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Re: One shots (unexpected feelings) early valentine special updated 1/28/12
« Reply #20 on: January 28, 2012, 02:52:11 PM »
Good Job Mariko sama :thumbsup

Thanks for the fic! :D
I like it~~ XD

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Re: One shots (unexpected feelings) early valentine special updated 1/28/12
« Reply #21 on: January 28, 2012, 04:53:04 PM »
Hahahaha Mariko!!!!
Good job Yuko!

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Re: One shots (unexpected feelings) early valentine special updated 1/28/12
« Reply #22 on: January 28, 2012, 07:06:38 PM »
ATSUMINA!  :gmon nya: Lol, Another Misunderstanding.. But, SOLVED by Takamidget! :tama-lotsaluv: Btw, Nice Fanfics there 'Love Forever'! I'll wait for your upcomind updates! :hee:
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One shots (WEDDING DRESS) 2/10 ATSUMINA
« Reply #23 on: February 11, 2012, 02:52:08 AM »
Hello everybody! I was inspired by the song "Wedding dress" by Taeyang or Kevin you could say.. AND THESE AKBINGO PICTURES. Ignore the black bold letters.. they're just the lyrics of the song. :roll:



"WEDDING DRESS"


“Acchan look!” Yuko shouted to me across the living room and into the kitchen where I stood.I was trying to fix something to eat for Nyan Nyan and Miichan at the time but I guess they can wait.

“Hurry, before you miss it!” Miichan yelled over at me again. 

“Okay, okay. I’m coming.” I rushed to the living room.

On the TV headline news: “Takahashi Minami, former member of the all-girl group band AKB48 is rumored to get married this Saturday. Longtime boyfriend
Jacob Greenwood (Joy-san) Japan’s most handsome model proposed to her 2 weeks ago. So why the rush? Want the scoop? Stay tune.” 

Am I dreaming? Is this really happening? Inside it’s tearing me apart little by little. It felt like something just pierced through my heart. But I have no one to blame but myself.

*Flashback*

(Two years ago)

“Atsuko... I made up my mind.”

“About what?  Minami.”

“I’ve decided I want to become a solo artist.”

“Ah,souka!  that’s great news. I know Aki-P will love to write songs for you!” I smile sweetly to her.
 
“No..Atsuko, I mean solo as in not being in AKB anymore.”

“What..why??”

“Because… I want to fulfill the dream that my mother always wanted. Not just for her but for me too.”

“Minami…”

“Hmm? Why is that you don’t look so happy for me..”

“I am…but.”

“But what?”

“We won’t get to see each other much anymore.”

“That’s why I’m here.. to ask you to graduate with me Atsuko. That way you can also follow your dream to become an actress and we can finally be together with no rules.”

“Minami..I-i..”

“Atsuko, Please say you will..”

“I’m sorry Minami...I can’t. AKB is my second family.”

*Flashback ends*


“Acchan...are you okay?” Yuko asks me snapping me out of my trance.

“Uh..Of course I am.” I lied to them but in reality I’m dying inside.

“Hey did you guys get the text for Minami too?” Nyan Nyan asks all of us.

“Yeah, I did..” Miichan and Yuko answered.

“Check yours Acchan, I’m sure she texted you too.” Yuko said to me.

“Hai..” I hesitate to open up the text.

Text Message
To:  Acchan//Yuko//Miichan//NyanNyan
Subject: Forward text
Guys I’m sorry it’s last minute
but I would like to invite you guys
to my wedding, this Saturday.
I would have personally invited you
in person but my schedule is tight.
So I’m sorry, please forgive me. xD PLEASE.


When I read the text, I felt my heart stop. Why is it hurting me so much? Did I make the right choice to choose my career over love?  Seems just like yesterday we we’re together but now everything has changed. I broke her heart... I’m beginning to feel regret. Sometimes I still sit here and wonder, what if. Do you know that saying “You never know what you have until you lose it, and once you lose it, you can never get it back.” Well I’ve never imagined this happening to me in a million years but it is.




Baby all the times we've had, I've kept my feelings wrapped. I’ll always ask myself, how did I lose her heart. Your love was in my reach, but now, far far far gone. I never thought that I would fall fall fall this hard.




My heart can’t handle it anymore looking at that text. Just when I was about to set the phone down, the phone rang. I couldn’t move when I seen the caller ID. I just stood there staring at it ring.

Caller ID: Minami

“Acchan talk to her. Pick up your phone!” Miichan yelled at me. So I pick it up.

“Moshi moshi Atsuko.”

“Minami...”

“Ah, Atsuko! I miss you so much. Do you know that?”

“It’s because you never call.” I said to her in disappointment.

“Owh, Gomen! I’m just too busy these days. Ne do you miss me at all?”

“…… Why would you ask such a question, when you know the answers to it.”

“Ha..I don’t know? People change you know. Well… I called to ask you something.”

“What is it?”

“Would you do the honors of singing and playing the piano at my wedding?”

“I..i . ca-” I stutter

“Please… It would mean a lot to me coming from you.”

“Uh..okay.” I agree to but really I didn’t want to be at the wedding at all.

“Thanks so much Atsuko! I’ll see you then.”

*Hangs up*



I was afraid to tell you all the feelings in my heart. Thinking that if I told you, you and I would fall apart.I hesitated, and now our love is breakin'.'Cause you moved on and I'm still waiting.



Saturday is here… I’m riding to the wedding in a cab with Miichan, while Nyan Nyan and Yuko were already there first as bridesmaids.

“Atsuko, are you sure you’re okay?” Miichan asks me again.

“Why? Do I not look okay?”

“You don’t have to do this if you can’t go through with it.”

“No..I want to. I wasn’t there for her before but now I want to at least do something right for her.”

“You sure are strong Acchan, and for that I look up to you a lot.”

“What do you mean?”

“You can lie to everyone else, but you can’t lie to your own heart.”

“Let’s not talk about this right now. Let’s go inside, they’re waiting.”




Baby He won't ever love you like I do. Cause you should be my lady. I waited for so long to say to you. (Come back to me) It was so perfect in my dreams. Don't you know that I will always love you forever? But baby when those church bells ring, you know I wanted us to be there together.




We arrived at the church now, right away I went into my position near the alter. The groom has already made his way down the aisle waiting for his bride. I start to play the wedding theme song.. Finally the moment that everybody has been waiting for..the most gorgeous bride ever made her way down the aisle. That smile I’ve been longing for is now right in front of me. She looked so beautiful in that white dress. Just as expected, she hasn’t change a bit. She has a bow on her head... seeing that makes me happy. But then I think to myself…that should of been me holding her hands..that should of been me making her smile.. Is it too late now???




Now you're in your wedding dress. Now you're in your wedding dress. (How can he be the one) Now you're in your wedding dress. Now you're in your wedding dress.



“Do you take this woman to be your lawful wedded wife?”

“I do.”

“And do you take this man to be your lawful wedded husband.”

“I..” Minami hesitates. Before she finishes up her sentence, she glanced at me. Should I be happy about it? I don’t know. Does she still have feelings for me? Because I still do.

“I d---“

“PLEASE DON’T SAY I DO.” I got up from my seat and yelled from the top of my lungs.

“Wh-what is this? Take this woman away.” The groom yells to the security to escort me out.

“Wait! Keep your position…I want to hear what she has to say.” Minami yelled at the guards.

“Minami…I didn’t want to want you. I didn’t want to love you. I didn’t want to need anyone. But now look what you’ve done, I can’t go on without you. I can’t fake it anymore… I made a huge mistake 2 years ago for ever letting you go. I’m not going to make that same mistake again. Please come with me Minami.”  I reached out my hands for her. The crowd such as the paparazzi, family and friends were all shocked. Never did anyone probably thought the face of AKB “Maeda Atsuko” would deliver such a message, not only that… her sexual orientation was revealed. But it didn’t matter me. What matters to me the most right now is being with the love of my life, regardless of gender.

“So what will it be Minami?” I yelled out to her again.

My heart felt like someone squeezed the juice out of it when she didn’t reply. She just looked at me with tears and confusion in her eyes. I made such a fool out of myself; I guess I am too late... Now I’m walking away.. Just when I was about to step out the church door… I heard heels clicking at the ground making its way closer to me.

“Atsuko!” She ran dragging her long wedding dress. “I thought you’d never ask.” She said to me and smile.

“I’m sor-” Before I could finish up my sentence, her lips met mine…closing the gap between us. I couldn’t help but grab her body closer to me.. I replied to the kiss, making it deeper and more passionate. Then she pulls back.

“Let’s get out of here.”  Minami lifts me off my feet carrying me out bridal style.

“Eh.. Aren’t I supposed to carry you?” 



LOLOLOL :wahaha: :wahaha: :wahaha:

THE END.

Not so good but i tried.. sowwie!  :cry:
« Last Edit: February 11, 2012, 07:50:18 AM by Loveforever »

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Re: One shots (WEDDING DRESS) [Song fic] ATSUMINA 2/10
« Reply #24 on: February 11, 2012, 03:20:58 AM »
Thx for fic. It's ok, u know~
but I got troll from you in your first fic.
don't write takatomo again pls  XD XD

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Re: One shots (WEDDING DRESS) [Song fic] ATSUMINA 2/10
« Reply #25 on: February 11, 2012, 03:22:22 AM »
Is good as there is a happy ending for Minami and Acchan.  ^^

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Re: One shots (WEDDING DRESS) [Song fic] ATSUMINA 2/10
« Reply #26 on: February 11, 2012, 04:10:41 AM »
“Let’s get out of here.”  Minami lifts me off my feet carrying me out bridal style.

“Eh.. Aren’t I supposed to carry you?”
Hahaha.. I'm laughing so hard at the ending..  :lol:  This is good..  :twothumbs

taka in a wedding dress is just...  :inlove:  and I want Acchan in a tux now!!!  XD

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Re: One shots (WEDDING DRESS) [Song fic] ATSUMINA 2/10
« Reply #27 on: February 11, 2012, 06:26:42 AM »
jajaaj the final takaboy!!  as always carrying her wifey like a boss.. maybe a omake would be fine :D

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Re: One shots (WEDDING DRESS) [Song fic] ATSUMINA 2/10
« Reply #28 on: February 11, 2012, 09:55:26 AM »
Omg! I wonder how can Takamina carrying her wife with long wed dress !xD  Lol i think haruko's right , u should make a okame !

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Re: One shots (WEDDING DRESS) [Song fic] ATSUMINA 2/10
« Reply #29 on: February 11, 2012, 12:44:22 PM »
GYAAAAAAHH!!
NICE JOB :)  :thumbup

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Re: One shots (WEDDING DRESS) [Song fic] ATSUMINA 2/10
« Reply #30 on: February 11, 2012, 12:51:29 PM »
Takamina in wedding dress is truly gorgeous~ :wub:
Glad that Acchan was honest to her feelings at the last moment~ :D
LOL~ :lol: the last part~ It was Minami carrying Acchan~ XD

Thanks for the fic~ :thumbsup

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Re: One shots (WEDDING DRESS) [Song fic] ATSUMINA 2/10
« Reply #31 on: February 11, 2012, 03:48:38 PM »
Sweet fic...



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“Let’s get out of here.”  Minami lifts me off my feet carrying me out bridal style.

“Eh.. Aren’t I supposed to carry you?” 

LoL in this case Taka is the man ROFL!

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Re: One shots (WEDDING DRESS) [Song fic] ATSUMINA 2/10
« Reply #32 on: February 11, 2012, 07:29:31 PM »
I love this fic~!!!  :luvluv1: saikou!!
Can't stop laughing imagine how Minami carried Atsuko in her weeding dress :hiakhiakhiak:

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Re: One shots (WEDDING DRESS) [Song fic] ATSUMINA 2/10
« Reply #33 on: February 11, 2012, 08:01:50 PM »
“Eh.. Aren’t I supposed to carry you?”

Hahaha!!! It killed me hahaha!!

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os and short fics (ATSUMINA) FATED TO LOVE YOU ch.1 5/1/12
« Reply #34 on: May 01, 2012, 06:33:21 AM »
FATED TO LOVE YOU.


Chapter 1

   On my desk I watched as the clock slowly tick to 2:25, just 5 more minutes and I’m out of here! God why does time seems so much slower? Usually I’m okay with waiting...but because she’s not in class today I was really anxious to leave the school premises. She never misses a day of school. I wonder why she’s not here today, is she sick? Could something bad had happen to her? All I can do now is worry until I see her again. That way it will set my heart at ease. By the way I’m Takahashi Minami, 17 years of age and a senior in Chiba High. I’m  shy, I don’t talk much so I’m not really not well known in this school but I do have two good friends, Minegishi Minami and Oshima Yuko. Those two are very much lively compared to my dull personality, which makes me the odd one out. The bell finally decides to ring, but before Mariko sensei can dismiss us I already zoomed out of the door. “Takahashi!! Just for that, tomorrow you’re going to stay an extra five minute!!”  I heard her yell as her voice slowly fades away from the distance. Ah oh well…as long as I know she’s okay then I’m fine with staying after.

   She doesn’t start work until 3. What am I going to do for the next 30 minutes??…I guess I can go wait at the diner where she works at like I usually do after school every day. It’s been a daily routine for me now but I never get tired of seeing her beautiful face. And every time she smiles, it makes my heart skip a beat. I sit at my usual table with my face buried into a book. “Ah! Maeda-san! Good thing you’re early today, the diner is getting busy. Here throw this apron on.” Her boss shouts with eagerness. Yes! She’s here! But why are her eyes so red..did she cry? Did someone do something to her? “Hai..” She replies with sad tone. That’s Maeda Atsuko, the most gorgeous and popular girl in school. She’s very easy on the eyes as you can tell. Her shoulder length hair compliments the depth of her face and light tan skin complexion. Yes, she’s the girl I’m in love with…too bad she doesn’t ever notice me. Believe it or not I haven’t spoken to her since we were five. I know it sounds like I’m a stalker but I’m totally not! I swear! Well maybe a little. I just haven’t got the courage to speak to her.. “Oi Takamina! What a coincidence that you’re here. Let us sit with you!” Two loud mouth girls barged into the door of the diner. “Oh! Hi Acchan!” They both greeted her..”Hi Miichan, Hi Yuuchan” she puts on a fake smile. Inside I know she’s hurting and I want to know the reason why… “How come you weren’t in school today?” Miichan asked in a curious tone. “Um..just ..” Atsuko hesitated.. “Just some little family issues, that’s all.” “Do you want to talk about it?” “Neh, not really..I’ve got to get to work so talk to you later?” “Yeah sure! If you need a shoulder, I can lend mine to you anytime.” Miichan smiles. Darn the gachapin! Why does she always know the right thing to say..why do I have to be so pathetic and not talk to her..I want to be the one to make her days brighter; I want to be the one she comes to talk about her problems.

        “Takamina, don’t you ever get tired of coming here?” Yuko asks. “Of course not I have to have my delicious katsudon, they make the best ones here!”  “Are you sure it’s the katsudon or the person who made it?” Miichan chuckles. “I’m gonna slap you! Be quiet you Gachapin!!” I yelled at her. Kamisama! She’s heading our way… I shied away and bury my face back into the book. “I’ll be your waitress for the day, what would you guys like?” That sweet voice.. it never fails to melt my heart.. This is actually the first time she served my table..usually she serves the other side of the diner. “I’d like shrimp!” Miichan says in horrible English accent. Oh god at this moment I want to tape her mouth shut but Atsuko laughed..it’s so cute so maybe I’ll give Miichan some credit. “And I want Sushiiiiiiii!” Yuko extended the word with a wide grin. “What about you Takamina?” Yuko asks me.. I don’t know why but I couldn’t speak… Acchan waited but still no answer.. “Okay well take your time, I’ll be back to get your order..” She spoke to me for the first time in years! Yadda I’m so happy!!.. “Wait, just get the special katsudon that you self-make” Yuko ordered for me. “Hai! She smiles and walks away to another table. “Jeez Takamina learn how to speak up for yourself!” Miichan teases me. “Yeah when are you going to make your move?” Yuko adds.  “Tomorrow I promise!” “Eh you say that every time.. I don’t believe you anymore!” Yuko sticks her tongue out at me. “Why her anyways? Out of all people you pick a girl to like…a girl that’s so popular with the boys..do you really think she’d go for a short guy like you?” Miichan giggles. “I’m not a guy! You ugly big bug eyed girl!!” I retorted back. “Hey that’s not nice you two! Stop arguing kids..” Yuko pats both of our head like little childrens. We both smacked her hands off immediately. “Ittai.. wow you guys  sure are violent.”  “ANYWAYS! Yuko, Do you think Acchan would like a girl?” Miichan asks trying to make me angrier. “Umm.. I don’t know..she dated so many guys so it’s hard to say..” When they said that, my heart sank a little…Really no one knows why I like her but for now I will keep that little secret to myself, locked in my heart.

TBC…?


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Re: os and short fics (ATSUMINA) FATED TO LOVE YOU ch.1 5/1/12
« Reply #35 on: May 01, 2012, 06:48:37 AM »
Woah!! Loveforever-san..  :w00t:  is this a multiple shoots??  XD

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Re: os and short fics (ATSUMINA) FATED TO LOVE YOU ch.1 5/1/12
« Reply #36 on: May 01, 2012, 09:29:05 AM »
Yay! Loveforever-san is Back (from her Hiatus)... LOL. :P
Finally~ I can read a AtsuMina's fics... Btw, This is gonna be interesting! I love Miichan's and Yuko's character here... Looking forward to the next chapter! XD
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Re: os and short fics (ATSUMINA) FATED TO LOVE YOU ch.1 5/1/12
« Reply #37 on: May 01, 2012, 09:52:59 PM »
aww kind fic.. I dont wanna be takamina with that "2 best friends" jajajaj she gonna have trouble.. :D

Come on takaboy!! make your move.. or someone else gonna do it..

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Re: os and short fics (ATSUMINA) FATED TO LOVE YOU ch.1 5/1/12
« Reply #38 on: May 02, 2012, 02:11:04 PM »
Poor Takamina she is too shy, ganbatte!

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Re: os and short fics (ATSUMINA) FATED TO LOVE YOU ch.1 5/1/12
« Reply #39 on: May 02, 2012, 09:22:41 PM »
Takamina fighting!!! :mon blowhorn:

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