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The chaser (atsumina fanfic)
« on: July 04, 2012, 05:44:24 PM »
Hi,i'm new here...
Like to read atsumina fanfics, so i try to write one.. :twothumbs
I really like takamina,don't like acchan,but really like atsumina  :heart:.. don't know why...?? hehe

i don't really can use english,so forgive if there are any writing mistake...please correct me immediately if i wrong   :hand:
I hope you can enjoy this~
ps. The title, i take it from infinite the chaser...i really like the lyrics,maybe you can check it if you free :thumbup


The Chaser


Prologue


I can do anything for the person I love .. ..

"Not unexpectedly we will soon live outside the country .."
"Mom, I'm sorry .. I can’t stay in America." Atsuko out of the lounge and ran toward the exit of the airport.
"Acchan,where are you going? Soon the plane was leaving! "
~

It has been six years have passed ... Do you still remember me? Minami ...
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Re: The chaser [atsumina] [prologue]
« Reply #1 on: July 04, 2012, 05:49:25 PM »
Welcome here Takamina_Captain-san...  :jphip:

You like infinite as well?? I really like the song.. :twothumbs

and why no like Acchan!!! :bleed eyes: you need Acchan and Takamina to be AtsuMina~ :heart: :heart:

looking forward to the chasing scenes...lol..  XD

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Re: The chaser [atsumina] [prologue]
« Reply #2 on: July 04, 2012, 06:04:44 PM »
and why no like Acchan!!! :bleed eyes: you need Acchan and Takamina to be AtsuMina~ :heart: :heart:

Hahaha Flean is right.. no Acchan means no Takamina.. and no Takamina means no Acchan.. if there is one missing there would be no Atsumina!  :on speedy:

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Re: The chaser [atsumina] [prologue]
« Reply #3 on: July 04, 2012, 06:52:04 PM »
hmm looking forward on this..
me myself and I is an atsumina shipper..
Oh no.. you don't like atsuko.. don't be pwease.. takamina will get mad at you if you don't like her wifey  :lol:
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Re: The chaser [atsumina] [prologue]
« Reply #4 on: July 04, 2012, 10:30:11 PM »
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Re: The chaser [atsumina] [prologue]
« Reply #5 on: July 04, 2012, 10:38:45 PM »
Hehe.. it's a quite similar case as I had in the past: only like Acchan when she's with Takamina. :grin:
Well, not anymore now.. as my likeness towards Acchan rises from time to time. :D
Perhaps later you'll be in the same condition as I am now? :D Let the time answer...

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Re: The chaser [atsumina] [prologue]
« Reply #6 on: July 05, 2012, 03:26:40 AM »
we have a new writer!  :welcome
i like the prologue  :panic: please continue the fic!  :cow:

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Re: The chaser [atsumina] [prologue]
« Reply #7 on: July 05, 2012, 05:14:15 AM »
:heart: the prologue~
Guess 6 years time will mean Acchan and Taka 27 yrs old :wub:
Hehe.. it's a quite similar case as I had in the past: only like Acchan when she's with Takamina. :grin:
In my case I liked Acchan more first but then I changed oshimen to Taka~
But Acchan will always be my 2-oshi :)
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Re: The chaser [atsumina] [prologue]
« Reply #8 on: July 05, 2012, 06:38:46 AM »
I'm curious, please update.
Hehe.. it's a quite similar case as I had in the past: only like Acchan when she's with Takamina. :grin:
Well, not anymore now.. as my likeness towards Acchan rises from time to time. :D

That's what happened to me at the beginning too, only liked Acchan when she was with Takamina but now I start to like her by herself. I admit that shipping Atsumina does help somewhat but the big part being Acchan herself.

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Re: The chaser [atsumina] [prologue]
« Reply #9 on: July 05, 2012, 07:10:12 AM »
I'm curious, please update.
Hehe.. it's a quite similar case as I had in the past: only like Acchan when she's with Takamina. :grin:
Well, not anymore now.. as my likeness towards Acchan rises from time to time. :D

That's what happened to me at the beginning too, only liked Acchan when she was with Takamina but now I start to like her by herself. I admit that shipping Atsumina does help somewhat but the big part being Acchan herself.

The same ;D.. I hip so hard atsumina but acchan is not un my KAmi7 ..yet :D
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Re: The chaser [atsumina] [prologue]
« Reply #10 on: July 05, 2012, 07:50:19 AM »
Welcome here  :jphip: :welcome

IN THE NAME OF NEPTUNE! HOW COME YOU DONT LIKE ACCHAN  :grr:
unbelievable lol me in deep love with Acchan  :mon inluv: and Acchan only for Taka  :wub:

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Re: The chaser [atsumina] [prologue]
« Reply #11 on: July 05, 2012, 08:06:26 AM »
Should we rally and chase down those atsumina shippers who don't like Acchan :lol: lol? I'm totally kidding don't take it to heart.

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« Reply #12 on: July 05, 2012, 08:16:50 AM »
Should we rally and chase down those atsumina shippers who don't like Acchan :lol: lol? I'm totally kidding don't take it to heart.

Good idea.. then we should brain wash them, make them fall in love with Acchan~  :heart: :heart: To be a true AtsuMina shipper!! LOL.. :lol:

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Re: The chaser [atsumina] [prologue]
« Reply #13 on: July 05, 2012, 08:42:33 AM »
WE should not scare away the author :ph43r:

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Re: The chaser [atsumina] [prologue]
« Reply #14 on: July 05, 2012, 08:58:42 AM »
LOL.. I was just kidding about that..  XD  I don't like Acchan as well in beginning.. And I'm starting to like her just because of Taka..lol.. but now, Acchan and Taka are my Kami-oshis..  :deco:
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Re: The chaser [atsumina] [prologue]
« Reply #15 on: July 05, 2012, 01:28:22 PM »
LOL I think author-san got scared away  :lol:
Author-san, don't get away. I am waiting for your update  :) :)

(fact: I'm starting to like Acchan because of Taka, so you'll be starting to like Acchan too if you're Atsumina shipper. because no Acchan no Atsumina~)

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Re: The chaser [atsumina] [UPDATED : Chapter 1]
« Reply #16 on: July 05, 2012, 09:05:48 PM »
Wooww.. thank you minna...
I've read all the replies and it make me happy... :heart:
about acchan... please dont't missunderstad... :nervous
don't like doesn't mean hate... i'm just not into her,not her fans...??
But i agreed,i'm starting to like acchan...maybe it'll increase... :fap
Hope u'll enjoy this story...



The Chaser


Chapter 1


I can do anything for the person I love .. ..

"Not unexpectedly we will soon live outside the country .."
"Mom, I'm sorry .. I can’t stay in America."   Atsuko out of the lounge and ran toward the exit of the airport.
"Acchan,where are you going? Soon the plane was leaving! "
~

* Atsuko POV *

/ / In front of the house Takahashi / /


It has been six years have passed ... Do you still remember me? Minami ...


When I was about to ring the bell ..

"Can I help you?"


She stood behind me ... I finally saw her again ... I must be calm ...

"Konnichiwa, Takahashi Minami-san."
"Eh? How do you know my name? Have we met before? '
"I heard from uncle Takahashi. My name is Atsuko Maeda. I came to meet uncle. "
"Maeda? Ah, your father was a friend of my father's fishing,right?
"Yes. Takahashi-san,did you forget it? Six years ago your family come to our house once .. "
 "Oh really? Sorry I really forgot .. Come inside ... "

So she didn’t remember me ...


/ / In Takahashi’s house / /

"Acchan,right? How are you? "
"Konnichiwa, Uncle."
"Long time no see.You grows beautifully. It's kinda sad when your father went to America, there are no friends to go fishing together again. Didn’t you and your mother was asked by your father to go to America? When it plans ... "

I glanced at the Minami who was delivering the tea into the living room.
Time to start my plan ...

"Huaaaaaaa .... huhuhuhu ..."
"Eh Acchan? Why are you crying? "
"Please help me uncle. I want to stay here. I'm here because I thought you could help me ... huhuhuhuhu ... "
"Calm down Acchan, I’ll help you as much as I can."
"Really?"

= The door suddenly opened =

"Sorry, I'm not polite. Acchan! "
"Mom!"
"What are you doing? We miss the plane! "
"I'm not going to America!"
"Don’t be selfish! Let's go! Sorry to interrupt, Takahashi-san. "

When the mother pulled me away, I heard Minami said ..

"I'm sorry if I intervened,Maeda-san. But is not good if parents impose its will on their children? Would not it be nice if your child choose his own path and which is best for parents to support their children? "
"That's right Minami-chan ... But I can’t leave my child alone in Japan .."
"Maeda-san, what if acchan stay here?"  Takahashi-san said.
"I can’t bother your family Takahashi-san ..."
"It's okay. Acchan sweet and obedient. I guess acchan won’t be a burden here. What do you think, Mina-chan? "
"If father want to, I don’t mind .."
"How Maeda-san?
"But I haven’t talked to my husband ..."
"It's okay, I'll help you talk to him."
"All right. Thank you very much Takahashi-san. Tomorrow I will bring acchan here before leaving for America. "

-The next day-

"Acchan, once you create a problem, i'll bring you to America. Understand? Don’t bother Takahashi-san and Minami-chan. You've register in the same school with the Minami-chan. Study well,okay? "
"Okay, mom."

Acchan drove her mother to the airport, after that she returned to Takahashi’s house.

* Atsuko POV *

"Acchan, from now on you're going to stay here. In this house there will be only mina-chan. I’ll follow my wife went to the village, because her parents was sick.I will be back in a few weeks. "
"What? But father? I just heard this ... "
"Of course, because I had to say it now, Mina-chan. Keep acchan well. Regarding achan room ... You'll sleep with Mina-chan, because the guest room haven’t been cleaned. We will clean it after I get home. "

Whaaat? Yeaaayyyy…

"It's okay, Uncle. Don’t worry about me .Please be careful. "
"Thank you acchan. Mina-chan, acchan I go first. "

= After Takahashi's father left =

I didn’t think things will turn out like this. But it's much better hehe. I have to say something.

"Takahashi-san, thank you for your help yesterday. Your words yesterday make my mom changed her mind. "
"No need to thank, Maeda-san. Yesterday, you look so sad, and these words just out. Let me help you clean up your things in my room. "
"Don’t call me Maeda-san. Just call me Atsuko, Takahashi-san. "
"All right. Then you also call me Takamina. "
"Taka .... Minami? Minami? Ah, sorry .. surely you're not comfortable when I called you Minami .. "
"Hahaha ... It's okay, you can call me like that. I don’t mind. "
"Well, okay. I’ll call you Minami."

As we packed up, we talked about many things. Minami is very friendly, even to strangers, like me. She doesn’t remember me at all. Even so, can talk like this to Minami makes me happy.

"Finally finished .. Yokatta .."
"Yeah, really tired."
"Tomorrow you will go to my school right?  why did you move into my school? What about your old school? "
"Because your school has a well-known drama club .. so I decided to move .."

It is all a lie, simply because you were there Minami ..

"Yes, my school has quite a famous school drama club. I have a friend in the drama club. Tomorrow I'll introduce you to her, so you can get in to the drama club. "
"All right. Minami,thanks. " I smiled.
"It was nothing ... It was late, let's sleep." Minami blushed, very cute ..

Minami’s rooms have only one bed, so I figured I'd sleep with Minami. But Minami insists to put a futon on the floor and sleep there.

"Why are you sleeping on a futon,minami?"
"Because there's only one bed .. You are a guest, of course you have to sleep on the bed ..
"We can sleep together, you know?"
"It's okay, I'll just sleep on the futon."
"No, I'd rather sleep on the futon. This room yours, Minami. I may not sleep in your bed while you're sleeping on a futon. "
"Don’t be stupid, Atsuko. I can’t let you sleep on the futon. "

I was speechless. I know Minami stubborn, so I just stay quiet. Whatever I say won'tt change her decision. I'd better give in, I don't want us to fight on the first day.

"Well, today I'll sleep on the bed. Tomorrow you are sleeping on the bed. How Minami? "
"Agreed. Go to sleep. "  Minami said, as she lays a futon next to the bed.

When I finished shower, Minami was asleep.
I watched her face for a long time. Minami is very sweet, even when she asleep.
She sleep very well, didn’t even notice my presence at her side. I also got into bed and tried to sleep.

-Middle of the night-

Bruuk ..
"... oouch ..."  Minami said.
"Atsuko?"  Minami found Atsuko at her futon and now hugged her tightly.



To be continued ...



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Re: The chaser [atsumina] [prologue]
« Reply #17 on: July 05, 2012, 09:37:38 PM »
Hahaha... Acchan so sneaky...  :twisted: with all the acting to get herself into Taka's house.. :lol:

and on the first night already made her move..  :inlove: way to go Acchan!!! :twothumbs

Acchan need do more sneaky stuff!!!  :P

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Re: The chaser [atsumina] [prologue]
« Reply #18 on: July 05, 2012, 11:14:39 PM »
Wahh Captain this is good  :tama-heart:
Acchan is really in love with Minami ! It's good Acchan, make everything for your love  :k-wink:

I want more atsumina lovey-dovey scene !!
Please continue  :luvuluvu:

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Re: The chaser [atsumina] [prologue]
« Reply #19 on: July 06, 2012, 06:42:39 AM »
Good move acchan! :D

but be careful when you arrive to school many girls love your husband too :D
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