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Re: miyumi's OS collection!!! update New Opportunities
« Reply #280 on: May 24, 2013, 05:00:37 AM »
KumiYuriNon:  New Opportunities 

Interesting.. OS...

KumiYuriNon are so great together...

They really love each other so much...

And they have opportunities to be idols like in AKB... but in SKE

Thank you for the OS

Can't wait to see more OS

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Re: miyumi's OS collection!!! update New Opportunities
« Reply #281 on: May 24, 2013, 06:43:14 PM »
Miyumi saaaan.. Thankyou so much :bow: :bow: at first i thought this os would become angst story.. BUT! yeay..! Me happy to see they three become close like that :heart: >w<)/ yuria as the oldest? Me hardly cant imagine it.. XD kuumin~ so cute... <3

Miyumi san.. Ano, can you make akigon? Or sasshicha? But me want the angst one~ fufufu.. Gomen for so much request ;A;

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Re: miyumi's OS collection!!! update Draw with Me
« Reply #282 on: May 30, 2013, 03:50:21 AM »
Minna this is an OS my girlfriend requested so I hope you guys like it! Oh and fuu_kun don't worry I'm working on yours it's just you know gotta do what the bosslady says nee?
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Saeyaka: Draw with Me

Once upon a time there was a wall that separated two different worlds. It was a clear glass wall that no one could ever get through. Not many people go to the wall so no one usually never goes there. However there was on young girl who went there everyday to sit against the walls and forget the daily stresses of her life. Things were not the best with her life so she needed a place where she felt safe and wouldn't be bothered by annoying people. One day the girl was walking towards the wall when suddenly she saw something she usually never saw. There standing on the other side of the glass was another person. It was a girl like herself and when the girl saw her, she waved hello with a bright smile. The girl walked over and tried speaking to her but the other girl couldn't hear her. Therefore, the girl pulled out two black markers and with one she wrote,

"Can you write?"

The girl threw the other marker over the wall to the other girl who wrote,

"Of course duh."

The girl responded and said,

"How about drawing?" with a little chibi face of her next to it.

The other girl responded and said sure with a drawing of herself with a large chest. As a joke the girl drew a flat chest and said the other one looked like that. The other girl blushed and the girl laughed and then wrote,

"My name is Sayaka. What is yours?"

"Sae." the other girl wrote.

"Nice to meet you Sae."

"Nice to meet you Sayaka.'

From that moment on the two would always meet everyday and draw on the wall. They would make all kinds of cute little scribbles and drawings. They would write each other messages and tell each other stories through drawings. Turns out Sae had just as a troubling life as Sayaka. Sae lives with three older brothers and her mother is ill so she has to do all the work. She has to do the laundry and cook for her brothers. Sayaka on the other hand lived with a poor family and had to constantly work in order to pay for all the bills. The two both had it rough and knew that life wasn't easy for them. They continued to write and draw until one day Sayaka had showed up with a sad expression on her face. She wrote how her parents were kicked out of their home and had no where else to go. Sae felt sorry and tried to cheer her up by drawing silly things but it didn't seem to work for Sayaka. She raised her hand and pressed it against the glass. Sae held hers up and placed it in the same spot as Sae. Sayaka frowned and wrote,

"It's cold."

There was an awkward moment of silence between the two and then Sayaka wrote,

"I want to be with you."

Sae responded by writing,

"You are with me only there's a glass between us."

Seeing this angered Sayaka and made her stand up. Then with all her might she started punching the glass trying to break through. Sae tried to make her stop but Sayaka didn't stop and she just kept pounding over and over until suddenly there was a crack. Sayaka made Sae move out of the way as she continued to punch it. Then suddenly the glass shattered and Sayaka's hand broke through. However just as it looked like the glass had been broken, the wall repaired itself and in the end Sayaka's hand was injured. Her hand was so bloody and cut up that she ran away in hopes of trying to save it.

The next day Sae was waiting for Sayaka at the same spot and soon after Sayaka came over with a bandage and cast on her left arm. Sae pulled out a marker and wrote,

"Are you ok?"

Sayaka nodded her head yes so Sae wrote,

"Wanna draw?"

Sayaka pulled out her marker and wrote in bad hand writing,

"I can't anymore."

Apparently Sayaka was left handed and she completely destroyed her left hand only leaving her right. For the rest of the day, the two sat in silence not saying a thing. Then the next day, Sayaka arrived to find a box on her side of the wall. Sae had written the box was for her so Sayaka walked over and opened the box. When she had opened the box she couldn't believe what was in it and she fell back. There in the box was a left arm. She looked over at Sae who was wearing a cloak but then took it off revealing her left arm was gone. Sae was right handed so with her write hand she wrote,

"Draw with me."

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Re: miyumi's OS collection!!! update Draw with Me
« Reply #283 on: May 30, 2013, 04:09:04 AM »
It was a combination of cute and creepy at the same time :P

It is a wonderful story especially with  Sae's genkiness.  Other than that, pure creepiness :nervous
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Re: miyumi's OS collection!!! update Draw with Me
« Reply #284 on: May 30, 2013, 04:31:28 AM »
nice OS  :twothumbs

btw, can i request you to make atsumina fanfic?  :bow:

sorry, im bad at english  :nervous

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Re: miyumi's OS collection!!! update Draw with Me
« Reply #285 on: May 30, 2013, 08:34:50 AM »
Well their friendship was so cute and sweet...

But it became creepy right at the end....

Sae giving her hand to Sayaka... so Sayaka could draw and write again...

Great OS and thank you for the video too...

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Re: miyumi's OS collection!!! update Draw with Me
« Reply #286 on: May 30, 2013, 08:38:40 AM »
It is better than I expected~ so cool~

I can really sense the bond within them, and their friendship is really nice~

The ending...  :shocked

Sae did a nice action even if it was kinda creepy...

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Re: miyumi's OS collection!!! update Draw with Me
« Reply #287 on: May 30, 2013, 01:10:40 PM »
OMG, I love it!!! :cathappy:

Plus, there's a sequel with the same characters, "Draw with me: I love you."

PLEASE~ do a sequel!!!!! :heart: :bow:
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Re: miyumi's OS collection!!! update Draw with Me
« Reply #288 on: May 30, 2013, 03:42:16 PM »
@Rukaeru: you get irritated easily~  XD

I asked her to write BlackGeki angst, but also I said I want to read some Saeyaka bonding~ and Also another one...  :nervous Well... it's not like I make her write it... It's more like...she knows the reasons :DDD she's fine with it, dun worry... We're having fun here...writing and reading...

Some of course have fun bashing... Oh well, let them be  :lol:

@Miyu: Nee, Miyu...I thank Ruka for reminding me I asked you to write BlackGeki angst...write it after your exams, okay? Whenever you have free time... I know you love to spoil me, but you have to do your best with your studies so we can relaxe together later~
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Re: miyumi's OS collection!!! update Music from the Heart
« Reply #289 on: May 30, 2013, 06:06:16 PM »
Well here is the other story my girlfriend asked for so I hope everyone likes it!
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AtsuYuu: Music from the Heart

My name is Oshima Yuko and I'm a student at a school for music. I've played the piano since I was a kid and have kept playing ever since. I don't know why I started but I guess it's just what fits me. The piano is a way of self expression for me. It lets me sing out my emotions in anyway I choose. The piano is like an attachment of me and I'm happy I have it. There are many different kinds if students here who play different kinds of instruments. However there is one student that stuck out to me more than the others. That girl was Maeda Atsuko and she was a strange one. She didn't play any instrument and wasn't in the dancing department. I thought she was a singer but I guess she wasn't a good one since she wasn't in any of the high ranking singing classes. She's basically the one girl who has no musical talent. I've never really talked to Atsuko before. Usually she never shows up around campus because most of the time I see her she's being bullied. Now I hate seeing bullying since I was bullied myself so whenever she was in trouble I would help her out. Every time I asked her of she was ok she would just get up and walk away.

Today I was on my way to lunch when I saw the line was really long and I was starving. I didn't want to wait forever but I was still really hungry. My stomach growled loudly to where I thought everyone could hear it. I decided that maybe if I waited out I could get in line. I walked over and sat at a chair and waited for the line to go down. After a half hour the line finally shrunk but when I got in line, my lunch break was almost over. My stomach growled once more and I knew that I was probably going to have to go throughout the day on an empty stomach again. I sighed and was about to walk away when suddenly there was a light tap on my shoulder. Turning around, I was surprised to see Atsuko standing there staring at me.

Atsuko reached into her bag and pulled out a small bento box. She handed it to me and smiled not saying a word. I didn't know what to say but then the bell rang saying class was about to begin. I gave her a quick thanks and ran. I barely made it to class in time but when I arrived I started to eat the lunch Atsuko have me. Turns out it was really good and the food was incredible! I would have to thank her later after cleaning the box. When class ended I went home and cleaned the bento box. The next day I packed a lunch in it and then headed off for school. When I arrived at a school I found Atsuko sitting on a bench by a tree reading a book. I walked over and handed her the bento box and said,

"Thank you for the food yesterday. I packed a new lunch inside for you."

Atsuko nodded her head and took the lunch box. I looked at my watch and saw that I had a lot of spare time before class so maybe I could hang out with Atsuko for a while. This would be a great opportunity to get to know her after all. I sat next to Atsuko and pulled out a music book. I started to read it for a while but then I felt something breathing down my neck. I looked over and saw Atsuko staring at my book. I was a little surprised seeing how close she was to me but I liked her scent. It was a nice smell of watermelon and cherries. I leaned a little closer and together we read the book for a good hour. Then the bell rang indicating it was time for me to go. I told Atsuko we should meet up sometime and go out. She smiled and nodded her head in agreement. We exchanged numbers and then I left for class. I have to say that for my first impression of Atsuko is pretty good. She's very nice and kind and smells good. I think I like her!

After class I sent a message to Atsuko to meet me at the same place we were in the morning. When I got there she was there waiting for me. I asked her where she wanted to go and she pulled out a flyer for an ice cream shop. I told her we could go so together we walked to the ice cream shop. There we ordered ice cream and sat down. Atsuko and I ate in silence and I was surprised she wasn't saying anything. I would think she would talk but really it was just complete silence. I decided to break the ice and say,

"So what do you like about music?"

Atsuko didn't say anything. She just looked down and continued to eat.

"Well to me music is really nice. I love the sound and the tone. All the pretty melodies and songs you can make. Music really is a wonderful thing don't you think?"

Atsuko smiled and nodded her head.

"I play the piano you know? Would you like to come home and hear me play sometime?"

Atsuko nodded her head again and then pulled out a napkin. She leaned in really close to me and wiped my face that had some ice cream on it. I didn't even know I was blushing until Atsuko pulled back and I could feel the heat on my cheeks. She giggled and placed a little cream from her ice cream and placed it on my nose. I took some chocolate and smeared it on her face. The next thing I knew we were having our own little ice cream war and in the end Atsuko won. After the ice cream I decided to take home. We said our goodbyes and and then I left the night feeling a weird fuzzy feeling. I wonder if I was starting to like Atsuko. The next day I arrived to school and found Atsuko sitting alone in a room crying. When I asked her what was wrong she didn't say anything. When I tried to held she pushed me back. Tears were running down her face as she sat there and cried. I looked over and saw that some of her books had been thrown onto the ground. I picked them up and saw there were several books on singing.

"You wanna be a singer Atsuko?"

Atsuko snatched the books from me and pulled back. She got up and tried to run but I grabbed her by her wrists.

"Atsuko tell me what's wrong."

Atsuko shook her head no and tried to run once more but I held her still. I pulled her into one of the piano rooms and sat her down in a chair. I told her not to move and to just try to calm down. Then I walked over to the piano and sat down on the bench. Then using my hands I played a little song that always cheered me up when I was little. Joplin's "Entertainer" was the very first song I ever learned. It was fun to play every time and always managed to make a smile on someone's face. I looked over at Atsuko and saw she had stopped crying. As I continued to play she had settled down and was now actually starting to laugh and smile. When I finished the song, she clapped for me and I thanked her. Then I walked over and sat next to her and asked,

"Feeling better?"

She nodded yes and wiped the rest of her tears away. I pulled out a handkerchief and wiped away the some of her leftover tears and then asked,

"Nee why don't you talk to me?"

Atsuko was silent and then she held her head down. She was going to run but I grabbed her hand and said,

"Tell me Atsuko. I swear I won't tell anyone if its something bad."

Atsuko sighed and then reached into her bag. She pulled out a sketch pad and and a marker and then wrote,

"I can't talk."

"Why?"

"I was in an accident when I was little."

"What accident?"

"A man slit my throat but I survived."

Reading that, an extreme feeling of guilt hit my heart. I felt like I had hit a wound that Atsuko didn't like picking at. I apologized for asking her but she said it was ok and wrote,

"I really like your music. It sounds so pretty."

"Thank you." I said.

"You want to be a pianist right?" she wrote.

"Yes that's right."

"Well I hope you do well. I want to become a singer so I came to this school to try to use my voice again. The teachers here help me a lot and I think I've actually been good. But then there are the other singers who think I'm not good enough and I'm just another handicap. They say I'll fail and to be honest... I think I'm starting to believe them."

"Oi don't listen to that bull crap!" I said.

I guess is scared Atsuko because she dropped her marker. I picked it up and handed it back to her.

"Don't listen to the hate Atsuko. They're just jealous because they're afraid you'll do better than them. Hey how about I hear you sing?"

"Eh? You really want to?" Atsuko wrote.

"Yes I do."

"But it sounds bad and might make your ears bleed!"

"I don't care I want to hear you sing."

"Well ok..."

Atsuko stood up and took a deep breath. Then she opened her mouth and what I heard next I wasn't sure but whatever it was it was beautiful. Her voice was like the angles singing from heaven. She had everything a professional singer had from pitch to tone. It sounded smooth and natural. Her singing was very beautiful. However soon after there was something that sounded like a crack and Atsuko stopped singing. Instead she bent down and started coughing violently. I ran to her side and helped her back up. When she finally settled down she wrote,

"See? It's bad..."

"Are you kidding me?! You sounded great!"

Atsuko looked at me astounded and I just smiled and said.

"You have to do a song with me."

From that moment on Atsuko and I spent everyday working on a song to perform at the annual school concert. We worked really hard thinking of the right tunes and melodies. Not to mention the lyrics that had to go with the song. It took us two weeks before we finally got it just in time for the show. Together, Atsuko and I walked out onto the stage and people were surprised to see Atsuko there. I took my seat and then started to play the piano. The song started out slow and sad saying the beginning of Atsuko's life. She sang of her tragic past and her feelings at the time as she watched her dreams be crushed before her. When I looked out I thought I saw a couple people tearing up. The song moved onto the middle where it told how she struggled to work up to where she was today. How her and I worked hard and then I finished the song with a big end and Atsuko held a long note that slowly quieted. When we finished the song, the crowd was dead silent. Then someone stood up and cheered for us. Soon after the entire audience cheered and shouted congratulating us on such a good performance. I looked at Atsuko and she looked at me and we both knew that today we made a difference.

Another year went by and then I eventually I graduated from the school. I never saw Atsuko for another three years and I had to say a lot of things changed in my life. My hand was crushed in an accident so I couldn't play piano anymore. I was pretty sad but I wasn't going to let that stop me so I looked for something else in the world of performing arts. There was a new group starting called ABK48 who was looking for members. I auditioned and I passed somehow and now I'm in the group. I walked into the studio with the other members where we could meet them. I was standing alone when suddenly I felt a light tap on my shoulder.

"Yuko!"

"Atsuko?"

"Yuko it's so good to see you!" Atsuko said.

"Atsuko you can talk!" I said.

"Yes after you left I kept practicing and seeing the doctors everyday. Now I can talk and sing as freely as I want."

"Ah well that's great Atsuko I'm so happy for you."

"How are you Yuko? Have you still been playing the piano?"

"Oh no I lost the ability in an accident. It's ok though because now I'm gonna work hard to be an idol."

"That's too bad but how about we both work hard and become the best of the best!"

"Yeah so lets get going then ok?"

"Yes!"

After our first practice, Atsuko and I walked home and we settled in my place. We sat down and had some tea and talked. Then suddenly Atsuko got up and got on top of me. I looked at her with a little blush and slightly confused. Then she kissed my lips and said,

"That is my thank you."

"For what?" I asked.

"For everything you've done for me. Without you I would be here. You've done so much for me..."

Atsuko moved in and kissed my neck sending chills down my back. I made Atsuko face me and said,

"I did nothing Atsuko. I just helped you start your dreams."

"No you did much more. You helped me and I'm so happy for that. I'm so thankful and I just don't know what to do. How to repay you for the kindness you showed me back then."

"Then how about you be with me?"

"Eh?"

I grabbed Atsuko by the waist and pulled her in for a kiss.

"I love you Atsuko. Ever since the day I met you I knew I loved you. So how about you stay with me and we can be together."

Atsuko was quiet and then she smiled and said,

"I love you too Yuko."

From that moment on Atsuko and I were together as a couple. We loved each other very much and would do all kinds if things. The one thing we loved doing the most was making music. We would sing and play all kinds of music filled with different stories and tales. Music was what brought us together and music is what makes us happy. However even though all music is good, the best kind of music is music from the heart.

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Well there's that and now I have more OS's to work on! After exams though ok everyone?

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Re: miyumi's OS collection!!! update Music from the Heart
« Reply #290 on: May 30, 2013, 06:39:40 PM »
Wonderful story! :thumbsup

Atsuko and Yuko ended up together :) A friend once told me that, what a small world everyone are connected, in such a way, fate is playing together with us.

I guess.. Even though we turned the world upside down if that person meant for you.. Then he/she is! Plus with a playful fate that makes our life not boring..

Oh! Sorry for my random thoughts  :nervous Just carried away because of the story.. So sweet!

Thank you for the story you'd shared :bow:
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Re: miyumi's OS collection!!! update Music from the Heart
« Reply #291 on: May 30, 2013, 06:41:24 PM »
Honey.... That was BRILLIANT!!!

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AtsuYuu~~ Nyaha~~  :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :inlove: :inlove: :inlove:

Such a nice and sweet story~

Yes, work on your exams now and then you can work on those OSs  :)

Ah, I'm gonna read it once again... I can't stop squealing!!!  :nervous :inlove: :inlove: :deco: :deco:
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Re: miyumi's OS collection!!! update Music from the Heart
« Reply #292 on: May 30, 2013, 07:02:43 PM »
Incredible story

Yuko took her out of her shell and got her into the spotlight but it came with the sacrifice of Yuko's hand

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Re: miyumi's OS collection!!! update Music from the Heart
« Reply #293 on: May 30, 2013, 10:11:40 PM »
Wow... I didn't check this for a week and then I checked it this morning
I found lots of OS s to read~ <3
And then just then, I read that AtsuYuu and I was so happy~~~

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« Reply #294 on: May 30, 2013, 10:26:51 PM »
Le little me want to read a Atsumina or a WMatsui or JuriMayu lé please  :shy2: :kneelbow:
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Re: miyumi's OS collection!!! update Music from the Heart
« Reply #295 on: May 31, 2013, 11:40:45 AM »
Ah... Yuko was so nice to Atsuko...

Always be there for her.. until she can stand up for herself...

Unfortunately... Yuko lost her ability to play piano...

Ah... Yuko so brave and never give up...

Yuko and Atsuko became AKB members

And confess to each other...

So nice... very great drama story there...

Thank you for the OS

Can't wait to see more

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Re: miyumi's OS collection!!! update All for You
« Reply #296 on: May 31, 2013, 09:10:28 PM »
Well exams aren't going well but I got through the first part. I wanted to relieve some stress so I came here and wrote the OS my girlfriend requested. Now I'll work on the others once my head quits pounding. Be patient guys I'm working as hard as I can!
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BlackGeki: All for You

Somewhere in a dark room, a monster sleeps there humbly without any disturbances. The monster was unattached from the world and everything was silent. Then suddenly the sound of cage doors opened and two heavy men came in. They grabbed the monster by the arms and lifted it up onto its feet. Then the men pushed the monster out of its cage and down into the halls. The sound of chains clinked and clanked around the monster’s ankles to keep it from running and the chains on its writs kept it from fighting. The monster was wrapped in a straightjacket to prevent it from moving the upper body at all and there was a nuzzle over its mouth to keep it from biting. The guards pushed the monster into a small room with two chairs. They sat the monster down onto the chair and then chained its legs to it. The guards then stepped to the side as a woman walked in. She had long black hair and a busty figure with sexy curves and doll like makeup. No one would think the woman was an investigator. She sat down in the chair across the monster and then set multiple folders on the table. She faced the monster with a cold stare and then said,

“So where shall we start?”

The monster stared at the investigator with an empty stare. As if the monster was not with the world. The investigator ordered the guards to remove the mouth guard as well as the straightjacket. The guards did so but there still were chains around the monster’s arms. She then ordered the guards to wait outside and so they did. Now it was just the investigator and the monster who were alone in the room. There was an awkward silence until suddenly the investigator said,

“How about we take a trip down memory lane.”

She pulled out one of the folders and then and opened. She opened a single photo and placed it on the table. There in the photo was the picture of two dead people. They had been brutally murdered and the culprit was never found until years later. The investigator shot a look of disgust at the monster and then said,

“Do you know who these two people are?”

The monster remained silent not saying a thing.

“Those people were your parents. You killed them in what the police said was the most gruesome thing they had ever seen. You killed your mother with a knife and you beat your father with a pipe. You killed the people who brought you into this Earth. No one knew why but all they said was that it was horrible.”

The monster still did not speak and the investigator decided to try something else. She pulled out more photos and showed them to the monster.

“How about these people? All these kids were your classmates back in highschool and what did you do? You killed them. What was the point in that? They were just kids!”

The monster didn’t say anything but a small smile appeared across her face. This started to anger the investigator who opened another folder and showed it to her.

“You see this? These weren’t even high school kids but primary school kids! You killed their teacher with a branch stabbing it through her mouth and down through her diaphragm. Then to make things worse you hung her body from a tree and made all the kids sit under it as her blood dripped onto their bodies. Ever since those kids have suffered serious mental problems today!”

The monster did not utter a word as a small giggle escaped from her mouth. The investigator pulled out another file with an old couple.

“You tied these two to a car and drove ten meters dragging their bodies into the ground!”

The monster smiled more as it remembered that day when it had killed the old couple. The investigator had almost had enough and decided to pull out her secret weapon. She pulled out a photo from her wallet and showed it to the monster.

“And this.. This was my little sister… The one you kidnapped and tortured for days before finally killing her!”

The monster finally showed signs of life. A smile stretched across her face and a creepy giggle filled the room. The monster looked up and said,

“Hey… You mad?”

The investigator slapped the monster’s face and said,

“Don’t play games with me! Tell me where you hid her body! Where did you put Mayu’s body!!”

The monster licked the inside of her mouth tasting the smallest flavor of iron. Her smile grew wider as she looked up at the investigator and said,

“I’m not playing any games Black.”

The investigator froze when she heard that name. She reached out and grabbed the monster’s neck and squeezed it tightly. The monster just grinned and the investigator grew angry. Then remembering why she summoned the monster, she let go. The monster coughed a little but was laughing. The investigator slammed her fist on the table and said,

“Tell me where you hid the bodies Gekikara.”

The monster stopped laughing and looked up with a playful gaze.

“You haven’t called me that in a long time Black.”

“Don’t call me Black. It’s Yuki. Black is gone.” the investigator said.

“Oh come on. I know she’s in there. The silent yet deadly fighter that stuck fear into all her victims when they heard your name. I know she’s in there.”

“Shut up Gekikara!”

The monster just laughed and said,

“You really have changed since back then. You know if it weren’t for your voice, I probably wouldn’t know who you were.”

“Things change Gekikara. You and I both know that.” the investigator said.

“Yes. Although I don’t think Mayu will be changing anytime soon.”

“You tell me where she is now!”

The investigator stood up and walked over to the monster. She grabbed her by the head and slammed her into the wall several time before slapping her once more and then setting her back down. The investigator pulled out another picture and showed it to her.

“What happened to you? What happened to Rena? The Rena I used to know back in high school who was happy and cheerful. Weak but very kind. What happened to that Rena?!”

The investigator pointed to a picture of a girl who was supposedly the monster when she was younger. Seeing that picture disgusted the monster and made her spit at it. The investigator slapped the monster once more and said,

“Tell me where she is.”

The monster laughed and said,

“Nee you know what this reminds of? The day when I first met you. You were weak and scared of the world. You had no one to care for you no one to protect you. It was just you and your little sister who cared more about herself than you. Do you remember Yuki? You were sitting alone on a bench crying when I walked over and offered you help.”

“I do remember Gekikara but that was in the past. Back when you were a kinder person and not some monster!”

“Perhaps. Then do you remember back in high school all the kids who would bully you? They picked on you because you were weak and when you needed someone no one would come. Only I was there for you.”

“Yes I do. This has nothing to do with my question though. Where is the body of my sister? Where did you put her?!”

“I put her somewhere far far away where you’ll never find her. She’s gone Yuki so it’s time to move on.”

“Shut up you piece of trash! You’re on death row so there is nothing you can do to save yourself so you might as well confess. At least your punishment in hell won’t be as bad.”

“Hell? HAHA this is hell Black! We’re living in it every day we just haven’t noticed it yet!”

The monster laughed and giggled as the investigator started to beat the monster repeatedly making her bleed from her mouth and nose. The monster however didn’t feel the pain and just kept laughing and laughing until suddenly the other guards came in and pulled the investigator back. They were about to take the monster back but then it escaped from its chains and quickly rushed over to the investigator. It pinned her down and stared at her with a serious look. Then something appeared on the monster that the investigator thought she would never see. The monster smiled a genuine smile and not one of its twisted smiles. The monster smiled a smile of kindness and care at the investigator who was shocked. The monster leaned in and said,

“She’s still alive. She’s in the old shed we used to run away together when we were kids remember?”

The monster pulled back and then took some of its blood and wiped it on the investigators face. It smiled once more before the guards grabbed her and threw it onto the ground. There they beat it and then made it get up and leave the room.

“There’s only one place you’re going and that’s hell!” the guard said.

The guards took the monster away and the investigator was left speechless. When she finally got herself back together, she hurried to the place the monster mentioned. There chained to the wall was the investigator’s sister who was so happy to see her. The investigator took her sister home where the two spent a lot of time together catching up. As the two were cuddling together on the couch the little sister handed a note to the investigator. She was told by the monster to give it to the investigator when she found her. The investigator opened the note and began to read. At the same time the monster was being led to the room where they killed monster. As it walked down the halls for the last time, it guessed that the investigator was reading the note right about now.

“If you’re reading this then that means you’ve found your sister. Congrats Yuki you found Mayu! Bet you’re surprised I didn’t kill her nee? Well she is your sister and I couldn’t take away the only thing you had left in the world. I may be a monster but I’m not that bad of one. Nee do you wanna know why I changed into who I am now? Do you wanna know why I killed all those people? Well it was because I did it for you.”

The monster was now being led into the room where there was a single chair with several restraints. The monster was sat in the chair and the guards started to tie on the restraints.

“The primary school teacher was your old teacher back in primary school. She didn’t like you because you were different from the other kids. She let the little kids pick on you and she was stand there and laugh at you. I hated her because of that so I came back and killed her. Those kids in high school were the ones in our class. They were the ones who bullied you and picked on you because you were weak. I hated them for hurting you so I gave them a little taste of the pain you endured.”

The guards had finished tying the restraints and now the relatives of the victims were gathering to watch the execution.

“The old couple was your grandparents remember? Ever since your parents died they took you and your sister in. However they didn’t really love you. They only took you in for money from the government and otherwise didn’t care about you at all. They actually hated you and your sister and I couldn’t take it! I killed them because they had what was coming to them.”

All the people had gathered and now the prison guard took his position at the kill switch. It was only a matter of time before he pulled the switch.

“Then your sister… Your sister was a horrible child. She stole from you and used you thinking that you were nothing. She would always be out with some guy staying out and making you worry. Then when she needed you, you would do it without any complaints. You even posed for a porno magazine where she sold your pictures for money. She was just using her and I hated seeing you suffer so much. That’s why I kidnapped her and took her to our old hideout. There I made her learn what it is like to suffer and now I don’t think she’ll be bothering you anymore. I made her a good girl so I think she will treat you with the love and respect you deserve. If she doesn’t then I’ll come back from hell and drag her down with me myself! Sounds fun nee? Haha life is so fun to play with but all the lives I threw away well… I did it for the person I cared about the most. The one I loved. You.”

A single tear fell from the monster’s eye as the prison guard began to pull the switch. The monster closed its eyes and smiled as its life was but to an end.

“I did it Yuki… All for you…”

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Well hope you guys liked it. Let me know what you think and again I'm working on the others so stay tuned for more coming soon!

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Re: miyumi's OS collection!!! update All for You
« Reply #297 on: May 31, 2013, 09:20:52 PM »
I really like this story and the reasoning behind the kidnapping and the murders

Yuki could have stopped it but it was too late to prevent the damage that was leveled on society :nervous
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Re: miyumi's OS collection!!! update All for You
« Reply #298 on: May 31, 2013, 10:29:31 PM »
Miyu honey, thank you for this SPLENDID OS!!  :mon love:

I kind of guessed right in the very beginning that Gekikara either didn't kill them or killed them for Yuki... Ah, this angst is so good~

The way Yuki changed... I realize it is a huge change..changing from Black to being a police investigator...going against the one who was always there for you...

In a way it is really cruel... But I get it...coz Geki was killing people even if she did that for Yuki it was still taking lives away...

That letter...I would have teared up if I had read this kind of letter written for me... I'd probably call them in the middle of the letter and say to stop their actions for some moment and then run there and kiss her - at least ya know if you can't save her you can show how you feel... say that you are thankful... If Yuki was thankful of course...

So Geki loved her...not surprised...

This angst was good and I enjoyed it a lot~ I hope you get well soon... Do not dare to write now, coz your dizziness might get worse... Take care of yourself!!

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Re: miyumi's OS collection!!! update All for You
« Reply #299 on: May 31, 2013, 10:43:34 PM »
very awesome and amazing...
sad... Geki dies in the end?
it was all for Yuki... sad...
it seemed pretty gruesome, but it was... epic...
well, i guess the parents were just a different matter, but everything else was for Yuki?

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