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A Royal’s ‘Secret’ Mission
« on: April 17, 2012, 09:50:52 AM »
Hi, everyone! I'm quite new here (even though I've registered for quit a while  :nervous ), but I'm starting to regularly read every single fanfics posted in this forum.  :thumbsup Well, even though I haven't finish reading every SINGLE one yet (since there are a LOT  :sweatdrop: ), but I've spare my free time reading them anyway   :on study: . And being inspired by many fun and creative writers here, I'm starting to write (which I've never even tried before  :depressed:) a short fantasy story.

This story is mainly about one of my favourite OTP (guess who?  :glasses: Well, you'l know soon anyway :bigdeal: ). Since it's my first time writing it, I don't know whether it will be a good story or not.  :panic: I really do hope that at least one person would like it.  :on_pick: And since that I don't really know much about the real-life characteristics of mostly every chars I'm going to write about, I'll just write according to my own idea. I'm sorry if they'll not really be up to your expectation later (well, since I said that this is a fantasy story, and a fiction to add, I hope I will be forgiven  :sweat: ).

Okay, I think I've blabbered quite a lot here, and a lot of emoticons too (I'm really a messy person  :nervous :sweatdrop: ) , I think I'll just go with the prologue first. Without further adieu, may you guys have fun reading  :kneelbow:


A Royal’s ‘Secret’ Mission

Prologue

Somewhere on Earth, there is an unspecified country which has a very politically and economically stable life. This unspecified country is unbelievably ruled by a young prince. Well, not in an explicit control, due to the fact that the prince has still not come of age of ruling yet. The prince is expectedly very famous and every single female in the country could not deny that they are falling in love with him, or at least taken a liking at him. He’s very well-known as a kind, cute, handsome, charming, adorable, strong, – and so on – prince. In short, he’s the perfect guy one would want to fall in love with.

“Prince Matsui the Fifth, Matsui Ren, has once again made our country’s economy rise by politically and economically ‘joined hands’ with Country M. This joined event was held blahblahblah…”

The news about the prince joining hands with Country M has been spreading across the unspecified country, and is now airing in every single television channel. However, there is someone who does not even care about the news. She is now lying on her king-sized bed trying to watch the wall-mounted-36inch-lcd plasma which is in the opposite direction of her. While her eyes are landing on the screen, her mind seems to be wondering somewhere else. Suddenly, she sighs loudly and turns her body to the right. She reaches for one of her many pillows on the bed, and without even care of switching off the television, she starts to doze off.

Seconds later, an average-height girl walk herself into the bedroom. She stands by the side of the bed and watching her princess sleep peacefully. She smiles at the beautiful face of her princess, but later sighs when seeing that the television is still on. She reaches for the remote control which is located on a side lamp table next to the bed, and later press the switch off button. Then she puts back the remote control at previous location and she switches off the lamp before walking out of the bedroom, just to make her way to her own bedroom.

“I should go to sleep soon, and wake up early tomorrow to prepare for the meeting. Wonder what is going to happen tomorrow.” The girl mumbles to herself while humming.




So, what do you think of the prologue so far?  :on asmo: I hope that I didn't make you guys feel bored.  :cool2: I'll try to update next chapter soon. Glad that someone is willing to read this  :farofflook: See you soon!  :byebye: :mon bye: :mon scooter:
« Last Edit: April 18, 2012, 10:44:34 PM by lollita90 »
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Re: A Royal’s ‘Secret’ Mission (Short story, maybe?)
« Reply #1 on: April 17, 2012, 10:04:57 AM »
Lollita-san, your worries whether someone would like it is no longer needed to be fretted about!  :cool1: Because I LIKE it. No...Like is not the right word...

LOVE~!

I LOVE this!

Do you know why? Well... You wrote about Rena-sama as a GUY, and as a PRINCE! I haven't read a fic about Rena-sama being a prince before, so this is my first! And it's a great first!  :on GJ: You are an author, you control the fate of the characters i'm sure you have read about me killing off Erena so I don't think that anyone would be disappointed with this story! I WILL not be disappointed!

And I wonder who's the princess?  :dunno: I'm suspecting Jurina-chan, or maybe Airin... Not really sure.

One last thing~!

Ren-sama is a prince!!!! hooray! I likethis! I'm going to wait for more updates on this!
« Last Edit: April 17, 2012, 11:49:16 AM by karomuwi »
Had a withdrawal, so now I'm planning to fall in love with the couples all over again

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Re: A Royal’s ‘Secret’ Mission (Short story, maybe?)
« Reply #2 on: April 17, 2012, 11:32:44 AM »
This is so interesting  :) , please continue  :thumbsup

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Re: A Royal’s ‘Secret’ Mission (Short story, maybe?)
« Reply #3 on: April 17, 2012, 11:50:57 AM »
no one can resist Ren's charm  :wub:

please continue..i wanna know who is the princess..


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Re: A Royal’s ‘Secret’ Mission (Short story, maybe?)
« Reply #4 on: April 17, 2012, 01:38:53 PM »
For the pairing, I guess it's WMatsui?
Prince Ren, it should be interesting ^^

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Re: A Royal’s ‘Secret’ Mission (Short story, maybe?)
« Reply #5 on: April 18, 2012, 12:15:10 AM »
UOooOO~!!!

REN-SAMA~!!!!!

Please update soon~!

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A Royal’s ‘Secret’ Mission : Chapter 1, Part 1
« Reply #6 on: April 18, 2012, 02:45:35 AM »
@karo-chan : thank you for commenting first, karo-chan!  :onioncheer: I really222 appreciate it! Saying that you love this story made me feel embarrass.  :shy2: I hope it's not too much making Renachan as a prince. I'll keep doing my best for this first story of mine.  :mon study: And yeah, I've read about you killing off Erena.. hahah.. please update the story soon. I'll be waiting patiently..  :mon impatient: I hope this will not disappoint you.. :mon whimper:  Anyway, i'll let you keep guessing who the princess is for now. I think it'll come quite later in the story. And thank you so much for reading this, and thank you for leaving a comment.  :gmon heartu:

@haruhi-chan : thank you for reading and commenting. Here is an update, hope I won't let you down.  :gmon sweet:

@yukofan : yeah, agree on that! No one can resist Ren's charm!  :mon bleed2: :luvluv1: I'll let you keep guessing who the princess is until later chapter..  :glasses: thank you for reading this, and leaving a comment too!

@kahem : are you sure it will be WMatsui? :hehehe: hope that I can keep make you feel interesting.. thank you for reading and commenting..

@RenaChii : Hai! I'll update as soon as I can. thank you for reading and comment too!  :on slopkiss:

@those who leaving a thank you : thank you for reading, and leaving a thank you too!  :luvuluvu:

@all readers (silent or not) : Minna!! thank you for reading my first story!  Actually, I was planning of making this a one-short, but when I start writing the prologue yesterday, I feel like this story is going to be quite long for a OS  :mon sweat: . Maybe it'll turn out into a short story, or a long one, I still don't know yet. I hope you guys fine this story interesting enough to fill your spare time.  :mon cute: I'll try to update them as frequently as possible :mon determined: . And I'm sorry for any grammar or vocabulary mistakes, since English is not the language of my tongue. And so, here's the update for chapter 1. I break it into parts, and here is the part 1. Will update the next soon, hopefully some time on the weekend (I have to go out of town for a while :mon scooter: ). Happy reading, guys! And thank you once again!  :kneelbow:



A Royal's 'Secret' Mission

Chapter 1 - Part 1

“Cuckoo.. Wake up you sleepy head!! Cuckoo.. Wake up you sleepy head!!”

A robotic sound that comes from a digital alarm clock wakes a girl up from her sleep. Woke up in a shocking state, she feels her head ache. Still trying to calm herself from the shocking state, and also a painful headache, she blinks her eyes few times while pressing her fingers on her forehead.

“Cuckoo.. Wake up you sleepy head!! Cuckoo.. Wake up…”

Suddenly the robotic sound echoes again, and before it even manage to finish, the girl has already grab the digital clock. She turns it off and throws it to the wall across her while mumbling, “stupid alarm clock! Always disturb my dream!”

The clock hit the wall and falls onto the floor in broken pieces. “Ugh! Now who’s stupid? I have to buy a new clock again, damn it!” The girl sighs and curses herself.

She wakes up and starts collecting the broken pieces of clock before throwing them into a small dustbin. Then she fixes the futon and blanket and put them inside a wardrobe. She walks to the bathroom to wash herself up. After finish washing up, she starts changing into her school uniform and fixes her hair and her face. She decides to let her hair loose, revealing black, straight hair falling onto her chest. She puts on cherry chapstick lipbum onto her lips before pursing her lips. She smiles while watching the reflection on the mirror before walking out from the place. She starts walking towards the school. After a few seconds, she sighs.

“I really don’t want to go to school.”

***

The girl’s POV

I manage to arrive to school, after hesitating for many times. I don’t know why I keep coming to this school. I really hate school! In fact, I really hate my school life! I never have even a single happy moment in my life related to school. I finally arrive in front of my classroom, and I sigh. I pull the door, watching every member in the classroom. No one realize or care of my existence, and not that I care either. I walk to my desk, which is located at the end, far back of the class. I pull my chair and sit down.

I can see from the corner of my eye that in one corner of the room, there are three girls whispering to themselves while their eyes keep watching me from far. I pay no attention to them and keep looking out the window. Nothing seems interesting to me. There is not even a single bird flying in the sky. The sky is dark with clouds all over. It’s going to rain soon, I think.

The three girls walk their way towards me with a smirk on their faces. They stand beside me, and start calling me in a very rude way.

“Hey, commoner! Why do you keep coming to school, huh? Don’t you realize yet that there’s no one care about you! No one wants to see you here!” said a girl standing in the center. She is the leader of all three. She smirks.

“Yeah, Umechan is right! You’re nothing but a trash! You, low life scum!” Now, the one standing to the right of the leader voices out. She points out her index finger and pushes my head with it. I am still keeping my innocent face, not even care of anything they say.

“Shh, don’t be too rough Akane. You will ruin your own image.” The girl on the left says to the one who pushed my head just now. The girl name Akane just ‘hmph’ and crossing her arms to her chest. Then she turns her head towards Umechan, their leader.

“Nee, Umechan, what should we do? She doesn’t seem to be listening to us.”

“Huh! Rikki, grab her!” Umemoto Madoka orders to the girl on her left, Hirata Rikako. The said girl, Rikki, grabs my collar, pulls me to the back of the class, and pushes me hard to the wall behind me. I hiss to the feeling of pain on my back. I glance at Rikki who’s still grabbing the collar of my shirt, before staring at the other two who are walking towards me.

Everyone in the classroom becomes silent before they start to make a noise again, wooing, booing, and supporting whatever that the three girls in front of me trying to do. The three girls smirk while staring intensely at me. Not trying to lose, I stare fiercely to each of them, switching from one to another, simultaneously before landing my eyes on the leader. I open my mouth, starting to voicing out my voice.

“WHAT ARE YOU..”

PANGGG!!!

Before I even finish my sentence, I feel pain on my right cheek. My head is now turned to the left, due to receiving a slap from Umemoto. I press my lips, and clench my fists before turning back to her. I glare at her eyes with anger, raging in my heart. I can see that everyone is cheering while some are laughing to the incident.

“DO. NOT. EVER. DARE. SHOUT. TO. ME!!” Umemoto shouts near my face.

My left ear hurts with her shouting. I can still feel the pain on my back, and on my right cheek. I’m sure that they’re going to be bruised later on. They were hard, you know?

With the incident happened, and everyone shouting and cheering, wooing and booing, no one realize a girl comes into the classroom. Not even the ones bullying, and being bullied.

“Listen, Matsui Jurina! Never ever show your face to this class! Again! Do you understand me?!” Umemoto is shouting again. This time I’m sure that even the neighboring classes can hear her words clearly.

I clench my teeth before looking down, staring at my feet. Both my hands grip the hem of my skirt.

“I said, DO YOU UNDERSTAND ME, Matsui Jurina?” Akane’s hand grips my hair, and pulls my head up. I sigh, feeling defeated as always, before nodded my head. With that, they push me onto the floor before letting me go. They turn and walk away from me.

Slowly, I stand up and walk back to my seat to grab my school bag on my desk. I walk outside from the classroom, and head towards the rooftop. For me, that’s the only place where I can find peace. I keep walking, hoping that no one will disturb my life anymore. When I reach the rooftop, I lie myself down on a bench. Right when I was about to close my eyes, suddenly rain start to pour down. At first, it is just a few drops, then it becomes raining cats and dogs.

“Kami-sama, you really do understand my feelings, don’t you?” I start sobbing, alongside with the rain, wetting my face, my hair, my cloth, all over me. After a minute of sobbing, and no sign of stopping, I feel like there’s no more water drop on my head. I thought that the rain has stop, but there’s still the sound of rain, dropping heavily onto the ground. I stop sobbing, and wipe the wetness on my face. I open my eyes and look up, just to see that someone is holding an umbrella over my head, covering me from the rain.

“There you are! I finally found you, Jurina-chan!”

“Anna-chan…” I whisper slowly while looking at her. Ishida Anna, she’s the only friend I have in my life. The only friend I have since I lost both of my parents.

My parents died in an accident when I was seven. It happened on a heavy rainy day, just like right now. My mother had always been sick, and my dad had always been driving her to the hospital. Unfortunately, one day they got into an accident while on their way to the hospital. Or so, at that time I believed that they got into accident.

After their funeral, Anna’s family has been taking care of me. However, being me who never likes being taken care of especially out of feelings of sympathy or pity, I start living on my own. I live in an old, small, empty house that looks like a store or something which is owned by Anna’s father (that’s also after arguing a bit with Mr. Ishida. He feels like he has to take care of me since I’m still a kid to him, though many people said that I look older than my age).

Still, every single utility in the house is paid by Mr. Ishida. I am very reluctant to that, and so I argued again with him and made an agreement. I have to work with him, until I reach legal age, or until I can really, really, he mean, REALLY, take care of my own self. Or at least, marry a rich man, or a prince, or king or any country (which I know it will never happen in my life).

Until now, I never like every time when it’s raining. I despise rain! Nothing better has ever happened to me when it’s raining. Somehow, I think that I’m just like the rain, dark and gloomy.

Recently, I start thinking that probably my parents did not get into accident, but someone has actually killed them. I don’t know who or what, and I don’t know how they killed my parents, and I don’t even know whether my theory is true or not. But I believe that my instinct is right. And I realized that lately, I feel like someone or something has been following me, but since nothing has happened so far, I just thought that maybe I was just over thinking. Yeah, over think, probably.

“Jurina-chan.. Jurina-chan! JURINA-CHAN!!”

“Aww..! Ittaiii! Anna-chan, it hurts..!” I rub my left cheek which Anna pinched just now. It hurts though. Aww, is my body going to be hurt today? Just now, it was my back, my right cheek, my head, and now my left cheek too? Next, where else is going to be hurt?

“Mou, Jurina-chan.. I’ve called your names many times, but you didn’t hear me at all. I’m sorry, Jurina-chan. I didn’t mean to hurt you. Did it hurt so much?”

I nod my head slowly while rubbing my cheek. I pout, and sigh.

“Aaa, gomen, Jurina-chan.. Let me help you heal it.” Anna suddenly bends her body towards me, and kiss right on my cheek. “There, is it fine now? Will you forgive me now?” She asks while making the puppy-look face. I don’t know how to describe it, but it just looks so cute! I couldn’t resist myself from kissing her forehead, and smile to reassure the girl. I pat her head and said,

“It’s nothing much, really. I was just teasing you, you know? Hehe..” I chuckle a bit while looking at her. She’s forming a smile on her cute lip with a smile saying ‘I know’.

“Nee, Jurina-chan. Let’s go to the infirmary. I think it’s better if you get a check-up from just now.” Anna is now sitting beside me on the same bench. I just shook my head and looking downwards again.

“Please, Jurina-chan. You know that I care about you, don’t you? Forget whatever they said. I’m your friend. I will always be your friend. I will always love you, and care for you.” Anna puts one of her hand on my shoulder.

“It’s not about that, Anna-chan. I think what they said is true. I’m nothing but a trash in this school. No one has ever cared about me, no one has ever tried to befriend with me. Except for you, of course, but you have been my friend since we were kids.”

I clench my fists again. I am trying so hard to resist myself from crying again. I don’t want to look so weak, especially in front of Anna.

“Who cares? Does it really matter? You are not no one! You are the number one student in this school! Remember? You have always been at the top, getting top scores in every subject.”

I pout more when hearing what Anna says. “Yeah, I’m just a geek, the nerd no one cares..” I mumble to myself, but it seems that Anna still manage to hear what I said. She turns my face towards her and presses both her palms on my cheeks, made me looks like a fish. She stares into my eyes, straight into my heart.

“Like I said, who cares? And in fact, you still have me, Jurina-chan. You will never be alone! I will always be by your side. Forever! Please, Jurina-chan, don’t say things like this again. It hurts me seeing you like this.”

I look into Anna’s eyes. I can see the love and the care that she has for me. Finally, I ease up, and I try to smile, but stop when realize that both Anna’s hands are still pressing my cheeks.

“Anna-chan..”

“Yes, Jurina-chan?” she looks at me with curiosity, and tilted her head to her side.

“How long are you going to press my cheeks?” I ask her slowly, but in a very difficult way. I’m not even sure whether she could understand what I’m saying or not. Really, it’s hard to speak when your cheeks are being pressed and your mouth looks like the mouth of a fish, or to be exact, I look like the character Dory in ‘Finding Nemo’ cartoon right now..

“Until you make a promise to me. Promise me that you won’t say things like this again, okay?”

I nod my head (well actually, it was Anna’s hands that move my head up and down) before trying to make a smile again. Anna let her hands go, and laugh. I frown before asking to her,

“Why are you laughing so suddenly?”

“You should look at your face just now, it was so priceless, Jurina-chan! Hahaha!” Anna continues her laughing while I keep pouting.

“Haha, Jurina-chan is so cute!” Anna pokes my cheek.

“Yeah, I know that. I am always cute.” I pull out my tongue at her, and stand up. I start running towards the door and leaving Anna clueless with my action.

“Hey, where are you going??” Anna asks, while blinking her eyes.

“To the infirmary. Where else? Are you coming with me?”

Anna smiles and starts picking up her things and also her umbrella before following Jurina.

“But we have to dry ourselves and change our uniforms first!”
« Last Edit: April 18, 2012, 10:46:09 PM by lollita90 »
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Re: A Royal’s ‘Secret’ Mission (Short story, maybe?)
« Reply #7 on: April 18, 2012, 04:18:34 AM »
YAY~! A new update~! :onioncheer: Go, go JU-RI-NA! Go, kick their butts!  :onioncheer: Go, go kill them!  :onioncheer: Kill them except A-ka-ne~!

 :bigdeal: What? I like Churi! She has the same birthday as me!  :on lol:

I really was wondering why no one has commented first, so I decided to be the number #1 in commenting to show how great the prologue is! And you should know....ANY story. ANY fic with Rena-sama as a GIRL or a BOY will always be LOVED by MOI~!  :luvluv1: I'm really biased about her, that's why.  :lol: Patiently, huh? Then why the long face~!  :lol: And DO NOT worry about disapointing me. Any fic with Rena-sama in it, SHALL be a GREAT, AWESOME and WONDERFUL fic for me.  :luvluv2:

Anyway~! Comments~!

The moment I read Jurina's name....I was like...  :farofflook: Yes! :nya: A W Matsui fic! :farofflook: Thank you, Lo-san. (can I call you that? I don't think Lol-san would be respectful. And tell me if you want me to drop the formalities. I wanted you to call me Karo-chan, that's why. Ahahaha~! ^^)

And YES~!  :on gay: Anna-chan is here! Now I shall be able to have some inspiration for my Anna-Kumi in T.A.F (The Akiba Family)~! :kneelbow: Thank you, Lo-san. So...How is Jurina going to meet Rena-sama? Or should I say? REN-sama? Is it going to be in a ball? Or an accident? Or maybe REN-sama goes to the school and asks Jurina for her hand in marriage due to Jurina's parents making some sort of deal with the royal parents? Or maybe *babbles on*

Sorry.  :sweat: My imagination just runs wild whenever RENA/REN is involved. :kneelbow: I apologize for that.

And I'm waiting 'patiently' for the next update~! Please update soon~!  :shifty: Or else. Ahahaha~!  :lol:

Tata~!  :byebye:
« Last Edit: April 18, 2012, 06:23:37 AM by karomuwi »
Had a withdrawal, so now I'm planning to fall in love with the couples all over again

\(^ - ^)/
Here are my fics~! They can be found amongst these three. :hee:

Shots
Love's A Mission
Oh My Dolly!


R.A.Y
SoUL (Series)


The Akiba Family (T.A.F)

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Re: A Royal’s ‘Secret’ Mission (Short story, maybe?)
« Reply #8 on: April 18, 2012, 08:03:22 AM »
@anzai-san : Ahaha, my imagination just run wild. :nervous I hope I won't disappoint you with the different personalities that they have in this story, compared to the real-life. Sorry that the Umechan you love is made as a bad person in this story. :kneelbow: And yeah, I believe that I never saw Yukirin as a boy/prince too, but I've read some stories of Yukirin as a King/Lord or some sort. But I don't think she's act as a male though. Anyway, thank you for reading and commenting!  :luvluv2:

@karo-chan : You like Churi? I wonder what will happen if I make Jurina kill her though  :shifty: Hahaa.. kidding2.. lol.. Yes, I think this might be a WMatsui story (think so? :dunno:) Anna-Kumi? Really? Don't you think that Kumi-Kanon is 'hot' right now? :hehehe: Hehhee.. We'll see what pairings are going to be in this story.. And please, keep guessing how Ren/Rena and Jurina will meet each other. I won't spoil it to you though. Not right now. :kekeke: I won't mind with your wild imaginations. They might help me in some way for writing this story (eventhough I've already thought some of what you said before) :kneelbow: Thank you for reading, and commenting, karo-chan! You said I was fast, and you're really fast too!  :on GJ:

What to call me? Btw, you can just call me Lollichan, or Izzychan, or just Izzy or Lolly. But no 'san' please. I'm not really used of formalities, especially in Japanese honorific way / kind of things.  :cool1:

Thank you for reading, for leaving thank you, for commenting, or just for being a silent reader! I really appreciate it!
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Re: A Royal’s ‘Secret’ Mission
« Reply #9 on: April 20, 2012, 05:14:23 AM »
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Jurina is getting bullied by Churi!?
WHY!?
WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT CHURI!?

Gaaaaaah~
Poor Jurina~
It's okay, Jurina!
You have Anna to help you!

Wait-
Anna?!
OMG IT'S ANNA!!!!!
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Hardly anyone have Anna as a character in their fanfics!

I LOVE YOU FOR THIS lollita-san!

THE AWESOME ANNA MAKES AN APPEARANCE!  :cow:

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Re: A Royal’s ‘Secret’ Mission
« Reply #10 on: April 20, 2012, 07:55:50 AM »
If it's not WMatsui, it's Ren/Airin?
Poor Jurina, she should just kick the girls' ass!

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A Royal’s ‘Secret’ Mission - Chapter 1 Part 2
« Reply #11 on: April 21, 2012, 01:30:44 AM »
Ok guys, new update! I'm not sure whether this is long or short, and I'm kinda in a hurry, so I didn't proof read it. I apologize for any mistake, or grammatical error, etc. And I decided to change this into past tense, since it's kinda hard to make it in present tense. But still, I'm sure there are mistakes everywhere, so sorry for that. And sorry too if it's kinda boring to you guys. Thank you for reading!  :kneelbow:

A Royal's 'Secret' Mission

Chapter 1 – Part 2

Meanwhile in the city, a certain someone was sitting in a black limousine while reading a book. He seemed like he was reading the book on his lap, but truth was, his mind was wandering somewhere else. He sighed, closing the book, and turned his head to his side, watching whatever scenery that he can see from outside the window of the limo. When actually there’s nothing that he could see since the rain was pouring heavily outside the car right now. He sighed again.

“Ren-Oujisama.” A voice came from the opposite seat. Hearing the title was being voiced out along with his name, Ren, or shall I say, Prince Matsui the Fifth, Prince Matsui Ren, turned his head towards the owner of the voice. He sighed again for the nth time today.

“Yagami Kuu-SAN.” Ren called out the other person’s name. He gave the other person a very dissatisfied look and received a small smirk as exchange. Ren sighed again.

“Kuumin. You know I don’t like it when you call me like that, do you?”

“I know, Ren-sama. I was calling you for quite some time, but you didn’t hear me. So I decided to tease you a bit.” Kuumin knows well the fact that Ren-sama does not like people call him Oujisama, and really hates it when it comes from anyone who’s close to him. Kuumin saw Ren was sighing again.

“Plus, you look like you’re not here.” Ren frowned.

“What do you mean I look like I’m not here? Can’t you see me?” Ren waved his hand in front of Kuumin’s face.

“Of course I can see you, Ren-sama. Your body was here, but your mind and soul were somehow not here. You were like deep in your thought, or so I think. Care to share what you were thinking, Ren-sama? Or are you bored? Do you want me to turn on the tv?”

Ren sighed before looking out the window again. ‘What was I thinking just now? Did I really think of anything? I don’t even know what am I suppose to think.’ Ren monologues echoed in his head. He sighed. He jumped a little when he felt a finger poked his cheek.

“Gotcha! See? I can see your soul trying to get off from your body. Luckily, I catch it again before it flies away. You sigh a lot today, Ren-sama. Is something wrong? Are you feeling depressed?”

“You know I have this habit of sighing since I was small, right? Don’t worry, I’m fine. And I don’t even know what I was thinking, or whether I did think of something or not. Maybe I just feel bored, but I don’t want to watch the tv either. And by the way Kuumin, could you stop calling my name with ‘sama’? It’s annoying!”

Ren crossed his arms across his chest. Yagami Kuu stared at Ren’s face which was clearly showing the annoying look before he smiled with the sweetest smile he has. Ren flustered upon seeing the smile.

“I’m sorry that I could not fulfill your wish, Ren-sama. Not this time. Not when we’re not in a private time together, just the two of us without anyone else. And especially when we’re both dress like this. Ren-sama, I am Yagami Kuu, a humble butler serving a much honored master. How can I disrespect you in any way?”

Ren already know the answer that Kuumin gave. This conversation has been discussed many times already. Sure, Kuumin is his butler, but he is also the only bestfriend that Matsui Ren has ever had in his life. They have known each other since they both were small kids.

The Yagami Family has been served the Matsui family for generations. It is a fate that Kuumin couldn’t escape. Kuumin has been brought up together with Ren in the palace (not like a palace in the fairytale stories. Well, more like a mansion actually. A HUUUUGEEE mansion that has everything one could ask for). They were playing together, learning together, do everything together. Since them both were still kids at that time, so Kuumin has not yet been a butler of a certain Master Matsui.

It was until Ren reached the age of a first year of junior high school. Matsui Ren’s late parents had always been saying that Ren is the one who will take over their place soon, so he needs to learn many things. All these while, Ren and Kuumin had been taking lessons at home. All sorts of professional teachers had been coming in and out of the palace to teach all sorts of things, from sciences to arts and linguistics. Ren made a request to go to school even though he has already learned way beyond what normal people should have learned. He said to his late parents, the late King and Queen Matsui that he wanted to know and learn about people, and experience with them. It wasn’t and order from the upper, but since he has already matured earlier than his age, he thinks and acts like an adult.

So when Ren started to go to school, Kuumin also had to be besides him. He acted like a friend when they were in school and a butler at the same time. They both went into the same class in the junior high school, though Kuumin was two years younger. They made friends with some people, but no one was really close to Ren other than Kuumin. Everyone put like a barrier between Ren and themselves, and call him Ren-sama or Ren-Oujisama. Up until now, only Kuumin alone accepts him as a true person, not as a prince.

“Nee, Kuumin. Do you know why Uncle wants to meet me?” Ren has a curious and worried look on his face. He sees Kuumin smiles sweetly. ‘Kuu’s smile really can make a girl turns head over heels into him’ Ren thought to himself.

“I’m sorry Ren-sama. I cannot tell you even if I know why Akimoto-sama wants to meet you.”

Ren sighed again. ‘As always, too many secrets’.

***

The black limousine finally made its arrival in front of a theater-like building. Prince Matsui Ren and his butler, Yagami Kuu both walked out from the car and stepped on a red carpet prepared specially for his arrival. Upon seeing his figure, the citizens who were standing on the sides were shouting his name loudly and crazily.

“Aaaa!! Oujisama!!!”

“Ren-Oujisama!!”

Some even reached out their hands trying to touch the pale-yet-delicate skin than Ren has, but they were stopped immediately by his butler. The girls went crazier and started screaming Kuu’s name.

“Aaaaa Kuu-sama!!”

“Kuu-sama, kakkoii!!!”

Kuumin was just smiling sweetly as always towards the girls shouting his name. His smile made some girls fainted onto the floor. Ren who was seeing the scene, smirked. Trying not to lose, he took away the sunglasses that he was wearing, waving to them, smiled, and winked and threw some flying kisses to the girls. His actions made the girls became even crazier until they reached their limits before they fainted. Before entering the building, Ren patted the last bodyguard’s shoulder.

“Please take care of them. Thank you.” Ren smiled. The guard nodded his head.

Ren and Kuu walked inside the building and waited for a hidden elevator. The elevator was specially made for the visit from any royal family and staffs. Other people have to use the escalators which are located at every corner inside the building.
“Looks like the guards could not handle them much. Do you think we should hire new guards?” Ren asked.

“It’s up to you, Ren-sama. I’ll always agree to every decision you’ll make.” Kuumin answered while bowing her head down.

“Hmm. I think I’ll just let the current guards handle them. Hopefully they can improve their service, or else…” Ren had an evil smile plastered on his face. Knowing that his master was thinking of something evil, Kuumin can only shook his head.

Ding! The elevator doors opened and both of them went inside. While waiting for the elevator to reach the highest level, silence was surrounding them.

“YES!” Suddenly, out of nowhere, Ren shouted while throwing his fist to the air above his head and wide grin plastered on his face.

“Is everything okay, Ren-sama?” Kuumin asked worriedly.

“Yes! Seems like I win again this time, eh Kuumin?” Remembering the scene that they had just now (referring to the girls shouting, screaming and fainting), Kuumin made a bet.

“I’ll make sure that I won’t lose to you next time!” Kuumin patted Ren’s shoulder and gave him a very confident look.

After a few seconds, they finally arrived on the sixth level. They slowly made their way through an alley, passing through few office rooms. Their destination is the room at the end of the alley, which clearly shown the name, ‘Akimoto Yasushi’. Kuumin knocked the door few times before he opened it, allowing Ren to enter.

“Hello, Rena-chan! Upss! Ren-kun!” Akimoto grinned widely upon seeing Ren’s face. He walked slowly towards Ren while opening his arm as an invitation for a hug. Ren accepted the invitation and threw himself into his uncle, hugging that lasted for a minute.

“Hello, Uncle! Miss me much?” Ren gave him a sweet smile.

“Of course, Ren! Why wouldn’t I miss you? You’re the only one I have in this world!” Akimoto patted Ren’s back and messing up his hair before he let him go. He received a sharp glare from his nephew and a pout after.

“Ahem!” Akimoto and Ren turned their head towards the sound.

“Well, looks like someone here is jealous. Haha Kumi-chan..”

“Kuumin, sir. Not Kumi-chan.” Kuumin interrupted Akimoto’s speech. He mentally facepalm himself.

“Kuumin, right.” Akimoto nodded his head.

“Well, as I was saying, you’re the second one that I have in this world. You guys are like my own children, you know? Come here, give me a hug too!” As soon as he finished saying, Kuumin ran into his arm.

“I missed you so much, uncle!” Kuumin said while sobbing a little.

“I miss you too. Now, now, we don’t want to create a drama, do we?” Akimoto let him go before sitting on a couch in the middle of the room, but that’s also after he messed up Kuumin’s hair too. Both Ren and Kuumin also sit on other couch, opposite to Akimoto.

“So, what’s up, Uncle?”

“Ren, I have two important matters that I have to tell you. These things are secrets in the royal family, and no one knows other than the royal members. They are in a way, a mission for you, and you alone. You can’t really ask anyone for help, not including Kumi-cha – I mean, Kuumin. You got it?”

Akimoto looked straight into Ren’s eyes. He had a very serious look on his face, making Ren startled before nodding his head slowly. ‘Woah, this must be really serious! I don’t even dare to look into Uncle’s eyes.’ Ren’s thought to himself.

“First, I’m not sure if you would be really surprised if I tell you this. You have a long-lost cousin that you have to search for.”

“Cousin? I’ve never heard that I have a cousin before?” Ren’s eyes widened.

“Yes. That’s why I said it’s a secret of the family. You see, your late father actually had an older brother, Matsui Yuichi. He was supposed to be the one to take over the crown instead of your family. However, when he was young, he fell in love with a woman and made her pregnant. He married with that woman, but your late grandfather didn’t approve of the marriage because his wife wasn’t from a noble family. She’s just a normal citizen of the country. So, he disowned your uncle and his pregnant wife from this family. He also set a rule in the house that no one shall ever see or talk about your uncle anymore.”

“Wow, I can’t believe this! How can grandpa do that? It’s unforgivable!” Ren shout. Both Kuumin and Akimoto could see the fire burning in his eyes. Kuumin patted his shoulder, and gave a smile saying, ‘it’s okay, calm down’.

“Since your uncle had been thrown out of the family, it was your father who got the crown instead.  But in order to rule a country, a king must have a wife. Your late grandparents chose the bride for him, which was your mother, a.k.a. my own sister.”

“Oh, okay. So I have to find this cousin that you said my uncle and aunt were having when they were.. uh.. so hard for me to say the word.. thrown out?” Ren had mixed feelings when he tried to say the word ‘thrown out’. Sadness, anger, longing, etc. He didn’t feel happy when hearing the ‘news’, the secret that they have been keeping from him for a very long time now.

“No. Not that cousin. The one you have to find is another one.” Akimoto answered, gaining a puzzled look from his nephew.

“Kuumin, please continue for me. This thing always gives me headache.” Akimoto sighed. He massaged his forehead due to the headache. Kuumin nodded and cleared his throat.

“Well, it’s like this. The baby that Matsui Yuichi-sama was having when uh.. things happened, is already dead. His wife actually was not healthy enough to carry a baby, and she got miscarriage after around six months of pregnancy. A year after, you were born to the family. And six years after you were born, your aunt got pregnant again. And this time, she succeeded in delivering the baby. The baby was named, Matsui Jurina.”

‘Jurina, huh? A girl? Can’t wait to meet her. I wonder how she looks like. She must be at least cute, like her name.’ Ren smiled and lost in his own thoughts. Seeing that Ren had somehow a pervert kind of look on his face, Kuumin cleared his throat again, making Ren’s blushed.

“S..So, I need to find this girl, huh? What was her name again?” Ren stuttered. Though he already caught the name before, he asked again, wanting the name to reach his ears again. Without him realizing, the name has already made a place in his heart.

“Matsui Jurina, Ren-sama.” Kuumin smirked. He mentally face palmed his face when seeing his master’s behavior.

“Yosh! I’m going to find this girl, Matsui Jurina, and my long-lost uncle and aunt too! And I’ll bring them back into the family! Yosshaa!!” Ren suddenly stand up while screaming, and throwing both his fists into the air.

“Unfortunately, Ren-sama, you can’t do that. Both your uncle and aunt were dead too.”

“WHAT? Not them too!” Ren were totally surprised.

“Don’t tell me they were killed by the assassins too!?” Ren became even angrier.

“Arghhh!!” He clenched his fists tightly and punched the wall next to him.

“Woah, easy there, Ren. I don’t want you to break anything in here, including your hands.” Akimoto said, trying to calm him down. Kuumin grabbed Ren’s shoulder and pull him down onto the couch.

“Yes, they were killed, but not by the assassins like our late parents. Your uncle and aunt were killed by the debt collector. Your uncle borrowed money from an organization to pay for his wife’s medical bills. I told you she was not healthy, and she’s been going in out from the hospital since their daughter was born. However, they did not manage to pay the money back in full. One day, when they were in their way to the hospital, they were killed by the organization’s people, by making them looked like they got into an accident.”

“How about Jurina? Was she k..ki..killed too? Is she ss..still alive?” Ren asked furiously. He grabbed both Kuumin’s shoulders and started shaking them hardly. Kuumin started feeling dizzy due to the shakiness.

“Fortunately, yes. She’s still alive. However, who knows if she’ll be the next target of the group. It’s your job to find her as soon as possible and protect her. Do you understand, Ren?” Akimoto was taking the turn to speak after seeing Kuumin was in a poor position to talk.

“Yes, sir! I’ll gladly take this job and I won’t let you down, uncle. I, Matsui Ren, promise you that I will find this girl, Matsui Jurina, and protect her with everything I can!” Ren clenched his fists again, and confidently made a promise. Both Akimoto and Kuumin smiled upon hearing Ren’s words. Seeing how confident and determined he was, they both burst into laughs. Ren’s eyes widened and he pout after.

“So, what’s the second secret? Or mission?” Ren asked, still pouting.

“Your second mission is, you have a year to find a girl in order for you to get married.” Akimoto said after he finished the laughing session.

“Wha.. WHAT??!!”



so, that's it for chapter one. hope you guys find it enjoyable at least. I'm not really good at writing and making a fiction.  :on cloudeye: just tell me if it's bad. i'll try to improve it. if you guys have any questions, just ask here, i'll try to answer them in a comment or try include them in the story. i'll reply your comments when i have free time. well, see ya! and thank you again!  :mon bye:
« Last Edit: September 11, 2012, 05:20:19 AM by lollita90 »
I love FTM. Nuff said.

Offline kurogumi

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Re: A Royal’s ‘Secret’ Mission
« Reply #12 on: April 21, 2012, 03:33:09 AM »
This storyline is interesting...

A year to find a wife eh? well its Jurina-chan your future wife Ren-cha.. Lol


Ah thank for this fic...i wil wait the next update since this pairing maybe Wmatsui...hehehe

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Re: A Royal’s ‘Secret’ Mission
« Reply #13 on: April 21, 2012, 04:58:48 AM »
hoho..so ren need to find his cousin and a girlfriend..

don't worry,ren-sama.jurina is waiting for you..

nice chapter..can't wait for the WMatsui to meet..


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Re: A Royal’s ‘Secret’ Mission
« Reply #14 on: April 21, 2012, 05:36:52 AM »
oooh another ske fic! interestingggg  :thumbup

so ....ren needs to find his cousin jurina and he also needs to find someone to marry and if this is going to be a wmtatsui fic then......o.o incest???

orrrr.....theres gonna be more twists in the story and more characters are gonna appear ! i was gonna say jurichuri...but forgot that churi bullied jurina in the first part *facepalm*

gah...oooh renairin would be awesome  :D thats if airin is in this LOL

kuumin!! so cute! *cough* i mean kakkoi ....is kuumin also gonna have a love interest appear?  :P

lolol thanks for the update though  :thumbsup

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Re: A Royal’s ‘Secret’ Mission
« Reply #15 on: April 21, 2012, 01:59:03 PM »
another interesting ske fiction..
really like your story..
cannot wait for ren-sama to start his mission

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Re: A Royal’s ‘Secret’ Mission
« Reply #16 on: April 21, 2012, 03:07:01 PM »
Oh cousins? Hum interesting.
I wonder if Ren is not a girl lol

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Re: A Royal’s ‘Secret’ Mission
« Reply #17 on: April 24, 2012, 05:38:22 PM »
Oooh~! INCEST!!!

W MATSUI!!!

REN-SAMA!!!

What more can I want from this fic of yours Izzy-chan? You already added my favorite couple! And now I can't ask for more...but for you to update. XP Ahahaha. Waiting for your update soon, Izzy-chan! ^^
Had a withdrawal, so now I'm planning to fall in love with the couples all over again

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Re: A Royal’s ‘Secret’ Mission
« Reply #18 on: April 25, 2012, 04:00:51 AM »
YEAH MY wmatsui is back thanx a lot

interesting story please keep  going  to  :D

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Re: A Royal’s ‘Secret’ Mission
« Reply #19 on: April 25, 2012, 07:54:52 AM »
I sense crossdress~  :ding:
I mean...
Seconds later, an average-height girl walk herself into the bedroom. She stands by the side of the bed and watching her princess sleep peacefully.
princess = Ren/Rena
average-height girl = Kuumin       

and also this...
“I should go to sleep soon, and wake up early tomorrow to prepare for the meeting. Wonder what is going to happen tomorrow.” The girl mumbles to herself while humming.
meeting = meeting with Uncle Akimoto

and in part 2
Akimoto called Ren 'Rena-chan' and Kuumin 'Kumi-chan'


And I'm actually guessing that Ren and Kuumin will study at Jurina's school as girls. Because if they will go there as boys the girls will go crazy~  :on lol:

well~ those are my thoughts~
I'll just wait for the next update~  :hee:
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