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Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" NEW
« Reply #41 on: September 30, 2012, 11:12:35 PM »
Ahahaha, this fics good!  :thumbup thanks for the update!  :thumbsup

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Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" NEW
« Reply #42 on: September 30, 2012, 11:22:11 PM »
What a good morning for the Atsumina pairing~

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Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" NEW
« Reply #43 on: October 01, 2012, 06:55:51 AM »
atsumina  :twothumbs :wub:
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« Reply #44 on: October 18, 2012, 07:18:13 AM »
still waiting for the update..

Please,update this fausto-san :banghead:

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Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" NEW
« Reply #45 on: October 19, 2012, 12:14:42 AM »
super imagination  ON :ding: OH MY GOD!!!!!  :farofflook: :on bleed: Acchan naked under a shirt and Minami wearing boxers  :nya:

I AM SO GAY RIGHT NOW!!!!  :shakeit:

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Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 9 UPDATE!!
« Reply #46 on: October 19, 2012, 01:59:17 PM »
I'm sorry everyone, I've not update since a long time, searching for a job so I didn't really have the time... But anyway, here it is, just so you now, it will be a pervy section update someday, soon^^ :thumbup 


Part 9



It was the fourth time that Minami did the same sequence.
"Okay, try to be focus, this is not the hardest part, we have to move on!"
"How can you be so fast?!" Asked Miichan, breathless.
"She's training on free days!^^" joked Mariko, everyone knew that Minami was a perfectionist, and that she was the one who worked the most in AKB48.
Atsuko was lost in her thoughts, actually she was looking at the leader. She was so sexy that the tall girl didn't success in the choregraphy. She wasn't in the mood for the training, she just wanted to be with her « boyfriend »...
"Atsuko?! Focus!!"
What was with everyone today, everything was going wrong, nobody was focus, it was a disaster! Minami was tired and stressed, it wasn't good when the girls were wrong with dance.
"Okay, help each other for a while, if you need me, ask me"
Naturally, Yuko went with Kojima, Atsuko reached Mariko and Miichan.
"I don't know why but today it's harder..."sighed Miichan.
Atsuko was trying to do the moves, singing the song with a low voice.
"Erm, Aachan...?" asked Mariko, clearing her voice.
"What?"
"You should...keep an eye on Mocchi..."
Atsuko followed Mariko's look and watched accross the room and saw Mocchi way too close from Minami, simpering.
"I can't this movement, can you show me Takamina?"
She was all smiling, trying to get the leader attention, it drove Atsuko crazy, she could be really jealous when she wanted to. Her face changed.
"Oh shit...Mariko, be ready, you have to picture this, Atsuko is angry!!" Miichan laughed.
Indeed, Atsuko was walking toward the two girls. She looked at Mocchi for few seconds, Minami hadn't noticed her yet. The Ace lifted her shirt and made a knot below her chest. Yuko, who always had a radar for pervy/sexual/seduction things, stopped practicing.
"Nyan-Nyan! Take a look at this!^^"she said really excited.
"Ehm, Minami?" Atsuko said with a husky voice.
The midget gasped and let Mocchi go, recognizing Aachan's voice. She turned around and dropped her jaw. Atsuko was there, drops of sweat were running between her breast...and her flat and beautiful belly was exposed, everybody could see it.
"Atsuko!W-what are you doing?!"
"I'm too bad at the choregraphy, can you help me...?"
Yuko had a really dumb face, she was enjoying this too much.
"Wow, Aachan has grown a lot, see Nyan-Nyan, now she could be my student! So proud!"
"Yuko, dance and shut up! "Answered Kojima, exaspered.
Minami was really disturbed by the view of Atsuko's skin, but she couldn't refuse to help her.
"Hm, sure..."
"Thanks, can you be behind me, and show me the moves with your hands, I'm not flexible today... "said the tall girl looking at Mocchi with an insolent look.
"Mariko, take a picture!!" screamed Miichan, smiling.
The older girl obeyed, drew her camera and took a picture, too fastly to be seen. She was like a ninja when it came to camera.
Reluctantly, Minami stood behind Atsuko, and tried to focus on work, but when her hands touched Aachan's skin, her heart began to beat really fast. She could feel her body close to hers, and her brain began to be fucked;
"O-okay...so, one, two..."she pushed Atsuko's waist on the right, and then on the left," three, four, five...that's right. Then, turn around..."
The two girls were now face to face, all sweatie due to the effort. Atsuko was breathless, looking at the leader.
"Minami..."
The midget was in a really bad situation, her eyes were on Aachan's breast, and she couldn't think about something else right now...
"Okay, that's it, now you can practice... "said the short captain, stepped back from the tentation.
The tall girl nodded, and looked at Mocchi.
"She's mine. Process that."
"Eeh?! "Said Minami. "Atsuko, I need to talk to you!"
"Great!" Smiled the Ace.
They left to room together, leaving the all group.
"Wow, that was hot!!! And now they're gonna have wild sex next door!!" Sighed Yuko, before getting smacked by Kojima.
"Atsuko is such a teaser! She could have been my wife..."
"Don't be sad Miichan, you can go and comfort Mocchi, afterward, she's like a light version of Atsuko..."laughed Mariko. "Let me take a picture of this!!"
"No way..."pouted Miichan.

Minami grabbed Atsuko until the next room, she closed the door and frowned.
"Atsuko, what was that?"
"Nothing"
"Don't play with me, you were so weird!"
"Raah, this is Mocchi's fault! She was all over you!!"
Minami sighed.
"Aachan, you can't do this..."
"Why? You're my girlfriend, and she can't touch you and look at you like that. I swear I'm gonna kill her next time!"
The short captain saw her girlfriend in fire, she was really sexy like this, scary and sexy. But she couldn't think like that.
"This is practice, I had to help her!"
"Me too! But you yell at me for asking for help."
"You were seducing me Aachan, that's not help! I have to focus on my work!"
"So did she!! So I have ten minute a day to be with you and then it's all work?! You don't need me Minami, you don't have the time for this! Let's not talk about this anymore, go help Mocchi if you want to!"she screamed before leaving the room, picking up her stuff and leaving the building.
Minami was shocked. Obviously she was aware of the behavior of Atsuko. Everytime something went wrong, the tall girl was on fire, pouting and yelling, but now, the leader was doing her job, trying to focus on her work, trying to be fair with everyone. Of course she was tired, she wanted nothing else than be with her, hugging and having sex, but it wasn't the right time. And Aachan should understand this, it was unfair to be mad at the captain for that...
She came back in the dancing room, everybody was staring at her. They've heard everything, obviously...
"It's okay Takamina, she will understand..."said Kojima with a sweet smile. "You are right, you have to work."
"Thanks Haruna", she blushed. "Okay, let's back to work, we have to do it perfectly!!Gambatte!!"

They danced for two hours, and then, exhausted, everyone came back home.
Minami was in a bead mood, she couldn't forget the fight with Atsuko. Her heart was hurt, and honestly she wanted to run over her girlfriend's house, apologize and hug her, tell her how much she loved her. But it was none sense, she was still thinking that they need to be professional at work, keep a distance and act as mature persons.
Her parents were away again, for some buisness, and she felt really lonely at home. Her cats were always a consolation, but it wasn't enough tonight.
She took a take away menu and decided to order a pizza for the evening, she could watch the tv while eating eat, like an old woman. After ordering, she desperatly looked at her phone, hoping for a call...
The doorbell rang and Minami gasped, it was a really fast pizza!
She went to the door and opened it without looking.
"Hi, i'm sorry i don't have much money for the..."
She looked up to the person in front of her and frozed.
"A-Atsuko?!What are you doing here?"
The tall girl seemed embarassed, she was already blushing. She was wearing a little black dress, leather jacket and black boots. Wow, thought the leader.
"Can I come in?"
"Yeah..."
She stepped back and the Ace grazed the short one, making her shiver. Minami went to the kitchen, followed by Atsuko.
"I'm sorry, I ordered pizza so I thought it was it..."
"Minami..."
"Yes?" The leader was already falling for her, this way of telling her name was so cute, and she looked so beautiful...
"I'm sorry for today...I was just jealous, and I wanted your attention since the morning, I was angry because you seemed not to care. I thought that you had regret what you had done so...and Mocchi..."
"…"
"I know you're trying to be fair, help everybody, this is work and we have to behave like professional...I let myself be confused, and I'm sorry for that..."
That was so easy, Aachan had guessed what Minami had felt, and she was apologizing, in such a cute way...
"Aachan, it's okay. I'm sorry for being mad at you. I missed you" she said with a serious look.
Atsuko ran over the leader and hugged her.
"I've missed you too!! So you don't regret last night?"
"Nope"
"Do you love me?!"
"Yep"
"You forgive me?!"
"Hm..."
Atsuko seemed worried by the captain's hesitation. She was about to apologize once again when suddenly the short girl pushed Atsuko against the wall and kissed her roughly.
"Maybe I will after you'll get punished for what you've done to me..."
"A-ah Minami..."she moaned between the kisses. "I already apologized..."
"That's not enough! You tempted me, you took off your shirt in front of everyone, waiting for me to want you, and you disapeared from the practice!"
She put her hands on the flat belly that she had the opportunity to watch earlier.
"You're so bad Maeda Atsuko...Such a teaser..."
As she spoke, she kissed her again, and touched her hair, kissed her neck...
"Mi-nami! "
"My brain was fucked, and I was supposed to be working..."
She carried Atsuko bridal style until her room, and put her on the bed. She topped her and kissed her soft belly.
"Minami, don't tease me please, I want you right now!"
"Wait girl, it's a punishment, remember?"
She kissed her, looking for her tongue, Aachan was moaning touching Minami's back.
The doorbell rang again and Minami stopped.
"Ah, that's my pizza!!I'm starving!!"
She stood up, straightened her clothes.
"Are you serious??!"
"Yes, I didn't eat since hours!"
"But, we were having sex!!" pouted Atsuko.
"Hm, well, I guess it can wait...like you made me wait all day..."
She left the room to go take the pizza. Honestly she wanted Atsuko so bad that her legs were shaking, but it was a little revenge!
She was eating her pizza when Atsuko entered the room, in black and very sexy underwear. Minami dropped her jaw.
"Aachan?!Why...?What are you doing?!"
"Hm" she said as she grazed the leader to go take a glass of water, "I would like to take a bath. Can I?"
"A...bath?" Repeated Minami as Atsuko stood next to her, the captain eyes were focus on the tall girl's belly, really flat and temptating.
Suddenly she let go the pizza and with free hands she lifted aachan from the ground and carried her into her room.
"Minami, what are you doing?" Asked Atsuko in a smile.
"...This pizza is not so good after all."
Atsuko giggled when Minami placed her on the bed.
"You're such a teaser, anyone can resist..."whispered the captain as she kissed her neck.
"Sometimes you make things difficult.especially when my oponent is food!^^"
The short one was to busy topping her girlfriend to answer, her desire was so pressent, she needed to touch her skin, kiss her lips, hear her moan. She kissed the lovely moles, Atsuko was difficulty breathing.
"Atsuko, you drive me crazy everyday...I can't even think about something else all day..." she said as she rubbed her pelvis against Atsuko's.
"Aah Mi-nami! Don't tease me, please harder...!"
"This is gonna end to fast...! "
Suddenly Atsuko rolled Minami and topped her, smiling. She undid her bra in front of Minami's eyes. This one dropped her jaw again, this was heaven...
"Do you like what you see?"
"Yes...Aachan, I like it^^"
The Ace kissed her passionnatly, she couldn't hold it anymore. She rubbed her pelvis fastly, wanting more pressure.
"Actually...I have something that I want to try with you... But I don't know if..."hesitated Minami.
"What..."she said with an husky voice. "What do you want Minami...?"
Minami sighed, it was hard to say, she didn't know if Atsuko would be alright with it, even if she loved her, it was difficult to ask...
"I...I have a...strap-on. I would like to use it on you..."
Atsuko opened wide eyes and finally smiled.
"You're full of surprises, I wouldn't even think that you would like to do this kind of thing, but I'm so happy to see that you want to own me this way..."she said as she kissed her once again, excited by the request of Minami.
"So, you're okay with it...?"
"Totally...Hurry up and take me...! I can't wait anymore..."
Minami smiled and began to search for her toy when the doorbell rang once again. The short girl gasped and looked at Atsuko.
"Shit, who is it at this time?!"
"Leader, open!! I know you're here, you have to open I'm starving and I know it's pizza day for you!!"
Minami sighed, it was Yuko, a little drunk, wanted some pizza.
"I have to open, she's gonna stay here until, trust me..."

What do you think?Is it okay? Thanks for reading!! :)

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Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 9 UPDATE!!
« Reply #47 on: October 19, 2012, 02:27:18 PM »
ne fausto-san,i really love u!i mean ur fic!

And if u update in pervs forum,pls pm me!

Thank you for the update! :cow:
« Last Edit: May 30, 2013, 02:06:51 PM by Chichay12 »

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Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 9 UPDATE!!
« Reply #48 on: October 19, 2012, 03:38:04 PM »
That chapter was  :drool: Thanks for the update! And please pm me the part once you post it on perv section  :)

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Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 9 UPDATE!!
« Reply #49 on: October 19, 2012, 06:12:47 PM »
Sweet scene :deco:
Omg! Takamina's room have a man things!
Can't wait next part~
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Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 9 UPDATE!!
« Reply #50 on: October 20, 2012, 03:57:14 AM »
Yuko such a party blower!!!! Wow strap on minami using it to acchan  :panic:  :drool: now that I wAnt very want to read :drool:

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Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 9 UPDATE!!
« Reply #51 on: October 20, 2012, 06:06:03 AM »
Oh, wow, that was great. And I love Yuko, but :banghead:

Perv section fic coming soon, you say? :drool: I can't wait!
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Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 9 UPDATE!!
« Reply #52 on: October 20, 2012, 06:35:04 AM »
OMG!! I forgot this grat amazing and smexy fic!!! :D love it thanx... jejej love the jealousy acchan its funny for me..

jajajja Yuko!!! whaaaaaaaaat you stopped this smexy time.. and why are you drunk? where is haruna?

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Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 9 UPDATE!!
« Reply #53 on: October 20, 2012, 11:26:07 PM »
Update!!! This is the part before pervy section, i post it there and then you have to see the rest on the pervy section. Hope it would be okay!! :nervous


Part 10

"So Aachan, how are you since you left because leader was too close to Mocchi?^^"
"Don't encourage her with that Yuko please... "sighed Minami.
"I'm just asking" smiled the pervert one before swallowing a big piece of pizza. "Oh this is so good, meat and cheese, leader you're the best!"
Atsuko was smiling, of course it was really a bad timing, she was gonna have a private moment with her « boyfriend » and Yuko showed up like this, drunk. But actually, she was really funny when she was drunk. She noticed that Minami was looking at her with a weird look, like...like a boyish look. Aachan felt hot suddenly, when she realized that the leader was staring at her with an hint of desire. Thankfully Yuko was eating and not paying attention, or she would be too happy to see something like this.
"I have a great idea!!"
"Oh no..."sighed Minami.
"Leader!! Let's play some video games!!It's been so long!!"
"What? But Minami doesn't have video games...right?" She asked looking at the short one who was blushing.
"Oooh..."smiled Yuko "so you fancy our leader but you don't know about the Pod...Funny^^"
"Yuko..."
"The pod...?!"
"…"
"Leader...it's about time to show her I think" She looked at Atsuko, "Me I already know because I helped her to do it, and usually when I'm drunk I come and play video games with her all night...^^ Let's go!"
Yuko ran to Minami's bedroom followed by the two others. Atsuko was really curious about this. Yuko seemed really excited, waiting for the leader to show the room to the Ace.
"I'm sorry if I didn't tell you about Atsuko, it's just that it's not really a good thing for most of the people..."
As she spoke she went to her dressing and pushed it on the left, Atsuko opened wide eyes when she saw a door behind this emplacement. Yuko was already opening it and went in it, laughing. Atsuko dropped her jaw, it was a pretty large room with walls paint in red, and black furnitures. She slowly entered in the room, looking at everything. There was One piece posters and manga, large collection of cds and a big dressing with boyish clothes. And in the back, a litlle sofa with in front of, a large TV and a PS3. Yuko was already playing at a fight game, laughing and screaming.
"So, this is the « Pod »...?"
"Yes... I'm sorry if you're disapointed... "she looked at Atsuko and saw her smiling, "what?!"
"This is so cool!! I knew it!! This pink and girly room is so not like you!!"
"Yeah right? Minami one day someone will know that you can't have a room so girly^^" laughed Yuko.
"So...Who knows?" Asked the Ace.
"Just the three of us. I don't want to tell anybody..."
"Leader!! Come and play against me, I still have to beat you since last time!!"
Minami apologized in a gaze for Atsuko.
"It's okay, go on, I'm gonna look at this cool room"
The short one sat on the sofa while Atsuko approached the dressing, looking at all the black boxers, cool jackets and beautiful ties. It was so cool to know that a Minami has this room, that she was hiding it. In secret, she was playing video games and dressing as a boyish girl when no one knows... Too bad Yuko was there, she was so turned on by all this!!
They played for about one hour, there were so geeks but it was funny. They seemed like two guys fighting with half-naked girls characters, Yuko had taken the one with bigest boobs, obviously, but she sucked at this game.
"Ah, Takamina, let me win at least one time!!"
"No way, you have to win for yourself, or else it's not satisfying"
"Oh, you're such a leader all the time..."pouted Yuko.
"Don't complain about that, Minami is a great person, you wouldn't be the same if she wasn't here" said Atsuko as she sat on Minami's lap, kissing her roughly.
"Wow!! This is so hot!!" screamed Yuko.
"Atsuko..."
Minami was breathless, so surprised of the kiss and turned on by it. She so wanted Atsuko earlier that it was torture not be able to realize her desires...
"Yuko...What do you say if I call Kojima so you can go at her house and let me enjoy my Minami for myself, uh?" Proposed Atsuko with a husky voice.
"DONE!!" screamed Yuko.
Atsuko smiled and drew her phone to call Kojima.
"Nyan-Nyan, it's Aachan. I'm at Minami's and Yuko is here, maybe a litlle drunk. Minami and I would like to...speak you see, could be possible for you to take Yuko at your house?"
"Yuko is drunk?Again? But we're tuesday...It's a big service you know that Aachan..."sighed Kojima.
"I know, please..."
"I'm coming Nyan-Nyan!!!Be ready for the skinship!!!"
"I'm sorry but please..."pouted Atsuko.
"Okay...Tell her to come"
"Thank you so much!! I love you!!Bye!"
She hang up and smiled at Yuko.
"You can go Yuko!"
"GREAT! Bye!!!"
She ran on the stairs and slamed the door. Atsuko was still on Minami's lap, she looked at her.The Ace kissed her passionnatly, she couldn't hold it anymore.
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After this, tell me what you think!!

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Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 10
« Reply #54 on: October 20, 2012, 11:51:58 PM »
Can u pm that part to me? please  :cathappy: :bow:

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Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 10
« Reply #55 on: October 21, 2012, 12:03:29 AM »
omg!!!! please pm for me!!   :bow:  :bow:

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Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 10
« Reply #56 on: October 21, 2012, 12:27:14 AM »
Please pm me the part :bow: I'm begging you

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Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 10
« Reply #57 on: October 21, 2012, 01:19:33 AM »
Pm me aswell , can't go in to perv section  :bow:


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« Reply #58 on: October 21, 2012, 02:11:01 AM »
Pm me too~ :cathappy:
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Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 10
« Reply #59 on: October 21, 2012, 02:13:06 AM »
Please PM me T-T

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