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The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: REPLIES (MaYuki)
« on: August 12, 2012, 04:58:27 PM »
GYAAAAAAH ! I really couldn't stand it  :angry1: :badluck: :fainted: :err: :frustrated:
I just had to make a fic with Mayuyu as the center ! And this one happened to be an idea :on polter:
I'm working on another fic so I think I won't be able to update as fast ?  :depressed:
But I'll work hard  :onioncheer:
I think this Fic will be focused on Mysteries and Nezumi's Mind Games~ But there's still romance tehehe  :bigdeal:

Prologue


Have you ever thought why the stars exist?

Have you ever thought why God made people imperfect?

Have you ever thought that WHAT IFs could be real and not a lie?

Have you ever thought why the world is filled with crimes and bad deeds?

Have you ever thought of all things, Love is the only thing that hurts you for real?

The world we live in is indeed, full of mystery.

If a question is asked, then an answer shall be told.

If a mystery is unsolved, then a discovery shall be unravelled.

If change shall be changed, then nothingness shall be nothing at all. Ironic, isn’t it?

This is why, questions should be asked and mysteries should be solved.

Have you ever tried connecting the dots?

It’s easy. You just have to analyze what you read and your outcome would turn out like this :

The stars exist because God made people imperfect. And that’s how the world was stained with hypocrisy, questions, mysteries, changes and nothingness. Especially, LOVE. Imperfect people unravel what shall be told and come back hurt but with what if’s as their shell to be protected by the world’s stains. But the world is just too ironic that it’s imperfect...

It turns out like that.

You may think it doesn’t make sense; but it does.

You just have to connect the dots.

And you will become the perfect master mind to what shall happen...



Was that hard to understand ? Please tell me what you think of this err... complicated prologue  :depressed:
I don't know where I'm going on this one  :fainted:
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Re: The Stars, The Stains, and The Mind Game : Prologue ( Nezumi X ??? )
« Reply #1 on: August 12, 2012, 05:04:11 PM »
I love the prologue!!! :inlove:

its really interesting! it wasnt hard to understand ~ and there is Nezumi! XD

but Nezu must be with someone right...?  Black! Black wants too surely~ :wub:

please update soon~ :)
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Re: The Stars, The Stains, and The Mind Games : Prologue ( Nezumi X ??? )
« Reply #2 on: August 12, 2012, 05:35:31 PM »

I love the prologue!!! :inlove:

its really interesting! it wasnt hard to understand ~ and there is Nezumi! XD

but Nezu must be with someone right...?  Black! Black wants too surely~ :wub:

please update soon~ :)
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Re: The Stars, The Stains, and The Mind Games : Prologue ( Nezumi X ??? )
« Reply #3 on: August 12, 2012, 10:39:12 PM »

I love the prologue!!! :inlove:

its really interesting! it wasnt hard to understand ~ and there is Nezumi! XD

but Nezu must be with someone right...?  Black! Black wants too surely~ :wub:

please update soon~ :)
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Re: The Stars, The Stains, and The Mind Games : Prologue ( Nezumi X ??? )
« Reply #4 on: August 13, 2012, 03:13:28 PM »
YAAAY I've managed to update even though I have a looooot of homework  :fainted:
Soooo I don't know if there are any mistakes in my 'very good' English coz' I'm effing tired.  :badluck:
And, Hell, No. I'm not gonna edit it if there are any mistakes !!  :bigdeal:
BTW, credits to Kiruchi-san for the name ' Watanabe Yuuma'  :) I haven't rlly asked for ur permission but please, let me use it ?  :whistle:
I got inspired by some kind of movie my sister let me watch o.o It's about Forensic's and shit xD And the slavery thing is from ' 40 Shades of Grey '  :wahaha:


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Forensics or Autopsy is a type of job that you might need the BRAINS. Why ? Because it deals with LAW and MEDICAL at the same time. So you might be thinking that a forensics doctor should work in a Hall of Justice or a police station coz' it deals with LAW. Yes and No. Yes because it can be. And No, because a real doctor belongs to a hospital. And a DEAD BODY should not be in a hall nor a police station. But there are types of Forensics Pathologists. But those are not Important. To discover more, let us go forth the life of Watanabe Yuuma. A Medical Examiner in the Forensics Field.

A serious case had happened last 2 days. It was a sudden death. No traces, and no faces had been suspected. A Medical examiner's job is to solve cases like mysterious deaths. This is what exactly Dr. Watanabe had been doing. He was never the Justice type of a person but investigation was his type. He should've took Law school ? No. He didn't want to risk his life... As he was observing the deceased body, he already knew what had happened. The bite marks on her hand, the red stuff on her neck and a burn on the head. It seemed like this was rape. But look here, they were no signs of suspects on who did this and what caused this, ... yet. This wasn't his job anymore though. He covered the body up and washed his hands and put on his glasses.

Knock Knock

" Come in. " He sat on his chair sprayed air freshener around his surroundings. We wouldn't want guests to smell the dead body, wouldn't we ?

" Dr. Watanabe ! Nice to see you done with your job ! " A man around his mid 30s went in. To Dr. Watanabe, this man was indeed important to get the rank he wants. He stood up and bowed

" Hello, Doctor Keiichi. It's nice to see you too. " He bowed down again

" No expression as always ! ..I see you're done with your job, hmm ? "

" Hai. It seems this was rape, Doctor. Concluding to the bite marks on almost every part and also red stuff that I think are hickeys ? There's also a burn on her head which I do not know of, so I thought we should send this to Doctor Miyazawa. But we haven't found any clues on the evidence and the suspect. It seems we have to send this body for examining. "

" Very well said. Bravo, Dr. Watanabe. So young yet so smart! "

" Thank you, Doctor. "

" Since you've been doing such a wonderful job, I've decided to give you an assistant, well err... not exactly an assistant but an apprentice! "

" Ahhh, I see.. "

" She's a doctor too and I think she might learn a thing or two from you~ " The doctor said and called for a person. A beautiful girl went in as she smiled and bowed to Dr. Watanabe. To Dr. Watanabe, she looked gorgeous and stunning. Tall, beautiful, nice figure! He was a lucky doctor alright!

" She will be in your care now, Dr. Watanabe! As long as you're working here, she will be your apprentice. Got it ? "

" Hai, Doctor. "

" Okay. Introduce yourself then, Doctor ! "

" Hai.. Hello. I'm Watanabe Yuuma. I specialize in the Forensics Pathology.  Let's work together from now on. " Watanabe bowed

" It's a pleasure to meet you, Doctor Watanabe. I'm Kashiwagi Yuki. Forensic's Pathology too. I've heard a lot from you and they say you're very good ! So I hope I'll help you in any way I can. " Kashiwagi bowed down

"  There you go ! Well, look at the time. I have an appointment with a patient today. Work together ! See ya ! " The doctor went out leaving the two of them together

" Doctor Watanabe — "

" Please. You can call me Yuuma. "

" Ahh, I see. Yuuma-chan, want to have lunch with me ? "

" Yeah, sure. But I smell like medicine. "

" It's okay since we ARE in a hospital. "

" You're right. Before that, let me just go clean up, alright ? "

" Okay... " As Yuuma was cleaning up the laboratory, Yuki on the other hand was observing the dead body. When she got bored, she looked at Yuuma. She noticed that Yuuma had a really slender figure that she couldn't help but touch waist. Then suddenly, the Doctor squealed

" E-EHHHH ?! " Yuki was surprised. She had never heard a guy squeal before! Yuuma had looked at her with a very scary face. Slender waist... That has been repeating through Yuki's mind now until she realized it. " D-Don't t-t-tell me... Y-You're a .. " she gulped and said the last word softly " G-girl ??? "

Yuuma smirked " Ahh.. So I see you have noticed. You are very clever, indeed. " Yuuma went closer and closer to Yuki. With every step the Doctor took, Yuki backed away. Until she reached the wall. The doctor pinned her to the wall with a smirk on his face.

" Y-Yuuma-kun ?? " Yuki said as she gulped

" Dont. Ever. Tell. Anyone. Or. Else. " Yuuma said as he sent a warning glare to Yuki

" H-Hai ! "

" Hmph.. Since you know now... It's Watanabe Mayu.. "

" Mayu ? Yuuma ? ... So it's Mayuyu ! " Yuki exclaimed

" Lower your voice.. ! " Yuuma— Mayu warned her again

" S-Sorry.. I won't tell anyone about this. "

" Good. " Mayu smiled at her

" BUT ! On one condition. Let me see you as a girl ! " Yuki smiled

" Hey, I just met you ! And you're crazy ! "

" I guess I'll be telling the whole staff ? " Yuki touched Mayu's wrist to scare her

" Alright ! Alright ! Geez.. "

" YESS ~ "

" But maybe later.. I'll take you home with me. "

" Hmm okay. I guess I'm free later— "

" I'll take you home with me. And you, Kashiwagi Yuki, will be MY PROPERTY forever. " Mayu proclaimed and when Yuki was about to react, she directly kissed her lips. Yuki struggled and broke this kiss immediately

" What was that for ?! " Yuki blushed

" You're blushing so you like it. " Mayu teased

" Just because I'm blushing doesn't mean I like it !! " Yuki yelled

" Ha ! Everybody has their own opinion. " Mayu smirked

" You know, I feel like I'm in a game. What're you planning huh ? "

" Very clever. You got into my Mind Game with noticing. And Yuki, I'm not planning anything. " She innocently smiled

" Mind game ? What is that ? "

" What you think it is. "

" You're so weird... Well, anyway, there is no way you're taking me home and being your property ! "

" Too late~ " As Mayu laughed a Tattoo appeared on Yuki's neck.

" OUCH ! "

" It hurts ? Don't worry. It's only for awhile. "

" Wh-What is this ?? "

" It's a tattoo to make you obey my orders. "

" Why and when did this happen ?! " Yuki touched the tattoo on the side of her neck

" It happened when I kissed you. It seems my veil had spread through out your body and managed to contaminate your blood with my blood "

" What ??? Are you serious ?! "

" Uh-huh. It clearly shows that YOU ARE MY PROPERTY. So if you disobey me, that Tattoo will start hurting you until you stop disobeying me. It will also prevent you from doing acts regarding the 7 Stains. "

" What am I a dog ?? " She said without realizing ' 7 Stains '

" A cute dog. "

" How am I supposed to wear clothes that reveal my neck ?! "

" Don't worry. It just shows up when you've done something wrong. "

" Oh my God.. what have I gone into  ? "

" You've gone into my Mind Game. Come with me to my house later on and I will explain to you what are the basic things you need to know. " Mayu went out of the laboratory casually and closed the door.

" Stupid Mayu ! AAARGH ! " As Yuki said that, the Tattoo glowed into Purple. " Ittai ! " She touched her neck again " Alright, I'm obeying ! " The tattoo disappeared and pain went away. Yuki needed to discover more about this 'Mind Game'. She needed to know more about this Mystery about Mayu. But Mystery is one of the 7 Stains. How can she do it since MYSTERY is one of the 7 Stains ? Stay tuned and be updated on the Stars and the 7 Stains tomorrow~



A/N :

Woohoo ~ I don't know what I was writing. You'll know more on the 7 stains and the stars nxt update  :glasses:

@ All Of You XD : Not BLACK, but Yuki. Meh. Still the same, who cares ? xD
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W-what?!!

Mayu is dansoing? Yessssss ikemen and still Yuri at the same time!

Kissing someone you just met?

Not sure if love

Or just a mind game.

I sense hints of BDSM here~  Mayu is so LOL

I'm at a loss for words... Mayu's personality is so cool and badass!!!

Will there be gap moe also?????

I'm so interested in the 7 stains. 

Awesome badass sado Mayu!!!

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I wonder what kind of 'mind games' we're going to have in here?  :kekeke:
Mayu's doctor danso's the BEST!!!  :nya:
Purple tattoo?  :dunno: curse seal?
anyway i'm still looking forward to those mind games!!!  :ding: update soon

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I.........LOVE THIS FIC~!   YES!!! YUKIRIN IS MAYUS PROPERTY~!!!!!!


I really really love it~ Im just obsessed over posessive Mayuyu~

for a second I thought it was boyxgirl but then Mayu was crossdressing~

and now Yuki has a owner~!

please update soon~!!!!! really cant wait to read more~~~~

how am I going to survive until tomorrow when you post the next chapter....?
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wow it's really interesting  :ding:
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Yuki is Mayu's property? Hum interesting~

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Mayuyu as a Doctor of  Forensics Pathology!!! This is soo effin' interesting! :inlove: :peace:
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At first I thought Mayu is male, lol, but still prefer is she a girl  :luvluv1:
And the tattoo on Yuki's neck, is Mayu a devil? look like she has a super power   :on gay:
I smile everytime i read the fic that Mayu being the attacker :kekeke:
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I cant wait for the update....!!!! :O

I alredy reade this chapter 10 times andnoe I can say it without reading...... XD

anyway~ take you time(today) and please update soon~ :P
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Hey ! Say ! Jump ! Lol. You're like, " YAY AN UPDATE " while I'm like, " YAY I DON'T HAVE HOMEWORK "   :farofflook:
Okay, I have another fic to update so I'll make this quick, and interesting  :P By quick I mean, fast in making. Not short chapter  :glasses:

@Epiclulz : Hmmm... Gap Moe.. I'll think of that ?  :on lol:
@Kiruchi : Lol somewhat like a curse seal. Purple tattoo ? Lol No xD I won't spoil  :hiakhiakhiak:

@Yuukimoko : YAAY seems like you survived... xD


@Mo-chan : Oh, you will see more of Mayu tehehe... In Nezu form wootwoot !


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@Cmze : Coz' Badass Mayu is Epic  :glasses:

Cessy10 : Thank you :))


Playgirlz : You might be correct on the super power thing! Just don't wanna spoil, just read  :on lol:


Anzai48 : LOL Mayu will become less possessive when she develops things from Yuki~ I dun have HW ! It just takes me time to go home from school~


The Stars and The 7 Stains

" Oi ! Come out ! " Yuki yelled at Mayu " What the heck are you planning, huh ?! And why am I tied to a chair ?! " Yuki asked as she gritted her teeth

A creak sound coming from the door went past Yuki's ear. A giggle " You are a feisty one. " Mayu had just came out from the bathroom. Yuki's jaw dropped. This was not the super intelligent hot Dr. Watanabe Yuuma she was seeing but Watanabe Mayu, an 18 yr old girl. To her expectancy, she wasn't expecting a neat and cute girl but umm.. ragged ? She despised Mayu until now. Seems like Mayu earned some points

" Hmm, okay. You got your demand. See ? You got to see me as a girl. " Mayu said as she crossed her arms and a smirk appeared on her face

" Y-Yeahh.. " Yuki blushed. Mayu went closer and closer to Yuki's face " Heh. And you will see more of it. " Her smirk grew wider

" Wh-what're you talking about ?! " Yuki's eyes widened

" Pfftch. Dirty-minded. " Mayu paced back and forth before she did a thinking pose and looked at Yuki

" What ? "

" Hmm... Do you have any objections, requests, demands, before we start ? "

" YES ! I don't wanna live here ! I don't wanna be your slave ! and I demand you to tie me off this chair ! " Yuki felt a buzz spread throughout her body. " ITTAI ! " she shouted and touched her neck as the tattoo glowed Green

" Hahaha ! " Mayu laughed " Stupid girl ! Didn't I warn you to obey me ? " Mayu smiled

" Aish ! I don't know anymore ! " tears started to fall down from Yuki's eyes. As for Mayu, always having a passionate side, she walked up to Yuki and knelt down so that she can face her eye-lvl contact. To Yuki's surprise, Mayu wiped Yuki's tears away " I'm sorry.. I've warned you so that you won't get hurt. Please, just obey me for once.Smile. " Mayu smiled a reassuring one

" This is your fault ! How can I smile ?! I'm deeply hurt ! I didn't sign up for this ! " Yuki squirmed as Mayu backed away coz' she was startled. Yuki looked at Mayu and she just stared at her blankly as Yuki continued to cry. Mayu had pity. She released Yuki from the chair and sat on her couch. " Okay. I've managed to grant all your requests. You can leave now, since you're not interested in this at all. " Mayu said as her face was full of regret and sadness

" R-Really ? You're letting me go ? " Yuki said

" Go away before I change my mind. " Mayu stood up and as she was about to go upstairs, a hand grabbed her wrist

" What do you want now ?? " Mayu glared at Yuki

" I've realized that you're not really just a Cyborg Doctor without a heart. You're more than that. So... I'll try to bear with you in this. " Yuki looked away blushing

" Pfftt... ha.. " Yuki looked at Mayu " What's so funny ? " Mayu burst out laughing " Then again, my Mind Games always work on you. " Mayu smirked " EH ?! " and at a flash of lightning,all the doors and windows are now locked " Woah ! H-How did you do that ?! "

" Well, sit. " Yuki sat down on the couch " Actually, I'm not normal. "

" I saw that when a Tattoo appeared on my neck. "

" Good. My father had tested me on one of his experiments, and now, I've become a person who can do almost everything "

" What ? "

" My brains are normal though... "

" You call your brains normal ?! You're super smart ! "

" I know. Anyway, about this slavery thing... Are you really up for it ? "

" Eh ? ... I guess.. "

" Then there's no turning back. Once you've agreed to my covenant, you are no longer meant to be freed. Your destiny has been changed to being a successor if ever something happens to me. You are now unable to do things on the will of the 7 Stains and the Stars. "

" Wait, what ? Explain slowly, please ! "

" Hmph.. That was slow. "

" That was slow to you ?! "

" Zip it or I'll make that tattoo extra painful when you do something against my will ! "

" Hai, hai~ "

" Ehemm.. That tattoo has many types. I have one too. " She showed Yuki one on her wrist that appeared magically " It's name is 'Nezumi'. Yours is 'Black'. It's a symbol that YOU are MY PROPERTY. That is the main reason why you can't go against me. My blood is combined with yours now. "

" Umm.. How exactly did this tattoo form ? "

" You see, my veil or venom has circulated throughout your body. Which means, you're now affected and you've become like me. Invincible. " Mayu smirked as she said the last word

" Ahh.. So umm 'Black' gave me a power ? "

" Yes. You have to discover that on your own though. Also, you can control to make it appear but you need training. "

" WHAAT ? So it appears anytime ?! "

" Well, no. It appears when you go against my will. "

" Oh, yeah, I knew that. " Yuki smiled sheepishly " What's the 7 Stains and Stars you we're talking about earlier ? "

" The 7 Stains are the things that made the Earth imperfect and bad. Very deadly to us. The deadly stains are; hypocrisy, questions, mysteries, changes and nothingness. "

" Those are only 5 ! "

" I'm not done, stupid. "

" Oh. "

" Those 5 stains are the most deadly ones. Hypocrisy; you shall not be false to yourself and I. Only be hypocrytic when you need to. Questions; To me questions are very very rude. Do not ask too much questions that are to obvious on what you're plotting. Mysteries; As I am now, I'm trying to solve mysteries. But you are not permitted to get involved in such mysteries. Changes; DO. NOT. EVER. CHANGE. Nothingness; .. unexplained on how it's so ironic but do not get into voids. Got it ? "

" What's a void ? " Yuki curiously asked

" A void is a black hole which people like us get sucked into. Basically, TRUST. Don't trust anyone except me. "

" Ehhh! " Once again, a buzz hit Yuki. " OUCH ! Wtf is with this Black thing ?! " she touched it again and it glowed Red. As she looked at Mayu, her eyes we're purple and some kind of sign was formed there and it disappeared. Back to it's original form

" What was that ??? "

" You don't trust me ? I read your mind and controlled Black to do that. You have to trust me. "

" Hai. Okay. I'll try. "

" Don't try. Do it. Anyway, there are 2 more Stains, correct ? First one is IMPERFECTION. Imperfection is perfection. "

" What ? Imperfection can't be perfect ! There's an IM there ! "

" Once, all the people we're perfect. Equal with greed, lust, pride and all of those. Until the Stains stained the world. People started to feel too confident of themselves and became too Perfect that they became Imperfect. Therefore, Imperfection is Perfection. "

" You're really smart. I don't think I'll get along with these stuff "

" Don't worry. You'll get to it, soon. Last one is Love. " Mayu said as she blushed to the word love

" Ehh ?! Love is a Stain ?! "

" Yes. Well, Love is... love. Nothing more, nothing less. I only know that love is the only thing that really hurts the most. That is why, you shall not fall in the hands of LOVE. "

" Mayu, have you ever been in love ? "

" No. I don't believe in love. It's... stupid. "

Yuki sighed " You'll get to it soon, Mayu. "

" Oh, a tip. Black cannot overcome Love. The only stain it doesn't react to. I don't know why though. I didn't do too much research on love "

" Why not ? "

" I might fall in love. To know love you have to experience it, right ? "

" Yeah "

" And I don't want to fall in love. Enough about that love and shit, let's move on to the Stars. "

" Hmm are those the stars in the night sky ? "

" No. These stars are different. There are 7 for the basics. Have you noticed Black glows into different colors when you go against the Stains or my will ? "

" YEAH ! "

" Those are the Stars. They are colors. 7 colors, 7 stars. There are a lot of Stars, really but.. It's complicated to tell you. You wouldn't understand. "

" Hey ! You saying I'm stupid ? "

" What do you think ? "

" .... "

" There. You should learn to answer your own questions. Questions is a Stain. "

" AHH ! I forgot about that ! "

" Hmph. Anyway, the colors you may encounter are Red, Purple, Blue, White, Green, Yellow, Orange and Black. Each one symbolizes a Star. "

" Ahhh.. "

" I think you had a lesson from school about the meaning of the colors, right ? "

" Uh-huh. "

" Good. You may know and there's no need for me to explain. Last information, the colors we're invented at 1666 by Isaac Newton. 666 is the devil's number which means Stars are bad things. Avoid them. "


" Okay. "


" I've explained to you all the things you needed to know. Now, I'll tell you my objective. "
 
" I'm all ears. "


" My objective is to make Imperfection REAL PERFECTION. "


" What ? How are you gonna do that ?? "


" I've collected a lot of data. From Businessmen to Yakuzas who want to do the same thing. Only a few are left now, since I've assasinated them all. "


" You kill people ?! And you're a Forensic Pathologist ?! "


" Yes. I'm not the Justice type of person. I just want to fool the law. "


" You are really a smart kid. "


" Oh, yes, I am. And I want you to help me carry out my objective, Yuki. "


" Since I've agreed to this, ... Okay. I'll follow what you'll say. "


Mayu sat on Yuki's lap facing her " What a clever and cute dog, indeed. Obeying and following what's right is good, Yukirin~ " Mayu smirked and kissed Yuki again. Yuki's eyes widened but unlike their last kiss shared, this one was full of feelings. A passionate kiss. It felt good. So she kissed back unknowingly. After some time, Mayu pulled back.


" Yuki, if you finish the tasks I give you, you might just get rewards from me. " Mayu winked at her seductively and stood up leaving Yuki wondering about what she said.


" Yuki, I guess that would be all. Ah ! By the way, remember when I said I'd take you home with me ? "


" Y-yeah ? "


" Your luggage is in your room. Next to mine. " Mayu smiled and went to the kitchen


Yuki sighed " I guess... being a slave isn't as bad as it seems, eh ? " Yuki smiled.



A/N : 7 Stains - Made up by me lolol Are somewhat like 7 Capital Sins
7 Stars - Also made by me like the sins effect after the 7 Capital Sins

Too long ?  :on lol:  Hope you guys understood Mayuyu's explanation  :hiakhiakhiak:


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Offline yuukimoko

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ahhh~ that was lovely~~~~~!!!!!!! XD XD XD XD XD


so Mayu doesnt want to fall in love? ohh~ you cant do that! Yuki is too lovable~ :wub:

it was soooooo interesting!!!!!!!! XD XD XD XD

please update tomorrow~!!!!! I cant wait to read more~ this chapter wa delicous!!!! :inlove: :inlove: :inlove:

I want more~~ :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub:
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Yuki, make Mayu fall in love with you!!!!

Actually I agree with Mayu lol except for one bit.

Love is stupid unless it's between the pairings we ship.

Mayu is really mysterious herself...

Kissing people so passionately and saying that love is stupid???!!!

Either she's really tsundere or just a player. (Tsundere and allegedly smart genius image? Gap Moe hint hint.)

What will Mayu make Yuki do??

Rewards?!!!

And yes, I might hijack your fics and drop really subtle hints from time to time.XD

I'm really interested how this fic will end up!!

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Despite hoping to understand Mayu's explanation, I gotta admit it's heavy. :lol: I even reread the prologue to connect what she explained and the premise.
But I haven't fully grasped it.. the mystery is thick, which is thrilling! :D (and mystery is a Stain? -got buzzed-  :lol:)

, yet it's definitely needed to be open.. those mysteries, and so I'm waiting for next updates. :D
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Yuki is Mayu's slave  :wahaha:
Mayu don't believe in love and she think it's stupid  :stoned:
Mayu can do anything to her  :kekeke:
your fic is really interesting  :glasses:
even Mayu doesn't believe in love she still kiss Yuki  :shy2:
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" Yuki, if you finish the tasks I give you, you might just get rewards from me. " Mayu winked at her seductively
I can't wait for that moment  :ding:
update soon please  :on gay:

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