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« on: December 22, 2011, 09:26:35 AM »
Fixing a broken heart

I’m in love. I Takahashi Minami have finally found someone who loves me for me. Everyone wants to know how it all happened. Well let my untold love story be told. Who would’ve of thought it would be her in the end…

   It’s been 6 years that we’ve known each other, going on 7. Throughout all these years, we’ve been through so much together. She has always been there by my side and vice versa. I knew that I loved her because of that, but I didn’t know it would turn out to be a different kind of love. I thought she only sees me as a friend but I guess she sees me more than that. Multiple times she tried throwing hints at me but I was too stupid to realize it until one day I had an interview in Taiwan. One of the fans asked me; “What did you think of the marriage proposal from Acchan?” I was shocked to hear that she actually felt that way about me. I was more than happy that our feelings were mutual. After that day, I spent almost every day with her. Time has passed and we grew closer than ever, she became my first girlfriend. We we’re in love and so happy but somehow I think she was beginning to get tired of me.

   Due to the different jobs we had to take, we kind of grew apart. She spends most of her days with Yuko now since they always get stuck with the same job. I always ask myself why Aki-P does this to me. But I guess it’s for my own good, to learn and develop more in this industry. A couple of days ago it was announced that Akb will be joining in with Google+. I was content to know that I can read Acchan’s blog while being away from her. She’s so cute when she updates about me, I feel so loved. At the same time I feel like such a stalker reading her blog every day, hahahahhahah. Then one day my heart sank when I see that she puts hers and Yuko picture as wallpaper on her cellphone. Why not me? Lately she’s been acting different; she acts so distance towards me. I feel so jealous when I see her write about Yuko, slowly I feel like I’m being replaced.

   It’s been a week, we’re going to hold a Kohaku singing battle streaming live today. I’m so glad she’s on my team, that way I can spend more time with her. It was really fun. Final performance was up and Acchan had messed up on stage forgetting the lyrics but omg I didn’t care because she looks so kawaii, that made up for it but I still felt pretty bad for her; I can tell by her face that she was really upset that she let her fans down. Everything was finally finished and wrapped up so I decided to go comfort her backstage. I brought flowers in a vase for her, I was happy to give it to her until I opened the door I froze. I opened the door to Yuko and Acchan lip locking. There was a heavy feeling in my chest. My heart is in so much pain. Suddenly there was nothing but the sound of glass shattering from the vase I dropped, I couldn’t believe what I’ve seen with my own two eyes. How could she do this to me? Two people who I loved most betrayed me. I was angry and hurt so I ran out, balling my eyes out.  “Wait!”Acchan screamed but I didn’t stop, what was there to wait for? When I know it’s all coming to an end.   

   The same day I had a phone call from Miichan, the crew are having dinner tonight to celebrate the successful event. Everyone will be there including you know who. I didn’t want to go but I also didn’t want to feel like I’m disrespecting the crew. So I went, I tried to act like nothing happened but I did avoid Acchan and Yuko. The two kept staring; I could see Yuko nudging Acchan to talk to me in private. “Ano..Minami, can we talk outside just the two of us?” she walked up to me and asked. I agree to. “You don’t have worry about me, I’ll be fine” I said before she can say anything. “I’m sorry Minami, but we can still be friends.” She says to me. “It’s better if we don’t speak at all.” I replied coldly, and then I ignored her and walked back in. Honestly it’s killing me to know that she wants to leave, deep down inside it cuts like a knife but I’m too proud to show it. I’m not going to beg her to stay because I got my pride. I don’t want to cry in front of everyone so I decided to leave early making up an excuse to help my mom. I held a taxi in the rain looking for some place to ease the pain. I sobbed and sobbed in the taxi then I told him to make a stop at the park, there I sat on the bench still crying my eyes out. Then like an answer prayer, I turned around and found her there. “Tomochin?”

   “Minami…” she whispered my name. “Come here.” she pulled me into a hug. She caressed me tightly as I cried in her arms. “It will be okay Minami, let it all out.”  She says moving the hair in my face out of the way as I let out all my frustration. Out of all people, Tomochin was here… I would have never guessed. Weeks have passed, Tomochin has been there for me, comforting me; making me feel like myself again. After practice we would hang out, laugh and play. She helps me take my mind off everything. When I’m with her, nothing else exists. I’m slowly falling for her...she really knows how to fix a broken heart. Her emotional tool cured me. I still can’t believe that I fell so deep and I left my heart so open. I was such a fool but now I’m sure she’s the one for me, so I’m opening it up again. She tore down my wall without realizing it. Today I will confess my love for her.

   “Tomo..I love you.” I said holding her hands. “I want you to be my girlfriend.” Waiting for an answer, I was nervous… that she will reject me but finally she responded. “I love you too Minami from the gecko.” She said giving me her beautiful smile. “Eh..why didn’t you tell me this before?” I asked her confused but happily. “Because I knew you loved Acchan.” She said in a low voice. “Now that I think about it, it was not love but lust. But this right here, this is true love.” I said then pulling her in for a kiss, it was my first real kiss, it was wet and sloppy but she helps guide me and laughed at me. With Acchan it was always a peck so it didn’t count. We both kissed passionately, and then she pulls away and blushes. “Minami, not in public. The crew can see us.” “So?? “ I chuckled. “I want our love to be known.” Tomochin begins to blush mad hard and it’s too cute! I can’t take it anymore so I pinched her cheeks.

    Just in case you guys were wondering… Atsuko she ended up being alone. She regretted leaving me but I’m glad she did. I wouldn’t have found love if it wasn’t for her. And for Yuko she only came to Acchan as a rebound because Haruna spent so much time with Mariko. But now Yuko made up with Haruna and Mariko is with Miichan.
 
THE END.
 :twisted: PLEASE DON'T KILL ME...I LIKE TAKATOMO PWAHAHAHAHAH
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Re: One shots (FIXING A BROKEN HEART) 12/22/11
« Reply #1 on: December 22, 2011, 09:34:59 AM »
I like TakaTomo...  :luvluv1:  but you separated my AtsuMina!!!! :scolding:  ARGH!!!!  :temper:

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Re: One shots (FIXING A BROKEN HEART) 12/22/11
« Reply #2 on: December 22, 2011, 09:57:20 AM »
WOW ! TakaTomo! :tama-lotsaluv:
You know what? I like it! :tama-bigheart:
But poor Acchan!!!

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Re: One shots (FIXING A BROKEN HEART) 12/22/11
« Reply #3 on: December 22, 2011, 10:05:40 AM »
At the end, each pairs end up happily except Acchan.. awww....

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Re: One shots (FIXING A BROKEN HEART) 12/22/11
« Reply #4 on: December 22, 2011, 10:12:34 AM »
Oh my, at first I tot you are going to write Atsumina then
it became AtsuYuu and somehow this hurts Takamina :cry: .
Then a sudden TakaTomo, feel a bit happy for her.
In the end, everyone is in pair KojiYuu, MariMii, TakaTomo except Acchan, this is sad. :cry: [size=78%] [/size]

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Re: One shots (FIXING A BROKEN HEART) 12/22/11
« Reply #5 on: December 22, 2011, 01:24:33 PM »
Woah! Nice OS :thumbsup

I also love Takatomo XD

Thanks for the update :thumbup :thumbup

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Re: One shots (FIXING A BROKEN HEART) 12/22/11
« Reply #6 on: December 22, 2011, 04:26:08 PM »
Thanks for reading guys. I tried to make takatomo cuz its pretty rare. Hehe when I wrote this I felt sad too  :cry:

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Re: One shots (FIXING A BROKEN HEART) 12/22/11
« Reply #7 on: December 22, 2011, 04:53:56 PM »
sorry i dont read all of this fic because my heart hurts T_T you separate my atsumina... but i think its good to make another coupler, nice try.. but meybe this fic could have a warning sign like "takatomo fic" or something..

I need to stand up and clap my hands for this fic, you made it too fast.. that concert was a few days ago!!

keep going :D

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Re: One shots (FIXING A BROKEN HEART) 12/22/11
« Reply #8 on: December 22, 2011, 08:28:49 PM »
Oh a nice Takatomo ^^
Poor Acchan, being a rebond T_T

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One shots (In love with best friend) 1/10/12
« Reply #9 on: January 10, 2012, 10:53:43 PM »
IN LOVE WITH MY BEST FRIEND


"Minami..where are you?.." Acchan stood outside in front of the cinema, waiting for her beloved best friend.Once again she was disappointed Takamina didn't keep her promise to show up on time.

"Sold out! In two more minutes the movie will start.” the ticket box guy announced.

Acchan was aggravated and began pacing back and forth, suddenly her phone rings. She picks it up and it was Takamina. "Where are you!? The movie is about to start!" Acchan shouted through the other line."

"Calm down Atsuko I'm already here, I just can't find you through this big crowd." Acchan was upset. She knew that Takamina was lying because she was the only person standing outside the theater."Wait! I think I see you now.”

"Okay, what am I wearing then?" Acchan questioned her.

"Uh..uh-uh.." Takamina stuttered. She was unable to answer because she was trying to stall time before she got there.

*Sighs* "You always let me down." she whispered before hanging up.

"Hello? Hello!? Atsuko, are you there!?" Hearing no response, she knew her pal was mad at her for lying.



"Senpai what are you doing here by yourself?" an unknown voice called out to Acchan from a distance. She didn't know who it was until that person got a bit closer.

"Oh! Hi Sayanee, I'm actually here waiting for someone...how about you?"

"I was doing some shopping around the area."

"Are you doing anything else today?"

"Not really Senpai, I'm just strolling around."

"Well I have an extra ticket, would you care to join me?"

"Eh! Really Senpai!?" Sayanee shouts in excitement."But what about the person you're waiting for?"

"Honestly I don't think she's even going to show up." Acchan said in a sad voice.

"Are you talking about Takamina-san?"

"Uhn.." she  replied with her eyes trailing the ground in front of her.

“Would she mind?"

"No, I don’t think so. I was making her come with me so we can spend quality time together because we rarely get to see each other anymore. But now I don’t even want to see her or talk to her."

"Aw, don’t say that. I’m sure she has her reason.” Sayanee smiled. Her smile was contagious so Acchan smiles too. Just as the two girls made their way inside, Takamina happened to show up at the same time in a cab.

“Eh! Who’s that girl Acchan is with? Somehow I feel hurt when I see her with someone else besides me.This unknown feeling...what is it?” Takamina thought.



“Excuse me sir! I’m here to meet a friend. She just walked inside and she is holding my ticket.”

“I’m sorry but I can’t let you in unless you have a ticket in hand. The girl who just walked in only had two tickets and she brought someone else in with her.”

As soon as the guy told her that, She felt her blood boiling inside of her.

“Why would she ask me to come if she ends up going with someone else! I guess it’s my fault too but still, I made it here after all.”

After that Takamina went straight home. She called Acchan’s cell phone non-stop to tell her that she’s sorry but the calls kept going to voicemail. So she finally gave up and went to bed.




Next Morning at Practice Aki-P announced that NMB will be collaborating with AKB in a performance, so they had to practice together.“You girls are their seniors; please look after them.” He stated.When the announcement was finished, Takamina started looking for Acchan. It was a challenge to find her today since there were so many girls in one studio. Just when she spotted her she sees her with Sayanee and two other members.



“Sayanee your boobs are so cute! Can I squeeze it?” Acchan giggled.

“Sure Senpai! Since you showed me a good time last night, you can do whatever you want.” Sayanee laughed.

“Let’s call you Oppai-chan!” Acchan chuckled giving it a squeeze.

“Ehh..What did you guys do last night?” Milky asked concern.

“We went to see a movie together.” Sayanee answers happily.

“What! Without me!?” Minegishi pouted. “Oh I get it. It was a date! Wasn’t it?”

“No,no..” Acchan replies and blushes and so does Sayanee.

From Afar Takamina overheard everything. “So it was Sayanee who was with her..Gah, why am I feeling jealous? This never happens with any other members.Why is it happening now??? Do I like Atsuko or something? UGH.” After eavesdropping, Takamina decided to just stay away. “She seems so happy with her new friend.”



“You guys want to hang out after practice?” Sayanee asks Acchan and Milky.

“I don’t want to be the third wheel!” Milky pouted.

“Third wheel? It’s not a date Milky. But I guess if you feel that way you can ask someone else to come.”

“Who are you going to ask to be your date?” Acchan teased Milky.“Erm…” she hesitated to answer.

“Maeda-san, do you think Takamina-san will say yes to me if I asked?” she asks shyly turning red.

To her surprise, Acchan was shocked that she wants to ask Takamina. Feeling a bit jealous, she mumbled “Why…Takamina? She’s no fun.”

“What was that Maeda-San?” Milky asked looking confused.

“Oh. I said I’m sure she will say yes.”

“Oh Okay! I will ask her now.” Milky went over and asked Takamina to hang out with her and the other two.

“I guess Acchan didn’t tell her about our quarrel. It will be awkward but I can't say no to her.” Takamina thought.

After practice they couldn’t decide what to do so they went to the ocean to enjoy the nice summer breeze. Still Acchan didn’t say a word to Takamina at all and
avoided her the whole time. Milky on the other hand kept clinging to her arms like they were a couple.

Suddenly Sayanee stopped for some icecream at the stands.“What flavor do you guys want?” she asked, so she can order for them.

“Chocolate!” Acchan and Takamina says at the same time. Takamina smiles at Acchan while Acchan glares back at her.

“Strawberry!” Milky answered last. They sat on two different benches enjoying their icecream. Sayanee on one with Acchan and the other with the other two.

“Sayanee, how does your tastes?” Acchan asked.

“It’s really good, you want to try it?”

“Sure!” Sayanee then feeds Acchan with her own spoon.

“What the!!!!! Indirect kiss” Takamina screamed in her head. “Argh..That damn Sayanee!”Suddenly Takamina interrupted. “Acchan! Taste mine! It’s really good too.” Takamina gestured.

“Um..you guys have the same flavor.” Sayanee chuckled.

Acchan tried to hold her laughter inside so that Takamina couldn’t see.

“Oh.. I forgot.” Takamina puts her fail face on and went back to her seat.



“Takamina-san, I have a question.”

“Hmm? What is it Milky?”

“Ano..Is it possible for two girls to be together?”

“Ehhhhh! What do you mean by that??” Takamina eyes widened wandering towards Acchan who sat across from them on another bench.

“Well you know...like being a real couple.”

“Uh… I guess it is possible if two people feel the same way about one another.”

“Like how you feel about Maeda-san right?”

“What?!” She shouted almost choking then spitting out her icecream.

“Hehe it’s so obvious, I can tell by the way you look at her. Most of the time, your attention was on her and you seem jealous. And I can see that
she really wants to talk to you too.”

“Really? I never thought about it that way.”

“Uhn..you should stop denying your feelings and tell her how you feel.”

“But how do I do that?” Takamina finally accepting her feelings towards Acchan.

“Just be honest.”

“Hey, what the..why am I taking advice from someone younger than me.” Takamina thought. “But I guess Milky is right. That explains all these weird feelings I’ve been having.”she thought to herself.

“Milky, do you feel that way about someone?”

“Of course I do, that’s why I asked.” She blushes and turns away.

“Who is it?”“Sa-sa-yanee” Milky stuttered.

“Oh..WHAT!? Then why are you sitting over here watching your girl have fun with someone else?”

“I can say the same for you” Milky chuckled. Takamina realized she was being hypocritical and face palms herself. “Okay then, in the count of 3 we will snatch both of them away!”

“Okay, good  idea!” Milky shouted excitedly.

“3”

“2”

“1”

“Go!”

Takamina grabbed Acchan by  her wrist dragging her while she tries to resist.

“Let go of me!” Acchan yells.

“No! I won’t ever let go of you. You belong with me.”

“What?” Acchan seem surprise that Takamina is taking the initiative for the first time.

“Where are we going?!”

"To the ocean.”

“We are here!”

“I meant by the waters!!”

Takamina cupped Acchan cheeks and stare into her eyes. “Look Atsuko, I’m sorry. I really mean it this time. Something came up last minute yesterday; Aki-P assigned me to a photoshoot. And you know how that goes because you have the same job title as me. Lately I know I’ve been breaking my promise to you and I feel really bad about it. I should be there for you more when you need me but I’m never. . As a best friend, I fail but now I want to be more than that. I promise I'll be good to you. It was actually good thing I was late yesterday, if I hadn’t seen you walking inside with someone else I wouldn’t have realized my feelings for you."

Acchan couldn’t help but smile. “It’s about time.”

“Wait…Are you saying you feel the same way about me?” Takamina grins.

“It doesn’t take a genius to figure that out.”

“Huh! So, you’ve been liking me for a while now?”

“Gosh, Takamina. You baka! I tried hinting you for the last 6 years. How stupider can you get?” Acchan chuckled.

“Oh” Takamina chuckled. “So,does this mean you’re my girlfriend now?”

“No.”

“Acchan!” Takamina whines.

“I’m just kidding of course I am, if you ask the proper way.”

“Grrr,Why do you always have to be so complicated?”

“If you don’t like it, you can run away now before things get even more complicated.” Acchan laughed.

“No..no it’s fine! I love my tsundere princess the way she is.” Takamina pulls acchan into an embrace.“But you have to stop grabbing oppai-chan breast, promise?”

Acchan just laughed really hard. “I did that on purpose, I seen you walking by when I did that.”

“You brat!!!” Takamina starts chasing Acchan around until they got tired.

Now Takamina and Acchan are sitting by the waters, the sun was about to set. It was such a romantic atmosphere, they watch as couples were walking by hand in hand.

“Should we hold hands to?” Acchan hesitated to ask. Takamina suddenly intertwined her fingers with Acchan.

“It’s almost time.”

“Time for what?” Acchan asked confused.

“For the tide to change. It's a little ritual, I have to watch the high tide change whenever something major is about to change in my life.“

When Acchan heard those words from Takamina she blushed like there is no tomorrow.

The tide finally changes and Takamina leaned in for her first kiss.

“Wait..I don’t know how.” Acchan pouted.

“Shh..I’ll teach you.” Takamina put her lips onto her girlfriends mouth to shut her up.

END.



Atsumina is back!  :nervous
« Last Edit: January 11, 2012, 12:19:50 AM by Loveforever »

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« Reply #10 on: January 10, 2012, 11:35:58 PM »
Quote
“Wait..I don’t know how.” Acchan pouted.

“Shh..I’ll teach you.” Takamina put her lips onto her girlfriends mouth to shut her up.
Gah!!  :on lol: I'm rolling on my bed imagining this scene.. Kyaaa!!!!  :mon lovelaff:  Taka you so bold!!!  :mon lol:

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Re: One shots (In love with my best friend) updated 1/10/12
« Reply #11 on: January 11, 2012, 03:37:49 AM »
Oh! This OS is so gud :D
Gotta Thanks Milky and Sayanee for that XD
Takamina as clueless as ever about Atsuko's feeling :)
I love the last part :wub:

Thanks for the Update :grin:
It's so gud! :thumbup

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« Reply #12 on: January 11, 2012, 05:19:20 AM »
Man, Taka fails in almost everything: lying, reading hints.. well, except one: "teaching" :lol:

Any chance you'll write SayaMilky's part after Milky snatched Sayanee away? I'm a bit curious about that one... :grin:
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« Reply #13 on: January 11, 2012, 05:35:49 AM »
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“Wait..I don’t know how.” Acchan pouted.

“Shh..I’ll teach you.” Takamina put her lips onto her girlfriends mouth to shut her up.
Gah!!  :on lol: I'm rolling on my bed imagining this scene.. Kyaaa!!!!  :mon lovelaff:  Taka you so bold!!!  :mon lol:

jaja me too.. come takaboy kiss your wifey like a boss :D

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Re: One shots (In love with my best friend) updated 1/10/12
« Reply #14 on: January 11, 2012, 02:39:45 PM »
love this fics....   :yossi:

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Re: One shots (In love with my best friend) updated 1/10/12
« Reply #15 on: January 12, 2012, 04:46:00 PM »
Man, Taka fails in almost everything: lying, reading hints.. well, except one: "teaching" :lol:

Any chance you'll write SayaMilky's part after Milky snatched Sayanee away? I'm a bit curious about that one... :grin:

lol I don't really know much about them, i was only planning to use them as side characters hehe. but maybe i'll give it a try. :nervous

ps. - thanks for reading guys !i'm glad you enjoyed it  :grin:

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Re: One shots (In love with my best friend) updated 1/10/12
« Reply #16 on: January 12, 2012, 10:53:05 PM »
Yay awesome kohai!!!

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Re: One shots (Unexpected feelings) Early Valentine special updated 1/28/12
« Reply #17 on: January 28, 2012, 08:52:51 AM »
I know it's a little bit early but happy valentines day just in case i won't be on here  :nervous

"Unexpected feelings"

“Looks like Acchan found her a new midget to play with.”  Miichan chuckled.

Takamina glanced over to the two girls who were acting silly backstage, having fun getting scolded by none other than their producer Akimoto Yasushi.

“Why are you telling me this?  Like I care.” Takamina replies, showing that she’s irritated.

“Those two have been spending a lot of time together lately, aren’t you going to do something about it?”

“What for?”

“Seriously, Takamina. Why did you turn her down? When you know exactly how she feels about you.”

“Shut up! It’s none of your business!” she shouted with an annoyed face.

“Calm down, why all of a sudden you’re so worked up?”

Takamina didn’t respond but just stared disappointingly at the ground.

“Eh! Don’t tell me you’re getting jealous! ” Minegishi teased.

“Why would I be !?!?!” she shouted back.

“Hahah chill out Bakamina, you’re such an idiot to not realize your own feelings by now.” She smiled and walked away to join the other two girls.

“Psh.. that brat doesn’t know what she’s talking about.” Takamina muttered.



*Flashback*

“Just go and confess to her, I’m sure she likes you too.” Mariko suggested to Acchan .

“Are you sure I should? I don’t want to scare her away.”

“Don’t worry, I’m rooting for you! And if she breaks your heart, I’ll break her face.”

“Mariko!!!” Acchan wailed.

“Hehe, you know I’m kidding. But imagine if that midget tries to kiss you. She’ll have to tip toe, hahahaha.”

“Don’t say such things!” her face starts to heat up.
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“I… I..”

“I, what?”  Takamina smiles waiting for Acchan to say what she wanted to say.

“I .. like you Takamina.” She quickly answers shyly turning away.

“Haha of course you do. I’m your bestfriend! I like you too.” Takamina laughed.

“No, not like that..”

Takamina scratches the back of her head, feeling a bit confused.

“I like you more than a friend, please accept my feelings.” Acchan says without any hesitation.

Suddenly there was a long pause between the two.. The room was quiet; Acchan heard nothing but the sound of her own heartbeat, thumping loudly and hard. Slowly it decreases when she heard those 4 unbearable words.

“Gomen ne,  Acchan. I can’t.”

Tears swelled up in her eyes, as a single tear drop falls onto her cheek. Takamina can see the pain shooting from Acchan’s eyes.  She looked away because she couldn’t stand to see her bestfriend hurt. Especially knowing she’s the reason behind it.

“Can you look me in the eyes and tell me that you don’t feel the same way Takamina?”

 “Look Acchan, I can’t think about love right now.  We have our career to look forward to.”

“But, honestly.. How do you feel about me?” she sniffle her nose trying to hold back her tears.

“I can’t say that I don’t like you, but I’m not sure of my feelings either.” Takamina tries to say it in a non-harsh way.

“I’ll give you some time to think about it.. I won’t give up that easily.  I promise I won’t give up on you.” She says confidently. “I will win you over, someday.”

*Flashback ends*




“Ne, Yuko.. Valentine’s day tomorrow, what are you getting for Nyan Nyan?”

“I’m going to make honmei chocolate!” she grins widely.

“Eh, me too! There’s nothing better than chocolate from the heart.” Miichan smiles.

“What about you Acchan?”

“I don’t know what to get her…”

“Hey, why don’t you save some money and make honmei chocolate with us.” Yuko suggested.

“That’s a great idea!” Miichan shouted in joy.

“But, I don’t know how to make it..”

“Don’t worry, we’ll teach you how.”

After a photo-shoot session, the three girls went to the 7/11 convenience store to buy ingredients and supplies. They decided to make the chocolate at Acchan’s apartment since she lives close by. 2 hours has passed and they finally finished. After all they kept messing up batch after batch.

“Ah, I feel accomplished.” Acchan says proudly setting the heart boxed chocolate on the counter.
 
“Yeah, I’m exhausted.”  Miichan adds.

*Knock knock*

“Eh..who could that be?  Yuko can please get the door while I use the bathroom?”

“Sure.”

“Ohayooooo!” Mariko barged in without any invitation. Miichan quickly hid the chocolate she made for her underneath the kitchen counter and runs into Acchan’s bedroom.

“Mariko, what are you doing here so sudden?”

“What do you mean? I can’t be here?” She trolled. “I came here to hear the good news.”

“What good news?”

“Takamina and Acchan of course.” She chuckled.

“Oh..you didn’t hear about it?”

“Nani nani!?”

“Um..Takamina rejected her. She didn’t tell you about it? She’s really heartbroken about it but she vows not to give up…” she whispers loudly enough for Mariko to hear.

“WHAT!?!?!” Mariko shouted. “That unpleasant child!” Mariko was upset because she felt like she was responsible for it.

“Is that the honmei chocolate made for Takamina?” She asked Yuko pointing to the kitchen counter.

“Yeah, cool isn’t it?”

“Yeah..” Mariko snickered evilly.
 
With Yuko finishing up her chocolate for Kojiharu, Acchan still using the bathroom and Miichan hiding in the bed room...Mariko took the chance to tamper with Takamina’s chocolate, while nobody’s paying attention.

Meanwhile across town…

“Takamina, are you getting anything for Acchan?” Haruna asks.

“Why? Do I have to??!” she shouted back. “You guys have to stop teasing me about her! I don’t like her!!!”

“Well I thought because she’s making you honmei chocolate, you will be giving her something to..”

“Huh? How do you know about this?”

“Miichan told me because she’s making some for Mariko.”

“Honmei..chocolate? If I accept that, wouldn’t it mean I’ll be accepting her feelings?”

“Uhn..”    

“I can’t accept it then..”

“Why not?”

“Because..I don’t know how I feel about her yet; I don’t want her hurt again because of me. It’s best if I try to avoid her tomorrow.”

“ I see… wait here for a minute I gotta make a phone call.”

“ok”

Haruna runs off to make a phone call to Yuko. “Are you with Acchan right now?”

“Yeah, why?”

“Takamina says she won’t accept her chocolate, do something about it Yuuchan!”

“Hai hai, I’ll think of a plan but promise you will cooperate.”

“If it means my friends happiness then yes I will.”

“Jaa, see you tomorrow then.”

Next day.

“Yo Takamina!”

“What do you want now Yuko?” she asked aggravated.

“Acchan’s a nice girl, don’t you think?”

“Yeah, and your point is?”

“You don’t mind me asking her out do you?”

Takamina was shocked.. Her eyes widened in dissatisfaction, all of a sudden she had an unfamiliar feeling within her. Her chest abruptly tightens up. “What is this feeling?” she thought to herself.

“Go ahead! Why are you asking me for!?” she yells back furiously.

“Are you sure? If so..that’s good, I can have her all to myself now.”

“Of course, I’m sure! It’s not like I will ever like her or anything!” she screamed facing the other way trying to hide her jealousy rage.

Out of nowhere there was an awkward silence.. all you can hear was something that fell to the ground. It was a chocolate box. Unexpectedly Acchan was standing behind Yuko with the box in hand ready to hand it over, but when she heard everything.. she ran off and started crying.
 
“Acchan! Wait, I can explain!” Takamina picked up the box and start running after her.
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“So this was your plan all along?” Haruna asked Yuko.

“Yeah, it worked didn’t it?”

“For a second I was scared of losing you to Acchan.” Haruna chuckled.

“No, never...you’re the only one I’m after.” Yuko smiles sheepishly.
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“Acchan! Wait! Acchan!!!” Takamina  finally caught up to her and pulled her into a hug from behind.

“No, don’t.. You don’t need to. I heard everything already… from now on, I’ll give up on you.” She says trying to catch a breath from crying.

Takamina felt a sharp pain in her chest… “WHAT IS THIS!? WHY AM I FEELING THIS WAY!?” her conscious shouted. It took her a minute but then it hit her..it made her realize some things.

“No…please don’t give up on me.“ Takamina build up the courage to say..and begins to sob also.

Acchan was stunned by her reaction. “Does this mean she’s finally accepting my feelings?” she thought to herself.

“I love you Acchan..” Takamina made her face her way, and planted a valentine kiss on her lips.

Acchan pushes her off and yells at her.. “I can’t believe you made me work so hard for this!” she slightly punches Takamina chest with both hands.

“Gomen! Gomen, is this how you treat the person you like?” Takamina smirked.

“Shut up..if you want to make it up to me..eat my honmei chocolate right now.”

“Is it okay if I run to the store to get some pills first?” Takamina teased.

Acchan made a stinky face at her.

“Fine fine..”

Takamina opens up the box and on that heart shape chocolate, the frosted word “Stupid Midget” was written on it. They both looked at each other confused and started laughing like crazy.


“DAMN THAT MARITROLL!!!”  :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:


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Re: One shots (unexpected feelings) early valentine special updated 1/28/12
« Reply #18 on: January 28, 2012, 09:27:33 AM »
Gotta love that Maritroll! :grin:

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Re: One shots (unexpected feelings) early valentine special updated 1/28/12
« Reply #19 on: January 28, 2012, 11:47:59 AM »
Instead of words written on the chocolate as Happy Valentine Day it turns out to be Stupid Midget. Nice troll from Mariko to punish Takamina.

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