 02, 2010, 01:39:56 AM »
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I know people tell me they have done that themselves and I always wondered if it was really possible...until I saw it just recently with my friend who was on the phone and I was right beside her.  She searched through her bag and asked me if I have seen her phone.... I looked at her then pointed to her ear
:lol: Another fun phone story, I was meeting my friends at the mall one day and as I was walking across the parking lot, I spied the guy I was talking to on the phone in front of the entrance. I said, "Okay, I'm here, can you see me?"

He said, "No." so I said, rather loudly, in hopes that he would hear me across the crowd, "Follow the sound of my voice!" I watch him give the phone a weird look and then proceed to turn around in a circle towards the side that he held the phone to his head. I don't know if I described that in a way you can imagine, but it was hysterical to watch all the people give him funny looks. I love my friends.


This chapter was pretty interesting, another show of the workaholic Maimi and the part with the cops was pretty cool. Nakky's awesome.

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« Reply #51 on: February 02, 2010, 02:27:31 PM »
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Why thank you, that makes things a lot easier for me, Chloe can't run or hide anymore  :hiakhiakhiak:
OMG she's ebil too  :shocked   XD

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*kicks the closet door violently* kRisZ!! Open the damn door! She said KNIFE!

kRisZ --> d(*.*)b <-- she's her headphone on  XD  *accidentally opens the door*

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I’ve done similar thing like Maimi only with my glasses, it was on top of my head
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I actually have done that myself with glasses but it wasn't on top of my head more like it was on my shirt below my neck
:lol:   I haven't experience that thing  XD





Saki - Reina - Ai - Eri convo was  :lol:


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"Er...Maimi what are you looking for?"

"My cell!"

"Isn't that it in your hand?"
OMG   :mon lmao:  :mon lmao:  :mon lmao:


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I'm coming back now-Maimi

'OSSU! Back to work'
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Airi smirked, took off her shades and produced her badge "detective Suzuki to see Mr. Nakai"
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Whoa! Very nice  :yep:




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Re: Colour of Truth - Chapter 10 - 02/01
« Reply #52 on: February 02, 2010, 05:13:40 PM »
@ Chloe: Of course you can trust me  :kekeke: I just grin like that naturally. I just wanted to cut the rope, honestly  :mon angel:

Yep I wear glasses too

I wanted to put in those descriptions to give a good visual...is it working???

@ Her Awesome Holiness:  :rofl: ....Wait a minute, some one did that to me before too  :err:.... you ebil people making me look like a fool  :mon annoy:

Oh yeah, I've got to give the cop team some specialists right??? So Yurina is the technical person, Nakky has great ears, Airi is an arms person, Miya....have a mentioned what Miya was good at???, Maasa, Chii and Chisa are not mentioned yet right??? :dunno: I lost track

@ kRisZ: Am not ebil....at least not really ebil  :wahaha:

 :grr: Just when the fun was about to start *tries to grab onto Chloe before she hops out*

Trust me they aren't the greatest experiences when you are in public  :sweat:

What can I say, Maimi is still the Maimi that we all know, so her moments have definitely got to be floating around in the fic.

Airi is Senior Detective, she's got a right to be cool  :glasses:

Chapter 11

Date: March 14
Time: 1:00 pm


Maimi was finishing up the last minute things before calling it a day, she checked her email as usual and printed out the things she needed

KNOCK KNOCK "hey you ready to go?" Maimi looked up to see Saki leaning on her door

"Hey I thought you left with the girls" as Maimi packed her things

"I wanted to do a final check that everything was in place for the presentation tomorrow morning, in which you may have to come with me,"

Maimi looked at Saki questioning the last part of her statement "why?"

"I just received news that the people we are presenting to are people that demand high level respect and since our parents are not going, we both should to show that their business means something to us"

"Does it really though?"

Saki laughed "in our own opinions, no but the parents are long-time business partners with these people so we don't want to lose the family reputation nor do we want to seem rude to these senior players in the business"

“*groan* Fine but only because you guys spent so much time on this"

"Thank you, now let's go slowpoke!" Saki walked ahead of Maimi

"Hey there is something I want you to see for this project I have" as Maimi handed Saki the file she had in her hand.  She unlocked the doors to the black BMW M3 and got in along with Saki

"Ohhh this doesn't sound so bad, we need some more detailed info though, so I guess that's where Ai-chan comes into the picture"

"Bingo! We need it ASAP though"

"I'll talk to Ai-chan when we get home, you'll have to cover her position in the kitchen then"

"No problem" as Maimi zoomed off towards their house

Date: March 14
Time: 4:00 pm


"Maimi-chan,  I have some info but if we want better data I will need more time to work on it"

"Alright, I will be in the my study if you need me and try to find out the location of the third party and their progress”
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Date: March 14
Time: 6:00 pm


"Suzuki-san, we have a lead on their profiles" Chinami and Chisa rushed in the department with a photograph "one of them should be this guy here"

"Okay now do we know where this guy is?"

"The vines are thick not much we can hear about his whereabouts"

Airi picked up a receiver and dialed a number "Maasa-chan how is everything on your side?"

"Okay in that case come back with Nakky and Kumai-chan, we have a picture" Airi put down the receiver and waited for the 2 "okay I want to see that list of locations and Chisa get copies of the photo" Maasa handed Airi the paper and she placed it on the table "I want you guys to split into 4 teams with other officers, we will have to do this in accordance to where we could cover more area.  Toku-san hand me a map"

Chisa came back with copies of the photo along with Chinami with a map "okay so a large amount of storage comps are in this area" as Airi circled the area with a pen "so I want 2 teams searching those in these areas first and as to the other 2 teams, search the northern ones here, I suspect the mountain locations will be a good spot to hide.  Check local convenience stores and restaurants discreetly so as to not blow our cover.  We don't know if they will kill them off early if they find out we're on their trail" The girls left to decide where they will search as Airi called Miyabi

"Miya we have a face but nothing else, what about you?"

"Nothing, there has been no contact since we were posted here"

"Keep on listening" as Airi hung up the phone and looked at the clock '7:00, we have 14 hours to find them'

Date: March 14
Time: 11:00 pm


RING RING "Suzuki Airi here... You sure?! Alright I will inform everyone, you keep on asking along as I gather everyone else in your area" Airi hung up and dialled for Miyabi "Miya we have a lead in the northern areas so call Chisa to find her exact location, there are still a lot in that area". Airi then dialed for Maasa and Chinami relaying the same message before getting her jacket

"Suzuki-san is there any progress?"

Airi looked up from putting on her jacket to find the commissioner there "ah Yoshizawa-san, we have a lead of the area and now we are going to check those in that area"

"Good work, you have to be careful as to not let the kidnappers freak out and start a killing frenzy"

"Yes Ma'am" as Airi rushed out of her office

Date: March 15
Time: 3:00 am- 6 hrs remaining


Airi and all teams checked in, eliminating those that have been checked leaving only 3 locations left unchecked.  "Okay guys put on your bullet-proof vests, we don't know if they are armed and the weapons they possess.  We have to be careful and we are to take them in, put on your walkie earpieces to keep in touch"

"Yes Ma'am" as Airi divided the people into 2 teams to check two of the locations

Time: 4:30 am- 4.5 hours remaining

"Nothing in this part, what about you Chisa?" Miyabi checked in with Chisa

"Just a couple more on my side" whispered Chisa.  Chisa and Maasa tiptoed around with other officers checking the last of the ones in their designated areas "okay all clear on my side" as her team hoistered their guns before joining Miyabi's team.

“Kumai-chan and you?”

“All clear”

"Ma'am we are clear on this location, permission to go to third location"

"Permission granted but don't do anything, wait for my arrival"

"Yes Ma'am" Miyabi’s team headed towards the third location

Time: 5:30 am- 3.5 hours before trial

"Nakky, how is it on your end"

"All clear Ma'am"

"Ma'am I am all cleared here too"

"Okay everyone let's go, last place" Airi went to join Miyabi's team who were all hidden as to not make any noises

"Okay group this last location is a bit tricky because of the forest and mountain, there can be compartments hidden in the forest.  Everyone remember we want to capture them and put them behind bars."

"Yes Ma'am" everyone yelled in a low voice

"Okay Maasa-chan, Toku-san, Kumai-chan take your team and start on the furthest Eastside, Nakky, Chisa, you guys start on the westside and Miya and I will start the northside and we will finish her at the southside. Okay everyone go"

The teams scattered all over the place as they carefully did their search.  Airi and Miyabi tiptoed around until Airi heard something in the compartment beside her, she signaled for Miyabi to keep quiet as she rested her head against the metal exterior.  She could not hear clearly but was sure their was men laughing inside as she and Miyabi went a small distance away from the compartment. "Calling all units, we have a suspicious compartment and request all teams to report here immediately". Airi then looked at Miyabi and signalled for where she wanted the teams to be as she thought of the situation at hand 'it is a closed surrounding inside so we can't risk the kidnappers taking them as hostage but if we lure them out then the witnesses will be fine' Airi looked around and picked up pebbles as the idea was formulating in her mind.

She threw the pebble at the entrance of the compartment CLUNK "what's that?"

"Maybe a dog or something"

CLUNK "you sure it is a dog??"

"No why don't you go check it out"

One of the guys got up and opened the door, the walked to the side out of view from the others.  A muffled sound could be heard as the other guys took out their own guns "Oi! Are you okay?"

"Er...yeah...except...you guys might want to come save me"

"Why?"

"There are those big foxes here and well I am too scared to move"

"You've got to be kidding me!!!! I'll come and scare them" as another stepped out and it became silent

The third thinking it was suspicious went and took a hostage putting them up ahead in front as a shield.  He slowly walked out to find no one out there, slowly he felt himself sweating at the situation "Oi! Come out! Don't make me pull the trigger on the witness!  Guys are you out here?"

Airi had to think of something but couldn't let the kidnappers go either, so she put up her hands in the air.  Seeing Airi's presence, the kidnapper was on his toes pushing the gun at the witness's temple, as he felt pressured. "Calm down, we don't want you to misfire"

"Where are the other 2?"

"They are with me alive and well"

"Release them!"

"I can't release them, in case after I do, you kill the witnesses" in the dark, Airi's hand was patting the side of her legs

"I will release the family members if you release my guys"

"Fair enough, let's trade but just so that you know if anyone of you do anything slightly incorrect, we have 4 teams surrounding this area"

"Okay, now show me my men" slowly the two were guided out by Chisa pointing a gun from behind as they walked forward. 

Airi put an arm out in front, stopping them "what about the family members?"  Slowly, the family members were walking out as each side took steps to the opposite ends.  Both parties were sweating and anticipating for any funny business, as the kidnapper could feel drops of sweat trickle down the side of his face, palms sweaty.  "Stay calm-"  At that moment a heart wrenching scream could be heard along with Miyabi flying from behind the guy holding the witness.  Toku-san and Chisa retained the 2 earlier captives as Miyabi cuffed the third.  Airi was curious as to the scream as she slowly walked over to the storage compartment, inching closer and closer until she could see inside.  There lay a man holding onto his bloody ankle and the son of the witness.  "Nakky! There's one more here!" Airi held a gun to the last kidnapper, kicking his gun away out of reach as Nakky rushed in and held the last family member out of the compartment.
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A figure got up from their position, took off the head gear and smirked "Ahhhh, it’s so good to be out once in a while.  Gotta tell Big B to give me more of these assignments, its much more fun doing this than my usual."

They picked up their Precision Sniper Rifle, heaving it over their shoulders and started walking away getting into a silver Corvette before zooming off into the night
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Time: 7:30 am- 1.5 hours before trial

Airi looked at the last kidnapper curiously, after she instructed Chinami and Nakky to escort the witness home and to court, as he was being taken away to the hospital, she then spoke into her earpiece "did anyone fire? Or hear someone fire?"

"No Ma'am"

"Thank you, you guys are dismissed except Chisa and Miyabi, I want you guys to come with me to the compartment"

"What's wrong detective?"

"Don't you think its weird that the last one was shot into this compartment but not a sound was heard?"

"Maybe it wasn't that there was no sound, but the sound was far away that we couldn't hear it" suggested Chisa

"Miya I want you to pretend you are the culprit and hold onto your ankle" Miyabi did as told "see from this position, the opening is here so which position out there would they be shot from?"

Chisa looked carefully outside and then back to Miyabi then she looked around Miyabi "detective I don't think it was done from that opening" Chisa pointed to the door "yet it was from here" Chisa pointed to the hole next to Miyabi

"It was through this metal? No wonder we couldn't hear anything" Miyabi turned to check the hole Chisa was referring to and checking through.  Chisa then walked outside and around with Airi and Miyabi in tow and checked the hole from the outside "by the looks of the hole it looks like..." She looked in the opposite direction "it came from up and above" the duo looked in the direction Chisa was looking and they saw a mountain

"Chisa, I want you and a couple of others to see if you can find anything up there. Go home and rest first but  I want to find out who and what it was"

"Yes Ma'am" as Airi and Miyabi left to get ready for trial
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Re: Colour of Truth - Chapter 11 - 02/03
« Reply #53 on: February 04, 2010, 06:14:50 AM »
Hmm.. Why do I have this feeling that Maimi's projects has something to do with helping Airi's team?

Is Maimi the one who shot the guy's ankle?!  :D

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Re: Colour of Truth - Chapter 11 - 02/03
« Reply #54 on: February 04, 2010, 02:47:09 PM »
Yay! Nakky makes her Appearance. I'm really growing to like her recently. You know, with a police station like that (filled with so many cute girls), I'm surprised it isn't clogged up with admirers :P

PS: I like how u include time and How many hours it is before e trial. Gives me a better idea of the timeline so I can visualize everything better :)

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Re: Colour of Truth - Chapter 11 - 02/03
« Reply #55 on: February 05, 2010, 04:05:10 PM »
@ stefy: Answer to your feelings could be that you hope and think that everything has a purpose and usually it does, but I can reassure you that may not be the case because as I think stating Maimi and Saki's company is one of the largest organization so them always being on a project is not surprising.  Also recall they are not the owners just yet, they work for their parents and are learning to step in their shoes so obviously they will be more pressured than anyone.  I mean I feel pressured as it is at work because my sister is in the same firm so I can relate to the feelings

Sneaky sneaky aren't we?  No Maimi did not shoot the guy's ankle, mystery person?

@ Mame-chan: I wanted to give everyone on Airi's team a specialty and I happen to think that having someone with sensitive ears is good for the team to decipher things at times, at least I would like to have that kind of sensitivity in my ears. 

I'm glad the timeline thing worked, I wanted to achieve a visual or at least try to for my readers

Chapter 12

Date: March 15
Time: 10:00 am


"The court pronounced the defendant guilty and is sentenced to 15 years in jail.  Court is dismissed"

Airi and Miyabi left the courthouse feeling tired and relieved as they stretched walking towards Airi's car.

“Suzuki-san” Airi and Miyabi turned to see Mitsui along with her assistant and another person they haven’t met

“Aika-san, thank you for your work” Airi and Miyabi bowed

“It was nothing compared to what you guys did, I’m glad you found our witness” Mitsui patted Airi on the shoulders

“I’m sorry for the trouble caused though, you probably worked very hard in case we couldn’t”

“Don’t worry too much, thanks to staff” Mitsui turned to Tsugunaga Momoko, assistant to Mitsui Aika and Umeda Erika, lawyer “like Momo-chan and Umeda-san, we were prepared for the worst”

“Umeda Erika desu” Erika bowed at them

“Tsugunaga Momoko desu” Momoko did the same

“Aika-san, is this your new pupil? Does that mean you’re going to retire from being Crown?”

“No, no Suzuki-san, Umeda-san is a lawyer at our offices, she’s been with us for 2 years now.  Still new but I see great potential in her”

“Stop Aika-san, you’re making me blush” Erika put a hand to her face “I usually don’t go to court proceedings of this genre, at least not yet. I do more of the small time ones but I aid the senpais in research when they need it”

“Nee nee, Aika-san, aren’t you forgetting me?” Momoko whined

Mitsui and Erika laughed “Of course, we wouldn’t forget our local clown in the office” Amused at the pouting face on Momoko, Airi and Miyabi couldn’t help but share in the laugher. “However that being said, I am introducing Momo-chan and Umeda-san to you for future reference, you guys may have the chance of working together in the future” Mitsui, Erika and Momoko bowed “Yoroshiku onegaishimasu” before walking off

“It’s great that we know more Crowns, I’m was thinking that Aika-san must really hate us when we bother her all the time about every case” Airi exclaimed stifling a yawn

"I didn’t think we were that bad, do you want me to drive us home?"

"Yeah, that'll be nice and that’s easy for you to say, you aren’t the one that actually has to deal with them and the Commissioner at the same time" Miyabi shrugged

"What's nice is that we get to go home and relax" Miyabi glanced sideways to see Airi’s once smiling face replaced with a troubled look "what's wrong?"

"I'm just thinking about that shot"

"No point in thinking about it now, your brain is probably fried from lack of sleep and using too much brain power from this case"

“I guess but it confuses me as to who they are and were they trying to help us and if so why?”

“Maybe it was an off duty cop?”

“We’ll know once we get the report from forensics”
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Date: March 15
Time: 11:00 am


“Ahhh glad that was over with” stated Maimi as they were heading back from the presenation

“Do you think we can beat the competition?”

“You know that answer as much as I do, we haven’t seen the presentation from the competitors but by the looks of the audience, I think we did at least give them good impressions”

“I guess.  Drinks tonight?”

“Sure, we haven’t gone out in a while now, let’s tell the girls, we’ll all get some sleep for now and then go out tonight” 

At that moment, Maimi thought of Risa and the fact that she hadn’t called her since she got her number “I want to invite someone else tonight”

“Who?”

“Not telling, not until it is confirmed and if they are available”

Saki smirked at Maimi “They better be hot”

“You’ll see”
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Date: March 15
Time: 11:00 am


Taiyo Nakai threw the newspaper across the room after reading the headlines

Kenji Yamaguchi sentenced to 15 years in jail for shootout…

‘Damn it!!! The boss is not going to like this one bit’ KNOCK KNOCK “Who is it” he growled

Ken walked in with a cell phone in hand, a cell phone Taiyo immediately recognized, “Sir, he wishes to speak to you”

“Thank you Ken” he took the phone away from Ken and waited for Ken to leave first before straightening himself “Hello?”

“How could you let this happen??? I thought you had this all under control???”

“I did boss, I don’t know how they could find the witnesses so quickly-“

“No excuses, your task was to keep Nakai out of jail, he was necessary for his connections.  I don’t like failure!!!”

“I understand, it won’t happen again”

“It better not or you should be concerned about your own position.  Find someone that fits my descriptions as soon as possible so we can continue business”

“Yes sir, I understand”

“Oh and one more thing, one of our own was killed recently in a forest, I presume you’ve heard of the news”

“Yes I have read about it in the newspaper”

“Well I need you to find out who’s doing it is.  I don’t like one of our own getting killed without knowing why and who, he was a key player as well in my plans”

“I will do my best to gather that information” ~CLICK~ ‘Safe for now but I won’t be lucky next time.  The death of a drug dealer in the forest… I remember the details clearly now, it was reported as a probable internal or underworld killing.  I have to redeem myself…’
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Date: March 15
Time: 11:30 am


~ Nanchatte Ren'ai wo kurikaesu onna no ko no kimochi Dare ni demo wakacchau wa onna no ko nara~ “Hello?”

“Niigaki-san! It’s me Yajima Maimi”

“Oh hi!  How are you?” ‘Finally’

“I am good, I was wondering what you are doing tonight?”

“Most likely nothing special, why what’s up?”

“Well the girls and I were thinking about drinks and I was wondering if you were interested in coming along?”

“That sounds nice but do you mind if I bring other people?” ‘I can’t go by myself it would make me feel awkward’

“Of course not, we usually go to this pub called Dusk, are you familiar with it?”

“Yeah I know which you are referring to, so how about I meet you guys at 10?”

“That sounds like a plan”

“By the way, how is Takahashi-san’s ankle?”

“It’s a lot better, she can walk and run already.  I thank you for your concern on her behalf”

“No problem, so I’ll see you later”

“Okay, bye bye” ~CLICK~

Risa immediately dialed for Airi next “Hello Airi?”

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Re: Colour of Truth - Chapter 12 - 02/05
« Reply #56 on: February 06, 2010, 06:27:11 PM »
oh yes ! miya+captain & airi+maimi going to meet again thks to maimi+risa huh ?  :twothumbs

case was intense  :panic:

sounded like the trial had nothing to do with maimi's stuffs mmm...unless...oh well let's just wait  :D

oh Momokooooooooooooooo~

next chap please  :D

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Re: Colour of Truth - Chapter 12 - 02/05
« Reply #57 on: February 06, 2010, 06:48:13 PM »
Gah I finally caught up with this story (in a single day!). So proud of myself. Niway~ I can't help but noticed that your writings have improved tremendously. Kudos to ya :D

I love this fic even though I seldom read the Kids fics (but since MM is in it, it's cool with me). I kinda get the CSI-cum-The Office-cum-Espionage vibe, that is, if you have watched them before :w00t: I also love the fact that you included the timeline.

So now Risa-Airi-Miya are gonna meet Maimi-Saki-Ai-Reina-Eri XD And Maimi likes Risa. Guess we can't hope for TakaGaki here?

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Re: Colour of Truth - Chapter 12 - 02/05
« Reply #58 on: February 06, 2010, 11:01:53 PM »
Next chapter  please Faqu-chan. ^^
I am curious T_T
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Re: Colour of Truth - Chapter 12 - 02/05
« Reply #59 on: February 07, 2010, 06:34:41 PM »
The natural grin of evilness  :P

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I wanted to put in those descriptions to give a good visual...is it working???
Since I like to watch that kind of show,  :yep:  I can visual it alright.

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*tries to grab onto Chloe before she hops out*
*successfully hops out before FaqU could grab but tripped and collided with K*

Parents like Maimi and Saki have usually demand so much from their children and only care about the business, it’s not even funny :smhid

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They picked up their Precision Sniper Rifle
Nice :D

Erika as lawyer? LOL didn’t see that coming.

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~ Nanchatte Ren'ai wo kurikaesu onna no ko no kimochi Dare ni demo wakacchau wa onna no ko nara~
XD

Finally some YajiGaki! I’m hoping Risa will bring Miya too, continuing the MiyaSaki-ness.


TakaSemaru  :heart:

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