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Re: One Shot - Atsumina [12/06/14] Melt...
« Reply #40 on: June 13, 2012, 09:46:48 PM »
Melt..


At Acchan’s apartment


Day off again. Takamina decided to visit Acchan. help Acchan clean her room, make dinner and maybe… stay overnight too..
but just 14.00pm and we still cleaning. The Ace cleaning bathroom and Chibi Leader cleaning hallway..


“Takamina~ oi~” sound of The Ace out from bathroom as chibi leader runs mopping the floor

“naaa~ni~?” from front the door

“Bo~ring. Let’s switchii~” Acchan

“ok~ okey..”



Now. Acchan - mopping the hallway floor and Takamina – cleaning in bathroom



“Takaminaaaaa” Acchan walk into bathroom, siting behind chibi leader

“Nani? Finish already?”

“already~ and onagasuitaaaa~ hungry!!” acchan said as pout

“hayai!!” takamina laugh

“hungry! hungry! hungry~”

“umm.. slow train, ok? wait me at living room. I’ll clean the floor a little”

“Ok~ Yay~” the ace runs out and…

“If I hungry too much. I’ll eat you instead, minami~” acchan shout from hallway.
Takamina smile after hear acchan say. It not rare. Acchan always acted like this when they together. We always happy together.

After finished everything. Takamina walk to living room. See Acchan sitting at couch and watching tv.
She make slow train and take it to Acchan, sit next to her.

“Dou?” Takamina say as look her beloved eating slow train with happy smile

“Oishi!~ ”

“yea, it great for summer” Takamina smile


“ Takamina ahhhh~”

“Aahhhhh umm”

“Dou~”

“Sweet……. like you.” Acchan smile, her cheek become pink

“You always say everything sweet. It melt my heart, you know~” Acchan said

“ehh.. what happen? why my beloved ace say something romantic suddenly.” Takamina catch Acchan forehead and giggle as Acchan pout.


Suddenly Takamina leaned her face closer. They nose touching..


“I can melt you more…” Takamina said before give short kiss on Acchan lips

“really?..” Acchan said as smirk

“…If you want” Takamina say as pushed Acchan down on couch. Acchan wrapping her arms around Takamina neck as Takamina started kiss her passionate.



“Minami..”

“Huh… nani?” .Takamina move to kiss on Acchan neck

“would you stay with me tonight?” Acchan said and bite her lower lip

“No” Takamina stop kissing and look into another girl eyes. Acchan pout and look away. Takamina smile as whispering..

“Not only tonight….” Takamina’s hand moving into the ace shirt as she kiss on her neck, bite it.
It earn soft moan from Acchan who start hug her beloved captain more tight.. They returned to kiss on lips again in deepened and feeling heat up.

“Minami.. I feel hot..” Acchan say between kissing

“aha… my kiss melting you, right?.. A-tsu-ko”







“pls.. melt me more”





END

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ahhhh.. wrote 2 story in one week because this last week for my summer break now :doh:

hope I'm not too busy again :cry:


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« Last Edit: June 14, 2012, 12:18:24 PM by Kiiz »

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Re: One Shot - Atsumina [12/06/14] Melt...
« Reply #41 on: June 13, 2012, 10:02:51 PM »
i see what you did thar!  XD so sweeeett i want more melting  :inlove:

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Re: One Shot - Atsumina [12/06/14] Melt...
« Reply #42 on: June 14, 2012, 04:26:02 AM »
WHAT'S THIS!!!! I'm melting early in the morning~ :wriggly:
Gosh~ you made rolling on my bed~ nyahaha..  :on lol: and I love that last scene.. :on bleed:

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Re: One Shot - Atsumina [12/06/14] Melt...
« Reply #43 on: June 14, 2012, 07:06:14 AM »
OMG!! atsumina having smexy time!! :D

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Re: One Shot - Atsumina [12/06/14] Melt...
« Reply #44 on: June 14, 2012, 10:17:35 AM »
Hehehe great one

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Re: One Shot - Atsumina [12/06/14] Melt...
« Reply #45 on: June 14, 2012, 10:26:12 AM »
Melting no Sounds Good  :thumbsup

Where's the bed part?  :inlove: :inlove:
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Re: One Shot - Atsumina [12/06/14] Melt...
« Reply #46 on: June 14, 2012, 12:13:26 PM »
Melting no Sounds Good  :thumbsup

Where's the bed part?  :inlove: :inlove:
lol kidding

Not have because.............. they still on couch :lol: :lol:

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Re: One Shot - Atsumina [12/06/14] Melt...
« Reply #47 on: June 14, 2012, 12:42:39 PM »
Melting no Sounds Good  :thumbsup

Where's the bed part?  :inlove: :inlove:
lol kidding

Not have because.............. they still on couch :lol: :lol:
LMAO...  :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:

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Re: One Shot - Atsumina [12/06/14] Melt...
« Reply #48 on: June 14, 2012, 03:08:06 PM »
OH MY GAWD! So Hot. But, Too bad. It's too short. Try to make it longer... next time. xDDDD
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Re: One Shot - Atsumina [12/06/14] Melt...
« Reply #49 on: June 17, 2012, 02:54:16 AM »
wahahaha This is HOT fic  :heart:
Go Takaboy~~ melt Acchan!!!

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Re: One Shot - Atsumina [12/06/14] Melt...
« Reply #50 on: June 17, 2012, 05:15:26 PM »
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OH MY GAWD! So Hot. But, Too bad. It's too short. Try to make it longer... next time. xDDDD
Agree~ agree~  :yep: :yep: :yep:
I want more~  :inlove: :inlove:

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Re: One Shot - Atsumina [12/06/14] Melt...
« Reply #51 on: June 17, 2012, 06:39:08 PM »
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OH MY GAWD! So Hot. But, Too bad. It's too short. Try to make it longer... next time. xDDDD
Agree~ agree~  :yep: :yep: :yep:
I want more~  :inlove: :inlove:

Thx XD

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Re: One Shot - Atsumina [12/06/14] Melt...
« Reply #52 on: June 24, 2012, 09:09:21 AM »
Take care of you

[22.50pm]



“Tadaima…”




“…..”


She know, Her beloved still not come back now. Takamina walk slowly to living room, sit on couch and think about each other. They not have much time to spend together. She always busy about AKB and Acchan also work hard as Actress. It long time ago since Takamina moved to stay with her Ace and take care each other when they at home only. Today, Acchan go to filming the final scene. Takamina send msg to her ‘where are you? I arrived at home and raining now. take care yourself, ok?’ and she replied she’ll come back late tonight cuz have party after filming. you can sleep first. Takamina decided to go to her room and prepare for tomorrow because tomorrow is team A stage  and must go to rehearse early morning.







[0.00am]



“Tadaima..”

Acchan come back now and Takamina hear she walk passed outside her room to other room then.
She walk to Acchan room, see her change her cloth and lay on her bed already.

“hmm.. I should sleep too, right?” Takamina giggle a bit as walk back to her room.


In morning at practice room


During break time mariko and haruna walk toward Chibi captain who sit on the stage.

“Takamina, Can you and Acchan go to dinner with us today?” mariko sit next to Haruna and drink water

“yeah, sure. Why?”

“I think I’ll go to karaoke after dinner and Yuuchan said she want to meet acchan” said Haruna

“You tell miichan already? Nyanro”

“Ah! Yabai.. I forgot it” haruna say before runs to dress room

“I think I’ll call to Acchan too. She might woke up now”

“you really in love, minami” mariko smrik

“mouuu..” Takamina smile as walking to dress room


Tut…. Tut …. Tut…-



“um..moshi.. moshi..”

“are.. oi~ acchan wake up, wake up!”

“Takamina… nani..”

“Mariko invite you and me to dinner today. Can you go with us?”

“…..”

“Acchan,” no replied. Takamina can hear her breathing but sound weird, making her feeling uneasy now.

“Are you ok? Atsuko… hey, can you hear me?”



“Minami…”

“I’m here. Are you ok?” Takamina say sound worried

“I’m alright, just.. just feeling quite cold but… I’m ok”

“and then.. you want to go dinne-” suddenly, Takamina hear Acchan cough heavy and sound like her phone fell and disconnect. Takamina runs fast from theater and call to mariko, tell her about acchan and tell togachan She can’t show today.

Takamina open the door’s apartment and runs faster to Acchan’s room, found she lost consciousness and laid on the floor side of her bed as heavy breathing  and sweating. Takamina pulled her up to embrace. She look so tired. Takamina caught her forehead, It very burn up. She have a fever.
“Atsuko, Atsuko..” no responded from her. Takamina lifted her up and laid on her bed, gave wet towel to wiped sweat and take it on her forehead and take blanket cover her body. Takamina sit on bed and rest her back on head of the bed beside her Ace. Look at her Ace tired face. She still heavy cough and look in pain..

“It hurt me when I see you like this… it because I’m not take care of you good enough. gomen ne, atsuko..”



-Pov Atsuko-



Yesterday, After party. I runs into raining. It very cold from raining and winter. I know she’ll sleep already because today team A have stage in evening and must go to rehearse early. I don’t want to bothering her and today I remember Minami call me. I just woke up. We talking and my chest felt heavy in sudden. I felt dizzy, my head spin and everything became dark and I lost consciousness. I don’t know how long I fall asleep but woke up and found myself on bed and in embrace. my eyes still blurry. I remember this scent and warm from her body. I’m wrapping my arms around her, hug her tight. My chest felt tight and sore a little. I gave a weak cough..

“Gomen ne.. I can't take care of you good enough.” said Minami

I grabbing her cloth as shook my head. Minami hold my hand and squeeze it gently

“how long I fall asleep? What time?”

“You sleep 3 or 4 hours and now 18.15pm, my sleepy head” Minami smile as patting my head

“EH!! But your stage- urghh..*cough* *cough*” I said in half shout as got up. my head in pain suddenly and my chest feel tight again

“Atsuko!!” Minami got up as pulled me to hug and rubbing my back. I grabbing cloth on my chest, squeeze it tight. It very hard to breathing.

“hiaz… hiaz…”

“You should rest more. Your fever still heavy.”  I nod and close my eyes to sleep into her comfortable embrace again.



Once I open my eyes after short sleep. I see her sit on side of my bed and wiped my face by towel

“seems your fever got better then. here, water and medicine” Minami give me some water and medicine.She help me to got up. I look at her face and smirk

“My hand hug myself now. Can you do it to me~ minami”

“ehhh then what should I do? Don’t kidding me, BakaAce”  Minami pout as her face become pink

“I don’t know.. urgh..” I hold my head and squeeze it  a little. I just want to kidding mouu..

I feel her sit on my bed. She cubbing my cheek. I look up to her as her lips press on mind gently. My mouth open as I feel water pass from her mouth.
Minami push me down on bed as we still kissing. I warpping my arms around her. She stop kissing and look into my eyes, wiped sweat on my forehead softly.

“perv..” I say as feel blushing

“eh.. why??”

“you can hug me instead and I’ll eat by myself but you.. ba.. baka..” minami smile

“Do you still headache? TsudereAce”

“No. I feeling better now and I’m not tsudere” I pout. Minami giggle and kiss me gently again
before change to kiss passionate as unbutton my cloth and her hand slide on my soft skin.



“Minami no Baka..” I say as bite her lower lip

“huh? why?”

“I’m still sick a little and I not have much energy in this condition but you do this to me..”

“I just.. want to change your cloth” She whisper as kiss my cheek. I feel blushing hard. Minami got up and pull me up together.
She take my cloth off and cover my body with blanket. I grab her shirt  before she go to give new cloth for me, look at her with puppy eyes.

“I don’t want new cloth..”

“but you sweat so much. You have to change your cloth”

“No..”

“ehhhh”

“I… I want you” I say as look down, tried to hide my redden face. She sit next to me and pulled me to her embrace


“what do you want me to do? My princess”

“Hug me. I want to feel your warmth”

“then?” I bite my lower lip



“just take your cloth off too…”

“huh!?”I smirk as I see her blushing and look away

“mouuu~ I just want to hug you, minami. don’t think something perv. I can’t do it now” I pout again but she push me down on bed again
and give me deepen kiss, look into my eyes. She kiss my cheek and rubbing her cheek on mind. I warpping arms around her waist


“I can do it..” Minami say as stoke my hair from my face and kiss my forehead gently

“always perv.” I giggle as kiss her cheek and her nose. She rest her forehead on mind. She close her eyes and smile as our nose touching.
Her hand cherish my cheek as she move to kiss, suck my neck and her hand slide on my soft skin again



“Atsuko..”







“just do it gently, minami”

"okey.."

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« Last Edit: June 24, 2012, 10:48:24 AM by Kiiz »

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Re: One Shot - Atsumina [12/06/24] Take care of you
« Reply #53 on: June 24, 2012, 09:18:54 AM »
Takamina is a good nurse hehe


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Re: One Shot - Atsumina [12/06/24] Take care of you
« Reply #55 on: June 24, 2012, 09:49:16 AM »
Gah!!! what a sweet OS..  :luvluv1: got me rolling on my bed!!!  :nya:


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Re: One Shot - Atsumina [12/06/24] Take care of you
« Reply #57 on: June 24, 2012, 09:55:22 PM »
What a perver nurse :D Acchan likes her privete nusery :D

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Re: One Shot - Atsumina [12/06/24] Take care of you
« Reply #58 on: June 27, 2012, 02:38:50 PM »
 :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: So sweet TakAcchan  :wub: :wub: :wub:
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Re: One Shot - Atsumina [12/06/24] Take care of you
« Reply #59 on: April 01, 2015, 12:30:35 AM »
I love the Atsumina  :heart:
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