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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 12
« Reply #240 on: September 03, 2012, 06:17:09 PM »
Aww Atsumina is so cute. Wooow, it feels like Gekikara gets scarier and scarier every time you write her lol.

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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 13
« Reply #241 on: September 04, 2012, 03:33:50 AM »
@Sasshii: Yeah Gekikara is scary so I like to make her scary! Makes sense doesn't it?

Well here's the next chapter! Let's see what Yuko has instored for Takamina and Acchan.
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Chapter 13

(Day 23)

Minami was sleeping when she heard a noise outside her window. She looked out and saw a familar squirrel waving at her.

"Yuko? What are you going here?"

"I need to talk to you."

"About what?"

"Something important. Just come down here!"

"Alright I'm on my way."

Minami ran down stairs and opened the door. Yuko came running in and slammed the door behind her.

"Hey easy! Everyone else is still asleep."

"Sorry. Anyways big news!"

"What?"

"Well appaerntly I pissed of the yakuza."

"WHAT?!"

Minami had been half asleep but then Yuko said yakuza and Minami became wide awake.

"What did you to piss off the yakuza?" Minami asked.

"Well one of the guys were trying to touch up my Nyannyan so I bit him. Then he got mad and got some of his buddies to start chasing us." Yuko said.

"Where's Haruna?"

"I got her somewhere safe. For now I need your help. I need you to help me get rid of them."

"Uh we can't exactly get rid of the yakuza Yuko."

"Do but we can scare them."

"What are you planning?"

A could minutes later, Minami was now standing outside a yakuza hide out that Yuko somehow knew it was there. She was really shaky about the plan and didn't want to do it in the first place. But she had no choice now and couldn't back out.

"You ready?" Yuko whispered from behind a trash can.

"Let's get this over with."

Minami tightened the tie around her neck and put on the shades. She adjusted her wig a little and made sure everything was good. Then she took a deep breath and walked right in. Yuko had disguised Minami as another yakuza guy and thought Minami would be able to blend right in. The only problem was all the guys were six feet tall and Minami was only four barely five.

"There's no way this is going to work."

However so far no one noticed Minami. They were all busy talking about their fights or drinking. Minami's objective was to find the guy who tried to touch Haruna. Yuko told Minami to look for a guy with a bite mark on his hand. She looked around and so far didn't see any one that fit the description.

"Hey Kenji!"

Minami was suddenly pulled to the bar area and sat down. One of the yakuza guys thought Minami was one of his friends. To make things worse, he was drunk.

"Hey Kenji you wanna see something cool. Check it out."

The man showed Minami his hand revealing the bite mark. What luck this was the guy Minami was sent to look for.

"What happened?" Minami asked in a low voice.

"Some crazy midget bit me. I tried to get some action from her friend and she bit me! I swear when I get back out there I'm going to kill her and then nail her friend." he said.

"Uh I don't think you should do that."

"Why not?"

"Because.... I know that girl!"

"Really? Then maybe you can hook me up with her."

"No way man."

"Why not?"

"She's got HIV."

The man's face grew pale. He took another drink from his glass and then slammed it on the table.

"You're kidding me! Man what a waste. Well maybe I can nail her midet friend."

"Not the best idea."

"Why?"

"The other one has AIDS. They're both carriers and will probably give it to you if you trail to nail them."

"Shit no way!"

"Honest to god."

"Man that really sucks. Thanks for warning me man."

"No problem. Oh and get that bite checked out. I think the girl had rabies."

"Holy crap you might be right!"

The man staggered out of the bar and Minami tried to run too. But then another guy grabbed her and pulled in with another group.

"Hey are you new here?" he asked.

"Uh yeah." Minami said.

"What's your name?"

"Kai."

"Well then Kai welcome to the gang. Here have a drink."

The guy shoved a glass into Minami's hand. She had no choice but to drink it. Then one by one they kept loading her with drink after drink until she eventually threw up.

"Woah new guy. Looks like you had one too many drinks. You better go."

"Righ! Gotta get back to mah gurl!"

"Thataboy! Go **** her till sunrise!"

"I will!"

Minami staggered out of the bar out to the front door. There Yuko was waiting there with a annoyed look on her face.

"What took you so long?"

"I uh got the guy to uh lay off Haruna and you..."

"Really? Great! Thank you so much!"

Yuko was about to hug Minami but then backed away.

"You reek of alcolhal. Have you been drinking?"

"A little..."

"How many?"

Minami held up ten fingers plus her foot.

"15? Oh jeez. We need to get you home."

With the help of Yuko, Minami managed to get home. It was two in the morning and Atsuko was still asleep. Minami staggered into the room and plopped onto the bed still in her guy outfit. She looked over at Atsuko who was still asleep. Minami thought she look so cute asleep. It was then Minami remembered something the guys told her back at the bar.

"That's right... I gotta ***  my girl till sunrise."

Minami took off her jacket and shirt. Then she got on top of Atsuko and pulled the covers off. The now awake Atsuko looked at Minami in confusion now sure what was going on.

"Minami? What are you doing?"

"I'm gonna **** you!"

"What?"

Minami pulled up Atsuko's shirt and bra revealing Atuko's chest. Atsuko shivered a little from the sudden temperature change. Minami licked her lips and then dug into Atsuko.

"Ahh! Minami stop! What are you doing?"

Atsuko tried to push Minami off her but she wouldn't budge. Minami just ignored Atsuko's cries as she bit down hard on one of Atsuko's mounds causing her to moan.

"Minami please stop this."

Once again Minami didn't answer. She just continued her assult on Atsuko's body. Then with one hand she started to slid it down towards Atsuko's panties. Atsuko tried to stop her but Minami took her other hand and held her hands back. Minami pulled off Atsuko's shorts and then hovered around Atsuko's panties.

"Minami please... stop..."

Minami only ignore the cries and was getting ready to go in for her main prize. But then suddenly something stopped her. She suddenly jumped and then passed out next to Atsuko. Turns out her heart was going nuts and couldn't take it anymore so the pace maker shocked it making Minami pass out.

"What just happened?"

Atsuko looked at Minami who was now passed out and half naked. She could the smell the stench of alcohal coming from the tiny girl and now realized why she was acting that way. What she wondered was what made her pass out. Maybe she got tired half way and decided to stop. As Atsuko was staring at Minami, she saw something on Minami that she never saw before.

"What the?"

Atsuko reached out to pull Minami's shirt a little further down but then Minami suddenly turned around with her back turned to Atsuko. She quietly swore to herself for losing the chance to see what she wanted. She knew if she tired to see it then Minami would wake up. Atsuko had no choice but to forget about it and worry about it later. Right now she was tired and ready to fall asleep.

"I'll find out in the morning."

That is if she remembered.

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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 13
« Reply #242 on: September 04, 2012, 05:24:20 AM »
OMG!!! i think that "that" gonna be happen with takaboy drunk but i feel relieve.. so much..

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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 13
« Reply #243 on: September 04, 2012, 05:29:31 AM »
Thanks for the update :D Oh Yuko, you and your plans that involve Takamina :P & wow, Atsuko was close to finding out or @ least seeing the scar. & poor minami got shocked when her heart rate when up but its for the best since she was drunk lol :P
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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 13
« Reply #244 on: September 04, 2012, 11:47:41 AM »
Chapter 12: Rena-chan is scary don't ever dare to come between her and her melon pan.  :tama-piss:
Chapter 13: LOL! Yuko pissed off Yakuza and Takamina is drunk  :rofl:

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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 13
« Reply #245 on: September 04, 2012, 11:44:24 PM »
OMG!!! Mayuki!!!!!
ROFL I like how Takamina persuaded the yakuza hahaha!!!!

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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 14
« Reply #246 on: September 05, 2012, 03:20:28 AM »
@Rukaeru: Yeah I wonder how Acchan will react when she finds out?  :?

@Haruko: Yep. I'm not an extreme pervert and would never let "that" happen.  XD

@arrow27: Thank you for reading the fic.  :)

@Megumi: Rena is a very scary person. Yep Yuko really did it this time and Takamina ended up paying for it.  :)

@kahem: Minami can do anything because she's amazing!  :wub:

Minna! I'm sorry it's taken me forever to update. I've been really busy with school and it's been KILLING me. Again I'm sorry about the long wait and will updae again as soon as possible!
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Chapter 14

(Day 24)

Minami was talking to Atsuko when Sae came running down the hall.

"Hey Takamina!"

"What is it Sae?"

"I need help?" Sae said.

"With what?" Minami asked.

"It's about Sayaka. She's really mad at me for some reason and I can't figure out why."

"Well have you tired asking her?"

"Yeah and all she does is ignore me!"

"That is a problem. Let's go see if we can figure out what happened."

Minami, Sae and Atsuko all went to the gym where Sayaka was practicing basketball by herself. When she saw the others she stopped and took a quick break. When she saw Sae she gave her a nasty look.

"What did I do Sayaka?" Sae said with puppy eyes.

"Figure it out yourself." Sayaka said in a nasty tone.

"Can you at least give me a hint."

"Ok it happend early today."

"How early?"

"Before school."

"Uhh well a lot of things happened Sayaka before school. Takamina help!"

"Hey I wasn't with you guys before school. I was with Acchan right?" Minami said.

"Right!"

"Well let's see what did I do to tick you off...."

Sae thought long and hard about it. Then she finally got an answer.

"I know! I ate your breakfast this morning."

"Nope."

"Uh I accidently surpised you by sneaking up on you."

"No."

"I slapped you on the back too hard?"

"No. Think Sae. It was when we were in the locker rooms changing."

Sae thought again and then she remembered.

"Ahh I remember now! We were changing and I noted how small your boobs were."

"Ding ding ding!"

"Mou Sayaka you don't need to get mad at me about that." Sae said.

"Well I am and unitl you do something to make me feel better then I'm going to be mad for the rest of the day." Sayaka said.

"Sayaka I was only joking. Sure you don't have big boobs like Yukirin but I still love yours! They're bigger than mine see?"

Sae took Sayaka's hand and placed it on her chest. Sayaka's face turned bright red as she saw where her hand was.

"See? Flat as a board."

Sayaka drew back and stared at Sae.

"I can't believe you did that!"

"What? I wanted to show you what I meant. Do you need more proof?"

Sae started to take off her shirt but then Sayaka stopped her.

"That's enough! I got it Sae I got it."

"So you're not mad anymore?"

"No I'm not."

"Yay! Then let's go eat lunch."

"Sounds good to me."

Sayaka and Sae left the gym leaving Atsuko and Minami alone.

"Maybe we should go get lunch."

Minami turned around to start walking but then she felt two hands groupe her chest.

"KYA!"

Mianmi jumped back and looked to see who touched her. She saw Atsuko smiling with a perverted grin and had her hands up.

"Minami you're boobs are small. But that's ok because I like them that way."

"What about you?"

Minami reached out and grabbed Atsuko's boobs.

"They're almost the same size as mine."

"But they're still bigger than yours."

Atsuko stepped back and started to skip away. Minami was mad at Atsuko but knew she was only joking. She couldn't help it that she had small boobs.

"Mou Acchan!"

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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 14
« Reply #247 on: September 05, 2012, 03:56:25 AM »
Jajajajaj WTF!! I laugh a  lot.. I think that yuko gonna be mad if she know that this happen ... jejejje :D.. you pervet acchan.. but takaboy also touch her :O

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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 14
« Reply #248 on: September 05, 2012, 04:19:34 AM »
lol funny chapter :D Love how everyone asks for her help, cause that's just how awesome she is *_* :P Thanks for the update, as always looking forward to your next chapter ^^

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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 14
« Reply #249 on: September 05, 2012, 04:46:11 AM »
Haha comparing boob sizes, sounds like fun all around :P

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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 14
« Reply #250 on: September 05, 2012, 01:03:41 PM »
wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

finally updated!!!!

(very happy :D)

thank you.......................

i like your work very much!!!!!!!!!!

please continue
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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 14
« Reply #251 on: September 06, 2012, 08:24:55 PM »
Ahahah! Ilike this chapter it was very funny!!!
Mayuki = Cutest couple



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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 14
« Reply #252 on: September 07, 2012, 06:24:28 AM »
Made me realize how I'll miss the real twin towers, ahh boobs lol, good chapter, I'm loving this happy/perviness  :thumbup

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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 14
« Reply #253 on: September 07, 2012, 09:42:55 AM »
b--bs!

LOL I tough that Sayaka was mad because Sae flirted with some girls  :rofl:

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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 14
« Reply #254 on: September 07, 2012, 09:36:31 PM »
Boob gropping!!!
It reminds me a scene in the drama gto 2012 ^^

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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 15
« Reply #255 on: September 08, 2012, 03:11:20 AM »
Minna I'm finally back! After a long week of hard school I'm finally back to relax on the weekend. Well it looks like everyone wants me to make a season 2 so I will put up the lucky cotestents! It is up to you guys to vote and you will have 2 votes. But for now I'm back and ready to write once more. Ahh it's good to be back.
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Chapter 15

(Day 25)

Minami's time was already half way over. She only had 23 more days left. She was staring to get a little worried but not too concerned yet. Instead of going to school, Minami had to go to the hospital for a check up. Mariko made her go in every couple of weeks to make sure everything is functioning properly.

"Hello Takamina."

Minami tunred around and saw Rena standing behind her.

"Rena? What are you doing here?" Takamina asked.

" Helping my mother out. I'm taking care of the kids with Jurina." Rena said.

"Where is Jurina?"

"In there."

Minami looked into a room with a glass window and saw Jurina on the ground fighting off an army of little kids. She looked like she was one of them.

"Does Jurina know about my-"

"No she doesn't. No one else except me and Mariko who know about your heart. Speaking of Mariko, where is she?"

"Oi Takamina!"

Minami and Rena looked over and saw Mariko running towards them.

"Sorry I'm late." Mariko said.

"Where were you?" Rena asked.

"I had to do emergency surgery on a kid. She was in pretty bad shape. Sorry."

"Oh no it's fine. Anyways I'll be leaving you two. Have fun."

Rena went back into the room full of kids with Jurina and continued to play. Meanwhile Minami went with Mariko into an examiniation room.

"Alright I'm gonna need you to take off your clothes. You can wear your bra though."

Minami took off her shirt. She felt dissapointed in her small boobs.

"Ok lye down and we're going to see what's going on inside."

Minami lyed down on her back and then Mariko put some gel on a camera. She placed it on Minami's chest and on the screen they could see Minami's heart beathing. They could also see the pace maker right on top of it. The glow meant it was working.

"Ok take a deep breath."

Minami inhaled deeply and saw her heart beat slow down.

"Now think of something scary."

Minami thought about a giant monkey chasing her. That really scared her and she watched her heart beat faster.

"Well everything looks good. Oh and look at this."

Mariko pointed to a certain spot on the camera. It was a dark spot that wasn't there before.

"What is that?"

"I don't know. I'll have to look at it more in the other room. For now you can put your clothes on.

Minami sat up and wiped the gel off. Mariko left the room so she could change. As she was changing she didn't even notice the door was slightly open. She also didn't see Jurina pop her head in and see her changing. When Jurina saw Minami she was shocked. She saw the scar on her chest and was curious about what it was. She took a picutre with her cell phone and then ran before Minami noticed.

"Gotta tell Rena!"

Mariko came back with a grim look on her face.

"So did you find out what it was?" Minami asked.

"I did. But I don't know if you should hear it or not." Mariko said.

"Tell me."

"You sure?"

"I might as well know."

Mariko took a deep breath before telling Minami. Then she finally said,

"The dark spot may be the starting up a tumor."

Minami was speechless. She didn't know what to say. All she knew was that now she had a heart tumor. While Minami and Mariko were in one room, Jurina was running down the hall towards Rena.

"Rena Rena look what I found!"

"What is it Jurina?"

Jurina showed Rena the photo of Minami and acted surprised. But Rena already knew what it was.

"What do you think it is?" Jurina asked.

"I don't know." Rena said.

"Should we tell the others?"

"No let's not."

"Why not?"

"Because there's probably a good reason why she hasn't told anyone. So we better not be the ones to say it."

"You make a good point. But I really think Acchan should know at least."

"No Jurina we can't tell her or anyone else. It's just a secret between you and me. Got it?"

Jurina only nodded her head because Rena was giving her a Gekikara glare.

"Good! Then let's go have lunch."

As Rena walked ahead, Jurina secretly sent the photo to Mayuyu. Meanwhile back in the other room,

"So what can I do?" Minami asked.

"Well we don't know for sure if the tumor is cancerous or not. If it is you'll have to go through kemotherapy. If it's not then we'll leave it. But we can't operate because we've operated so many times on your heart that if we do any more then you could die." Mariko said.

"So we just wait to see if this thing is my one way trip to heaven?"

"Yep. Come back in a couple of days. We'll look at it again and see what happens."

Minami left the hospital realizing that her time may be cut shorter than she thought.

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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 14
« Reply #256 on: September 08, 2012, 10:08:04 AM »
Ok happiness gone. Why must you hurt me this way  :fainted:! Jurina is probably gonna tell everyone anyway, oh Takaboy  :pleeease: Update sooooon! Before I need a pacemaker!

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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 14
« Reply #257 on: September 08, 2012, 09:10:46 PM »
OH MY GOD EVERYONE IS GOING TO KNOW!

Takaminas lives is getting shorter?!  :shocked:

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO *Faint

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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 14
« Reply #258 on: September 08, 2012, 10:20:38 PM »
Poor Takamina T_T problem again

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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 14
« Reply #259 on: September 08, 2012, 10:24:42 PM »
Don't get me wrong, but I'm really anticipating the end... :mon evil: :mon evillaff:
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