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Re: Narcissistic VS Obsessed! (Mayuki, Wmatsui) Chapter 9: Reverse!
« Reply #80 on: August 22, 2012, 06:07:44 PM »
I just didn't onl for a few days and you updated a new fic????? Even up to chapter 9 lolol

Btw good story xDDDD I was so shocked when finish chapter 8 lol, who'd know Yuki and Rena are lovers xD

Im glad to see you continued, but if you ended in chapter8 is still ok, I'm really satisfied xp

And yes, I support Yuki and Rena in this fic, even I'm Mayuki shipper :p

Thank you, i love it XD

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Re: Narcissistic VS Obsessed! (Mayuki, Wmatsui) Chapter 9: Reverse!
« Reply #81 on: August 22, 2012, 06:44:47 PM »
I was so shock! What a twist!! You really make it good! Interesting storyline in so many way XD

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Re: Narcissistic VS Obsessed! (Mayuki, Wmatsui) Chapter 9: Reverse!
« Reply #82 on: August 22, 2012, 06:55:27 PM »
I'm with you Mayuyu and Jurina don't give up!!!!

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Re: Narcissistic VS Obsessed! (Mayuki, Wmatsui) Chapter 9: Reverse!
« Reply #83 on: August 22, 2012, 07:59:15 PM »
'Love has no limits huh....'
'yes, Rena and Yuki love each other even if they are sisters....'
'...I want to kidnap Yukirin...'
'....'
'...then rape her..'
'....'
'then chain her to me, put a collar on her neck with shocks when she doesnt listen to me, then to make her take my virginity ,then eat chocolate from my body, then suck like a kid from her amasing chest, then embrass her in front of her sister, then mak-------'
'.....Mayu.....I didnt need to know...'

                                                                      Chapter 10: Not away for a second?!

The first day was supposed to be calm, Yuki and Rena hoping that the two wont start from the first day as they wanted to enjoy each others company a little more before something happens.But these where just their hopes, because at 8 o'clock in the morning Mayu and Jurina started knoking at their door.

Rena groaned as she sat up from her position on Yuki and opened the door ready to shout at them or tell them to leave.But in the instant she opened a little the door she was almost hit in the face with the door, Jurina caught her while Mayu, the one that pushed the door walked to the bed silently.

Mayu walked to where Yuki was sleeping , she reached out and stroked her cheek softly then smiled and kissed forehead.
'hey---' Rena was about to shout something to Mayu ,how did the thing Rena does usually but stoped when she felt Jurina kiss her on the cheeek.
'good moring Rena~' Jurina said with a smile as she took Rena's hand in hers, Rena blushed a little

Mayu tried her luck and leaned to capture Yuki's lips but was stoped by a sudden movement .Mayu blinked a few times and found herself with the back on the bed and Yuki over her.
'Rena....' Yuki whispered lovingly and stroked Mayu's cheek
Mayu smiled sadly knowing that Yuki thinks she is Rena but sayed still seeing Yuki bend down for a kiss.She wanted to feel Yukis sweet and intoxicating lips again....
'w-wait!' Rena's shout made Yuki stop.Yuki stroked Mayu's cheek again and moved her hands down to her chest, she squeezed her left one a little yearning a moan from Mayu.

Mayu blinked again.Yuki wasnt there anymore, she was holding Kissing monster Jurina away from Rena. Mayu almost cursed, if Jurina waited a little more before try to kiss Rena on the lips then Yuki would have kissed her!

But still, she felt Yukis hand on her chest......it was wonderful! Mayu's smiled droped again when she remembered that Yuki only did that to compare Rena's chest with hers........

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Mayu know that she should wait until Yuki could see again , so she could seduce her.But having her not seeing was fun too, she could replace Rena and feed Yuki ,when Jurina took Rena to eat in another room at breakfast ,and that made her happy.But she couldnt talk or lets Yuki touch her too much or she will find out.

After breakfast, Mayu and Jurina retreated to think next moves and plans when Rena come in the room enraged.Rena took Yuki to another room too, to talk about these   rats and their plans.

'Yuuu~ki! Mayu and Jurina are trying to take us away from each other!' Rena said hugging Yuki
Yuki hugged back 'how so? wherent we together at breakfast?I didnt heard them at all'
True, Yuki could only use her touch and hearing to locate everything.
Rena sighed 'I wasnt at breakfast with you! Mayu-rat was! she switched places when Jurina took me away.....'
'oh! so thats why I heard giggling beside me......' Yuki pulled back and kissed Rena on the lips and rubbed their noses together.It was a act Yuki loved to do,feeling the closeness and warmth.
'Yuki......' Rena give Yuki a short kiss before saying 'how about we hold hands all day? like that if Jurina tryes to take me away again you will feel it and when Mayu tries to switch with me I can tell you'
'good idea, my dear~' Yuki smield softly and Rena blushed.

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And so was it, Yuki and Rena hold hands all day, destroying Mayu and Jurina's plans.They entered in a room holding hands, they ate holding hands,they even entered the bathroom together ,Yuki insisted and Rena was blushing madly even if she know Yuki couldnt see her but still! holding her hands while she was in the bathroom hardest....and at the end of the day they took a bath together.

Jurina was sad, because everytime she tryed coming closer to Rena,she would make a sign to Yuki and Yuki would stop her.
Mayu was mad, very mad. She couldnt touch ,talk and even stare at Yuki! Rena was watching her every move.

Mayu decided.They needed rules.

The next day at breakfast she talked.
'we need rules.' she said simply
Rena frowned, while Yuki smiled 'I know youll say that sooner or later..'
Mayu blushed but continued 'r--' but stoped when Yuki talked again
'but can you decide them after I take off the bandages?  '
Mayu frowned 'when?'
'the day after tomorrow'
Mayu thinked a little 'fine, but tomorrow you two have to spend the day with us, and not ignore us like today.'
'sounds fine' Yuki smiled
'and no holding hands this much!you wherent away from each other even a second!?'
'yes yess~'
“If you don’t go after what you want, you’ll never have it. If you don’t ask, the answer is always no.”

I'm glad I'm not popular.I'm already a bitch, no need to make my ego bigger.

You were always my favorite, no one loved me as much as you did.-Alison DiLaurentis.

Your first kiss isnt always the first person you kiss, or the first person you date.Your first love is the person that you will always compare everyone to.The person that you will never truly get over, even when you have convinced yourself that you have moved on.

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It's kinda really hard how could they fall in love  :badluck:
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A~ even I ship WMatsui but seeing Jurina and Mayu tried to break up a happy couple to have them for themselves is just not right :sigh: in the end! Hope that everyone will happy though

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Aww poor Mayuyu!  :fainted:

Smart plan Rena very smart plan. :hehehe:

Ah it's going to be hard to get Rena and Yukirin to fall in love with Jurina and Mayuyu. :depressed:

Keep it up you two! Gambate! :onioncheer:

Please update soon!  :farofflook:

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Yuki and Rena are too cute~

Offline Playgirlz

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Yuki and Rena are so cute xD

Things will be more fun when Yuki takes the bandages off >:]

Pls more, and thank you for updating

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haha rena is just so smart! :hehehe:

poor yukirin she couldn't see  :mon waterworks:

good luck, mayuyu n jurina!  :mon blowhorn: :mon yeah:
I love FTM. Nuff said.

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am i the only one want yuki and rena be together?  XD
but i also want mayu and ju be happy...  :(
arghhhhh  :banghead:  :banghead: .....so hard to make everyone happy,  :cry: but yuki and rena so sweet together  :wub: and..and...  :panic:
i dont know anymore  :O

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Ah. . .mayu and jurina. .are getting obsessed now. .i'm patiently waiting of what will be the results of their obsessions^^. . .
Who knows how long I've been lost in the dark?

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I'm feeling sorry for Mayuyu and Jurina.
I don't want to see them suffer  :pleeease:

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it's just a matter of time right ?  but YukiRena is cute too =]]

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I will support you mayu and jurina..
good luck rape yukirin.. haha

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'...my chances to make Rena fall for me are 45 from 100.When I will have 50 from 100, Rena will start loving me.Iam happy for that, but Iam sad. Rena is happy with Yuki......she can be happy with me, but ,......Mayu's chance with Yuki is 30 from 100......'


                                                        Special Chapter: charActer


I hope I didnt burn her skin when I thouched her for the first time.....or was she touching me? The burning sensation was making my head dizzy and could think for a few moments.In that moment I wanted to hid my face.......I smile as I remember, I smile stupidly.

With a curious glace, insatiable throat. The happyness you felt then , troubles me even now. Your shining eyes where capturing me without knowing.That gaze burnt my insincere heart.

I hope one day you'll know how to engage and stop this infernal machine that beats in my chest. The burning and uncontrolable emotions come from it , and I will soon want to destroy you.

You said you like me.........and I know noe that its true.But I love you and want you to love me back.Because......my eyes won't be restricted to your clothes.....

Unique barriers to our feelings, how much I want to transform yours in love.

The face I always show, a happy smile, that would become crazy if you look closer, are what restricts me from seeing your burnt body withoout clothes.

I shout inside and out 'Look at me, love me, embrace me'  ! I will tear apart that blind master of yours and become your new one.

I take your hand and refuse to lets go!

My sister.....is not so good as me......inside , she is inside more teared apart than me.Inside her chest.....that machine will stop someday, sooner that it should.Her weak heart that suddenly seeks for your master will stop surely........

If I could tear apart this mask I wear, the saddness would finally show.But I continue to wear it in hope someone will stop this machine inside me before the one inside my sister stops.I want to by sacrified for her, but before that, I want to have you for a moment at least.

Your smile is breaking me......

Once you fall , you wont be able to leave this trap anymore.....I will be the master how controls you,your heart and body!

I put my mask back after a screaming night, I become soaked with this honey.......but nobody taught me these sweet words, that I now want to say to you and you to me.They come from my heart.

My body moves nervously , as if to hide my feelings.I want to convince myself to forget all of this, but then I saw your smile and the machine starts again.I dry my tears to not burn you again......

The sweet piano plays......your master is playing it.I wonder.....if I know how to play it, would my chances become 50 from 100?

There is a tin line between Like and Love.

Both ,you and I, are lost into a maze, and, so are my sister and your master.Can they ever find the other end without you entering between them?

As we walk ,past each other ,we separe but we dont stay.

Prisoners of a picture! thats what all of us ,in this maze, are. That I burn. tear away, and tear up....Running away from our daily lives, we enter this maze as you made us fall first.....

I left the bird off its nest........that was the sign that..... 'I dont love myself anymore'........whose precious name was

charActer

...just what is this burning machine...?


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This is sorry for not updating today but my parents took my laptop and phone so I could learn......

No mysteres :

The one talking is: Jurina

Her sister : Mayu

The one she was captured be :Rena

Rena's master : Yuki.

I wont update tomorrow too probably......but Ill still try at least something...

REVIEW!!!!!
“If you don’t go after what you want, you’ll never have it. If you don’t ask, the answer is always no.”

I'm glad I'm not popular.I'm already a bitch, no need to make my ego bigger.

You were always my favorite, no one loved me as much as you did.-Alison DiLaurentis.

Your first kiss isnt always the first person you kiss, or the first person you date.Your first love is the person that you will always compare everyone to.The person that you will never truly get over, even when you have convinced yourself that you have moved on.

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Re: Narcissistic VS Obsessed! (Mayuki, Wmatsui) Special Chapter: charActer
« Reply #96 on: August 24, 2012, 12:52:51 AM »
Wah what a great chapter!  :farofflook:

Poor Jurina, she's in so much pain right now!  :fainted:

If I could I would just run over and hug her and never let go.   :on gay:

Please update soon!  :gyaaah:

Also, i made that OS you wanted of mayurena.  :hee:

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Re: Narcissistic VS Obsessed! (Mayuki, Wmatsui) Special Chapter: charActer
« Reply #97 on: August 24, 2012, 07:09:49 AM »
So sad..   :fainted:
Jurina let think aggressively like your sister

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Re: Narcissistic VS Obsessed! (Mayuki, Wmatsui) Special Chapter: charActer
« Reply #98 on: August 24, 2012, 12:23:19 PM »
I sympathize jurina. . .i have faith in you. .fight!. .nice update. . .
Who knows how long I've been lost in the dark?

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Re: Narcissistic VS Obsessed! (Mayuki, Wmatsui) Special Chapter: charActer
« Reply #99 on: August 24, 2012, 01:09:00 PM »
Your parents are so cruel T_T

Jurina don't give up!!!

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