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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 81 - (8/18)]
« Reply #660 on: August 20, 2010, 05:00:29 AM »
@aussie: oh, very creepy :smhid

@Ada: Yeah, but 100 is still a lot  :D

@sapphire: oh, it was meant to be in a evil/creepy way.  sorry if i didn't get that across very well, lack of sleep :nervous

@kawaii beam: your perception about sayu is EXACTLY right.  she rly doesn't care about anybody else :angry:

@fallenxangel: Well, TanaKame was shocked by Ai and Risa are both so casual about it so... well, you'll see XD

@Swtme03: so much pain going on.. :cry:

@rndmnwierd: your last line made me LOL :lol:

@kano-chan: true, it's not a story without angst, huh? :P

@kurosawa87: maybe~ maybe not~ :D


so I planned/mapped out the entire story, and I made it exactly 100! nice, huh? XD
I still have a lot of some angst left, so that's all going right in :)

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Chapter 82

   “So that’s what’s happening this month!” Tsunku exclaimed, clapping his hands together.  “Can we work on it right away?”

   The producer looked around the blank faces of his staff and idols.  He cleared his throat once, and nobody seemed to come back down to earth.   He cleared his throat louder and banged the table with a fist.  Everybody jumped and turned their attention back to the head man.

   “Did everybody hear what I just said?” Tsunku questioned.  “I’m talking about future plans for High-Queen; this is important stuff!”

   “We heard everything,” Ai yawned.  “Our next single is going to have two couplings: Reina’s solo and my solo.”

   “We’re having a special performance hour on Song Fighter for Christmas,” Reina continued, “where we’ll perform all three songs.”

   “I’m supposed to have a meeting with High-Queen to pick out the single and the couplings,” Risa said. 

   “And right after that, I’ll design something appropriate for the special live event,” Eri jumped in.  “Tsunku-san, we all heard you.”

   “… Well,” the flabbergasted producer said, “I guess you all were listening.  Amazing how some people can look so out of it yet be so into it… Ah well, if you heard me, that’s good.  Any ideas for the single, Niigaki-san?”

   “Actually, there’s something that I saw before in her notebook,” Ai interrupted.  “May I suggest something, Risa?”

   “By all means,” the bean smiled.

   “‘Shouganai Yume Oibito’,” the leader said.  “I think that should be our next single.”  Risa smile dropped.

   “‘Helpless Dream Chaser’, huh?” the producer mumbled.  “It sounds interesting.  What do you think, Niigaki-san?  Is there a chance it’ll be a hit?”

   “… I don’t know—”

   “It’s definitely a guaranteed charter,” Ai jumped in.  “I’ve seen it, and it’s amazing.  Give it a chance, Tsunku-san.”

   “Have you seen it, Tanaka?”

   “You don’t need my opinion,” Reina said in a low voice.  “This is Ai— your top performer— telling you that it’s going to be a definite hit.”

   “I don’t think it’s that definite—” Risa started.

   “Well, if both girls think it’s good material…” Tsunku mumbled.

   “But if the song writer herself doesn’t think it’s the right choice…” Eri started, trying to rescue her friend.

   “It’s that song plus our talent,” Ai said boldly.  “I believe Risa has what it takes to make it sound good… and I can make it sound better.”

   “This isn’t just about you, Ai,” Eri growled.  “This is also about your partner—”

   “I can make it sound better too,” Reina cut her girlfriend off, receiving a glare in return.  “I’m with Ai in this one.”

   “Well, I certainly have faith in High-Queen’s talent as well as yours, Niigaki-san,” Tsunku said.  “And if the singers really feel for this song, I believe we should go with it.”

   “… Okay,” Risa sighed.  “I’ll work on the instrumental, then.”

   “Good, we want to start recording in a week,” the producer decided.  He turned to his performers.  “I want you two to get the score from Niigaki-san and practice, understand?”

   “Yes,” the idols answered in unison.

   “Okay, meeting over.”

   Tsunku walked out of the room.  All four girls gathered their own bags and belongings and followed the producer out.  The elevator dinged as soon as Risa pressed the button.  She and the older singer walked in but Eri pulled Reina out.

   “I forgot something back in the room,” she said.  “Wait for me downstairs, Risa-chan, and give Ai the score.”

   “Okay.”

   “I’m going ahead, Reina,” Ai said.

   The elevator door closed and the yankii turned to walk down the hallway again.  But the turtle grabbed her arm and spun her around, glaring.  Reina caught on in an instant: Eri didn’t leave anything behind in the meeting room.

   “Why did you do that?” Eri whispered furiously.

   “Do what?”

   “What you just did back there!” the older girl growled.  “Risa-chan obviously didn’t want to give you guys that song.  Why did you side with Ai?”

   “I believe my leader makes right choices when it comes to important matter,” the yankii whispered back.

   “But you didn’t have to agree with her anyway!” Eri yelled in a hushed tone.  “And I don’t even know why Ai was being so stubborn back there; I know they just broke up but that was low to corner Risa like that by getting Tsunku-san’s interest!”

   “Hey, don’t talk about Ai like that!” Reina said, her tone a little less than friendly now.  “She’s not the type to get that kind of petty revenge just because she lost her girlfriend.”

   “…I know that,” Eri sighed, sounding sad rather than angry.  “That’s why I’m worried for them.  Risa just came home that day and told me so cheerfully that they broke up.  And she even cut her hair…  She never told me the exact reason either.  But personally, I think it’s because she feels guilty about Sayumi.”

    “Well, I’m glad you think that way because that’s what I was thinking too,” Reina sighed.  “No offense, but your cousin can be…”

   “Bratty?  Immature?  Unreasonable?” Eri suggested.

   “Something like that,” the yankii grumbled.  She actually hadn’t been thinking of an exact adjective; there was just something off about her to Reina.  Basically, she just didn’t like her.

   “I hate seeing Risa like this,” Eri whined.  “I wish there was just something I could do for them…”

   “Hey, neither of them are kids, okay?” Reina comforted.  “They can sort out their own problems.  All we have to do is stand by in the sidelines and be there for them when they need us.”

   “I guess you’re right…” Eri nodded.  “Risa… Sayumi… They’re all so important to me…

**  **  ** 

   Risa dropped her bag to the elevator floor and took out a booklet.  On the cover was the title of High-Queen’s next single.  She straightened her back and handed the leader the score.

   “This is it,” Risa said, casually.

   “You just carry it around?” Ai asked, raising an eyebrow.

   “It’s… an important song,” Risa said.  “I actually have everything made already… even a demo of the instrumental.”

   “I guess we can work fast on this then,” Ai smiled. 

   She lowered her bag on her shoulders and unzipped it to put the score away.  Risa swung her own purse back up to her shoulders, but knocked the singer’s bag to the floor in the process, scattering everything around.

   “I’m so sorry!” Risa apologized, bending down to gather up the spilled belongings.

   “It’s fine,” Ai laughed, bending down.  “You can leave it.”

   “No, it’s my fault, I was careless,” the bean said, dumping the things she gathered back into the singer’s bag.

   “Thank you, Risa,” the idol said, straightening her back.  “By the way, you look good with the short hair.  It suits you.”

   “Thanks,” the younger girl grinned.  “And you always look good.”

   “Make-up,” Ai joked.  “It does wonders.”

   Risa laughed at the older girl’s remark.  The elevator dinged, indicating that they had reached the ground floor.  The two girls walked out and faced each other again.

   “Well, I’m heading home,” Ai said.  “I’ll see you next time.”

   “Un, see you.”

   The singer turned around and walked towards the exit.  Risa watched her get further and further away as her smile disappeared from her lips.  She thought about how casually they had just spoken for the whole day.  It seemed as though they had no special relationship at all in the first place.  But Risa knew that they both still held the pain of lost love inside.

   “Her back looks so lonely,” she thought.  “I wonder how lonely I look right now…

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I'm depressing everybody, huh? :cry:
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 82 - (8/19)]
« Reply #661 on: August 20, 2010, 05:15:42 AM »
D: of all songs why that one?? unless ai's planing to tell risa about who she really is by the end of this(or durring it)

plus that mini argument with Reina and Eri is pretty natural, like they both want the best for their friends yet they're on diff, teams...dose that make sense? ^^;

and the poor girls! i bet they really wanted to unleash their feelings to eachother but just cant >.< ah~ angsty angst sucks D:

great job :bow: :thumbsup :heart:

and sayu is such a clod hearted bunny >.>
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 82 - (8/19)]
« Reply #662 on: August 20, 2010, 07:20:51 AM »
>o<!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Damn D=   it gives me a heart ache for all the sadness T__T

That song, its the revelation... something is cooking... like The Rock XD

Ai can be plenty stubborn too and with that she won't let her go =D

And Eri and Reina discuss... it's just normal, they don't know what to do... for helping their friends >o<

Mmmmm Sayu's plot is working but It couldn't last long =3

Awesome >o<


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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 82 - (8/19)]
« Reply #663 on: August 20, 2010, 12:21:45 PM »
I'm glad i could get a laugh, I'm kinda mad a Jun, though, so I totally meant that.

I was really thinking it would be more awkward between Ai and Risa, one that one hand, I'm glad it's not, but on the other, I wish it was. Is that making sense?

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« Reply #664 on: August 20, 2010, 03:14:33 PM »

“We heard everything,” Ai yawned.  “Our next single is going to have two couplings: Reina’s solo and my solo.”

“We’re having a special performance hour on Song Fighter for Christmas,” Reina continued, “where we’ll perform all three songs.”

“I’m supposed to have a meeting with High-Queen to pick out the single and the couplings,” Risa said. 
   
“And right after that, I’ll design something appropriate for the special live event,” Eri jumped in.  “Tsunku-san, we all heard you.”

“… Well,” the flabbergasted producer said, “I guess you all were listening.  Amazing how some people can look so out of it yet be so into it… Ah well, if you heard me, that’s good.”
They are good :twothumbs
   
Her back looks so lonely,” she thought.  “I wonder how lonely I look right now…
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 82 - (8/19)]
« Reply #665 on: August 20, 2010, 10:40:29 PM »
@kawaii beam: oh it defnitely makes sense :)  and yes, sayu is a cold-hearted bunny XD

@Haruka: awww sry for the heartache...  :( but then, you said awesome so i'm assuming that's a good thing XD

@rndmnwierd: it totally makes sense, i get what you mean and that's what i was aiming for, so it's all good :D

@fallenxangel: LOL it seems so simple, doesn't it? just go back~ :P


So I got one chapter done and i MIGHT update again tonight, cuz it's friday :D

And this is a special chapter... yes, it's one of those SONG fic chapters~  :cow:



So start playing the song when it starts in the story... don't watch the vid though, just listen and read, it makes a difference :D

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Chapter 83

   The leader kicked off her sneakers and shuffled into the apartment.  She was very tired; who knew it would be so hard to resist flirting with your ex-girlfriend?  She wanted to just lie down for a while but she managed to drag herself to the bathroom to wash up. 

   She went into her room and dropped her bag, which was still unzipped, allowing a couple trinkets to fall out.  But Ai didn’t care; all she cared about was getting into some comfortable clothes and sleeping. 

   She stripped and pulled a long t-shirt over her head.  As she turned to face her bed, she noticed something by her bag that she didn’t recognize.  Ai walked over and took the flat plastic square into her hand: it was a CD case.  The actual white disc didn’t have anything written on it. 

   The leader cocked her head to the side, trying to figure out how it got into her bag.  Then it hit her.  She had dropped her bag and everything had fallen out… Risa had helped her put everything back in… Could this CD be from…?

   Ai didn’t feel so sleepy anymore.  She immediately dashed to her desk drawer and started to dig for her old CD player.  She had never used it since she got an MP3 player, but she was sure it was in there somewhere. 

   Finally, the round silver object was unearthed from the drawer.  Ai dashed back to her bed and sat cross-legged, right in the middle.  She plugged in the listening device into her ears and popped the CD in.  She then sighed to calm herself, and clicked the “play” button.

   There was silence for a while.  Someone cleared her throat. 

   “Ah, ah.  Mic check, mic check… is this thing on?” It was a playful and confused voice.  Ai smiled at the familiarity.  “Oh wait; it is on… that’s awkward.

   That did it; Ai started to giggle out loud as the voice on the CD started to mumble something about volume adjustment.  The person then cleared her throat again, and started to speak.

   “I wrote this in one night because the song and the lyrics came to me,” Risa’s voice said calmly.  “This one’s for you, Ai.  Please listen to it… ‘Never Forget’.”

   A soft guitar line started to play at a reasonably fast pace.  The leader hugged the CD player to her chest, as though it would help her to hear better.  The guitar was joined by the drums and the beat got slightly faster.  It sounded… happy.  A familiar voice entered the song, but it wasn’t speaking anymore.

I’ll never forget you
I won’t ever forget about you
I wanted to stay by your side forever
But I guess it can’t be helped
Ah, I think I’m going to cry

   The idol’s eyes widened.  Risa… was singing for her.  She had written this song while thinking of her.  But why did it have to be because of their break-up?  That was her only regret.

Here’s a toast to the day we met
My hair has grown longer since then
Did you know that?

   Ai started to laugh.  It was so ironic; indeed, Risa’s hair had grown longer since they met.  But now she cut it so it was way shorter than when they first met.  But of course, that didn’t change the fact that it had grown… before she cut it.

Was it chance that we met?
Then is our parting also a stroke of luck?

   Ai’s lips pursed together.  She wanted to say that their meeting was not chance, it was fate.  But who was listening?

The stars you see in Tokyo
And the stars you see back at home
You taught me that they were the same

   “But you taught me so much more,” Ai thought, closing her eyes.  The song turned into the chorus again.

I’ll never forget you
I won’t ever forget about you
I wanted to stay by your side forever
But I guess it can’t be helped

You’ll never forget me
Don’t ever forget about me
I wanted to stay by your side a little longer
But it’s time to part now
Ah, I think I’m going to cry

   “Idiot…” Ai thought, sniffling to hold her tears back.  “Putting such sad lyrics with a happy tune… Are you trying to cheer yourself up?”  The song turned out of the chorus and into the second verse.

Memory is such a simple thing
So even sadness can turn into a mere memory too

   Ai bit down on her bottom lip.  Could it really?  Could such sadness, such pain become just a memory?  Could it really become just another part of the past?

We’ll surely meet again
We’ll surely laugh together
Our next meeting is inevitable

   “We’ll always see each other,” Ai thought.  “And we can laugh together too.  But can we laugh in earnest?  Risa, can you truly laugh from your heart?  Because I don’t think I’ll be able to do it…

   The song traveled on to the interlude.  A soft guitar solo played along with the drums in the background.  Soon, the melody came to the light melody from the beginning again, as Risa’s chorus of “Na-na-na”s entered the song.  Ai closed her eyes, trying to vision her ex-lover singing.  Her smile, her laugh, her voice… it all pierced through her mind.

I’ll never forget you
I won’t ever forget about you
I wanted to stay by your side forever
But I guess it can’t be helped

You’ll never forget me
Don’t ever forget about me
I wanted to stay by your side a little longer
But it’s time to part now
Ah, I think I’m going to cry

   Ai heard the voice crack on the last line.  The song continued to play as quiet sniffling came along with it.  The singer’s own tears started to slowly trickle down her cheeks.

   The song finally came to a close, leaving only the quiet sobbing in the background.  She cleared her throat again to speak.

   “I’ve always been very cruel to you,” the voice said shakily.  “But this is another selfish request: Please don’t forget about me…  Gomenasai.  Arigatou.  Sayonara.

   Silence took over the audio and the CD came to a stop.  Ai sat still, staring into space, having completely lost control over her tears.  She didn’t even make any sounds but they just poured out of her eyes and dropped down to her bed sheets.

   “Gomenasai… Arigatou…” Ai echoed in her head.  “Sayonara…

   The knot in her throat finally broke.  Ai started to breathe heavily, then sob, then cry out.  She didn’t care who was listening, she started to bawl as loud as she could.  Her hands immediately went to her chest.  She reached down her shirt and took out the pendent around her neck and clutched it to her heart.  She bent over as though in immense pain and cried out, her face being immersed in tears. 

   It hurt too much.  She had always been the responsible and mature type, just the way a leader should be.  But she never knew that those qualities would get in the way of fighting for what she wanted.  Why couldn’t she just be selfish for once?  Why couldn’t she hold on to Risa?  Screw Sayumi!  Screw Junjun!  That’s what she wanted to yell out but… it was not in her nature.  Ai knew that already, which made everything worse.

   She continued to wail while holding the CD player and the locket in her hands.  There was a click sound from the living room, then some quick thumping noises.  Ai’s bedroom door burst open to reveal her yankii partner, eyes wide in shock. 

   Reina quickly dashed over to the side of the older girl’s bed and paused.  She didn’t know what to do.  Her friend was crying in pain right in front of her, but she didn’t know what to do.  This had never happened before; should she say something?  Should she tell her to be strong or just let her cry?

   Then, the younger singer just let her impulse take over.  She sat next to Ai on her bed and wrapped her arms around her.  Feeling the warmth and care from Reina’s hug, the crying girl embraced her back and sobbed into her shoulders.  That was all Ai needed; she just needed someone to be there for her. 

   “Just wait in the sidelines and be there for them,” Reina thought to herself.  “I guess I was more right than I thought…

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I think I did a pretty good job in this chapter, compared to the last 10 chapters or so XD

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 83 - (8/20)]
« Reply #666 on: August 20, 2010, 10:54:08 PM »
D: THAT WAS SO SAD!!!! OMG and that's like the perfect song XD

lol when did risa have the time do do that?? XD and it was pretty sneaky of her~

poor ai-chan though >.< she wnats to lash out but cant....i serously know how that feels trust me. and poor reina dosent even know what to do XD sometimes a hug is all it needs~ X3

really great job and i cant wait for moar~ X3
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« Reply #667 on: August 21, 2010, 12:17:59 AM »
...I just died a little... That was so sad, but fitting, in a way. A song brought them together, a song should be there as they part. Poor Ai, finally letting it all go, but she still has Reina to look out for her. I wonder if Risa will break like that in front of Eri?

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 83 - (8/20)]
« Reply #668 on: August 21, 2010, 12:31:18 AM »
Chapter 82
Pretty cool how they heard everything Tsunku said. :O2
Reina stood up for Ai-chan too! :yep:
And why are they acting so happy in the elevator? :O
At least say something about the break up, but that would be pretty sad. :O

Chapter 83
Waa~!!! I'm so sad!!! :cry:
I think I'm being a little too emotional, but I had to try not to cry. :mon cry:
I love this chapter! Good job! :twothumbs Even though it's freaking sad..  :( :cry:

Wow...I have way too many "sad"s in my post. :lol:

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« Reply #669 on: August 21, 2010, 12:50:20 AM »
</3 That was kinda really terribly sad. But, terrible in a good sense. ...As good as sad can be.

I had to try not to cry and ended up tearing up anyways. D:

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« Reply #670 on: August 21, 2010, 01:49:18 AM »
OMG I love the song >o<!!

I Love Risa too <3

Damn this chap was so tearly XD

But it was damn good =D


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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 83 - (8/20)]
« Reply #671 on: August 21, 2010, 03:59:53 AM »
SarangAi having "updating olympics" around the year XD :heart:
U asked where I had gone to? ^^ I read many chapters at once, gotta read these um.. latest 5 (?) next week coz GOTTA POSTWHORE. Lol :D Sorry that I'm not reading them right away~ ^^ :grin:

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« Reply #672 on: August 21, 2010, 04:37:59 AM »
@kawaii beam: She did it in a night... let's say...  XD yup, once i just let my friend cry and then hugged her, and that's when she finally told me what was wrong so... yah.  apparantly it's some sort of psychology thingie  XD

@rndmnwierd: omg it's like you read my mind... :shocked

@kano-chan: they're pretending like there's nothing wrong so it'll be easier on themselves... but it doesn't work cuz it still hurts inside :cry:

@xrainbowgumdropsx: tearing up is a good sign, just for this chapter XD

@Haruka: i love gaki-san too~ pretty obvious from my avatar/sig huh? :D

@Fushigidane: oh~ is that why everybody's gone today?  No wonder i didn't get too many comments, i thought ppl were leaving me :cry: XD


WOOT two chapters a day! :cow:

but you guys just might kill me after this chapter... :bleed eyes:

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Chapter 84

   “Why do I keep on losing?” Sayumi whined, throwing her cards down.

   “You keep on forgetting to say ‘Uno’, that’s why,” Eri explained, rolling her eyes.

   “It’s not fair!” the bunny complained.  “Both of you see that I only have one card left in my hand before I do; how am I supposed to say ‘Uno’ first?”

   “That’s the point of the game, Sayu,” Risa laughed.

   The three friends were playing “Uno” together on Sayumi’s bed.  The youngest girl was sitting up, thanks to the remote-controlled bed, and Risa was sitting with her because the bunny insisted upon it.  Eri was sitting separately on a chair.  Junjun was standing in a corner, once again, staring at the floor.

   “We’ll play again,” Eri decided.  “Junjun, are you sure you don’t want to join us?”

   “I’m fine, thank you Kamei-san,” the panda answered.

   “Well then, I’ll shuffle the deck again…” the turtle mumbled, gathering the cards into a pile.  Before she could start to deal, there was a knock at the door.

   “Come in,” Sayumi called.

   The door clicked open to reveal two beautiful girls that they were all familiar with.  The older one was wearing a thin sweatshirt over a tank-top with jeans, despite the cold December weather.  Her long brown hair was up in a messy bun.  The younger girl was in her usual pigtails-do with a purple vest over a long-sleeve white shirt.  She was wearing black boots with a black mini skirt, contradicting the winter season just like her leader.  The elder girl was holding a bouquet of flowers while the younger was holding a plastic bag.

   “Ai…” Risa breathed.  She tried to get up but she was quickly tugged back down by her shirt.  She turned around to face Sayumi’s pout.

   “Don’t get up,” she whined quietly.  “Stay beside me.”

   The bean pursed her lips as she made herself comfortable on the bed again.  She had almost forgotten that she wasn’t Ai’s anymore, she was Sayumi’s.  But she still couldn’t stop herself from watching the singer greet the pianist in the corner of the room.

   “Reina-chan!  Ai!” Eri yelled in surprise, standing up.  “What are you two doing here?”

   “We thought we would visit Michishige-san in the hospital,” Ai said, smiling.  “After all, she is our fashion coordinator’s cousin.  And we got pretty well-acquainted the last time we met.”

   The leader walked past the turtle towards the patient.  Eri quickly shuffled over to her girlfriend and spoke in a low voice so that only they could hear.

   “Whose idea was this?” Eri asked.  “Why would Ai want to come here?  Doesn’t she know that Risa and Sayumi are…”

   “Of course she knows,” the yankii whispered back.  “She doesn’t have a special reason; Ai is actually here to just visit your cousin.  It’s proper manner and courtesy, and she’s the kind of person that follows it.  That’s all, really.”

   “…Normally I wouldn’t believe that,” Eri sighed.  “But because it’s Ai we’re talking about, I think it makes sense.”

   “Yeah, we’re not here to make trouble babe, don’t worry,” Reina comforted.  She held up the plastic bag in her hand.  “Look, we even brought apples.  That’s as friendly as I can get, you know.”

   “Thanks, Reina-chan,” Eri smiled, giving her a quick peck on the cheek. 

   She then turned around to focus on the interaction between her cousin and the older singer.  As Ai handed the patient the bouquet of flowers, Sayumi’s lips stretched out into the sweetest smile on earth.

   “That is so very kind of you, Takahashi-san!” she squealed.  “And I love freesias too… thank you so much!”

   “I’m glad you like them,” Ai said, smiling.  “I hope you get well soon, Michishige-san.  And it looks like you will, since you look very happy today.”

   “Oh, I’m very happy these days,” Sayumi giggled.  She linked her arm with the bean’s and leaned on her shoulder.  “Since Risa-chan and I are together now, that is.”

   Risa looked down, trying to hide the obvious discomfort of her ex-girlfriend seeing her with her current girlfriend.  Eri gasped softly, scared of how Ai may react to Sayumi’s senseless remark.  Reina put her arm around the turtle to calm her down but she herself scowled deeply.  Junjun gritted her teeth as her fist got tighter.  But despite the sudden tension in the air, Ai smiled at the newly-made couple in front of her.

   “That’s good,” she commented.  “Congratulations.  You two look good together.”

   “That idiot,” Reina thought.  “Will you stop acting selfless for once?

   “We do look good together, don’t we?” Sayumi babbled on.  “We’ve known each other since forever, so I think it’s only natural.  Don’t you think so, Risa-chan?”

   “Mm… Yeah…” the older girl mumbled, still not looking up.

   “And we’ve been so close to each other,” the bunny giggled, “so it’s not that hard to get even closer.”

   Suddenly, Sayumi cupped Risa’s cheek and turned her head towards her.  Without any warning, she leaned in and kissed the bean on her lips. 

   Risa’s eye widened in shock.  Junjun’s eyes also grew bigger as her jaws tightened.  Eri gasped louder this time as she subconsciously started to move forward.  Reina wrapped her arms around the turtle’s waist and pulled her back, as she tried to root herself to the floor.  She observed her leader’s face, expecting some indication of shock.  But Ai’s features were completely smooth and expressionless as she watched the two girls in front of her kiss; but her fists were curled tightly behind her back.

   Risa finally came back to her senses and pushed the bunny back a little.

   “Sa-Sayumi!”

   “Aw, don’t be shy, Risa-chan,” the younger girl giggled.  “Although you’re really cute like that.”

   The bean turned red as she kept her head down.  She was embarrassed; she felt like she had been shamed, being kissed like that in front of her ex-lover.  She could only imagine Ai’s expression; was she angry?  Was she shocked?  Was she sad?  But instead of any predictions that Risa made, a soft laughter came from where the singer was standing.

   “You two really are close to each other,” Ai chuckled.  “Well, you seem happy enough to heal fast, Michishige-san.  Reina and I need to go now; we just stopped by on our way to our dance lesson.”

   “We don’t have dance lesson today,” Reina grumbled to herself, allowing only Eri to hear her thoughts.

   “Okay then,” the patient smiled.  “Thank you for stopping by, Takahashi-san and Tanaka-san.  It was very sweet of you.”

   “Our pleasure,” Ai answered.  “Come by the studio when you feel better.  We can have a longer conversation then.”

   The leader turned and started to walk towards the door, tapping her partner’s arm along the way.  Reina let go of her girlfriend, leaned towards her, and whispered in her ear.

   “Ai won’t lose her cool over this,” she murmured.  “So you have to keep your composure too.  Don’t do anything rash, you hear me?”

   “I don’t want to promise that to you,” Eri growled.  “Sayumi needs to be taught—”

   “According to current rules of our life, Risa and Sayumi are going out,” Reina interrupted.  “All your cousin did was kiss her girlfriend.  She didn’t break any rules.  So stay composed, alright?”

   “… Fine.”

   “That’s my girl,” the yankii whispered.  She gave her a quick kiss on her forehead before following her leader out of the room.

   “That was our first kiss, wasn’t it, Risa-chan?” Sayumi exclaimed happily, causing Eri to turn her attention back to her friends.  “I’m so happy now!”

   “Yeah…” the older girl mumbled.

   “I love you so much, Risa-chan,” the bunny said, leaning on her girlfriend.

   “I love you too,” the bean replied back.  Those words were almost habitual now.

   The bunny sighed contently as she linked her arms with Risa’s.  Eri watched the two girls sitting together on the bed.  She then turned to look at Junjun in the corner, who was staring at the floor with the most miserable expression in the world.  The turtle turned her attention back to her cousin.

   “Sayumi, you’re not a child anymore,” she thought, wrinkling her eyebrows.  “Junjun already sacrificed her feelings because she loved you.  When are you going to realize that loving someone also means letting them go…?

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 84 - (8/20)]
« Reply #673 on: August 21, 2010, 05:07:45 AM »
OMG 2 CHAPPIES?! WOOT!! :otomerika:

and omg sayu like needs to go away! >.> ai was gutsy enough to come visit her and nice enough to eventhough it hurts her to see risa with that evil bunny >.> and sayu just loves to see her suffer for it  :banghead:

i kinda hope that eri will explode and like verbaly pwn sayu XD
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 84 - (8/20)]
« Reply #674 on: August 21, 2010, 05:16:43 AM »
I'm not sure if I'm supposed to be sad or angry about what happened in this chapter. :smhid I don't know how much more Sayu-evilness I can take. :banghead:
I knew Ai-chan can totally keep her cool!  :sweatdrop:
Grrrr!!! :angry: I think I'll die from this. X(

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 84 - (8/20)]
« Reply #675 on: August 21, 2010, 05:54:09 AM »
Actually, that chapter made me resent Jun even more. Sayu was (reluctantly) accepting that Risa had her heart set on someone else, until Jun decided to intervene and 'make her happy' and make Risa 'responsible' for her. I hope she was feeling miserable not because of Sayu kissing Risa, but for Ai and Risa. It's like Jun is turning Sayu more and more into this spoilt and possessive brat. Sayu is no angel, but she is also used to being pampered by those around her, and no one bothered to enlighten her that she can't force Risa to 'love' her. And with Jun having clumsily played matchmaker by guilt-tripping Risa, it's going to be even more difficult. Well done Jun, you've achieved your aim by making Sayu the only person happy in this situation. So happy that she's losing herself. I sure wouldn't have minded Eri just let her anger go. It was pretty strange to see Reina be the one doing the restraining but I guess she knows and understands Ai well enough to act rashly. Though I get the feeling that Reina will be shaking Ai up a bit once they are by themselves :lol:





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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 84 - (8/20)]
« Reply #676 on: August 21, 2010, 07:14:11 AM »
while I was sleeping you just uploads 2 chap :shocked

83: It was THE perfect song and it was freaking sad :cry:  :mon cry:

84: Yeah aichan never lose her cool self (just when she is alone maybe...)
but eri can lose her cool self and wake some sense at sayu :mon cweepy:
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 84 - (8/20)]
« Reply #677 on: August 21, 2010, 08:00:51 AM »
@Chapter 83
 :cry:
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....Aichan... :fainted:

I totally freaking cried while reading this!!!!! :frustrated: Especially at the last parts where you explained Ai's pain...in DETAIL!!!   :mon runcry:
Like the tears were really streaming down my face!!  :farofflook:
How could you?!!! Making one of your biggest fans cry like that  :mon whimper:



@Chapter 84

SAYU!!!!!!!   :mon fire:

You evil piece of S#%*!!!!!  :mon fierce:
I hope karma comes back and EATS THE SHIT OUT OF YOUR ASS someday!!!! :scolding:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 84 - (8/20)]
« Reply #678 on: August 21, 2010, 01:29:26 PM »
that last chapter gave a good indication to what Jun might do

83 was really good and I guess something Risa had to do and even though it hurts her she tried to make it less hurtful than usual
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 84 - (8/20)]
« Reply #679 on: August 21, 2010, 02:47:31 PM »
:on redcard: SAYUUUUU!!! :temper: :on kimbo: She's so evil! ....

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But  I love it so...

I still wanna beat her ass, though. :mon mad: :mon zoom: :mon slapself:

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