Author Topic: Hold My Heart Forever [AtsuMina/Kojiyuu] (12-30-13) Chapter 6 Part 1 (Read 37088 times)

TakaminaBG · « **Reply #20 on:** July 26, 2012, 09:37:45 PM »

That was a funny chapter.
So, Miinam and Atsuko will live in the same room. That is gonnna be epic!!!
Update soon!!!!!!

Trickster · « **Reply #21 on:** July 26, 2012, 10:29:44 PM »

So that what's happened to Acchan that made her like that..
It was a good chapter, serious yet funny

and I really like the part after the end of flashback

please update more

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kiruchi · « **Reply #22 on:** July 26, 2012, 11:56:50 PM »

Takamina and Yuko's funny... plotting some revenge just because they can't get a room.. hahah
And Acchan having a bad past. I wonder what happened? (especially with her parents)
hmm... well, please update soon!!!

Ja ne~

Haruko · « **Reply #23 on:** July 27, 2012, 08:02:05 AM »

WOW!! atsumina in a small room nad kojiyuu jajajyuko you are so funny. i wanna knoe the kojipa`s reaction... jaj apoor kojima you dont going to sleep for yuko jajaj she would think that if she fall a sleep could be rape fo ryuuchan.. that crazy midgets i love them

Sydney W · « **Reply #24 on:** July 27, 2012, 08:02:52 AM »

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"and when we have room mates we can flirt with them too!"

"Y-yeaa-- EHHHH???" Minami realized those words and Atsuko on the other hand was surprised as Minami's also agreeing to that?

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"Ahh.. I'm sorry.. I was just kidding.. But we'll also spend less if we took a shower together with our room mates right? you know less water is needed.."

~~PLAACCKKK~~

"aaaahhhhhhh! itaaiiii! Mou~ Takamina!!!!" Yuko screamed as she held her forehead got hit by Minami.

I was laughing non stop. Yuko perv is all the way. Even Minami is agreeing it.

Acchan is going to realize her feeling for Minami !!! Wohooo ~~

Keisthename · « **Reply #25 on:** July 27, 2012, 05:32:44 PM »

to be honest I was also laughing writing this chapter.. hahaha I find the two midgets really funny.. wahahaha and Acchan's reactions are always epic around themm

OMG.. what am I doing commenting on my own fic.. trololol

Anyways thanks guys reading this chapter.. Glad you all like it... ermm.. i'll try to update after the weekend I guess or not? lolz (too busy with school and stuff).. same with Contract.. But i'll do my best

rishiuri · « **Reply #26 on:** July 27, 2012, 06:44:56 PM »

First time reply-ing in this forum lol

Really like your story and I kinda like your writing style at chapter 3.
When you mentioned the future first then the flashback.
I just really love that style.
LOL

The story getting more excited.
I really want to know about Acchan's past
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ichikawa · « **Reply #27 on:** July 27, 2012, 07:21:16 PM »

Wah!! I was so late for this update

Curse my school stuff

Finally, I can wander around tonight~

Great story, Kei-tan

and kyaa~

Atsumina shared the same room~~~ !!!
Moarr Atsumina moment~

chibi-nyao-chan · « **Reply #28 on:** July 27, 2012, 08:08:45 PM »

Minami and Acchan in the same room

And nice timming, Minami hugs Acchan after bad dreams

Yuko is so funny and pervert ! Love you Yuu-chan

Please Continue Kei-tan

Mai-chan · « **Reply #29 on:** July 30, 2012, 11:56:55 AM »

UWAH~!!! Another update~!!

uwargh~!!I WANT MOAR~!!! yuko's such a perv

plus I wanna see the past of acchan much more (if there is more

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I'll be waiting for the updates kei~!

Keisthename · « **Reply #30 on:** August 02, 2012, 02:00:32 PM »

Sorry guys can't update or write a story for the meantime.. i'm having a high fever lately.. and luckily today it gone down.. I feel much better and got time to go online to say my apologies to my readers for not updating.

Don't worry guys as soon as i feel much better and back to my normal self, I'll definitely update this right away!!

but for now lemme rest this whole night peacefully and hope tomorrow I'll be all okaaay already.. heee see you guys soon!!

oyasumi

SakuraKyoto · « **Reply #31 on:** August 02, 2012, 02:30:41 PM »

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Don't worry guys as soon as i feel much better and back to my normal self, I'll definitely update this right away!!

Yokatta ne keisthename-san

hope you have a good rest and always waiting for your update

ElleOranjii · « **Reply #32 on:** August 02, 2012, 03:27:44 PM »

Quote from: Keisthename on August 02, 2012, 02:00:32 PM

Sorry guys can't update or write a story for the meantime.. i'm having a high fever lately.. and luckily today it gone down.. I feel much better and got time to go online to say my apologies to my readers for not updating.

Don't worry guys as soon as i feel much better and back to my normal self, I'll definitely update this right away!!

but for now lemme rest this whole night peacefully and hope tomorrow I'll be all okaaay already.. heee see you guys soon!!

oyasumi

get well soon ~

and dont forget to drink medicine

Mai-chan · « **Reply #33 on:** August 02, 2012, 03:31:03 PM »

get well soon Kei! I'll be waiting for the update

Sese · « **Reply #34 on:** August 03, 2012, 12:29:21 AM »

GET WELL SOON!! Kei

I can't wait for the next chapter!!

Haruko · « **Reply #35 on:** August 03, 2012, 06:07:28 AM »

dont worry... get well soon

anonymousdowner · « **Reply #36 on:** August 03, 2012, 09:33:22 AM »

Oh yeah Takamina is on fire alright~

Ahah, I really like your story so far and how it is progressing.

Yuko is hilarious, I'd say her character is the most comical right now lol.

I feel bad for Acchan, but I guess it's inevitable that Minami will heal her heart hehe

Thanks for the comment on my fic, I'm sorry but you got it all wrong hahah, I should learn from you! You've got more experience.

I hope you feel better and update soon!

Wmatsui22 · « **Reply #37 on:** August 03, 2012, 11:59:45 AM »

THANKS FOR UPDATING

I HOPE YOU UPDATE MORE

I LIKE YOUR FANFIC

arrow27 · « **Reply #38 on:** August 23, 2012, 04:06:06 AM »

Wow i'm loving this fanfic

Its so entertaining and interesting!! I felt bad for Minami when she got slapped but it's also comical in a way, poor her

Anyways, thanks for writing this awesome fic. Please continue when you can

sasumiofjp · « **Reply #39 on:** August 27, 2012, 04:01:40 AM »

You should like totally update

Author Topic: Hold My Heart Forever [AtsuMina/Kojiyuu] (12-30-13) Chapter 6 Part 1 (Read 37088 times)

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