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Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 12.B (AtsuMina) (WMatsui) 06/01
« Reply #60 on: January 06, 2012, 11:58:17 PM »
OMG what a great fight!!!

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Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 12.B (AtsuMina) (WMatsui) 06/01
« Reply #61 on: January 07, 2012, 06:48:57 AM »
LET ME KILL THAT ALEXANDER!!

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Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 13. 09/01
« Reply #62 on: January 10, 2012, 05:50:00 AM »
                                THE EXCHANGE!!! 
                                           13

Gekikara you're really bad hurt,we should go to Mayu's home is closer! Jurina says while helps Gekikara to walk 
i never thought she will be that strong is she stronger than..? Gekikara says
what do you mean? Mayu asks
what's going on? why that crazy girl wanted to kill me? i haven't done anything to her and why everyone is good at fighting here! Jurina says while walks 
"Yuki!" Mayu murmured sad then notice "Gekikra protecting Jurina! what's that mean?" 
Mayu chan you said your homw is close..please let hurry up Gekikara is not okay! Jurina says worried 
okay! Mayu says 
~~~~Home~~~~~~
Eiji was reading medicine books to help Acchan..
"Tomochin was cheering up Chiyuu who was sad beacuse she thinks this is all her fault"
Nyan Nyan was worried about Yuko who is not home yet while Takamina is sitting next to Acchan watching her while she sleeps..
Knock! knock! 
Nyan Nyan opens the door..
hi Mayu chan AHHH! Nyan Nyan shouts beacuse she saw Gekikara 
what happened? Eiji shouts while runs to where Nyan Nyan is.."what the hell? Eiji shouted
hey..she helped me! Mayu says calmed 
but she hates Acchan maybe she's here because she wants to kill her! Nyan Nyan says afraid 
who's Acchan? and no Gekikara would never do that to anyone! Jurnina says 
what happened to you? Nyan Nyan asks to Mayu 
Black! Mayu answers 
everyone heard that name and felt shivers "the pictures of Black killing those fallen angels came to their minds!" 
She save me! Mayu says 
Nyan Nyan and Eiji let her pass
everyone in the room were surprised 
"Ge-ki-ki-kara!"Chiyuu says stuttering
i'll go get the medical kit! Mayu says while sit Jurina and Gekikara in the living room
guys keep it down! You're going to wake up Acchan..it was hard to fall sleep for her! Takamina says while closes the door of Acchan's room then she notices Gekikara
Hi! Gekikara says smiling 
what? how the hell? i'm not going to let you touch Acchan! Takamina pulled out her sword and pointed to Gekikara who only was smiling 
no, Takamina she's our friend! Mayu says 
i don't care! Takamina answers  ready to fight
"Rena!" A low voice says 
Acchan! Takamina says and looks back ..she looks back and sees Acchan leaning on the door barely standing up watching the whole situation 
"Rena!" what a cute name! Jurina says smiling
Gekikara blushed but then got up and walked closer to Acchan 
i'm not going to let you pass! Takamina says 
can we talk alone? Acchan says smiling
"no!" everyone says 
it's okay! Acchan says looking everyone 
is that what you want! Mayu says while takes Jurina with her
well i have to go home! Eiji says 
i have something to do! Tomochin says and drags Chiyuu with her 
Takamina was standing anyway
Takamina you have to go too! Acchan says 
"but.." Takamina replies 
"no buts! go" Acchan says 
c'mon Takamina we need some fresh air! Nyan Nyan says while pushes Takamina who passes next to Gekikara and gives her a glare 
Cute midget! Gekikara says smiling
i know! Acchan replies 
so she did this to you and i thought there wasn't anyone more heartless than you! Gekikra says 
i thought so too..but things had changed,I'm glad to know she's alive! Acchan replies smiling 
i always thought she was dead! Gekikara says looking other way 
how could you? you were the one who saved her!Acchan says serious 
i didn't know she was alive! Gekikara answers 
you saved her and carried her to a hospital! Acchan answers while tries to get closer to Rena 
you really look bad that Black girl knows how to fight right? Gekikara asks
i wonder if there any way to get her back? Acchan asks while sits next to Gekikara
you got back..so that means she can get back is she wants! Rena says looking at Acchan 
i'm sorry Rena..i don't know what happened to me i have no excuse for what i did to you! Acchan says in tears and then hugs Rena 
Rena breaks the hug and gets up "there's only one thing in my mind now..my revenge can wait besides seeing you this way is enough for now!" 
i know what's on your mind and i want the same thing, we got to keep them safe,we need to work together! Acchan says
we'll work together but when this is over,i will get my revenge! Gekikara says while leaves 
~~~~~~~~~~~~~somewhere else~~~~~~~~~~~~
Walking down the street..how could she? stupid human..why i didn't kill you? Black thinks while walks and brushes her cheek 
"Black!" Someone says 
huh? Black turns around 
Alexander wants to talk to you! Hideki says smiling 
and i don't want to! Black says whilw keeps walking 
"then!" Hideki says and snaps his fingers:two fallen angels appeared and took Black by her arms 
i said i'm not in the mood! Black shouts and punch one fallen angel on his face sending him a few steps away then she proceed to take the other fallen angel by his shirt "you can run or die!" she says ready to break his neck 
Hideki smirked and vanished..
i run! i run! The fallen angel shouts crying 
Black was about to kill him but something inside of her made her let him go..
The fallen angel run away while the other was still on the floor 
why did i let him go? Black thought while looks to her hands confused 
nice fight! a girl voice says 
Black looked up and saw a girl standing well not a girl he/she looked like a boy 
it's nice to see strong ones by the way i'm Sae Miyazawa! The girl appeared behind Black who turned around to face her 
Sae extended her hand but Black ignored it and kept walking 
it seems like you don't like you talk! Sae says while follows her 
Black kept walking without saying a word and not even loooking at her 
i don't let anyone ignore me like this..you're lucky you're hot! Sae says pouting and keeps following her
Black stopped walking and turned around to punch Sae but Sae dodge it..
that was nice! Sae says smiling 
Black was irritated
Let's go Alexander is waiting for us! Sae says and starts walking 
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Far away~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I gotta bring her back! A determinated Yuko says 
It seems like Black gives you motivation! Mariko says while sees Yuko focusing 
i'm going to bring her back! Yuko answers and keeps training 
as you know it's not that easy he's got fully control of her..and try to separate that energy from her might kill you! Mariko explains to Yuko 
i don't care! Yuko replies 
good! Mariko says 
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Walking home~~~~~~~~~~~~
You see it was a nice idea buying some ice cream..i wonder if everyone was right if  this is your favorite ice cream shop? Jurina asks pouting
yes! Mayu answers with a sad tone 
Mayu chan can i ask you something?"Jurina asks
 yes,Jurina! Mayu answers 
Kashiwagi san was very important for you? Jurina asks while looks at her with a smile
yes,is very important to me! Mayu answers
Jurina smile faded "sorry!" 
(Mayu sighed)
(in the street in feont of Jurina and Mayu with out they notice!) 
why you took this way Black? is not cool so many lights? Sae asks 
shut up! Black says but can help to look at the two girls that were in the opposite street 
pretty girls there too! Sae says while puts her arm around  Black's neck and looks at the girls 
shut up! Black says and removes the arm and keeps walking ignoring Sae 
hey wait up for me! Sae says and goes after her
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~<<<<>>>>>~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Acchan you shouldn't be up! where's Gekikara? did she do something to you? Takamina asks 
Takamina is okay!" Acchan say with a smile 
not it's not..you're with fever! Takamina says with her hand on Acchan's forhead 
(Acchan is blushing)
"Takamina i.." Acchan says 
ssshhh don't says anything..you need to rest! Takamina says with her fingers on Acchan's lips
Acchan's took  Takamina's hand and said "Thanks!" and then fell sleep..

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Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 13. 09/01
« Reply #63 on: January 10, 2012, 11:31:18 AM »
Yatta! Update! XD
Takamina so protective LOL :wub:
 :( I hope Yuki can be back soon with Mayu again.. :cry:
Sae?!!! I hope she won't break Mayuki..
A blushing Acchan is cute~~ :heart:

Thanks for the Update :thumbup :thumbup
Please update soon :mon cute:

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Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 13. 09/01
« Reply #64 on: January 10, 2012, 01:05:01 PM »
Hurry Yuki~ you must be together with Mayu again!

You need each other!!

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Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 13. 09/01
« Reply #65 on: January 11, 2012, 02:47:28 PM »
I need to know the next update....

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Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 13. 09/01
« Reply #66 on: January 15, 2012, 09:00:17 PM »
Blacky is jealous~

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Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 14. 21/01
« Reply #67 on: January 21, 2012, 11:29:32 AM »
                                THE EXCHANGE!!! 
                                           14

You shouldn't go to school Mayu chan! Nyan Nyan says while sets the table for breakfast 
if she wants to kill me she would do it anytime or anyplace! Mayu replies looking other way 
good morning! A happy Takamina says 
you seem really happy why? Nyan Nyan asks sad
well Acchan is recovering fast but have you heard from Yuko? Takamina asks 
nope she didn't come to sleep! Nyan Nyan says sad and looking other way 
everyone looks down..
(Eiji,Chiyuu,Tomochin,Mayu,Takamina,Nyan Nyan)
(everything is going to be fine!)
everyone turns around..
Acchan you shouldn't be up! Takamian says 
hahaha don't worry i'm fine! Acchan says with a smile
wow you look way better Acchan! Everyone say
hello Gekikara! Acchan says 
huh? everyone sees Gekikara next to Acchan
how did she get in? Takamina says scared
she's fast and she likes windows! Acchan replies with a smile 
(Door bell) 
i'll go get that! Eiji says while walks to open the door
hi! Jurina says 
hi come in please! Eiji says 
so how we going to get back Yuki? Chiyuu asks (still feeling guilty)
Tomochin takes Chiyu's hand and gives it a little squeeze 
well fallen angels are stupid! Gekikara says
 Gekikara you're so fast you got here before me! Jurina says excited and looking at Geki like a fan which coused Gekikara to blush 
stupid? Eiji says 
yeah they are so full of hate that they don't think at all they just want to rid of it! Gekikara replies avoiding Jurina's look 
yes,when i was under it..i couldn't control myself i just wanted to destroy everything around me..like something inside of me was burning! Acchan said 
how did you get rid of it? Eiji asks 
it took me years to control it..but it was love as cliche it sounds it was love! Acchan says serious
(everyone looks at Mayu)
that means that there's hope! Mayu thought and got up "i havd to go to school!" she says while walks to the door 
wait up Mayu chan! Jurina says and goes after her..
i don't think is going to be easy to bring her back! Gekikara says looking through the window to Jurina and Mayu
no,it won't! Acchan says smiling 
i have to go they're dissapearing! Gekikara says 
don't worry go! Acchan says 
what's that mean? Takamina asks 
she has hee stuff to do! Acchan says smiling 
everyone was looking Acchan..
~~~~~~~~~~~~~Somewhere else~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Time to go to school! Hideki says smiling 
shut up! Black says 
and remember that you can't kill Jurina! Hideki says
if she makes me mad i'll cut her head! Black replies
you're scary! Sae says 
who asked your opinion? Black asks
okay i'll shut up! Sae says pouting 
she's moody good luck Sae! Hideki says 
~Flashback~
You tried to kill Jurina! Alexander says irritated
Bkack was quiet not saying a word 
how dare you? Alexander asks
she made mad so i wanted her dead! Yuki replies
okay,okay listen to me because if you get to hurt Jurina again i'll destroy you! Alexander says serious
yes,sir then you shouldn't send me to school! Black shouts while walks closer to Alexander but then two fallen angels got on her way 
gst off my way! Black says and then cuts one the head of one of them 
the other fallen angel was scared and gave a step back.Hideki took the body and the head..
Alexander putted her hand on his forhead then sighed
"what am i going to do with you Black?" 
what's so speacil about Jurina?Black asked
not of your business! Alexander says
 Well you have to put her on the edge then she will show you what you want to see! Black says with a smirk while walks away 
why you let her do this? Hideki asks pouting while looks at the head of his dead partner
i like to spoil my kids once in a while and i want to know what's on Black's head! Alexander says smirking then claps
~End of the flashback~
i gotta go! Black says while leaves..
~~~~~~~~~~~~\~\~\\~\~\~\~\\~|~\,\\~\~~\<\~\~\~\~\~
Chiyuu is not your fault don't feel guilty! Tomochin says and takes Chiyuu's hand 
you heard what Acchan and Gekikara said..i should be her she's suffering because of me..she had no choice! Chiyuj says 
hey! Tomochin says while rubs Chiyuu's back 
this is mu fault! Chiyuu says 
hey if you get this you're not going to get anything..what you gotta do is look a way to help her with others! Tomochin says smiling 
~~~~~~~~~~~~~At school~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Yuki sitted next to Mayu but totally ignore her and Jurina...
the day passed fast and in a blink of an eye was luch time..
Mayu disappeared and went to terrace of the school building to have some quality time alone but she didn't notice that she wasn't so alone Black was behind her ..
Mayu turned around and saw Black looking at her
what do you want? Mayu asked but then notice that Black's look is different it's not the one full of hate instead was a confused one 
"Yuki!" Mayu said and tried to touch Black but this gave a step back 
"i won't hurt you!" Mayu says offering her hand 
Black covered her ears..
are you okay? Mayu asks and tried to touch Black but Black slapped her hand "Stay away from me!" She mumured and left..leaving a confused Mayu..
so there's your heart Black! Gekikara murmured
(Gekikara was on a tree looking the whole situation) 
nobody told you that it's not cool..observing other people! someone said behind Gekikara 
Gekikara turned around "Gakuran!" she said and then dodge a punch 
what the hell? Gakuran said beacuse she fail 
i don't want to fight you! Gekikara said and then turned around 
what's wrong withthe peopke around here? are you a relative of Black? Gakuran asked 
is just that you're not worth it! Gekikara replied 
what did you say? Gakuran asks mad then runs to Gekikara and throw several punches 
Gekikara turned around and dodged them all 
weak! Gekikara said 
Gakuran was mad "you think you're better..i'll show how wrong you are!" she shouted and threw more punches to Gekijara but this time didn't fail
after a moment Gekikara took Gakuran fists and said "i won't let you get close to her..i'm here to protect her!" 
she belongs with person like us is in her DNA..is just a mtter of time! Gakuran says smiling 
shut up..she's not like you! Gekikara shouts and starts punching the hell out of Gakuran 
i won't you touch her,being around her..i kill everyone that i have to she won't become one of you..i won't let her become one of you! Gekikara shouts while kicks Gakuran 
it's destiny! Gakuran says 
i don't believe that bullshit! Gekikara says 
Gekikara stop! Someone shouts 
Gekikara turns around to look the owner of the voice 
who running to her 
look who's coming! Gakuran says smirking 
Gekikara what's going on? Jurina asks 
hello Jurina chan! Gakuran says while gets up 
who are you? Jurina asks 
a friend of your..Forget it my bad! Gakuran says while walks away
Gekikara are you okay? Jurina asks because she saw Gekikara's lip which it's bleeding 
i'm fine! Gekikara answers 
let's get you some ice! Jurina says 
~~~~~~~~~~~~~\~\~\~\~\~\~\~\~\~~~~~~~~~~~~~
focus mors Yuko! Mariko shouts 
how can i when i haven't eat in. a day! Yuko says 
well that means that you don't want this and that i'm wasting my time! Mariko says 
shut up i  know what i'm doing! Yuko replies while still tries to focus 
don't make me waste my time! Mariko says 
i want this..i want this! Yuko shouts 
impressive..determinate now i knkw why they choose you! Mariko thought then smiled
i will bring you back! Yuko thought still trying to focus and channel her energy..
~~~~~~~~~~~~~\~\\~\~~\~\~\~\~\,\~~~~~~~~~~~
what happened to you?Hideki asked 
this..  nothing! Gakuran answered 
doesn't mean nothing! Hideki said 
i went to see Jurina chan! Gakuran said 
how was it? Hideki asked 
well she's well protected by Gekikara! Gakuran answered smiling and brushing her cheek 
that's why Gekikara need to dissapear! Hideki says 
Jurina is bigger from the last time i saw her,she was like 13 right? Gakuran says 
we should ask Black to kill Gekikara! Hideki says smiling while sees his nails 
i don't think she would do that! Gakuran says 
why? she an angel of death! Hideki says 
well she didn't look like that today actually she looked like a lost puppy in front of this small cute girl! Sae says smiling 
that girl is bothering our Black...huh? Hideki says
who is she? Gakuran asks 
well she was the one she loved before turning..she offered her life because she didn't wanted to Alexande to kill her..so that's why she turned into a fallen angel! Hideki says 
that's so disgusting..i'll guess is up to us! Gakuran says smiling
this is gonna be fun! Hideki says smiling

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Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 14. 21/01
« Reply #68 on: January 21, 2012, 02:07:31 PM »
yuko...yuko...

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Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 14. 21/01
« Reply #69 on: January 21, 2012, 10:22:14 PM »
                               
Mayu turned around and saw Black looking at her
what do you want? Mayu asked but then notice that Black's look is different it's not the one full of hate instead was a confused one
"Yuki!" Mayu said and tried to touch Black but this gave a step back
"i won't hurt you!" Mayu says offering her hand
Black covered her ears..
are you okay? Mayu asks and tried to touch Black but Black slapped her hand "Stay away from me!" She mumured and left..leaving a confused Mayu..


I don't know why but I LOVE this scene~

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Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 14. 21/01
« Reply #70 on: January 22, 2012, 01:06:47 PM »
 :twothumbs oh a very good fan fic I hope you update soon because the story reallly excites me!!!

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Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 15.Nyan Nyan's Feelings.. 27/01
« Reply #71 on: January 27, 2012, 10:15:52 PM »
                                THE EXCHANGE!!! 
                         15. Nyan Nyan's Feelings

(It's been a week since everyone last saw Yuko and one week since the last time Mayu felt real Yuki..)

*Nyan Nyan woke up with this itching...
Where are you? why you haven't call? don't you miss me? beacuse i do...I need to find you!*
Good morning! everyone says to Nyan Nyan 
for everyone i mean all the gang (Gekikara,Jurina,Mayu,Takamina,Acchan,Tomochin, Chiyuu,Eiji)
Nyan Nyan sighed "even though it was lame she had the hope that Yuko mighy be here today!" 
-Miichan is on vacation with her family-
Nyan Nyan went to the Kitchen and saw her breakfast 
everhone looked at her but nobody dare to talk..they knew that this new Nyan Nyan was because Yuko's absence..She ended fast her breakfast and went upstairs to change her clothes..
Poor Nyan Nyan! Chiyuu says 
yes,it must terrible loosing someone you care! Tomochin says 
(everyone looks at Mayu)
huh? I'm okay! Mayu says nervous (she doesn't really care,beacuse nobody knows about her last time with Yuki at school) 
*Flashback* Second part of the terrace moment! 
Yuki wait up! Mayu says running after her 
she run as fast as she could but the stairs doesn't make it any easier..
Yuki keeps runing downstairs.. Mayu somehow lose balance she was about to fall but Yuki's hand grabbed her just in time,Yuki was so nervous and blushing  that she lose balance and both end up falling..When Yuki opened her eyes she saw  that Mayu was on top of her with her ear on her chest hearing her heartbeat and hugging her...
Yuki's sweet look changed...get off me!" she shouted and pushed Mayu then she run away
Yuki!"Mayu murmures..
"End of the flashback!"
don't worry evefything is going to be fine! Acchan says smiling to everyone 
Gekikara looked at Acchan and then smiled (Gekikara is haply to know that Acchan has change)
Nyan Nyan changed her clothes and went to work without saying goodbye to anyone..
we should go to school today is aquarium day!Mayu says pulling Jurina with her 
ahh..i don't want to! Jurina says complaining while gets up..
it's gonna be fun! Mayu says 
both girls closee the door and left to school..
you think she will change? Gekikara asks sad looking at the door 
Jurina is a good girl..i don't believe It! Takamina says with a smile 
Gakuran said that it's on her DNA! Gekikara says sad
then we have to wait and see! Acchan says with a smile looking at Gekikara 
Eiji was looking to his laptop "i can'tfind anything about Jurina's past..no mother,no dad,no siblings!" 
the only that i can do then is look for the "grandmother!"Gekikara says 
grandmother? Jurina has a family? Acchan asks 
well not exactly..is was an old lady who took care of her when she was younger before you..Gekikara says looking other way 
then let's go find the granny! Takamina shouts smiling with a pose to smooth the tension 
*everyone looks at Takamina*
ackward! Chiyuu says 
(where is Yuko? she was better with this things) Takamina thought still froze on her pose 
okay let's go! Acchan says smiling..(she can't believe how dork Takamina can be..but it was adorable 4 her)
,~~~~~~~~~~~~~~<<<<<~~~~~<<<<<<<~~~~~~~
Nyan Nyan was walking to her office but she couldn't helo to see the chocolates store where she always bought Yuko's chocolates..
Nyan Nyan sighed and kept walking not denying the fact that she misses her little squirrel..A LOT..but what are those feelings? she knows that the little squirrel is a pervert.. that she's is an old man trapped on the young girl's body but still.. she was the most adorable, sensitive..person? no,Nyan Nyan knew that her squirrel wasn't human at all..but who cares? if she's monkey,a dude she doesn't really care..the only thing that runs in Nyan Nyan's head is that she wants to be next to her pervert squirrel..for some sort of "indefinite time"
Nyan Nyan didn't notice but she was already signing some papers on her desk..
how am i got here? Nyan Nyan thought,she was only thinking about her squirrel and she's already working
she looked through her window looking for something that help her to get her thoughts away from Yuko..
something got her attention..a girl
these girl was short her hair was brown with a terrible taste of clothes..
could it be?" Nyan Nyan murmured and run outside the building..
Nyan Nyan moved her head side to side looking for the girl but there was a lot people so if she doesn't hurry she might loose her..
Nyan Nyan got on top of a tree..
*people around thought she was crazy.*
got'cha! Nyan Nyan said and got off the tree and run after the girl...
she grabbed her shoulder and made her turn around 
"Yuko!" Nyan Nyan says trying to catch her breath 
excuse me! The girl says and pushes Nyan Nyan to the floor and goes away mad 
(Nyan Nyan was sad looking down..now she lost every hope to find her)
Nyan Nyan..Are you okay? someone says from behind and helps her to get up 
Nyan Nyan looks at the person and pouts to not cry
once Nyan Nyan is up she slaps Yuko
Yuko puts her hand on her cheek..
why you didn't call? i was worried about you? Nyan Nyan shouts mad and crying 
sorry!" Yuko says sad and brushing her cheek she can see and feel Nyan Nyan's pain 
Nyan Nyan relized what she just did.."i just hurt the person i love the most!" She thought 
Yuko..i'm sorry!" Nyan Nyan says and hugs Yuko 
it's fine! Yuko says while breaks the hug 
No it's not! Nyan Nyan says and puts her hand on Yuko's red cheek 
let me make it up to you! Nyan Nyan says 
it's not necessary! Yuko says 
before everything happen you said you wanted to go to the aquarium..let me take you there! Nyan Nyan says and takes Yuko's hand and drags her there
~~,~~~~~~~~<<<<<<>>>>>>~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
(At school)
who's ready for the aquarium day! The teacher asks
everyone shouts "me!"
suddenly the door opens ...
good morning!" Black says smiling 
come in! the teacher says 
Black sits next to Mayu as usual..
Mayu could see that the person next to her is Black not Yuki so she knew this day is not going to be fun..

TO BE CONTINUED ...will be Yuko able to bring Yuki back? that's what the next chapter is going to be about hope you don't hate it or me! 

swear that i saw a Kahem's comment about Jurina..hmmm what happened to it? i didn't erase it i guess it happened the day when this page went crzy! 
hope you comment again i like when you guys guess and it give me great ideas!! 
THANK FOR THE COMMENTS! <3

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Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 15.Nyan Nyan's Feelings.. 27/01
« Reply #72 on: January 27, 2012, 11:04:44 PM »
I'm so excited about the aquarium day~

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Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 15.Nyan Nyan's Feelings.. 27/01
« Reply #73 on: January 28, 2012, 04:21:08 AM »
wow the slap!! :D

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Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 15.Nyan Nyan's Feelings.. 27/01
« Reply #74 on: January 28, 2012, 05:13:05 AM »
Yay! Yuko is back!! <3333

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Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 15.Nyan Nyan's Feelings.. 27/01
« Reply #75 on: January 28, 2012, 07:51:43 AM »
Yeaa!! Thanks for the Update :D
 :w00t: Woah! The slap.. I like it XD
Yuko!! Gambatte!! Turn Black back to YukI!!!  :grin:

Thanks again for the Update :twothumbs
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Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 15.Nyan Nyan's Feelings.. 27/01
« Reply #76 on: January 29, 2012, 02:59:58 AM »
Hum it's because of other day backup I think lol
But I still think that Jurina could be Alexander's daughter
Ouch poor Yuko taking a slap without doing perv thing rofl

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Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 16.Get back.. 04/02
« Reply #77 on: February 04, 2012, 04:42:44 PM »
                                THE EXCHANGE!!! 
                                 16.Get you back

Everybody get ready please! the teacher says
Mayu chan everything is going to be fine! Jurina says smiling with her hand on Mayu's shoulder! 
Mayu just nodded..
(At home)
Acchan what are you doing? you need to rest! Takamina says worried while sees that Acchan is standing up 
hey don't worry i'm fine! Acchan says smirking 
you need to lay down! Takamina says and grabs Acchan to put her on bed 
it's boring..please let's take a walk! Acchan says loooking at Takamina with pleading eyes 
"okay.." a not so sure Takamina says 
They walked a bit till they reached for a park...
Acchan went straight to the flowers like a five year old kid.."Look Takamina! these flowers are so pretty!" she said smiling 
Takamina walked to Acchan's direction and sat behind her 
Acchan looked Takamina who has a concern look on her face "you know..you don't need to be worried about me all the time!"  Acchan said with some flowers on her hand..
"it's just..IT'S JUST THAT YOU DON'T CARE ABOUT YOURSELF..I DON'T WANT TO LOSE YOU!Takamina shouted and then breathed 
here..for you! Acchan says smirking and offering the flowers to Takamina who blushed 
i love you Minami! Acchan says 
(Takamina blushed even more unable to speak!!!) 
Acchan smirked and kissed Takamina on her cheek
why...?!? why you make me fall for you just this way..so easy for you to get me? Takamina murmured looking the flowers on her hand 
"Minami you'll never going to lose me!" those words brought Takamina back to reality 
but.." Takamina was about to says something but some lips were already on hers...
~~~~~~~~~~<<<<<<<<<<>>>>>>>>>~~~~~~~~~~
Look Yuko to that shark! Nyan Nyan says pointing 
Yuko looked to the shark but she wasn't really paying attention,she didn't really care..
do you want some ice cream? Nyan Nyan asked 
mmm i'm okay! Yuko replies 
so two icereams then it's! Nyan Nyan says and goes to buy ice cream..
i didn't say that i wanted one! Yuko murmured 
Nyan Nyan used it as an excuse to go away for a bit..she knew that this new Yuko is hurting her..
Yuko changed!" She murmured to herself then sighed
Nyan Nyan!" Yuko says trying to catch her breath..
what's wrong? Nyan Nyan asks 
you need to go! Yuko says taking deep breaths 
what?!? no! why? Nyan Nyan asks
YOU NEED TO GO NOW! Yuko shouts and looks at Nyan Nyan with another look 
"no!" Nyan Nyan says 
Yuko is forcing with Nyan Nyan 
well..well what we have here! Black says clapping 
Yuko turns around 
and i thought this morning would be boring! Black says while walks closer
Nyan Nyan go! Yuko says serious 
Nyan Nyan gave a step back but then run away once she saw Black intentions 
let's play Squirrel! Black says and then runs to Yuko
with her fist armed..
(Yuko dodged the Black's fist) 
Black ends up beating the fire alarm which starts ringing..
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everyone please don't panic! The teacher says 
Mayu looks around but she can't find Black "could it be..." she thought 
Mayu chan let's get out of here! Jurina says and takes Mayu's hand and starts guiding her to the exit 
no wait..we need to find her! Mayu says
who? Jurina asks but then one name crossed her mind,Jurina let go Mayu's hand and looks other way 
"please!" Mayu says 
"okay let's go!" Jurina says looking other way 
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Take this rat! Black says and kicks Yuko's stomach 
and then grabs her and throws her agains the glass
i think that shark is hungry! Black says smirking 
shut up! Yuko says while gets up 
look at you..you're so pathetic,thinking that you can beat me! Black says smirking 
shut up! Yuko shouts and tries to punch her but Black was faster and grabbed her then whispered in her ear "do you want to know a little secret?.."
(Yuko was trying to remove Black's arm that was around her neck) 
i was fully aware of what i did to Acchan!" Black whispered with a smirk
Yuko got angry and beated Black in her stomach "you.. how could you?!Yuko shouts while Black is on the floor 
i don't know but fortunately you won't get out alive! Black says smirking and grabs Yuko...
"Die!" Black shouts and was about to rip her heart out but someone stopped her by beating her with a tube on her back 
Yuko are you okay?!" Nyan Nyan asks while help her to get up 
Black gets up mad and was about to attack Nyan Nyan but Mayu and Jurina got on her way 
Black stop!" Mayu shouts 
Let go off me!" Black shouts and hit Jurina with her head and then smashes Mayu against the wall 
Yuko pushes Black away "Nyan Nyan take Mayu and Jurina and go away!" she says then proceeds to punch Black on her face 
Nyan Nyan takes Jurina and Mayu and then hide..
Now i'm really mad! Black says while gets up and cleans with her fist the blood on her lip..then in a blink of an eye she was in front of Yuko..
scared? Black says then gives her several punches on her body
Yuko was on the floor trying to get up 
weak,weak,weak! Black says and kicks Yuko 
you're boring maybe i should go after them! Black says and points to where Nyan Nyan,Mayu and Jurina where hiding
no,i'm okay! Yuko says and grabs Black's ankle
c'mon Yuko! Mariko murmured while watches the fight from other spot 
Black moved her feet and then went walking to the girls.."girls,c'mon i'm bore..i just want to play!" 
Nyan Nyan tries to hit Black with the tube but Black grabbed it and threw it aside 
so scary with that tube! Black says with a smirk 
Jurina protect Mayu!" Nyan Nyan said 
Jurina looked at Mayu who was laying on the floor (because she fainted cause she lost a lot blood)
you should worry about yourself! Black says and then
puts her hand on Nyan Nyan's neck and starts sqeezing it..
Nyan Nyan!" Yuko on the floor murmures and tries to move.."i need to save her..I NEED TO SAVE HER!" Yuko shouts and then runs to Black  
Black smirks and let go Nyan Nyan.."That's what i'm talking about!" Black said 
Yuko punches Black several times and jumps and uses her feet to beat Black who was covering with her arms crossed 
(Nyan Nyan got back to Jurina and Mayu)
Yuko wasn't kicking Black anymore "where did she go?!" Black murmured but then she felt a pain she looked down and saw Yuko who has her fist on her stomach..
"you little.." Black spitted blood 
Yuko kept punching Black
you don't care about killing anyone! Yuko shouts while keeps punching Black 
you hurt Mayu chan,Acchan and now NYAN NYAN! i WON'T FORGIVE YOU! Yuko says and keeps punching till the point that one punch send Black against the glass and that end that cutting her all over her body 
C'mon Yuko now is the time! Mariko shouted 
but still..i want to save you! Yuko mumured then putted her hand on Black's head 
Aaaaaaahhhhhh! Black shouts in pain 
Mayu woke up couse she heard the screaming..
what's she doing to her? Mayu gets up but Mariko gets on her way "Don't worry she's helping her!" 
Yuko!" Nyan Nyan murmured 
Yuki!" Mayu whispered 
Jurina noticed it and looked other way 
Yuko and Black shouts "AHHHHHHHHH!" 
(Black was feeling pain couse the new energy running through her body and Yuko because she was losing energy)
not so fast! Someone says and kicks Yuko on her face and interrups them 
what?!? everyone says 
Black..are you okay? She asked but then notice that Black is unconscious
Look what you've done to her damn humans! she shouted mad
calm down Gakuran! Hideki says 
Gekuran grabs Black and carry her 
i will destroy you but feel lucky now i have somethings to do! Gakuran says while walks away and carries Black 
Hideki follows her...
Nyan Nyan went to Yuko and helped her because she was also unconscious
Jurina looked at Mayu..
Mayu was between mad and sad "she thought that she would have Yuki back!" 
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what happened to you? Takamina asked worried
Black!" Nyan Nyan answered
Acchan face turned to a serious one when she saw Yuko who was still unconscious on the sofa..
where's Mayu? Acchan asked 
she said that she wanted to buy some anime! Jurina answered 
where was Gekikara today!" Jurina thought while sees 
her uniform 
~~~~~~~~~~~Gekikara's location~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
(doorbell ringing) (door opening)
hello! an old lady says 
hello! Gekikara says 
do i know you? An old lady asks 
no,you don't but Maybe you could help me to know more about someone called Matsui Jurina! Gekikara replies 
the old woman shivers "no! Go away!" The older woman replies and closes the door on her face
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Mayu's location~~~~~~~~~~~~
i thought..i thought you'll be back! Mayu thought then threw a little rock down..
she was watching the cars pass because she was on
footbridge..
"what if...without you..i miss you,get back" Mayu's tears came out 
(Mayu didn't notice but someone was behind her) 
"don't think about it..."someone said and then hugged Mayu from behind 
(more tears came out from Mayu)
"sorry..!" that girl voice said and gave her a kiss on her cheek..
(At home) 
Mayu woke up..
it was a dream? Mayu murmured and looked around 
then got up from bed and went to the living room ehere everyone was talking about what happed in the morning at the aquarium..
hey! Mayu says 
hey Mayu chan! everyone says 
hey does anyone knows how am i got here? Mayu asks looking at them
well i didn't saw walk in! Takamina says 
i didn't know you where here! Acchan replies
i was taking care of Yuko so i didn't notice! Nyan Nyan says 
(Yuko was still  unconscious in Nyan Nyan's room)
okay! Mayu says
why you ask? Takamina asks 
for nothing..for nothing! Mayu says

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Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 16.Get back.. 04/02
« Reply #78 on: February 04, 2012, 05:33:45 PM »
Oh who brought Mayu here?
Takacchan moment is so cute~

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Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 16.Get back.. 04/02
« Reply #79 on: February 04, 2012, 09:34:30 PM »
Who is that persoon?!!

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