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[AKB48xMendol] Fushigi no Persona (update-chapter 6!)
« on: January 08, 2011, 05:45:11 AM »
I know it's already late :nervous... but it's better late than never  XD so guys, Akimashite Omedetou!  :D
And here, I offer you a new fic fo this year  :nervous so if your up to reading new fics with uncertain endings and plot then dozo... :catglare:


"Fushigi no Persona"

Chapter One – The Beginning?

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It was another ordinary day for certain people, but not to the horde of girls and boys sitting on the benches scattered around the area. Basking under the heat of the sun as they chatted amongst their peers, seemingly unconcerned of the heat it’s radiating to them. If you asked them why they’re enduring the heat of the sun, they could only come up one answer and that is...

“I’m sure they’ll arrive here in no time.” An overly excited girl mused to her companion as she fanned herself with a leaflet she was holding, eyes beaming with happiness.

“I know. I just can’t wait for them to arrive, it's making me antsy already.” Her companion replied, excitement also evident in her eyes as she hugged a small stuffed toy tightly against her chest.

“It’s just frustrating were not the only people here. And I thought only few got this news that leaked out. Damn that paparazzo scamming on us.” The first girl huffed, scowling at the other girls around them. And just like them, those girls and boys have the same intention as she and her friend.

“Baka! Of course it’s expected. What were you thinking you’re VIP or something?” She was playfully hit by her companion in the shoulder, smirking at the same time. Yeah, what was she thinking? VIP my well-shape ass she thought, rolling her eyes though she wished she was.

Their cherry conversation was interrupted suddenly by a van with its glass well-tainted so the occupants inside will not be seen from outside, immerge from the corner. And barely one millisecond both girls and boys were quick in to their feet. The others did the same as they flocked towards the van that stopped in front of the building and shouts of joy started.

‘Kyah’

‘Oh my god, he waved at me’

‘Marry me?’

Those yells surrounded the area as four distinct people got out from the van. Flashing their smiles to their fans that were held by securities, stopping them from further stepping closer to them. Paparazzi were also present aside from the loyal hording fans, flashing their digital cameras wildly, eager to get even a little scoop from this very well-known group.

‘The princess just smiled at me.’

Can also be heard from a certain fanboy, who really did receive a smile from this so called princess. His dreamy face told he wouldn’t have an early sleep tonight as he would replay the scene to his mind over and over again. Like a pirated DVD.

Finally, the mirth was slowly lessened as the four celebrities went inside the building, followed by two matured women in their suits. The fans also slowly dispersing to different directions, but not without a smile and excitement painted on their faces. Having basked in the glory of your idol’s presence, a wave from them and the killer smile to boot, who wouldn’t be in a cloud nine after that, right?

As for the four idols, the moment they step foot inside the confinement of their huge dressing room, let out a relived sighed. Well, except for their princess who gracefully strode towards a single couch, picked-up a magazine on her way before comfortably settling herself on it. Completely ignoring her three companions as she started flipping the magazine she was holding.

The three remain standing, already used to this aloof demeanor their princess was showing, though it still irked a certain blonde a bit as he put his hands to his hips, shaking his head in displeasure.

“Oh well….” He grumbled, walking towards the farthest couch, away from their princess who’s already in her own world. Now sitting comfortably, he looked at his two companions who were in the process of sitting in a rather large couch just inches away from him.

“I think my jaw needs repairing from all those smiling we did.”  The boy with average height grumbled as well, massaging his jaw as she brusquely plopped down to the couch.

“Nah, don’t bother. You’re just going to give the surgeons a headache and wrinkles. They can’t fix something unfixable, you know.” The blonde smirked, seeing his companion glared at him for his remarks. Oh how he loves to make fun of this gullible boy.

“At least I’m taller than you.” He retorted back to his blonde friend, who’s smirked gone upon hearing his comeback. The two now were openly glaring to each other.

“Guys, please enough.”

Their sensible leader intervened, massaging his temple. The two didn’t budged though as they continued their glaring contest. Their princess glanced at them, blank expression graced her beautiful face as she returned her attention back to the magazine.  This was also a common scene to her so much she didn’t need to pay attention to them anymore.

‘Ahem’

Four sets of eyes immediately drawn to the fake cough from the door. And three sets of eyes widened at the sight, the other one just look bored.

It was their president. Standing in her glory with something in her hand, glaring at the boys.

“They’re just playing around, promised.” Their leader was immediately to his feet, frantically flailing his hands as he saw the death glare of their president.

 “Right, guys?” He gulped.

“Y-yeah, what Riku said…” Kuu chimed in as a sweat trailed down the side of his face, springing to his feet as well.

“O-of course, were just playing around, shachou.” Kai added, also standing now. Preparing to bolt out in a run if that something from his shachou’s hand that turned out to be a whip goes near him.

“I thought so.” Kamonohashi Saeko said after a while, handing the whip to her secretary Marilyn who was standing beside her. She let out a light laugh upon seeing the boys sighed simultaneously, sitting back again on the couch.

“That’s a great performance you guys. You really outdid all the other performers.” Marilyn exclaimed. Walking towards Kai and playfully pinched his cheek, then strode towards Kuu and Riku to do the same. And lastly to their princess who discarded the magazine to the table the moment their shachou step in, smiled fondly at the secretary as her cheek being pinched softly as well.

“Kai’s messed up in the middle of the song though, he plucked the wrong string but I’m glad the fans didn’t noticed it.” The princess of the group said nonchalantly as she looked at the blonde, her eyes challenging him.

“I did not. You’re one to talk to. If you haven’t noticed, your voice faltered in the third paragraph.” His intense accusing gaze bore down to the only female of their group who flinched at his retort.

“But as the lead guitarist, you certainly know you’re the one leading the band, right?” She said calmly, flicking her hair from obscuring her pretty face, while the blonde’s intense gaze faltered a bit as he think of something to say to crack their princess perfect mask.

“And as the lead vocalist in our band, shouldn’t you be hmm…let me think, the perfect princess you are while singing?” The smug blonde replied sarcastically, now making the so-called princess throw a glare at his direction. He smiled triumphantly.

While the two were having a verbal match, the two other members sat silently. Looking back and forth between the two who was arguing, much likely as if they’re watching a tennis match.

“SHUT UP!”

The thundering voice of their shachou made the hairs on their back stood up. Kuu and Riku clutched to one another, eyes widened.

“Do I have to tell the four of you to line up before me?” Their shachou asked, a murderous intent on her eyes as she looked at her talents.

“No shachou!” The four of them replied immediately. Even the composed princess was scared to death. Who would want to be whip anyways?

“Alright…” Saeko sighed. Kami-sama! These four are such pain in the ass. She would not be surprised if one day she’ll find white streaks on her hair.

“Kai, you messed up. I’m just glad it’s a very small mistake to be noticed.” Their shachou walk towards the blonde as she pointed out that he really did mess up. Kai nodded, eyes downcast. He growled upon seeing their princess smirked. How he loves to wipe out that smirked on her lovely face. Lovely? In time, you just wait.

“What were you thinking anyway? If you’re on stage, focus only in playing the guitar perfectly.”

“H-hai, shachou.”

Kai replied, unable to meet his president’s gaze. He was guilty after all since he lost focus when a certain long-haired beauty appeared in a midst of the crowd. He blushed lightly upon remembering her smiling face. And the two boys snickered silently. It’s obvious they knew what the reason or who the reason why their blonde friend was blushing. Hell, their shachou also knew, as well as Marilyn.

“His whipped.” Kuu whispered to Riku who grinned widely. Though it was loud enough for all of them to hear what the drummer had said…whispered. Kai immediately glared at Kuu who snickers at him again.

“And you…” Saeko interrupted before another verbal match would occur as she turns towards the innocent looking lead vocalist of the band.

“As much as I hate to agree with Kai, your voice actually did falter a bit, Atsuko.” Their president, firm and with stern tone look disappointedly at their princess. Saeko was thinking along the line of, ‘how can the little miss perfect Atsuko-hime slipped up?’ That was so unlike her, who has a perfect etiquette while on stage performing.

“It won’t happen again, shachou. I’m very sorry.” Atsuko replied. Standing in her full height as she bowed towards their respectable president, who was wondering why Atsuko made a mistake after Kai did.

Their shachou wave her hand off.

“It’s alright. As long as you promised it won’t happen again.”

“Hai-!” both replied at the same time.

“Yeah, you two shouldn’t mess up again.” The smug looking Kuu interjected, wiggling his eyebrows towards Kai and Atsuko who glared at him.

“I wouldn’t be so confident if I were you.” Riku commented as he pointed towards their president, whip on hand while looking towards their direction.

“I’ll shut up now, shachou. So please, you can put that weapon of butt destruction away now.” The panicking Kuu said as he runs behind their secretary, using Marilyn as a shield. Not a good idea for a hiding place, baka.

Marilyn, who’s in the process of jumping away to leave Kuu wide open for whipping, halted as their princess came into his rescue.

“Shachou, we’re free for awhile, right?” She asked deliberately, earning their shachou’s attention. Forgetting she was about to whip a certain mischievous drummer. Kuu on the other hand throw a grateful look towards Atsuko, who looked back with a ‘you owe me again’ look.

“Yes, you’re free. You can relax for a bit before another live performance.”

“And if I remembered correctly, it was a music show where you guys are number one.” Marilyn clapped her hands in delight, the four laughed lightly at the childish act of their secretary.

“Just...wow, right?” Riku said, still smiling as he shook his head.

“Three weeks straight and were still number one in Music10.” He added, still unable to believe they finally snagged the number one spot from a certain Diva.

“Well, it’s obvious alright ‘cause were the best.” Kuu exclaimed happily, high-five with Riuku as they did a half-hug, bumping their chest while saying ‘yeah’. This made Saeko chuckled at her boys. Teenage boys...

“Alright boys, settle down and rest a bit so we could show that Persona deserves the number one spot.”

She turned to Atsuko.

“Make them  fall in love more with your voice, hime-sama.”

As much as Atsuko loves their president to death, she doesn’t like it when she teases her like that. She sighed.

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Kai’s POV

I know it’s my dream, well Riku’s dream, Kuu and Atsuko’s to be number one in Japan. But now that we already achieved that dream I felt something…..like it wasn’t right. I remembered clearly the defeated looked in her face when the host announced our song as the new number one in Music10. And it pains me to see her like that. If being number one feels like this, then I don’t want it anymore. Her happiness is way more important than mine.

After Marilyn and Shachou left our dressing room, I decided to wander around Tohto TV. Telling them I needed some fresh air, where actually I just want to get away from Kuu and Riku’s barrage of teasing. They knew why I messed up in our performance after all. Those wise-ass. And of course, to also get away from the accusatory glance Atsuko was giving me. What’s her problem anyway?

And Tohto building being a big building doesn’t help at all. It’s so big and lots of rooms it would be no surprise if someone lost his way. The place was like a freaking labyrinth. Wait! Is that the prodigy kid, Matsui Jurina? I was about to call her when suddenly I was pulled inside in one of the unused rooms.

“What the hmmpph…”

But before I could finish what I’m about to say, I was silenced by a pair of lips pressed against mine. Stopping all coherent thoughts running on my mind…though one still remain.

“Ray.”

I murmured between the kissed and she hummed in response. Even though there’s no light in the room, I was confident to say that the girl who was hungrily kissing me is no other than my raven-haired Diva, Ray.

“Kai…”

She whispered after pulling away from the kiss. Our faces still inches apart as I can still feel her hot breath on my face.

“Yeah?” I asked, pulling her much closer to me. My right hand holding her waist as my left was cupping her smooth face.

“Hmm…nothing.” She giggled lightly, giving me butterfly kisses on my lower lip. This made my stomach flutter and all I think was capturing those soft lips again. And I did.

I kissed her slowly, putting all my emotions with it. And as expected she reciprocated it with much fervor. When she opens her mouth slightly, I didn’t hesitate at all as I swopped in, exploring the inside of her mouth. Eliciting a moan from her where I swallowed it willingly.

“You know, you’re so cool up in the stage with that guitar of yours.” Ray said after we break apart to breath. She hugged me, head resting on my shoulder. Though Ray is quite taller than me, I was surprise how our body fit together when meshed like this. I smiled.

“I try.” I replied, earning a giggle from her again.

“Though I was tempted to hurl every girl ogling at you.” She added and that made me chuckle. I always find it cute when Ray gets possessive. I like it….erased that, I love it. In that way I’m sure she’s not interested in other boys beside me. Lucky me.

“Don’t worry. I don’t find girls attractive at all, except you of course.” I said lamely. If Kuu can hear me right now, I’m sure he’s already gagging. Hell, who cares, I’m lame when it comes to this beauty.

“Uhm…just make sure you do.” Ray replied, giving me flitting kisses on my neck. And I willed myself not to shudder as a shiver run down my spine. This girl drives me nuts with what she’s doing. She’s practically killing me here.

‘Self control! Self control! Self control’ I chanted on my head as Ray continued with her ministrations. Did the room just suddenly got hot?

And finally before self-control abandoned me, my phone rang. Thanks Kami-sama! I don’t want to get loose in this kind of place. Though I find pulling away from Ray was such a difficult task. I summed up all my will power and thankfully I managed. Reading the mail Riku had sent, I nodded to myself.

“What is it?”

“Need to regroup now. Music10 starting in an hour. You should go back to your dressing room as well.” From the light emitting on my phone, I can make out Ray’s feature. A content smile on her face and is till flash from the kissing we did. And thinking about it, it also made me blushed.

“Alright, if you promised to take me on a date afterwards…” She said shyly, clasping my right hand with hers.

“Of course, it would be my pleasure.” I replied immediately, earning a kiss from her to my cheek.

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“This is really getting out of hand. Just do anything you can to restrain your boy.”

“What’s wrong with it? They look so cute together.”

“Cute or not, it’s making Ray less focus on her work, making your band stole her spot.”

Sarukawa-shachou said exasperatedly, rubbing his temples, anticipating a headache coming on its way. With Saeko looking at him amused for finally seeing the great Sarukawa in his suffering glory.

“Don’t tell me it’s one of your schemes, Saeko. You still owe me, remember? If weren’t for me giving your band a chance in the Indies they wouldn’t reach the pinnacle they’re basking right now.”

Ranted the MonkeyPro president. Alarmed for seeing the devious smirk the other president was giving him. For Saeko-shachou, as much as she hated to cave in, she really did awe Sarukawa big time. Though it would be fucking-fantastic seeing his panicked idiotic face all the time.

“Alright, alight.” She smirked one last time.

“I’ll tell Kai to stop seeing the Diva if that’s what you want.” She finally added, regretting immediately upon seeing the relief washed on Sarukawa’s features.

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“And that’s what I call perfect performance. No messed up at all.”

Their shachou said after all of them boarded the van, giving them a V sign while grinning ear to ear. Who wouldn’t? With how the crowd well-received their performance, the other performers regarded them like royalty and the fact that they’re still number one, Saeko-shachou couldn’t ask for more.

“Keep up the good work guys.” She winked at them before barking to the driver to drive fast.

“Thanks Kami-sama, the whipping demon is satisfied.” Kuu said in a low voice as to not be heard by their president. This earned a light chuckle from the other members.

“Yeah, I agree. Appeasing her like this would make our lives easier.” Kai nudged Kuu who grinned at him. Seems like the Persona members are on high and no one can dump their spirits. Even the usual aloof Atsuko was all smiles.

“Totally true, and I’m gonna use this free time to find me a suitable girl myself.” Riku said, patting his own shoulder for an effect, trying to act cool by doing it. Kuu grimaced.

“You guys wanna come with me?”

“Pass.”

Both Kai and Atsuko said at the same time. The blonde furrowed his brows at their princess. Atsuko on the other hand lifted a brow towards Kai, her gaze challenging.

“Oooh….I smell something fishy.” Kuu chimed-in in a sing-song voice, grinning towards Atsuko and Kai who looked away immediately from each other. Is Atsuko blushing? Riku thought.

“Oh yeah? All I can smell was your rotten soaked sock.” The blonde shut back, irritated at what the blue-streak haired drummer was insinuating as he averted his gaze to look outside the window.

“Anyways, how about you, Kuu? You coming?” Riku intervened. He doesn’t want the free-whipping time to be ended so soon just because of petty squabbles of those two. He doesn’t want that. Nope, not right now.

“Me?”  Kuu asked, as if really pondering Riku’s offer.

“No thanks. I’ll be trapping myself inside my room for a good rest. Haven’t got a decent sleep now a days.” As evidence to his claimed, he yawned loudly.

And truth to be told, as their van stop in front of Kamonohatsu Agency, he quickly got out and run towards his room but not without saying ‘good night’ to his band mates.

“It’s not even six in the evening.” Atsuko commented as she glanced to her wrist-watch.


Thirty minutes later, the leader of Persona and their princess found themselves at the door that leads outside their agency. Both were sporting their styled of clothes.

“Nice outfit. Where you going?” Riku asked Atsuko who was wearing an offside light blue shirt that shows her milky white shoulder. You can also see the fitting back and white stripe shirt under it. Her white skirt that runs along her mid thigh accentuates her shapely legs. And to complete her outfit, those high-heeled boots would scream how sexy Atsuko-hime was.

“Thanks.” Atsuko smiled albeit shyly. She’s still not good with receiving such simple compliments. Especially compliments that came from her band mates. Well, Riku’s a pretty boy and all.

“I’m meeting with Tomochin. And you?” She added, discreetly checking out her leaders outfit. Though Riku’s radiating an aura of a dangerous typical boy next door, Atsuko see none of it right now. The Riku that stood in front of her was different than the usual. He was dashing and looks wild, truly a debonair. She can imagine how many willingly girls would throw themselves at Riku. And she wouldn’t be surprised if their leader would bring home a girl one day. Bad boy looks good on him...

“Clubbing…” Riku simply replied as he opened the door, ushering Atsuko outside like the gentleman that he is.

“I told you, gotta find a girlfriend. I’m not gonna lose to Kai.” He added, waving a taxi over, completely missing the off rhythm in Atsuko’s walk as he mentioned the blonde’s name. Insinuating that Kai already has a girlfriend.

“Well, ladies first…” Riku motioned for Atsuko to get in. She smiled and muttered a thank you to him. He’s such a gentleman, unlike some certain blonde...

As the two finally left the vicinity of their agency, a newly fresh Kai immerge from his room. He was in his cool dude outfit as the usual. His cool black hoodie adoring his lithe body.

“Shouldn’t make my girl wait any longer...” He muttered to himself, a little giddy just thinking of taking Ray out in a date. He just can’t wait to be with his beloved Diva.

Just as he was about to walk down the flight of stairs, his shachou’s demanding voice halted him to his steps.

“Er, shachou?” Turning to his president’s direction, he asked. He doesn’t have time for this idle chat, Ray’s waiting for him.

“If you’re going out to meet with Ray, then you’re not allowed to leave.” Did he hear her correctly? Not meeting with Ray? But she’s the one who’s forcing him to always make the Diva happy, right? So what’s with the restrictions all of a sudden?

“W-what?”

“You heard me clearly so you don’t have to play dumb-deaf.” Saeko replied seriously which taken aback the caught off guard blonde.

“B-but, can you just tell me why?” Kai asked, regaining his composure a little. This was just all too confusing. Why was their shachou doing this?

“Just don’t leave if you opt to meeting Ray. That’s all you need to know.” Their shachou replied sternly, though she found herself unreasonable as well. She too clearly knows she’s making her blonde talent confused as hell. Bear with it since I promised that sly bastard...

As for Kai, anger flared up inside him for not getting a well-good deserved reason why he can’t meet with his girlfriend. And here he thought his day started off great.

“Well, newsflash shachou, you can’t make me stay.” The blonde replied heatedly, his voice laced with strong conviction, not giving room for any arguments. But as he turns towards the stairs to take his first step, he tripped down.  Too angry to notice he was already on the edge of the stairs.

“KAI…!”

Yelled by the panicked Saeko-shachou as she watched the blonde guitarist tumbles down a flight of stairs in horror.  Her shout alerted the other occupants of the agency as Marilyn immerge suddenly at the base of the stairs, already cradling the unconscious Kai into her arms, calling out the blonde's name desperately to wake him up. But no tell-tale sign of Kuu around.

Good news? Kai wasn’t bleeding or anything. He’s totally unscathed and looks like just sleeping. Bad news? He looks like sleeping where he’s actually rendered unconscious from the fall.

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You can kill me later for scratching Kai out in the story in the first chapter  :P

PS: I don't know when I'm going to update this one, gomen. haha though I'm hoping this would interest you even a little. If it did, you can post even a small smiley as a comment....deal?  :lol:

« Last Edit: June 14, 2011, 04:05:43 PM by dark-atrox »



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Re: [AKB48xMendol] Fushigo no Persona
« Reply #1 on: January 08, 2011, 07:23:12 AM »
Like this! ^_^v Ray and Kai! :heart: THANK YOU!!!  :heart: :heart: :heart:  but then, yeah, Kai got killed! ~ erh well not killed, unconscious. will still await your update :D  :twothumbs

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Re: [AKB48xMendol] Fushigo no Persona
« Reply #2 on: January 08, 2011, 07:47:53 AM »
Persona + Atsuko?! :w00t:  I was thinking "the princess" was Ray, and that she joined forces with Persona. Atsuko was my second guess. It seems like she has a bit of an ego. Can't wait for the next chapter. I hope you don't make us wait for a long time.  :nervous

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Re: [AKB48xMendol] Fushigo no Persona
« Reply #3 on: January 08, 2011, 08:45:19 AM »
Band Persona?  :drool:

Wild Riku? SO COOL~!  :wub:

Want more~!  XD PLEASE CONTINUE~!  :bow:  :twothumbs

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Re: [AKB48xMendol] Fushigo no Persona
« Reply #4 on: January 08, 2011, 01:07:22 PM »
woooooow.... a new fanfict....  :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs nice and i think this fanfict is so interesting. did u put kai n atsuko in a kind of a enemy situation in here? or there would be a triangle romance in here...  XD cant wit for the next update. please update as soon as u could..  :cow: :cow: :cow:

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Re: [AKB48xMendol] Fushigi no Persona
« Reply #5 on: January 08, 2011, 02:09:59 PM »
So uh...how many smileys do you want anyway?
Coz I'm so willing to press as many as you want!  XD
Yay! Another interesting fanfic has arrived!  :heart:
I'm seeing confusion on Kai's part and a love triangle here.  :lol:
And Persona are real boys?!  :twothumbs :twothumbs
Update as soon as you can!  XD

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Re: [AKB48xMendol] Fushigi no Persona
« Reply #6 on: January 08, 2011, 07:48:24 PM »
Yeah! Another great story :) I'm amready waiting for your next update... Though it didn't take you lot of time to do something bad with Kai T_T Well... Okay   :lol:
Omg Atsuko with Persona ?!? I was sure it was Ray XD you know with that personality XD But yeah I can't wait to see Atsuko and Kai fight again XD

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Re: [AKB48xMendol] Fushigi no Persona
« Reply #7 on: January 08, 2011, 09:04:31 PM »
RAY+KAI+ATSUKO=LOVE TRIANGLE   :heart:  :heart:  :heart: yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeessssssss!!!!!!!!!!!! :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: 

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Re: [AKB48xMendol] Fushigi no Persona
« Reply #8 on: January 09, 2011, 08:46:15 AM »
When I saw this :mon inluv:s, I was like.... Oops, sorry 'bout the pic... hehe :] (didn't expect that the pic would be this big... hehe  XD) :mon sweat: Another SSP from me!!! YeY!!!  :mon XD: :mon fyeah:  :shocked 

Wow! Another AKBxMendol crossover fic!!! :mon inluv: OhMiGawsh!!!  :mon mad: Sorry if I'm acting this way!! I'm just sooo happy today!! :]  :yep:

Anyway, I'll add this fic to my collection!!!! :mon lovelaff: hehehe :] I really haven't read this yet but I'm acting like i did...  :P hehe... Sorry :]  :mon sweat:

Anyway thanks sooo much for the fic.  :mon cute: Pls update more!!!  dark-atrox san hehehe  :grin: :mon heh: (hehe.. sorry but I don't typically use those "small smileys", just the monkey emoticons... Hope you don't mind... :]  :grin:)

You know, when I'd somehow changed this, it felt really weird.. hmm.. dunno why.... (I look like a reeeeaaaal newbie huh...  :P)
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« Reply #9 on: January 09, 2011, 06:51:54 PM »
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Just wondering... why did you put my name? XD

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« Reply #10 on: January 10, 2011, 02:11:30 PM »
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Just wondering... why did you put my name? XD
  :doh: (Sorry about that,  :nervous really.... :mon ignore:)

Umm... you know what? I really do want to apologize for this because, well, umm.. the comment was really for umm.. dark-atrox san...  :sweatdrop: :kneelbow: hehe...  :nervous

Well, I will explain what happened yesterday...
(FLASH BACK....)
When I was surfing the net (I usually enter this site :] ) I was doing my h.w. (which is very difficult by the way :mon ghost: :panic: I really don't know why my prof loves torturing us.... I think she's a sadist or something... haha  XD :P ) Anyway, when I was surfing the net for my hw, (yeah, really, it's for hw....  :grin:) I was happy about something because, well  because of this site... (not gonna say why... hehe  :grin:) and at the same time, quite pissed because of the hw, in short, it's like I'm in heaven and hell at that time (if you want I'm between salvation and death) to further explain: I'm busy...
So there, my brain was jumbled, mixed, tangled, confused :mon ko:, frustrated :frustrated:, and stressed :mon ref: (as always)... :badluck:
So there, because of that "hw" of mine,  :smhid I embarrassed myself once again.... migosh...   :shocked
Do forgive me, pls.. :mon pray2: :pleeease:

Because of this, I wasn't able to focus on our quiz on Economics (that's the same subj. with the hw....) and the quiz was more on computation.... I was like in the WTF mode....  :banghead:  :shocked

I'm still a bit embarrassed right now, :shy1: I really am sorry 'bout all this (made you confused... hehe  :sweatdrop: )
Sorry about it :mon sweat: hehe... Hope that clears things up... (Hope you're not laughing.....  :nervous)

Anyway, at least I learned something from this: read fics first before doing hw!!! :mon deter: hehehe :]
(Can somebody pls. help me erase my post there... :err: )
PLS DO NOT, I REPEAT, DO NOT READ MY POST DOWN THERE!!! ( :doh: Putting this here will make them read it more :mon wtf: ...arg...   I'm dying because of embarrassment...  :bleed eyes:)
Darn, blasted, difficult hw!!!! :scolding: (I'm really sorry bou-j525 san and especially to dark-atrox san..... :kneelbow:)

(I don't know if I will be able to post another comment here.... :mon wind:, guess I already did.. haha  :nervous )
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Re: [AKB48xMendol] Fushigi no Persona
« Reply #11 on: January 24, 2011, 10:15:27 AM »
First off, I only asked for smileys :), you guys don't have to be so generous  XD XD XD though I don't mind at all, really! :P :P :P Besides, I only wrote this story out of impulse  :nervous  so don't kill me if don't reach your standards about this fic  :panic: :panic: :panic: i warned you before right?  :lol: i don't have certain plot in mind  :bleed eyes:
@alexiel17 don't fret about the mistake you did, i don't mind at all  XD XD XD You're so  XD like this, keep the monkey smiley commin' :P
Anyway, here's chapter 2, douzo..... :catglare:



Chapter Two – Road Twist

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“Mi-na-mi.”

A whisper to her ear and a long slender finger dancing down her back made her straightened up from her seat. Still dazed from being rudely waken up from her sleep, she looks around to find the perpetrator.

“Ohayou, Takamina! Still squeezing a sleep before class started?”

Her classmate slash friend greeted her with vigor. As much as she wants to give this certain friend some piece of lecture, she stopped herself. Still early for that…she decided, rubbing off the sleep on her face.

“Mou, Sae. It’s still so early to be genki. ”She yawned, covering her mouth in the process. Her friend Sae just grinned, plopping to the chair in front of her. But the girl turns her chair around to face the still sleepy girl. She was thinking what made the perfect straight A student sleep before class or why she was sleeping in the first place. Isn’t she the one who always says that it’s not good to sleep in class before the said class started ‘cause it’ll make you feel lazy the whole day?

“Cause I’m genking, what’d you expect?” Minami rolled her eyes at her friend’s lame response. She knows and heard it a million times already she lost count of it. No more, please.

“I know, though I’m surprised you’re not late......like you know, the usual?” She smirked at the now scowling claimed genking. Oh she loves getting the upper hand.

“Well...” She started; looking away from Minami as a light blushed crept on her cheeks.

“...Sayaka woke me up.” She finishes as now a full blown blushed adoring her cheeks. It was so cute when Sae was acting so shy, her girly features coming out, overriding the boyish look she’s parading around the school. Wait! Back track a little....Sayaka woke her up?

“Sayaka? As in Akimoto Sayaka-senpai the student council president?” Minami blurted out so loudly, eyes widened at the revelation from her friend.

“Ssh….shut up, Takamina!” Sae hissed, covering her friend’s mouth as their classmates looked at their direction, trying to see what’s the commotion all about.

“Nothing here, just trying to kill Takamina as usual.” She shouted over her shoulder to regard the on lookers. Their classmates, already familiar with the playful squabbles of the two continued to chat with their companion.

Swatting her friend’s hands, Minami...

“Okay, off with your filthy hands from my mouth.” She said though the sound was muffled by her friend still covering her mouth. And alas, Sae removed her filthy hand...I mean just hands.

“Alright. Fresh air welcome back to my lungs.” Minami exaggeratedly inhales as her friend rolled her eyes on how silly the much shorter girl was acting. Besides, she wouldn’t have suffocated the girl if she didn’t suddenly blurted out about Sayaka waking her up.

“And Miyazawa, don’t you ever do that again. Who knows where that hand of yours just came from.”She added, grimacing at the thought while wiping her mouth. Her friend’s widened eyes looked comical. Oh, the glory of seeing your friend squirmed before you. Not to mention the tomatofied cheeks Genking has now. I’m becoming a sadist, aren’t I? Or did I just hit the nail?

“Sae, breathe. I was just kidding.” Minami shook her friend’s shoulder seeing she was in a catatonic-like state. And slowly the taller girl regain her composure, averting her gaze away from Takamina who was looking at her worriedly, though you can see in her eyes she was still amused by Sae’s reaction. She didn’t really mean to say that, just a little teased to gauge her friend. Or, she’s really evil and just getting back at her for waking her up.

“But Akimoto-senpai? Wow! Should I start building you a statue now?” She can’t help but teased Sae one last time before finally giving her a rebreathing time she needed. She doesn’t want her to be axyphiated or something. She got loads of problems already hanging her back and she doesn’t want to add more to it.

“Yeah, you should.” Sae laughed lightly whilst still blushing from the teased she received. What on earth has made her reveal to Minami that little info, she doesn’t know. Or maybe she just wants to brag she managed to snag the famous third year. Eat that fangirls…

“It’s really shocking, you know? You dig her and Akimoto-senpai totally digs you back. Way to go, Genking.” Minami playfully patted Sae’s shoulder, proud her friend finally succeeded in achieving her goal. Which is or more likely who is the most sought senpai, Akimoto Sayaka.

Sae on the other hand shook her head and shove Minami lightly. She doesn’t really like when their conversation turned out like this, like she was hunting girls. She, the predator nonetheless who is also famous make it looks easier to lure her preys. Which of course actually true, with what everyday having a confession from different girls, asking her to date them.

“Alright, Takamina. I get it.” Sae said, trying to get serious but her red cheek says otherwise, making Minami smirked at her. And that smirk made her want to choke her friend. But no, she wouldn’t do that if she wants to pass and reach her senior year. Minami was like her tutor after all, being the goody-good two shoes and candidate for the next student council president.

Glancing down to avoid Minami’s eyes full of mischievous glint, her eyes caught something on her friend’s desk. A magazine that slightly crumpled since obviously Minami had been leaning her arms on it during her entire nap, and a smile slowly creeps into her mouth...

“Still denying you’re a Persona fan, huh?” Sae said while pointing at the magazine. It was open to a certain page the Persona was featured. And her smile widened when she saw the shorter girl’s brow furrowed. Hah! Take that...

“I’m not. I just saw this laying on the floor and picked it up.” Minami replied nonchalantly. Not falling victim to Sae’s mocking teased about her being a fan of the famous band. True, she really did pick up the magazine and opted to return it to the owner later...if she did find whoever she or he is and if not, then she’ll keep it for good, but of course Sae doesn’t have to know that. And there’s no rule or law that’s prohibiting a person to browse someone’s magazine, right?

“Hmm...who do you like amongst the boys?” Sae asked, not paying heed from her friend’s response as she pretended to play with her invisible beard. Smirking face on as she eyed her friend.

“No one.” Minami replied in a deadpanned tone.

“Is it Riku? The pretty boy next door that plays the bass guitar?”

“…or is it Kuu? The charming mood-maker drummer of the band?”

“I said no one.” Minami gritted her teeth, eyes twitching. This made Sae grinned ear to ear. How did the tables turn so easily?  Awhile ago she’s making Sae squirmed before her and now.....Bah! This is not so fair. Why did her friend turn to be so smart when it comes in riling her up and pretty much dumb when it comes to their lessons?

“Or maybe Kai? The brash blonde bad boy who can make your dreams come true that plays the guitar?” Sae continued, ignoring Minami’s grimacing face as she mentioned the third one. Or was it an irritated look? A disgusted one? She’s not sure; it’s really hard to read the girls expression sometimes. Plus, Minami was not really the kind of friend who shares personal feelings and mushy what-not things to her.

“So, which one of the three Minami-chan? Was it Riku, Kuu or Kai?”

She added mockingly as she pointed to each picture as she said the name of each member to the magazine. Eliciting yet another twitch of an eye from her somewhat active volcano friend. Preparing to spit its lava towards Miyazawa.

“I don’t understand where in my response you didn’t understand. Should I spell it out to you, Miyazawa? It’s N-O O-N-”

“Or it’s Atsuko-hime, the lead vocalist that captures everyone’s heart that you like?” That made Minami stopped from her ranting. Her mouth agape towards Sae who was looking at her with her all too knowing smile. I think I nailed this one. Got you!

True, Takahashi Minami was a Maeda Atsuko fangirl. Not the crazy one who wants to stalk the princess if they had a chance. She categorized herself under who idolizes Atsuko, using the lead vocalist as an inspiration. Yeah, that type of fan though she admits the girl was extremely beautiful. And it would be a dream come true if she will meet her idol in person.

“Uhm…excuse me, Takahashi-san?” Minami closed her mouth as she turns to the person who unknowingly saves her from Sae, or whatever she was assuming. Though her friend was right, it would be the day of apocalypse that she’ll admit that.

“Y-yeah?”

Damn I stuttered...

From her periphery she saw Sae chuckled.

“Ano, I believed that magazine belongs to me.”

“Oh? Of course, here you go.” She flipped the magazine close as she discreetly smoothed out the little creased on the page and finally handed the magazine to her classmate. She smiled apologetically.

“Thank you, Takahashi-san. This magazine is important to me since it featured Persona. Though a lot of fans were wondering why they’re not appearing to any shows at all. It’s been a week now.”

A sad smiled appeared to her classmates face as she mentioned the Persona fan crisis happening right now. Some were already rallying outside the Kamonohatsu Agency, demanding for the Persona to perform. Or just have a press-con to inform their wilding fans why they’re not performing at all. She too, was wondering the sudden disappearance of the famous band.

“Uhmm…yeah. I know right.” Minami laughed lightly though it came out an awkward one so she faked a cough and nodded to her gloomy classmate. Chastising herself for being insensitive.

“Well, thank you again, Takahashi-san.” She bowed, clasping the magazine to her chest and was about to leave when...

“Ah! I almost forgot. Rena wants me to pass a message to you. She said ‘Be there at the clubroom after class or else’.” Minami sighed. Right, she was totally ignoring her club responsibilities for a week now, ever since that incident happened...

“Er, thanks for informing me.”

“No problem, Takahashi-san.”

“And Akicha….” Minami called when her classmate Akicha already reached her designated seat.

“It’s Minami, call me Minami.” She smiled and the bell rang, signaling for the morning class to start. And she can’t help but chuckle when she heard Sae groaned.

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‘Be there at the clubroom after class or else’. And when she decided not to show up again, what could be that ‘else’? It’s not like she didn’t received a threat from Rena before for skipping club activities again and again. It was almost every day, though she hasn’t done any drastic measures yet. Just a reminder here and there and a little scolding. But it doesn’t mean she didn’t care about club activities, it’s just she has pressing matters to attend to.

So, what could be that ‘else’ today? She thought. Well, the ‘else’ was just Minami found herself being chased around the campus after their class ended in the afternoon, by none other than Matsui Rena. The girl was waiting at the exit door. Preparing to force her attend the club activities, totally blocking her way out. Though Rena’s plan was planned perfectly she forgot the little tidbit about the room having another exit door. And so, here she was out of breath as she chased her elusive member around the campus.

“Takahashi, you know you can’t run away from me forever.” Rena yelled after the runaway girl between pants. Their distance already increasing and she knows in no time the little sneaky girl would slip out from her sight soon.

“Gomen Rena, I’ll just quit the club so you don’t have to worry about it.” Minami yelled back over her shoulder, almost tripping over from the small stone she steps on. She cursed inwardly.

“What? I won’t let you do that.” Rena yelled again, still running after Minami. Too busy to notice she startled the first years she had run passed. She doesn’t really care about that right now anyways.

“Eh? Whatever! But I’m sorry I really need to do something important than playing Robin Hood.” Minami slowed down upon reaching their school gate and seeing Rena already stop running after her.

“I’m really sorry but I need to do this.” Minami said in her normal voice. But she was sure Rena could hear her despite their distance. She smiled at her captain and friend before sprinting again towards outside the campus.

“You’re aim is much better than Robin Hood though, Minami.” Rena muttered to herself, sighing dejectedly as she dragged herself back towards the archery field.

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Adrenaline still high from running, Minami continued to run with destination engraved in her mind. Dodging people after people she encountered in her way while glancing to her wristwatch once in a while. It seems the girl needs to be somewhere important very soon.

Remembering how important this task she promised on achieving, she hasten her pace even more. Not minding if she bumped on people or not anymore. But alas, she did. And being raced as a polite girl, she stopped running momentarily, faced the person she bumped into, bowed and muttered an apology before resuming her run again. Not waiting for the person’s reply anymore, missing the cryptic words that left its mouth.

“I guess solution has presented itself to us.”

When Minami finally arrived at her destination, out of breath and panting, she readily swiped the sweat on her forehead using her pink handkerchief. Inspecting herself quickly as she smooth out her lightly wrinkled uniform and nodded to herself before stepping inside the building. But before she even makes her first step, the automatic sliding door suddenly opened. Revealing the person she was looking for.

“Kanzaki-san.” She greeted politely, doing the customary bow as well.

“Minami-chan, what do I owe this pleasant visit again?” Kanzaki-san, the middle aged man replied, a smile adoring his face. One can say that this man is a respectable person as he wore suites. With two tough looking body guards you can see in movies guarding a high profile person flanking both his sides. But a certain person who knows him very much may say otherwise.

“Kanzaki-san, I came here to confirm about what we talked about the other day.” Minami fidgeted a little. The man was intimidating after all despite the smile on his face.

“Ah! About that Minami-chan…” the man trailed off, a sad smile appeared on his face as she looked at the forlorn face of the girl who already anticipated a bad news.

“I’m sorry to tell you but I can’t lend you money that big.”

And she was right. Bad news, just like that.

“Can you do something about it? Even if you can’t lend me Two hundered thousand yen, can you at least lend me anything? Please, sir?” She pleaded; hopefully this man would understand how dire of a situation she was in. And that money is the only way she can pull through with the crisis she’s facing on.

“Please. I’ll do everything to pay the money back.” She added, cringing at herself for what she was doing right now. Begging is a no-no to her dictionary after all...but this one is an exception. She would do anything for that person even if-

“Everything?” Kanzaki-san asked, smiling at the girl who nodded back at him. You can see the determination in her eyes as she didn’t mind the suggestive smile thrown at her by the man.

“Yes-...”

‘Smack’

“Aw!”

“Kanzaki-san, right? I’m sorry about my niece. She loves playing pranks on people.”

Kanzaki-san looked confused at the woman who suddenly appeared beside Minami. The one who hits the girl with a folded newspaper at the back of her head before she could finish of whatever she was going to say to the man.

“W-what are you talking a-hmmpph...”

“Please excuse her behavior. She’s just being a teenager and you know how teenager now a days. So, if you don’t mind I’ll take my niece now.” The woman bowed to a still confused Kanzaki-san while her right hand still cupping Minami’s mouth to silence her.

After the not so polite retreat of the aunt-niece duo to a secluded alleyway, Minami swatted the hand on her mouth. What the? Is today put your hand on Minami’s mouth day or what? She screamed inside her head.

“Who do you think you are? Did you know you just completely ruined my chance in loaning some money from him?” Minami fumed at the woman who turned out to be the person she bumped into awhile ago. But right now, that certain piece of information bypassed Minami’s mind as the girl was currently furious.

“I can give you the full amount you want right now if you work for me.” The woman replied, not caring if the girl was mad at her. Though her smirked irked Minami who took a few steps back from the infuriating woman.

“What? Oh, hell no. You looked kinda creepy and suspicious enough compared to that old fart Kanzaki.” Minami replied, still seething. Though she regretted cursing in front of the woman even if she doesn’t know the said woman and a complete stranger to her.  Cursing is not her forte after all and if Rena heard her right now, she would probably be sitting seiza style already and for hours as a punishment for her bad language.

Turning her back from the woman, she failed to notice the evil glint on her eyes. And before she knows it, she suddenly felt sleepy after inhaling something from the handkerchief now covering her mouth and nose.

Kidnapping?

“I always think this may come in handy for future use and now it serves its purpose.” The woman chuckled, glancing down at the half lidded girl on her arms, brushing away some stray of bangs on her face. And before Minami completely pass out and welcome the world of darkness, she heard the woman said something which she totally didn’t understand at all.


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Author's note: Again, I don't know when to update this fic, so bare with me, Minna  :bow: :bow: :bow: and, and, and  :nervous I'm asking for spare smileys again, if you don't mind  :P

PS: Is there anyone out there who is willing to prof-read this story, the chapter 3, if there is, then you can PM me  :P :P :P (engish is not my native language after all :nervous)





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Re: [AKB48xMendol] Fushigi no Persona
« Reply #12 on: January 24, 2011, 01:23:39 PM »
 :mon crazyinlove: Thank you for the update!!!! I was going to ask you to update this one sooner!!!! mwahahahaha but yeah I was confused at first because i thought it was a whole new story but then i caught onto it!!! I would love to proof read your story so I can read the update because I would love to know what happens next!!! ^_^!!!!

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Re: [AKB48xMendol] Fushigi no Persona
« Reply #13 on: January 24, 2011, 03:33:15 PM »
 :bow: :twothumbs :twothumbs :)2 :twothumbs :twothumbs  :bow:

Please accept my humble offering of smileys to urge you to continue this awesome fic.  :cow:

So Minami's going to pretend that she's Kai from now on, very very interesting.

I also love the subtle inclusion of other AKB members. Rena as the captain of the archery team (hmmm dansou Rena flashback  :drool:) and Sae/Sayaka  :inlove:

Can't wait on how this will turn out.   O0





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Re: [AKB48xMendol] Fushigi no Persona
« Reply #14 on: January 24, 2011, 10:31:38 PM »
[bungal] Rena as the captain of the archery team (hmmm dansou Rena flashback  :drool:) [/bungal]

AGREE~!!  :mon lovelaff: Rena~!! YOU ARE THE BEST~!!  :mon inluv:

I'm VERY HAPPY RENA is COME BACK~!!  :tama-heart:

PLEASE KEEP GOING dark-atrox-san~!!  :kneelbow:  :tama-bye:

 :on cny1:  :twothumbs  :thumbsup  :D  :)  :D  :thumbsup  :twothumbs  :on cny1:

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Re: [AKB48xMendol] Fushigi no Persona
« Reply #15 on: January 24, 2011, 10:58:05 PM »
 :)  :) :) :) :thumbup :thumbup :thumbup XD XD XD XD :w00t: :w00t: :w00t: :w00t: :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs  :inlove: :inlove: :inlove: :inlove: :grin: :grin: :grin: :grin: :bow: :bow: :bow: :cow:

I would love to read your next chapter but English isn't my native language either so it'd be useless XD
I don't know if I put enough smileys.......  :roll: LOL I think I know what is going to happen :P

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Re: [AKB48xMendol] Fushigi no Persona
« Reply #16 on: January 25, 2011, 09:52:43 AM »
 :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
wow!
rena archery!!!! (danso episode)
is akicha also in archery club? (if-french kiss)
sae :heart: sakaya
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 :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
thanks!
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dark-atrox keep it up!
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« Reply #17 on: January 27, 2011, 06:22:46 AM »
.......... Gonna quote this ( Oh, not again  :doh:)

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@alexiel17 don't fret about the mistake you did, i don't mind at all  XD XD XD You're so  XD like this, keep the monkey smiley commin' :P

I'm so sorry bout that really...   :mon ehh: But thanks for liking my monkey emoticons, dark-atrox san Thanks also for accepting my apology  :farofflook:  (It's making me red  :mon innocent: or because I'm embarrassed bec. of... well, you know the reason  :grin: hehe  :grin:)

When I saw that there's an update, I was like :panic: (I think I know how the story will go... hehe :) )
Anyway, before, I thought it would be AcchanXKaiXRay where Kai would be soo clueless 'bout Maeda's feelings towards him but it turns out to be an AcchanXTakahashiXRay instead (I'm soo liking this...  :mon ignore:)

I think if Takamina sama would pretend that she's Kai, she'll be like  :luvluv1: with Acchan (since she "likes" Acchan, right ) and be like this :mon lurk: with Ray (Ah, remembered Mendol all of a sudden  :nya:) And Ray would be like  :mon whine: with "Kai" and  :mon mad: with Acchan and Acchan would be like  :mon huh: towards "Kai" at first, then she'll be like :mon innocent: since "Kai" changed and Acchan would be like  :mon slapass: with Ray!!! hahahaha  :on lol:  I soo can't wait!!! (Sorry if my guess was hard to understand... I'm actually in a fangirl mode right now! :mon lovelaff: hehe  :mon roll:)

Anyway, pls..  :mon pray2: update as fast as you can !!! I can't really wait dark-atrox san!!!  :mon crazyinlove:
(Oh btw, I like Rena as the capt. of the archery team, she hits my heart again  :mon lovelaff:)
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« Reply #18 on: January 30, 2011, 10:32:29 AM »
Replies First since you guys are soooo sugoi  :yossi: :yossi: :yossi: and WAH~ Love the smileys minna  XD XD XD thank you very much!  :bow: :bow: :bow:

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@Kei-chan Kei-chan? Dare nano?  :? LOL just kidding. A shout-out of million thanks to you  :bow: :bow: :bow: I'm glad you helped me with this thing (this chapter) It easy to read now compared before  :nervous You'll still proof-read the on-coming chapters, right? :angry: LOL and where's my BED SCENE, you author you!  :catglare:

@bungal-san yay! new reader, right? you're smileys lifted my spirits up!  XD and well, i love Rena XD, if it wasn't for her best acting as Geki I wouldn't be here right now writing fics about AKB48 :nervous

@RenaChii-san Hmm...if per chance you aren't a W Matsui fan?  :? or are you? Cause if you were, I'd gladly include it here (though i still include it even if you're not a fan of them :nervous)

@Bou-san WAW! Lots of smileys  :w00t: :w00t: :w00t: and thank you for the offer of proof-reading my fics but as you can see Kei-chan beat u to it,  :nervous gomen! you surely know what's going to happen next? :? :? :? So, you predicted i will kill Minami here? :bleed eyes: BTW kidding  :lol:

@aoi-sora-san Blue sky ei? :huhuh ahem well yeah, i was happy i finally included my oshimen in SKE48 XD YAY! for Geki  :otomerika: though i still don't know what to do with the other excess characters but the media senbatsu members will definitely monopolize the story :lol:

@alex-chan My cute whittle commenter  XD I really enjoyed reading your comments, seriously  :lol: :lol: :lol: I remembered myself fangirling everytime there's an update  :P (that was before though  :nervous) and er, you certainly knows what's going to happen ei,  :smhid just like Bou-san though you actually described it which by the way funny and interesting  :lol: well, u kinda hit the nail but just a little  :P2




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Re: [AKB48xMendol] Fushigi no Persona
« Reply #19 on: January 30, 2011, 10:47:37 AM »
@Kei-chan Kei-chan? Dare nano?  :? LOL just kidding. A shout-out of million thanks to you  :bow: :bow: :bow: I'm glad you helped me with this thing (this chapter) It easy to read now compared before  :nervous You'll still proof-read the on-coming chapters, right? :angry: LOL and where's my BED SCENE, you author you!  :catglare:
:mon fire: BAKA!!!! You are suppose to post the chapter!!!  :mon speechless: therefore...no bed scene for you!!!! (...haven't started writing chapter 8 yet....) and yes i will continue to proof-read for you...

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