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OMG!!! Yuki!!!! :cry:
Those fallen playing dirty.. using Mayu... :angry:
They both jumped down into the water!!! :shocked
I wonder what will happen next :banghead:

I'm curious about Acchan's past XD
I wonder what happened?? :?

Thanks for the update :)
Please update soon :thumbsup

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Noooooo!!!! Yuki!!!

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Yuki and Mayu jumped into water... i want to know what happened next... of course, not to miss the Atsumina moment.. please update soon... thanks

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NOOOO~   :mon runcry::mon waterworks: What happened to Yuki and Mayu?  :mon ghost:
Thank you for the update. Please update as soon as you can.  :mon cute:

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                                THE EXCHANGE!!! 
                       11.Proof of Love (B side U) 

I decided to make it side B..WMatsui and Acchan past be in Chapter 12! xD

"Mayu!" Everyone shouts 
what a stupid human! Hideki says laughing 
"Mayu!" Takamina murmures 
"We have to do something! Nyan Nyan says 
(Takamina and Nyan Nyan fell Mayu's action that she will do anything for Yuki..even die) 
we're stupid humans and so what? Takamina shouts while runs to Mariko sama 
Takamina! Acchan shouts 
Nyan Nyan runs after Takamina 
what hell is she doing? Yuko asks 
who you think you are to say which are our destinies? you don't know anything! Takamina shouted while uses her sword on Mariko sama non-stoping 
(yes,Takamina brought her sword!) 
wow she has so much energy! Eiji said 
we're not going to get anything if we're here hiding..Let's go fight for what we believe! Chiyuu says and runs to Hideki 
Yuko!" Nyan Nyan shouted and erased the circle that was around them so they got free 
Thanks Nyan Nyan! Yuko says and runs to get Alexander 
be careful! Nyan Nyan said 
Acchan run to Mariko sama but not before smirk to her boyish girlfriend "Thank you Takamina!" then punched Mariko sama on her face and sent her many steps away 
two fallen angels went to fight Acchan to distract her 
damn midget! Mariko said on the floor
Chiyuu was throwing punches to Hideki but he was dodging them he was playing with Chiyuu fooling her 
"you're so weak,i can't believe my lord wanted you!" 
shut up jerk! Chiyuu says 
Hideki didn't notice but someone was behind him and grabbed him 
what the hell? Hideki said and turned his head 
sorry..i don't know why i'm doing this maybe i'm believing in humans! the girl said still holding them
Akicha stop! Hideki said 
Akicha didn't listen in her head is still the memories when she fought to Yuki and Mayu got in the way and when she kidnapped Takamina and Takamina refused to say where Acchan was despite all the things she was doing to her
Chiyuu took advantage of it and gave him a combo of punches on his stomach 
Meanwhile 
so you're the newborn! Alexander says smiling 
that's not of yor business! Yuko shouts and straight to him with her fist armed
they start fighting they move fast Eiiji was impress that Yuko can have a decent fight with Alexander 
you're still too young! Alexander said with a smile
shut up! Yuko says and attemp to kick him but she uses her fist Alexander dodges it..
nice try kid! Alexander says smiling
i'm not done yet! Yuko says and kicks him (Alexander thought that Yuko would use the same trick but she didn't that's why she could hit him) 
~Mayuki~
Mayu was able to find Yuki under the water and put her on the border they were laying on the ground 
they can see everyone fighting in the bridge but Mayu didn't care she catched her breath and got up to see Yuki...
Yuki! Yuki! wake up! Mayu says while moves her softly 
Mayu could not move her body because she seems like a rock her skin was very blue as she has hypothermia.
Mayu leaned to hear Yuki's heartbeat but she couldn't hear a thing 
no way! no way! this is not true! Mayu said desperately while tries to give her cpr 
her hands were pressing Yuki's chest many times waiting for an answer but she didn't recieved any..
Yuki! Mayu screamed crying and holding Yuki's body tight against her 
(everyone heard)
Alexander stopped playing with Yuko and looked at the scene 
*sighs* well it seems like she wasn't strong enough to be powerful! Alexander says laughing 
Yuki!" Acchan murmured
no way! Chiyuu said and stopped hitting Hideki
Takamina looked to Kojiharu, both looked down 
she scaped from my punishment so easy! Alexander said looking at Mayu crying and hugging Yuki 
Yuko also looked the scene she was in shock..
(Flashback)
Promise me if something happens you will take care of Mayu! Yuki says serious 
we all have to come back because if you don't i'm going to see under Mayu's and Tomochin' skirt not Takamina because she's a dude! Yukp says smiling
hey Takamina is not a dude and i'm 100 % sure about that! Acchan says smiling 
Pop* "You can't see under my Tomochin's skirt,You pervert squirrel! Chiyuu says 
ouch! Yuko says 
stay away from Mayu unless you have to protect her promise me! Yuki says pinching Yuko's cheek 
okay..okay I promise! Yuko says 
(everyone laugh)
(End of the flashback) 
why i have to see this..Her crying it's so annoying finish her please Alexander says while points to Mayu
The rest of fallen angels went to Mayu..
hey comeback fight me! Acchan said but somehow and hand grabbed her "we haven't done yet!" 
Mariko! Acchan said  
Yuko tried to get in the way but they push her and they jumped to Mayu 
Chiyuu and Eiji were trying to comfront them but they pushed them aside 
(a leader gave them an order and they have to make it that how it works with the fallen angels)
Hideki also got up and jumped 
Mayu run! Yuko shouted and then jumped to her rescue but unfortunately there were many fallen angels ahead 
Akicha,Eiji and Chiyuu also Jumped to help Mayu.
Ohh my god..they are coming for me..i'm not going to move i'm not going to leave Yuki! Mayu said crying 
they were close..they were already a few steps from Mayu and Yuki's body 
poor girl..she wants to die! A fallen angel says and grabs her by her arm 
don't worry we'll make it really painfun..that bitch killed my brothers and sisters! Another fallen angel says while points at Yuki 
hey not so fast i want to join too! another fallen angel says while takes Mayu's other arm
one of the fallen angels beat Mayu on her stomach while other grabs her by her hair to pull her up
hey the party isn't over yet! The one who's holding her hair said 
all the sudden something happened..Yuki's fingers are moving..
take this whore! An angel shouts and beats Mayu on her stomach again 
Yuki got up slowly..
Yuki!" Mayu murmured while tries to keep her eyes open 
the guy that was hitting Mayu turned around and looked at Yuki.."so you're alive!" 
Yuki smirked and then she used her hand as a knife and pull out his an organ "nice liver i think!" she says while shows it to him
(everyone was terrified but still they went for her and just like the first they ended up!) 
after finishing with everyone in a blink of an eye before Yuko and the other get there 
she stare at Mayu who was the only one standing 
getting closer and closer with every step..
Yuki!" Mayu says sobbing 
Yuki? she's not home right now..you can leave a message if you want! My name is Black..
Black? Mayu knelt and more tears came out 
Black was in front of her "Time to say goodbye was good  knowing you!" then putted her hand on Mayu's neck and squeezed it 
Yuki chan! Mayu whispered and closed her eyes waiting for what's next
Yuki stop! Yuko shouts and punches her on her face
which left her a many steps away 
Acchan stoped fighting with Mariko and jumped too
Black got up and smirked "so weak!" and run to Yuko  
Black beated Yuko on her face so much like if it was her favorite sport 
Mayu was in shock "why Yuki is behaving this way? she's not like this!" 
Akicha,Eijii and Chiyuu arrived separated Yuki from Yuko 
this is going to be fun! Black says 
Chiyuu,Eiji and Akichan run to Yuki.. they tried to stop her but she didn't wanted to..
she beated Chiyuu first then Eiji and then Akicha she knocked them up 
i'm amazing! Yuki murmured and looked to her body
you're just and ego bitch! Yuko said while gets up ready to fight her again 
This is beter than tv! Alexander said smiling 
(if you wondering where is Hideki he's hiding in the water) 
what did you say? Black asked mad and run to Yuko and beat the hell out of her again
stop! Acchan shouts and also beats Yuki 
are you okay? Acchan asks and helps her to get up 
yes,i'm fine! Yuko says 
Acchan gets up she didn't notice that Yuki was behind her..Yuki putted her hands on Acchan's ribs and breaks it..
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! Acchan shouts in pain
ACCHAN! Takamina shouts from the bridge and then jumps 
Acchan! Yuko says 
Acchan was on the floor for the pain...
i'm going to finish you! Black says but somone stops her
what the hell? Black says and turns her head 
it's not her time yet..let's go! Alexander says 
Yuki pouted but followed Alexander... 
(Takamina is a fast swimmer..xD) 
Acchan! Takamina says while tries to carry her 
Eiji woke up because of the screaming and shouted to Takamina "Don't touch her it could be worse!" 
Takamina starts crying for her Acchan..
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~At home~~~~~~~~~~~~~
what happened? everyone looks so down! Miichan says while enters to the dept and looks at (Yuko,Chiyyu,Tomochin,Nyan Nyan,Akicha and Mayu)
you look like shit really! Miichan says smiling 
shut up! Yuko shouts and goes away 
what did i say? Miichan asks
everyone just looked down 
excuse me i'm going with Yuko! Nyan Nyan says
AHHHHHH! AHHHHHH! 
what's that? Miichan asks 
Acchan..she had an accident! Chiyuu says sad
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~in the room~~~~~~~
 Acchan hang on a little more! Takamina says crying and holding her hand 
ahhhhhhhhh! Accchan shouts 
Eiji stop you're hurting her! Takamina says 
sorry i have to do it! Eiji says
AHHHHHH!!Acchan shouts louder
everything is going to be okay! Takamina says crying and kisses Acchan's hand 
~~~~~~~~~~Outside Kojiyuu~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Yuuchan! Nyan Nyan called softly..when she saw the squirrel girl sitting with her knees on her chest and crying..
Nyan Nyan! Yuko says sobbing 
Nyan Nyan went to hug the younger girl "it's okay cry my angel!" 
why my chest hurts?Yuko asks sobbing 
it's called pain Yuuchan it hurts more than the physical one! Nyan Nyan answers rubbing Yuko's back softly 
this is all my fault! Yuko says 
no,Yuko this is nof your fault! Nyan Nyan says 
yes,it is "I'm not strong and i can't protect anyone" look what happened to Acchan! Yuko answers 
everything is going to be fine you'll see! Nyan Nyan says while puts her hand on Yuko's cheek "you'll find a way..you'll see!" 
Nyan Nyan kisses Yuko eyes "everything is going to be fine!" 
~~~~~~~~~~~~~back to the living room~~~~~~~
who ever thought Yuki could so evil? Akicha asks 
yes, still my Chiyuu have the marks of her rings on her face! Tomochin says 
Chiyuu gives a glare to Tomochin and Akicha and points to Mayu..
sorry Mayu! Tomochin and Akicha says 
marks? Mayu didn't pay attention to their apology she got up and looked herself in the mirror,she looked her neck and noticed it..
There's no mark on my neck! Mayu says and turns around 
what? Chiyuu,Akicha and Tomochin replied 
she didn't left me a mark..she wasn't planning to kill me...MY YUKIRIN IS STILL THERE! Mayu shouts 
ehhhhhhh?? Yuko and Nyan Nyan who were entering the room wondered
Mayu was smiling 

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Yay! Update.  :onioncheer:
Ohmigod!  :shock: Yuki turned into Black. Now she's a fallen angel, but she's still in there cuz she didn't hurt Mayu. I can't wait for the next chapter. Thank you.

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Suspense. Yuki become evil and Acchan hurt. Omg. What happened next then. I'm stay tuned for your next update. :p

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Black?!!! :w00t:

OMG! Yuki has become evil... :(
Acchan's rib... gulp* Yuki is so scary... :panic:

Thank you for the update :thumbup :thumbup
Please update soon :thumbsup

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Black! Yay I like Black! And the fight too!

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BLACK YUKIRIN!

Why Mayuyu smiling?!

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Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 12.Go Back (AtsuMina) (WMatsui) 25\12
« Reply #50 on: December 25, 2011, 08:14:11 PM »
                                THE EXCHANGE!!! 
                                    12.Go back

After what happen Mayu move in with the girls..
Mayu i know you think we're hard on you but we just don't want you to get hurt Yuki is gone! Chiyuu says while eats her breakfast 
Yuko and Nyan Nyan looked at situation
i know what i'm saying! Mayu says while eats 
stop saying her name..CAN'T YOU SEE? SHE'S NOT HER ANYMORE LOOK WHAT SHE DID TO ACCHAN AND LOOK EVERYONE AROUND YOU! Takamina says shouting mad and pointed to injures girls
Ahhhhhhhh! (Acchan) 
Acchan!" Takamina says while runs to her room 
i have to go! Mayu says while gets up and goes to school..
Mayu!" Yuko says in sad tone 
~~~~~~In the room~~~~~~
here are your pills! Takamina says while gives it to her with a glass of water 
Acchan takes it..
everything is going to be okay! Takamina says while puts her hand on Acchan's cheek 
Acchan smiles "i heard what you said to Mayu!" 
uhh that it's the truth! Takamina says sad looking other way 
i know how its like..and i know she's there..we can't loose hope! Acchan says with a smile 
Acchan!" Takamina says while kisses her on her forhead
i regret so many things Takamina and i know i deserve all this pain! Acchan says smirking 
why? you're not...(shhh Takamina and listen then you can decide if you want me by your side!) Acchan says while puts her thumb on Takamina's lips to shut her..
(Meanwhile somewhere else...)
where am i? Gekikara wondered 
you woke up! Jurina says happy 
Gekikara gets up from bed...
wow you slept a day..that's a record! Jurina says smiling while brings her A glass of water
Gekikara was hypnotized looking at her "she can't be her..
what i got something on my face? Jurina asks blushing 
i have to go! Gekikara says nervous but someone grabber her arm 
please don't go! Jurina says looking at her in the eyes
somthing in her eyes! Gekikara thought 
why you don't teach me how to fight? Jurina says happy while moves Gekikara's arm 
fight? why you want to fight? Gekikara asks 
because i want to be strong! Jurina answers while touches her forhead 
Gekekira removes Jurina's hair from her forhead and sees what she's hidding
a mark? what happened? Gekikara asks
i don't remember..i always thought that i fell but i think it wasn't because of that..let's eat! Jurina says happy..
Gekikara sitted and stared at the younger girl "Atsuko what this mean?" 
~~~~~4 years ago~~~~~~~~
uhhm where am i?why everything is blue?she thought
rise and shine! someone says while removes something that let her see around her 
hi! a girl says 
hi! i say nervous
well this is not a good place to meet..my mortal name is Atsuko! so what's yours? she says smiling  
i don't know what are you talking about? i say while i get up!
pardon me! Atsuko says while kneels down and see my feet 
it says that your name is Rena Matsui! Atsuko says smiling at me
where are we? Rena asks 
in a human morgue! Atsuko says while grabs Rena's hand and pull her out 
where we're going? Rena asks while Atsuko pushes her to hide her 
don't you remember our mission silly? Atsuko asks 
mission? Rena repeats 
yes,we have to look for an angel who came to earth without permision! Atsuko says 
we're in Earth! Rena says surprised 
yes,they send us here! Atsuko says smiling 
i thought they never going to choose me after the among of angels that wanted to do this mission..it's incredible! Rena says smiling 
yes,i was surprised to! Atsuko says smiling 
where should we start? Rena asks 
well first we need to get some clothes don't you think? we can't walk around like this 
but we need..this thing how is it called? that you pay things! Rena says 
money! Atsuko says 
yes,i got that covered! Atsuko says while sees a guy passing by and pushes him to an alley 
hey! The guy says smiling 
Atsuko goes closer like she's going to kiss him but she didn't "Now go away!" she says smiling 
what? the guy says looking at her with a wtf? face
go away before i'll break your bones! Atsuko says smiling 
oh really i want to see that! The guy says and tries to punch Atsuko who seemed to be playing 
she beated the guy,that's for making mad! Atsuko says smiling
you can't do that..that's stealing! Rena says 
Rena this insect tried to beat me. now let's go! Atsuko says while drags Rena with her and leave the guy on the floor 
humans are so weak..it's like i'm a queen here! Atsuko says happy 
i don't think we should so those things! Rena says feeling bad about the guy 
stop..imagine what we could so here! Atsuko says 
we came here for our mission! Rena says 
we're going to accomplish our mission but we can have fun on the way! Atsukk says smiling 
i don't know! Rena says hesitating 
let's go buy clothes! Atsuko says happy and showing the guy's wallet 
~~~~~~~~3 months later~~~~~~~~~
where is Atsuko? Rena thought while she sits on the park grass 
"why she has to be such a rebel and drag me with her? but still she's my friend!" Rena thought while closes her eyes 
Jurina you're such a looser,i don't want you on my team! A kid says 
My mom says that you don't have a dad and i don't want you in my team eather.. go away! Another kid shouts while throws the ball to her hard 
Jurina runs away crying and she didn't notice Rena sleeping on the grass so she fell on her 
Rena opens her eyes for the sudden weight on her..
Jurina moves off her.."i'm sorry!" she says sobbing (still hurt for what the other kids said) 
what's that? Rena asked while puts her finger on Jurina's cheek and tastes the water that came from he eyes 
salty!" Rena said and smiled 
Jurina stopped crying for some sort of thing Rena's smile make her happy and gives her peace 
are you okay? Rena asks 
Jurina pouts and hugs Rena..
Rena blushes "i guess you're not!" she says while rubs the younger girl back 
Jurina blushed,broke the hug and run away
"nice to meet you!" Rena murmured 
~~~~~~~The next day~~~~~~~
Rena was in the same spot sleeping she thought that earth was beatiful,she enjoyed the air and the flowers that's why she sleeps in the park and also to avoid Atsuko's weird friends..
Rena felt that someone was looking at her so she opened her eyes and saw the same young girl looking at her in the eyes so close to her 
they stared eachother for a bit..
hi! Rena says 
hi! the younger girl says 
can i help you? Rena asks 
mmm i just..i don't know..WOULD YOU BE MY SISTER! Jurina shouts the last part blushing 
sister? what's that? Rena asks while sits
you don't know what's that? Jurina asks and also sits in front of Rena 
well you have to take care of me and protect me and tell me that you love me! Jurina says while takes Rena's hand 
we can't be sisters! Rena answers sad 
why not? Jurina asks pouting 
because i'm not from here..i'm sorry! Rena answers while gets up and walks away
leaving a sad Jurina..
The days passed and Rena didn't saw Jurina in the same park..(she was a little bit worried)
so one day walking throught the park she saw the person that she wanted to see playing in the slide she looked so cute but it was so sad that she was playing alone..so Rena felt bad about it and got Closer but then she felt something bad, dark around Jurina the feeling was getting closer everystep till she saw it there was a shodow behind Jurina...
Jurina can see it? Rena thought 
the shodow was about to touch Jurina's shoulder...
Hey move! Rena shouted while run to Jurina and jumped and beated the shadow that took a human form..Jurina was terrified she has never seen something like that before..
Rena chan! Jurina shouted and hid behind her 
"don't worry i'll protect you!" Rena said in position to fight..
it seemed like he smiled and then disappeared 
what was that? Jurina asked hugging Rena 
i don't know! Rena answered surprised too 
i'm scared Rena chan! Jurina said 
wait a minute! how you know my name? Rena asked 
i don't know..it just came to my mind! Jurina answered confused
Rena let that pass and thought that it will be better keep an eye on her "do you want ice cream! but first what's your name?!
I'm Matsui Jurina and yes,i want ice cream! 
Matsui too! Rena thought 
~~~~~~~~~~At home~~~~~~
After leaving Jurina at her house she went home..
i'm home! Rena shouted 
hello Rena! Atsuko says happy 
Rena walked to the living room and found a bunch of new people 
say hi to my friends! Atsuko says 
you must be Rena.. hello i'm Alexander! 
Rena could feel that something was not right and she could feel the same that she felt on the park..
sorry i have to work! :( 
there will be a part B too! 

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Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 12.Go Back (AtsuMina) (WMatsui) 25\12
« Reply #51 on: December 25, 2011, 08:33:22 PM »
Oh the WMatsui and Acchan past. I wanna more

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Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 12.Go Back (AtsuMina) (WMatsui) 25\12
« Reply #52 on: December 26, 2011, 12:57:23 AM »
Could it be that Alexander is the bad guy?!

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Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 12.Go Back (AtsuMina) (WMatsui) 25\12
« Reply #53 on: December 26, 2011, 03:59:18 AM »
I want more of the story. thanks

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Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 12.Go Back (AtsuMina) (WMatsui) 25\12
« Reply #54 on: December 26, 2011, 08:10:27 AM »
0.0 Ren and Jurina XD
I think there's something special about Jurina :grin:
So the past is starting to reveal!!! :D
Alexander??!!! He's the bad guy!!! :angry:
Acchan why did you make friends with him???!!!! No!!! :panic:

Thanks for the Update :thumbup :thumbup
Please Update Soon :mon cute: I'll be waiting for Part B XD

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Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 12.Go Back (AtsuMina) (WMatsui) 25\12
« Reply #55 on: December 26, 2011, 08:32:20 AM »
Omg you have no idea what i have planned..IT's THE BOMB!  :shocked :grin:

but you have to wait till i update!  :twisted:

i'm so thrill about this ideas with this fic..As you know remember is almost over and Akb boarding school i feel unspired!  :nervous

hope this fic fill you till something cool comes to my head! ARE WE GOOD?

and yes Jurina is very important and special...(To be continued)  :twisted:

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Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 12.My Pov (AtsuMina) (WMatsui) 26\12
« Reply #56 on: December 27, 2011, 07:34:27 PM »
Ahh it's the same Alexander!

Acchan was evil poor Rena I wanna know how she turned to Gekikara and how Jurina got the mark on her forehead...


Can't wait for the part B

Thank you for your update!
Arígatou!  :kneelbow:
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Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 12.B (AtsuMina) (WMatsui) 06/01
« Reply #57 on: January 06, 2012, 02:38:02 PM »
                                THE EXCHANGE!!! 
                                    12.Go back (B)

You can't beat me! A fallen angel shouts while punches Rena on her face several times
she can't but i do! Another girl says while punches him and makes him get off Rena
Atsuko! Rena says with a smile and faints 
(Noise of someone preparing tea)
Rena wakes up because of the noise..
so you're up! Atsuko says with a smile 
where's the man? Rena asks and looks side to side 
easy..don't worry,he's not a problem anymore! Atsuko says smiling
what did you do to him? Rena asks 
what? is not like he's going to be miss! Atsuko says pouting 
it's not your job to decide that! Rena says 
why you can't be thankful that i saved you! Atsuko says mad while leaves 
where are you going? Rena asks while gets up from bed 
NOT OF YOUR BUSINESS! Atsuko shouts and slams the door..
"Atsuko" Rena says with a whisper 
(Days later) 
Rena was resting in the same park...
Hello Rena chan! Jurina says happy
Rena opens her eyes "hi" she says while sits 
you don't seem happy Rena chan! Jurina says looking at Rena in the eyes 
Rena rised an eyebrow..
Rena chan you're blushing! Jurina says happy 
no,i'm not! Rena says blushing even more 
Jurina kissed Rena's cheek and run away
come back here you kid! Rena shouted and run after Jurina who was smiling 
Got'cha! Rena shouts,she catched Jurina and both rolled on the grass then Rena putted herself on top and started tickling Jurina 
sorry! sorry! Jurina says laughing 
i'm not going to stop! Rena says smiling 
{More days passed and the more close Rena is with Jurina the most far she's from Atsuko} 
Rena encourage herself to go follow Atsuko...
where the hell she's going? Rena thought 
Atsuko was walking to an old bar then she entered 
Rena got closer and looked through the window she could see how Atsuko goes downstairs..
Rera wanted to know more so she get in without anybody notice
~~~Inside~~~~
Hello Atsuko! Alexander says 
what is it? Atsuko asks 
well i wanted to know if you were okay! Alexander says smiling 
"you promised me.." Atsuko says 
promises huh? how can i do my promise,if you don't do yours? Alexander asks 
what do you mean? Atsuko asks 
you brought company! Alexander says and points to Rena who was hiding 
huh? Atsuko turned around 
two fallen angels grabbed Rena by her arms and dragged her to Alexander 
Rena what are you doing here? Atsuko asks 
what are you doing here? Rena asks mad 
well it seems like she wants to be our witness! Alexander says 
 what areyou talking about? Rena asks 
you'll see a full tranformation! Alexander says clapping and allthe sudden two fallen angels more grabbed Atsuko 
what are you doing to her? Rena shouted 
don't you wanted to be stronger Atsuko? Alexander says cupping Atsuko's cheek 
Atsuko kept in silence...
Atsuko do something! don't let this happen! Rena shouts while forces with other Fallen angels 
shut up! one of them says and beats Rena 
did you know that Atsuko don't want anyone to boss her around..that's why she wants to be stronger to not follow anyone..and well i'm in good mood so i'm going to make her dream come true! Alexander says while puts her hand on Atsuko's forhead
Atsuko started shouting in pain..
the Fallen angel tried to hold her tight but somehow she became stronger and end up sending them against the wall and then fainted..
Alexander smirked and made a sign to other angels to let Rena go..
what did you do to her? Rena asked while carries Atsuko bridal style
wait and see! Alexander answers smiling 
(~After~) 
Rena putted Atsuko on bed then she notices that Atsuko is burning up in fever 
what should i do? Rena thought scared 
Atsuko started to move side to side on bed like if something hurts 
Atsuko are you okay? Rena tried to wake her up but it didn't work Atsuko didn't open her eyes,she was sweating and rolling on bed 
"Atsuko!" Rena murmured and looks at her in pain
(what the hell just happened? why she's in this state? what he did to her?) 
all those questions where in Rena's head with no answer..
Rena took a deep breath and went to the kitchen to make coffee she knew that it will be a long night..
~~~~~~Next day~~~~~~~~~
Rena woke up and saw Atsuko still sleeping,she touched her and somehow the fever is gone.Rena thought about waking Atsuko but she didn't do it,she went to the park to relax a little it was a scary night 
Rena sitted on the grass and looked the view all the sudden she felt something on her cheek 
hello Rena chan! Jurina says happy 
why you always look so happy when you see me? Rena asked looking at Jurina who's hugging her 
you're my angel Rena chan! Jurina says 
angel!" that word coused Rena to shiver 
why you say that? Rena asked 
you said that you'll always protect me! Jurina answered smiling and clinging on Rena's arm
(Jurina in the last days had become someone special to Rena and she would do anything for her even thought she's always tsundere towards her) 
Rena got up..
where are you going Rena chan? Jurina asks 
tl visit someone! Rena answers 
i'll go with you! Jurina says and takes Rena's arm 
ok let's go! Rena says 
they walked to Rena's place and entered 
where's Atsuko? Rena said while looks eveyrwhere
Atsuko? Jurina repeated 
yes,my friend! Rena says while gets out to look for Atsuko outside 
wait up Rena chan! Jurina shouts and goes after her
Rena looked side to side..
Rena chan!" Jurina says catching her breath 
Looking for someone! Someone says
Rena turns around and sees a smiling Atsuko 
Atsuko you scared the hell out of me! Rena says while walks closer to her 
you don't need to worry,i'm ithe strongest! Atsuko says while looks her hands 
what are you talking about? Rena asks 
i'm talking about this! Atsuko says and puts herself in the middle of the street 
Atsuko move! Rena shouts and also Jurina 
A trailer is coming to Atsuko's direction..
Move Atsuko! Rena shouted and run to her 
DISAPPEAR! Atsuko shouts and punches the trailer making it to explote 
what the hell? Rena covered Jurina 
Atsuko was smiling 
so the rumours are true! Atsuko says disgusted 
what? no! Rena looks other way 
Rena i felt so disgusted by you.. how could you? Atsuko says 
but Atsuko "i just couldn't help it!" Rena says looking Jurina
you just couldn't help it! ha.."i can say people can't help it but we're angels!so now i have to clean up your mess!" Atsuko says  
what are you talking about? what are you going to do?Rena asks and puts Jurina behind her
one human life more or one human life less..is the same! Atsuko says smiling and getting closer 
don't you dare! Rena says looking at Atsuko 
what you're going to do about it sister? Atsuko asks
you can't.. YOU CAN'T! Rena shouts crying 
yes,i can! Atsuko says smiling and run to Rena and beats her seral times on her body 
Rena tried to defend herself but the difference was evident Rena was younger and somehow Atsuko got stronger in one night 
c'mon Rena give up and let me kill her! Atsuko says while keeps beating Rena 
take this! Atsuko punched Rena on her stomach and sent her a few steps away
Rena got up slowly "i won't you hurt her!" 
that's cute..then i'll kill you first and then to that pathetic human! Atsuko says pointing to Rena who started crying 
Atsuko kicked Rena who layed on the floor trying to catch her breath 
you just broke the law and you have to pay the consequences of your acts! Atsuko says and hits Rena's stomach while she's on the floor 
please leave her alone..she's just a kid..she hasn't done anything! Rena says bleeding 
i won't forgive you..you fell for that rat..we were best friends and you're leaving me because of her! Atsuko shouts kicking Rena and pointed to the girl who's scare watching this scene
Stop.. hitting Rena chan! The girl shouts and punches Atsuko on her cheek 
Atsuko looked at the girl "You miserable kid!" she clench her fist and beated the hell out of her 
No..Atsuko! Rena shouts while tries to get up 
don't you ever touch me again! Acchan says and keeps punching the girl.. till she was knock out 
now i feel better! Atsuko says while walks away but not before kick for last time to Rena..
easy job! Atsuko mutmured smiling till she heard a crazy laugh..
huh? Atsuko turned around and saw a Rena covered in blood and smiling "are you mad?"
Atsuko pouted 
Rena got closer to Atsuko 
now i know why they choose you a weak like you who turns into who they call it..Gekikara! Atsuko says and starts punching Rena who is smiling like crazy 
Atsuko rises an eyebrow 
now's Gekikara's turn..
she gave Atsuko several punches on her face while Atsuko was on the floor Gekikara took a wood and hitted Acchan with it over and over again till someone stopped her 
Atsuko let's go! someone else says and takes her away from the crazy girl 
Gekikara threw the wood and walked to Jurina's direction,she knealed.."Jurina!" she murmured and kissed the younger girl in her forhead then carried her..
~hours later~
where i am? Atsuko? Jurina! Rena woke up and look around then she got up "ouch!" 
hey be careful..you're pretty mess up! a girl says 
Jurina! where's Jurina? Rena asked crying 
i don't know who's Jurina! The girl who seem a boy answers smiling 
Btw! I'm Sae chan! she says smiling 
Rena got up and leaned on the wall "i need to find Jurina!" 
no you need to calm down! Sae says and pushes Rena to bed..
~~~~~~~~~~~~~Present~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
This girl is important we need to keep an eye on her so you better listen! Alexander says to everyone while shows a picture of the girl
Black was barely listening 
is a school girl! Hideki says 
what should we do? Another fallen angel asks 
what do you us to put uniforms to look at her closer and maybe become friends with her
yes! That's what i'm talking about! Alexander says
what?!? everyone in the room says 
but..hmmm the only one with a baby face is Black and i don't think she's going to like going to school you know Her master! Hideki says smiling 
(everyone looks at Black)
there's no way i'm going to do that " i hate humans so leave me alone!" Black says while walks away 
a shadow appears in front of Black and gives her the picture "Nothing better come your head!" she says while keeps walking 
get ready to school! Alexander says smiling
i don't think she'll go! Hideki says 
she will! Alexander says 
~~~~~~~~~~~~At school~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
The bell ringed time to go in! 
Mayu sighed and then sitted "she couldn't stop thinking about black and how to get her back?"
hello Mayu chan! Jurina says and sits next to her 
Black was looking from other building in front of the school 
somehow Mayu fell that someone was looking at her she turned her head and saw the person who steal her thoughts 
"Yuki!" Mayu murmured and kept looking at her 
you're waearing an uniform..are you planning..? Mayu thought 
Miss Watanbe there's something more interesting that my class outside? 
huh..no! Mayu answers nervous
the teacher turned around and went to the board to write something 
Mayu turned to look Yuki again but she was gone! 
the class with the science teacher ended..she left and Yuki took that as an opportunity and got in the classroom..
Yuki chan! Ikki says happy 
(Mayu was speechless)
Yuki ignore him and kept walking,She looked at Jurina that was sitting on her spot 
so you're the temoeramental one! Jurina says smiling while offers her hand to Yuki,Black took Jurina's hand and squeezed it very hard..
Mayu noticed it and separate them..
Yuki looked at Mayu but then sitted apart from everyone..
(Mayu couldn't help to stare Yuki..the whole day)
Jurina notices it..
(Lunch time came) Black disspaeared,Mayu look for her all her lunch time and Jurina spended her lunch time looking for Mayu 
the day ended soon and somehow there was nobody in the classroon except for Jurina and Mayu 
what a day? that Kashiwagi girl is crazy! Jurina said
don't say those things you don't knkw her! Mayu says mad while walks away
i'm sorry Mayu chan! Jurina says and kissed Mayu's cheek cousing her to blush 
all the sudden the windows's glasses exploded at the same time..Jurina covered Mayu
when Mayu and Jurina opened their eyes they saw Black standing 
i'll kill you! Black said 
Mayu run! Jurina said and pulled her by her hand and run as fast as they could while black was destroying everything around 
they hide in other classroom but somehow Black found them 
Black took Mayu by her shirt 
Yuki!" Mahu said in tears 
leave her alone! Jurina shouted and punched Black
Black took Jurina and smashed her against the window glass of that classroom 
"Jurina!" Mayu shouted and help her to get up 
so you're not strong now Jurina! Black says smiling 
and takes Mayu by her arm and smashed her against the wall first you and she later! Black says while puts her hand as a knife ready to rip Jurina's heart out 
Die! Black shouts 
(somone grabbed her strong hand)
Geki! Jurina says
are you mad? Gekikara asks smiking and kicks Black's stomach 
Jurina crawls to Mayu..
Black punched Gekikara's face and Gekikara punched her on her stomach again 
both started to fight so fast..
Jurina was impress but she feels that she's been in a fight like that before 
i'm going to disappear you! Black says and punches several times Gekikara's stomach 
Gekikara!" Jurina shouted 
Gekikara Dodges Blacks next punches and starts fighting back again 
c'mon Geki you're stronger! Jurina murmures while Mayu was staring at her 
left,right,left,right! Jurina says smiling while sees that Geki is kicking Black's butt 
Let's finish her! Jurina shouts in excitement 
no!" Mayu shouts and gets in the middle to not let Gekikara beat Yuki anymore 
Gekikara got distracted because of Mayu and Bkack took that as an opportunity and appered behind Gekikara then took her arms ready to break them 
Yuki stop! Mayu shouts and slaps Yuki...
wow superbitchslap! Jurina says 
Black let go Gekikara's arms and putted one hand on her burning cheek then she looked at Mayu in the eyes with a face saying WTF? 
Mayu could see that Yuki was struggling with somthing
Yuki gave a step back and left..
what was that all about? Jurina thought 
Yuki!" Mayu murmures sad and tears showed up

Offline Yagami.Rai

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Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 12.B (AtsuMina) (WMatsui) 06/01
« Reply #58 on: January 06, 2012, 03:11:45 PM »
Arg! I hate that Alexander guy!!! :angry:
Acchan.. :cry:
OMG!! Acchan?!! She's trying to kill Jurina!! :shocked
No!!
Black!! I wonder if she's pissed because Jurina kiss Mayu on the cheek XD

Thanks for the Update :thumbup :thumbup
Please Update Soon :mon cute:
I hope Yuki will return to normal soon.. :(

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Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 12.B (AtsuMina) (WMatsui) 06/01
« Reply #59 on: January 06, 2012, 06:23:39 PM »
Damn what's up with this Alexander guy?
First it's Acchan and now it's Jurina.
Why does he want Jurina?
Black got jealous cuz Jurina kissed Mayu's cheek.
The fight between Gekikara and Black was nice, it's funny how excited Jurina was about Geki winning. Too bad Mayu got in between and stopped it.
Thanks for the update.

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