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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 60 - (8/1)]
« Reply #380 on: August 02, 2010, 01:33:47 AM »
AH GAKISAN SHE DID REACH HER DREAM!!! SHE'S RIGHT THERE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!D: i realy cant wait for this party... XDDD i wonder how "innocent" risa and eri will dress? XDDDDD
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 60 - (8/1)]
« Reply #381 on: August 02, 2010, 02:27:47 AM »
Ahhh, I missed out on commenting the last chapter... wasn't expecting you to update so fast/early today :P but it's all good nonetheless~

Ch. 59: ooo...partyyy~ :drool: jkjk! heh, but that's because we all know how much you love parties~ :pimp: Looking forward to this R-rated, intense party you have planned~ Heh, alcohol is must of course... and maybe some spiked drinks... ;) I'm quite surprised that Ai-chan didn't want Risa to go with her. I mean doesn't she want to show off her super awesome and hot new girlfriend? :wub: Or was she intending to do something else there... ahem :lol: Leaving Risa at home would take away from all the fun~ and Risa's right in the fact that they should protect each other, instead of hiding away from the situation, so I'm glad that it all worked out.  :)

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Risa felt a sudden warmth around her body.
Haha, my first thought was "Aww, how cuteeee~ Ai-chan's sneak hugging Risa from behind to keep her warm~" but... it was just a blanket, lol. Still cute nonetheless~ Aichan's so caring  :wub:
*reads backstory of Risa's past*
Ahhh, I totally wasn't expecting this either! I thought it was gonna be something more... hmm, dark and evil? XD Like... maybe some deaths, a breakup or something, some betrayal and violence... :P considering how everyone wants to keep it all hush-hush. (Woops, maybe I'm watching too many dramas... Fine, maybe not ALL that, but yeah you get the point...) But then again, I realize that they were just kids back then :doh: However, I find it quite CUTE how Risa's all torturing herself and feeling bad for something so... innocent and childish (for a lack of a better word) and not to mention amazing for how loyal she is to her beliefs. Ai must have meant a great deal to her if she can't forgive herself for such normally small misdoing. :wub: In the case that Sayu does rat out on Ai-chan, which is probably definite unless she totally goes through some divine change and finally sees the light of things, :lol: I wonder how Risa would react... I hope it's the good one, unless you want to torture us readers and make the story all angsty... (however I would like that) :yep: I'm thinking that Risa would finally forgive herself and maybe Ai-chan can ditch Reina and form a new group with Risa. LOL, jk. That's just my wishful thinking. :nervous
Woops, that got kinda long~ Sorry! I should end that part there, even though there's still more I wanna say. :P
w00t, w00t!  :cow: sweet takagaki moment at the end! I'm loving it all~ Aww, don't worry about the length of the fic, it's all good  :twothumbs the longer the better! What else am I gonna do with my summer if this ends? :( I'm pretty much sitting at home all day waiting for your update :grin: Nah, it's not gonna be hard to keep us hooked... I mean, like, just throw in some make-out sessions here and there... and maybe some perv scenes and that'll do the trick :roll:
OMG~ I just noticed how long my reply is... I guess, super long reply to thank you for your super long and awesome chapter today  :heart:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 60 - (8/1)]
« Reply #382 on: August 02, 2010, 04:01:37 AM »
@Ada: LOL I like perv moments but I like sweet moments too XD

@rndmnwierd: I promise that by the end of this fanfic, all secrets will be revealed :)  and I guess i portrayed Eri and Risa as the more... "unexperienced" ones :twisted:

@NekoMioko: WOOT another lurker pulled out!!! :cow: :otomerika: :yossi: it took you long enough to comment! XD  and I like how you're thinking about Ai's past, it's going to be important later :)

@kawaii beam: oh, they dress pretty innocently. But that doesn't necessarily mean anything, you know :twisted:

@xanimefreak13x: this next chapter might make you question their past again :) and don't worry about long comments, i LOVE reading long comments! it's what motivates me the most! XD In fact, your last comment just made me write two more chapters, thank you~ :wub:


So I didn't plan for this chapter but I thought it may be necessary... so it's a half chapter  :twothumbs

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Chapter 60.5

   “So that’s what I told her,” Risa sighed, as she balanced her chin on the table. 

   “Wow, you’re being really open with her,” Eri commented, not looking up from her sewing machine.  “I never thought you’d be able to tell others about Ai-chan…”

   The two friends were sitting on the carpet in their living room.  Eri was busily making the Halloween costumes on the coffee table.  Risa was on the other side, remembering the conversation with her girlfriend a couple hours back.

   “Yeah, me neither,” Risa grinned.  “I just feel like I can tell Ai anything, you know?  I feel like I’ve known her my whole life.”

   “Known her your whole life…?” Eri thought.  She turned off her sewing machine and looked up.  “Risa-chan… have you ever thought that… Takahashi Ai may be Mizuhara Ai?”

   Risa’s lifted an eyebrow.  “Why would you say that?”

   “I don’t know…” Eri mumbled.  “But they kind of give off the same aura, I can’t really explain it.  They kind of look alike too, don’t they?”

   “I wouldn’t know, Kameha,” Risa said, rolling her eyes.  “Traumatic amnesia, remember?”

   “Well, I don’t remember Ai-chan’s face that well either; it was such a long time ago…” Eri said in a low voice.  “I guess they can’t be the same person.  I asked before, and Ai said she’s never lived in the Yamaguchi prefecture, and that Takahashi was her real family name.”

   “Well, there you have it,” Risa grinned.  “Besides, if they were the same person, Ai would’ve told me that she was Ai-chan after I told her my story.”

   “I guess so,” Eri mumbled.  “But something still doesn’t feel right.  Something doesn’t fit…

**  **  ** 

   “Ai, what are you doing?” the yankii questioned, raising an eyebrow.

   The older girl looked up from the couch.  She was sitting with both of her knees hitched up.  In her hand was a glass with a golden liquid and ice cubes.

   “What do you mean?” Ai asked, confused by her partner’s question.  “I’m just sitting here.”

   “No,” Reina rephrased.  “I meant, what are you doing drinking at 10 o’clock at night?  I thought I was the one who liked to drink canned beer after a bath.”

   “I guess I felt like having some tonight,” Ai shrugged.  She gulped down some more of the beer.

   “… There’s something on your mind,” Reina said.  It wasn’t a question.

   “Sometimes, I wish you wouldn’t be so sharp,” Ai sighed.

   “Fine,” the yankii said, going into the kitchen.  She took out a can of beer from the refrigerator stepped back into her room.  “I’ll leave you with your worries alone.”

   “There’s something missing,” Ai thought, sipping some more beer.  “Why did she tell me her story in that way?  Was there a misunderstanding?  Something doesn’t fit…

**  **  ** 

   “I can’t believe I’m stuck in this place again!” Sayumi complained, shuffling around on her bed.  “How can the doctor not let me pass my check-up?”

   “It’s because you overworked yourself too much while you were on release,” Junjun scolded.  “But you’re not going to be here for more than about two weeks, so cheer up.  You’ll be out of the hospital before you know it.”

   “But it’s going to be Halloween soon!” the bunny whined.  “I won’t be able to celebrate it with Risa-chan and Eririn!”

   “Weren’t you listening during your phone conversation?” the panda said.  “They have a party for work anyway; they apologized for that.”

   “I guess…” Sayumi muttered, pouting.  “Jun-chan, what are you doing on Halloween?”

   “Nothing,” the older girl answered.  “I’m staying here with you, I guess.”

   “Will you bring me candy?” the younger girl asked excitedly.

   “I’ll bring at least five different kinds,” Junjun grinned.

   “Yay!” Sayumi cheered, hugging her Chinese companion.  “You’re the best, Junjun!”

   “Anything for you, Shige-san,” the panda replied.  “Yeah… I like it more when she’s happy like this.  Spoiled, but cute.

   “I hope they don’t have too much fun without me,” Sayumi sighed, pulling way from the hug.  “I mean, they’re all going to the same party: Risa-chan, Eririn, Takahashi-san, and Tanaka-san.”

   “I’m sure they all miss you,” Junjun comforted.  “And when you go on release again, they’ll celebrate with you.”

   “Yes, when I’m on release again,” Sayumi agreed. 

   She looked down at her hands.  Her eyes turned dark as her lips curved down.

   “When I’m on release again,” she thought, “I better not find any surprises… Ai-chan.

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I actually have the next chapter finished but I'll let this half chapter sink in first (yes, I'm just being evil) :twisted:
Up next is the start of the party~ XD
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 60.5 - (8/1)]
« Reply #383 on: August 02, 2010, 04:13:28 AM »
w00t~ aww, you wrote two more chapters because of me?  :wub: thank youuuu~ :heart:
GETZ chapters~ :cow:
and YAYYY AN UPDATE AGAIN TODAY  :yossi: :otomerika:

*goes to read new chapter now* will edit later for a more constructive comment :theking

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 60.5 - (8/1)]
« Reply #384 on: August 02, 2010, 04:20:27 AM »
Ebil!  XD

This chapter really is a .5, a lot of set up here. Eri beginning to slowly turn to the right path about Ai, Ai feeling guilty(I guess) and Sayu and her evillness again.

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 60.5 - (8/1)]
« Reply #385 on: August 02, 2010, 04:42:01 AM »
well Sayu seems disappointed but again Jun seems to be the savior for Sayu

I guess something might be between the past for all of them
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« Reply #386 on: August 02, 2010, 05:23:40 AM »
ah~ eri's getting it~! but i think risa will be pretty upseat when she finds the truth
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 60.5 - (8/1)]
« Reply #387 on: August 02, 2010, 06:17:46 AM »
@Chapter 60
BLEEEEEEHHHHa;lkas;oifjsa;ighf;oia;eoisfj;asjdf;~!!!!  :panic:
Their first kiss as a couple!!  :heart: :heart: :heart:
So CUTE!!!  :mon cute:

That was a really touching story too  :cry: It's kinda sad that the person she misses the most is actually right in front of her, but she doesn't realize it  :(


@Chapter 60.5
Sayu's gonna FREAK!!!!  :shocked
I've got this feeling in my gut telling me that someone messed with Risa's memory after her accident....  :huhuh
I'm really curious about how she'll react to the truth about Ai-chan. Tho, not before more TakaGaki love time  :)

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I actually have the next chapter finished but I'll let this half chapter sink in first (yes, I'm just being evil) :twisted:
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IT'S SUNK!!!!  :on comhere:

MOAR PLEASE!  :grin:


P.S.
Sorry about my other comment  :mon sweat:
I'm kind of oblivious and have no control over my actions when I drink.... a lot...  :err:
I guess me and Ai are a lot alike in that sense, huh?  :nervous
I usually end up doing something like updating like crazy on FB and twitter or I'll sometimes come here and make....interesting....posts... :sweatdrop: and I hardly remember anything the next morning...
Funny example.... When I woke up today, I had a txt message. It was from this girl who I went to high school with. I haven't seen her in almost 5 years. "It was great seeing you last night! I hope we do it again soon!! You're so funny!" is what she said. Did I mention that I use to have the BIGGEST crush on her?!  :bleed eyes:
All day today I kept trying to recall what I did last night. I do, now, remember seeing her, but I don't remember giving her my number... Oh well, she's still super gorgeous so she can have it  XD


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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 60.5 - (8/1)]
« Reply #388 on: August 02, 2010, 11:33:21 AM »
Hehe, here is your constructive comment for this chapter~

Soo... the first thing that went through my mind was... "OH SHIETT! Eri's suspecting Ai-chan *again* :panic:" and then when it got to this...
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“Besides, if they were the same person, Ai would’ve told me that she was Ai-chan after I told her my story.”
panic mode went ^100%  :panic: :panic: :panic: lol :lol: Oh man, it seems like Takagaki rabu-rabu isn't going down the easy route is it now...  :nervous but I did say that I like the angst... darnnit. XD Gosh darn the turtle for bringing that up... why hasn't her aho-ness kicked in here  :doh:  :cool2: Hopefully Risa can forgive Ai-chan for keeping her past a secret... and get back to the lovin`:wub: instead of calling Ai-chan out for lack of trust issues because they should be open with each other as a couple now... Oh, what the heck~ I'm just getting ahead of myself now. XD

Ooo, you're right~ I am gonna question their past a little more now, with that "something" that is missing. Heh, I knew it wouldn't be that simple! :bingo: My guess is that... that "something" has to do with why Sayu is confined to the hospital... maybe, cause I somehow can't remember how she ended up in there in the first place.
YES! Sayu is back in the hospital! Takagaki is gonna be safe for now! :cow: Aww, although I do feel sorry for the poor girl... :( If only she didn't get in the way of Takagaki rabu...

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 60.5 - (8/1)]
« Reply #389 on: August 02, 2010, 12:01:41 PM »
Apologies for not commenting on the last few chapter, I was away :sweatdrop:

So Risa new another Ai in the past, could Takahashi be hiding her past from RIsa, but then Ai is confused at to the way that Risa told her story???

Why does Risa feel as if she knows Rika, have they met somewhere before, when Risa was trying to become an idol perhaps?

I see Sayu hasn't given up on her evil plans yet, I wonder what she fill find out about Ai?

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 60.5 - (8/1)]
« Reply #390 on: August 02, 2010, 05:18:18 PM »
In my defense I usually don't comment due my limited english :nervous but I'll try to comment from now on

Anyway, you sure are evil  :cry: but now I'm even more curious about Ai's past.... and Sayu is scary!! but for some reason I kinda like her being possessive-obsesive.... makes thing more interesting  XD but poor Jun, she's such a good girl :( I hope she doesn't suffer much...

I'll be waiting patiently for the next chapter :3

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 60.5 - (8/1)]
« Reply #391 on: August 02, 2010, 08:40:45 PM »
@rnmdnwierd: yup, it's like a midsection of all the inner thoughts on the current situation of the plot XD

@kurosawa87: oh yes, the past is pretty complicated :panic:

@kawaii beam: why do you think risa will be upset? (I'm not implying anything by this, I'm honestly curious about what a reader thinks of this situation of the plot) :nervous

@Swtme03: LOL score(?)! XD But you use more emoticons when you don't drink so... yeah, CONTROL XD

@xanimefreak13x: oh yeah, i'll give you angst :twisted: Sayu's in the hospital because she didn't pass the checkup, which she got on Risa's birthday. Her body is naturally weak so she can't stay on release for too long.  it was mentioned a little bit in ch. 57 :)

@oddball: lol no worries. you probably had some catching-up to do though :lol: Risa knows Rika from the club when she went to "save" Ai. it was a long time ago, but it was when i threw in rika/yossie for the hell of it XD

@NekoMioko: oh english shminglish... just do your best :twothumbs thanks for commenting, i appreciate it! XD


So after taht short half-chapter, here's a super long chapter. Lots of interesting stuff going on here, I think :D

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Chapter 61

   “Reina, I never thought that you would wear something like this, unless it was for work,” Ai laughed hysterically.  “I guess love really does make you crazy, huh?”

   “Shut up!” the yankii growled.  “If you say one more thing about my outfit, I will—”

   “Hey, they’re coming out!”

   The High-Queen leader got out of the silver sports car to greet her two friends coming out of their house.  Reina did the same and got of the driver’s seat.  The sky was already pitch black; it was hard to see through the darkness, except for the spot under the street lamp.

   “Sorry for making you wait!” Eri yelled, running towards the sidewalk.  Reina turned around to look at her girlfriend.  As the turtle jumped under the street lamp, the yankii covered her mouth as her eyes popped wide open.

   Eri was wearing a pink costume with white ribbons, laces, and trimmings.  Her skirt flared out at the bottom.  She was also wearing fluffy white leg warmers which matched her fluffy wrist bands nicely.  She had bunny ears on her head.

   “How do I look?” Eri asked, spinning around in a circle.  “Isn’t it cute?”

   “You’re… a bunny…” Reina mumbled into her hand.

   “Yup!” Eri giggled.  “I mean, you said nothing suggestive so I decided that being a bunny was pretty safe.  But this would’ve been more of Sayu’s thing; that’s why I told her I’m going to be a turtle for Halloween.”

   “Being a bunny is still suggestive!” Reina argued.

   “Hey, I could’ve come out in leotards or something, okay?” Eri shot back.  “I think I look pretty cute.”

   “Sorry, Reina, I tried to stop her,” Risa said from the darkness.  “But I was busier trying to keep her from going overboard with my own costume so… yeah.”

   “Come closer, Reina-chan, I want to see what you’re wearing!” Eri yelled.

   “Oh, you’ll love this,” Ai snickered.

   “Shut up,” the yankii grumbled.  She took a couple steps towards the street lamp.  As her out fit came into view, Eri gasped out loud.

   Reina was wearing the golden dress that Eri made her buy when they went shopping together!  The dress was ruffled at the bottom and had a big bow in the front.  Reina was wearing a pearl necklace and matching earrings.  The only addition to the dress that made it a costume was the cat ears that peeked out behind the big, golden hair ribbon.

   “You’re wearing the dress,” Eri breathed.  “I thought you didn’t like the dress?”

   “I don’t,” Reina grumbled.  “But… you like it.  And you seemed pretty happy when I bought it that day so… yeah.”

   “… That’s one of the sweetest things I’ve heard, Reina-chan,” Eri laughed, hugging her girlfriend.  “And you look beautiful.  Thank you.”

   “Well, I guess Eri passes the costume check,” Ai grinned.  “Come out here, Risa.  If you’re wearing something I don’t approve of, you’re going straight back into the house.”

   “I honestly don’t think I can get any more innocent than this,” Risa muttered.

   The bean stepped into the light as Reina and Eri stepped out.  Eri beamed with pride.  Reina smirked.  Ai examined her girlfriend from head to toe; she covered her mouth and started to giggle.

   Risa was wearing a white sweatshirt with black spots and a matching skirt.  Her hair was in a wavy ponytail to the side.  Her fuzzy hoop earrings were also white with black spots.  She had a headband with black horns coming out.  She crossed her arms and puffed up her cheeks.

   “Oh, you make me feel so much better, Ai,” Risa grumbled.  “See, Kameha, even this was going overboard!”

   “Why?  I think you look cute!” Eri giggled.  “Nobody else would’ve thought of being a cow for Halloween.  Besides, I offered you the bunny costume but you turned it down.  I would’ve liked being a cow.”

   “Yeah, because there’s no way I’m walking around in that,” Risa said, pointing at her friend’s pink, fluffy costume. 

   “Well, she definitely passes the costume check,” Reina snickered.

   “Yeah, you pass,” Ai laughed.

   “Gee, thanks,” Risa said sarcastically.

   “No, really.  I like it,” Ai grinned, stepping into the light with her girlfriend.  “It’s cute.”

   “And you told me not to get suggestive!” Risa yelled after realizing what Ai was wearing.

   The leader was wearing a leopard-printed sweatshirt with a matching miniskirt.  She was wearing a red tank-top underneath, and had a red, glittery belt on to match her red boots.  The sweatshirt was short, revealing her belly button.  Her brown hair was loose and wavy. 

   “I’m older than you,” Ai joked.

   “Are you seriously going to use that as an excuse?” Risa raised an eyebrow.

   “Well, nobody would dare to approach the Takahashi Ai or Tanaka Reina, no matter how seductive they look,” Ai explained.  “But if two gorgeous ladies who aren’t in the public eye appear wearing something too suggestive… it won’t go down well.”

   “Aw, you flatter me, Ai,” Eri laughed. 

   “Not me,” Risa grumbled.

   “Come on, cheer up,” Ai said, putting her arm around her girlfriend.  “We have a party to get to.”

**  **  ** 

   “Let’s go, Reina-chan!  Let’s go, go, go!”

   “Eri, don’t run!”

   Reina jumped out of her car and chased after the turtle-turned-rabbit girl into the brightly lit house.  Ai got out and walked around to open the door for the girlfriend.

   “Feeling any better?” the leader asked.

   “Not particularly,” Risa grumbled.

   “Look, nothing’s going to happen tonight to either of us.  I promise,” Ai comforted.  “And the truth is… I’m kind of glad you’re here.  I like showing off pretty things that are mine.”

   “That’s one thing you’re right about,” Risa whispered as she got out of the car.  “That I’m yours.”

   “I’m glad you said that,” Ai smiled.  “Come on; let’s go greet Ishikawa-san.”

   The couple held each other’s hand and walked up the stairs.  The outside of the house was decorated with black and orange lights along with pumpkins and other figurines.  The music was so loud that it could be heard through the closed windows.  Ai opened the front door and walked in with Risa right next to her.

   There were people everywhere.  The living room was completely engulfed by crowds of witches, devils, animals, and more.  Ai pulled Risa close to herself.  But the cow could swear that somebody already touched her butt. 

   The two girls squeezed through the crowds and reached the spacious kitchen.  There were people in there too, but three of them stood out the most.  Ai walked up to them.

   “Ishikawa-san, Miyoshi-san, Okada-san,” the High-Queen leader greeted.

   The girl on the left was wearing a dress with a blue top and a ruffled black skirt.  The blue part looked like silk, and was sequined with gold designs. 

   The girl in the middle was wearing a yellow rabbit costume with bunny ears and fishnet tights.  This made Risa remember Eri and Reina’s conversation about her friend’s costume… Eri definitely wasn’t wearing anything suggestive.

   The girl on the right was wearing a black-and-white striped bikini top with a red mini skirt.  Some sort of tropical dancer, Risa figured.  She was the most revealing out of all of them.

   Then, Risa recognized the girl in the middle.

   “Rika from the club!” the cow yelled out.

   “Oh, I remember you,” Rika giggled.  “The girl without the ID.  I didn’t know you were acquainted with my kouhai.”

   “She’s my girlfriend,” Ai said firmly.  “Do you know each other?”

   “I met her when I went to find you at the club… that night…” Risa mumbled.

   “Oh, so you’re going out with Lovely,” Rika giggled again.  “How sweet.  These are my girls: Erika and Yui.”

   “Hello,” Risa squeaked.  She was kind of overwhelmed by how confident and mature these three girls looked.  Ai seemed to realize the bean’s discomfort, and tightened her hold around her shoulder.

   “Well, we’re going to go look for Reina and our other friend,” Ai said.

   “Oh yeah, we didn’t see Tanakitty yet,” Rika said.  “Tell her to come greet us when you find her.”

   “I’ll do that,” Ai said.  “See you later.”

   With that, the older girl pulled her meek girlfriend out of the kitchen and back into the living room.

   “I think I get what you mean by a Rated-R party now,” Risa whispered.

   “Oh, it’s still on the PG level at the moment,” Ai muttered.  “It might get worse.”

   “I have to find Eri,” Risa decided.  “Who knows what that spaced-out girl is getting herself into.”

   “Reina’s with her, she’s fine,” Ai comforted.

   “No, I think I want to check for myself.”

   Despite her girlfriend’s reassurance, Risa quickly disappeared into the crowd of dancers.

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In case you guys haven't figured it out, all of their Halloween costumes are from their concerts/singles  XD

Niigaki Risa- Cow from Nine Smiles "How do you like this Japan"
Kamei Eri- Bunny from PikaPika "Moonlight Night"
Takahashi Ai- Leopard from Platinum 9 "How do you like this Japan"
Tanaka Reina- Gold Costume from PikaPika poster
Ishikawa Rika- Bunny from "Aisu Kuriimu to My Purin"
Miyoshi Erika- Costume from "Kacchoii ze! JAPAN"
Okada Yui- Costume from "Jajauma Paradise"

Yeah, I was too lazy to think of other stuff.  on the other hand, now you guys can clearly imagine what they're wearing XD
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 61 - (8/2)]
« Reply #392 on: August 02, 2010, 08:52:27 PM »
 :drool:
I approve of everything written above  :grin:
I'm sad Reina didn't get a tail and that Aichan's thighs aren't visible D: They should switch  :w00t:
Lol just kidding xD
Nice update <3
Can't wait to read more  :otomerika:
I will definitely not mind if the party turns more dangerous  :D

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« Reply #393 on: August 02, 2010, 09:11:44 PM »
ha~ thats a smart idea XDD those concert costumes are the best halloween costumes everXD and dang~ v-u-den gals know how to dress XD lol

the reason why i thought that was cus i would kinda feel upseat or betreaed if that person never told me after i said that story...but who knows XD everyone's diffrent~ XD
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 61 - (8/2)]
« Reply #394 on: August 02, 2010, 09:56:11 PM »
Lovely costumes! The party has arrived, time form things to get dangerous!

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 61 - (8/2)]
« Reply #395 on: August 03, 2010, 04:40:45 AM »
one a pervy thought entered my mind and vuden YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!

and idk what will happen to everybody can't wait for it
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 61 - (8/2)]
« Reply #396 on: August 03, 2010, 06:01:48 AM »
Wao Halloween and concert costume collabo? Nice thinking! Let's get the partay started~!

Gaki-san left to look for Kame? Wha-oh I sense enjoyable party about to go wrong..     

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 61 - (8/2)]
« Reply #397 on: August 03, 2010, 06:10:21 AM »
@Ada: Oh you can imagine Reina has a tail. I tried to add the cat element.. XD and Ai's wearing a miniskirt- her thighs are visible :twothumbs

@kawaii beam: interesting... It's pretty different from the way I saw my own fic, that gives me some insight  XD thank you~ :thumbup and btw, i love your new avatar/sig :wub:

@rndmnwierd: yes, the party shall commence :D

@kurosawa87: LOL yes, the sexy v-u-den~~ :twisted:

@stefy: thank you~ but honestly, i just couldn't think of better costumes XD


Wow, the comments just decreased half-fold :shocked
I'ma try to get that back up with this SUPER long chapter :D

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Chapter 62

   “Eri!  Reina!  Where are you?”

   Risa pushed through the crowd of mythical creatures dancing.  She turned her head this way and that in search of her pink, bunny friend.  But all she saw was dark colors and skin… lots of skin.  Everybody was dressed in a very revealing manner; Ai’s leopard attire seemed childish compared to some of the costumes.

   But she also noticed something else: nobody was dancing alone.  They all had their respective partners, dancing and kissing much more passionately than the bean ever did with her lover.  At that moment, the memories of walking in on Reina and Eri’s make-out scenes popped into Risa’s head.

   “They’re all so ahead of me and Ai…” she thought, watching the various couples.  “Does Ai want to do that too?  But I can’t… I’m not ready yet!  Am I holding her back…?

   Suddenly, Risa felt someone squeeze her butt.  She let out a short scream and jumped.  She whipped around to find two guys dressed as a gladiator and a vampire, snickering.

   “Hey babe, nice costume,” the gladiator said.  “You wanna have some fun with us?”

   “N-no thank you,” Risa stammered, backing away.

   “Aw, come on,” the vampire said, taking a step forward.  “Don’t be shy, we don’t bite.”  He smiled and revealed his fake fangs as his friend laughed at the terrible joke.

   “I-I’m with someone already,” Risa squeaked.

   “I’m sure we’re better than whoever you’re with,” the two guys cackled.  “Who is it?”

   “Me,” a voice said, as Risa felt a pair of arms around her shoulders.  “You boys got a problem with my girl?”

   “What the hell, bit—”

   “Dude!” the gladiator whispered loudly, his eyes almost popping out of his sockets.  “That’s Takahashi Ai!”

   “Shit!”

   With that, the two guys hid themselves in the crowd again.  Ai grabbed a hold of Risa’s hand and dragged her across the living room.  She pushed through the two French doors and entered the dim-lit dining room.  The music could still be heard, but it was a little more blurred.  There were three to four couples making out in each corner.

   “All of you, out,” the leader ordered.  Her glare was dark and threatening.

   “What?” one guy said menacingly.  “Look here you—”

   “Wait, that’s Takahashi Ai!” his girlfriend whispered. 

   As the couples realized who had spoken to them, they quickly piled out of the dining room.  Soon, only Ai and Risa were left.  The leader pulled her girlfriend over to the back of the room and cornered her against the wall.  Risa stood straight, intimidated by the way the older girl was staring at her.

   “Why did you that?” Ai growled.

   “D-do what?” Risa choked out.

   “Why did you run off like that?” Ai shouted.  “I told you it’s dangerous here, didn’t I?  How am I supposed to protect you if you don’t stick next to me?”

   “If it’s that dangerous, I want to be able to protect Eri too!” Risa argued.  “She’s my friend!”

   “But to me, you’re more important!” Ai yelled.  Risa looked at her with wide eyes.  The leader sighed as she calmed herself down.  “Look… I’m sure Reina is with Eri right now.  Give her some credit; the girl treasures your friend as much as you do, maybe even more.  Trust me when I say this: Eri is safe.”

   “… Okay,” Risa said, wrapping her arms around her girlfriend’s neck.  “I’m sorry for running off.”

   “And I’m sorry for yelling,” Ai whispered, hugging the younger girl.  “I was especially irritable because Ishikawa-san sent me a text, saying that there are some party crashers.  They’re causing some trouble, and the v-u-den members are trying to get them out.  During that time, I want you to stay close to me, okay?”

   “Okay.”  Risa pulled away a little to look at her girlfriend.  The leader must’ve noticed the uncertainty in her eyes because she wrinkled her eyebrows in confusion.

   “Risa?  What’s wrong?”

   Wordlessly, the younger girl shot forward and quickly kissed her girlfriend.  When Ai saw the lust in Risa’s eyes, she leaned forward and kissed her back, pressing her against the wall. 

   Risa tightened her hold around Ai’s neck as her tongue worked around her lips, trying to find an entrance.  Ai seemed taken back by the fact that her younger girlfriend was taking the lead, but she willingly opened her mouth.  The older girl’s arms slipped down to her lover’s slim waist.  But Risa had a different idea in mind; she grabbed Ai’s wrist and let her hand slide down further to her butt.  This completely shocked Ai, as she jumped away and broke away from their kiss.

   “What are you doing?” Ai whispered furiously.

   “You don’t want to?” Risa asked quietly.

   “It’s not the matter of whether I want to or not!” Ai said through her teeth.  “What’s going on, Risa?  Did something happen?”

   “Nothing happened,” Risa whispered, cupping her hands around Ai’s face.  “I just wanted to kiss you…”  But before their lips met again, Ai quickly pushed her girlfriend’s shoulder to the wall.

   “You know I’m not that gullible,” she said in a low voice.  “What happened, Risa?”

   “It’s just…” Risa hesitated, staring down at her feet.  “Ai… Am I holding you back?”

   “Holding me back from what?”

   “From… you know… doing what couples do… and stuff.”

   “Oh.”  Ai raised her eyebrows in surprise from the unexpected answer.  “Um, what makes you think that?”

   “Because I see what all those other couples are doing!” Risa yelled out, finally letting loose.  “They kiss so much more passionately than we do, even Eri and Reina!  And you’re the more experienced one; you want to do more than what we do, don’t you?”

   “What makes you think I’m more experienced?” Ai said in a confused tone.

   “You’re not?”

   “… Well, maybe a little more than you,” Ai mumbled.  “But you’re still my first lover, you know.”

   “But you do think about it, don’t you?” Risa insisted.  “Sometimes, you wish we could go ahead a little more.  Don’t lie and say you don’t.”

   “… Fine,” Ai sighed.  “I admit that I do imagine… sometimes.  But this doesn’t mean you have to push yourself so far like this, Risa.  I’m with you because I love you, not just for physical gains.”

   “But you do want it,” Risa repeated.  “And I’m sorry to say I honestly don’t know how much I can give you at the moment.  But I’m willing to go as far as I can… just not all the way.”

   “Wow, that’s pretty cruel,” Ai teased.  “It’s like letting a child take one lick of the candy then taking it away.  It’s pretty torturous.”

   “I’m sorry!” Risa squeaked, feeling her face burning up.  “Just forget I ever said anything.  I’m fine, I won’t do it again.”

   “Slow down there, sweetheart,” Ai grinned, taking the younger girl’s hand.  “It’s cruel… but if you’re up for some experimenting, I’m willing to see how far we can go.”

   She lifted Risa’s hand to her lips and kissed the palm of it.  Risa’s cheeks flushed dark red, as she nodded determinedly.  Ai smiled and started to kiss and lick the tip of Risa’s fingers, causing the young girl to shiver.  The leader pulled herself closer to her girlfriend by taking the bean’s arm and putting it around her own neck.  She leaned in and met Risa’s lips without the slightest indecision.

   This time, their kiss was a lot rougher.  Ai didn’t hesitate to immediately use her tongue as Risa was just as eager.  The older girl’s hands slid down to the bean’s waist again but this time, she slipped one hand up her shirt to her bare back.  Risa moaned into Ai’s mouth as she felt the cool hand slide up her smooth back.  As her girlfriend started to play with her bra straps, Risa broke away from the kiss, gasping for air.

   “Wait…” she gasped.  “Ai… I need to…”

   “Nope.  No waiting this time.”

   Ai smirked as she immediately attacked her girlfriend’s ear, licking and nibbling on it.  Risa gasped and whimpered while moving her head towards her left to give the singer more space.  While her right hand was occupied from feeling up the younger girl’s back, Ai used her other hand to unzip Risa’s cow sweatshirt and pull it down to her elbows, revealing a black tank-top underneath.  She started to kiss the bean’s collar bones, receiving another moan in return. 

   Ai removed her hand from under Risa’s shirt and started to play around with the edge of the tank-top.  She lifted her head and pulled up Risa’s clothing, just enough to reveal her two perfect molds covered with a black undergarment.  The younger girl gasped as she turned bright red, but made no move to stop her girlfriend.

   “May I?” Ai inquired.  She wasn’t just asking for nothing.  She honestly wanted to know if Risa was okay with going further.

   “Un,” Risa answered, biting down on her lips.

   The idol smiled again as she cupped her hand over one of Risa’s perfect mold, and kissed the other, right above the bra.  This made the younger girl whimper, which only made Ai more excited.  The leader started to slowly massage her girlfriend’s chest while kissing and licking the other side.  Risa moved her hands up from Ai’s neck to her head, tangling her fingers around the thick brown hair.

   The older girl slowly moved down from Risa’s chest area to her stomach.  She kissed around her belly button which caused another suppressed moan to escape from Risa’s lips.  The younger girl was breathing pretty heavily now; her face was bright red.  Ai seemed to take note of this, because she stood up and straightened her back.  She pulled down her girlfriend’s tank-top and zipped up the cow sweatshirt again.  Risa whimpered in protest.

   “I think that’s as far as we can go tonight,” Ai grinned.

   “I can go a little further,” Risa insisted.

   “Oh, can you?”  Suddenly, Ai hitched up her knees in between Risa’s legs, gently hitting her girlfriend’s private spot.  Shocked, Risa jumped up and pushed the idol’s leg down.  Ai smirked.  “See?  You’re not ready yet.”

   “That was cruel,” Risa muttered.

   “So are you,” Ai laughed, as she leaned into the younger girl’s ear.  “Don’t test my patience anymore, Risa.  I’m very close to losing control right now.  But I’m very happy, really.  Thank you.”

   “… Fine,” Risa mumbled.  “I guess I’m happy too.  I’m half yours now, right?”

   “It’s the heart that matters,” Ai answered.  “And I’d like to think that I have all of that already.”  At that moment, the blurred out rock music from the living room changed into a slow song.  Ai offered her hand to her girlfriend.  “May I have this dance?”

   “Yes, you may,” Risa giggled, placing her hand in the singer’s hold. 

   She allowed her arms to be placed around Ai’s neck while the older girl’s arms wound around her waist.  They stared at each other for a while before kissing gently, then embracing.  Their dancing became more of a swaying, as they rocked back and forth in complete bliss.

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Next up is TanaKame's party story~ :twothumbs
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 61 - (8/2)]
« Reply #398 on: August 03, 2010, 06:37:00 AM »
ACKK~ You update so fast!!  :heart: while I was writing my reply I got this...
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Me= wtheckk!? And then I noticed that you updated again before I could finish my reply~

Ch.61:
Omg, you're gonna write me some angst?!  :farofflook: AWESOME~ or not... Uh oh, what have I gotten myself into now... haha, but then I guess it'll all be worth it when the build-up of the angst is over. Heh, I guess I'm sadistic like that, I like my favs to suffer :twisted: because then the happy ending would just be awesomer right? :yep:
Ahh, I don't mean why Sayu is in the hospital because she failed her check-up, I got that part. :P I mean, why is she there in the first place... but I guess I kinda figured that out now? Somehow I just kept getting the image of her and everyone else frolicking in a playground back when she was in Yamaguchi AND THEN got all sick, but I guess she's been sick all along, since childhood right? Woops. :oops:

w00t~  :cow: I'm surprised that I actually figured out all of the costumes from your descriptions, AWESOME JOB there. :twothumbs I'm glad that my brain actually decided to function and process the info, heh.
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YESSS, Aichan, claim your property~ Hehe. :wahaha: I love this line.

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 61 - (8/2)]
« Reply #399 on: August 03, 2010, 06:46:17 AM »
So....Risa thinks it's her fault that "Ai-chan" left and she never saw her again, so it shouldn't be all that difficult for them to reconcile once the truth comes out? Sayu and Ai are clearly under the impression that Ai was the one at fault which is preventing Ai from revealing herself to be the "Ai-chan" in Risa's past, which is what's confusing Ai at the moment. I wonder what's going on with that.....and I'm so dying to see Sayu receive her harsh lesson in reality. Sounds cruel, I know, but seeing the way she's been portrayed so far I don't exactly feel all that guilty :D Though, I wouldn't want her to end up tragically, like forever locked away in her fantasy world unable to get over Risa, or something like that. (I'm not giving you ideas, am I???)


As much as TakaGaki was nice and sweet, I can't wait to see what TanaKame got up to in the meantime. I can just imagine how possessive Reina would be in marking Eri as her own XD



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