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Re: Kuminon fanfic - Chapter 7 - PART 1! 19/8/12
« Reply #60 on: August 19, 2012, 12:22:43 AM »
I like it! I like it so much!  :wriggly:
I really like your KumiNon fic!!
I can't wait for the next chapter!! Up soon!!

P.S.: good luck with your homework!
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Re: Kuminon fanfic - Chapter 7 - PART 1! 19/8/12
« Reply #61 on: August 21, 2012, 11:30:16 AM »
Kuuminon banzaii !!! : :on woohoo: ( though i like kumiyuri too :lol: ) and yeah this fic is really interesting  :hee: Looking forward for the next update  :whistle:

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Re: Kuminon fanfic - Chapter 7 - PART 1! 19/8/12
« Reply #62 on: August 21, 2012, 11:58:43 AM »
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY FINALLY !

We've waited so long for this update ! And now it's here  :wigglypanda:

Can't wait for part 2~

Too many mushy parts that I'm gonna have a nosebleed xD
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Re: Kuminon fanfic - Chapter 7 - PART 1! 19/8/12
« Reply #63 on: August 22, 2012, 11:30:53 AM »
what is this??!!  This is so CUTEtastic!!

My heart...My poor heart...

kuminon is a cute couple..

i sense the drama is coming because kumi's stepmother wants her to meet a guy..

pliz update as soon as you can :bow:


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Re: Kuminon fanfic - Chapter 7 - PART 1! 19/8/12
« Reply #64 on: August 22, 2012, 01:26:32 PM »
Hi all! I just wanted to thank you all for the comments. I will reply to all your comments 1 by 1 to thank you again when i upload part 2 :D

I Can't promise you a deadline but i wanted to tell you all that i have completed half of the part 2 so Look forward to it xD

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Re: Kuminon fanfic - Chapter 7 - PART 1! 19/8/12
« Reply #65 on: September 05, 2012, 03:00:28 PM »
jehovachiabi-san!!

where are you??!!
i miss my kuminon!!
please comeback!!!
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Re: Kuminon fanfic - Chapter 7 - PART 1! 19/8/12
« Reply #66 on: September 05, 2012, 05:28:12 PM »
@Chichay12 - Hi Sorry for the longggggggg wait!! Pls bear with me for 1 more day! I will finally have my break on friday and i will post it on friday night hopefully. Don't worry! I WILL BE BACK . Thank you for supporting and waiting till now  :farofflook: :kneelbow:

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Re: Kuminon fanfic - Chapter 7 - PART 2! 10/9/12
« Reply #67 on: September 10, 2012, 06:48:33 AM »
To all who have been waiting for the part 2 of chapter 7 here it is!

I am very sorry for making you wait so long, Please enjoy this chapter :D

Thanks you for being so patient with me. ENJOY~





Chapter 7 (Part 2)

Kumi woke up from her short nap to find kanon leaning on her and she knew that kanon was asleep with the weight that she felt. She brushed kanon;s hair to her side and looked at her face. Kanon nose twitched a little as a few strands of hair had tickled her nose. Kumi smiled a small smile and tightened her hug around kanon when she felt someone looking at kanon.

“Non-chan, non-chan, we are arriving soon.” Kumi poked kanon’s cheek and woke her up. Kanon blushed when she felt kumi hugging her tightly.

“D-did I fall asleep?” Kanon asked.

“Yea~ your sleeping face is so cute.” Kumi giggled when kanon face lite up.

“Oh, we are here, let’s go.” Kumi gave the man who was looking at them a glare and took kanon’s hand as they walk out of the train. The man immediately turned his attention to his book when kumi gave him that icy glare.

“Non-chan let’s go have our breakfast, I’m hungry~” Kumi took kanon to a café and they ate their breakfast there.

“What’s wrong? Is the food not to your liking?” Kumi asked kanon when she saw that kanon was just staring at her food.

“No, it’s just, this rabbit shape food is too cute. I can’t bear to eat it.” Kanon said as she looked at the food on her plate.

Kumi chuckled at kanon’s cuteness and she asked the waitress to change the plate of food for kanon.

“T-thank you, kuumin…” Kanon whispered.

“Eh? What did you say?” Kumi said as she moved closer to kanon.

“I-I said thank you…” Kanon said with a blush before continuing, “Kuumin…”

“hahahha, you’re welcome non-chan!” Kumi gave kanon a bright smile and patted her head.

They chatted about almost everything with kanon blushing now and then.

“Non-chan, after this, do you want to watch a movie?” Kumi asked.

“Eh? Sure!” Kanon eyes sparkled. It had been a long time since she went to watch a movie and she was excited to watch it.

“hahahaha, ok! Let’s watch after we finish the food! We will have a movie marathon! Hehehe” Kumi said as she took out 3 movie tickets.

“Eh?! You bought them already?” Kanon was surprised.

“heh Yea I saw you looking intently on the movie posters that were on the street so I bought 3 tickets so we could watch it together.” Kumi said.

“Thank you kuumin!!!” Kanon could not hide her happiness and she hugged kumi tightly. When she realized what she was doing, she released the hug but kumi pulled her back and said:”We are dating right now, so hug me all you want.” Kumi smiled and hugged kanon while kanon hugged back and thank kumi again.

Kanon had never felt so blessed and happy in her life. Yuka treated kanon like a princess but this feeling with kumi was different. Kumi was like her prince charming without the white horse but with many virtues.

Kumi was kind, friendly, loving and always smiling at kanon. Kanon felt like a real princess and felt safe when kumi was around. She had started from looking out the window to dating kumi and even though the wait was long, kanon was glad that she did not give up on kumi.

“kanon~ say ahhhh” Kumi had scooped a mouthful of food and brought it in front of kanon’s mouth.

“A-ahhh..” Kanon ate the spoonful of food and blushed as she buried her face into kumi’s hug.

“hahha~ come on non-chan eat your food, you are so cute!” Kumi tap kanon’s nose and smiled at her.

They ate their breakfast and went out of the restaurant.

“Non-chan, wait here for a while.” Kumi found a place for kanon to sit and ran off to somewhere.

Kumi’s POV

I have been getting this weird feeling that someone has been following me… It’s a familiar presence and I know exactly who it was. It must be her, again…

I left kanon and ran towards the direction, away from the presence that I had felt. Turning into a smaller road, I waited there.

Sure enough, after a few seconds, I saw her.

“Enough is enough.” I said as I came out of my hiding place.

“…” The person was too shock to speak.

“Why are you following me?” I said in a cold voice.

“… i-it's an order from mrs yagami.” she gulped.

“… Kanako, I don’t want to put you in a spot but… can you tell me the reason for following me?” i said as my voice softened.

“K-kumi-sama… mrs yagami had ordered her man to search for you and bring you back. She wants you to meet your fiancé.” Kanako said.

“Thank you for telling me kanako, but… I can’t go back. I… have someone important to me now…” i said as i thought of the smiling face of kanon.

“I know, kumi-sama. I saw how happy you were that was why I did not show myself in front of you and that girl.” Kanoko smiled.

“Kanako, you are my childhood friend, I don't want to put you in a spot. Please, give me a little more time, I have to do something before I go back with you.” i said as i grabbed kanako’s hand.

“K-kumi-sama…” Kanako blushed a small blush, which went unnoticed by kumi.

“Kanako, please…” I said in a gentle and pleading voice.

“… Okay, I will give you 5 more days, that’s as long as I can keep your location safe.” Kanako gripped my hand for the last time and ran off.

“… thank you …” I watched as kanako’s petite frame ran towards the crowd and disappeared.

“haaa… 5 more days huh… I will have to tell her, before it’s too late…” I said as a sharp pain filled my heart when i thought of the separation with kanon.

I ran back towards kanon and collected the ring that I had ordered for kanon and me.

End of kumi’s POV.

Kumi ran back as fast as she could to kanon and saw kanon listening to music on the seat.

Kanon’s face lit up when she saw kumi. She jumped on her feet and ran towards kumi.

“Sorry! I’m Back!” Kumi panted from the running as she hugged kanon.

“Kuumin! It’s ok~” Kanon hugged kumi in a tight hug.

“ehhh, someone missed me? Hehehe” Kumi teased kanon when kanon hugged her tightly.

“a-a little…it’s lonely without you…” Kanon looked up to see kumi grinning and she blushed.

“Come on, let’s go, we have 3 movies to catch.” Kumi pulled away from the hug and replaces the warmth by holding kanon’s hand but before that, she couldn’t resist kanon’s cuteness and gave her a quick peck on the cheek. Kanon clung on kumi’s arm as they went towards the cinema.

They reached the cinema and there were a lot of people.

“Non-chan, don’t let go ok?” Kumi smiled and kanon and grabbed kanon’s hand as she dashed through the crowd with kanon following closely behind.

“haaaa~ hahahah!! That was fun!” Kumi said as she looked at kanon who was laughing too.

“Hahaha! Non-chan! Your hair.” Kumi reached out to touch kanon’s hair.

“ok, all done. Let’s go!” Kumi took out the tickets and they went into the cinema.

“kuumin thank you~” Kanon blushed and touched her the spot where kumi had touched.

“Welcome~” Kumi pinched kanon’s cheek as they sat down at their seats.

“non-chan, are you cold?” Kumi asked when she felt kanon shiver a little.

“en, a little.” Kanon cupped her hands together to keep herself warm.

“hahah~ come here.” Kumi pulled kanon into a hug. Kanon’s head was resting on kumi’s chest and kumi had kanon wrapped tightly in her arms.

Kanon’s heartbeat increased and she blushed as she heard kumi’s heartbeat increased too.

She looked up to peek at kumi and smiled slightly when she thought of the happy moment that she was having. They were sitting in a couple seat therefore their distance was closer than normal.

They watched the movie quietly, enjoying the moment they had.

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(AFTER THE 1st MOVIE)

“uwaaahhhh~ the movie was awesome!! Non-chan! You have a good taste for movies!” Kumi said as she smiled brightly.

“I-I just found it interesting, hahah~” Kanon smiled shyly.

“The characters in the movie were just so awesome! The ending of the two main character’s was beautiful!” Kumi said as she looked at kanon with a slightly sad face and whispered: “I hope we will have a good ending too…”

“eh?” Kanon asked.

“No, it’s nothing~ let’s go catch the second movie~” Kumi smiled a small smile and went towards the entrance with kanon.

The two were walking hand in hand towards the movie entrance and they heard someone called their name.

“Kumi-senpai?”

Kumi turned around to see yuria standing there with another girl.

“Yuria?! Are you watching a movie too?”

Kumi walked towards the pair.

“Yea we are here to watch that show. Er…”

Yuria looked at kanon.

“This is kanon. My girlfriend.” Kumi said as she introduced her to yuria.

“N-nice to meet you…” Kanon held on to kumi’s hand.

“I am yuria… we had a small misunderstanding before but… I am over kumi-senpai so don’t worry about it.” Yuria reached out her hand for a handshake.

Kanon felt that yuria was a nice girl and she replied her with a handshake and a smile.

“And this is?” Kumi said as she looked at the girl standing beside yuria.

“Oh, let me introduce.” Yuria clung her arm around the girl beside her and said: “She is Shimazaki Haruka. We call her paruru.” Yuria smiled at paruru and looked at kumi.

Paruru gave a sweet smile when she looked at yuria. Kumi could tell that paruru was in love with yuria.

Kumi could feel paruru looking at her with a little dark aura and she stared back in curiosity.

“E-er nice to meet you shimazaki-san…” Kumi said as she reached out her hand.

“Nice to meet you yagami-san, please just call me paru.” Paruru gave a small smile that was different than just now. She shook hands with kumi and kumi could feel the dark aura coming out of paru, it was as if paru held a grudge against her.





TBC~





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Re: Kuminon fanfic - Chapter 7 - PART 2! 10/9/12
« Reply #68 on: September 10, 2012, 09:21:56 AM »
no!!!
kumi please dont leave kanon!!

i think paru is the mistery girl?!?
please upload as soon as possible,.

i really really love ur fic.

thank you for the update :thumbsup

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Re: Kuminon fanfic - Chapter 7 - PART 2! 10/9/12
« Reply #69 on: September 10, 2012, 10:29:29 AM »
Kyaaa so lovely dovely!
Oh no Kumis mom is getting her a fiance or fiancée?  so Kanako "the maid" (Mousou Deka? LOLOLOLOL) was warning her.

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“Oh, let me introduce.” Yuria clung her arm around the girl beside her and said: “She is Shimazaki Haruka. We call her paruru.” Yuria smiled at paruru and looked at kumi.

Paruru gave a sweet smile when she looked at yuria. Kumi could tell that paruru was in love with yuria.

Kumi could feel paruru looking at her with a little dark aura and she stared back in curiosity.

“E-er nice to meet you shimazaki-san…” Kumi said as she reached out her hand.

“Nice to meet you yagami-san, please just call me paru.” Paruru gave a small smile that was different than just now. She shook hands with kumi and kumi could feel the dark aura coming out of paru, it was as if paru held a grudge against her.

OH MY GOD! I knew it! Paru!!!!! But she's still jealous? She should see that Kumi only like Non  :smhid

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Re: Kuminon fanfic - Chapter 8 - PART 1! 2/10/12
« Reply #70 on: October 02, 2012, 09:00:41 AM »
@Megumi- LOl yea i got the idea from mousou deka hahah!
@chichay12-Thanks for being so patient with me!


HI ALL SORRY FOR MIA-ing FOR SO LONG lols! The workload in school is more than i expected x.x so now here is chapter 8 PART 1!
Sorry if it's a bit short hahah~ :cow:


Chapter 8 part 1

The movie had ended and both pairs walked out of the cinema.

“uwaaaa~That was nice~” kumi stretched.

“So, where are you heading next?” kumi turned and asked yuria.

“I guess we will go eat something before going home. Right?” Yuria looked at paru and smiled.

Paru gave a small smile and nodded.

“Oh, hmm, non-chan, are you hungry?” Kumi asked kanon as she took her hand in hers.

“A-a little,” kanon blushed as she felt the warmth of kumi’s hand.

“Let’s eat together?” kumi asked as she glanced at the group.

“Sounds good~” Yuria smiled and kumi peeked at paru to see her smiling a small smile when she saw yuria’s smile.

“All right! Let’s go!” Kumi punched her fist in the air and laughed.

Kanon giggled and was pulled along by kumi.

Yuria linked her hands with paru and paru blushed.

The group reached the restaurant and started ordering the food.

“Paruu~ what are you eating?” Yuri peeked over at the menu that paru was holding. Paru was shocked by the closeness and jumped a bit from her sit.

Yuria giggled at the strong reaction that paru gave and tapped her on the shoulder.

Paru continued looking at her menu and finally made a decision.

“I will get this.” Paru pointed to a baked rice.

“Ehhhhhh~ that looks nice but I think I will have a curry rice hahaha~” yuria smiled and tapped on the menu.

Kumi felt someone looking at her and she glanced over her menu to see paru averting her eyes.

“…” Kumi gave paru a look and stood up.

“Be right back, I’m going to the toilet.” Kumi patted kanon’s head and walked off.

After a few minutes, paru stood up too and walked to the toilet.

IN THE TOILET

“So, do you hate me?” Kumi suddenly said when they were washing their hands.

“…” paru didn't say anything.

“I saw the glanced that u gave me… to be honest, it’s… kind of scary.” Kumi said as she gave an awkward grin and rubbed the back of her neck.

“…” paru still remained silent.

“… do you like yuria?” Kumi finally asked.

Upon hearing that, paru looked at kumi with a shocked look and looked into the mirror.

“… Yes…I like her…” Paru said.

“I could see that glint in your eyes whenever you look at her you know. … … You should confess to her.” Kumi said.

“Eh? …” paru looked at kumi.

Kumi stood up straight and faced paru.

“I know that those letters in my locker were sent by you.” Kumi said.

Paru stood up and was now facing kumi.

“I…” Paru said.

“No, it’s ok, if anybody were to confess to kanon, I will probably do that too hahahha~” kumi laughed and paru gave a small smile.

“You know, you should really speak more. Smile more. Your feelings will definitely reach yuria. She is a nice girl.” Kumi said as she patted paru on her shoulder.

“Actually…” paru said as she blushed.

“I wanted to confess to her today…” paru said as she looked at her own hands.

“ehhh?!!! That’s good! I wish the best for you!” kumi said as her face lit up.

“But…” Paru blushed again and inhaled.

“but?” kumi asked in curiosity.

“I-It’s not the right moment yet, and I haven’t bought a gift for her.” Paru said.

“hmm, that’s not a problem, let’s go to the amusement park later! That will definitely be a good place for a confession!” Kumi said as she once again tapped paru’s shoulder.

“Kumi… Thank you…” Paru said as she smiled.

“You’re Welcome!” Kumi smiled.

Both of them walked out and went back to the table.

“Hey! Let’s go to the amusement park later!” Kumi said.

“EHH!! Sounds fun!!!” yuria said as she smiled.

“Non-chan how about it?” Kumi looked at kanon.

“It sounds fun!” Kanon said as she felt a hug by kumi.

They finished their food happily and headed for the amusement park.

“uwaaaaa! I want to sit on the ferries wheel!” Kanon said as she tugged on kumi’s sleeves.

“ok~ hahaha, non-chan is really like a kid!” Kumi said as she pinched kanon’s cheek.

“yuria, do you want to sit on the ferris wheel to?” paru said when she saw yuria’s happy face.

“yes yes!! I want to!” Yuria clapped her hands together.

“Let’s go then.” Paru grabbed yuria’s hand and followed kumi. 

Paru’s movement shocked Yuria and a small blush crept on her face.
Paru had never been the one to initiate things and when she grabbed yuria’s hand, yuria was truly shocked.

Paru lead yuria into a cabin and they sat there facing each other. An awkward silent filled the air.

“err… W-wow the view is nicee! ….” Yuria tried to increase the mood but failed when the awkwardness increased.

“Y-yuria…” Paru suddenly said.

“Y-yes?” Yuria looked at paru with her big eyes and her cute expression.

“I-i…” Paru inhaled before continuing.

“I-I like you!” Paru said as she looked up to see yuria’s shock face.

“Ehhh?!” Yuria said as she sat down on the seat, thinking about what paru had just said.

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Re: Kuminon fanfic - Chapter 8 - PART 1! 2/10/12
« Reply #71 on: October 02, 2012, 09:48:02 AM »
Eh eh? It ends here? Whoaaaa, I'm curious!

Well, great job Kumi.
Wew, KumiNon always cute..

Thanks for your update ^^

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Re: Kuminon fanfic - Chapter 8 - PART 1! 2/10/12
« Reply #72 on: October 02, 2012, 04:31:02 PM »
wooohooo

UPDATE!!!
u really made my day!!
i miss kuminon!!hehe,

thank you jehovachiabi-san!! :thumbsup

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Re: Kuminon fanfic - Chapter 8 - PART 1! 2/10/12
« Reply #73 on: October 03, 2012, 10:36:48 AM »
Ahhh Paru~ what are Peace gonna say?

Now Peace knows that Kumi only have eyes for Non  XD


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Re: Kuminon fanfic - Chapter 8 - PART 2! 4/10/12
« Reply #74 on: October 04, 2012, 07:01:32 AM »
Hi all Thanks for all your awesome comments! You made my day lols~
Here is Chapter 8 PART 2! ENJOY!!!!

ps: Sorry if yuria's and paru's confession was rushed because they are not the main in this fic, i wanted to focus more on kuminon~Sorry!

Enjoy this chapter~





CHAPTER 8 PART 2

Yuria and paru was still in the cabin with an even awkward moment when paru confessed.

“Argh! I shouldn't have confess now… the enclosed space is making things even awkward then before!” Paru thought to herself as she closed her eyes.

“Y-you don't need to give me an answer now. I will wait for you.” Paru said as she looked at yuria before looking out the window.

“paru…” Yuria said as she looked at paru.

Yuria’s pov

My best friend just confessed to me.

Shimazaki haruka, we call her paru. I met her when I was in kindergarten. When I was young, the kids always bullied me because I had a chubby cheek.

This all changed when paru transferred to my school. She was a quiet person and she does not show her feelings easily. 

One day, as usual, I was being bullied at the playground and paru happened to pass by. That was the first time I saw paru so angry. She rushed to my side and protected me. She hit the bigger guys and won. That was the first time I felt that I could rely on someone.

After that incident, I became very close to paru and we were always together.

This confession came so suddenly and I don't know how to react. This was all so new to me.

My mind flashed back to all the events that happened and the small things that paru did for me. Now, it all made sense to me.

End Of Yuria’s POV

“Paru, i-I like you too.” Yuria looked at paru.

“R-really?!!” Paru’s face lit up.

“You have always been there for me, always looked out for me. I didn’t realize my feelings but I think I like you too.” Yuria said as she smiled and took paru’s hand.

“Yuria…” Paru had a blushed on her face and her heart rate increased. Tears were threatening to fall but she held it back and hugged yuria.

“ehe~Paru, Daisuki!” Yuria said as she gave a cute smile.

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The ride ended and Kumi knew that paru had confessed when she saw the linked arms of paru and yuria. She smiled at paru and paru smiled and nodded at her.

“It’s getting late, I guess we should all head home now” Yuria said as she looked at the sky.

“wow, you’re right! Come on non-chan, we have somewhere else to go.” Kumi said as she grabbed kanon’s hand.

“We’ll see you when school starts!” Kumi shouted and went off with kanon.

“Kuu-chan~ where are we going?” Kanon said as she looked at kumi.

“ehe~ the place is quite near to here.  You will know when we get there~” Kumi said as she gave a wink to kanon and continued leading kanon to the secret place.

The two of them walked a short distance from the amusement park and kumi suddenly turned around to face kanon.

“Non-chan, I will give you a piggy back from here!” Kumi said as she squat down in front of kanon.

“E-EH?! T-this is too embarrassing!” kanon said and was reluctant to let kumi give her a piggyback.

“Comee on~ non-chan~” Kumi gave a cute pout and kanon carefully put her hands around kumi.

“Yosh~Let’s go~” Kumi stood up with kanon on her back and started to climb the up a flight of stairs.

“k-kuu-chan am I heavy?!” Kanon said as she felt kumi staggering after a number of steps.

“heh~ not at all haa,” Kumi said as she exhaled.

Kanon tightened her hug around kumi and blushed. She didn't need to say anything more because kumi made her feel safe and she knew kumi was tired because she could feel kumi’s heart rate increasing and she was breathing deeper.

“non-chan, we are reaching soon!” Kumi said as she excitedly ran up the last flight of stairs.

“K-kuumin! Be careful!” kanon said worriedly.

“Hahahha! We are here!!” Kumi said as she let kanon down.

“haaa~Yoshh!!! Come on non-chan.” Kumi took kanon’s hand after taking in some air.

Kanon shivered a little because of the cool breeze blowing on her. Kumi had sensed the shiver and she put kanon’s hand into her pockets to keep it warm.

“hehe~ now you will feel warmer~” Kumi said as she snuggled closer to kanon.

“thank you kuumin~” Kanon said as sshe snuggled closer to kumi too.

The two walked for another 5mins and they finally reached the destination.

“Non-chan~ we are here.” Kumi faced the sky and said:”look.”

Kanon looked at the direction that kumi was looking and was dazzled by how pretty the sky was.

“W-wow! Kuumin! That is beautiful! What’s that?!” Kanon said as she was still in awe.

“hehe~ I found this place while taking a stroll and I had wanted to throw away all my worries so I wanted to find someplace high. That is the milky-way. It’s beautiful isn’t it?” Kumi smiled as she looked at kanon.

“This place is quite secretive and I wanted to show it to you because it’s really beautiful~” Kumi held kanon’s hand and looked into her eyes.

“Kuumin…” Kanon blushed as she looked into kumi’s eyes.

The distance between them closed and their lips were just an inch away from one another. However…

“Hey She is here! Get her now! That’s the order from madam!” A guy’s voice could be heard.

Kumi looked towards the voice to see a bunch of her mother’s bodyguard surrounding them.

“What do you want!” Kumi shouted as her anger started to rise.

“Kumi-sama, from the order’s of boss, we are here to bring you home.

“kanako didn't make it?...” Kumi thought.

“non-chan I’m sorry I wanted to tell you after I settled this but I guess I have no choice but to fight back now.” Kumi said with a sad expression.

“K-kuumin, what’s going on?” kanon said as she hid behind kumi.

“It’s going to be ok, my mother sent them to bring me home because she wants me to get married to the son of her business partner.” Kumi said as she looked angrily at the bodyguards.

“E-eh?! Married?! No! I don’t want kuumin to leave!” Kanon said as she held on to kumi’s arm.

“Non-chan, don’t worry! My heart has only a place and that is for you! I will never back down to this wedding!” Kumi said as she hugged kanon to re-assure her.

“OK that’s enough lovey dovey talk. Kumi-sama please come with us. We do not want to use violence to bring you back.” The man said.

“No! I will never go back!” Kumi said as she put up a fighting stance.

“Non-chan! Stay behind me!” Kumi’s fighting spirit was kicking in and she was filled with anger.

“K-kuumin, be careful!” kanon said.

It was 10 big man, the best bodyguard that kumi’s mother had, versus kumi alone. The chance of winning was slim.

“Bring it on!” Kumi said as 2 of the man charged at her.

Kumi dodged heir punch and kicked one of them in their back. It didn't have any effect but kumi found his weakness and gave him and uppercut to his chin. The guy fainted.

Kumi then turned and kicked the glasses off another guy and she dodged to the side as if she was doing a dance move and then gave a high kick to the man’s face. The man staggered and fell.

“Heh, is that all you have got?!” Kumi said as she continued standing on her toes.

Another 5 guys went up against her and they managed to hit kumi a few times, dealing damage to kumi. It was hard for kanon to see kumi get hurt and she started crying.

“Kuumin!” Kanon said as she cried. All she could do now was watch kumi fight.

“Kuumin! Be careful!” Kanon ran towards kumi and took a punch from a man before she fainted.

“NON-CHAN!!!” Kumi shouted and looked at the man with anger filled eyes.

“YOU ARE GONNA PAY FOR THAT! HAAAAA!!!!” Kumi ran towards the man who hit kanon and she jumped up before kicking the man in his face. The man staggered back but kumi was not done yet. She pulled the man by his tie and punched him in his face before running to his back and kicking him in his butt.

“NEVER TOUCH HER AGAIN!” Kumi said as she hugged kanon close to her.

Kumi was at her limits as she kept taking blows.

After fighting for so long, kumi had finally reached her limits. The guys picked her up and carried her on his back.

“She is really a tough girl. Now I understand why madam needed 10 of us.” The guy spoke.

“Bring her back too, kumi-sama would probably want to see her when she wakes up.” The guy pointed to kanon.

“*sigh* kumi-sama is such a stubborn kid, she didn't even let us explain the situation.” Another guy said.

“She had not been home for so long and doesn't know what’s happening now. She doesn't know how much her father misses her.”

“… Anyway, we gotta explain to boss. We hurt his daughter, I guess he will want answers for that.” The guy who was carrying kumi said.

“haha, kumi-sama really has grown up. The love she showed for this girl was not so simple. That uppercut still hurts!” The guy said as he touched his chin.

“hahah! You did a good job faking that faint.” The guy jokingly said.

“Kumi-sama… we are not who we used to be… please understand that.” Another guy looked at kumi and sighed.

“Don’t worry everything will be clear once she wakes up. Boss will explain everything to her. There is kanako too afterall.”

The guys said as they headed back to their cars with kumi and kanon on their back.





To be continued~


Ahhh, this chapter is coming to an end soon, i want to do a kumiyuri fanfic, should I?
Recently i found my ski-oshi hahaha Kizaki yuria!!!! >.< So cute ~ That's why i wanted to do a kumiyuri fic because i seldom see this pairing:(
Please comment on whether i should write a kumiyuri fanfic or not~ Thanks!!! 

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Re: Kuminon fanfic - Chapter 8 - PART 2! 4/10/12
« Reply #75 on: October 04, 2012, 12:31:10 PM »

please write fanfic kumiyuri!!! , I like fanfic kumiyuri, I'm a fan couples kumiyuri
please write fanfic kumiyuri .............
My favorite pair is KUMIYURI!!!
please write fanfic couples KUMIYURI




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Re: Kuminon fanfic - Chapter 8 - PART 2! 4/10/12
« Reply #76 on: October 04, 2012, 02:25:20 PM »
Congrats Paru and Yuria! :D
But ouch, the beautiful viewing got ruined by some violent (albeit unintentional) guys! Hang on there, KumiNon!


I'm actually leaning more towards KumiYuri than KumiNon, so I would surely get delighted when I read what you write about them later (if only you write it). Please write the KumiYuri one! :D
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Re: Kuminon fanfic - Chapter 8 - PART 2! 4/10/12
« Reply #77 on: October 04, 2012, 09:34:48 PM »
Congratulations Paruru and Yuria! XD

KumiNon is so cute, but ruined by the bodyguards.
And, what will they do with kumi?

And! Yes!! I love Kumiyuri too! You should write it!! XD

PS: sorry for my bad english 

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Re: Kuminon fanfic - Chapter 8 - PART 2! 4/10/12
« Reply #78 on: October 05, 2012, 06:21:25 PM »
Nhyoooowwwnn *.*

They are so cute *.*

Your fic is so fluffy *>*

Hmmm the bodyguards took Kumi AND Kanon?! Oh my! Got super curious ><

can't wait next update o/

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Re: Kuminon fanfic - Chapter 9 - FINAL CHAPTER 6/10/12
« Reply #79 on: October 05, 2012, 11:41:09 PM »
Thanks everyone for supporting this fanfic up till now. All your comments are precious and keeps me thinking and writing.

Before i knew it, this fanfic has come to an end. I appreciate all the comments that you have given me and i hope you enjoy this last chapter of Kuminon fanfic. :D
SO here it is~ CHAPTER 9 - FINAL CHAPTER! ENJOY~




Chapter 9


Kumi’s Pov

“min~”

“Kuumin~”

Who is calling me? … oh right… I was fighting the guys…

I can’t move…

Why…

End Pov

“Kuumin~”

Kumi slowly opened her eyes to the morning brightness. Someone was beside her. Someone familiar.

“non-chan?...” Kumi slowly adjusted to the light and saw kanon beside her, looking worriedly.

“ughh…”  Kumi tried to move but her body was sore from all the fighting.

“Don’t move you are hurt.” Kanon said as she shook her head.

“Where… ehh?! Isn’t this my house?! I mean… my father’s house?! What am I doing here!? I mean! What are WE doing here!” Kumi said agitatedly.

“Kumi-sama.”

“Kanako?!” Kumi was shocked.

“Kumi-sama! You shouldn't move around!” Kanako ran towards kumi.

“W-what is happening?! Why is kanon here!? Why am I here?! Why are you here?!” Kumi was confused.

Kumi was moving so much that she was starting to hurt everywhere and she let out a whelp.

“Kumi-sama! Stop moving you BAKA!” Kanako slapped kumi’s head.

“O-oiii~” kumi rubbed her head and added: ”You never change… still hitting me in the head whenever I don't listen.” Kumi pouted and kanon gave a small giggle.

“Kumi-sama, you have been asleep for 2 days… Master Yagami wants to see you soon.” Kanako said.

“F-father wants to see me?...” Kumi doubted.

“Yes kumi-sama, after you left the house, Master Yagami has been searching for you.” Kanako said as she took out a diary.

“This is the diary he would write everyday. Please look through it.” Kanako handed over the diary to kumi.

“… What about… that woman…” kumi paused before continuing: “I thought she was all that mattered to father?...” Kumi closed her eyes before opening them again to look at kanako.

“Kumi-sama, everything you need to know is written in that diary. Please, it’s everything that had happened in the pass few years that you had been gone. Please read through it.” Kanako said before looking at kanon: “Kimoto-san, if you could, please make sure kumi-sama reads it… she can be quite stubborn at times.” Kanako bowed before leaving them alone.

Kumi looked at the diary in her hand.

She set it aside and looked at kanon.

“Non-chan, are you hurt anywhere? Did they touch you?! If they did I will- Ouch!!” Kumi tried to punch her fist in the air to act out what she will do to the gaurds but ended up hurting herself again.

“Kuumin! Stop moving around! Mouuu~” Kanon held kumi’s hand and added: “I am fine, don’t worry they just brought me back here and even treated my wound. They apologized too.”

“… I’m glad you are ok. I was so scared… I couldn't protect you…” Kumi lowered her head but kanon held kumi’s shoulder, causing kumi to look up.

“It’s fine, you have been protecting me all along. Let me protect you this time round.” Kanon gave kumi a smile.

“Non-chan…” Kumi looked at kanon and slowly inched closer to her lips.

They kissed for a short moment before parting.

“hehe~ continuation from that interruption.” Kumi smiled cheekily.
 
Kanon blushed a bright red as she held her cheeks with both hands.

“Kuumin~ I think you should read that diary. There must be a reason why your father brought us back here.” Kanon said as she took the diary and passed it to kumi.

“…” Kumi hesitated as she looked at the diary in kanon’s hand.

“Kuumin~” Kanon gave a reassuring nod before pushing the diary to kumi.

“ok…” Kumi said as she started to flip open the diary.

<DIARY SUMMARY OF WHAT HAPPENED AFTER KUMI MOVED OUT OF HOUSE>


It has been 2 days since kumi, my beloved daughter moved out of this house. It must have been my fault for not noticing how unhappy she was.

Her mother died when she was young and ever since I remarried, I guess… I have been too focused on that woman.

Kumi has never left house before. I don't know what to do without her in this house. She is always jumping around the house ever since she was a kid. That cheerful smile with every littlest thing that she receives and that kind act that she would show to random strangers. How I wish I could have turned back the time.

It’s all too late now. I should have stopped her when she was leaving the house. If only I hadn’t met this woman. She ruined my life. Ruined my relationship with my precious daughter. Ruined her smile…

Ever since kumi moved out, I realized what a bad father I was. Always thinking about myself, always doing things according to my own will and never listening to her worries. I did not pay more attention to kumi. I should have!

I have been searching for her ever since she moved out. She is a stubborn child, I guess finding her would not be so easy. Even her personal maid, kanako, did not know where she was.

I am going to kick that woman out of my life. For the sake of kumi, I will do that.
She is the greatest gift I could have and I’m not going to risk it for a woman that can’t treat her like her own child.

Also, I have sensed the greed in the woman ever since she married me. She has changed. She used to be so caring. Now, she has become over obsessive with money. I can’t let anyone hurt kumi again. My beloved daughter, please come back home. Father misses you…

To my beloved wife in heaven, please let me find our daughter. Please let us have the smile and joy we once possessed.

Kumi, I will not give up till I find you…

By Yagami xxxx  Date: xx/xx/xxxx

END OF DIARY

Kumi had tears in her eyes after she read the diary.

“Kuumin? Are you ok?” Kanon asked in concern.

“Non-chan…” Kumi said nothing and hugged kanon.

Kanon returned the hug as kumi sobbed.

For the next two days, kanon took care of kumi and with the help of kanako, Kumi recovered and was able to move around at ease.

“I guess… it’s time to meet father…” Kumi said suddenly when she took one last look at the diary on her table.

“Non-chan, will you come with me?” Kumi said.

“Un” Kanon nodded and happily took kumi’s hand.

Kumi knew that her father would be in the study room at this time and she went there with kanon.

Outside the room, their hearts were racing. Kumi was nervous about meeting her father after all the misunderstanding that she had and kanon was nervous because this was the first time she met kumi’s father.

Kumi took the first step and knocked on the door.

A faint “come in” could be heard and she opened the door.

“F-father.” Kumi said softly.

A man in his late 50 turned around and his face instantly softened and was ready to cry when he saw kumi.

“Ku…mi?” He dropped the book in his hand.

Kumi nodded, followed by a smile.

“Kumi!” Mr yagami ran towards his daughter and picked her up in a bear hug.

“I have missed you so much!” Mr yagami was crying.

This was the second time kumi had seen her father cry. The first was when her mother passed away.

“Father, I’m sorry for causing so much trouble…” Kumi said when her father released her from the hug.

“Kumi, I am so glad that you are back here. Those guys are so stupid they should have explained the situation then you wouldn’t get hurt!” Kumi’s father said as he placed his hand on kumi’s head and patted it.

“Hahaha, I wouldn't believe it even if they told me that. I am stubborn!” Kumi said with a smile and her father laughed.

“I am so glad to have you back! That smile, it’s been a long time since I saw it.” Her father smiled.

Their reunion was paused when kumi suddenly grab kanons hand and introduced her.

“F-father, t-this is kimoto kanon.” Kumi introduced as kanon gave a small smile and bowed.

“Ahh, such a cute girl.” Kumi’s father said with a smile and nodded.

“She’s my girlfriend” Kumi added and the room became silent for a brief moment.

Kumi thought everything was doomed when the room went quiet. Kanon was gripping onto kumi’s hand nervously.

“Hahahah!” Mr yagami suddenly laughed.

“F-father? Why are you laughing?” Kumi asked curiously.

“It’s expected that my kumi would get such a cute girlfriend. No wonder you didn't want to come home to meet your fiancé.” Kumi’s father said as he clapped his hands and patted kumi’s head.

“E-eh? A-are you ok with this?” Kumi asked in shock. Normally, one would expect rage from their parents but kumi’s father said: “Why not? I don't see anything wrong with being with someone you truly love, no matter who the person is.” Kumi sighed a sigh of relieve but her father continued: “Unless…”

“U-unless?” Kumi and kanon both stopped breathing for a second.

“Unless it's a useless bum who does nothing and expects us to feed him or if he is sponging off you.” Mr yagumi said and laughed. “I’m sure kanon-chan isn’t that kind of person right?” Mr Yagami smiled at  kanon and nodded.

“N-no sir, I would even help out at your company if you would like to.” Kanon said in a stiff voice.

“Hahahah, kanon-chan relax, you don't need to be so formal with me since you are kumi’s girlfriend, I will treat it as having another daughter then.” Mr yagami smiled as he patted kanon’s head.

Kumi gave kanon a big smile and she hugged her father.

“Thank you father!” Kumi smiled.

“Welcome home.” Mr yagami smiled.

4 years later~

“Kuumin! We are gonna be late!” Kanon had prepared for work and was now waiting nervously while kumi stroll to the living room.

“I’m done~” Kumi said as she yawn and wear her heels.

“We are gonna be late! Hurry up kuumin!” Kanon pulled kumi out of the house and they headed to Mr yagami’s company.

They were both working at Mr yagami’s company and learning the ropes from him, as they will be taking over the companies business.

They had moved into kumi’s house and they were living just beside yuka.
In other words, kanon just moved out of her old house and moved next door to kumi’s house so it didn't make much difference.

Every morning, yuka would smile as she sees the two girls running out of the house.

Jurina and churi were dating and they are also staying together. Yuria and Paru were leaving happily together. The four of them works under Mr yagami too and they were going to assist Kumi and kanon in their business in the future. Yuria and paru will have a company under Mr yagami’s name and they will be the bosses of it and it will be the same with jurina and churi.

They were very contented with what they had and grateful that mr yagami was there to support them. He is a very good man that everyone respects.

As for rena, she was offered a job but decided to sell melon pan so that she can eat it everyday. She met her other half named, kashiwagi yuki, and they are working together now.

It had been a long journey for kumi and kanon but their love was building up as each day went by. Nothing will break the bond they share between them.

~FIN~




I will probably take a break before starting Kumiyuri fanfic hahaha~ Uwahhh, writing a fanfic is tiring~ :P
KUMIYURIIIIII i hope i can think of something~ Maybe i should put up a poll to see if i should write it or not hmmmm
Well, we'll see~

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