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Re: [AKB48] Is It You? - Chapter 2 (12/05/08)
« Reply #20 on: May 16, 2012, 12:15:23 AM »
I'm really sorry for the delay, many things had happen for the past two weeks and I just couldn't update that time. But I'm now done with the third chapter. Finally.

Honestly, I find this chapter a bit disappointing, in my opinion. I don't know to you, maybe you might like it as well.

Well, anyway enough with the talk, here's chapter 3. Please enjoy.


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Chapter 3
            “WHAT?!” We all exclaimed in shock earning stares from the other students in our class, including those who are passing by the hallways.
 
“NyanNyan, how could you?” Yuko whined, wrapping her arms around Haruna’s waist and burying her face in her chest. Haruna, on the other hand, pushed Yuko’s face away from her chest and said with a loud voice,
 
“Where do you think you’re touching? Don’t touch me. You pervert.”
 
“And here I thought I have a chance with the guy.” Tomochin mumbled under her breath that I, in fact, heard it.
 
“What?” Haruna probably heard it too but didn’t seem to have caught it really well.
 
“I didn’t say anything.” Tomochin quickly replied afraid of being caught.
 
“NyanNyan, you can’t do this to me.” Now I can see Yuko pouting at Haruna. “How can you date a midget like him when you already have me?” She said almost in tears as I frown at her confuse, after calling Kai a midget.
 
“He’s not a midget!” Haruna protested. “How can you call him a midget when he’s taller than you by about four, five inches? And he has the same height as me.” She reasoned. Good point, though I wonder why Yuko called Kai a midget in the first place. “Besides, I don’t recall being with you in the beginning.” She added, like a knife piercing through Yuko’s chest. She’s now knocked out.
 
“Are you seriously going out together?” Mari-neechan asked with a serious tone.
 
“Of course not. Why would I? Kai’s my cousin and I only said that so Yuko would stay away from me. But it looks like that it’s not working at all and had gotten worst.” Haruna said while still pushing Yuko away from her as Yuko kept saying ‘Don’t leave me NyanNyan.’
 
“He’s your cousin?!” We all exclaim in unison. Seriously, there are so many big surprises today; first the boy that I met this morning in the train is actually a transfer student in my class, second Haruna says that Kai is her boyfriend and now she’s saying that he’s her cousin. Crazy day isn’t it?
 
“Weren’t you listening? And is that all what you heard from my sentence?” Haruna asked annoyed from all the questions we’re throwing at her.
 
“So that means I still have a chance!” This time, instead of muttering to herself, Tomochin said it at loud with a happy looking face.
 
“What?” Haruna asked with a confuse look.
 
“Nothing.” Tomochin answered as I shook my head in disbelief. “Though, I will have to say that your family has really good genes. What I meant is, you’re very beautiful like a model, Riku is really handsome, Kuu is really cute and Kai is like both combine; very cute and handsome. You don’t find good-looking people anywhere, including us, but you guys are like wow.
 
“Of course we do, and I have to thank our parents and our grandparents for that.” Haruna said with a grin. “Back in middle school, when Kai was still living here in the neighborhood, we use to fake date ‘cause I was being confessed all the time and got really tired of it.” She added and continued. “Since everyone knows that onii-chan and I are related, so he’s out of the question. No one knew that Kai and Kuu are my cousins, so I can ask them to be my pretend boyfriend. But Kuu is too much of a player for my taste, so my only option is Kai, who also has the same problem as me. But he left to study abroad in America. I was really shock when he came back, I didn’t even recognize him with his blond hair this morning, until he introduced himself in front of the class.”
 
“I’m sorry for being off topic on your families’ good genes, but I was wondering where did the guys go when they left the classroom?” I ask and I notice that Haruna’s face became serious. What was that about?
 
“Why do you want to know?” Haruna frowned and her voice also sounded a bit harsh and really serious. I’ve never seen this side of hers, I don’t know what this is about but it looks something really serious.
 
“I’m just asking.” I reasoned.
 
“If you’re just asking, I don’t know where they are now, but all I know is that they’re discussing about something.” Haruna answered as she shrugs nonchalantly. Now I’m curious, they’re discussing about what?
 
“About what?” This time it’s onee-chan who asked my question.
 
“That’s for me to know and for you not to find out. In other words, it’s classified.” Haruna replied quickly.
 
“What do you mean?” Tomochin asked curiously.
 
Haruna let out a sigh of exasperation and answered Tomochin’s curiosity.
 
“It’s a private discussion, it’s not in any of your business, only the guys and I knows about it, not even our parents know about this and we don’t want anyone to get involved in it either. Are you guys done asking questions? And can we drop this topic; I’m not supposed to say anything about it.”
 
By the tone of her voice, it sure doesn’t sound like a joke. This is really suspicious and they’re definitely hiding something important… I think… and I’m seriously curious about what’s this about, just like what she said; it’s not our business and I shouldn’t ask any further, so maybe I should just drop it.
 
Silence started to fill around our tables and the tension started to rise until Yuko had broke the intense silence that was building up.
 
“NyanNyan, you sounded really smart just a while ago.” She said while the girls and I were staring at her and shook our heads disbelievingly.
 
“Just because you guys call me an airhead doesn’t mean that I’m actually an airhead and stupid.” Haruna said as she gives a slap behind Yuko’s head.
 
“ITAI!”
 
* * * * *

Meanwhile, three young men are on the rooftop, leaning their backs on the wall while the shorter one is sitting on the ground and they began talking.
 
“When did you come back?” Riku asked the young blond.
 
“Since yesterday.” The blond gave his older cousin a short answer.
 
“When I heard the news this morning, I knew that it was you. You killed a member of the Mono family and not to mention, you killed the third son of the head of that family.” Riku said scolding.
 
“Good start, isn’t it?” Kai let out a scoff as he smirks, feeling proud of himself as he says, “You should have seen him beg like a dog. Pathetic.”
 
“Are you crazy?! Don’t you know what you’ve gotten yourself into?! Revenge is not the answer and I’m pretty sure ‘they’ don’t want you to do this…” Riku was about to add more scolding, but was cut off by an already hot-tempered Kai.
 
“THIS IS THE ONLY WAY!!!” Kai yelled as he tries to calm himself down and spoke again, his voice filled with pain and sadness. “It’s the only way for me to have peace and for ‘them’ to be in peace. They killed them Riku, my family, our family.” He said sadly.
 
“I know what you mean.”Riku said sincerely as he leans down and sat next to Kai while he wraps his arm around his younger cousin’s shoulder to comfort him, knowing very well that he’ll do the same thing if that ever happen to him.
 
“You and Haruna may be a Kojima, and Kuu may be a Minegishi, but you guys still have the Takahashi blood running through your veins.” Kai began to say. “And for me to cross the path towards peace, I have to destroy a humongous boulder that’s blocking my way.” He added and continues. “And I want you guys to help me turn this boulder into dust until nothing is left.”
 
“You can count me in, nobody messes with our families.” Kuu said as he punch his fist into his palm while Riku just let out a sigh; knowing very well that he cannot change his cousin’s mind, as he smiles saying that he’s also joining in.
 
“So when do we start?” Kuu asked with an evil grin forming on his lips.
 
“Well, I’m waiting for my order to be delivered which is in two-three days top. And when I took Tobita’s wallet after his death, I saw an invitation for all Mono members to another mafia family or something next week; we can do a little something to the Mono residence.” Kai said as he remembered taking the middle age man’s wallet the other night.
 
“Sounds good to me. I can’t wait, since we’re also a part of the mafia since we were born.” Kuu said excitedly still grinning as he looks up to the clear sky.
 
“Kai may have died once, but I’ll show them that Kai has been raised from the dead.” Kai said as he smirks.
 
* * * * *

Atsuko’s POV
 
It’s almost the end of lunch, obviously, everybody had already finished their lunch and the girls and I had been talking about random things after that awkward silence we had earlier.
 
After a few minutes later, I realise that the guys had come back to class and they’re now walking towards us, except for Kai who was actually jogging towards us; specifically towards Haruna.
 
Suddenly, Yuko is standing in front of Haruna with her arms spread using her body as a shield and said,
 
“You! Stay away from my NyanNyan!” Haruna rolled her eyes while Kai raised an eyebrow as he pushes Yuko out of his way and took Haruna’s hand into his and said,
 
“Kojiharu, I need to talk to you. Alone.” Haruna stood up from her seat and let herself being dragged by Kai, away from us.
 
Riku and Kuu had finally joined us while Yuko was sort of crying as she calls her ‘NyanNyan’ and trying to get where Kai and Haruna is, but failed when Kuu took hold of Yuko’s collar to prevent her from going there.
 
“Where did you guys go?” Mari-neechan asked.
 
“Rooftop.” Riku quickly answered. “We were just talking.” He added.
 
“About what?” I asked curiously with my eyebrows furrowed.
 
“None of you business.”Kuu replied coldly and grin which is creeping me out as hell; it is somewhat scary for some reason.
 
Haruna and Kai came back from their little talk; I wonder what they were talking about. Probably the one that Haruna was talking about earlier but never told us.
 
All of a sudden, the bell rang and all the students went back to their own classes while my classmates and I went straight to our seats, waiting for the second and last bell to ring. When that happens, our teacher came inside the classroom and did the usual routing and began our afternoon classes.
 
* * * * *

The bell rang once again and our afternoon classes were over. When the teacher left the classroom, Kai ran out of the classroom hurriedly.
 
“Why is Kai in a hurry like that?” Atsuko asked Kuu after seeing the blond boy running out of the classroom like lightning.
 
“Oh. He just has an appointment. You know; monthly check-up.” Kuu said, ready to leave also. “He’s going to the Takahashi clinic which is also the Takahashi residence which also own from the Kojima and Minegishi family. Since he hasn’t been here for a while, it’s best for him to do his monthly check-up.” He added.
 
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An hour later, at the Takahashi Clinic/Takahashi residence
 
“Well, you check-up is done, Master.” Said a deep female voice.
 
“Thank you Sayaka, Sae.” Kai thanked his two childhood bodyguards. “It’s a good thing you guys are still alive, if you had died that day, I don’t know what would happen to me.” He said and added, “I’ll be in my room and please don’t bother me until supper.”
 
“Very well.” The two female bodyguards/ female butlers said in unison as they bow at the master.
 
After getting up from their bows, they started talking as they clean up the place and getting ready to prepare supper.
 
“I can’t believe it. Who ever thought that Mi- I mean Kai would change so much.” The short hair bodyguard said as almost slipping the name of a Takahashi member.
 
“I know; that kid’s body was showing signs of change before he left Japan. But now, seeing that kid’s body a while ago it has changed completely.” The long hair bodyguard said as a matter of fact with a serious voice.
 
“You mean…?” Sae began to say something but was trailed off.
 
“Yes.” Sayaka replied, knowing already what the short hair girl was asking.
 
“Seriously?!” Sae asked in shock earning a nod from the latter.

TBC


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Well, that's it for chapter 3. Hope you still enjoyed it.
Like I said from the beginning, I wasn't really proud of myself in this chapter, but I'll try my best on thenext chapter.

Thanks for reading and please comment or critic.
« Last Edit: May 16, 2012, 03:45:26 AM by RJay »
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Re: [AKB48] Is It You? - Chapter 3 (12/05/16)
« Reply #21 on: May 16, 2012, 05:50:30 AM »
now that's clarified  :D

Yuuchan~~ dont worry nyan always love u :)

I love the idea of them being a bad ass assassin  :pimp:

But on the other hand it also include being a murderers I dont like that :(

but still I love the tall good looking guy KAI~~ minami same height as nyan nyan XD wAhhahaha

Thats funny :)
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Re: [AKB48] Is It You? - Chapter 3 (12/05/16)
« Reply #22 on: May 16, 2012, 06:57:32 AM »
I have a heart atack about kojiharu confession... but i feel relief when you said that its a joke.. poor yuuchan need to fight for your wifey..

acchan.. do something.. :D

and kai changes.. maybe she is a girl?!? minami?!?! :O

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Re: [AKB48] Is It You? - Chapter 3 (12/05/16)
« Reply #23 on: May 16, 2012, 07:51:10 AM »
  :smhid  I just hate when they all tried to ignore Yuko, specially Haruna. Why does she always have to push her away from her all the time?  :angry:
I hope Yuko will find someone that would cherish her and love her.  :(

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Re: [AKB48] Is It You? - Chapter 3 (12/05/16)
« Reply #24 on: May 16, 2012, 10:04:24 AM »
Eh?!!! What?!!! Kai was a girl before?!!!
Nevermind I like Yuko more and more she is so funny ^^

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Re: [AKB48] Is It You? - Chapter 3 (12/05/16)
« Reply #25 on: May 16, 2012, 01:34:57 PM »
Ahhhh it's so short !!! :panic:
i want more .....  it is getting interesting!!
please update a.s.a.p. !!
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Re: [AKB48] Is It You? - Chapter 3 (12/05/16)
« Reply #26 on: May 16, 2012, 04:00:20 PM »
I was surprised too. Thought Haruna boyfriend is Kai. Now that clear up.
It seems like Kai was a girl before the transformation perhaps?

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Re: [AKB48] Is It You? - Chapter 3 (12/05/16)
« Reply #27 on: May 20, 2012, 12:29:40 PM »
Tomochin likes Kai hmmm awsome i wonder if Acchan will get jelous

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Re: [AKB48] Is It You? - Chapter 3 (12/05/16)
« Reply #28 on: May 20, 2012, 02:41:54 PM »
@saeyukilover: Well of course, to be an assassin you have to be a murderer...
By the way, I forgot to mention that Riku, Kai and Kuu are taller than they normally do; Riku is 5ft10, Kuu is 5ft7 and Kai is 5ft4 that's at least Haruna's height right? Or maybe taller than Haruna.
Hahaha my bad.

@Haruko: Yup, Yuko should fight for her wife, she's been trying to get Haruna's attention.
About Kai changing... You'll just have to wait for the futur chapters.

@haruhi16: Yuko will find someone that will love her and Haruna is just being Haruna, you know being a tsundere and all, it just takes time for her until she realizes her feelings for Yuko. Just like in the other fics.

@kahem: I can't tell you that, but wait until the further chapters then maybe they will answer all your questions.
Glad you find it funny, 'cause usually I find my sense of humor quite lame though some people in my school find that I'm funny.

@iloveakb48: EH?!!! Its too short for you?!
I honestly don't know how to make my chapters longer, unless I put a bunch of ideas in that same chapter.
While writing a draft on my notebook at school, I notice that one chapter is like about six pages or more on my notebook and when I type it online, it makes look really short
And I'll try my best to post it once I finish writing chapter 4.

@Sidney W: I don't know about that, I'm sorry but I'll have to keep that as a mystery on the upcoming chapters.

@haru9210: I'm glad you think so.
I hope the next chapter would be much more interesting to you.

@XxRoByNxX78: Hm... She will eventually and maybe she might make her first move or maybe Kai will.

To everyone: I'm guessing that you are all waiting for the next chapter, you'll have to wait a bit longer.
I'm almost done or so I think I am, I'm sort of stuck; I have to stick two ideas together but I have to think to put something in between to connect them.
I'll post chapter 4 as soon as I finish writing, editing, typing and posting.
Until then please stay and keep reading.
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Re: [AKB48] Is It You? - Chapter 3 (12/05/16) REPLIES + POLL
« Reply #29 on: May 20, 2012, 04:31:30 PM »
Now that i look at it... it's quite long....sorry for my nonsense...:-P




"until then please stay and keep reading"
I promise that i will keep reading this fanfic until the end... :yep:
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Re: [AKB48] Is It You? - Chapter 3 (12/05/16) REPLIES + POLL
« Reply #30 on: May 20, 2012, 06:16:24 PM »
@iloveakb48: It's okay, though I don't mind to make my chapters longer, but it takes a lot of thinking and most importantly time and I don't really like to make people wait too long.
But I might delay a little this month and next month, provincial exams are coming soon like I've said before. But don't worry I'll make it up for everybody.
Might as well post chapter 4 before the exams starts.
And I'm really happy that your going to stay and read until the end, I'll try my best to not disappoint everyone.
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Re: [AKB48] Is It You? - Chapter 3 (12/05/16) REPLIES + POLL
« Reply #31 on: May 20, 2012, 06:59:06 PM »
Oh! So Kai weren't really dating Haruna but faking~
Yuko is definitely relieved after hearing that it's only faking~~ XD
So Kai, Kuu, Riku and Haruna are all from mafia family!!! :shocked
And Kai was the one who killed that mafia son!!!
This is really getting me interested in what will happen next!!! :cathappy:
But.. Somehow Sayaka/Sae seems to spill out "Mi.." was she going to say 'Minami'??
Then is Kai actually a girl?????
And what do they mean when Kai's body has changed???? :?

Please Update Soon!!!!!! :kneelbow:

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Re: [AKB48] Is It You? - Chapter 3 (12/05/16) REPLIES + POLL
« Reply #32 on: May 20, 2012, 09:34:13 PM »
Yeah i can understand you... 
my exams are coming soon too and i have to do my thesis...
ganbatte ne!!!!
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Re: [AKB48] Is It You? - Chapter 3 (12/05/16) REPLIES + POLL
« Reply #33 on: May 20, 2012, 11:22:01 PM »
@Yagami.Rai: Who knows, maybe Kai's body got more muscular or something, I'm just saying.
And maybe Sae and Sayaka may have mistaken Kai for Minami again who knows maybe it's that.

@iloveakb48: Thanks a bunch and I'll also wish you luck for your exams and I'll also try my best *raising my fist in the air*
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Re: [AKB48] Is It You? - Chapter 3 (12/05/16) REPLIES + POLL
« Reply #34 on: May 21, 2012, 12:16:30 AM »
According to your reply.....
i think kai is minami's brother and kai got killed so minami is pretending to be kai..
ahhhhh what am i saying!!! :panic:
I'm just gonna wait for chapter 4.... :yep: :yep:


thank you and yeah let's do our best!!!
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Re: [AKB48] Is It You? - Chapter 3 (12/05/16) REPLIES + POLL
« Reply #35 on: May 25, 2012, 01:24:04 AM »
I am very sorry for the delay and thank you for leaving comments.
I took a very long time to finish the forth chapter and I apologize for that.

So here it is chapter 4, please enjoy!

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Chapter 4
            “Hisk…hisk…hisk… Onee-chan, save me!” A little girl cries as she calls her older sister to save her.
 
“Nya nya nya. You ugly! You big baby!” Three little boys were teasing and bullying the little girl, calling her names and kept pushing her as she cries like a poor baby.
 
“Hey! You leave her alone!” Suddenly, a shout was heard as another kid came running towards them and went in front of the little girl, shielding her with its little body.
 
“Says who?” One of the little boys said, giving the other kid a mocking look.
 
“And what’s a little girl like you going to do with three boys like us.” Another boy said.
 
“Girls are weak and boys are stronger than girls. You can’t beat us.”  The third boy said.
 
The little girl, who was protecting the crying girl, ran again towards the three little boys and pushed them to the ground and started sending kicks and punches to them.
 
After that the little girl finished beating the boys up and again, was about to beat them up more but the boys started to run away, crying for their mommies at how a little girl beat them. Seems like the boys are not so strong.
 
“YOU BIG BABIES!!!” The little girl yelled while panting a little and turned to the other girl who was now hiccupping.
 
“Are you okay?” She asked the other girl with her tiny hands rubbing her eyes.
 
The girl answered with a nod and thanked the smaller girl as she smiled a small smile. Suddenly a taller girl came towards the two and when she saw her little sister crying, she glared at the smaller girl and pushed her and hugged her sister closer while the little girl hissed in pain as she rubs her sore bum.
 
“What did you do to my little sister?!” The taller girl demanded with her voice furious.
 
“It’s okay onee-chan; she saved me from some boys who were bullying me.” The little girl in her sister’s embrace said while still hiccupping a little.
 
The taller girl just stared at her sister and gasp and went to the smaller girl to help her get up; lending a hand and pull her up as she apologize.
 
“I’m sorry; I didn’t mean to push you.” She said guiltily.
 
“It’s okay.” The little girl said as she dusts herself.
 
“Mariko.” The taller girl suddenly said.
 
“Eh?” The little girl blinked with a confuse look on her face.
 
“My name is Mariko.” The taller girl said again in introducing herself.
 
“And I’m Atsuko.” The other came in and also introducing herself. “And yours?” She asked as the smaller girl smiled showing her small dimples.
 
“My name is…”
 
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Reluctantly, I open my eyes and sigh as I reach my left hand to my neck and took hold of the necklace that the little girl gave me a long time ago and I silently muttered her name.
 
“Minami.”
 
Why was I dreaming about her anyway? Is it because I miss her so much that I wanted to see her? Of course, it’s been ten years since I last saw her. I don’t know what really happen to her ten years ago, but she had disappeared into thin air ever since that day.
 
Suddenly, I heard a slight knock and a shush voice of my sister on the other side of my bedroom door.
 
“Acchan, are you okay?” She asked. “I heard you crying and sleep talking just a while ago.” She said as she opens the door of my room. Was I… was I crying and sleep talking? I reach my right hand to my face and I notice no tears were there; maybe it’s just the sound of me crying.
 
Onee-chan came in my room and walked towards me as I slowly sat up comfortably on my bed still holding the necklace around my neck while she sat on the edge of my bed.
 
“Are you okay?” She asked again. “Did you have a nightmare or something?” She asked worriedly.
 
I slowly shook my head as I move to the other side of my bed while onee-chan came in right beside.
 
“Then what is it about?” She asked curiously.
 
“It’s about my childhood past.” I answered facing her as I remembered my dream about the little girl just a few minutes ago.
 
She noticed that I was still holding the piece of jewelry while playing with the ring and a ‘M’ written on it, and she asked,
 
“Is it about Minami?”
 
I nodded as I started telling about my dream, how the little girl saved me from those bullies and also how she beat them up pretty bad for picking on me, though the little girl didn’t know me that time.
 
“Oh yeah. I remember that she would always be your knight in shining armor, except that she’s a girl rather than a boy. And sometimes, I actually really thought that she really was a guy with really long hair.” She said teasingly as she giggles softly.
 
“That’s not funny onee-chan. I found her really cute back then.” I said as I pouted at her.
 
“Before, I had a feeling you had a girl crush over Minami.” She said teasingly again as I playfully punch her. Okay, maybe I did have a little crush over the little girl, but that’s when we were just kids and we didn’t understand what was going on.
 
“Oh yeah. I also remember that when the both of you had exchange necklaces together. You guys were so cute and Minami was like your first boyfriend when she gave you that.” She said as points towards my chest where the jewel’s resting there.
 
After finishing talking, we are now getting ready to go back to bed and Mari-neechan insisted that we sleep together tonight.
 
As I slowly close my eyes and getting ready to go back to sleep. After a few seconds, my eyes shot back open in realisation as I quickly sat up, completely surprising my sister as she also sat up staring at me confusingly.
 
“What’s the matter?” She asked worriedly.
 
“When we first met Kai, his face looks so familiar until it hit me now. I notice that Kai really looks like Minami, I mean their face looks so similar.” I said as I look into my sister’s eyes.
 
“Now that you mention it, they both really do look like each other.” She said as she places her thumb and her index finger on her chin in a thinking motion. “I wonder if they’re related.” She added deep in thought.
 
“How can that be? Minami never told us that she had siblings before.” I said narrowing my eyes a little.
 
“The reason why she never told us was because we never asked in the beginning if she did have siblings and who knows maybe they are siblings.” She said and continued. “Since Kai is in the same year and class as you, they could be twins or even long lost twins or something.”
 
“You might be right.” I said.
 
“Nope. I’m always right.” She said confidently.
 
“You’re over-confident onee-chan.” I said as she giggles and patted my head while we both lay down again on the bed and finally fell back to sleep.
 
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(I’ll call the kid in this part an ‘it’ since I’m not telling if it’s a boy or a girl.)
 
A kid about seven years old was happily skipping towards a huge house that looks like a mansion, the child stopped in front of two enormous doors. The little one noticed and frowned that there were no guards guarding neither the front gates nor the two giant doors in front of it and they weren’t even there to open the doors for it.
 
Shrugging the thought off, the kid pushed the huge door with its small arms as it went in the house and was about to shout cheerfully that it was home, but no words were coming out, not a single word like someone has cut off its tongue and its happy and cheerful smile was suddenly erase and completely replace with horror as its body began to tremble in total fear.
 
The sight in front of that child was one hundred percent horrifying; there were blood splatter everywhere on the walls, bodies of housekeepers, maids, butlers and bodyguard were everywhere on top of their own blood pool of who knows how many liters and bullets scattered on the floor.
 
Suddenly, the now scared kid heard footsteps heading towards its way and with its escape reflex kicking in, the kid ran towards and crawled under a desk where a dead guard was hanging on a chair and the little kid covered its mouth to make sure it wouldn’t make a sound and now it can only hear footsteps, its breathing and its heart beating unbelievingly fast.
 
The sounds of footsteps had stop and the kid can see from under the desk three men around the end on twenties and the beginning of thirties and around them, they have at least ten to twenty bodyguards in the middle of the spacious hall. The child can see them because of the reflection of a huge mirror behind the desk where it was hiding. Luckily, the dead guard was blocking the kid’s reflection from the mirror so that no one could see the child hiding under the desk.
 
“Well, our job is done boys.” One of the three men said.
 
“All that’s left is to report it to otou-sama. But didn’t the Takahashi’s have a second child? I think they do.” The second asked the two other men and his bodyguards.
 
“I don’t think they do, sir.” One of the bodyguards responded.
 
“Anyway, we’ll be taking our leave now and we’ll be reporting this to our father. We’ll leave the rest to you guys.” The third said as he leaves the big house with the second man.
 
“You know what to do; burn the place.” The first man said as he also left the place.
 
“Yes sir. Otsukaresama Mono-sama!” All the bodyguards bowed as they went out to take the gas containers obviously filled with gas in them in their cars.
 
While all the bodyguards of the three men left, the kid took this chance to find its parents and sibling. Everywhere, high and low, in every room in that huge house it check, its family was still nowhere to be found, until it stopped in front of the last and only room it didn’t check yet; its father’s office.
 
The kid gulped audibly as it has a tight grip on the doorknob, turned it and pushed the door. Its eyes went really wide open and its mouth completely agape at the sight of its father on top of its mother and its sibling laying its back on its parents covered in blood.
 
The poor child fell down on its knees and hands on the floor and its body trembling like crazy, crying and screaming at the same time as it got up and towards its now dead family and hugged its sibling tightly, didn’t care if it’s going to be covered in their blood and still crying and…
 
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“AAHHH!!!” Kai screamed loudly while quickly sitting up on his bed, his left hand covering his face as he pants heavily and his body completely soak in sweat.
 
“It’s just a dream.” He said repeatedly with his hand still covering his face. “A real nightmare.” He added while taking out his hand on his face.
 
“Are you okay Master Kai?” Suddenly, his two and only female bodyguards still in their sleeping wear; t-shirts and comfortable shorts, barged into his large room, worried that something might have happen to their master.
 
“I’m okay; I just had a bad dream. That’s all.” He said calming his rapid breathing he had a while ago.
 
“Okay. Is there anything you need, water perhaps?” Sayaka asked still concerned for her master.
 
“It’s alright, you girls can go back to sleep.” He said and added. “I’m going out for a walk a little.”
 
“You don’t want us to accompany you?” Sae asked.
 
“It’s okay; you don’t have to, really. I just need some time alone.” Kai said as he sends off his bodyguards back to their rooms while he puts his pants on and took his sweater.
 
Kai kept walking in the empty streets and stopped by in a cemetery. He kept walking and walking until he stood in front of three gravestones with his last name on them.
 
He bit his lower lip to prevent his tears from threatening to fall, but failed when tears escape his eyes as he clenches his fists in a tight grip on his sides and became calm again and also became serious as he says,
 
“It’s now our turn to destroy them.”
 
 
TBC
 
 
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Well that's it for now. I hope you like it.
Please comment or critic.

This will be my last update for this month until the end of June, because I'm having my finals coming up at the near end of June and I need to concentrate and study really hard like a freak.

I hope you can wait for the fifth chapter by then, again I'm really sorry.

Wish me luck on my final exams.

Until then please stay tune for the next chapter.

Oh yeah, I almost forgot. Please vote on the poll, I need to decide on a title for my next fic that I'm dying to share with you guys... So please vote.
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Re: [AKB48] Is It You? - Chapter 4 (12/05/25) + POLL
« Reply #36 on: May 25, 2012, 01:41:35 AM »
So after all is Minami (a girl) disguise as Kai. Hohoho. Thanks for update.

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« Reply #37 on: May 25, 2012, 04:38:48 AM »
minami or Kai I don't care .... But What that kid went through is freaking hell  :panic:

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Re: [AKB48] Is It You? - Chapter 4 (12/05/25) + POLL
« Reply #38 on: May 25, 2012, 05:38:46 AM »
So after all is Minami (a girl) disguise as Kai. Hohoho. Thanks for update.

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« Reply #39 on: May 25, 2012, 08:52:51 AM »
Oh, I'm really liking your story! Seems interesting.
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