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xxx Forgotten Memories ( YukiRena )
forgotten memories
xxxxxxPrologue Part 1
xxxxxxPrologue Part 2
xxxxxxChapter 1
xxxxxxChapter 2 Part 1
xxxxxxChapter 2 Part 2
xxxxxxChapter 3
xxxxxxChapter 4
xxxxxxChapter 5
xxxxxxChapter 6
xxxxxxChapter 7 Part 1
xxxxxxChapter 7 Part 2
xxxxxxChapter 8
xxxxxxChapter 9 Preview

xxx Birdcage ( YukiRena )
birdcage
xxxxxxChapter 1
xxxxxxChapter 2

xxx Kokoro ni Shitagau ( Mystery )
kokoro ni shitagau
xxxxxxPrologue

xxx One Shot
1004 Thank You
xxxxxx1004 Thank You ( KojiYuu )

xxx Progress Status ( need this so I know what I need to work on or planning to work on. OTL )
progress status
xxxxxx Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 9 ) - 34 % Finish ( MAIN FOCUS )
xxxxxx Birdcage ( Chapter 3 ) - 3 % Finish ( MAIN FOCUS ? )
xxxxxx Ameliorating Bond ( JuriMayu : FM Prequel ) - 2 % Finish ( POSSIBLE MAIN FOCUS )
xxxxxx Kogareru ( KojiYuu : FM Prequel ) - 0 % No Plot in Mind Yet ( TEMPORARY SUB )
xxxxxx Kokoro ni Shitagau ( Chapter 1 ) - 0 % ( TEMPORARY SUB )
xxxxxx Sieka-nee's Silly Idea - 34 % Finish ( 3/4 HIATUS )
xxxxxx Return ( one-shot ) - 0 % Finish ( SUB )
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Re: Forgotten Memories (Prologue )
« Reply #1 on: April 18, 2012, 04:18:36 AM »
ugh. i know it's long. OTL. there's actually two parts to the prologue just had to cut it into to because it's.... well it's long. Sorry it isn't the best, I stopped writing for a long time so I'm seriously rusty. And I actually do more of editing and commenting than writing myself. </3 Well hopefully it turns out..... okay....

Prologue

It was a school field trip to the mountain. They were elementary students mixed of all grades due to the school being small. There was one girl, seven years old, sitting under a tree exhausted from all the running from the group’s game of tag. Her stamina was never that great when it comes to running. She can sprint but she can’t keep her pace for a long period of time. She would immediately slow down after sprinting for thirty seconds. Fortunately, she rarely gets tagged even if she did she always found a way to tag the others.

She leaned against the tree and slowly inhaled and exhaled to steady her breathing. She then rested her head against the uncomfortable tree barked as she watched her classmates who continue to run around and yelling at each other. She gave a slight smile and enjoying the full view of them playing tag. Then at the corner of her eyes she caught a glimpse of another group of children doing their own activity. Curious, she turned lifted her head off the tree and turned to look at the group.

They were in an open circle with a person in a middle of it. At first she thought they were playing some sort of icebreakers as she was thinking about joining them. But when she saw one of a student throwing small rocks at the person in the middle, her eyes widened in shocked. Another small rock was thrown at the person followed by the others. She jumped to her feet and ran to the group. The students were shouting, laughing, saying words that she couldn’t make out, since they were all talking at once, but she didn’t care what they were saying. All she cared about was pulling the person out of the bullying circle.

She shoved the students out of the way to make a clear path. It was easy for her because she was stronger than most of the students she knew and pushing them would be like kicking an empty soda can.

When she made herself a path, she reached for the person, grabbed the person’s wrist, and pulled the person out of the circle. The students that were pushed shouted at her. But she ignored them and dragged the person several feet away from the group before turning around and yelling at them. “Stop being a big meany!” She sticks her tongue at them childishly before turning back around and continuing to run off with the person. Behind her she could hear the students yelled at them, telling them to come back, but she continue ignored them and continue to running as fast as she can with the person she was dragging.

When they were both far away from the group they stopped running. She let go of the person’s wrist and rested her back against the tree using it as her support from falling to the ground. Breathing heavily, catching her breath, it was the first time that she ran past her limits; she felt her leg screaming in pain while they were running away from the group. But she didn’t wanted to stop to catch her breath she wanted both of them to be far away from that group.

She glanced at the person whom she grabbed away. She realized the person is a girl and she looked like a princess of some sort. With the hime-hair and the white dress she wore she did looked like one. As for herself she looked more like a prince, short hair, white t-shirt, and shorts. When she looked at the girl she was pretty than she thought when she saw her from afar. However, what was awkward for her was the girl wasn’t as exhausted as her. In fact she just stood there in silence with her head down like how she was in the circle.

She moved away from the tree and stood in front of the girl, her upper body practically leaning forward and her head tilted a bit looking up at her face. She still couldn’t see her most of her face due to the girl’s bangs but she could feel that the girl was staring at her through the bangs. “Ne, why did they do that?” She asked innocently with a curious expression. But all she got in reply was silence. So she asked again.

“None of your business.” The girl quietly answered.

She gave a slight nod but slightly smiled that the girl replied. “Ne, are you mad?” She threw another question in a sweet tone with an innocent smile.

“I’m not mad.” The girl answered again and lifted her head up as they could look at each other faces clearly.

Pretty. ~ The girl was in awed when she sawed her face. I wonder why they were picking on her. She frowned slightly at the thought.

 The other girl just blinked at her wondering why she was suddenly silent. Then she looked down when she saw a hand stretched out in front of her. She looks back up at the girl that held a grin. “Rena. Matsui, Rena.” She stated. The other girl stayed silent and just blinked at the girl. “My name silly.” The girl knew the Rena girl was giving her name but she didn’t know if she should reply or not. “What’s your name?” Rena asked when she still didn’t get a response.

“Kashiwagi Yuki.” She quietly replies taking the hand, that Rena patiently waited for, and gave a short shake.

Rena gave nod with a wide smile as they both let go of each other hands. “I’ll call you Yukirin then!”

“W-w-w-wha!?” Yuki eyes widen as she turned a dark shade of red adding colors to her pale face. “That’s three letters longer! -- I didn’t give you permission to call me whatever you like!” She gave a cold and piercing stare at Rena who was giggling at Yuki’s reaction. The stare had no effect on Rena as it only made Yuki turned to a deeper shade of red, if that was possible.

“Are you mad?” Rena asked between her giggles with her head slightly tilted.

“I’m not mad!” Yuki huffed; she turned her head away and crossed her arms with a pout.

“You are mad!” She said in a cheerful tone.

Yuki turned her head back to look at Rena before giving a small sigh. “You’re weird.” Rena grew silent looking at Yuki with a sad expression. She then immediately added, “In a good way! You’re not like the others!” Rena’s expression brightens and gave a cheerful nod. “We should go back. Sensei would be angry at us.” She muttered under her breath as a sigh escapes her lips. Without protest Rena nodded as they both walked their way back. On their way back they didn’t walk in silence but chatted among each and shared different facts about each other.

As days passed the two grew closer and closer friends. Whenever Rena saw Yuki being bullied, and she doesn’t fight back, Rena would always come to Yuki rescue. She would punch, shove, or push the bullies away.

Over time Yuki notices that Rena would give a soft giggle every time she beat the students that picked on her. She found it strange but comfortable in a way so she never asked. The atmosphere she had with Rena was comfortable so it didn’t matter to her, she didn’t wanted any other way as long Yuki was with her it was fine.

Until four years later Yuki was expelled from the school. Actually, no, the school went far enough to expel her from the district.

to be continue in prologue two. OTL
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Re: Forgotten Memories (Prologue )
« Reply #2 on: April 18, 2012, 05:03:05 AM »
BlackxGeki!!  :luvluv1: Weeeeee!!!~~~~

Interesting prologue, altoids san! Though it's still part 1. Hehee. Keep writing, I'll be following you!  :nya:
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Re: Forgotten Memories (Prologue )
« Reply #3 on: April 18, 2012, 05:12:58 AM »
...........!!!
Is this what I think it is?
I think this is YukiRena/BlackGeki!

Uwah! If it is then I'm glad that another author would be writing about them! This been a while since I saw another person write BlackGeki at this time of the year, apart from me and LeNosferatu-san though, I'd be really thankful if it is.

The premises is already good, though you did left us with some question in mind at the end, why did Yuki get expelled? I'm curious, I wonder if it had to do with 'that' if we go through the MajiGaku-verse I mean. So here, Yuki is more of like Black and Rena is turning into a mini Gekikara at an age of seven. Wew... :lol:

Apart from a few mistakes in your writing, the story is alright.

I'll look forward to your next update. I'm certain curious why Yuki got expelled though.
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Re: Forgotten Memories (Prologue )
« Reply #4 on: April 18, 2012, 06:37:46 AM »
Oh my Rena-sama! *jumps up and down while squealing* Rena-sama~! :luvluv1:

And why is Yukirin hime-sama not fighting back?!  :tantrum: Her body getting beat up! No~

But then... :bigdeal: Rena-sama wouldn't be breaking those kids' bones. And get her GEKIKARA(sama) side out. So... :onioncheer: Beat Yukirin more! Ahahaha~

I like how you write, and if I might say...I wouldn't have known that you stopped writing with how you wrote the prologue!  :on GJ: AWESOME job! (because Great job is too mainstream ^^)

I'm really curious why Yukirin-hime got expelled.  :dunno: If it was Rena-sama, I wouldn't be surprise. But...That's what made us readers crave for more, and that's an awesome idea!

Speaking of the fic... I started wondering what would happen. You wrote Forgotten Memories as the title, so I have a feeling that the two won't remember each other. Or maybe only one of them. I dunno. No one knows...BUT YOU~! Ahahaha~!  :lol:

Waiting for the next part of the prologue! ^^
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Re: Forgotten Memories (Prologue )
« Reply #5 on: April 18, 2012, 10:23:14 AM »
RenaYuki <3 this pairing seems to be more and more popular..

the prologue seems interesting..

i'm waiting for the continuation..


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Re: Forgotten Memories (Prologue )
« Reply #6 on: April 18, 2012, 05:50:26 PM »
Chibi Rena is so cute!

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Re: Forgotten Memories (Prologue )
« Reply #7 on: April 19, 2012, 06:30:49 AM »
@ Lollita-san:
= u=b Thinking about doing a little mixture. Nothing fully related to Majisuka. Just the personality is all. . w.
and hahaa. thanks bro. And just go with Al or Mint. xD ;;; Is fine. ~

@ Sieka-san:
Bro, it totally is. Originally it was suppose to be Jurina x Mayu but then... my friend got me to change my mind. xD ;;;

It wouldn't be fully a BlackGeki relationship quirk. ( well I'm not for sure yet ) It just their personalities are kind of based on it at
the moment. So far in my thoughts I'm just writing whatever flows. Maybe I'll probably think about actually making a Black x Geki...
After this one and a sequel with a different arc to this. . x.) b Bro, my friend and I read all yours and LeNosferatu-san's writing. We
so love 'em. <333

It was all meant to be left into the second part. ~ * o* And explained...

Aa - yeah. I usually how problems with past tense and present tense. :T And some other few grammatical errors. = w= ;;;

@ Karomuwi-san:
Hahaa. Didn't expected that reaction. ~ o uo ;

.... oh my. it sounds as if you really do want Kashiwagi-san to be beat up. xD ;;;

Aa - thanks bro. But honestly it's not really the best in my opinion. </3 Eeh. Many reasons why I stopped writing and they
were mostly private fanfic so.... yeah. :"D ; Thankies though. ~

Hahaa. Maybe maybe. ~ ;3 It shall all be revealed.

Aa, yes. The title does say it all. ~ All what it need is how... And it's not going to be the cliche part because of the years gap. ;3
Hur hur. ~

@ yukofan-san :
Yeah. o wo ;; Well it's not all bad right ~ ? :3
Hnn. Thanks. Actually edit a bit a while back after realizing where my mistakes were. OTL

@ anzai-san :
blame the others for the sudden train. . w. ~ originally it was suppose to be a Jurina x Mayu then was convinced otherwise. = w=
Hahaa. In yours Yuki is like boss bro. Seriously she is boss. * o*

A mystery that will be said in part 2. ~

@ kahem-san :
glad you think that way. <3 tried to find a way to make her cuter but... *shrug*

@ everyone: ugh. sorry that part 2 is bland. and please don't kill me for call you guys bro. D: i know it rude, but, ahahaa, it's a habit I developed. ;;;;

Prologue Part 2

“Sensei you can’t do this!” Yuki yelled with her first clench into a tight ball. She had the urge to punch her teacher but she held herself back. She didn’t want to cause any more trouble than it already has.

It was after school already. The entire teacher already went home expect for the teacher that Yuki is currently talking to in the office they were currently in. It’s been a good long thirty minutes since they both had been arguing about Yuki being expelled. While she was arguing against her teacher, Rena, however, was outside of the closed office door as she listened into the conversation without her presence being notice by them. Yuki and Rena were in different classes but Rena would most often come to Yuki’s classroom and pick her up either for their lunch breaks or after school when they head home.

“It’s not Rena’s fault! It’s not my fault! It’s THEIR fault! ” She felt as if her mind was going to breaking down. She didn’t want to be separated from Rena. Not now. Not ever. Not because Rena protected her but she was a true friend she ever met. Rena did have an opposite personality from Yuki; however, for her it was relaxing and calming to be around with.

The teacher tried to quiet Yuki down using hand motions before he said anything. “I know it’s neither both of your - ”

“Then why? Why do I have to leave!?” Yuki cut her teacher off from finishing his sentence. She had no patients dealing with him nor did she have the patient dealing with this ridiculous argument.

“It’s under the principle orders. You are the main cause of the students being beaten up. If Rena didn’t beat - ” Then teacher was cut off once again by Yuki.

“She was only trying to protect me! You knew about the bullying and you didn’t help me when I need it!” Her teeth clench tightly, they were clenched so tightly that she could taste the copper in her mouth.

The teacher gave a small sigh and scratches the back of his thinking of what to say. “Kashiwagi-san, it’s under the principal’s words. I just follow what he sa -- ” Yuki couldn’t handle listening to her teacher anymore as she just immediately turned around and darted for the door. “Kashiwagi-san where are you going!?” The teacher called for her. But she ignored him and slide the door open. Her eyes immediately grew wide when she was looking into the missed matched eyes she knew for so long. As those mismatched eyes were giving the same look back.

They were both in completed silence but then Yuki’s anger came back to her. She broke the silent eye contact and grab Rena’s wrist tugging her in a gesture to run. Rena didn’t argue and run as soon as Yuki started running. They both ran down the hallway in completed silence, only their shoes echoing down the hallway, students whispering at each other while they watch the two run pasted them, and of course the teacher shouting Yuki’s name.

They both kept running as fast as they can somewhere far away from the school and neither a direction that was close to home. Yuki believed her teacher would call her parents and tell them about the event as she didn’t want to deal facing her parents at the moment. “Yukirin!” Rena shouted at Yuki who stayed silent and kept running. “BLACK!” Finally, the name caught Yuki attention as she suddenly stop and turned around with a quizzical expression. However Rena didn’t have time stop herself like Yuki. Instead she crashed into Yuki, and fortunately for them; they both collided on the grass and not on the cement.

They both moaned in pain as they didn’t move from their currently position. Rena was flat on her back while Yuki was on her side, facing Rena, while lying right on top of Rena’s left arm.

Even with the grass cushioning their fall saving their heads from massive headache didn’t helped them. “Itai…” They both quietly moan in the sharp pain they felt. Yuki slowly opens eye, it took her mind to process to realize that she was lying on top of Rena’s arm. “Ah - !” Her eyes widens as she quickly got off and went into a sitting position on the grass. “Gomen.” She apologized in quiet voice. She felted her head pained but since Rena was used as an extra cushion it didn’t hurt as much as she expected.

Rena on the other hand took a while to recollect her mind as she was also out of breath from all the running. The world went spinning for her; her mind couldn’t fully process through what just happened. The pain from hitting her head on the grass, the feeling of being lightheaded, it was too much for her to take, and she couldn’t focus properly. Rena stayed lying down on the grass with her eyes close as she allows her mind to relax.

Yuki left Rena alone to rest, while she glanced around their currently location noticing that they ran into the park. She was hoping she made them run into a location where there would be no one around, but she did just follow where her legs would lead her.

A sudden exhale escaped her lips as she frowned at what just happen at school. She thought about or assumed what the teacher was about to say before she cut him off. She felt a guilty for cutting him off like that. It was the first timed she had ever argued against her teacher. Then again her chest felt lighter that she didn’t rely on Rena to help her.

Rena slowly opened her eyes when she heard the exhale. She couldn’t see Yuki’s expression with her back facing Rena but she knew that Yuki was thinking very hard on the event. “Yukirin…” Rena mumbled worriedly and slowly sat up. A pain shot to the back of her head making her wince.

When she heard a wince Yuki snapped out of her thoughts and turned her head to face Rena. “Idiot, don’t get up yet.” She said in a flat voice and helped Rena lie back down. At first Rena protested about lying back down but her brained told her otherwise as she just complied.

“Ne, are you mad?” Rena asked in a serious and yet curious expression.

“Silly, you should be the one mad. I used you as a cushion.” Yuki replied and smiled bitterly at her thinking that it was Rena’s usual way in cheering her up.

“It’s a serious question!” Rena stated, immediately getting into a sitting position, ignoring the pain she felt at the back of her head, and look at Yuki straight in the eyes. “If he made you angry I’ll go beat him up right now!” She said in an angry tone. Then she felt a sudden flick on her forehead as she flinched and blink several times seeing Yuki with an irritated expression.

“Idiot! Violence isn’t the answer this time. You’ll only make it worse!” Yuki answered in annoyance. When she saw Rena’s pained expression she felt guilty as her expression quickly softens. “Gomen…” She apologized bringing her eyes to the ground not wanting to see anymore expression.

Rena shook her head indicating that is was fine. She shifted her position where she was able to rest her head against Yuki’s left shoulder. At first Yuki nudged Rena off her shoulder indicating her saying ‘no’ but when she saw Rena pouting up at her she couldn’t say ‘no’. A soft sigh escaped Yuki’s lips as she looked away from Rena and allowed Rena to rest her head on her shoulder. She heard a soft giggle escaping that girl’s lips. She gave another sigh before giving small smile.

They enjoyed every minute of their silence. When Rena hummed a soft tune while she played with Yuki’s finger tips in her hands she then heard a soft sniffling sound coming from the other girl. Rena didn’t look up but silently stayed in the same position as she decided to gently stroke the girl’s hand trying to sooth her while she continue humming the tune.

They started to head home after Yuki finally calmed down. They would stop once in a while to gaze up the orange sunset sky and admire the clear view. Yuki always love staring at the orange not because of the colors but it always indicate night was coming close. Everything would become dark and no one would be able to see her in the dark. The darkness was a cloak for her to hide her from everyone. She wasn’t the type of person who likes to be seen. She would rather be isolated away from everyone for her own comfort. However, Rena managed to find her as if she knew where Yuki was along, and companied her. She wondered why she was so comfortable being around Rena. Yuki shook her head with a small sigh as she was curious to know her own answer. 

She glanced at Rena, seeing her wide smile as she was eating something. Yuki blinked several times and stopped as Rena stopped as well. She continued to eat with an innocent face and her head tilted to the side. “Where did you get that curry pan?” Yuki asked with a brow quirked.

Rena continues to chew her food before she swallows it and reply to Yuki. “I bought it at the stand when you weren’t looking. I’ll give you half!” She looks down at her curry pan and rips it in half as she gave one half to Yuki before she could agree or disagree the offer.

Yuki looked at the half curry pan in Rena’s hand. Hesitating for a moment she slowly glances up at Rena who seems to insist that she takes it. She lifted her hands up and took the pan into her own hands. She stared down at the pan seeing the filling a light shade of red. She looked back up at Rena who just simply nodded with a sweet smile as Yuki took a small bit out of it. Immediately the spice invaded her nostril and her mouth started to burn.  She couldn’t help her eyes becoming teary as she could hear Rena laughing at her. Yuki’s teary eyes darted at Rena who was holding her stomach while laughing. “You knew it was this spicy!?” She snapped at Rena with a deep furrowed brow.

“Of course! I thought you can handle spicy food. Wimp!” Rena continues to laugh loudly bring most people attention to her.

“I’m not a wimp!” She held her defense down with her face red, her eyes red and watery, as she munched down the rest the curry pan quickly. The spiciness burned her mouth and the fact that it burned only made her anger worse as a dark aurora emitted from Yuki.

Rena started to giggle and took the challenge to provoke Yuki even more. “Ne, are you mad?”

“I’m not mad. I’m ANGRY!” At that cue Rena gobbled the rest of the curry pan in her mouth and immediately started running away with Yuki chasing after her. “Get back here!” Yuki shouted to Rena who didn’t listen but ran for her life while she giggled.

Even though Yuki was furious at Rena she didn’t want this time to end. Neither did Rena even if she is running away for her life she didn’t wanted this time to end.

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As day passed Yuki didn’t go to school but spent her days packing her belongings into the box. Every day Rena would drop by Yuki’s house after school to visit her, and meeting Yuki’s ex-yankee parents, to slow down her packing. Unfortunately it didn’t help. There weren’t many belongings Yuki owned as her room was always clean, white, and simple.

The next day was Yuki’s department. All of the Kashiwagi’s belonging were now sent to their new home, and what left was them to move into their new home.

It was morning and class was already in session. Today, Yuki and Rena went to school like they usually do, expect, this time Yuki didn’t have her school material and her parents drove them to school as well so Rena wouldn’t be too late for class. Yuki tagged along with Rena to say bye to her teachers but that was her only excuse to stay with Rena a little longer.

They both walked down the hallway to Rena’s classroom in completely silence. They both stood in front of the close classroom door hearing the teacher lecturing on the other side.

“Thank you….” Rena muttered with her head down and her eyes glue to the floor.

Yuki shook her head, giving a weak smile, and gave Rena a warm embrace. Rena returned the embraced and forced herself to smile. Yuki broke their embrace and pat Rena’s head. “I’m going head to the principal’s office so I’ll see you later?”

Rena responded in a nod and slid the door open. The teacher stopped her lecture and turned her eyes to the person that interrupted her lecture. The students as well turned their eyes away and looked at Rena. “See you later. ~” Rena said weakly with a wave before entering the classroom then closing the door after.

“Matsui-san why are you late?” The teacher demanded.

“Gomen. ~” Rena replied.

Yuki couldn’t help but exhale a small chuckle of the thought that Rena got into trouble. Her smile quickly faded as it became emotionless. She started walking to the principal offices to give her farewell before leaving the school district for good.

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The clock ticked as Rena stared at it in boredom. It only had been ten minutes since she entered class and she was already bored. She wonders if Yuki had already left campus, curious she raised her hand. “Sensei, I have to use the bathroom.” She held her stomach and gives a pain expression as if she was really in pain.

“Wait already? It’s only been ten minutes can’t you wait?” She replied, furrowing her brows as she stared at Rena.

“I drank milk today and my stomach really really really hurt.” Rena winced hoping that her teacher would say yes. She heard her teacher sigh and gave her the okay. Immediately Rena got up from her seat, dash out the classroom, and head towards to the principal's office.

Once she was near the office she slowly creeps up to the door and presses one of her ear against the door hoping she could hear the conversation inside. Fortunately, the door was thin enough for her to hear the other side. She heard voices but it wasn’t anyone voices she recognize expect for the principal. The other person she couldn’t tell but she definitely knew it was another male.

“That was the Kashiwagi woman’s daughter correct?” The unknown man asked. His voice was deep and he sound as if he was in his late forties.

“Yes that was her.” The principal replied and leaned against his supreme size black chair.

“I can’t believe you. Like you? Seriously? I can’t believe you would have an affair with a yankee! Do you know how much trouble that is?” The deep voiced exclaim with a slam follow along with it.

Rena eyes were wide open. She was utterly speechless. She surprise. No, she was bewildered. She couldn’t believe what she was hearing. The main reason wasn't because of the students getting injured because of Yuki. Instead, it was the principal fault for trying to get into an affair with Yuki's mom. Rena brushed the mind of and continued to listen to the conversation.

“I tried! But I didn't. She punched me effortlessly and left me bruised that took forever to heal! Hell she was a tough one I’ll tell ya that.” The principal said laughing at the comment he just made.

“Don’t you know how much...”

Rena quirk a brow wonder why it grown suddenly quiet. She pressed her ears closer to the door until suddenly the door opened and she toppled to the floor. “Ite te te te…” She rubbed her jaws for a moment before her eyes widen when she saw black business pants in front of her. Her eyes slowly follow the legs up seeing a man fully dress in a business suit looking down at Rena with his brows raised. She silently gulped. “AH! She’s one of Kashiwagi’s friend!” Rena quickly scrambled to her feet and made a run for it down the hall. “Get her!” She heard the principal shout with two extra loud footstep following Rena.

Yuki has to still be here. There’s no way she could have leave, not yet. Rena silent hoped to herself and continues to run down the hallway as fast as she can to the school gates.

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Yuki slowly walked to the gates with a heavy sigh. She stopped and turned around slightly to take one last look at the school Rena and she went to. It’s going to be lonely without her. She bitterly smiled and continues walking to the gates. She saw her parents patiently waiting in the car, both sitting in the front passenger seat, either staring down at the distance or looking down at the newspaper.

“Yuki!” Yuki turned her head around and look through the glass door wondering who was calling her. She stared at through the doors longer then shrugged when she couldn’t keep the gate guard waiting any longer. Turning her back she continued to walk to the car. “Yuki!” This time Yuki decided to ignore it believing that she was just hallucinating now. The guard closed the gate when Yuki passed, and her mom got out of the car and opens the door for Yuki to get in. When Yuki was about to make her way to get in a name that only Rena would used stopped Yuki in her tracks as her eyes widened. “Black!” Yuki turned around once more trying to find the person that had been calling her. She had to squint her eyes just to see until she saw a small figure running down the hallways along with two adult. Her mom was curious why Yuki stopped and turned around to see what Yuki was looking at.

Both Yuki and her mom gave a quizzical expression when they saw a three figure running down the hallways, expect, Yuki was the only person who felt her heart skip a beat. “Black! Idiot! You walk too fast!” Rena burst the door open with the two following along. Before Rena knew she was picked up and off her feet by a pair of strong arms that held her. Yuki rushed up the gate and tried to squeeze through but was only stopped by the gate guard from allowing her through.

Rena struggled in the arms she wiggled around in them before she decided to bite in the person’s arms. The person she bit only shriek in pain letting go of Rena and dropping her to the ground. Quickly she took the chances and scramble to her feet before running again. “It’s not your fault!” Rena shouted while she ran. Yuki only became more confuse by Rena’s statement that she already knew that it is not her fault.

“Don’t let them get near!” The principal shouted catching the gate guard’s and Yuki’s mother attention. Her mother stared horrified at the principal as she quickly and forcefully pull Yuki away from the gates dragging her into the car. Yuki struggled against her mother’s grip and yelled at her to let go; sadly, she wasn’t strong enough and was thrown into the car. Her father brought newspaper down with his brow quirked wonder what was going on. The front passenger was slammed closed as Yuki’s mother got into the back seat in order to restrained Yuki down using her arms. “Go! NOW!” Her mother demanded.

Yuki’s father only blinked at his wife, “You s - ”

“NOW!” Yuki’s mom cut the father off as he ignited the engine and pressed down the gas. The sudden jolt from the car shook both Yuki and her mom. As the arms around Yuki was loose as she used this chance to break from the grasp. Urgently Yuki pressed the button for the window to slide down. She popped her head out the window seeing Rena slipping through the gates.

“BLACK!” Rena shouted as loud as she can without choking from the lack of air. Yuki could tell, even from afar, that Rena was now crying but held it in all this time. Yuki felted her heart pained when she knew Rena was now crying and she wasn’t there to comfort here. “BLAAACK!”

Yuki responded back, “Gekikara! Don’t you dare forget!” Before Yuki was able to say anything else her mother pulled her back in as she watched Rena figure grow smaller and smaller until she was no longer able to see her.

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After the incident Rena was suspended from school for several days.

Everyday Rena would check in the mailbox hoping that Yuki would send a letter since Yuki knew Rena’s home address by heart. But those letters she waited for never came as she felt like everything just became forgotten.

End of Prologue : to be continued in chapter 1

oh yeah. ~ a question that would be answered later in the story. Why Rena started calling Yuki ' Black ' and Yuki calling Rena ' Gekikara ' would be answered. Of course everyone knows why. lol. But it wouldn't be right if that was never asked and answered in the story. ~ ;3
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Re: Forgotten Memories ( Prologue 2 )
« Reply #8 on: April 19, 2012, 07:24:33 AM »
Dude, you misspelled my name. It's Sieka. If anyone's wondering how it's pronounced, its pronounced as 'Sica'. :lol:

JuriMayu? Wew, I would have loved to read that, but your friend made you change it? I wonder, does your friend have an account here too? I'd give him/her my thanks for changing your mind. :lol:

Hmm, I see, so its not really MajiGaku-verse. The personalities though are there, still a bonus to me. Though I wonder now, if it isn't MajiGaku-verse, how will the story flow? Will Yuki still be Black-like and Rena as Gekikara-ish? Or will all of it change when they enter highschool? How will they meet? And where? The questions are piling up in my head, and especially, as karomuwi-san said, the title hints so much of something. Is it Yuki who forgot? Or was it Rena? I think it would have been Yuki......but it could go either way too.

You read our BlackGeki fics? Thank you, I'm glad you like them. :cathappy:

Ahaha, I know that problem, I have some problems with past and present tense too...I'm confused sometimes with it. :panic:

On to Part II of the Prologue.
Looks like we get to see a clear image of what exactly was the reason....tsk, and to think that devilish sly of a principle tried to have an affair with Yuki's mom, does he want to be killed or what? The teachers are also some imbeciles, they knew that Yuki was being bullied but never stopped the bullies and let Rena do the actions instead, what kind of teachers are they? They shouldn't have took that job if they can't even teach the kids some proper manners! The nerve of it...it happens in real life and I'm rather angry at teachers who are like that, very ignorant ones...... :smhid

Too bad Yuki and Rena are separated from one another, the bond is........well.....how you say it, its been severed it seems.
Though they had a strong bond together, but without each other, it faded...Yuki did not even sent any letters to Rena, even though she knew of Rena's address, is this because Yuki's mother told her not to? Or was it because she just simply forget after having some extreme difficulties in her new environment in their new house and new school? Well, I wouldn't be surprised, everything's new around her, and without a person there to help her and support her like Rena, everything will be in shambles...

I kinda feel for Rena though, she waits for Yuki's letter everyday, I can imagine that whether it would rain or shine, she'd be there in front of the mailbox, hoping to at least get one.........but in each day, gets disappointed because not a single one comes, almost as if their friendship didn't exist in the first place. :smhid

Also, if there's drama or angst here, let em' rain!
I tell you I love drama and angst! I love them extremely! :cathappy:
I wonder though if Yuki would let people bully her, I feel like she's near the character she had in Sakura Kara no Tegami. The suicidal loner who gets bullied in junior high school. :sweatdrop:

Anyways, thanks for the update. :cathappy:

(I wonder though, is YukiRena really getting popular? I don't seem to notice it..... :sweatdrop:)
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Re: Forgotten Memories ( Prologue 2 )
« Reply #9 on: April 19, 2012, 08:30:35 AM »
Just going to reply to this right now so that you guys can save yourself from asking the same questions. ~ ;3

Sssssh.... *goes & fix it* No I didn't bro. :"D is the ' ca ' pronounced as 'sa' or 'ka' ? o uo ;;

Mhmm. I was convinced. Ah sorry. My friend I'm talking about is a female. . w. ;;; She
actually told me that I should make a sequel arc for Jurina and Mayu. Since it was originally
going to be those two, might as well just throw them in right? o wo aaah. spoilers. ~ = w= ;;;
But the main focus is just going to be on Yuki and Rena. ;3 and No she doesn't. She just lurks
but I'll tell her that. o uob

Not really. It wasn't really my intention actually because it used to be about Jurina and Mayu.
But since it's Yuki and Rena I kind of, not really, added that quirk in. The flow is a mystery and
that is a mystery too, bro. ~ ;3 Who said they'll be in high school. *nudge nudge* There there.
Hahaa. Indeed. It's a mystery. ~ You could be right possibly my mind hasn't fully decided who
will be the person to forget. My thought currently that maybe one of them will forget. ~

Mhmm. o uo They're great. ~ So dazzled by them. <33 And no probs. bro.

Mhmm. = u= ; It easier to have someone else read it for to correct your error since you rarely
catch them yourself. Reading someone else's writing to find errors is a lot better than finding your
own. Well that's what I believe. o uo lol. I've been asking another friend of mine to comment on
my mistakes. Lucky for him, he gets to see the chapter first. = w= ;;;;;;;;;;;

(just uum.. going to remove this. ;; )

I'm thinking about doing a prequel specifically for Yuki. In a hawk eye view on her. And how her life
was in the passed several years. </3 But... That would be made when we get into the chapter more. ~
So... Wait until then. ~ ;3 Then you'll know your answer. About the letters. The event she went through
her family. And other stuff. ~

It's like... You just want to give Rena a hug and tell her that everyone is okay. Even though it's not. ; n;

Hahaa. If you put it that way I'll totally add some drama just for you. xD Drama's are okay honestly.
They're good in fiction. But in real life they suck really. </3

Aah. ~ You shall know what happens to her in chapter 1 or 2 possibly. ;3 She can possibly be suicidal
or she can be boss after depart with Rena. Who knows. Until the next chapter. </3

o uob Like I said earlier.. sorry if it's bland.

Indeed they likely are ~ ? :"D
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Re: Forgotten Memories ( Prologue 2 )
« Reply #10 on: April 19, 2012, 07:21:34 PM »
Can't wait for the first chapter after your last prologue!

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Re: Forgotten Memories ( Prologue 2 )
« Reply #11 on: April 20, 2012, 01:36:47 AM »
Hey Mint! Thanks for the update! It's SUPER AWESOME! :on GJ:

I was like "whaa??" :stoned: when the teacher told Yuki why she had to leave the school. It is super unreasonable!! And then, double "whaa??" when knowing the REAL REASON why she had to leave. that is totally UNACCEPTABLE!!  :on voodoo: I feel like killing those teacher, principal, and the unidentified man!!  :on kimbo: :knee: :kickass: Duhh!

And it's heart-wrenching enough imagining Geki waiting for Black's letter everyday.  :fainted: poor Rena.. who'll be the one to forget? Is it really Yuki? I think that Yuki might not be able to send letters to Rena because of her mother. Maybe her mother forbid her from having any contact with Rena because of the last scene. Since Rena has already know the secret. She doesn't want Yuki to know about it..? Maybe.. haha I'm just guessing tho. Lol.

Anyway, I'll wait for your next update. Please update soon! Thank you for the interesting story!  :bow:

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Re: Forgotten Memories ( Prologue 2 )
« Reply #12 on: April 21, 2012, 05:59:42 AM »
its black and gekikara kid version!  :w00t:

they have such a nice friendship but what kinda principal is this! SMACK HIM IN DA FACE! how can he break them apart D:

renas been waiting for yukis mails :( but even if she does write them....i bet she wont be able to send them since her mum may end up throwing them in the bin or burning them  :(

im thinking that maybe renas gonna be the one who ends up forgetting hmm hmm

thanks for the update  :thumbup

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Re: Forgotten Memories ( Prologue 2 )
« Reply #13 on: April 21, 2012, 11:17:38 AM »

Yuki responded back, “Gekikara! Don’t you dare forget!” Before Yuki was able to say anything else her mother pulled her back in as she watched Rena figure grow smaller and smaller until she was no longer able to see her.


About what is it I wonder~

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« Reply #14 on: April 21, 2012, 01:34:42 PM »
awsome

i really wanna know whts gonna happen next

Rena should beat the hell out of the princeable i would lol

Yuki should send letters to Rena but i hav a feeling they will meet again and Yuki will be completely diffrent esically if she goes to a school majisuka lol

and has friends like Torigoya Sado Shibuya and Sado lol

thanks for the update

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Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 1 )
« Reply #15 on: April 22, 2012, 09:13:40 AM »
@ kahem-san:
hahaa. thanks for the patient, bro. <3

@ Izzy:
Thankies. <3 Though it's not the best in my opinion. ;;; but I appreciate it. > w>
my friend gave me an idea of the twist. since the first reason was too expect. xD ;;
... aha. ;; It was really heart breaking. And everything is a mystery. ~ o uo
don't worry everything will be told... eventually. = w=b
Na, I should be thank you, bro, for actually reading the story. <33
M'mkay. ~ I'll address you as Izzy then. o uob

@ Pandah-san:
mhmm. ~
hahaa. smacking him won't do bro. = x= ;; killing him would! o xo ~
They'll be reunited... Somehow...
In due time, bro. In due time.. = w=b

@ RenaChii-san:
hur hur. ~ ;3 don't worry. that'll be explained, bro. I'll make sure of it. :"D

@ XxRoByNxX780-san:
thankies. > w>
Until time has pass and I start writing faster then you shall know. o:

@ everyone:
bleh. sucky chapter. </3 skimmed on the editing part. just need to get it up before
I end up forgetting what to write for chapter 2. OTL Thanks bros for reading. <33

Chapter 1

The morning sun had rise high into the clear sky. Everything was nice and quiet in the house, especially for the princess who was sleeping peacefully under her blanket, until, “Rise and shine!” The door burst open revealing a young girl in her mid teens; she had a bright and yet mischievous smile as she ran to the bed, and tackled the person who was sleeping peacefully.

“Oh my god!” The female jolted up into a sitting position and shoved the person off the bed, leading to a loud thumb from the other.

“Itaiiii -- ” The girl on the floor cried, she slowly sat up while rubbing the back of her head with one eye closed. “That hurt, Rena-chan. What was that for?”   

“Jurina what was that for!?” Rena snapped, avoiding the question, she picked up her pillow and threw it at Jurina’s face as it hit on target. Rena wasn’t pleased by the fact of waking up with someone in her room. Actually, no, she wasn’t pleased about being tackled awake and gained a heart attack in the process. “How did you even get in?”

Jurina cried in pain again when the pillow hit her face. She felt like her head was about to break off when it hit. After a few seconds of rubbing her head and neck, she jump to her feet and gave a wide grin while she looked at Rena. “Yuko-san allowed me in before she left, that’s how.”

“Not that!” Rena gave a low growl, “How did you get into my room? It was lock!”

Currently, Oshima, Yuko and Matsui, Rena is now living together in an apartment. Before, they were both neighbors since Rena was five years old, but Rena never talked to Yuko until she was eleven while Yuko was fourteen. Rena doesn’t full recall how she met Yuko. When she asked her Yuko replied that she caught Rena, on her way home, fighting against some children, around Rena’s age, in the park and was surrounded by them. As Yuko didn’t hesitate and jumped in right in and partnered up with her. After the children fled they both started to head home. When they got back to their rightful house, they suddenly realized that they were next door neighbors. Surprise from the new discovery they began talking to each other the next day, when they were walking to school, sharing many things among each other they quickly became best friend.

After Rena’s graduation, two years ago, they promise to never fight again and become serious in their future. With Rena being accepted into a university she always dreamed to go to, Yuko didn’t want Rena to lose that chance just because her reputation of beating people up. Soon after Rena being accepted into the university, Yuko and Rena moved out of their childhood home and lived in an apartment together. They decided to live with each other since Yuko’s part time job and the college she attended was near Rena’s university. And she believed it would be more convenient, and cheap, if they both lived together. Rena agrees with Yuko’s idea as they now both decided to live together. Within those two years a new person came into their life and that was Matsui, Jurina.

When Yuko and Rena moved into their new apartment they had a next door neighbor that had the same surname as Rena’s. It was a surprise to Rena to meet another family that had the same surname as her, but what was more surprising is that Jurina’s parents were very kind than Rena anticipated. On the first day Jurina’s mother invited Rena and Yuko to come over for a dinner. Rena and Yuko disagree feeling rude to intrude on the first day, but when Jurina gave them the puppy eyes to them they couldn’t say no afterwards.  From that day forth to this current year Jurina carried a strong bond with Yuko and Rena, and every so often she would come over to their place or vice versa, as points back to Jurina currently being inside their apartment.

Jurina closed her right eye and stared off thinking what to say. She pursed, innocently thinking, before she answered. “I pick lock your door. ~” Instantly, Jurina felt another unexpected pillow smacked against her face, with a loud thump, as it almost sends her off her feet. She pulled the pillow off her face, this time she gave an annoyed expression. “Hey! What was tha – WHOA!” Her eyes widen as she ducks from another object that was being thrown at her.

“Get out now!” Rena yelled and grabbed the closes objects that was close to her, and threw them at Jurina. Jurina dodged the rest easily and scurried out of the room, closing the door behind her as she left. Rena gave a heavy sigh when Jurina left and groaned, laying back down on her bed with an arm lift over her eyes.

“You’re going to be late to class ~ !” Jurina yelled in a teasing voice from the other side of the door.

“No I’m -...” When Rena looked at the clock, on the wall, her eyes widen, immediately she jumped off the bed, and rushed to get out of her room. She opens the door to see Jurina with a devious smirk on her face. Rena furrows her brow at her giving a glare. “Why didn’t you tell me sooner?” She demanded.

“You never gave me the chance. ~” She backfired.

“I can’t believe you.” Rena scoffed; she walked out of her room, passed Jurina, and rushed towards the bathroom.

“Yuko-san left some clothes for you in the bathroom!” Jurina called out and only received a small wave from the other female as her response. Jurina watched as Rena went into the bathroom as the door slammed shut. She shrugged her shoulders and slowly shook her head with a smile. “Hopefully she gets the chance to eat breakfast.” Then she made her way into the kitchen seeing a bento box, neatly wrapped in a white furoshik, on the table. The food inside the bento box was made by Jurina, with her mother’s help, as she hope Rena would appreciate the food.

When Yuko saw Jurina with the lunch box in her hands she already knew the lunch box was going to be for Rena. Actually, Yuko suggested Jurina to make a lunch box for Rena. Yuko already knew that Jurina had a crush on Rena after several months when Yuko and Rena moved in. Jurina denied the fact at first, but after a while she started to admit it as then Yuko try to help Jurina as much as she can. It’s been a year and a half as Rena still hasn’t noticed Jurina’s feeling yet. Yuko and Jurina tried so many tactics in the past months, and everything ended in a failure, there was nothing that actually made Rena notice Jurina’s feelings.

Jurina was disappointed after all the failures; however, it didn’t stop her from trying to capture Rena’s heart. At first, she suggest to Yuko if it was best to confront her feeling straight out instead, but Yuko insisted that Rena must have feelings for Jurina first before anything else.

Honestly, Jurina doesn’t know if she is able to capture Rena’s heart. She knew that Rena only see her as a little sister and nothing else. She also felt that there was something in Rena’s heart that is kept Jurina’s feeling being unnoticed. Then again, maybe she was just imagining it.

Jurina gave a small sigh at the thought. She walked over to the refrigerator, took the black board marker on their miniature magnetic calendar, pulled the cap off, and wrote on an empty sticky note that was stick on the fridge, before she peeled it off and stick it on the table. “Hopefully Yuko-san is right… I feel bad for Rena-chan waking up late though.” She muttered and scratched the back of her head. “The life of a twenty year old… I wonder how that feels…” She wonders to herself as a small chuckle escape her lips. She then excused herself out of the apartment and goes back into her own.

Today current event of Rena waking up late was planned by Yuko. Last night, Yuko sneaked into Rena’s room, with the help of Jurina’s pick locking skills, and turned off Rena’s alarm clock. Believing if Rena was to wake up late she would have to eat lunch, and not skip it like she always does.

“Why didn’t my alarm rang?”  Rena asked herself in irritation as she came out of the bathroom, she was fully dressed in short jeans, with a black belt around, white t-shirt, the neck ring manually cut, and a long peach colored cardigan, that reached down to her knees and wrists. “Ugh. Not the time to wonder.” She rushed back into her room, grabbed all her necessary materials for her morning class, rushed back out, and made her way into the kitchen as she notice the bento box on the table. She blinked several times and peeled the sticky note off the table reading it.

I’m sorry Rena-chan. Please forgive me?  (´;ω;`) I made it just for you so please it eat. ♥ Juri

“That girl…” Rena muttered under her breath. She gave a small smile, forgetting her irriation. “If she wanted to give it to me she should have done it straight out.” She stared at the sticky note for a moment until she remembers she had class to attend. She checks her cell phone time and realized it has become eight. “Ah! I only have fifteen minutes left!”  She packed the bento box into her bag, neatly and compact so that the content inside wouldn’t get ruined, before she slipped on her boots and left her apartment.

It took Rena ten minutes to run from home to campus, normally, it would take her twenty minutes to reach campus, but today isn’t the day she could have taken her time. And now only five minutes remaining and her class were on the other side of campus. “Why does it have to be so far?” She complained. She breathed in and out slowly trying to catch her breath. Then she inhaled before she continued to run again.

By the time she got into the building of her class it was already too late, but she jogged down the hall so she wouldn’t be late anymore as she already was. Then out of the blue someone popped out of the corner, Rena didn’t have to stop herself as she crashed into the person.

“WAH!” They both exclaimed as papers fluttered everywhere.

To be continued.

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Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 1 )
« Reply #16 on: April 22, 2012, 09:44:39 AM »
Oh it smells triangle hehe

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Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 1 )
« Reply #17 on: April 22, 2012, 09:56:20 AM »
Wew, first chapter and its packed with questions yet again. :lol:

Okay so Yuko and Rena are friends, that's set in. Jurina has a crush on Rena, but Rena doesn't know it. Okay, now that does smell like a love triangle, just as kahem-san said. :lol:

Picklocking is bad, lol, I don't think any type of lock would work against Jurina if its the doorknob type lock. :lol: I think Rena should learn to add some chains in her door.........hahahaha, and some other alternative locks...~ :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

Okay so the questions again in my head is:

Who did Rena bump into? Is it Yuki? Or is it Mayu? Or is it someone else?
Second, the question from the prologue, who forgot who? Was it Yuki? Or was it Rena?
Third, will Jurina confess to Rena? Or will she like Mayu before that could happen? And how will they meet...?
Fourth, is this seriously YukiRena-JuriMayu? Or is this going to be WMatsui-MaYuki instead?

Of course I know the questions would be answered in the later updates, but at least I can go back here and cross them out when we all see the answers. :lol:

Thanks for the update dude. :cathappy:
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Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 1 )
« Reply #18 on: April 22, 2012, 02:33:03 PM »
yuko rocks and she has bearly been in the story yet lol

jurian has a crush on rena so cute lol to bad she might get her heart broken

So i gusseing she bumped into yuki mabye

if yuko is rena's best friend then i wonder who is yuki's ooo this is gettin good lol

and i wonder who forgot

thanks for the update

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Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 1 )
« Reply #19 on: April 22, 2012, 02:54:42 PM »
hoho..the story is so interesting..poor jurina..it's seems like her love for rena is an unrequited love..

please update soon :bow:


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