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Author Topic: *LOVING U* - chapter 20 (MaYuki) 24/04/2018  (Read 46445 times)

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Re: *LOVING U* (MaYuki) CH.12
« Reply #100 on: January 31, 2013, 05:15:36 PM »
WOW the bus moment and the Mayuki moment are just beautiful!!! :wub: :inlove:
Mayuki = Cutest couple



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Re: *LOVING U* (MaYuki) CH.12
« Reply #101 on: January 31, 2013, 05:45:16 PM »
Nice Update,

I think Yuki have to thanks for the alcohol,
Because of it she dare to tell Mayu,
and the bus passed scene was PERFECT!!!
Sae some how wanted to get Sayaka,
But Yuki still have to do decision right?
send Mayu away or keep her??

Looking forward for the next update.

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Re: *LOVING U* (MaYuki) CH.13
« Reply #102 on: February 08, 2013, 03:10:03 AM »
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                                                           CH.13

~The next day~

Yuki opened her eyes "what the hell?" she thought feeling still dizzy and with headache, she looked at Mayu who was sleeping next to her..

Flash backs of last night hit Yuki "now i remember" she murmured as she stares the younger girl who pleasantly sleeping on her bed next to her

Yuki got up slowly removing Mayu's arm off her quietly and went to the bathroom once there Yuki looked at herself on the mirror "what did i do? i kissed Mayu chan last night!" she whispered

Meanwhile on her bed Mayu moved her arm looking for certain girl so she opened her eyes and looked at the ceiling *Noise of the shower*

Mayu got up then sowly walked the hall looking at the bathroom door. Once in front of it Mayu tried to open it but it was locked

Mayu sighed then turned around and leaned her head against the door "here comes the regret.." she murmured sad

The door opened and caused Mayu to fall back on Yuki's arms

The two looked at each others eyes, Yuki broke their eye contact "Are you okay?" she asked concern

"Yes,i'm fine!" Mayu replied hypnotized cause the tenderness gathered in Yuki's eyes

Yuki put Mayu back to normal "i should go.." she says and walked away to her room

~In Yuki's room~

Yuki was underwear chosing her clothes for the day "ahhh nothing seems appropriate!" she says complaining with her clothes spread all over her bed

"why am i thinking? appropriate? is not like this day is special at all" she wondered as she picks some shorts and a big t-shirt

"i'm going to spend all day at home.. i think.." Yuki murmured

Once dressed she walked out and noticed that Mayu set the table for them

"Wow everything looks amazing!" Yuki says looking at the food

Mayu smiled "well you took so long changing your clothes that i made breakfast for both!"

Yuki smiled awkwardly "sorry!" she said before sitting

The two girls eat without looking at eachother and without saying a word

Mayu was a little disappointed till Yuki finally spoke

"Mayu chan..  let's go out today!" the older girl said

Mayu smiled "okay!" she answered fast

Yuki smiled also

The two walked out

(Yuki didn't take her car because they wouldn't go so far)

While they were talking Mayu grabbed linked their arms, Yuki looked other way to ignore it then manage to separate their arms

Mayu felt bad a bit because of that but then just let it go "she wasn't going to give up!"

They entered to a clothing store

Mayu took shirts and skirts then entered to the cubicle to change while Yuki just waited

"Yuki chan!" Mayu called

"what's wrong?" Yuki asked before being pulled in by certain cyborg

Yuki got all red Mayu was only in underwear (not the firt time she has seen it but that wasn't her underwear xD)

"Where..did..did.. you get..get.. that?" Yuki asked all red and nervous while Mayu presses her body against hers

"i'm fast!" Mayu replied with a smirk while her face gets closer to Yuki's

"I can't look at you!" Yuki says and turns around to face the mirror "This wasn't a good idea!" she thought because she can see Mayu reflection and it's not like she wants to close her eyes

"Is everything alright?" One of the employees ask

" Just Fine!" Mayu replied smirking while Yuki was still facing the mirror

Yuki fast got out of the cubicle and hit herself with many clothes

Everyone looked at her

"I'm fine!" She replied feeling like an idiot

Mayu got out all dressed up "no i don't want nothing!" she says and pulls Yuki's hand

The two girls were walking

"what was that?" Yuki asked confused

"My body!" Mayu replied smirking

Yuki stopped walking "I know that!" she says a little mad and looking at the younger girl

Mayu looked down

"What do you want Mayu chan?" Yuki asked softly

"I want you *Yuki blushed* i want you to hold my hand in public, i want you to tell me what happened last night was something you wanted, i want you to tell me that you love me again and that you don't. regret!" Mayu says sad

Yuki sighed and took Mayu's hand "i wanted to kiss you last night and it wasn't because i was drunk it was because.. i love you and i don't regret and if i kiss you now i'll probably go to jail so.. would you come home with me so i can kiss at home?" she says with a warm smile

Mayu was all red "yeah!" she answered happy and hugged the older girl

TO BE CONTINUED!!

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Re: *LOVING U* (MaYuki) CH.13
« Reply #103 on: February 08, 2013, 03:28:28 AM »
Wow, it's been so long. I miss your fics so much  :P Thank you for this update!!
FINALLY, FINALLY they confessed!!!  :wub: Because last time Yuki was still confused about her feelings, so I think this time it's official!!!
Waiting for your updates!!  XD

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Re: *LOVING U* (MaYuki) CH.13
« Reply #104 on: February 08, 2013, 10:24:52 AM »
thanx for the update :cow: :bow:
love your fic  :heart: :yep:
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Re: *LOVING U* (MaYuki) CH.13
« Reply #105 on: February 08, 2013, 10:43:12 AM »
Hehehe at last Yuki willing to get together with Mayu.

But what Yuki said is right... if she's with Mayu, she would be jailbait...

She can go to prison for it...

Well apart from that... it's good going for them...

Thank you for the great update and can't wait to see the next

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Re: *LOVING U* (MaYuki) CH.13
« Reply #106 on: February 08, 2013, 01:21:43 PM »
yay!!  :cathappy:
Mayuki are together now  :deco:

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Re: *LOVING U* (MaYuki) CH.13
« Reply #107 on: February 08, 2013, 05:17:35 PM »
They are together!!!!

Yah! Beautiful chapter! And the end!!

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Re: *LOVING U* (MaYuki) CH.13
« Reply #108 on: February 08, 2013, 11:00:59 PM »
 :mon inluv: confession
thanks for this great fanfic

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Re: *LOVING U* (MaYuki) CH.13
« Reply #109 on: February 10, 2013, 08:06:23 AM »
Mayu always want to get spoiled LOL

I wonder when yuki want to get spoiled by mayu,because mayu always the one who took initiative



Thank for tgje update cmze-san,cant wait the other update
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Re: *LOVING U* (MaYuki) CH.13
« Reply #110 on: February 15, 2013, 06:52:40 AM »
nice update,

Lol, Mayu underage,
that make Yuki feel regret?
what will happen next?

looking forward to the next update.

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Re: *LOVING U* (MaYuki) CH.13
« Reply #111 on: February 28, 2013, 11:05:30 AM »
THIS ONE AWESOME TOO!!

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Re: *LOVING U* (MaYuki) CH.14
« Reply #112 on: March 06, 2013, 07:13:02 AM »
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                                                           CH.14

~At Yuki's work~

As Yuki is checking her messages Sae enters to the office

"Hello Kashiwagi!" Sae says happy as she sits in front of her

Yuki sends a message then looks at her friend "Hi" she replies with a smile

"Hi? Just hi?" Sae asks

Yuki looked at her friend clueless as she puts her phone on her desk

"It been a week since the last time i saw you.. what are you hiding? Are you seeing someone? i miss my friend, Sayaka says i'm a good friend and i hate it!" Sae says pouting

"Ehh.." Yuki reacts then her phone started to vibrate

Sae fast grab it, Yuki gets up and tries to take the phone but Sae don't let her and tries to read the screen "Pick me up.." the tomboy murmured *She thought it was boring and gave her phone back to Yuki*

Yuki grabbed it and sighed in relief

"so not fair,now you became a mom and can't hang out with me anymore!" Sae says as she gets up and walks to the door

Yuki sighs "Sae chan" she says then also gets up "let go eating.." she says as she walks to the tomboy

Yuki sends a message:

"I can't pick you up Sae chan is depressed love you Yuki.."

(At school: Mayu sighed as she reads it but then smiled)

~Eating together~

Soon Akicha and Mocchi joined so it became a little party in that restaurant that would end up late

Yuki watched her watch "it's so late, i have to go home.. Mayu is alone" she says as she gets up

Mocchi grabbed Yuki and made her sit "C'mon we haven't see in a while and we're having fun" she says pouting cutely

Her two friends Akicha and Sae also ask her not go

Yuki sighed

"Mayu is not that fun!" Akicha says smiling

"C'mon Yuki or you going to see your lover now?" Sae asked with a smile

Yuki sitted

"Yay!" The three girls says and keeps chatting

After a few hours their gathering ends and Yuki drives home as she drives she couldn't help to think:

"What am i doing? Mayu chan.. she's a child an spoil one thanks to me but she's kind to me only, should i tell them we're dating? maybe i should tell them i'm in love with her.."

Yuki reached home she got off the car and went to her dept

Once inside she leans on the door "finally home.." she thinks and looks around and noticed the candles melting and the cold food on the table

"Mayuyu.." Yuki murmured and fast went to her room,there was nobody there then went to Mayu's and found her sleeping on bed

Yuki slowly got closer and sitted next to her "doubting on waking her up or not" her hand takes live on her own and rubs Mayu's back which cause her to wake up and look at the older girl

"Mayu chan!" Yuki says

"i made you dinner.." The cyborg replied with a blank expression as she sits

Yuki looked down sad "i thought it wouldn't be long..i'm sorry" she murmured

Mayu got closer and kissed the older girl on the lips

"I missed you.." Yuki says between kisses

Mayu smiles "you owe me 5 hours.." she says as she kisses Yuki

The two stopped kissing but still were with their head connecting and just smiled before sleeping together

~The next day~

The two got up as usual, they got dress and Yuki prepared breakfast for the two

While eating the two were flirting with their eyes and smiling, after finishing with the breakfast the washes the dishes one washes and the other dries it

They left everything clean and got on the car

Yuki was driving to Mayu's school but decided to stop a few blocks away

"Why stopping?" Mayu asked

Yuki got kinda nervous "is okay if i wanna kiss you?" she asked red

Mayu smirked "mmm i don't mind besides i have to practice for the play.." she answers

*Trying to make Yuki jealousy*

Yuki fast looked at the younger girl "What i told you to leave that play!!!" she says kinda furious

Mayu smiled "i can't leave it.."

"What?! Why not i'll send a letter!" Yuki exclaimed

"Easy.. there's no play.. i was fooling you!" Mayu says smiling

Yuki looked other way kinda serious

Mayu smile faded "Are you mad?" she asked worried

Yuki looked at the younger girl then removed her seatbelt "You're such a liar!" she says then gets closer and starts tickling the younger girl

"No, Yuki stop!" Mayu says laughing as she tries to remove Yuki's hands off her

"No,i won't!" Yuki says as she tickles her, she even made Mayu's seat lay back

 After a few minutes Yuki stopped and realized she was almost on top of Mayu,the two looked each other in the eyes then kissed sweetly and softly

As the seconds past their kiss becomes deeper

~Outside~

"Is not that Yuki's car?" Sae wondered as she gets closer

[Note Yuki stopped close to a park where she didn't know Sae goes running in the morning]

Sae got closer and watched through the glass "Yuki chan.." she murmured

TO BE CONTINUED!!

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Re: *LOVING U* (MaYuki) CH.14
« Reply #113 on: March 06, 2013, 08:19:01 AM »
Ah.. YUki and Mayu are so sweet with each other...

Eh... Yuki hasn't told any of her friends that she's already in-loved someone else...

What's happening.... Sae saw them together...?

What's going to happen to Yuki and Mayu?

What will Sae do with this piece of info?

I can't wait to know what's going to happen next

Thank you for the lovely update

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Re: *LOVING U* (MaYuki) CH.14
« Reply #114 on: March 06, 2013, 09:52:38 AM »
eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeh Sae knew about Mayuki now  :O
I can't I don't want them to be separated  :cry:

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Re: *LOVING U* (MaYuki) CH.14
« Reply #115 on: March 06, 2013, 10:44:11 AM »
Ka-Kawaiii!!

oh! What is going to happened now, Sae discover Mayuki relationship???

No need something bad!!
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Re: *LOVING U* (MaYuki) CH.14
« Reply #116 on: March 06, 2013, 11:19:51 AM »
uuuu this is more dramatic  :shocked
drama drama I like drama  :panic:  :D
 
great chapter.

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Re: *LOVING U* (MaYuki) CH.14
« Reply #117 on: March 06, 2013, 12:43:39 PM »
Eeh!!?

I felt a bad thing,sae watch mayuki scene!

Well maybe mayuki need some difficult time too~

But honestly they already in difficult time,hope they could solve whatever that sae would do after seen that scene~


Thank for the update cmze-san
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Re: *LOVING U* (MaYuki) CH.14
« Reply #118 on: March 06, 2013, 02:35:02 PM »
nice update,

Seem the Sae, Mochi & Aki win once,
so Mayuki moment was nice,
And now is OMG! Sae saw Mayuki moment,

Looking forward for the next update.

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Re: *LOVING U* (MaYuki) CH.14
« Reply #119 on: March 06, 2013, 03:32:10 PM »
They are so cute~

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