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Re: OneShot + Video | Sleeping Rena | wMatsui [29/11]
« Reply #60 on: January 03, 2013, 05:26:43 PM »
oh god, continue this~!!!!  :wub:
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Re: OneShot + Video | Sleeping Rena | wMatsui [29/11]
« Reply #61 on: January 04, 2013, 06:50:22 PM »
Your video, timing, and story are all REALLY good! :twothumbs

Please do more on this sister-like couple! :grin:

Thank you! really! :3

oh god, continue this~!!!!  :wub:

aaaaah It's a OS ;W; anyway thanks~!

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Re: OneShot + Video | Sleeping Rena | wMatsui [29/11]
« Reply #62 on: January 04, 2013, 11:30:30 PM »
If I may, I suggest your next story be a fantasy
I'm REALLY into that kind of stuff :deco:
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Re: OneShot + Video | Sleeping Rena | wMatsui [29/11]
« Reply #63 on: January 04, 2013, 11:37:05 PM »
If I may, I suggest your next story be a fantasy
I'm REALLY into that kind of stuff :deco:

I will think about it! Thanks for your suggestion :D

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Re: OneShot + Video | Sleeping Rena | wMatsui [29/11]
« Reply #64 on: January 05, 2013, 12:00:48 AM »
okay, if this is a story without continuation... (I have my ending, but it's not for this forum sadly :D)

Write more wMatsui~!!!!
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Re: OneShot + Video | Sleeping Rena | wMatsui [29/11]
« Reply #65 on: January 05, 2013, 03:08:17 AM »
Oh yes! PRETTY PRETTY PRETTY PRETTY PLEASE!!! :cathappy:
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:heart: l Completed: Fire and Ice l Black Chocolate l My eternal blue rose l Dishonored l The Black Rose l Fruits of a Rose l Remnants l :heart:
:heart: l Dropped: Tentomu chu l REBORN l Bite me l NMB Gakuen l YumeToki l Cafe 48 l :heart: l Hiatus/Indefinite: Samurai l Blood Bonds l Night Wind's Deed l PRISM l Time Travelers l :heart:
:heart: l Collab threads: Sky&Ruka l Ruka&Michael l :heart:
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Re: OneShot + Video | Sleeping Rena | wMatsui [29/11]
« Reply #66 on: January 05, 2013, 11:12:12 AM »

okay, if this is a story without continuation... (I have my ending, but it's not for this forum sadly :D)

Write more wMatsui~!!!!

eeeeeeh
anyway I will!   :thumbup


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Re: OneShot + Video | Sleeping Rena | wMatsui [29/11]
« Reply #67 on: January 05, 2013, 02:24:34 PM »
nice story to read... from Jurina's POV, how she felt for the life events that she shared with Rena... sad but with genuine feelings that melt our hearts totally...  :heart:
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OneShot | Time Machine. | wMatsui [19/01]
« Reply #68 on: January 19, 2013, 09:21:26 PM »
Hi! How are u all? :)
AAAAH! I was so bored :/ It isn't how I was expecting... 
So sorry me if this fic is umh boring, strange or whatever XD

Anyway, this is a wMatsui OneShot.


OneShot: Time Machine.
Pair: wMatsui
Characters: Matsui Jurina - Matsui Rena
Genre: Angst - Hurt
Rating: PG15
Words: 570



A/N: A little intro. This fic has two POVs, Rena and Jurina's ones. I haven't write "who say what", but it is simple to understand. Oh, and, you will find words and phrases similar, don't worry, they are not hallucinations . Enjoy! :wink:


Time Machine.

"The moments are passed, the promises are broken, just a time machine could bring us back."


Every day I wake up without you, in this cold bed.
I'm feel like a prisoner without way out.
I would like that this was a nightmare, I would like wake up with the tears in my eyes, run to you and grip you strong, making you almost hurt.


When you decided to leave me, my heart has stopped to beat.
Sorry if I always think of you, sorry if I dream about you steadily, sorry if I dedicate all my thoughts to you.

I miss your sweet smile, that just you have, that made me feel warm; I miss your caresses, that calmed me; I miss your words, those words that were only for me; I miss your body, that only I could touch.

But now, look at you, look at me, look at us.
You left me, but this isn't the worse thing.
You are far away from me, but this isn't the worse thing, again.
You don't love me any more, but it is fine; it is not your fault if your feelings for me are changed, maybe it is mine.
The worse thing is that your smile, your caresses, your words, your body, you are for another person. Everything that one day was mine, today is for that person.
And if I only think about it, I become crazy.

Can you see me now?
Can you see how pathetic am I?
The tears fall down by my eyes, wetting my cheeks.

I would like to feel you again. I would like to have a time machine for bring us back.




"The moments are passed, the promises are broken, just a time machine could bring us back."


Every day I wake up without you, in this cold bed.
I'm feel like a prisoner without way out.
I would like that this was a nightmare, I would like wake up with the tears in my eyes, run to you and grip you strong, making you almost hurt.


When I decided to leave you, my heart has stopped to beat.
Sorry if I always think of you, sorry if I dream about you steadily, sorry if I dedicate all my thoughts to you.

I miss your sweet glances, that only your eyes could make: those deep eyes... oh my God, so beautiful; I miss your shyness, that make you so sweet to my eyes; I miss your voice, that was the one that gave me courage; I miss your body, that only I could touch.

But now, look at you, look at me, look at us.
I'm with another person. I had to do it, but this isn't the worse thing.
I'm far away from you, but this isn't the worse thing, again.
I still love you, but it is fine; my feelings for you will not change.
The worse thing is that your glances, your shyness, your voice, your body, you are not mine any more. Everything that one day was mine, today is not.
And if I only think about it, I become crazy.

Can you see me now?
Can you see how pathetic am I?
The tears fall down by my eyes, wetting my cheeks.

I would like to stay with you again. I would to have a time machine for bring us back.




"I love you."
"I love you."




End.
« Last Edit: January 20, 2013, 07:25:05 PM by Lightning »

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Re: OneShot | Time Machine. | wMatsui [19/01]
« Reply #69 on: January 20, 2013, 01:32:22 AM »
Oh my god thank you for making a fanfic about time machine reading this fanfic while listening to time machine by Andy love made me cried. T_T (aka:Kenko08 :cry:)

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Re: OneShot | Time Machine. | wMatsui [19/01]
« Reply #70 on: January 20, 2013, 07:29:07 AM »
Hello !

Lightning-san ! :D

I really like all your fan fiction about WMatsui :D

Please Make more!

Your a great writer! :D

I also follow you in tumblr.

hehe.

Nice tumblr :D

Thank You
hello.

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I really love their songs.

I really like their fan fiction.




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Re: OneShot | Time Machine. | wMatsui [19/01]
« Reply #71 on: January 20, 2013, 02:04:12 PM »
This is good, Lightning-san! :D

Please make more ^_^

P.S WOW O_O We have the same prof pic XD High-five XD

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Re: OneShot | Time Machine. | wMatsui [19/01]
« Reply #72 on: January 20, 2013, 03:19:07 PM »
Oh my god thank you for making a fanfic about time machine reading this fanfic while listening to time machine by Andy love made me cried. T_T (aka:Kenko08 :cry:)
Negi-saaaaaan don't cry ;A; Thank you for have read my fic, I'm glad ;w;

Hello !

Lightning-san ! :D

I really like all your fan fiction about WMatsui :D

Please Make more!

Your a great writer! :D

I also follow you in tumblr.

hehe.

Nice tumblr :D

Thank You

Thank you ;AAA; for read my fics and for follow me on tumblr, I'm glad! ;w;

This is good, Lightning-san! :D

Please make more ^_^

P.S WOW O_O We have the same prof pic XD High-five XD

Thanks CheesyBits-san! :D

AHAHAHAHA yes we have LOL :high five: XD

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Drabble | Emptiness. [28/01]
« Reply #73 on: January 28, 2013, 10:54:19 PM »
Ehi! Today I've written a drabble.
This is a strange drabble. I imagine it like a wMatsui drabble, but you can think about any pair :)

Well enjoy!


Emptiness.

I am a stranger, but You know me.
I’m not fragile, but I am crying.
I’m not scared, but I am screaming.

I have not an heart. I am empty, but, now strangely I can feel the pain.
That empty space is hurting now. It hurt, yes. Why?

This darkness that surrounds me is growing. It almost suffocates me.

I need a way out. I need a light.
A light for brighten my darkness, a light for relieve my pain.

And I know who should be my light: You.
Please, save me from the darkness, bring me to the light.


How was it?

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Re: Drabble | Emptiness. | wMatsui+ [29/01]
« Reply #74 on: February 09, 2013, 03:55:22 AM »
Please make it into a REAL story! :bow:

I want more! It's too short! :panic:

I imagine the girl in pain being Rena. :roll:

Please Please PLEASE CONTINUE!!! :inlove: :inlove: :inlove:
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:heart: l Completed: Fire and Ice l Black Chocolate l My eternal blue rose l Dishonored l The Black Rose l Fruits of a Rose l Remnants l :heart:
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:heart: l Collab threads: Sky&Ruka l Ruka&Michael l :heart:
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Re: Drabble | Emptiness. | wMatsui+ [29/01]
« Reply #75 on: February 09, 2013, 09:51:03 AM »
so sad  :cry:

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Re: Drabble | Come back. | wMatsui [8/03]
« Reply #76 on: March 08, 2013, 10:46:46 PM »
First: HI!

Then: Replies.
Please make it into a REAL story! :bow:

I want more! It's too short! :panic:

I imagine the girl in pain being Rena. :roll:

Please Please PLEASE CONTINUE!!! :inlove: :inlove: :inlove:
sorry if it is short >_< but I like drabble D: Maybe so much XP
In any case I'm happy you like it! :D

so sad  :cry:
Sorry >.<

@Everyone: Now you will kill me LOL

Talking about today, I will post another DRABBLE...
Sorry :kneelbow:
Well, I realized that when I write drabble like this it is because in a certain way I'm sad >.<

Anyway, It is a wMatsui (like always LOL) drabble
I hope you will enjoy it!  :)


Come back.


Why?
And I say “why”?

She left me.
She left me, again.
She left me for her.

She has gone to her.
For her.

It always is like this.
Always.

She go, without me.
And I remain alone.

That angle of my room is so cold.

I realized that my echo is the only voice that I can hear.
I realized that my shadow is the only thing that stays with me.

I'm waiting.
I'm waiting now.

Will you come back?
Will you come back to me?

I will wait.

Can you hear me?
I'm screaming your name.

Come back.




How was it? >_<
« Last Edit: March 11, 2013, 02:14:24 PM by Lightning »

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Re: Drabble | Come back. | wMatsui [8/03]
« Reply #77 on: March 08, 2013, 10:50:57 PM »
Interesting drabble

I like it

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Re: Drabble | Come back. | wMatsui [8/03]
« Reply #78 on: March 09, 2013, 11:37:22 AM »
Interesting drabble

I like it

Posted by the mento Hawaiian
Thank you :)

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OneShot | Coin. | MaYuki [01/05]
« Reply #79 on: May 01, 2013, 09:33:29 PM »
Wow, again, it's been so long since the last time. :D How are you all? :)

Well today I'm here with a MaYuki OneShot (*whisper* my first Mayuki)... It is a request!!
I hope you will find it good but mostly that the person that required it will like it.  ;D

Btw, enjoy and, if you want, tell me what you think of it! :)



OneShot: Coin.
Pair: MaYuki
Characters: Kashiwagi Yuki - Watanabe Mayu
Genre: Hurt/Comfort
Rating: PG15
Words: 930




Coin.

“Now it is mine!”

I have hated that affirmation.
When you said those words, I could not answer because you were too far away from me.
You ran along the street.

It was winter.

The sky was clear.
The roofs of the houses were covered with a white blanket; trees, decorated with white lace.
The windows were now full of Christmas decorations. In the air you could breath perfume of sweets.
People were busy to buy presents.
Christmas was near.

You were there, sat on a cold bench that was next to a streetlight.

I went up to you. I sat down next to you on that bench.

“So, Mayu? Why did you run away and why did you take the coin?!” I asked firmly, almost with an angry tone.

“I've already said it: now it is mine.”

 Again, I have hated the fact that you did not ask for permission.
You were like a spoiled child and, like one of them, your lips drew that smile that only you have.

“And why should I give it to you?”

“For help. It will help me to make my future decisions.”
In that case your smile was so sweet that I could not help but smile in my turn.

“You are not old enough to make decisions on your own?” I said.

The smile that was bright before, now it was off.  I do not know why, but I felt guilty.

“Oh, yes Yuki, but... There are decisions too hard to take... This coin will choose for me.”

Your deep glare, was empty, after those words.
I have been just able to say “Okay”.
In that situation it was the better thing to do, I thought.

But then, I saw you, crying. My heart, broken.

One moment after, you stood up and, with your eyes, escaped to mine, down, you went away; with that coin in your hands.


For days, maybe for weeks, for me years, we lost contacts.
I thought the coin continued to advise you to don't write to me, to don't call me or to don't look for me.

After our distance, you called me, and we decided to meet each other in that place where we separated last time.

I arrived and I sat on that bench. It was colder than the last time. The streetlight was on and issued a soft light that made me warmer.

You came from afar.

I saw your figure every seconds nearer. They looked like centuries that I have not seen you. You were so beautiful. You wore a pair of tight jeans, a long beige coat that it did not let you to see beyond and, around the neck, the scarf that I gave to you on your birthday. I knew it would have been good on you.


You sat next to me.

Silence.

I would have liked to break it, but I did not know how.
Like the last time in my throat there were not words.

Suddenly a sound. Not mine, yours.

An unexpected, faint “Sorry” came from your lips. They were almost trembling.
And, again, you stood up and you tried to run away. I thought “not again” so, without think with an impulsive gesture, I hugged you from back and I gripped you strong.

I whispered into your ear “Please, Mayu, stop. Let me save us.”
I felt her breath stopped.

“Sorry, Yuki.”

Again that word: “Sorry”.

“What have we done wrong?” I said you with a feeble tone. On the other hand, it was the only tone that I could use: I just could not do anything, I felt myself weak.

I let the grip. I thought that you would go, instead, you turned back to me.
Your chocolate eyes, finally, after long time, met mine again.

“Do you remember?” You started to talk. “Do you remember what have I said about this coin?” You showed me it. That coin that you took from me.

“Of course...” I said. “I remember all of your words. Has it helped you?”

A pause, then you spoke. “At start it worked as long as it had to choose whether to call you or not, write to you or not... But then...” Your words were broken by your warm tears that wet your cheeks.
Afterwards you continued “Then when I have done my last Heads or Tails for choose between Forget her or Fight for her, do you know what is happened?”

The answer was obvious, but I just reply with a “What?”
You looked me and wiped your tears. “Nothing. I just could not look at the coin, at the response. I could not let a coin to choose about us, Yuki. I was afraid.”

I remained in silence. I could not believe that answer from you.

I looked at your eyes look nothingness. So I came nearer you and I have stretched my arms around your body, hoping that you not move.

I embraced you gently. At bottom, you were my sweet flower, so fragile.

“You know, Mayu, I am egoist right now. I am glad that you were afraid.”

I took the coin from your hands and I put it in my poket.

“If the choice would have been the to leave me, well... I would never have wanted to lose you. Next time, Mayu, tell me everything and I will fight for you against everything, I will protect you.”

The snow started to fall down softly on the ground wetting whatever thing it met on its path.

“From now on, Mayu, stay with me... forever.”


End.

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