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Re: Fallen Devil - Ch.2 (Feb.5.12)
« Reply #20 on: February 06, 2012, 04:54:27 PM »
OMG!!! I think I'm really speechless.. :O I wonder what is Minami's plan...
And.. OMG! Yuki as Acchan's daughter?! and Mayu as Minami's daughter?! :shocked
Never expected this turn of event... :panic:

Please Update Soon~ Want to know what happen next and wonder what is Minami's plan XD

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Re: Fallen Devil - Ch.2 (Feb.5.12)
« Reply #21 on: February 06, 2012, 05:37:57 PM »
okay either minami is hopeing everything will be okay , really dumb, or really smart which is it ???

nice update btw update quick plz !! :thumbsup :twothumbs

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Re: Fallen Devil - Ch.2 (Feb.5.12)
« Reply #22 on: February 10, 2012, 04:42:54 AM »
Okay, so there's been a lot of votes And many of you instant msged me, since I have most of the Jphipsters skype/ fb/ msn or whatever and what came down to it was... A TIE  :nervous
So I just decided to post both instead 8D
And to answer anzai48's question as to why I didnt do a poll; well it was because I was lazy. Kekekeke
 Anyways! Here's the next chapter~



Chapter 3 – Side A

“Yuki-chan! Look! Aren’t these flowers beautiful?” happily smiling, their day brightens as the sun beams through the tall trees and hits them like a spotlight as they sit in the center of all the blossomed flowers. “Wow, I’ve never seen these flowers before!” Picking them gently and weaving them, Mayu made a flower crown, “Here, Yuki-chan.” Placing it on her head, she couldn’t help but giggle at the sight of the older girl’s blushing face. “You look adorable!”  she says.

Meanwhile, deeper within the forest, we hear panting. Moaning. Panting and moaning. Louder and louder. The sound is getting closer… where is it coming from?

“Yuko! Are you okay!?”

“Hah… hah… we’ve… been running… ARGH!!”

“Yuko!! Save your breath! You’re injured!”

“No, Haruna. Don’t wait for me, just go… argghhh…” collapsed, the two are stranded in the forest.

“If only… I didn’t drag you into this mess, we would’ve been able to live peacefully…” the short one says, in the arms of the long-haired one. The taller one, trying to wipe all the blood, was speechless. She was too busy trying to close the other girl’s wounds and didn’t pay any attention to a word the other girl said.

“We managed to escape from Satan now, we can’t just give up right here!” the weak voice uttered, while the tears were dripping, washing off the blood from the other girl’s face. “It’s okay, Haruna. We didn’t fulfill our duty, therefore we are banished; who would have thought there were such things as Fallen Devils, huh, Haruna? Hahaha….”

“Yuko… this is no time for jokes.” She cried. Hushing the worried girl by her quick stance, the short girl keenly senses a field of flowers.

“Haruna, do you smell that?” after that said, the taller one tries to sniff the air. “Little girls?”

“No! I smell… “ she sniffs some more, and then let out a smirk, “I smell Guérisseur Diable.” She grabs the tall one’s hands and they quickly made their way to the flowers.

Yes, Guérisseur Diable; a flower that has the power to heal any demon, this flower only grows within the Devil’s Forest… a forest which is a gateway to hell.

Once the tall one and the wounded short one reached the flowers, they were shocked to see that they were all gone!

“Why…” the tall one mumbled, looking down at the two little girls beneath her. “There are tons of flowers here… why did you pick all the blue ones!?” she screamed; making the frightened children jump, “W-we…”

“That’s, okay, Haruna…” limping towards the tall one, she stares at Yuki. Licking her lips as she continues to analyze the girl. “They’ll just have to compensate with something else…”

Just as she was about to take Yuki, Mayu confronts them.

“No!” the little girl yells, with her arms spread apart. Her angry eyes sent a message more than just a no. It said to them leave us alone! “Then if you wont let me have her, are you willing to offer your soul instead?”

“But Yuko! She’s—“ interrupted, the short one allows Mayu to proceed. Walking up closer towards them, she nods in agreement. “Just… don’t hurt Yuki-chan.”
A flash. Petals everywhere; and they were gone. It all happened too fast for little Yuki to comprehend what was going on. When she came to her senses, she sees Mayu on the ground; eyes wide opened.

“Hornless… devils… “



Chapter 3 - Side B is next: Minami's Plan
« Last Edit: February 10, 2012, 06:08:54 AM by Mari07 »
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Re: Fallen Devil - Ch.3A (Feb.9.12)
« Reply #23 on: February 10, 2012, 05:30:38 AM »
 :panic: what happen to mayu??
Pls2 update soom

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Re: Fallen Devil - Ch.3A (Feb.9.12)
« Reply #24 on: February 10, 2012, 06:03:03 AM »
WHAT DID YOU DO TO MAYU???!!!!!!!!

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Re: Fallen Devil - Ch.3A (Feb.9.12)
« Reply #25 on: February 10, 2012, 04:18:54 PM »
 :shock: What's this?! What's happening?
MAYU!!!!!!  :on blackhole:
With that cliffhanger too!
Waaa! I can't wait for next update!

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Re: Fallen Devil - Ch.3A (Feb.9.12)
« Reply #26 on: February 10, 2012, 04:29:04 PM »
Ehhh???? What happened????

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Re: Fallen Devil - Ch.3A (Feb.9.12)
« Reply #27 on: February 11, 2012, 01:16:37 AM »
O_o .... what?, Mayu?....wait what?
"The consistent anarchist should be a socialist, but a socialist of a particular sort. He will not only oppose alienated and specialized labor and look forward to the appropriation of capital by the whole body of workers, but he will also insist that this appropriation be direct, not exercised by some elite force acting in the name of the proletariat. Some sort of council communism is the natural form of revolutionary socialism in an industrial society. It reflects the intuitive understanding that democracy is largely a sham when the industrial system is controlled by any form of autocratic elite, whether of owners, managers, and technocrats, a vanguard party, or a State bureaucracy."
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Re: Fallen Devil - Ch.3A (Feb.9.12)
« Reply #28 on: February 11, 2012, 04:24:08 AM »
huh? eh? ehhh!!!!!!!  :shocked what happened??  :? is it just me or I kinda lost here??  :panic:

Update marichan!!!! me need to know what happen!!!  :banghead:

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Re: Fallen Devil - Ch.3B (Feb.20.12)
« Reply #29 on: February 20, 2012, 05:45:57 PM »
Yeah, sorry for the bit of confusion, guys  :nervous
I was going through some anxiety phase while I was writing that. Then I looked back and saw how crappy that was LOL so to make up for it, I (tried) to make this chapter longer, and more detailed!

It took me long to update cuz I gots lots of homework x_x excuse my slow updates  :cathappy:


Chapter 3 – Side B

“They are our children; perhaps they share the same opinion and values…” Atsuko walked over to Minami, who was sitting on the bed thinking intently of what to do next. The floor creaked as Atsuko got closer and closer to Minami – moving her legs between the shorter girl’s – she took her face in her hands, resting her forehead against hers. Atsuko’s eyes were closed while Minami’s were staring at her. Drop. A tear fell into Minami’s eyes, “A-Atsuko!?”

“Minami, I’m so happy.” She said with a relieved smile, “ I’m so happy we’re able to meet. I’m so happy I’m holding you right now. I’m so happy… I’m so happy you still love me…” holding the girl below her tighter, she was losing breathe but allowed her lover to hold longer out of empathy. “Of course I still love you, you idiot!” Minami wrapped her arms around Atsuko, accepting her embrace. “Even though our plan failed, I’m still not giving up. I wont let you go.”

Atsuko chuckled, “It was stupid of us, ne? To think one of us would get a boy and the other a girl…” Minami stayed silent and listened, “To have peace between both kingdoms by having our children marry; by this, we’d be connected. Who would’ve thought we’d both give birth to beautiful princesses?” “I think it’s fate.” Minami said bluntly, still holding Atsuko in her arms.

“EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!”

The screech of a child’s pierced their ears like a siren hunting its prey. Both of the parents panicking, they quickly got up and ran out the cabin. “Mayu!? MAYU!?” calling out her daughter’s name, she couldn’t hear any response. All she could hear was her racing heart trying to stay calm, but the thought of her precious hurt, in pain was too much.

“Yuki!” Atsuko and Minami caught sight of Yuki nudging Mayu – on the cold ground – to come back to life. Is she really dead? What’s happened? As a parent, Minami couldn’t bear to lose this child. She was even more precious to her than Atsuko was; trying to keep her balance, Minami rushed to her only daughter.
Holding the girl in her arms, she checks for any injuries. “Mayu, sweetie? What’s wrong?” Minami asks her gently but in a weak and shaky voice, “Please answer mommy… please…” she begged with flowing drops of water escaping her eyes.

Holding her tightly, she clenches her eyes, shutting them tightly. Trying to escape from the present world. It was only moments ago that she was so happy, Minami’s happiest moment was just 4 minutes ago, and now… she suffers the worst day of her life.

“Mommy?”

“Mayu… chan… !?” lifeless, she was still able to respond to her daughter’s call, “I saw it, mommy.” The high voice said sternly with a smile.
Atsuko crouched down closer to Mayu, trying to hear her as well, listened closely. Still leaving some space for her to breathe, Atsuko asked, “What did you see, Mayu-chan?”

She grinned a big huge grin on the small face, taking her finger and gesturing Atsuko to come in closer; Mayu whispered, “I saw death.” Chuckling and laughing away as though this little five year old had completely changed.

Laughing and laughing, but everyone else couldn’t understand the joke. This cynical laugh matched that of Gekikara’s but to hear this from a child… it was sickening Minami’s ears.

SLAP

Minami had raised a hand against her child’s face, leaving a red sting on both their skin. “What’s wrong with you, Mayu!?” she asked desperately hoping to have an answer. But her question was never answered. Mayu silently walked towards Yuki – the only stilled one – and took her first kiss.

“I wish to be with you forever.” Mayu then turned around and smiled innocently at the two adults, as though her senile laughter had never happened. “Is that okay? Can I be with Yuki-chan?”

Atsuko wasn’t sure if she really wanted this crazy kid to be with her dear Yuki, but she immediately told herself, “Minami’s child is my child. I can’t think this way!” and nodded, “Mm! If Yuki’s okay with it, then I’m okay with it.”

Minami was still trying to process everything in her head, but the only thing that came to mind was: I can be with Atsuko now. She knew that was a selfish reason to agree to Mayu’s request but she had nothing against Yuki and Mayu being together. In fact, wasn’t that what she was trying to do? “It’s way too easy…” she thought to herself. Why is everything falling into place so nicely? It doesn’t matter I guess… as long as we’re happy; is what she kept telling herself.
The two parents and their daughters arranged a marriage; while still unaware of the previous scene, they went about as though that day had never happened.
« Last Edit: February 20, 2012, 05:57:46 PM by Mari07 »
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Re: Fallen Devil - Ch.3B (Feb.20.12)
« Reply #30 on: February 20, 2012, 07:21:46 PM »
Thanks for update
but
 :dunno: What actually happen to Mayu?? :? :?

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Re: Fallen Devil - Ch.3B (Feb.20.12)
« Reply #31 on: February 20, 2012, 09:45:51 PM »
Waaa Mayu is scary...I was totally picturing her laugh in "Flying Get" PV...that was creepy

Anyway thank you for your update can't wait for next.
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Re: Fallen Devil - Ch.3B (Feb.20.12)
« Reply #32 on: February 20, 2012, 10:37:12 PM »
Eh? Nani? What happened? (@ A @)

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Re: Fallen Devil - Ch.3B (Feb.20.12)
« Reply #33 on: February 20, 2012, 11:01:28 PM »
Is Mayuyu posseded by Gekikara? O_O

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Re: Fallen Devil - Ch.3B (Feb.20.12)
« Reply #34 on: February 21, 2012, 02:19:11 AM »
Mayu being possesed by Nezumi's spirit.   :panic: :panic: :panic:

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Re: Fallen Devil - Ch.3B (Feb.20.12)
« Reply #35 on: February 21, 2012, 03:58:36 AM »
 :w00t: GO GO MAYU :deco:  :peace:
"The consistent anarchist should be a socialist, but a socialist of a particular sort. He will not only oppose alienated and specialized labor and look forward to the appropriation of capital by the whole body of workers, but he will also insist that this appropriation be direct, not exercised by some elite force acting in the name of the proletariat. Some sort of council communism is the natural form of revolutionary socialism in an industrial society. It reflects the intuitive understanding that democracy is largely a sham when the industrial system is controlled by any form of autocratic elite, whether of owners, managers, and technocrats, a vanguard party, or a State bureaucracy."
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Re: Fallen Devil - Ch.3B (Feb.20.12)
« Reply #36 on: February 23, 2013, 04:30:00 PM »
is the fanfic become dead?????
Become AKB fan after watching AKB0048.
Oshimen : Takamina and Mayu
Favorite pair : TakaAstu, Mayukirin, KumiYuria, Wmatsui, JirinaMayu etc.
(After reading the fanfic, my favorite pair just keep increasing :( )

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Re: Fallen Devil - Ch.3B (Feb.20.12)
« Reply #37 on: February 23, 2013, 04:30:00 PM »
is the fanfic become dead?????
Become AKB fan after watching AKB0048.
Oshimen : Takamina and Mayu
Favorite pair : TakaAstu, Mayukirin, KumiYuria, Wmatsui, JirinaMayu etc.
(After reading the fanfic, my favorite pair just keep increasing :( )

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Re: Fallen Devil - Ch.3B (Feb.20.12)
« Reply #38 on: February 23, 2013, 04:30:00 PM »
is the fanfic become dead?????
Become AKB fan after watching AKB0048.
Oshimen : Takamina and Mayu
Favorite pair : TakaAstu, Mayukirin, KumiYuria, Wmatsui, JirinaMayu etc.
(After reading the fanfic, my favorite pair just keep increasing :( )

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