[MariHaru] Basket Case - Under Construction (HPOV Chap3 Posted) 7/20

[Haru_Jei]

After many months, you're back! Well, I haven't been online for a while either .

Anyway, love the chapter! When I was reading it, it felt kind of short or maybe it was just my imagination. But seriously, who's the kid? A random character? She's funny, but it's understandable since she's just a kid and obviously don't know the meaning of sarcasm and other big words . However, kids nowadays are the worse; most of them know how to curse already. I have a five year old cousin who already know how to say the word 'fag' and 'fuck', and others in which he doesn't know the real meaning behind those words and he learned from his older brother by hearing. I was like WTF?! This is why we shouldn't curse in front of the children or they'll end up being influenced by us adults .
But I really can't believe you left us hanging at the end of the chapter. I was seriously hoping that Mariko would pull Haruna into their first kiss after she pulled away from Mariko's cheek! Who would ever thought that Haruna was already kissing Mariko without her knowing it?

Same here, I haven't been really reading other peoples fanfics for some time either. Been very busy with school; finals , but began to read the ones I've missed like crazy since I finished school about a month and half ago . My laptop has been being a bitch to me since it wasn't booting and it took the shop at least two months to freaking repair . I'm currently resuming writing the next chapter of my long fic and having a hard time to think of a plot for my OS requests.
It's only normal to have such reaction when watching yuri and yaoi for the first time; I just use to my sister's tactics .
Don't worry, it actually makes sense. During the Medieval Era, the Catholics thought the Earth was shaped like a cube because of how the ground was flat and not round, but someone discovered or rather calculated that the Earth was round. When they told the church the truth, they denied it and I think they killed them.

Wow! That was a really long comment I must say . Anywho, I hope you'll get better .
Please do update real' soon. No need to rush things; just take your time.

P.S.: I'm real' happy to hear that you're going to read my fics. If you prefer, I think it's easier and faster to read them on Tumblr; they're all under my name.

[theblueknight]

Okay lets get started!!! first of all thank you!! for finally updating BC!!! My reaction was a crazy one I was like really crazy

 

I just well lost it!!







I really appreciate your hard work and dedication to this chapter and I am happy this was one of the best birthday gifts ever!!!



Now then onto the rest of what I was going to say... lets see ... why don't we start with this...





How dare you say all that stuff about me!!!



I am not uncomfortable when it comes to giving advice to my friends no matter the subject!
I care about my friends believe or not and I try to help all of them no matter what ... even if they tease me and troll me and wont let me sing "let it go" I still care about all my friends equally .



now then moving on...



what the hell are you talking about? I never did no such thing!!



Oi I have a waifu so how dare ya try to get at me eh bro?

wait...



Dude that just wrong!! we are bros!!!



how about ... we keep it a just us as bros? okay



now onto to grave matters....

so.... you are determine to find where I live and come steal my Mariharu pic...is that right?





ha ha ha don't make me laugh... I would like to see you try ...



Anyways... back to the story I was really surprise about haruna having the balls to kiss mariko in her sleep .  I mean she is the shy type you would think she would not do that kind of stuff.... but either way I found it very interesting when I read that she kissed her many times that she cant remember .... at first when I read it I didn't think I read it correctly but when I read it again I was like



In the end I enjoyed reading this but I felt that you had kept this short and just to troll me...



I hope that that is not the case either way I love this chapter and I am so happy that it was gift for my birthday from one of my favorite authors even though you troll me all the time...



either way I cant wait to read the next chapter and I hope its soon

and even though you do all this to me I still love ya bro!!! (but only like a bro)

[chichay12]

@chichay12: I'm thinking, hot kissu, midnight snuggles that turns to neck kissing. Moving the kisses downwards, lots of blushing, getting sweaty, a bit more and I'd say that'll calm Mariko somehow. And I'm not cruel! I'm just thinking, hey let's play with people for a while. kidding. ^^; Anyway, Thanks for reading and commenting ages ago chichay12!

when i start reading,i intend to finish it..so u better finish your update alright? (or else i will hunt you down fof) 
and u know, i'm a big fan of yours so..u will see anytime u update(and in facebook) lol

back to your update..
omg kissu!!!! but only in cheeks...but kiss is still a kiss so 
more kiss please...i want in the lips *teehee*

thank u for the update!!
have a nice day fof

[sastio13]

yeay! an update! an update! FoF-san made an update! 
after read all chapters of Basket Case, finally i comment in here
chibi haru-chan, same like another kids, annoying, inocent, and cute....
wohooo mariko, you teach some new vocab for haru-chan lol
yeay! i'm so gay! lets dig hole together! lol
hem, so, goody-goody-betty, you like to kiss mariko on the cheek while mariko's sleeping huh? :
bad girl... you better kiss her while she awake, 'kay?
the end of this chapter is....
please continue FoF-san! thankyou

[flameeyes]

UPDATO!!!!!!!!!!!

this is just so much~!!!!!
you made me so gay!!!!!!!!!


but.




this is not happening right?



Haruna "kiss" Mariko... on the cheek!!!!



this is just...


but then...
Haruna says.no.
she didn't really says it. but.
She always kiss mariko when she is sleeping...
and it feels like...

We the fans.... specially ME waiting this whole thing... and you...


YOU~!!!



how many times you kiss her? hu?

and you (Haruna) was like...


this is just



you just betray me... Haruna~


I feel really betrayed


but then...
I can't die yet...
the story still not yet to end...



*me continue reading*



then



Mariko is asking Haruna a KISSU!!!!!!!


every word I'm reading is just like a years

and then
it happens!!!!!!







this is so much





..................................................



IS WHY....



FOREVER!!!!!!!! [/b]

..................




  YOU ARE JUST AWESOME FOF-NEE-chan!!!!!  

BUT~




 

you know
 
you always makes me so GAY~
 

and again....

Thank you for this update chu~
 

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so that's all for now...
it been a long long while sine I post some comment here
but god this is just something you know

any how~ XDDD



  take care always     and keep up your good work nee-san 

I will wait for you next updato~

Ja ne~ 

 
 
          ◄FLAMEEYES      

Proud to be an E-book reader

p.s. Let's dig more some hole together fof-nee :3

[michiyo48]

Yeay finally BC is updated  I miss it and fof-san so much :3
I just found it because I was so busy preparing for university entrance exams. There were so many tests btw I had no time to have fun lol
So sorry for just commenting then fof-san!
Anyway thanks for the support for me as well! Yeah I'll always do my best and I did the best in every entrance exam I had. I'm glad that I'm finally accepted in a university hehe but I'm still waiting for the other schools result, I'll still have interview test there. Plese wish me luck and I'll do my best! ^^ I always pray for you too

About the story.. Oh wow wowww 
Haruna kissed Mariko while she was sleeping  Thats just ...!!!
And Mariko asked her to... And their lips..
wkwkw
oh wow
I need more lol 
 

Glad to see the update! Please update the next chapter soon..
I'll wait for it! kkk do your best and take care! 

[Drakon]

Amazing fic. Very interesting spelled the characters.
All in topic. And the humor and banter. A romantic note. And the reasoning about friendship. Lightness, playfulness.
There is no excessive saturation in process of reading. And this is a big plus.
Just one question. Uh ... where obnimashki? Kiss taboo, but a hugs???
I understand that Mariko completely not romantic nature, but at least one hugs Haruna deserved. Hint of a hug? Thought?
Yet lines TakaTomo little. De facto its no all. It would be great if You did a little digression in their direction.

I look forward to the continuation of Your story.

[noah minami]

LOL. I WAS HERE COMMENT. hey fof sama! haha i really like the haruna pov. pfft miichan is funny lol. mistaken the words of beautiful and the throwing can to that guy. hoping the next update will be long.haha. I'm waiting and others too.

off to do my homework.jya .hahaha

[Yuki88]

I'm not sure if I'm missing something because I can't see the new update (if it did exist) :/

[noah minami]

I'm not sure if I'm missing something because I can't see the new update (if it did exist) :/


Haruna 2nd pov at chapter 2. Try look at it

[Yuki88]

OMG Thanks!

OMG.... OMFG.... OH MAH FAKKEN GAWD.

So all this time Miichan had misunderstood the beginning
It's interesting how Haruna noticed Mariko and her invisible wall in split second and also how she wanted to break free... Yep. Can't wait until she's completely un-Betty-ed.


Also, can't wait for the next chapter :3

[noah minami]

OMG Thanks!

OMG.... OMFG.... OH MAH FAKKEN GAWD.

So all this time Miichan had misunderstood the beginning
It's interesting how Haruna noticed Mariko and her invisible wall in split second and also how she wanted to break free... Yep. Can't wait until she's completely un-Betty-ed.


Also, can't wait for the next chapter :3

Haha. Your welcome .  Yeaaa everyone is waiting for update haha

[sastio13]

OMG Thanks!

OMG.... OMFG.... OH MAH FAKKEN GAWD.

So all this time Miichan had misunderstood the beginning
It's interesting how Haruna noticed Mariko and her invisible wall in split second and also how she wanted to break free... Yep. Can't wait until she's completely un-Betty-ed.


Also, can't wait for the next chapter :3

Haha. Your welcome .  Yeaaa everyone is waiting for update haha

yeah, i'm waiting for update too!
Fof-san, don't you want to update? hmm...

[Ava]

I super like harunas pov

But i would like for you to continue the story

Would you continue or are you leavin it like that??

[giotuyet]

  I pressed remove my comment by mistake How stupid ! But FoF-san read it so i think it's ok ! HPOV, I like it so much  I'm 1 of 26 persons vote for it  I'm impressed how they can understand each other although they just meet the first time  So, 1% crush is a misunderstanding  I wonder when, how, why Haruna fall for Mariko ? Wait for next updating ! Again thank you so much for HPOV ! Please come back as soon as you can !

[FoF]

To people who are asking where the HPOVs are located, I've placed / will be placing it on the end of each chapter. Right now I've only have chapter 2, so head over there and just look at the bottom. Or shortcut it by ctrl+F and search for HPOV / OMAKE. I'm sorry I didn't say it mainly because I don't want to make a big deal out of it. Just practicing really. And reviewing the story because I really do want to end this asap. And with that said, I will continue it. So don't you guys worry.  I'll end this soon and will try to make it painless as possible. *and cue FoF's killer smile* lol.

I'm doing HPOVs which seem like I disregarded the whole poll thingy.  Sorry about that. I wanted to try something different, or rather someone different. It's fun. It's a nice change to the usual biting Scrooge which is a riot to write. I'm entirely sure I did not pull Betty right, but hey, no harm in trying.  That seems to be my motto in life for this year. 

So I have the next Mariko chappy marked on the 21st EST. A special day for me!  <- is that an ass? butt smile then. Hehe.

I'll reply to all the comments on the 21st. So Ta-ta. See ya 

[Drakon]

Hello. So when, you say, you will update?

[hakase309]

thanks for creating this fic m(_ _)m

[giotuyet]

11/9/2014 -> today = 9 months T.T FoF-san ! Where are you ?

[Sara-chan]

Fof-san where are you?