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Re: I Don't Want You Back [TakaGaki] Update - Chapter 10
« Reply #60 on: December 15, 2010, 11:30:50 AM »
so Gaki is upset because of Sayu and Kei cheating, or is it perhaps more to do with the fact that she made Ai cry and realizing that she may have feelings for Ai and beliving that Ai now hates her?......

Judging by the conversation between the nurse and Sayu it seems as though Risa, even if she is more upset about Ai, has still not forgivern Sayu!

Goodbye Takahashi-san. In my dreams you're mine forever...

Poor Eri, I hope she dosnt do anything stupid for Ai and Gaki's sake, perhaps she will realise that the girl who told her about Ai and Gaki has feeling for her?

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Re: I Don't Want You Back [TakaGaki] Update - Chapter 10
« Reply #61 on: December 24, 2010, 10:21:25 PM »
Chapter 11

A pale girl with jet-black hair walked through the streets of Tokyo in the middle of the night, she looked like a mess, which caused everyone to give her strange looks, but she could care less. All she wanted was to drink her self to sleep; hopefully when she wakes the next day, she won’t remember a thing.

{Flash back.}

“So, that night…didn’t mean anything to you?” her voice cracked at the last word. “No.”
The tears the bunny’s been holding were now falling. “Look, usa-chan. I’m a man. Men need sex. It doesn’t matter where they’re getting it from, as long as they get it.”
His words struck through her so deeply, she had to get out before collapsing in front of him. The last thing she wanted was for him to make any physical contact with her. That is if he was human enough to help her up if she fell.
 
{End of flash back}

“That bipolar son of a bitch!” The bunny said while closing her hand into a tight fist.
She walked until she spotted a familiar bar. “Where did I see this place before?” after a while of starting, she finally remembered. “Risa and I got drunk for the first time in there…” a tear escaped her eye and rolled down her cheek at the mention of her unfortunately former best friend.

“Well I guess it’s time to get wasted.” She finally said before stepping into the bar.
“Michishige -san?” the bar tender asked amazed. “Oh my god, it’s you! Long time no see.”
When he saw that she didn’t recognize him, he laughed. “You don’t remember me, do you?” the bunny could only smile shyly. “It’s me, Hitomi Mike. We went to the same high school…” She titled her head to the side, and then it hit her. “Holy crap! You’re Hitomi Mike. The hafu!” “Yep, that’s me. The hafu…” he said with a fake frown. “I’m sorry, I didn’t mean it like that.” She hung her head low in embarrassment. “Haha, I was just kidding. It’s nice to see you.” She lifted her head slowly. She was glad that for once her boldness didn’t hurt someone’s feelings. “So, what can I get you?” Sayumi thought for a moment and then answered. “I want…hmmm…something strong that will help me forget about certain stuff.” Mike laughed and then started preparing her drink. “Here you go; this is ‘The black devil’.” ‘The black devil’ huh? Who the hell came up with the lame name?

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“Michishige -san, what are you doing? Please stop it!” Mike tried to stop the drunken bunny from doing anything that she’ll regret. Apparently she drank too much, and now she wants to have some fun.

“Come on~! Just let me kiss you~!” the bunny said as she tried to pull his pants down.
“Mishige-san, I think you want to do more than just kissing. Just stop!”

The bunny suddenly stopped and looked at him. “Am I not attractive enough for you?”

“That’s not it. Oh, come on don’t cry. It’s just that…you’re drunk and I don’t want you to do something stupid… Michishige-san, wait!”

“Just leave me alone!”

A waitress approached the bar tender slowly. “Ano, Mike-kun, is everything alright?”

“No…” Mike said while biting his nails. “Lin, could you do me a favor and follow that girl and make sure she’s alright?”

“And why would I do that?” LinLin said raising a brow.

“Because, I told you.”

They both glared at each other, but then Mike grinned. “If you do that, I’ll give you my Vampire Knight collection…”

“Deal.”

With that, LinLin ran out of the bar and started searching for a girl with pale skin, and long black hair.
“Why did I agree? It’s freaking cold!” The panda complained as she rubbed her arms and legs. “But I really want those DVDs and posters…”

Meanwhile, Risa sat on her couch ready to pop some pills and then sleep. She hasn’t been able to sleep, because every time she closes her eyes memories of certain someone forms into her head.

“Might as well watch some TV.” She grabbed the remote and started flickering through channels until something caught her eyes.

“We apologize for interrupting regular broadcasting to bring you this MMN breaking news report.”

Risa dropped the remote as her eyes winded in shock.   

To be continued...

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Re: I Don't Want You Back [TakaGaki] Update - Chapter 11
« Reply #62 on: December 24, 2010, 11:44:03 PM »
Michishige going that far with a high school classmate and somehow with everything on her mind, drunken bunny will probably do something stupid luckily for the bartender he found a way out, however I wonder how Risa will see the news
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Re: I Don't Want You Back [TakaGaki] Update - Chapter 11
« Reply #63 on: December 25, 2010, 01:46:29 AM »
So are the memories of a certain person = Ai-chan or Kei bastard? :? More like Ai-chan.

Oh no....Did something just happened to Sayu?? :O Maybe they can make up. :roll:

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Re: I Don't Want You Back [TakaGaki] Update - Chapter 11
« Reply #64 on: December 25, 2010, 07:13:23 PM »
wow a drunken sayu is dangerous :shocked it is a good thing that the bartender is nice :twothumbs

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“We apologize for interrupting regular broadcasting to bring you this MMN breaking news report.”

Risa dropped the remote as her eyes winded in shock.
have a very bad feeling :(
maybe about sayu or aichan? :?

and Merry Christmas!!! :cow: :cow: :cow:

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Re: I Don't Want You Back [TakaGaki] Update - Chapter 11
« Reply #65 on: December 26, 2010, 12:57:57 PM »
So Ai is taking this badly, Gaki is taking it badly and now Sayu is taking it badly aswell!  :cry: Man all these girls have had tough times havent they....

A news report, I wonder what it was that made Gaki so shocked?!?

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Re: I Don't Want You Back [TakaGaki] Update - Chapter 11
« Reply #66 on: December 31, 2010, 06:44:36 PM »
@kurosawa87: You'll have to wait and see. Thanks for reading :)

@kano-chan: Oh trust me, they'll do more than just making up... 

@fallenxangel24952: It's about Sayu.

@oddball: Let's just say that Sayu is about to do something very VERY stupid. Can Risa stop her? hmmm...  :twisted:


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Re: I Don't Want You Back [TakaGaki] Update - Chapter 11
« Reply #67 on: December 31, 2010, 07:38:31 PM »
 :otomerika: :yossi: HAPPY NEW YEAR~! :yossi: :otomerika:












In advance  XD

I hope you enjoy this chapter :)
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Chapter 12

“We apologize for interrupting regular broadcasting to bring you this MMN breaking news report.”

Risa dropped the remote as her eyes winded in shock. She quickly grabbed her coat and ran out her apartment. It was raining outside, but she didn’t stop to go back and take an umbrella with her, because she didn’t want to waste any little time she had. I can’t lose you…you can’t leave me…

“We are bringing you this image live. Right now, the fire department and the police are in the middle of trying to rescue a girl attempting to commit suicide. We’ve done some quick  researches, and the female’s name is Michishige Sayumi…”

Risa ran with all her might, turning right and left, bumping into people who afterward gave her ‘WTF?!’ looks. “Hey! You’re allowed to go up there!” a police man tried to stop her, but she pushed him away just like she did to the other ones.

After what seemed like forever, she finally reached her destination. Her lungs were burning; legs shaking and beads of sweat trickling down her forehead as she tried to catch her breath. “Sayu.” She managed to say.
As Sayumi turned around, her eyes winded when she saw Risa standing with her hands on her knees while gasping for air not so far away from where she was.

“Ri-Risa? What are you doing here?” Sayu said still shocked.

“I could ask you the same thing.” Risa said between gasps.

Before Sayu could say anything else, she felt a burning sensation on her left cheek. “What the hell is wrong with you?” after recovering from the slap. She turned her head to find her former friend crying. Risa…
“Why are you trying to kill yourself? You baka!”
“Risa I –“ Suddenly, her mind stopped and her whole body froze as she felt two pair of lips on hers. Is Risa kissing me right now?


[The next day]

Ai’s POV

I didn’t want this day to come, because today is the day where I’m going to get dragged out of my house against my will by none other than Miss Tanaka Reina.  My wonderful, gentle, caring, amazing friend…A friend that I wish I never knew!

Don’t you just hate it when people force you to do things? I don’t want to go to some park. What am I? An eleven year old! Even eleven year old girls hate parks nowadays; all they want is to be in a relationship…What has the world come to? Children used to be so innocent, and now…It’s the end of the world!

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I was hoping that she would forget, or maybe something would come up, so she would call and cancel the whole thing, but it never happened. Screw my luck! I picked up my phone from the table and dialed my savior’s number. I waited a couple seconds before the person on the other line picked it up.

“Moshi moshi~!”

“Hey Jun!~” I was so happy she actually answered, I thought she was still mad at me for ditching her last week…and the week before, plus the week before that. I know you’re all probably thinking that I’m mean, but I’m not! That girl is creepy. She tries to kiss me all the time and she takes every single chance she gets to touch me in places she shouldn’t touch. Basically, she’s a pervert. Doesn’t she know when someone says no, it means no!

“Ai-chan~! I miss you~” she said trying to sound cute…Ew!

“Jun, no offence, but please don’t do that again, it doesn’t suite you, and it makes me feel like taking a tube and shoving it down my throat.” I heard her gasp.

“Ai-chan, you’re so mean!” she cried.

“I know, but isn’t that why you love me so much…?” I teased, knowing that she would start blushing, and stuttering.

“I-i-I hehe ha umm, yo-me-i-i-i….”

“Jun, are you okay? You sound flushed.” I teased more.

“….”

I’m so evil, I deserve an award. I waited for her reply, but it never came. So I spoke again.

“Jun, you –“

“What do you want?” she cut me off. She sounded mad…very mad.

“I’m sorry, I didn’t –“

“You know what. I’m sick of this! You think you can just do this to me every time?” what the hell is she talking about?

“I’m sick of you playing with my feelings all the time!” she started screaming over the phone.

“Stop yelling! I was just kidding!” I screamed back. Can’t she take a joke?

Apparently she can’t, because that was the last time we have spoken to each other. I’m such a horrible person; I only talk to her when I need something.

JunJun is a really nice girl, with a very big heart, I know she’ll forgive me, maybe not anytime soon, but she will. Junjun, I’m really sorry, but I can’t love you back. I knew all along about your feelings for me, and I pretended I knew nothing. You deserve much better than an asshole like me.

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Reina's POV

I woke up today feeling like shit. I haven’t been getting much sleep lately because I was trying to figure out what happened that night. Oh god, what in the world was I thinking?

{Flash back}

I leaned closer and gave her a kiss on her lips, and as I slowly pulled away, I saw her eyes open wide. I thought she was going to slap me, but she didn’t. She did the opposite. She leaned forward and closed the gap between our lips once again. As our kiss got deeper and hotter, I could feel her hand on my inner thigh, caressing it gently…
The next day, I woke up to find myself naked in bed with a girl I barely know. Eri…

{End of flash back}


To be continued...
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Re: I Don't Want You Back [TakaGaki] Update - Chapter 12 (12/31)
« Reply #68 on: December 31, 2010, 07:48:45 PM »
We add the complexity to the issue although Ai seems to move forward while Risa is trying to help but I guess being over emotional
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Re: I Don't Want You Back [TakaGaki] Update - Chapter 12 (12/31)
« Reply #69 on: December 31, 2010, 11:16:50 PM »
Oh, Risa just kissed Sayu. That IS more than making up....                                   Ehhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh???!!!! :mon wtfmm: **Shakes the table**  That caught me off guard! :on kimbo:

What is Risa thinking? I thought she loves Ai-chan... :(

And oh noooo, Jun is hurt! :cry: Ai-chan, be more careful with your words. I bet she wasn't like that until Risa hurt her, right?

TanaKamei kiss + bed = :mon blood: Eri just did it because of her unrequited love towards Ai-chan....? :O


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Re: I Don't Want You Back [TakaGaki] Update - Chapter 12 (12/31)
« Reply #70 on: January 01, 2011, 04:19:18 AM »
Okay, am I the only one shocked at Risa kissing Sayu??? Hmmm, on second thoughts, I like it XD

TanaKamei is well....hmmmmm....hmmmm...hmmmmm :D

What about Ai-chan man, what about Ai-chan *mind in a whirl*

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Re: I Don't Want You Back [TakaGaki] Update - Chapter 12 (12/31)
« Reply #71 on: January 01, 2011, 01:48:03 PM »
Blimey what a chapetr!  :shocked

Sayu tries to kill herself and gets saved by Risa and they, they kiss?!?  :O what's all that about?

So Ai is still miserable ad call's Jun, who is pissed with her aswell, poor Ai seems to have been a bit mean towards Jun and Jun chas had enough of her one sided love, I hope Jun finds some happiness....

So Reina slept with Eri!!!  :w00t: It seems as though Reina is very freaked out about the whole thing but I think that when she is calmed down both she andEri may be quite happy about the whole thing...

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Re: I Don't Want You Back [TakaGaki] Update - Chapter 12 (12/31)
« Reply #72 on: January 03, 2011, 06:11:03 AM »
Yabaiiiii!!!!

This story is making go :panic: Risa kissed Sayu when she likes Ai? :? Perhaps she's confused about her feelings? But she's not angry with the bunny anymore? Argh now I'm confused :banghead:

I like whats happening with TanaKame :inlove: Oooh wats gonna happen now?

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Re: I Don't Want You Back [TakaGaki] Update - Chapter 12 (12/31)
« Reply #73 on: January 09, 2011, 05:09:40 PM »
Sorry for possible grammar/spelling mistakes... :nervous I hope you enjoy this chapter. :)


Chapter 13

Sayumi’s POV

I was too stunned, I couldn’t even move. My whole body seemed as if it was frozen. Everything felt like it was in slow motion, and the only question that was running through my mind was “Is Risa kissing me right now?”
It was like a dream come true, I’ve always wanted her to kiss me, but it never happened…Until that day. I’m the one who made the first bold move, and got rejected.

“Risa, I think I’m in love with you…” I bravely confessed,

“Sayu, I’m sorry…” got rejected,

the end.

I’ve never been rejected before, so I didn’t know how it would feel like, and let me tell you something, it hurts, it hurts really bad. Especially If the person who rejected you is dear to your heart. I’m not going to lie and say I wasn’t jealous when I found out that she was dating Kei, because I was.
When that son of a bitch started going out with her, she stopped hanging out with me, she stopped calling me everyday, she stopped trying to make me laugh when I’m feeling down, and most of all, she stopped caring about me. That was all because of that bastard. I hate him, from the very start I knew he was a playboy, always changing girlfriends, or should I say ‘whores’? That’s why I seduced him, to show Risa the unfaithful douche bag he really is. I knew she was going to get hurt, but I had to do it. It needed to be done, for her sake.

SUICIDE ATTEMPT TURNS INTO REUNION…

The news about me trying to end my sad and miserable life was everywhere. Can’t a person try to kill themselves without having their faces on every fucking news paper the next day, not to mention live broadcast of their attempt. Great! Now, I can’t leave my house without a paper bag on my head. And what’s with the headline? Reunion? What fucking reunion? Get your facts straight! Risa and I are not…a couple.
I understand that suicide is a big deal in Japan: it has the highest rate of any first world country blah blah…but I’m going to ask you a question, and I want you to answer me honestly. Would you care if I killed myself?

“Of course!” she answered looking directly into my eyes.

“Would you care if Ai-chan killed herself?” I asked again not willing to break the eye contact. Her eyes winded as tears started to build up.

“What?” her voice became weak and shaky.

“Risa, why are you doing this to her? Don’t you know that she’s in love with you?” she looked away as she tried to blink back her tears. I reached and cupped her face with my hands, forcing her to look into my eyes again.
“She tried to kill herself you know? Reina called and told me everything, she even scolded me, but that doesn’t matter. What matter is: even thought Ai-chan told me that she doesn’t want to see you again, that she hates you. I don’t think she means it, she’s still in love with you.”

I wanted to say more, but was stopped by two hands on my waist and a face buried in the crook of my nick as I felt my shirt getting wet from her tears. “Sayu, I love her so much…” she said between sobs. “Cry all you want, I’ll still be here, I promise.”
I was happy that she finally let it all out, and the only thing I could do was hold her tight and assure her that everything will be alright.

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Ai’s POV

“Why aren’t you dressed yet?”

“Just a second!”

“We’re gonna be late!”

“I said I’m coming!”

I was about to squeeze the life out of her. I wasn’t in a good mood to begin with, and her nagging didn’t help. I quickly finished my make up and walked out of my room. I decided to wear something simple: Blue jeans with a brown leather belt, white buttoned shirt and a loose white sweater on top of it. I have to admit, I looked pretty cute…or at least I thought I looked cute.
 
“You’re seriously not gonna wear that, right?” she started scanning my body from head to toe.

“What’s wrong with it? And stop looking at me like that!”

After staying silent for a minute, she smiled and winked at me. “Nothing. come on, let's go.”  She linked arms with me as we walked out.

Okay, that was random. I thought to myself raising a brow.

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“You’ve got to be kidding me! I thought you said a park, not an AMUSEMENT park!” I can’t believe she lied to me. She knows how much I hate crowded places. I turned and was ready to leave, but she reached out and grabbed my arm. “I know you’re mad at me right now, but please just hear me out…”

She waited until I cooled down and then continued. “You’ve been going through a lot lately, and I hate seeing you like this. You rarely smile, and even if you do smile, I know you’re faking it. So please, let’s just have some fun today, and forget about everything. You and I, just like the good old days. Okay?”
When she noticed that I was about to cry, she gave me a deadly bear hug. “Ai-chan, you’re not gonna cry, right?” she asked as she squeezed. “How…Can…I...cry when you’re…suffocating me?” I said trying to get air into my lungs. She finally let go, and I could breathe again. She’s too strong for her tiny body.  “I’m not going to cry, just please don’t do that again.” She stuck her tongue out and then started walking. “Reina, you’re the best.” I giggled as I followed her.

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Reina’s POV

Where the hell are they? I thought we had agreed to meet here at 7 pm sharp. My mind was somewhere else, but I could still feel her eyes on me. “Reian, are you okay? You seem distant.” Yes, I am distant. I just hope Miss ichiban kawaii didn’t forget about our plan. “I’m fine.” I turned to face her with a smile. She smiled back as she turned her attention to the ice cream she was holding. “I love ice cream~!” I couldn’t help but grin, she’s too adorable. As I was busy staring at Ai-chan, I felt my phone vibrate in my pocket. I took out my phone and flipped it open. Sayu had sent me a message.

“I know you’re probably wondering where the heck are we, but please before snapping the phone shut, let me explain… while we we’re on our way, I saw this really cute jacket that will match my kawaii fuzzy boots, so when I went to the store, there was only one left and I just HAD to buy it before that ugly woman did. So yeah, that’s why we’re late. Okay, bye~!
Oh, right now, we’re entering the gate…”


I cursed under my breath as I snapped my phone shut. As I was waiting patiently, Ai-chan stood up and said: “I’m going to the toilet. Wait here, don’t move. I nodded as watched her disappear into the crowd.

From far away, I could see a person in pink waving their hand. “Sayu…” I could recognize her anywhere. I stood up waiting for her to get closer.
“Reina-chan!” she exclaimed as she gave me a hug. When we both backed away, I started searching for the person I’ve been waiting for the most. “Where is she? Don’t tell me that she didn’t come!” I said anger rising inside of me. “Don’t worry; she needed to use the toilet.” Sayu assured. I just hope this works…

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Risa’s POV

As I was walking, I bumped into someone, and we both fell on our butts. “Watch where you’re going, dammit!” I said irritated as I tried to get up. “I’m sorry I didn’t see you.” The other person apologized, which made me feel bad for raising my voice.  “Here, let me help you.” I offered my hand, and the person gladly accepted it.

“Thanks, look I’m really sor – “

Oh my god!

“R-r-risa!”

“Ai-chan!”

To be continued…

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Re: I Don't Want You Back [TakaGaki] Update - Chapter 13 (1/9)
« Reply #74 on: January 09, 2011, 05:24:08 PM »
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Re: I Don't Want You Back [TakaGaki] Update - Chapter 13 (1/9)
« Reply #75 on: January 09, 2011, 08:18:51 PM »
Risa bumps into Ai :lol:

But Sayu being self-conscious really makes this story interesting
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Re: I Don't Want You Back [TakaGaki] Update - Chapter 13 (1/9)
« Reply #76 on: January 10, 2011, 12:50:01 AM »
Holy cow! They actually bumped into each other in the restroom! :lol: And this time, Risa is the one cursing. :P Ai-chan was just being nice and apologized.  :wub:

What's going to happen now?? I hope Ai-chan doesn't blow up on Risa and the others! :mon scratch:

Or will this lead to TakaGaki's making up?! :mon pray2:

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Re: I Don't Want You Back [TakaGaki] Update - Chapter 13 (1/9)
« Reply #77 on: January 10, 2011, 12:04:12 PM »
Man I suppose Sayu's odd twisted logic of sleeping with Kei to show Gaki what a bastard he is kinda worked, even if it was, well a bit of a dodgy way to show it....

So Gaki does like Ai, and it seems as though Sayu and Rena have come up with this plan to get Gaki and Ai back together again, wether Ai will be able to keep her cool infront of Gaki, especially now that Sayu and Reina are not around to act as buffers, is a different matter......

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Re: I Don't Want You Back [TakaGaki] Update - Chapter 13 (1/9)
« Reply #78 on: January 13, 2011, 10:27:33 AM »
^ I agree on that. Sayu's way of making Gaki see what an A****** Kei is only makes Kei the winner? I mean....getting to bed Sayu?!?! *eyeballs pops out of eye sockets* The darn lucky fellow *grumble* XD

I'm interested to see how AiGaki interact. Especially since Gaki shot her mouth off and kinda scolded Ai for crashing into her :D

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Re: I Don't Want You Back [TakaGaki] Update - Chapter 13 (1/9)
« Reply #79 on: January 31, 2011, 05:07:25 PM »
Chapter 14


Risa’s POV


“Thanks, look I’m really sor – “

Oh my god!

“R-r-risa!”

“Ai-chan!”

Then she ran away. I tired to stop her by not letting go of her hand, but she looked at me with so much hatred, eyes filled with tears that I felt like someone took a sharp knife and started jabbing my heart with it repeatedly. I ended up letting go willingly, but slowly, I wanted to feel her warmth once again, because I missed her touch, I missed her. I wanted to tell her that. I wanted to tell her that I miss her so much, that I love her, and I’m sorry… but I couldn’t. I was so scared.

When she saw that I didn’t completely let go, she slapped my hand away, grabbed her bag off the floor, and started running with her tears freely flowing down her cheeks. All I could do was watch her as she disappeared. Niigaki Risa, you’re an asshole, she hates you, and you deserve it. I said as I bit on the inside my lower lip trying to distract myself from the tears building up in my eyes, but failing.

I fell down on my knees weeping my heart out, “Ai-chan I love you!” as I screamed out my confession; the feelings I’ve been hiding and denying for so long. For ten years! I’ve been in love with her for ten years, but I pretended I wasn’t. “I love her as a friend,” I used to say to myself every night, “nothing more, nothing less…” pushing the feelings away before falling asleep. I can’t do it any longer, I just can’t! I’m sick of pretending. I love her, and I want her to know that…I want her to love me again.

“I love you!” I screamed again not caring about the audience that I’ve drawn from earlier. They were staring at me, some whispering stuff about how disgusting I am, and some were actually feeling sorry for me.

My head hung low, but not ready to give up as I cried some more with my face in the ground. I didn’t want to give up, but eventually after sobbing, begging and screaming so much, I ended losing all my strength. I looked pathetic. At that moment I wanted to die. Why should I keep on living? I have no purpose in life anymore.  My life ended right before my eyes the moment I let her go without even trying to stop her.

I didn’t move from where I was, still on my knees with my head still hung low. I felt so hopeless, helpless, and lifeless. I was in so much pain, but it was nothing compared to the sharp, unbearable soreness in my empty, shattered heart.

Somehow, the tears didn’t stop, wouldn’t stop. Even after trying to compose myself by inhaling and exhaling deeply, they just kept falling.

Suddenly, someone grabbed my hands furiously, pulled me up to my feet and started dragging me with so much force. My vision was all blurry, thus I couldn’t see who the person was because of the warm unstoppable tears that filled my damn eyes! I twisted painfully, desperately trying to get out of the person’s strong grip, but I was too weak. All of a sudden, I was pushed to a wall. “Itai!” I flinched as my back hit the hard concrete.

“What do you think you’re doing?!” That voice…

When I opened my eyes, I saw her standing inches away from me. She was so close I could feel her hot breath against my face. I looked deep into her red swollen eyes and saw nothing but sorrow. I could see that she was hurting, and it was all because of me. I did this to her… I hurt her. I reached out my hand and wiped the fresh tears from her sorrowful eyes.

“Gaki-san…” she sighed as I gently stroked her cheek with my thumb, while looking into her eyes, her beautiful brown eyes.
You’re so beautiful. You’re eyes, your lips… I thought as my gaze traveled down to her soft luscious lips. I wanted to kiss her so bad, but I didn’t want to ruin the moment. I wanted us to stay like this forever.

“Risa, please kiss me…” and I was more than happy to cater to her request.

To be continued…


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