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Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! CHAPTER 3 Catch up (Atsumina)
« Reply #20 on: March 01, 2012, 12:11:52 PM »
Hum I like mystere hehe and Takamina is still so cute~

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Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! CHAPTER 3 Catch up (Atsumina)
« Reply #21 on: March 01, 2012, 02:41:12 PM »
Can't wait for the next chapter~ XD
Really wonder what made Takamina's rich friends coming to the same high school as Takamina!


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Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! CHAPTER 3 Catch up (Atsumina)
« Reply #23 on: March 02, 2012, 05:42:03 AM »
of course no3b together!! :D

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« Reply #24 on: March 23, 2012, 11:31:38 AM »
Chapter 4: Mystery solved!

Takamina can barely believe her eyes!!. Her friends Haruna, Rena, Mayu, and Yuki in in her room!!. Wearing the same uniform as hers.
Haruna was playing video games, Mayu and Yuki were busy talking to each other and Rena eating her favorite spicy ramen. Takamina was still
stunned because of shock then Mayu noticed her little midget friend stunned in the door.

Mayu: Hey Takamina!!!

Her other friends heard Mayu then  put their attention in the direction where Mayu is looking.
Then they run to where Takamina is and hug their little midget friend.

Acchan is confused at first because they run to Takamina immediately but then, she realized that,
maybe they are Takamina's friends and they came from the same elementary and junior school, she was happy
for Takamina but she was a bit jealous because of the affection Takamina was giving to them and because she
had'nt met any former classmate before and she thinks its impossible.(because Acchan came from an elite school
just like Takamina and there is a small possibility that her elite classmates were going to enrol here)

Takamina is very happy to see her friends she missed them so much, she always hide her feelings towards others, but
when it comes to her friends she show her affection so much. Sometimes she will lift Mayu while
hugging her behind she loves the shocked expression of the Cyborg and her yell whenever she
do that. Then she loves hugging Haruna and Yuki from behind because she admires the smell and the smooth
silky hair of these girls the touches her face whenever she do that.  And lastly she loves pinching Rena's cheeks,
when the girl is laughing and pouting because she find it really cute and whenever she is sitting beside
the girl, she loves tho lean on her shoulders, somewhat she feel safe on it, of all her friends, Takamina
only lean on Rena's shoulder despite of the fact that all her friends is taller than her, and is also comfortable to
lean in,( Just imagine that Takamina's, way of showing of affection to her friends is somewhat like Yuko's way)

After giving each other a hug and other show of affection Takamina finally break their moment and ask her
friends why they were in her school.

Takamina: Ok guys, Im am very happy that all of you are here in my school but , as far as I can remember,
This is just an ordinary high school eventhough it has a special science section for intelligent students,
it is still not as prestigious as other elite schools , So why are you guys here? You didin't follow me did
you?

Haruna: Of course not! even though we really missed you we cannot do that, I also thought I will be enrolled
in the prestigious schools my father was looking forward to, but in the middle the vacation, my dad told me,
that I will be enrolled in a public high school because his friend  told him, that the TKM Electronics President
himself recommended this school.

Yuki: Yeah, that's right that is also what happened to me, The president even said that it gives a high quality
education.

Mayu: And students from here are the best and the most successful.

Rena: Because it came from the most successful businessman here in our country and maybe in the whole world,
our Dads didnt even background check the school because they believe him so much.

Takamina: Oh so that's the reason it means, my decision is right to enroll here!
(then Takamina remember that she didn't introduce Acchan to her friends yet)
Guys, this is my friend Acchan I met her at the welcoming ceremony, she is also
our classmate.

Acchan bowed then introduce herself

Acchan: Hi! my name is Maeda Atsuko you can call me Acchan
 
Yuki: Nice to meet you Maeda san I am Kashiwagi Yukirin you can me Yuki.

Mayu: Hi Acchan! I am Watanabe Mayuyu you can call me Mayu.

Rena: Hi! Im Matsui Rena you can call me Rena.

Haruna: Hello Maeda chan I am Kojima Haruna you can call me Haruna.

Takamina: It's nice that you guys already knew each other, byed the way they are my friends from my elementary and junior high
school, How about you Acchan? Don't you have any former classmate here?

Acchan: Unfortunately, I didn't find anyone yet, and I think I will never find one.

Mayu: Why Acchan?

Acchan: Because, I came from a prestigious school I am a scholar there, but after my graduation my dad told me that, our, small business
is not going good so I cannot afford to study there anymore, even as a scholar, so he sent me to this school, and I live with my Aunt because
my parents are busy fixing our business. And because my former classmtes are all elite I dont think they will enroll here.

Yuki: How coincident! You and Takamina almost had the same Destiny!!

Rena: Yeah, you almost have the same story.

Huh what a fate father only invented that story to hide my true identity how come their is a person that have the same fate with mine, hmmm,
maybe its just really coincedent Takamina thought.


Mayu: Dont lose hope!!! You see you almost have the same fate as Takamina she also thought she will not any friends here but you see
were here!

Takamina: Mayu is right you will see Acchan don't lose hope, you can still met your former friends!

As soon as Takamina finished  speaking the door opened revealing a very good looking guy, although a bit small and the guy face the class as
if he was searching someone, then he saw Maeda and fix his gaze to her his face became really happy and smiled showing his very
beautiful dimples. While Maeda was still have a shocked expression in her face.

Guy: Acchan!!!

Acchan: Yuu??

He rushed towards Acchan then hold both her hands shaking it a little bit.

Yuu: Ohh so really study here just like what your friends said.

Acchan: Yes Yuu, what are you doing here?

Yuu: Can't you see I am wearing the Boy's uniform of your school it means I study here!

Acchan: But why?

Yuu: Because Im already sick and tired in the private and elite schools so I think I gonna try new..

Acchan: ( she gave him a I dont believe you stare) Really you didnt follow me here?

Yuu: Of...f..f.. cou...r...se no..t ( he sttattered and blush slightly)

Takamina: Ahem, Ahem, so I think you are friends we told you, you will meet your friends Maeda san looks like
you knew each other will you not introduce us to your friend?

Acchan: Sorry, yes we knew each other he is an acquaintant we came from the same school from elementary to junior high
and was classmates during junior high.He is yuu

Yuu bows and introduce himself

Yuu: Hello! everyone I an Oshima Yuu nice to meet you all

Then the girls also introduce themselves and after some minutes chatting the bell rang signaling the start of the class.

The class went smoothly first the Teacher arranged the seating arrangement maybe coincident but Rena, Mayu, Yuki , Haruna , Takamina and Acchan were sitting near each other but Yuu was far from them because girls are separated from boys seat.
The first class was good Takamina was very happy to have her friends with her and even seating near them, but she noticed that Yuu kept on
looking at Acchan during the class and even he is with his new boy friends he still find time to go to Acchan and talk to her, Takamina was a bit irritated(maybe jealous). the class ended and everybody goes home safely.

Takamina just arrived to her house when..

Takamina: Im Home!!

Minako: Hi. Ojousama!! how's first day of the school?

Takamina: Good, I met my friends.

Minako: huh, wow thats great I thought it was impossible you said?

Takamina:  Maybe not..

Minako: Anyway ojousama Master your father give you a package, its on your room.

Takamina: Really!! I thought he forget about my first day of high school!!Thank you Minako!!

Takamina rushed to her room.then she saw a box with a note on it.

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To my Daughter,
I was very happy that you did what I said my dear child,
even if it is not what you like, I see that you were very
lonely when you find out that you will transfer because
you will be away from your friends so I made a way to
to get them near you, I hope you are happy my child
here is my gift for you for your first day. I hope you study
well.
                                                 Love: Dad
Takamina smiled and then opened her gift. I was a laptop!!!. She is very happy now she can study easily!!.
she thought that when her father confiscated all her gadjets she is doomed but her father gave her a laptop even better
than the old one!!

I knew you will not be too hard on me!!! Takamina thought, Thank you dad.

Takamina was very happy today but when she remembers Yuu looking to Acchan talking to Acchan , she felt a bit irritated, and from the
way he looks at Acchan it is not a friendly look, its like, he likes Acchan.


« Last Edit: September 15, 2012, 04:39:41 PM by Chikane Himemiya »

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Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! CHAPTER 4 First Day (Atsumina)
« Reply #25 on: March 23, 2012, 07:43:41 PM »
Oh rival came, don't let your guard down Takamina hehe

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Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! CHAPTER 4 First Day (Atsumina)
« Reply #26 on: March 24, 2012, 03:16:19 PM »
Woah! Taka showing her affection like Yuko!!! :w00t:
Which I think will make Acchan really jealous~ >.<
And now enters a love rival, Oshima Yuu!!!!
Is he Yuko as a boy or just related to Yuko and Yuko will come out later?? 0.0

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Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! CHAPTER 4 First Day (Atsumina)
« Reply #27 on: March 24, 2012, 03:36:54 PM »
Minami is jealous with Acchan + Yuu. But since Kojima appearance guess Yuu shall fall for NyanNyan. ^^

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Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! CHAPTER 4 First Day (Atsumina)
« Reply #28 on: September 07, 2012, 10:14:12 AM »
HI.

PLEASE UPDATE.

I CAN'T WAIT FOR YOUR NEXT CHAPTER.

THANK YOU.
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Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! CHAPTER 4 First Day (Atsumina)
« Reply #29 on: September 15, 2012, 04:16:00 PM »
Chapter 4: Achaan's Secret



It is a sunny and happy morning especially for Takamina, She is very happy walking to school even whistling and smiling while walking. She is very happy because yesterday their teacher divided their class into 6 groups, for a very hard and important science project, and she is in the same group as her beloved Acchan!!!! Not only that, Oshima Yuu not on their group so she can spend times with Acchan alone,not only that when their teacher arranged their seats Acchan and Takamina is seating next to each other. The Midget’s is very happy, her smile is so big that it can pierce her face into two and it is glued in her face since yesterday. Unfortunately not one of her friends also belongs to her group, Acchan and Takamina are in Group 1, Yuki and Mayu are in group 2 and Rena is in group 3 and lastly Haruna and Yuu are in group 4.

At School: Lunch Time

It is already lunch time, Takamina brought out her bento and she has very delicious lunch, then she noticed that Acchan didn’t have her bento and is only eating only a small bread, so she approached her,

Takamina:     Acchan, where is your lunch?
Acchan:      Ah, this bread is my lunch….
Takamina:     It can’t be it is so small and we still have our afternoon classes, can you survive? You will get hungry for sure.
Acchaan:      It is ok, besides I don’t know how to cook so I don’t have my bento; I only buy bread since I was in junior high.
Takamina:     How about your parents?, your mother don’t cook for you?
They have passed away a long time ago (smiling awkwardly)
Takamina:     Sorry for that, Anyways do you want to share your lunch with me, anyways I had a lot of food in my bento, l’ll give you some.
Acchaan:      No, No need!
Takamina:     Don’t be shy it is ok!!!
Then Takamina put her lunchbox in Acchan’s table and she sat in front of Acchan facing her, she opened her lunchbox and Acchan Almost drooled on the delicious food Takamina had.
   Acchan:      Did you cook all of these?
   Takamina:     Yes!!, I like cooking a lot!!
   Acchaan:      It look’s delicious
   Takamina:     Get some!!
Acchan:      It’s okay I had my lunch (but she can’t take away her eyes in the lunchbox)
Takamina:    C’mon
Then Takamina get some food and put it in Acchan’s mouth feeding her like a baby, Acchan was surprised, but she opened her mouth and ate the food Takamina has given to her, Then Takamina smiled widely and patted her head,and said good girl, Acchan was blushing madly after Takamina patted her head and was surprised by the other girl’s action, good that Takamina was busy looking for another pair of chopsticks that she didn’t noticed. Then when Takamina found chopsticks she gave it to Acchan and they ate together, they are very happy eating, they talked about many things and Takamina couldn’t help but smile as she saw Acchan delighted at the food she cooked. Then while eating Acchan had some food in her face,
   Oh you have some food in your face ..
Acchan:      Really where??
Takamina:    In the right..
Achaan put her hands on her face but can’t remove the dirt
Acchan:      No I said in the right…
Acchan:      Where?
Then Takamina get her hankerchief and stand then she lean on Acchan to remove the dirt on her face. Acchan blushed and she can feel butterflies on her stomach Takamina can always make her feel this way since the first time they met she did’nt know why she always seeks for the smaller girl’s company her gentleness towards her never fail to amaze Acchan, she always care for Acchan which makes Achaan very happy.
Takamina’s POV
   She really looked like a child, it’s like she didn’t eat a delicious lunch for a long time, no wonder she looked like skin and bones, but her face is really beautiful I can feel my face turned red and butterflies on my stomach, why is this girl never failed to amaze me, she is the perfect example of girls with proper attitude and posture but at the same time she has her childlike attitudes like joking, which never fails to make me laugh she always brings happiness to me so I always like to be with her.
 
   They had finished their lunch and they are both happy and full the classes proceed until the bell rang signaling for the end of classes then Yuu went to Acchan and ask Acchan something that Takamina really hated.

Yuu:    Hello Acchan!!
Achaan:    Hello.
Yuu:    Your house is near my house if you don’t mind do you want to walk home with me? (He blushed)
Achaan:    (smiling awkwardly) Yeah I could but I’m with Takamina since the first day of the class so I think you should also ask her.

Takamina didn’t like this feeling. It has been known to the whole class that Yuu is courting Acchan, he already confessed to him when they are in junior high, but Acchan did accept it saying that they are too young, but Yuu said he will not give up until he get the love of the beautiful girl. Now Takamina knew this is one of Yuu’s strategy to get closer to the other girl, she wanted to say “No thanks, we don’t like another companion” but she can’t that she will sound like a protective, jealous boyfriend rather than a kind, supporting best friend, and she can’t let Acchan know her feelings because she knew that Acchan would hate her, not just because she didn’t respect their friendship also because THEY ARE BOTH GIRLS.

Takamina: Of course (fake smile)!!, but I think I can’t be with you guys because we will still have group activity in history after class, and I will have some fun with my friends.(fake wink at Acchan)
Yuu: (smiling widely) Thanks Takamina!!! I hope you have some fun!
Acchan: (smiling weakly) yeah! I hope you have some time.
 
Acchan didn’t know why but she became really sad when Takamina allowed Yuu to walk home with them, and the worse made up a story that she will have fun with her friends just to leave her with Yuu alone. She didn’t knew why but she didn’t want to be with this boy even this boy had been good to her for a very long time already , she is more comfortable with Takamina even though they just knew each other for a month.

Yuu walked Acchan home, the boy is talking the whole time they are walking but Acchan just listen, and gave short replies whenever Yuu ask her a question. When she arrived at her home, there is no one there Of course there will be no one she lives alone. then she noticed a big box beside the table and a letter above it

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Dear Atsuko,

My child I’m really sorry I had to do this to you to strip you with all the riches and comfort you have been used too, but I am doing this for you, believe me my child you will learn a lot from these. Anyway I gave you a package, a whole study package with laptop, books and other school supplies. I also put you’re allowance in an envelope inside the box, it is not big just enough for a month I hope you spend it wisely cause I will not gave you money until next month.


From your Loving Dad,
Sheryu

Achaan’s POV
   I really don’t understand dad why does he wanted me to live like a commoner while the truth is I am the heiress of one of Japan’s biggest international company? But I am not as lonely as before now that I met someone that made me happy.


« Last Edit: September 15, 2012, 04:42:09 PM by Chikane Himemiya »

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Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! CHAPTER 5 Acchan's Secret (Atsumina)
« Reply #30 on: September 15, 2012, 04:31:46 PM »
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I am the heiress of one of Japan’s biggest international company?

Always rich as ever   :ding:

Looking forward to your update!

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Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! CHAPTER 5 Acchan's Secret (Atsumina)
« Reply #31 on: September 15, 2012, 05:41:59 PM »
SOORY!!!!!!1
for late update had been very busy you know school stuff
Anyway here's another secret revealed!!!

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Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! CHAPTER 5 Acchan's Secret (Atsumina)
« Reply #32 on: September 15, 2012, 06:25:43 PM »
OMG!!!! Acchan is the richest girl in Japan!!!!

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« Reply #33 on: September 15, 2012, 06:49:04 PM »
wait..what?

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« Reply #34 on: September 16, 2012, 03:34:52 PM »
I missed you!  :D

Oh ho ho ho another secret is revealed!
Acchan is mega rich uuuh well not now.

So Acchan doesn't have feelings for Yuu *phew relieved  XD

Thank you for your update!
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Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! CHAPTER 5 Acchan's Secret (Atsumina)
« Reply #35 on: September 17, 2012, 11:00:06 AM »
@miayaka
YES!!!!achaan is one of the richest girl in japan!!!
@kahem
OF COURSE!!! poor girl and rich boy is already an old style!!!
@haruko
Acchan is actually rich and like Takamina her father just force her to live alone and study in an ordinary public school without all the riches to learn in life
@megumi
THANK YOU!!!! and SORRY!!!
Im really busy at school works and I am waiting for inspiration I promise I will update every week this time

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Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! CHAPTER 5 Acchan's Secret (Atsumina)
« Reply #36 on: September 17, 2012, 01:25:07 PM »
PLEASE UPDATE!!!!

I LIKE YOU FICTION..

I AM FAN OF ATSUMINA!!!

THANKS
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« Reply #37 on: September 21, 2012, 09:49:36 AM »
One word:



UPDATE!!!!   



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« Reply #38 on: September 21, 2012, 02:06:28 PM »
Chapter 6: Under the rain

                    It was a supposed happy day for Takamina but it isn’t. Since the day the little girl discovered that Acchan don’t know how to cook and only eats bread for lunch she always cook delicious food for the other girl and today was not an exception. She doesn’t know why she is doing all of these she just knew that she really cared for the other girl, maybe because they are friends? She can’t tell anymore and she doesn’t care as long as she makes the other girl happy. But something is bugging her right now why does she is always irritated and mad whenever Yuu is with Acchan? Why does she always want to pull Acchan away from the boy and keep it to herself? She knew it isn’t right so whenever Acchan is with Yuu she always pretend to be happy for her friend and let the two had their happy moments together even if she doesn’t feel good about it.

DING DONG DING…….

   The bell rang signaling for the end of the classes for today Takamina is very happy because she and Acchan will have a group activity after class in one of their group mate’s house. Everything’s seem so perfect for Takamina but unfortunately Yuu also belong to their group, and they will have their group activity in his house. Takamina, Acchan and Yuu are walking towards Yuu’s house where they will have their group activity Takamina didn’t want to do their group activity in Yuu’s house but she had no choice. Her house is far from the school and so do Acchan, the nearest and most convenient house is Yuu’s, and it is like the fate is playing on them, there group has originally four members but their supposed group mate is sick and cannot join their group activity. A very awkward scene Takamina, Acchan, and Yuu are walking and because the sidewalk can only contain two people at a time and not three Acchan chose to walk beside Takamina and in front of them Yuu ,walking alone at the same time leading the way. Even though Acchan chose to walk beside Takamina her focus is still on Yuu not because Acchan wanted to, but because Yuu keep teasing, joking and making the other girl laugh in their whole trip. Takamina knew that she could also make the other girl happy even more what Yuu could do, but right know she can’t do that she will look like a rival that also wanted the attention of the other girl. She just laugh at some of Yuu’s jokes to make it look like she is also enjoying herself but she isn’t. It pains her a lot that whenever she see Acchan’s smiles and laughs cause by the bubbliness of the short boy, she is in pain not because Acchan is happy, but because her happiness is caused by the boy and she can’t show Acchan that she can also make her happy even more happiness that the boy could make in short she can’t fight properly in this unfair love rivalry. If she is just a boy she can also confess to Acchan just like what Yuu did, she can also court Acchan freely without worrying that the other girl will hate her or what will other people say about her.  IF ONLY..
 
Here we are!!!
Takamina’s thoughts was interrupted by Yuu’s words, she was spacing out that she didn’t notice that they already arrived at their destination.

Yuu’s house is big, of course the Oshima family is rich but Takamina isn’t impressed, of course no family in Japan is richer than them except of course for their family’s business partners that has been with her dad since he was just an ordinary and starting businessman.
Takamina stared at Acchan to see if the girl is impressed   in the boy’s house or in his riches but she isn’t in fact she was looking the house as if she is criticizing it. Takamina wondered why, but she shrugged of the idea thinking that the other girl might have been here before anyways Yuu and Acchan have been class mates since junior high. As soon as they entered the house they went to the study room then they started to do their project. Takamina noticed that Acchan seem to be anxious and can’t focus properly, later on the midget find out the reason and excuse herself to Yuu and Acchan and said that she will just buy something. Takamina went to the nearest convenience store and bought many food snacks. Acchan really had a big appetite, Takamina thought. As soon as she finished buying she smiled to herself and thinks of what will be the other girl’s reaction. As soon as Acchan saw Takamina opened the door in the study room and have her favorite food and snacks in the midget’s hands her eyes sparkled and she smiled so wide that it almost pierced her face in two because of delight.
Takamina: I bought food for everyone; I felt there is someone hungry here
(She looked at Acchan and smiled)

Acchan’s POV
How did she find out that I’m hungry? How did she even know my favorite snacks? I don’t remember telling her those kind of things.. But the foods she bought really look delicious I can even feel that I am drooling…aaaaahhhhhh.. Takamina how thoughtful you are. Then Acchan felt that she is blushing lightly.

Takamina’s POV
Looks like I am right, she is hungry that’s why she looks like a tired worker and always have mistakes in what she do. Really! She had a big appetite!! She ate like a man!! But her body is still slim and sexy, that makes her even more beautiful :D. But gosh I almost spend all my allowance for this month just for buying her the food she wants…Arghhh.. Dad will not give me money till next month..Looks like I’m going to get hungry..:’(. Anyways just her smile makes me think that it’s all worth it..:D

Takamina watched as Acchan devour all the snacks she bought, Takamina and Yuu also ate but only a little they let Acchan eat most of the food. When they finished eating they continued they school work then after they finished it Acchan and Takamina decided to go home already and bid Yuu a goodbye. While they are walking home unexpectedly it rain very hard, that made the two girls run to the nearest waiting shed and stand there, but it was already late they are already very wet. There are no other people in the shed except the two of them. The street also does not have any people on it except for the two girls.  Acchan is already shivering because it is too cold plus the strong winds that passed through them making Acchan colder. Takamina observed the other girl and it made her worry she doesn’t want the other girl to get sick so she get her jacket inside her bag that was not wet because her bag is waterproof and put it to Acchan. Acchan was shocked by the actions of the other and blushed like crazy even redder than a tomato.

Acchan: No Takamina you can use its ok..
Takamina: No, you are cold you’re even shivering like crazy just keep wearing that.
Acchan: but…but..
Takamina: no buts.. Besides I’m used to cold temperatures..
Acchan: ok, thanks. (She is not looking at Takamina because she is still blushing like crazy.)
Takamina: Do you have an umbrella?
Acchan: no...I’m sorry
Takamina: I had one but the rain and winds are too hard that even the strongest umbrella cannot withstand it we must wait until the rain became mild.
Acchan: ok…


It continued to rain hard and Takamina can still see Acchan shivering, the truth is Takamina is also very cold and she is just used to cold temperatures she just said it to make Acchan accept her offer, but she is a good actress and the other girl cannot even notice that she is cold, and the other girl also refrain from looking at her and she don’t know why.   She also can’t figure out why is she making all this sacrifices for the other girl she knew that she is a very selfish person and it is not in her vocabulary to help others but this girl is an ……exception….she thought.

Because the other girl is still cold Takamina went behind Acchan and hug her from beyond...
Acchan: W-w-what are you doing...
Takamina: Shhh.. You’re still cold so I’m hugging you to keep you warmer…
Acchan: thhhhhhanks…

(She is blushing madly even redder than before if it is possible and her heart is beating faster like she is having a heart attack)
Takamina on the other hand is also blushing like crazy and also having a very fast heartbeat like the other girl. Only a few minute passed and Acchan’s shivering stopped, so Takamina is relieved. They stayed on that position for half an hour until the rain get mild. Takamina released her hug on Acchan and Acchan seemed to be disappointed wishing her moment with other girl stayed forever.
Takamina: The rain is just mild now we can go home beside it late already.
Acchan: ok, but our houses are not near each other how can we share the same umbrella?
Takamina: I know that so just get my umbrella and go home..
Acchan: but it is still raining how about you?
Takamina: its okay, besides between the two of us your house is farther you’ll need the umbrella more…
Acchan: thank you Takamina!!  For everything and, sorry.
Takamina: its okay:D so shall we go home?
Acchan: yes!! Good bye Takamina and Take care :D
Takamina: goodbye Acchan and take care!!

The truth is Takamina really wanted to walk the other girl home. But she already invited the girl several times before and she was always rejected, the other girl hated to disturb and be a burden  to other people, considering the situation that it is getting late surely Acchan will refuse saying that Takamina will get home late.
After they bid goodbye to each other Takamina ran under the rain while Acchan walk fast using Takamina’s umbrella.
 When Acchan was home she took shower immediately and dried her things, then while drying she saw Takamina’s jacket and umbrella, she can’t help but smile thinking of the other girl’s thoughtfulness and caring for her, and then she hold her chest as she remembers how her heart beat very fast when Takamina put the jacket in her and when she hug her from behind.

 I wonder why my heart beat that fast?

TBC


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