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Re: ~Yuri-shotS~: Yuri Case No.1-Love Under the Sakura Tree (TomoTomo)-9/30/11
« Reply #40 on: October 01, 2011, 12:38:48 AM »
Awww This TomoTomo is sooooo cute!

please update soon!

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Re: ~Yuri-shotS~: Yuri Case No.1-Love Under the Sakura Tree (TomoTomo)-9/30/11
« Reply #41 on: October 01, 2011, 06:57:43 AM »
new reader!
this is SUCH a cute fic <3
TomoTomo are my OTP <3
and wow, this is really good~
and i've never even read yuri before until this point!
(yaoi fangirl - so i've never actually tried to read yuri. but i guess this converted me?)
anyways~ this is super adorable <3
really love it! <3
can't wait to see the next update!

and ai ai gasa~ *sings the tegomass song*
« Last Edit: October 01, 2011, 07:57:37 AM by atarashii-michi »

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Re: ~Yuri-shotS~: Yuri Case No.1-Love Under the Sakura Tree (TomoTomo)-9/30/11
« Reply #42 on: October 01, 2011, 07:22:11 PM »
escaping from me, eh? though I'm glad u updated :twisted: :twisted: :twisted:
and Kasai's really whipped!  XD
so, is there going to be a war between Meetan and Tomochin? :twisted:
it pains me that the next chapter is the last one... :(
...but continue to spread TomoTomo love  XD XD XD



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Re: ~Yuri-shotS~: Yuri Case No.1-Love Under the Sakura Tree (TomoTomo)-9/30/11
« Reply #43 on: October 01, 2011, 07:49:48 PM »
OH I see evil general commented right before me again!  :twisted:

Yup we are evil comrades bwahahaha  :twisted: and those souls we take care of are resting in peace so no issues there!  :twothumbs

getting tired of seeing our  :twisted: :twisted: :twisted:

What? next chapter is the last one?  :(

but TomoTomo is so fully of  :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:

WRITE MORE!!! *attempt to threaten you!*  :twisted: :twisted:

THANKS!

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Re: ~Yuri-shotS~: Yuri Case No.1-Love Under the Sakura Tree (TomoTomo)-9/30/11
« Reply #44 on: October 04, 2011, 11:49:44 PM »
So cute!!!!!!! Tomotomo!!!!
Both are jealous lol

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Re: ~Yuri-shotS~: Yuri Case No.1-Love Under the Sakura Tree (TomoTomo)-9/30/11
« Reply #45 on: October 14, 2011, 04:24:02 PM »
Message First:

@Kiri-el – hai, hai tsundere is the best XD, especially when dere side is showing :love:. It will surely make you all gaga :inlove:, hehe as for the ai-ai gasa….don’t you think it’s kind of romantic, though a bit cliché? XD

@blughise – Oh, we’re the same; it’s always the title that catches my attention first. But then, it depends on who were the leading characters. :yep: And thank you for loving Kasai’s POV XD. I always enjoyed writing her POV than Tomochin because I have to make it cute, lol  :lol:
And if you’re reading this reply, this means I’m going to post the last chapter. I’m still thinking whether to write a sequel or not all lol  :rofl:, besides there are lots of great writers out there. I’ll leave it to them to write more fics… :thumbsup

@haruhi16 – thanks for liking TomoTomo  :)...I guess somehow I managed to convince some people that TomoTomo pair aren’t that bad…. :twothumbs

@atarashii-michi – new reader?!  :O IRrashaieee~  :welcome lol OMG!  :w00t: TomoTomo is my OTP as well  :love:. Found an eternal comrade, I heart you now  :heart:, lol Annnnnnd this is the first Yuri fic you’ve read? Oh wow, I felt honored  :bow:. Glad I didn’t turn you away and instead convert you to become a Yuri fan  XD (I’m a yaoi fan too  :yep:). Arigatou, from the bottom of my kokoro for liking this fic  :bow: (though I really sucks at writing a fic) A million thanks again!  :twothumbs

@Gen.Atrox – I’m not escaping from you  :nervous (shakes head-looking for an escape route  :panic:)
And no, there would be no war between Meetan and Tomochin  :lol:. I prefer love than war lol. LOVE WARS?  :roll: (lamee~ I know  :nervous) It’s also saddens me that I have to end this fic, but I really have to, haha. Don’t worry gen, I’ll make a new story to continue spreading the love virus called TomoTomo lol  :grin: (lamee~ again I know  :sweatdrop:)

@Immortal-K – you are an evil immortal, immortal-K-san, kowaaa!!!  :panic: (runs away) don’t take my soul….yet. I still have to graduate  :yep:, land a job  :yep: and find a good husband  :yep: (though I don’t mind dating a cute girl  :twisted:) annnnnd I still want to write fics too. I’m not tired of this emoticon --> :twisted: :twisted: :twisted:, actually it’s the contrary. I’m loving it…hahaha Soooo, below is the last chapter, it sucks so don’t kill me. Ja~ XD

@kahem – thanks for following this fic  :), I’m glad you like it. A jealous Tomochin is not a good thing to mess with…wahahha  :twisted:

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Re: ~Yuri-shotS~: Yuri Case No.1-Love Under the Sakura Tree (TomoTomo)-9/30/11
« Reply #46 on: October 14, 2011, 04:36:09 PM »
I know-I know  :nervous I said that this would be up a week later but turn out to be 2 weeks delayed :nervous gomen for that! So, this is the last chapter, it was written in a rush and I soooooooo don't feel like it's a happy ending so I'm asking you people out there for forgiveness!  :bow: But anyway, here's the ending and sorry to disappoint you guys!  :cathappy:

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Yuri Case No 1: Love Under the Sakura Tree Part 6

Itano’s POV

This is it, the very day I’m dreading for. The day where I’ll probably hand Tomomi to the witch without her knowing. I was really hoping she would refuse the mixer’s invitation but she said yes, to which completely and my utter dismay.  And so here we are, in an all girl mixer. Just what the heck is this? And why is it Atsuko and Miichan are here too?

I glared at Oshima Yuko’s direction, which by the way was pretty busy impressing her Nya-Nyan. That perverted squirrel failed to mention to me that two of my bestfriends are attending this mixer as well. Wait, make that three.

Across the table my other bestfriend sat. Beside her was Shinoda Mariko, the school’s fashion queen. But she would deny it bashfully, saying I’m more fashionable than her. What can I say, I may have no money to buy expensive clothes but I certainly know how to dress in style. Well anyway, they were talking animatedly, while Sato Yukari, Mariko’s buddy would playfully feed Takamina with fries. Ignoring the others, meaning us. Including Atsuko who was sitting beside me, which by the way was glowering at the trio’s direction. I’m just glad she wasn’t acting bitchy when she sometimes joined Tomomi and I at the library to study. Though I can still feel Atsuko wasn’t totally okay with me hanging out with her.

And speaking of that girl…

A glare of my own was directed at where Tomomi was sitting. In between Mariko and that witch who arranged this blasted mixer, Ohori Megumi. The well-known predator that went around the campus to satiate her hunger with young university girls.

A growl rumbled my chest as I inconspicuously observed them at the corner of my eyes. The witch was having the time of her life as she chatted with Tomomi. Letting out a laugh now and then, touching her subtlety. And sometimes learning forward to her while playing with her long wavy hair. Now who said mixers are fun? Because I’m definitely not enjoying right now.

I gritted my teeth when I saw the witch touch Tomomi again.

“If mixers are always like this, I totally won’t mind even if no one was paying attention to me.”

I glanced at my other bestfriend, Miichan, who was busy stuffing her mouth with food after food. She’s right. With all these foods the witch ordered, a commoner like me should be feasting with it in delight. Wasn’t it food the reason why I’m here in the first place? Throwing another glance at Tomomi, I decided to make this mixer worthwhile as I joined Miichan with her and my favorite hobby, which is to eat the food within our reach in our hearts content. Might as well enjoy the evening with food than being all 'jealous' to that witch.

Minutes passed and my unannounced food eating match with Miichan ended with a coughing fit, courtesy by yours truly. I was immersed with my thoughts while eating that when it finally sunk in what I was thinking it caught me off guard. I-I was jealous?

“You shouldn’t eat fast, look what happened.” Atsuko said, handing me a glass of water. I smiled apologetically at her.

“You alright, Tomochin?” Tomomi asked. I blinked. It seems she was about to bolt out on her seat.

“I’m fine.” I replied, waving my hand off to show I was fine. I felt so stupid. I looked down at the table to hide my flush face when I remembered what made me choke on my own food. I’m jealous…

“AH! Where did all the food go? And more importantly, what will I feed my Nyan-Nyan now?” Yuko screeched dramatically, throwing an accusing glare at Miichan, who only grin widely at her.

“Yuuchan…” Haruna painfully smiled while grabbing her girlfriend’s sleeve.

“It’s like a whirlwind had pass through here.” Yukarin commented, pointing at the empty plates.

“More like a glutton-Gachapin runs amok and devoured all the food when we’re not looking.” Mariko said in a bored tone after seeping on her drink. Though her eyes said otherwise as it was like a sharp dagger flying straight towards Miichan’s way.

“Ne Tomochin, did you hear something? Because I didn’t hear anything AT ALL.”

Miichan turns to me, a devious smile planted on her face. I smiled back, whilst a hesitant one. When she received no reply from me she picks up a yakitori, and stuffed it inside her mouth without hesitation.  She then turn towards Mariko’s direction while chewing the food loudly, mocking the woman.

“Ugh…disgusting.” The said woman spat, but Miichan only continued to mock her. Grinning triumphantly when Mariko punch the unsuspecting Takamina instead.

“Don’t worry, we can order again. It’s on me so go ahead.” The witch intervened which prompted Miichan to yell a ‘Yosha!’, a happy Yuko who started ordering like a madwoman, a grumbling Takamina while rubbing her arm and-…

“How about you Tomomi-chan? Do you want something? Because if you ask me, I-only -want-chu.” –a blonde me to scoff at the witch who deliberately and shamelessly flirt with Tomomi in front of us, in front of me. It made me wants to gouge her eyes when she winks at her.

Right now, my fidgeting hand wants to reach the cheesecake on the table and hurl it at the witch’s face to wipe the disgusting smile she wears.

“Atleast someone’s enjoying this mixer.” Atsuko who was silent the entire time said in a whisper, stopping me from reaching the cheesecake.

“Tell me about it.” I replied, rolling my eyes. As I did my eyes slowly drifted towards Tomomi’s face.

I noticed she didn’t bring her camera today. Because this isn’t fun? Then she shouldn’t have come at all…well, I did invite her. But looking at her right now, her face flushed and grinning while talking to the witch, Tomo looks like a different person somehow. Was she like this before she met me? A party goer who wasn’t complaining when obviously the witch was taking advantage of her- 

I stop mid-rant when realization hit me hard like a bullet train that can’t be stop. Flush? I looked closely at her face, and it’s definitely flush. But I heard her clearly when she said she’ll only drink her favorite vegetable juice when the witch offered her a beverage.

“Wh-what do you think you’re doing?” Takamina exclaimed eyes wide as she pointed at me. I ignored her.

I crawled on top of the table as I reached my right hand towards Tomo’s forehead. Everyone was startled of course, who wouldn’t? But I didn’t pay attention to their gawking faces or gasps as my mind has only one goal. And that’s to know if my guess was correct with Tomo’s flushed face as an indication.

“Tomo…chin..?”

Tomomi looked at me confusingly as I continue to feel her forehead using the back of my hand. Ignoring the odd look the witch was giving me, I pulled Tomo towards me, connecting our foreheads. Her eyes widened in surprised, and her already flushed face brightened even more from what I did. As I’ve correctly guess, this idiot girl has fever.

I heard Miichan snickered at the background, and I mentally note to myself to avoid her as much as possible, starting now.

When I pulled back, our eyes met. Tomomi no longer held the surprised look she had before; instead she was now smiling softly at me. I smiled back whilst an apologetic one as my right hand now unconsciously caresses her left cheek.

“Tomochin…” she whispered, her warm breathe brought soft tingles on my face.

“Let’s go home, Tomo.”

“Un.” She nodded, still smiling at me.

With her affirmation I climbed down the table and stand firmly on my feet. My hand held towards her. From the corner of my eyes, I can see Yuko gaping while Haruna had this small smile on her lips as she looked at me.  When Tomomi finished collecting her things, she did the customary bow to everyone and finally reached for my offered hand. With our hands intertwined, we walk towards the door but not without throwing a smirk towards the fuming witch.

“Minami, let’s go home as well.” was the last thing I heard before closing the door behind us.
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“WHAT THE HELL??!”

It was a tell-tale of a shout that Tomomi and I heard as we reach the exit of the famous establishment. It was probably the witch, letting out her frustrations that she didn’t get what she wants tonight. Stealing her prey right under her nose was probably a direct hit to her ego. Like I care, I laughed inwardly.

“Can you walk?”

“…Yeah.”

“…Tomochin, are you mad?” Her voice quiver as she asked.

“Yes, I am.” I replied honestly, squeezing her hand I was holding. Yes, I am mad that she still went to that stupid mixer when she has a fever to begin with.

And after that she didn’t say anything, and silence ensued between us, save for the stomping of our feet on the ground as we walk. We stay like that until we reached her apartment complex, and even after I tucked her on her bed, the awkward silence continue to devour us.

“…Why…”

I started, breaking the deafening silence as I settled myself on the carpeted floor, looking down at Tomomi’s figure under the protection of her blanket.

“…did you force yourself to come….even though you have a fever?”

“I wish you’d just said no.”  I sighed when I heard no response from her. She continues to hide under her pink blanket and when I was about to pull it over her head, her meek voice stopped me.

“…B-but…” She squeaked.

“You…still would’ve gone without me, right?” Yes, I muttered to myself, but that was beside the point.

“…Y-you’re-a great girl Tomochin. I was scared someone might have stolen you away and I-I didn’t want that to h-happen.”

I contemplated after hearing her answer. But that won’t ever happen. What’s more important was that she risks her health just for that? I frowned.

“I’m sorry, Tomochin.” A light sobbed reached my ears and the frown on my face instantly vanished. This - this isn’t friendship is it…?

“I-I’m sorry I’m such a nuisance to you…”

And then another sobbed. This wasn’t friendship from the beginning. I felt so stupid to realize this just now. I guess I already have my answers…right here, right now.

“What an idiot! It’s not like I’m all that popular…” I said softly, slightly tugging at her blanket which she immediately held into, refusing to let go.

She’s acting like a child, but I find it cute. She’s so cute I find myself asking why me? I’m sure she has much better girls to choose from, so why did she fall for me? Tomomi’s really an idiot, she’s just too stupid, really….it’s not like I have something to offer beside my good looks, and not to mention my pitless appetite.

She already have everything, this grand apartment complex was clearly enough as evidence or the everyday free food she treats me. She came from a wealthy family, compared to me who has nothing. Realizing another fact about this girl made me felt small. This should make me feel discourage, but no. In the contrary it makes me want to do everything for her……everything.

“Tomo, stop hiding already, come on…”

A smile crept on my face as I spotted a rather huge picture framed hung on the wall near her bookshelf. I was too busy taking care of her before to notice it. Now that I have the chance, my eyes lingered at the picture. It was our picture under the Sakura tree. The very day that marked our friendship…..or so I thought. Below the picture, ‘TomoTomo’ was neatly carved on the frame. It’s beautiful.

“Really, I’m not angry anymore…” Slowly, she moved the blanket down, revealing her tear streak face. She’s still cute though.

She peered up at me.

“Ne Tomo, is there anything you want me to do? If there’s anything you want just tell me.” Looking at her eyes seriously, I managed to say the words I want to say without stuttering like an idiot or worse a complete idiot. Is there a difference? Right now, I really don’t care. What’s important if she understand the true meaning of my words?

“Well then…” She paused, completely revealing herself to me as she moves to a sitting position, kicking her blanket off of her.

“…You, Tomochin.”

My eyes widened at her blunt reply. Seeing my reaction she quickly averted her eyes away from me.

“J-Just kidding! I just wanted to try saying it. Maybe my head’s all messed up cause of the fever.” She laughed loudly, but I can tell she was forcing herself to do so. She was struggling, struggling not to break down in front of me. This has to stop; it’s painful to see her like this. No more denying my feelings for her, it’s time to give what she wants, it’s now my turn to make her happy.

“Okay…” Even I said it in a low voice she heard it clearly, clear enough to make her stop from laughing.

“Eh?!”

“You can h-have me, Tomo. That is, if that’s really what you want.” I looked away when I said that, it was way too embarrassing especially when she was staring at you like a goldfish out of the sea, her mouth slightly hung open.

I peered at her from my periphery, and it seems she was momentarily petrified. She was not moving at all, just staring at me. Gathering all the courage I could muster, I turn towards her. Slowly leaning forward I captured her lower lip with my own. Tasting her lips that kept tempting me ever since we met, her lips that kept hunting me and giving me sleepless nights since the day I got a taste of it. Now that I’m kissing those lips again, the world outside didn’t matter to me anymore. Consequences be damn.

I smiled when I felt Tomomi finally snapped out of her petrified state as she kissed me back with much fervor, encircling her arms around my neck as she pulled me closer to her. I complied and I ended up sitting on her lap, my hands automatically find its own way. One was cupping her cheek while my thumb caresses the side of her lip and the other one was on her hips. I was kissing her and she was returning the kiss tenfold, sending warm sensation on my chest. My heart was beating so fast, beating so rapidly because of her. Can she feel it? With our bodies pressed up together, I bet she does.

“You’ll get….my cold…” Tomomi murmured between kisses, refusing to let go. I can’t help but let out a light chuckle at that. Her action says the opposite thing as she continues to kiss me.

“You’re saying…that…but you’re still….kissing me…” I managed to say even my mouth was occupied in kissing hers; matching the intensity of the kiss she was giving me. But suddenly she pulled away; too sudden to my liking that a frown automatically appeared on my face.

“You’re right…I don’t want my Tomochin getting sick because of me.” She pouted cutely and I felt my cheeks getting warm upon hearing what she said. Normally, I found it repulsive when someone was being possessive, but not with Tomomi not at all. It’d only quicken the pace of my already eratic-heart.

“I-It’s fine….as long as y-you’ll be there to nurse me back.” I shyly smiled at her, and she was back to her petrified state again.

“O-oi, Tomo.”I poked her cheek lightly.  She wasn’t responding, but before I could react she squealed loudly and envelope me in a hug.

“W-wha – let go, I – I can’t breathe.”

“My Tomochin is sooo cutee~” She squealed again, ignoring my struggles as she continued to envelope me in a bone crashing hug.

‘Pfwakk’

“Ittaii~…”

She finally let go and I gladly welcome the air to my lungs. She was pouting at me again, her hands rubbing the top of her head. She can be an idiot at times, but that’s make her unique compared to other girls. She can be idiot but still stay cute at the same time, and with that thought in mind I laughed.

“Mou…Tomochin, you’re so mean.” I only grin at her.

“Ne Tomo, want to take a picture? To commemorate when we found out the feeling was mutual?”

At that, both of us burst out laughing, but as our laughters died Tomo pinned me a look that triggers my alarm system. She smiled mischievously while playfully tracing my arms down with her index finger. She smirked upon seeing the little panic attack on my eyes, its either fight or flight. I never got the chance to choose with those options though as she pounced on me. Making us stumbled down the carpeted floor, pinning me down. With her straddling me, escape level is zero to nothing.

“Now where was I before you rudely interrupted me?” She tilted her head cutely, arms crossed over her chest as she looked up at her intricate white ceiling. Finding no answers, which was an obvious fact she turn her gaze down to me. I gulp.

“AH! Of course, what was I thinking…” She giggled cutely, and then her eyes turn into a predatory one.

“Tomochin! I-ta-da-ki-ma-su…!”

I think I just dig a hole for myself here.
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If anything changed since that night (which was only two days ago)…and I’m pretty sure it would forever engrave in my memory, which made me blush every time I think about it, that is…

“Tomochin…..chiyuu!”

 I spun around and wasn’t surprised when what greeted me was a pair of lips connecting to my own. I frowned when she immediately pulled back. Without thinking I captured my bottom lip between my teeth as I run my tongue along with it. It’s just a peck but I can taste Tomomi on my lips. So, it’s Strawberry today, eh?

“Don’t do that.” She lightly slapped my arm, scolding me like a child. What did I do?

“What?”

“Biting your lips. You’ve been doing that a lot lately, mou…”

“Why not?” I asked, frowning again.

“Because…” She suddenly kissed me on the lips, erasing the frown on my face. But before I could kiss her back she pulled away, the frown returning to my face.

“…those lips belong to me and I don’t want you to damage it.” She winked playfully, tapping my cheek. And of course I blushed. Really, this girl is so weird.

“So, the mighty Itano finally has an owner eh? I want a master too.”

Do I really have to guess who said that? I groaned. There’s only one person I know who excels in getting under a person’s skin for too much teasing. And I was hoping to avoid her in all cost. Guess it wasn’t my lucky day.

“Well, hello there chicas!” A smiling Minegishi Minami while wriggling her eyebrows greeted us in a…inhuman way? She was like bursting with energy despite the heavy books on her arms. And she was smiling too much, too much to my liking. Something’s telling me she’s up to no good.

“Let’s go, Tomo.”

“I’ll walk you home.”

“Okay.”

I glared at Miichan when she was about to open her mouth, and she instinctively step back. Racing the books she was holding to shield herself of any bodily pains. I hide a smirked, and she smiled awkwardly, waving her hand to shoo us away from her. I’ve heard from Atsuko that Miichan took a beating from Mariko when she decided to puke her guts out inside Mariko’s car. I guess that made the great Minegishi to lay off with her teasings for awhile.


“Well, see you tomorrow TomoTomo combo. Bleh!” I rolled my eyes while Tomomi giggled. Miichan could be so immature sometimes. But I guess that’s what I like in her.

So, has anything changed at all? I glanced down and the answer came to me in a split second.

“Want to hold hands?”

“Sure.” Tomomi quickly replied, coupled with a cute smile that I can’t help but swooned inwardly.

“But don’t you think people will think we’re weird?” She tried wriggling out her hand from me but I held it firmly.

“…the witch is weirder compared to us, besides you kissed me the day we met. And you’re asking this now?” I mumbled to myself, but I think she heard it.

“W-wha – huh?!”

“Nothing….I was just thinking about how cute you are…..even though you’re an idiot at times.” Tomomi instantly blushed upon hearing the compliment. Now I know why that perverted squirrel loves to tease poor Haruna.

“YOU!!!”

A figure suddenly blocked our way, startling both Tomo and I. Her icy glares solely directed to me. I felt Tomomi tightly clings to my arm, frightened at the ominous presence before us.

“YOU, IT’S BECAUSE OF YOU – Auurkk!”

“Gomen ne, we’ll be on our way now. See you around, TomoTomo.” Kojiharu waved goodbye, smiling while dragging Yuko in a choke hold.

“Nyan-Nyan…l-let go. Tomochin s-should-…”

“No. When I said no, it’s a no, Yuuchan.”

“H-hai, Nyan-Nyan…”

“Now let’s go home.”

“As long as you’ll let me touch them.”

“Kyaa!!!”

‘Pfwakk’

“Ittaiee~…”

“Yuuchan, baka!”

“NOoo, Nyan-Nyan! Don’t leave me behind.”

As the couple left the vicinity the girl beside me laughed. “You sure do have omoshiroi friends, ne Tomochin?”

“Yes, never have a dull moment with them.” I laughed along with her. As for the perverted squirrel suddenly going on a psycho mode on me…well, I also heard from Atsuko that the witch made Yuko pay half of the bill after Tomo and I left. It’s not like it was my fault, I wasn’t the one who ordered the foods in the first place. She should’ve blamed herself, and now she’s broke.

“Tomochin, let’s take a picture.” Tomo suggested.

“What? Here?” I looked around and there’s nothing here, except…wait there a second. Is that Takamina and Atsuko sneaking towards the school garden?

“Tomochin…?”

Glancing one last time at the direction where I last saw my two bestfriends, I mentally note to myself to interrogate them later. “Okay, let’s take a picture.”

“Yay! But let’s take the picture over there.”

When I looked at the direction Tomomi was pointing at, a smile readily appeared on my face. It was after all, under the Sakura tree we’re we first met.

END.


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I suck at writing ending parts/chapter, neeeee? :nervous So, YURI CASE ICHIBAN CLOSED! XD XD XD
I'll be hiding for now, thinking of what to write next  :yep:
See you around fellas! :)
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It's so romantic... and it is good. Very Good  :wub: (and title is perfect)

I'm never reading TomoTomo's, but I love this fic.  :)

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So sweet!

Kinda short but sweet. Meetan sure is evil and LOL at Yuko, Acchan finally have Takamina. A perfect happy ending, you did a really good job after 2 weeks of delaying  :heart:

Hope you write again soon.

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Tomotomo!!!!!! So sweet!!!!!
I'm still wonder why Acchan doesn't like Chiyuu

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Awwww TomoTomo couple is soooo sweet! I'm inlove again  :heart:

You made my day!  :)  :heart:

Update soon  :thumbsup

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Re: ~Yuri-shotS~: Yuri Case No.1-Love Under the Sakura Tree (TomoTomo)-10/14/11
« Reply #51 on: November 11, 2011, 09:36:27 AM »
I'm glad that I finished a short story  :) and to those who bothered to read my TomoTomo cased, a million thanks to you guys.
Your comments were like spare batteries to keep me going, to keep writing AKB fics XD...lol that was so lame :rofl:

Kire-el - I'm glad you find the title perfect, though i thought it wasn't. :nervous And I'm happy to know that your reading TomoTomo fic now, especially the one that i poorly wrote :lol:

Alex.S1 - - It is short  and yes, i tried it making sweet as possibly as i can XD I'm a fluff person, no angst, i can't take that. :nervous I know your a Takamina fan, so my next update might want u to kill me....but i assure you, maybe you'll like it...eventually! :twisted:

Kahem - Hmm...Acchan doesn't hate Chiyuu particularly :yep:. She's just feeling apprehended since Tomomi has a bad record of being a flirt and stealing someone's boyfriend...but its a happy ending, so lets not dwell on that, shall we?  :lol:

haru16 - I'm happy this update made your day :), well it also made my day with you leaving a comment here XD and im very grateful of that  XD


(Kiri-el, Tejinashi, blughise, Alex.S1, kahem, seigus, RenaChii, A1, kaizoku_gal, crazywota, oist) <----- people, thanks! I hope you'll still support me with my upcoming Yuri Case No.2 XD




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Re: ~Yuri-shotS~: Yuri Case No.1-Love Under the Sakura Tree (TomoTomo)-10/14/11
« Reply #52 on: November 11, 2011, 10:38:43 AM »
After a long absence I'm back with another case XD At first I'm still not sure how to approach the pairings, but after convincing myself that it's okay to experiment once in awhile i made up my mind.... :twisted: so here's go nothing! Don't kill me, ya?  :nervous
Disclaimer: This story was base on the manga 2on2 by Hitomi Akihito :)


Yuri Case No.2: 18 x 21 Shoujo-Ai Tachi Yo Part 1
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Maeda’s POV

I can’t believe that six months from now I’ll be leaving my High-school life behind. The turning point of my life where I can truly call myself an adult, facing the real world. A scary thought. Yes, it scared me but it also gives an unexplained excitement at the same time. I know you feel the same way, everyone does. That’s somewhat expected, but with her by my side the uneasy feelings inside me evaporates in thin air like a bubble, like it wasn’t there to begin with. With her encouraging words and comforting smile, facing the real world full of challenges seems not so bad after all. And I think I can make it out alive and successful, as long as she’s with me along the way holding my hand as we walk side by side.
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“Ngn…ngn..” Rolling on my back, a soft moan escapes from my mouth as I rubbed my eyes.

I never felt so relax before; having a good sleep for once without anyone interrupting me was such a pure bliss.

“Hmm…?” –But I felt I’m forgetting something very important that I should do today. Like this very moment.

Looking up at my dormitory’s ceiling I begun to ponder. My eyes squinting at the light sipping through my pink curtains as my thoughts kept running back at the past events that happened last week. I can’t help but smile when her face automatically pops up on my mind. But the bright light of the sun coming in from my window interrupted my thoughts. Oh God! My eyes practically widened as saucers as realization dawned upon me, especially when I saw the time from the digital clock at the table beside my bed.

“Kyaa!!! It’s already this late?” –Leaping from my bed, which surprisingly I didn’t stumble with my sheets, I run towards my closet and grab the first thing my eyes landed on.
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“Sorry Yuuchan, I overslept.” I smiled apologetically at my girlfriend where I was, which slumping on the carpeted floor, panting.

“You don’t have to run all the way here, y’know. Although, I don’t mind seeing you sweaty and all. It’s hot.”  I instantly blushed as Yuuchan said those, especially when it was accompanied by a wink.

Oshima Yuko, 21 years old, a University College student majoring in Business. Top student of their class and is a very talented one. To add more, she’s currently the Vice-president of their Company, The Oshima Enterprise, juggling both of her time taking care of their Company while maintaining as the top student. She’s an amazing person, isn’t she? But more importantly, she’s my girlfriend.

“Here you go. I figured out you’ll be needing this once you arrive. One Mocha-choco for my cute girlfriend, Atsuko.” Yuuchan handed me my favorite drink. She was smiling widely at me her cute dimples that captured my heart were showing. It was crazily infectious that I immediately return her smile with one of my own. And my smile widened when she meet me half-way when I leaned in to kiss her.

“Thank you, Yuuchan. You’re the best.” Albeit shyly, I met her eyes as she smiled at me again, playfully ruffling my hair which made my heart melts at the gesture. I’m so blessed and fortunate to have Yuko as my girlfriend. She’s so affectionate and sweet I couldn’t remember a time where my heart pace at a normal rate. It’s always pounding whenever she’s near me, like right now.

As I emptied the glass of Mocha-choco Yuuchan made especially for me I finally settled comfortably on the couch, snuggling closely against her. Were both silent, but this silence wasn’t uncomfortable one.

“What’s wrong? You’re awfully quiet today. You’re usually bursting out of energy talking about your mischievous pranks at school together with Miichan.” Yuuchan playfully pinched my cheek as she said that, earning a cute pout from me.

“Nothing’s wrong. It’s just that I can’t believed that obnoxious Mina-midget.” I scowled remembering what happened earlier this morning at my dormitory room.

“Mina-midget? Your roommate?”  Yuuchan chuckled lightly, pinching my cheek again while scolding me not to call people names such as what I did because it’s not nice. But I can detect amusement in her voice so I kissed her cheek as an apology.

Flashback

“Urrggh! I slept too late.” I yelled at the top of my lungs as I struggled to change my clothes as fast as I can. Trying not to fall on my butt as I accidentally step on my clothes I messily discarded on the floor.

“Well, good morning to you too, Atsuko. You seem full of energy despite you just woken up. Miracles do happen I guess, considering you’re not a morning person and all.”

I glared at my roommate, Takahashi Minami. I don’t know what her problem is but she’s always annoying the heck of me whenever she got the chance. Uhm, well I do the same to her. We’re like cats and dogs, always on the opposite side, always arguing. And right now, the annoying midget was standing in her glory. A cup of coffee on her hand while smirking at me. Despite how much I want to wipe the smirk on her face right now, I don’t want Yuuchan to wait for me any longer.

“You’re awful, Minami. I told you to wake me up at nine!!!” –Still glaring at her, I fumbled on my clothes to arrange it properly.

“You never said that. And if you ever did, I’m not your damn alarm clock or your personal maid. You aren’t a little kid anymore so atleast figure out how to wake up yourself.” As much as I hate this, the little girl was right, but I’ll die first before I admitted it to her.

“I.totally.did.” I replied through gritted teeth. “And you’re really awful, you midget.” Picking up my discarded shirt on the floor, I threw it on her face but she skillfully avoided it. But a smirked dance at the corner of my mouth when I saw her winced. Ha! She must’ve forgotten she’s holding a cup of coffee…which is still hot.

“Damn it, Atsuko. Now look what you did, you evil witch. And it’s a brand new shirt. Augghh!!!” I looked at her with my poker face, and I saw her left eye twitch out of annoyance. There goes the round one of our battle, and I win. I suppressed a laughed. She cursed one more time before turning her back to me, placing her coffee on her desk and finally stomping her cute little feet towards her closet, grabbing a new shirt and throwing the stained one on my bed.

“Hey! That’s my bed.” She snorted in reply, peering back through her shoulders when her action earned a reaction from me. Well, actually also to cover my surprised when she faced me shamelessly wearing only her cute pink lacy bra.

“I know, that’s why I throw it there in the first place.” To make things worse, after she put on her free stained shirt she grabbed her coffee again and pour it on my bed staining my whitish-pink bed sheet. My eyes widened and mouth agape at the obnoxious midget who by now smirking evilly at me.

“There, I’m done. I have to go meet a friend, so see you later, Acchan.” A wave accompanied by a wink and she’s gone, leaving me with all these mess. I swear, one day that midget’s gonna experienced a painful death courtesy by me. And there goes our round 2…and nope, I’m not gonna say it out loud.

End of flashback

“Hahaha…that Minami-chan, I’m so jealous of her.” Yuuchan purred while hugging me affectionately from behind.

As I was telling her of the events this morning, she shifted behind me giving me soft flitting kisses on my neck. She must’ve noticed the anger boiling inside me, and the only thing that could calm me down was a slice of cake or a thousand kisses. I’d prefer the latter.

“Hmm….why?” I managed to ask despite her nipping at my neck softly.

“Because, she gets to share a room with you in a beautiful dorm…” – a kissed behind my ear and I failed to stifle the moan that escapes from my throat. Yuuchan giggled and kissed the same spot making me moaned in pleasure again.

“…Yuuchan…didn’t you say…were going to see…a fashion show…sponsored by your…family?” I congratulate myself for finishing a complete sentence despite what my girlfriend was doing to me. Which was attacking my neck with soft kisses followed by nipping at my skin while her left hand drawing circles on my stomach…

“Yes…don’t worry about it. We’re just going to be fashionably late.” –a light laugh emanates from me as I freed myself from my girlfriend to face her. So typically Yuuchan to do that.

“Sorry, I forgot that you’re just only the Vice-president of the company and that they needed you there on time to check things before the show starts.” Yuuchan raised a brow at my obvious sarcastic but playful comment. I mimicked her action which prompted her to grin widely, surprising me when she suddenly captured my lips for a long heated kiss.

“Alright, you win.” With our foreheads still connected, I gave Yuuchan a chaste kiss on her glistening lips before smiling at her, and she gladly returns the smile.

So that’s me, Maeda Atsuko, 18 years old and a senior student whose secretly dating a prominent and well-known figure named Oshima Yuko, who mean the world to me.



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Sooooo yeah, the intro...the next chapter probably a continuation of the intro :nervous
Sorry, I'm a lazy writer so bare with me  :lol:
As for the pairings, well...let's just see about that as the story progress  :P
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Re: ~Yuri-shotS~: Yuri Case No.2: 18x21 Shoujo-Ai Tachi Yo Update -11/11/11
« Reply #53 on: November 11, 2011, 03:16:09 PM »
I'll kill you if you don't quickly update
Thanks for nice fic :mon innocent:
I like AtsuYuu but I still like AtsuMina more :mon evillaff:
Good luck! :mon determined: hope you update soon :mon star:

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Re: ~Yuri-shotS~: Yuri Case No.2: 18x21 Shoujo-Ai Tachi Yo Update -11/11/11
« Reply #54 on: November 11, 2011, 03:39:19 PM »
woah AtsuYuu?!?!  I LIKE IT!!! <33 so cute!

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Re: ~Yuri-shotS~: Yuri Case No.2: 18x21 Shoujo-Ai Tachi Yo Update -11/11/11
« Reply #55 on: November 11, 2011, 04:08:07 PM »
Well well well, it's interesting all of this ^^
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Re: ~Yuri-shotS~: Yuri Case No.2: 18x21 Shoujo-Ai Tachi Yo Update -11/11/11
« Reply #56 on: November 11, 2011, 04:28:25 PM »
AtsuYuu,well you don't see many of their fanfics around but i like it
this is really cute, hmmm.. can we hope for some atsumina in the future :yep:
i love your story :heart: please update soon!

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Re: ~Yuri-shotS~: Yuri Case No.2: 18x21 Shoujo-Ai Tachi Yo Update -11/11/11
« Reply #57 on: November 11, 2011, 09:39:18 PM »
atsuyuu wow great
please continue this ^^ arigatou  :cow:
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Re: ~Yuri-shotS~: Yuri Case No.2: 18x21 Shoujo-Ai Tachi Yo Update -11/11/11
« Reply #58 on: November 12, 2011, 07:31:40 AM »
T_T just one question its gonna be atsuyuu¿?

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Re: ~Yuri-shotS~: Yuri Case No.2: 18x21 Shoujo-Ai Tachi Yo Update -11/11/11
« Reply #59 on: January 12, 2012, 03:12:30 PM »
Hey Guys! :) I know was gone like forever and worse i have to put my Yuri Case 2 on hold cos I somehow lost my draft to that story :nervous Anyways, when I was sitting on my bed doing nothing an epiphany suddenly hit me :lol: and here I am, posting probably the shortest Fic ever in Jphip :rofl: It's an OS and very random and the pairings? :roll: Well, its not what you think...trust me! :yep:
Again, sorry for those who read and left a comment for my Yuri Case 2, I'll try to re-write it :nervous


THE FAVORS
-A Maeda Atsuko Favor-

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Itano Tomomi aka Tomochin groaned for the nth time, grumbling incoherent words as her bestfriend Maeda Atsuko tugged at her blanket. She loves Atsuko, but waking her up at 7:03 in the morning, tis it was also the start of their summer break made her forget of the said love. Thus the result of a howl coming from her floor where the said bestfriend was now soothing the stinging pain on her arm. Courtesy by no other than our not so morning resident Fashion Queen Tomochin.

“Tomo, that was so mean. I thought you love me.” The voice of one Maeda Atsuko was bordering between hurt and being annoyed. Annoyed for she was slapped on the arm unceremoniously and without restraint by her beloved bestfriend. And hurt because..okay, did you really have to ask?

“And I thought you love me too…” Was the sleepy response of the blond. Not even bothering to throw a glance towards her down bestfriend on the floor.

“Yes, I do love you and I thought you do too. That’s why I came here to ask you a favor.” Atsuko pouted even though she knows Tomochin can’t see her adorable pouting face, one of her weapon against the stubborn blond.

Sensing her bestfriend won’t budge anytime soon she decided to climbed up the bed, spooning the much smaller girl. Reaching over to rest her hand on the blonde’s toned stomach as she rests her head on her back. A content sigh escaped from her mouth as the familiar scent of her bestfriend attack her ever sensitive nose. The thought of staying in for minutes to cuddle with Tomochin settled comfortably in the recess of her mind, temporarily forgetting about the favor. And a small smile finally crept on her face as she held the other girl closely to her.

“I’m sorry. Does it still hurt?”  The husky voice of Tomochin cracked the silence in the room. Her hand unconsciously drawing circles to the arm draped around her.

“Hmm…you smell so good even in the mornings.” The blond girl chuckled lightly at the random response of Atsuko. But the compliment was much appreciated as she gently squeezed the hand resting on her stomach.

“And you have a dragon breathe I can’t stand.” Tomochin playfully replied, earning a pinch to her stomach which made her yelped and struggle from her bestfriend’s embraced.

“I so don’t have a dragon breath, you lie Itano.”

“Whatever you say, Maeda.”

And both giggled at their silly antics.

“Ne Tomochin…”

“Hmm…?”

“So, about my favor?” And the blond girl found herself groaning again.

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Oh LOL! :rofl: I told ya, its very short...so yeah, Happy New Year everyone :) (better late than never :roll:)




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