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Offline Chikane Himemiya

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A Grateful Deal - chapter 7 (AtsuMina) 29/10/2012
« on: February 18, 2012, 07:07:49 AM »









Prologue

I never knew my dad can ever do this to me,
Takamina talks to herself at her room
"He ordered me to live here with our
servants house and live like an ordinary
teenage girl without all the luxuries and money.
Takamina Takahashi the heiress of the Takashi
Group of companies was ordered by her father
to live like an ordinary teenage girl in order
to learn the lessons of life and grow up as a
responsible and strong person and her father
thinks that the only way to do this is to banished
her and to live in their servants house and go to an
ordinary high school.
        Now she was frustrated because her father
Ordered her to leave all her things in their mansion
And was only allowed to bring her few dress, other
Than that she only has small allowance every month,
Only enough for her studies,
   “Hayyy, this money is not even enough to buy
The series of the book I wanted!!!!, and I still need to
Buy my things for school, The classes will start next week!
Ohhhh…I also need to review…..
   Takamina always been a bright and studious student
Since she started studying, she is slightly proud, a yandere
Especially to her friends, she is irritated to girls who
Always comb their hair obsessed on their looks, or so
She never had a friend like that, she is short-tempered
But always kind and understanding friend,
This coming school days she will be in high school.
The start of the school will also start our story,
Minami doesn’t know the fate had planned for her.
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Re: A Grateful Deal (Atsumina)
« Reply #1 on: February 18, 2012, 09:41:31 AM »
Oh~ It seems sooo interesting~~ XD
Please Update Soon~ :mon cute:

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Re: A Grateful Deal (Atsumina)
« Reply #2 on: February 18, 2012, 10:02:10 AM »
Minami going to meet Atsuko at high school later ~~

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Re: A Grateful Deal (Atsumina)
« Reply #3 on: February 18, 2012, 10:22:45 AM »
Takamina O_o↖(^▽^)↗└(^o^)┘ヽ(^。^)ノ

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Re: A Grateful Deal (Atsumina)
« Reply #4 on: February 18, 2012, 03:24:22 PM »
AtsuMina! I'm curious about the continuation! Please Update Soon, Chikane Himemiya-san!
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Re: A Grateful Deal (Atsumina)
« Reply #5 on: February 19, 2012, 12:27:42 AM »
 :hehehe: interesting....

Please continue!

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Re: A Grateful Deal (Atsumina)
« Reply #6 on: February 19, 2012, 11:36:02 AM »
sounds cool please continue  :twothumbs

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Re: A Grateful Deal (Atsumina)
« Reply #7 on: February 20, 2012, 02:21:21 PM »
Chapter 1:Opening Ceremony

Dingdong,Dingdong,Dingdong,Dingdong
The bell rang the first day of the class officially opens.
Minami is excited on her first day of the class even though she is a bit disappointed because she is just in an ordinary high school (not a exclusive school as she expected because she is rich), she is worried because she may have lower class of education because it just a public school, but she just told herself that it is okay because she belongs to the special science class of the school, which has a even better class of education than private schools. Now as a freshman she needs to go to the school auditorium for the opening and welcome ceremony for the freshmen. In the auditorium she seated fourth row from the stage near the center aisle. A minute later a girl sat beside her, as she walk toward the seat beside her, Minami was mesmerized by the soft and very attractive smell of her long and very beautiful hair that touched her faced, but she composed herself quickly because the girl might caught her smelling her hair and back, and she will be embarrassed. Minami was always sensitive about the smell of everything especially a person, it can attract or disgust her very easily, she had admit that this girl had the most attractive smell she ever smelled!. She became more attracted to her when she saw her very beautiful and angelic face. She observed that the girl is shy so she decided to break the ice and start the conversation,
Minami: Hello!
Acchan: Hello!
Minami: Im TakaminaTakahashi you can call me Minami and you are?
Acchan: Atsuko Maeda you can call me Acchan.
Minami: So you are also a freshman?
Acchan: Yes I am
Minami: What section?
Acchan: I’m enrolled at the special science class.
Minami: Wow what a coincidence! I’m also at special science class!
Acchan: Oh!! I’m so glad I already met a co science science class!
Minami: I think it’s true that birds of the same feather flock together!
Acchan: Hahhahahh
(Acchan laughed and smiled at minami, minami also laughed but she observed that Acchan had a very beautiful smile and she can help but pause and observed the face of the girl, Acchan noticed it and said)
What’s wrong minami san?
Ahahah, nothing you just have a very beautiful smile and I can’t help but observe and treasure it.
(Acchan blushed as well as minami)
Thank you but You also a beautiful smile minami chan!
Arigatou! (takamina don’t know why but she loves it when acchan called her Minami chan)

(they continued talking to each other until the ceremony started, Minami find out that Acchan is also talkative like her, but you need to break the ice first before she speaks, she really enjoyed being with her even its just a short period of time and she also observed that Acchan also enjoyed her company, then the ceremony ended and they need to go to the bulletin board to find their sections)
Acchan do you me to accompany you to the bulletin board?
(minami offering her hand)
Of course! Thank you minami
(acchan smiled and gets minamis hand)




 

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Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! CHAPTER 1 Opening Ceremony (Atsumina)
« Reply #8 on: February 20, 2012, 02:47:00 PM »
yayyy... a meet up session between the two lovelies (soon-to-be) ~~

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Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! CHAPTER 1 Opening Ceremony (Atsumina)
« Reply #9 on: February 20, 2012, 06:03:28 PM »
Oh~ Chapter 1! XD
Takamina has already met Acchan~!! :D
I wonder what will happen next in their school life~

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Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! CHAPTER 1 Opening Ceremony (Atsumina)
« Reply #10 on: February 22, 2012, 11:24:50 AM »
Chapter 2:Bulletin board


Minami took Acchan hands and run toward the bulletin board where the names of the students and their sections were listed, minami was so
excited that’s why she is running fast, but she forgot that she is still holding acchan’s hands and Acchan is not as fast and strong as her( minami is a fast runner)
Acchan: Mi-na-mi wa-it uhuhuh wait why are you running so fast?
 (She said while panting and kneeling on her knees)
Minami: I’m sorry I’m just excited to know what class im in.
Acchan: why?
Minami: because I’m hoping were in the sama class!(she blushed)
Acchan: really? (She blushed too!!) I too wanted minami to be my
 classmate. (She said shyly)
…..but I think we need to walk slowly because we may fall or
 have an accident
Mnami: ohh, sorry again ok well walk
( they both realized that they still hold each other’s hand)
(minami suddenly let go of her hands)
Minami: I…m sorry for that(she said while looking at the
 other direction blushing)
Acchan: a…h..h. it’s okay(she said while looking also  at
 the other direction and also blushing)
Minami: okay I will help you get up
(minami get again acchan hands and hold her on the
 waist to help her get up)
Acchan’s POV
   Ohh so sweet she is acting like a real gentleman, never experienced this gentleness before she even hold my hands gently, run fast, and help me get up gently, while holding my hands gently, this girl has boyish characters but is very gentle)Acchan get up
Acchan: arigatou
(minami smiled)
Minami: lets go!
Acchan: hai!
( they walked slowly this time, minami didn’t realize that she still holds Acchan hands, well Acchan noticed it, but she didn’t mind she likes this way)

(Then they arrived at the bulletin board many students were at there so they needed to get into the big crowd to know their section)
Minami: ok this is it let see!
(she let go of acchan hands and run to the crowd because of excitement)
Acchan: minami wait!
(acchan tried to do what minami didi and get in the huge crowd of students but she as not as strong as minami and stuck in the middle)
Acchan: Ouch!, Ouch!, Ouch! Plss let me pass ouch!!
Minami: That’s acchan’s voice!
Acchan, Acchan where are you?
(then she found Acchan being crunch by the crowd, minami runned to save Acchan, she goes into where acchan is and hug her to protect her from being crushed by the crowd)
Minami: Im sorry I shouldn’t let your hand go
( then hugs her tighter, Acchan is really red right NOW!)
Acchan: i….ts ok
Acchans pov
Ohhhh! She really saved me!!!
And she smells very good!
Minami: I will hold you until we get into the bulletin board ok?
Acchan: ok( still blushing hardly)
So they arrived at the board and find their names
Minami: ACCHAN! WERE AT THE SAME CLASS!
Acchan: YES! Im so happy minami me too!
They hug each other then jumped and when they break the hug there eyes met, and then they realized that everybody are staring at them and they both blushed in embarrassment)
 




 
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Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! CHAPTER 2 Bulletin Board (Atsumina)
« Reply #11 on: February 22, 2012, 11:30:26 AM »
So in this chapter this what happens

1. Acchan and Minami have really felt
that they are attracted to each other
2.They found out that they are on the
same section
3.Because they are on the same class
they will have more moments together


Next chapter!
PROUD MINAMI BECAME HUMBLE?!

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Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! CHAPTER 2 Bulletin Board (Atsumina)
« Reply #12 on: February 22, 2012, 11:38:21 AM »
They are already attracted to each other~ :wub:
And they are also in the same class, which means they will have more time together~ XD
I wonder what will happen next~!! :D
Please Update Soon :) And thanks or the Update :thumbsup

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Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! CHAPTER 2 Bulletin Board (Atsumina)
« Reply #13 on: February 22, 2012, 04:00:01 PM »
Next ........... Next....... i want the next update

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Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! CHAPTER 2 Bulletin Board (Atsumina)
« Reply #14 on: February 22, 2012, 04:20:38 PM »
update soon :) cool fic!! Minami and Acchan ~ <3 they're so MoE~
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Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! CHAPTER 2 Bulletin Board (Atsumina)
« Reply #15 on: February 23, 2012, 04:53:39 AM »
So exciting! I hope for more atsumina moments ...and maybe should had a little bit "trouble" cause taka's sweet, gentle, smell ? Lol ,nice fic ,tnk anw!

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Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! CHAPTER 2 Bulletin Board (Atsumina)
« Reply #16 on: February 23, 2012, 06:17:41 AM »
aww our takaboy is so gentleman :D we love him her, Im waiting for the next chapter

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Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! CHAPTER 2 Bulletin Board (Atsumina)
« Reply #17 on: February 23, 2012, 09:50:16 AM »
Oh~ they are so cute being embarassing like that~

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Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! CHAPTER 2 Bulletin Board (Atsumina)
« Reply #18 on: March 01, 2012, 11:38:19 AM »

Chapter 3: Takamina's Old Friends

Takamina was walking towards her school, she was thinking about her new friend Acchan, which she met yesterday, she can’t help but smile when she remembers her, and what they have done together testerday while she was walking and thinking, she heard a voice from behind calling her name, it was the girl that she was thinking, it was calling her name while running towards Takamina.

Acchan: Takamina!!!!, Takamina!!!

Takamina stopped and smiled when she saw the girl that was calling her name and running towards her

Takamina: Acchan!
Acchan: H…….I!

Acchan said while catching her breath, she is now holding her knees, Takamina helps Acchan get up by holding her arms gently  and helping her to stand.

Takamina: Easy!, Easy Acchan! Why are you running so fast?

   Acchan didn’t answer immediately because she was still blushing because Takamina is now holding her hands, Takamina didn’t notice it and thought Acchan was just catching her breath.

Acchan: I’m running because I want us to be together to walk to the school, but I really did not because when I saw you a while ago you were just a few feet away and I thought I can catch you easily but you walk so fast that our distance became so long that I needed to runto Catch you!

Takamina: why didn’t you just shout and called me???

Acchan: I was calling you all the time!!! But you can’t hear me! And you didn’t notice me because your mind is occupied with something that you even smile while walking without any reason!

Takamina: Oh, Im very sorry about that, You know I really had a poor hearing ability, and im just thinking thinking of some good memo ries a while ago that’s why im smiling

Acchan: really!! What is it plsssssss tell me!!

I was thinking thinking about our memories yesterday!!!, that really made me happy! Takamina thought

Takamina: nothing, it’s not interesting

Acchan: c’mon  Takamina I don’t believe you!!! What it is!!!

Takamina blushed then looked at the opposite direction of Acchans eyes who is now pouting.

Acchan: Dont you trust me???

Takamina:  I told you it’s nothing!! And I trust you

Their conversation continued, until Acchan gave up and finally changed the topic, they were talking and laughing when they reach their room.

Takamina couldn’t believe her eyes!!!!! It’s her friends and former classmates!!! And wearing a uniform just like her

Remember: Takamina came from a super elite school that only the richest families can afford, but they didn’t know about Takamina’s real identity because Takaminas father ordered her to disguise since she started studying, she said that she came from a middle-class family and just a full scholar that’s wahy she afforded the very high school expenses at their school, which they believed immediately because Takamina is really a bright and intelligent kid, so Takamina had her friends and enjoyed being at the school because they are good friends but when her father informed her that she will be in an ordinary public school for her high schoo, sher became very sad but she had no choice but to bid farewell to her friends, that couldn’t believe that she will leave the super prestigious school, but then she explained that she need to do so, because her relatives that was taking care of her, will going to transfer home because of their job, and told them that the school was still good because even though it’s just an ordinary high school, it has a special science section for intelligent middle-class student.

But now to her surprise her friends are her and wearing the same uniform as her.

Why do these super rich kids decided to study here? Takamina thought



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Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! CHAPTER 3 Catch up (Atsumina)
« Reply #19 on: March 01, 2012, 11:44:01 AM »
NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!

Introduction of other couples!
And revelation of the reason
why Takmina's Super Rich
Frinds decided to Study in
an ordinary public school!

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