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Re: *LOVING U* (MaYuki) CH.5
« Reply #40 on: September 25, 2012, 08:25:00 PM »
nice planing~
using popcorn to disturb the date,
good idea next time should try to do that,
too bad to Kai & Riku~

Looking forward for the next update~!

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Re: *LOVING U* (MaYuki) CH.5
« Reply #41 on: September 25, 2012, 09:47:23 PM »
Good Yuki job Yuki in the cinema hahaha!

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Re: *LOVING U* (MaYuki) CH.5
« Reply #42 on: September 26, 2012, 02:58:26 AM »
how cute, they are slowly falling in love with each other...  :luvluv2:

i laughed at that part when yuki got jealous at started to throw popcorns on juhno  :lol:

i wonder if after hearing that mayu likes her yuki will realise that she likes mayu too  :?


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Re: *LOVING U* (MaYuki) CH.5
« Reply #43 on: September 26, 2012, 03:25:52 AM »
Hahaha this chapter is so cute xD, especially the part Yuki got jealous, attacking with popcorn?? lmao~

And Mayu, so cute xDDDD Junho made me think of a member of 2pm

I'm waiting for Mayuki!!! Thank you >< love this chapter :]

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Re: *LOVING U* (MaYuki) CH.5
« Reply #44 on: September 26, 2012, 10:53:41 PM »
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The party.." Sae says fake crying
it's not going to work that! Yuki says while leaves the room then turn off the switch of light
*Sae forever alone face*
:rofl:



Waaa Yuki is such a nice guardian!
LoL Kai is also forever alone guy...
Can't wait for next update!

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Re: *LOVING U* (MaYuki) CH.5
« Reply #45 on: September 27, 2012, 12:59:47 AM »
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The party.." Sae says fake crying
it's not going to work that! Yuki says while leaves the room then turn off the switch of light
*Sae forever alone face*
:rofl:



Waaa Yuki is such a nice guardian!
LoL Kai is also forever alone guy...
Can't wait for next update!

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nay~ Kai got mocchi.. he's just doesn't want her.. who's fault was that? hehe  XD

thanks cmze-san for another great fic! please continue more soon!
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Re: *LOVING U* (MaYuki) CH.5
« Reply #46 on: September 27, 2012, 03:42:59 PM »
hm hm  :hehehe: so cute ~ , cmze-san your fic is brilliant like always  :glasses: ( actually i already read many fics from this web since 4 months ago and finally i decide to make an account too , so here i am  :wahaha: ) looking forward for the next chapter   :on grad:

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Re: *LOVING U* (MaYuki) CH.5
« Reply #47 on: September 28, 2012, 08:30:48 AM »
really interesting as always, thank you for writing :deco:

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Re: *LOVING U* (MaYuki) CH.6
« Reply #48 on: October 08, 2012, 10:59:53 AM »
                                        *Loving U* 
                                    6.MaYuki's day

After Mayu's little confession..
"Yuki took it as a joke maybe Mayu likes her as a guardian "the word like means a lot of things!" besides she agreed to go on a date with that Juhno guy so there's no doubt that Mayu likes her as an older sister even though Yuki doesn't feel like she has done something for the little girl to make her think that way but she's ready to get to know more of Mayu and be that person that she has to be so it means that she'll become a "responsible adult" for the sake of the cyborg girl.."
(Saturday!)
Yuki stared the younger girl sleeping then she jumped on her 
Mayu openned her eyes "what the hell?" she asked while sees Yuki on her 
Yuki smiles "it's MaYuki's day!" she says excited 
Mayu got back to sleep "take your pill and don't bother me!" she murmures 
Yuki pouted then gets up and snatched the blanket 
Mayu took a little piece of the blanket and both started forcing 
"get up.." Yuki says while pulls the blanket
no,leave me alone witch! Mayu says pulling more the blanket to her 
you said you wanted me to pay attention to you and that's what i'm doing! Yuki shouts irritated pulling 
i didn't ask for attention,i was talking about material things like more mangas! Mayu shouts back and then let go the blanket cousing Yuki slip 
"My butt.." she says while gets up 
*Mayu only smirked*
"C'mon i already rented a nice place to stay the weekend!" Yuki murmures pouting cutely 
Mayu got up "i guess it can't be helped!" she says while goes to the bathroom 
*After half an hour*
The two got on the car..
Yuki couldn't help to steal glances at the younger girl who was looking really cute with those red glasses while reads her manga
(Note:In none of my fanfics Mayu hairstyle is piggytails..she uses her hair down) 
so where are going? Mayu asked still reading manga
Yuki frowned but then just smiled "Somewhere.."
Mayu pouted then closed her manga "Wake me up when we get there!" she says and closed her eyes
Yuki kept driving but somehow something made her look at cute little sleeping girl beside her 
"So cute.." She thought then she looked at the sleeping girl's pink lips "damn! i gotta drive.. what am i thinking?" she wondered and kept driving 
Again she stole a glance at the sleeping girl and sighed "stop thinking like that!!!" Yuki murmured then something got to her head,she pulled out her phone of her pocket and took a picture of the sleepy cute Mayu with her red glasses 
Yuki was so happy about it but her smiled faded once the car started making weird noises and stopped by itself..
"what the hell?" Yuki shouted as she hits wheel then tried to turn it on but it was useless 
Mayu wakes up "what's wrong?" She asked while stretches 
Yuki looked at her "The car seems..i don't know,it's not working!"
"Ehhh what? why?" Mayu asked 
i don't know! Yuki replied 
what are we going to do? Mayu asked 
"i guess we can walk.." Yuki says while takes her purse and gets out the car 
"cellphones.." Mayu murmures and tries to use hers 
Yuki looked at her phone which says "no signal" "useless shit and you were so expensive!!" she murmures mad 
Mayu pouted while also reads the screen of her phone "who came blame it,we're in the middle of nowhere!" She says while gets out of the car 
Yuki looked at Mayu "You can stay there if you want..i'll get back!" she says annoyed 
Mayu opened her eyes wide "Are you kidding? this is the prefect scenary of an horror movie.."in the middle of nowhere,no phone signal,i won't stay here! what's if some psyco with an axe appears or some dude with a hockey mask?" 
Yuki only looked at the younger girl walking ahead "what a scary cat!!" she murmured 
"I heard that i'm not a scary cat!" Mayu shouts 
Yuki smirks and runs after the little girl 
*After a few hours of walking and not talking at all*
Mayu stopped 
Yuki only looked at her 
"Why we're still in nowhere?it's getting dark and i'm tired!" Mayu asked irritated while sits on the ground
"Mayu..c'mon we need to keep walking!" Yuki says while takes her hand and tries to get her up 
Mayu replied "i can't i'm tired and thisrty.."
Yuki knealed "c'mon i'll give you a free ride besides i need to do some excirse!" she says with a smile 
*Yuki was also tired and thirsty but leaving Mayu there didn't seemed a good idea because it was getting dark and it wws dangerous..* 
Are you crazy? Mayu asked 
c'mon hop! Yuki says still smiling 
Mayu wanted to reject the older girl but she was wearing a new shoes that were killing her feet so she had no option to hop 
"Ahhh this is good.." Yuki says with a smile while walks with Mayu on her back 
Mayu hugged Yuki tight "look the sunset!" she says 
"it's pretty.." Yuki murmures while keeps walking 
"We're unlucky people.." Mayu says 
Yuki looked at Mayu "what are you talking about? this is cool we're having such a good time with nature,nobody to disturb us not even a f*ing car in this highway!" she says walking 
Mayu only smirked cause the older girl answer 
Sorry about this Mayu,this was not in the plan,this only shows that i'm not.. *sigh* Yuki says struggling with walking 
"What are you talking about? this is the best "i'm having a free ride,i saw the sunset and now i'm watching the stars with..." Mayu says then blushes and looks other way
Yuki didn't notice she was more focused on walking and not falling 
*Mayu hugged Yuki more*
"Are you cold?" Yuki asked then stopped walking 
"no.." Mayu replied 
Yuki puts her down softly  then takes off her jacket and puts it on Mayu 
"Now let's go.." Yuki says and kneals again 
Mayu wasn't happy with the idea but her feet still hurts too much 
*After a half an hour of walking they finally found a place to stay the night*
"we're only have 1 room with one single bed.." The smiling girl says 
whatever here's my credit car! Yuki says 
ok room 7b! The girl says smiling 
~In the room~ 
i wanna shower! Mayu shouts and enters the bathroom
Yuki layed on bed and looked at the room but soon her eyes closed 
once Mayu gets out the bathroom finds Yuki already sleeping on bed,she smiled and got closer to the sleeping girl 
"Thanks.." She murmures while slowly leans closer to Yuki's face and gives her a sweet kiss on her cheek so close to her lips 
Mayu then preceed to sleep next to the older girl 
TO B CONTINUED ..MAYUKI'S DAY IN THE WEEKEND!!

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Re: *LOVING U* (MaYuki) CH.6 (please do the POLL!!)
« Reply #49 on: October 08, 2012, 11:48:28 AM »
Wahaaaaa it is too kawaii!
Mayuki = Cutest couple



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Re: *LOVING U* (MaYuki) CH.6 (please do the POLL!!)
« Reply #50 on: October 08, 2012, 12:20:50 PM »
Y favorit its still
1. My sister girlfriend
2.Wild love
3.Im everything you need
4.Loving u
5.Akb boarding school
 Actually i love all of your fic cmze-san its difficult to chose who i love so much...but i think my sister girlfrend its my most favorite one

RENA-SAMA!!!

YUKI-SAMA!!!

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Re: *LOVING U* (MaYuki) CH.6 (please do the POLL!!)
« Reply #51 on: October 10, 2012, 06:32:21 PM »
Nice Update,
Mayuki so cute,
Waiting for the next mayuki days~!

Looking forward for the next update~!!

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Re: *LOVING U* (MaYuki) CH.6 (please do the POLL!!)
« Reply #52 on: October 10, 2012, 10:30:31 PM »
I like when the universe makes accidents happen hehe
Mayuki alone in a hotel room wow~

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Re: *LOVING U* (MaYuki) CH.6 (please do the POLL!!)
« Reply #53 on: October 11, 2012, 09:40:34 AM »
My favorite ones are:
- drama: Loving You, I'm Everything You Need
- action: Wild Life, My Cyborg

But because I can only choose one, so I'm voting for Loving You.  Sweet MaYuki is sweet.....  :heart:
« Last Edit: October 11, 2012, 12:43:36 PM by anzai48 »

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Re: *LOVING U* (MaYuki) CH.6 (please do the POLL!!)
« Reply #54 on: October 21, 2012, 07:03:19 PM »
Ah missed this too

What happen with weeks! Its a happy moment~ mayuki day
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Re: *LOVING U* (MaYuki) CH.7
« Reply #55 on: November 01, 2012, 09:39:03 AM »
                                        *Loving U* 
                                              7

Yuki opened her eyes slowly,she tried to move but it was kinda hard cause some weight was on her.. 

Yuki looked down and saw Mayu sleeping on her chest,she looked at the younger girl "you're pretty.." she thought 

Mayu moved a little then opened her eyes and noticed that she was sleeping on Yuki's chest without noticing that Yuki was already up 

"i wanna touch! i wanna touch!" The younger girl thought as her hand has brain on her own 

"good morning Mayu chan!" Yuki says with a smile not relizing what Mayu was about to do 

Mayu screamed and then fell of bed with one pillow 

"are you okay?" Yuki asked 

"ahh stay away from me pervert!!" Mayu shouted then throwed the pillow on Yuki's face and went to the bathroom 

"what's wrong with her?" Yuki murmured as she lays back on bed 

After showering both girls went out to eat 

~At the restaurant~

Mayu haven't said a word (she feels kinda embarrased cause all the thoughts she was having with Yuki's chest) 

Yuki thought Mayu was acting strange but she wanted to eat more that finding out why 

Both girls ordered and soon Yuki's phone ringed.She talked for a few minutes then hang up

"Can you beloeve Mayu chan somebody fixed my car and they're bringing it to us!" Yuki says happy 

"you have to use the platinum" Mayu says with a smirk 

Yuki grabbed her purse "what? why?" she asked afraid 

"well while you were sleeping i had to to do your work and call the crane so the whole package of take it,repair it and bring it..it's not free!"  Mayu says 

"this kid..my platinum" Yuki thought as she takes a deep breath 

The waiter brought their breakfast..

Yuki looked at Mayu while she eats "this is not going as i planned.." she thought 

Mayu kept eating "why is she looking at me? does she know i was trying to.. touch..earlier" she thought as she gulps 

Soon both ended eating and got back to their room

"Finally my car!" Yuki says happy then she notice that she has to pay and pouted 

Mayu smirked "silly Yuki!" she thought

Both girls then went to their destination a good hotel close to the beach 

Mayu got out of the car and smiled "this is paradise!" she says excited 

Yuki smiled "finally i got one point!" she thought happy 

As soon the two girls entered to the reception there were a group of friends making noise 

"Yuki chan!" Riku says happy 

"Let go my ear Mocchi,i have a girlfriend and she's in England now!" Kai says 

Mocchi smirks "well is she not here,she's not your girlfriend!"

Yuki was shocked "Sae chan!" she says 

"Hey surprise.. well like i know you well i knew you would bring Mayu here!" Sae says smiling 

Mayu took a deeo breath " so a MaYuki weekend" she thought a little sad 

"C'mon let's go to the beach!" Sae says pushing Yuki and ignoring Mayu 

Everyone left leaving Mayu alone in the reception 

Mayu pouted but then sighed "hey i want the expensiest room here!"  

"cash or.."
 
"i'm using my sister's platinum!" Mayu interrupts

"well i need her sign.." The receptionist says 

Mayu smiles "you just saw her leaving with her friends please when she gets back you make her sign!"

The girl sighed gave Mayu her card 

"Thanks.." Mayu says as she walks away 

~At the beach~

Yuki pouts "i told you i have to be with Mayu chan!"

"c'mon drink up!" Sasshi says 

"no,i can't i have to go!" Yuki says while tries to leave

hey i won't give you that after party if you don't drink just one! Sashi says with a smile 

"Just one Yuki!" Akicha says 

~At Mayu's room~

Mayu started ordering everything and charging it on Yuki's platinum 

She got a massage then hired all the HBO channels and also was choking with all the ice cream then she got tired of all that and went to her jacuzzi 

"Thanks Yuki for making mad!" Mayu murmures as she relax with her bubble bath 

~At the beach~ almost nightime 

"oh got Mayu *hip* is going to kill me!" Yuki says as she gets up 

"where *hip* you going?" Sae asked

"don't you *hip* understand i have*hip* responsibilities" Yuki says as she walks away to the reception 

The reception girl called Yuki "would you sign here please?you're little sister is already in her room! do you want one next to her one with lower cost?" 

Yuki frowned "what *hip* are you talkling about? in the sams room is *hip* obvious!" she says drunk 

"ohh okay here's your card..." The girl says 

Yuki walked away then took the elevator,the elevator doors opens 

"Room 120.." Yuki though as looks for the number 

"here!" She says happy as she pases her card 

the door opens revealing a Mayu playing with a Play station 3 

Mayu opened her mouth "Yuki i.." 

"Mayu *hip* chan!" Yuki says happy and hugs the younger girl
 
"wait a second you're drunk.." Mayu says pouting 

"they made*hip* me do it.." Yuki says as she breaks the hug and tries to walk to bed 

"you're not sleeping in my bed like that!" Mayu says and puts herself infront of Yuki 

"i *hip* asked for separate beds!" Yuki says as she tries to walk ahead but Mayu stopped her by grabbing her hand but somehow Yuki slipped and Mayu fell on her with her hands cupping both of Yuki's girls 

Mayu blushed "finally! Finally on my hands!" she thought while Yuki only looked at her 

Mayu soon looked into Yuki's eyes.Both shared eye contact till the younger girl removed her hands off slowly of the older girl "chest"

Mayu got up and helped Yuki to get up too 

"I *hip* need sleep.." Yuki says as Mayu softly put her on bed 

Mayu sitted next to her and watched her sleep "tomorrow you'll be mad.." she thought as she tugged Yuki's hair behind her ear 

"Mayu.." The older girl murmured

"ehh.." Mayu got closer to the older girl mouth 

"I like you too.." The older girl whispered 

"What?!? who?!?" Mayu asks shaking Yuki but it was useless Yuki was sleeping like a rock 

Mayu gave up then sighed "do you like me?" she whispered as she slowly hypnotized leans closer to Yuki's lips

"should i? she looks kissable like a princess" she though as her lips are a few inches from the taller girl 

Mayu gulped then she felt something warm against her lips 

Mayu closed her eyes..

TO BE CONTINUED!! COMMENT!!

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Re: *LOVING U* (MaYuki) CH.7
« Reply #56 on: November 01, 2012, 10:43:45 AM »
WOW Finally Yuki said it!!! But she will change her mind the next day  :D since Mayu used her platinum card.
Thanks for the update of your 3 fics.

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Re: *LOVING U* (MaYuki) CH.7
« Reply #57 on: November 01, 2012, 12:27:10 PM »
I agree with clubhappy-san! She will change her mind next day! XD

they kiss ?? or not? Ah thank you for this update!  :twothumbs
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Re: *LOVING U* (MaYuki) CH.7
« Reply #58 on: November 01, 2012, 01:42:49 PM »
One day Mayu and Yuki are so lovey-dovey toward each other....
Next day they will argue and quarrel....
And then they become lovey-dovey again, and then quarreling again.....
Over and over again.....LOL  :lol:
This pairing is always in constant heat.

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Re: *LOVING U* (MaYuki) CH.7
« Reply #59 on: November 01, 2012, 02:54:27 PM »
dont worry, yuki will forget what happen that day,
but i think the only thing she will remember when she receive the bill of the card,
she will kill Mayu when the day it's come,
the Riku is who?? Haruna? or Mariko?
due I read a fiction called X-5 inside a member call Riku is Mariko,
now I will confuse with it normally we read Riku is Haruna.

Looking forward for the next update.

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